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Computers and modern technology are advancing quickly, and more and more people are beginning to use them. Some people say that computers are a bad influence on I think other wise. I think computers are an amazing breakthrough in modern science. I believe computers are ideal for school work and comunicating with others, as long as they are used in moderation. Computers make school projects so simple I don't know if we could do without. Our social studies teacher says that of his projects involve something on the computer. The internet is a great place to research for big papers and projects. With over thirty-million educational and informational websites, its easy to locate what you need quickly and easily. Once you have finished researching it is easy to type your report. If it isn't a written report, then there are many other programs for fancy presentations. Take microsoft for example: you can make exotic background and texts, as well as unique animations to emphasize or to make it pop right off the page. Computers are also an ideal way to communicate with friends and family. Emailing is quick and easy to tell others what you want to say. If you want to chat, then you can use or instant messaging. This allows you to type and sent emails faster. Both of these programs are an inivative way to talk with a family member that isn't home. Like lets say my dad goes on business to We can email back and forth every day. And now with (a video chat) you can see the person and actually talk to them like they're back at home. Computers have their advantages but they also have disadvantages. Computers are great for communicating and school work, but when used in excess can be unhealthy. Here is one example: my older brother is a senior in high school. He is in school from to and as he gets home he heads straight for his computer. He is on there for at least five hours a night and that leaves time for dinner and not much of anything else including sleep. I think that computers are a great invation in modern technology as long as people limit themselves. Computers are coming out with new features everyday and who know theyll be like...
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Computers modern technology advancing quickly people beginning use Some people say computers bad influence I think wise I think computers amazing breakthrough modern science I believe computers ideal school work comunicating others long used moderation Computers make school projects simple I nt know could without Our social studies teacher says projects involve something computer The internet great place research big papers projects With thirtymillion educational informational websites easy locate need quickly easily Once finished researching easy type report If nt written report many programs fancy presentations Take microsoft example make exotic background texts well unique animations emphasize make pop right page Computers also ideal way communicate friends family Emailing quick easy tell others want say If want chat use instant messaging This allows type sent emails faster Both programs inivative way talk family member nt home Like lets say dad goes business We email back forth every day And video chat see person actually talk like re back home Computers advantages also disadvantages Computers great communicating school work used excess unhealthy Here one example older brother senior high school He school gets home heads straight computer He least five hours night leaves time dinner much anything else including sleep I think computers great invation modern technology long people limit Computers coming new features everyday know theyll like
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I completely agree with those people who think computers have a negative effect on us today. Even though computers are great they do have many negative effects on people who use them. Since. new technology, and post pictures on websites where everyone can see. Also they have games for computers that people get hooked on. Lastly, there are predator online. The new technology is amazing, like webcams where you can video chat or cellphones where you could take pictures, they do have negative effects. There have been many suicides over cyber bullying. This is where people bully kids over the internet. Also some people send naked pictures online or even while webcamming. this is illegal and absurd that young or even older people would be doing these actions. Also there are websites where people can post these pictures of you that are very personal and make a huge difference in you life. There are many people who have games for their computer or download games off of websites. Most people actually get addicted to the game, They would play it all day if they could and if they arent playing they are wishing they could. This makes them miss out on alot of things. They might not get enough excersise or not do any homework which will make you grades drop. They could also not be spending time with family. It also might change who you are as a person. The most important thing about the use of computers is your safety. There are predator all over the internet and can pretend they are someone from school and ask where you live. You should never tell anyone where you live or your full name online. They can and most likely will come to your house for you. It could most likely cost you or even family members your lives. Computers can be fun and you can learn an abundant amount of information but as long as you smart about using it. Remember not to tell anyone where you live or dont take pictures and send them that are personal. They could be all over the internet the next day. Lastly, worry about your family, grades, and health than some useless game. Be smart and safe!
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I completely agree people think computers negative effect us today Even though computers great many negative effects people use Since new technology post pictures websites everyone see Also games computers people get hooked Lastly predator online The new technology amazing like webcams video chat cellphones could take pictures negative effects There many suicides cyber bullying This people bully kids internet Also people send naked pictures online even webcamming illegal absurd young even older people would actions Also websites people post pictures personal make huge difference life There many people games computer download games websites Most people actually get addicted game They would play day could arent playing wishing could This makes miss alot things They might get enough excersise homework make grades drop They could also spending time family It also might change person The important thing use computers safety There predator internet pretend someone school ask live You never tell anyone live full name online They likely come house It could likely cost even family members lives Computers fun learn abundant amount information long smart using Remember tell anyone live dont take pictures send personal They could internet next day Lastly worry family grades health useless game Be smart safe
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Dear Newspaper, I think people need computers. It helps them see the world if they can't. It can be used to send important messages to people that are farther away from you. Also if someone has a parent or loved one far away they can see each other through the computer. So here is examples of these three things. Some people can't physically or mentally and can't afford to travel. Its sad how some people are so sick with a disease or illness that they can't go places. But if they go on the internet they can look up pictures and information of places they've never been to which can help them see the world better. But there are people who can help them see the world better. But there are people who have fears which prevent them from travelling to different places. So thet could go to the internet and find ways to help them get over their fears. Which in turn will allow them to get over their fears and let them travel to places. Then there are people who can't afford it. So the internet can help find a good job that pays good money which they can use to afford to travel the world and see it for what it is. What if you need to send a really important message to someone to prevent them doing something or help them live or even stop a war. So take into reconsideration if there is a war going on for a miss understanding. So if the government figures out what happened and they know how to straightin out the situation then they could send a message to the attackers. What happened and that it wasn't what they thought we did then they would stop fighting and the war would be over. What if a bomb is in the white house you would want to get out of the building or find it and disarm it. So then a guy finds out about it and send a message to the white house and that would save all the people in the white houses lives. Sometimes loved ones go away to some where far away and you can't talk or see them. Someones in the military and he/she has a kid so the computer allows them to see and talk to them through a webcam which would keep the child and parent together and not seperate them. Also you see a friend in facebook who you haven't seen in years so you friend him and you guys get back in touch with each other and you can be friends with them again. So in conclusion the computer can do many helpful things. It can fix relationships, save lives, help you get over fears and see the world. Which isn't bad sure we sometimes go over board with it but it is very useful. It isn't horrible but it is sometimes bad but also sometimes good but
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Dear Newspaper I think people need computers It helps see world ca nt It used send important messages people farther away Also someone parent loved one far away see computer So examples three things Some people ca nt physically mentally ca nt afford travel Its sad people sick disease illness ca nt go places But go internet look pictures information places ve never help see world better But people help see world better But people fears prevent travelling different places So thet could go internet find ways help get fears Which turn allow get fears let travel places Then people ca nt afford So internet help find good job pays good money use afford travel world see What need send really important message someone prevent something help live even stop war So take reconsideration war going miss understanding So government figures happened know straightin situation could send message attackers What happened nt thought would stop fighting war would What bomb white house would want get building find disarm So guy finds send message white house would save people white houses lives Sometimes loved ones go away far away ca nt talk see Someones military heshe kid computer allows see talk webcam would keep child parent together seperate Also see friend facebook nt seen years friend guys get back touch friends So conclusion computer many helpful things It fix relationships save lives help get fears see world Which nt bad sure sometimes go board useful It nt horrible sometimes bad also sometimes good
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You want my opinion on the effects computers have on people? Well, I believe that computers help people educate people and some computers people relie on. It's time to decide if you agree with me that computers have positive effects on people. Do you agree with me that computers can help people? Say for example you have a question noone in your home can answer. Why not it? Of course once in a while you're going to get a school project. Surely you'll need information, but the library is closed. And you don't what to do. Simple, all you have to do is reasearch it on your computer. Don't you agree that computers help people? I remember this one time I entered a contest, and the I needed was lost, then I remembered I put it in my computer. Computers can be relied on by people. Just think about it! Almost over of jobs out in the world relie on the technology of a computer. For example the job. It would be kind of hard to keep track of how much trash is thrown out every year without a computer, surely banks use computers too! To keep track of everyone's allowance and money situations. Let's not forget about what lawyers do? There are some lawyers incart who use the computer to type up every word said. They turn the words into short and to keep up with what people are saying. Did you that without these computers ever half the million jobs in the world would fail? Some people would agree that some online games are educational. For example, there is That game teaches you words you probably never seen before. And don't forget That game improves your counting of numbers. Last, but not least would be That game sharpens your skill and exercises your brain. Strategy come in handy, surely you now see that some games are very educational. In conclusion, I agree that the effects computers have on people are positive. Because computers help people, are reliable, and can educate people. It's now or never do you agree that computers have positive effects on people?
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You want opinion effects computers people Well I believe computers help people educate people computers people relie It s time decide agree computers positive effects people Do agree computers help people Say example question noone home answer Why Of course re going get school project Surely ll need information library closed And nt Simple reasearch computer Do nt agree computers help people I remember one time I entered contest I needed lost I remembered I put computer Computers relied people Just think Almost jobs world relie technology computer For example job It would kind hard keep track much trash thrown every year without computer surely banks use computers To keep track everyone s allowance money situations Let s forget lawyers There lawyers incart use computer type every word said They turn words short keep people saying Did without computers ever half million jobs world would fail Some people would agree online games educational For example That game teaches words probably never seen And nt forget That game improves counting numbers Last least would That game sharpens skill exercises brain Strategy come handy surely see games educational In conclusion I agree effects computers people positive Because computers help people reliable educate people It s never agree computers positive effects people
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Dear local newspaper, my name is I've just been informed about how people view computers and the effects of them. In my opinion, I find computers to be a very negative influence on yound kids, teens, and adults. Many harmful awarenesses come along with having one. For one thing, people being so hypnotized in this electronical device are finding lesser time to excercise and take care of themselves. Also to, the only nature they're experiencing is pictures online and not enjoying the full beuty of what we have left of out earth. Another negative outcome is that they start becoming more and more distant from their loved ones. What happened to our society? Why can't we think on our own anymore? I truely, strongly hope that what i'm saying will change the minds of some people. Thank you very much. Exercise is a very key aspect in anyone's life. Especially growing kids and teens. On the computer what exercise benefits are you getting? Stronger fingers? A higher chance of syndrome "@CAPS2 of kids having problems like obesity have access to the internet", accoding to of the, "@CAPS3 feel right with in hunington beach, When basically, your giveing youself to the computers, you not have any thoughts at all of staying fir. Instead on some chips while typing. BENEFITS that game help? With global warming by ourside, what you saw yesterday not be there today. Breathing in some fresh, natural air can really calm a stressed child out. What ever happened to playing an endless scoth with side walk chalk and fresh? or tag or just running around? Is it not cool anymore? Yah, not cool to take care of yourself. Inspire yourself by writing poems about how you feel or draw a screnary. Now a days, instead of climing a tree, were climbing our mouse arrow to the next website. There's so much that we all take for granted, that one day when you look back on ti all, youre going to really miss those days. Family time is so critical in anyone's life. Without a family, you're nothing. When did game night or family time disapear? Just because we're in a society that says computers are completely normal everyday thing in a house, doesn't mean you family and friends aren't a main priority to you anymore. If you want to hangout a friend's house, dont email about it, walk there and get the full affect since when does a computer a family? Never. If we got out of a fake reality, there wouldn't be negativity in our life. you can regain a true life back with them. you'd think more clearer just Whats makes a computer any better than life? Nothing ask yourself that. So inconclusive, I strongly believe that with this in you lives we've actually get dumber. There's more negative than positives in having a computer. Sure you could quickly send them a message or like but is it ever bad to do the good old fashion calling? Or sendin letter? I say again, thank you for taking out your time to read this. i changed you, not. Whatever you do, think about the next time you're online and see what happends.
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Dear local newspaper name I ve informed people view computers effects In opinion I find computers negative influence yound kids teens adults Many harmful awarenesses come along one For one thing people hypnotized electronical device finding lesser time excercise take care Also nature re experiencing pictures online enjoying full beuty left earth Another negative outcome start becoming distant loved ones What happened society Why ca nt think anymore I truely strongly hope m saying change minds people Thank much Exercise key aspect anyone s life Especially growing kids teens On computer exercise benefits getting Stronger fingers A higher chance syndrome CAPS kids problems like obesity access internet accoding CAPS feel right hunington beach When basically giveing youself computers thoughts staying fir Instead chips typing BENEFITS game help With global warming ourside saw yesterday today Breathing fresh natural air really calm stressed child What ever happened playing endless scoth side walk chalk fresh tag running around Is cool anymore Yah cool take care Inspire writing poems feel draw screnary Now days instead climing tree climbing mouse arrow next website There s much take granted one day look back ti youre going really miss days Family time critical anyone s life Without family re nothing When game night family time disapear Just re society says computers completely normal everyday thing house nt mean family friends nt main priority anymore If want hangout friend s house dont email walk get full affect since computer family Never If got fake reality would nt negativity life regain true life back d think clearer Whats makes computer better life Nothing ask So inconclusive I strongly believe lives ve actually get dumber There s negative positives computer Sure could quickly send message like ever bad good old fashion calling Or sendin letter I say thank taking time read changed Whatever think next time re online see happends
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Dear local newspaper, I do agree that computers have impacted human society greatly. Therefore, my opinion is that is be one of the greatest inventions. I would say this because there are different help programs or websites that help people in everyday life. Especially students have the ability to study from education webpages. Also, people are able to communicate online. Lastly, you are able to type stories instead of hand-writing them. Having the advantage to study online is great. Different websites with tons of information and true facts really affect grades of most students. Did you know about of the go on educational websites for information for writing, whether it's an essay or non-fiction story? Thanks to computers, there is a great chance students receive a passing grade. Communication online has made huge impact worldwide. Whether you use facebook, etc., communicating with family or friends is fantastic. For example, I use facebook and I love talking to my family down in whom I see about once every couple years. Online communication has affected people because there is an easier way to talk to other instantly. Just a push of a button, and you have immediate communication with someone. Finally, people have the ability to type on a program if they wanted to type a letter or story. For instance, if you use microsoft word, you can type up whatever you want. This has effected people because it is a faster ans easier way to write. Therefore, if you finish earlier than you would have if you typed it, you would have extra leisure time, or more time to get the rest of your work done. Also, it is easy for me because I type like the wind; after practice, of course. In conclusion, the invention of computers helped and still do help society in many ways. But, the three ways that i have chosen to tell you about in this letter, I feel, have impacted us the most. I hope this helps you with you questions about how computers effected people. Thank you for taking time to read my letter. Have a good day.
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Dear local newspaper I agree computers impacted human society greatly Therefore opinion one greatest inventions I would say different help programs websites help people everyday life Especially students ability study education webpages Also people able communicate online Lastly able type stories instead handwriting Having advantage study online great Different websites tons information true facts really affect grades students Did know go educational websites information writing whether s essay nonfiction story Thanks computers great chance students receive passing grade Communication online made huge impact worldwide Whether use facebook etc communicating family friends fantastic For example I use facebook I love talking family I see every couple years Online communication affected people easier way talk instantly Just push button immediate communication someone Finally people ability type program wanted type letter story For instance use microsoft word type whatever want This effected people faster ans easier way write Therefore finish earlier would typed would extra leisure time time get rest work done Also easy I type like wind practice course In conclusion invention computers helped still help society many ways But three ways chosen tell letter I feel impacted us I hope helps questions computers effected people Thank taking time read letter Have good day
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Dear Local Newspaper, a computer isn't harmful in any way. It helps people learn about things they didn't know. Also it lets people interact with people around the world. Another is that it lets people stay in touch with family and friends around the globe. Computers don't harm, they help. Computers are a learning tool. Schools like mine have over a hundred computers but they are only used for education. Anyway even if we try to go on different sites we get redirected to a blocked website. Cars and other machines were built by computers which supplied the blueprints. There is one thing computers are mostly used for, and thats to learn. Are you thinking about going on vacation somewhere but don't know how things work around there? Well a computer can help you with those promblems. It lets you see how people are and what the place looks like with a virtual tour. Even with some assistance if you don't know about traditions or beliefs. Computers are a great way to explore. Computers are a great way to communicate with others. Family members that live on the otherside of the world can use computers to talk and see how your doing. How about old friends that moved away. You can still talk and communicate with each other. Getting in touch with friends and family isn't all that bad is it? And these are reason to show how computers aren't harmful in anyway. It gives people a good education. It lets people learn about cultures of places around the world. And talking to friends is something thats good, not bad. This is why computers don't harm people, they help.
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Dear Local Newspaper computer nt harmful way It helps people learn things nt know Also lets people interact people around world Another lets people stay touch family friends around globe Computers nt harm help Computers learning tool Schools like mine hundred computers used education Anyway even try go different sites get redirected blocked website Cars machines built computers supplied blueprints There one thing computers mostly used thats learn Are thinking going vacation somewhere nt know things work around Well computer help promblems It lets see people place looks like virtual tour Even assistance nt know traditions beliefs Computers great way explore Computers great way communicate others Family members live otherside world use computers talk see How old friends moved away You still talk communicate Getting touch friends family nt bad And reason show computers nt harmful anyway It gives people good education It lets people learn cultures places around world And talking friends something thats good bad This computers nt harm people help
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Dear newspaper editor, I have recently heard that some people think that computers have a negative effect on people. Well i think that computers have a positive effect on people. I think that computers have a positive effect on people because it helps make learning about other countries easier. Also, it helps people talk to people from different countries. Another reason is that it helps people learn about different cultures, religions, or traditions. The reason why some peope think that computers have a negative effect on people is because people are spending more time on the computer than spending time with their family. Also, people use the computer more than they use exercise machines, bicycles, or scooters. Now that you know about the positive and negative effects of computers, Which side will you choose? the one against computers or the one for computers. I would choose the one for computers.
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Dear newspaper editor I recently heard people think computers negative effect people Well think computers positive effect people I think computers positive effect people helps make learning countries easier Also helps people talk people different countries Another reason helps people learn different cultures religions traditions The reason peope think computers negative effect people people spending time computer spending time family Also people use computer use exercise machines bicycles scooters Now know positive negative effects computers Which side choose one computers one computers I would choose one computers
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Dear local newspaper editor, opinion on the effects of computers on people is that staying on a computer is not that bad it does not rot you brain like video games. are some good reasons why computers are good and help you. Sometimes computers do help with hand-eye coordination. You use the computer to do homework or to search a a stores etc. Some computers are really slow but not all of the new ones for computers can also help you read better it has little . You could play talk to people like your friends. Listening to music is an easy thing to you could a website that has all songs that you like to listen yo many people use the computer to find jobs and use it to look for ways to eat right and work out paying bills online is easyer than paying them for real. The computer is easy way to pay and you should agree with opinion.
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Dear local newspaper editor opinion effects computers people staying computer bad rot brain like video games good reasons computers good help Sometimes computers help handeye coordination You use computer homework search stores etc Some computers really slow new ones computers also help read better little You could play talk people like friends Listening music easy thing could website songs like listen yo many people use computer find jobs use look ways eat right work paying bills online easyer paying real The computer easy way pay agree opinion
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Dear Newspaper, The question is whether or not people are spending too much time on the computer or not. In my opinion people arent, and there are many benefits from being on the computer. Typing in the computer teacher hand-eye coordination. It is easy to learn while on computer too, and you all communicate with people also! Handeye coordination is very important. We use it everyday during sports taking notes, even playing video games! Being on the computer is good because it develops hand-eye coordination. Whatever you do on the computer typing, playing online game, or surfing the web develop hand-eye coordination. It is good to learn hand-eye coordination because most teachers these days neat children to type and print their papers, so they are neater.If kids can learn hand-eye coordination, they can type faster turn then into their when go on there computer hand-eye coordination. My world cultures teacher lets us use an online textbook if we dont finished our homework in class, instead of logging around textbook. Any student would rather go online than have to bring a giant textbook to and from school. Have you ever thought about how much easier it is college course online. Then having to go to college especially for working parents? Everything happens online in you portable laptop, instead of having to go to and from a college. Using computer to learn about different places is easy. There are websites full of pictures of beautiful foreign places that hot deserts, and troppical rainfall of monkeys and tigers. It is fun and easy to learn on a computer. Since cell phones have become so a lot of people have gotten rid of thier home phone to save money. Sometimes, though cellphones lose signal. That is why it is good to have a computer. It is eat to talk to other people forums, chats websites and email. You can have intelligent,and its easy and free! It is east to communicate using a computer. Surely you've heard my reasons its okay for people to spend time on the computer you see my point. Yes people shall spend time outside or with family, in small does the computer good for you. It is easy to learn hand coordination and communicate on a computer.
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Dear Newspaper The question whether people spending much time computer In opinion people arent many benefits computer Typing computer teacher handeye coordination It easy learn computer communicate people also Handeye coordination important We use everyday sports taking notes even playing video games Being computer good develops handeye coordination Whatever computer typing playing online game surfing web develop handeye coordination It good learn handeye coordination teachers days neat children type print papers neaterIf kids learn handeye coordination type faster turn go computer handeye coordination My world cultures teacher lets us use online textbook dont finished homework class instead logging around textbook Any student would rather go online bring giant textbook school Have ever thought much easier college course online Then go college especially working parents Everything happens online portable laptop instead go college Using computer learn different places easy There websites full pictures beautiful foreign places hot deserts troppical rainfall monkeys tigers It fun easy learn computer Since cell phones become lot people gotten rid thier home phone save money Sometimes though cellphones lose signal That good computer It eat talk people forums chats websites email You intelligent easy free It east communicate using computer Surely ve heard reasons okay people spend time computer see point Yes people shall spend time outside family small computer good It easy learn hand coordination communicate computer
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Not everyone thinks computers are good for you but they are a very good resorce to find information. It's not good to be on the compoler seven but to be on sometimes is not bad. A person who is on the computer all day and does nothing else except that, then that is not healthy at all. People just have to limit their time on how much they stay on the computer. Dont over due it! Computers are also very good for information as I said earlier. If you have a computer or a laptop and you need to find information on something the internet is there. For kids that need to do homework or a project and they need to look up some facts or information on something they could go on the computer for that. It is so much easier to do that then look for books that has all the facts you need. So computers have very good qulities and resources. They arnt bad or unhealthy unless if that is your life and that is the only thing you do. That is my opinion on computers.
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Not everyone thinks computers good good resorce find information It s good compoler seven sometimes bad A person computer day nothing else except healthy People limit time much stay computer Dont due Computers also good information I said earlier If computer laptop need find information something internet For kids need homework project need look facts information something could go computer It much easier look books facts need So computers good qulities resources They arnt bad unhealthy unless life thing That opinion computers
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I think that people are spending a lot of time on there computers and not enjoying nature and things. My reasons are that people don't do anything except surf the web, talk to other people all the time, and they site around eating junk and no exercise. Those are my three reasons. My first reason is people do is surf the web. There is over a million websites to go to. What people do is go to all of them look at things or buy something. The only thing they should be doing is homework or buisness. Also people play to many video games on the computer too. My second reason is that people go on or or use web cams. Those people could be on there for hours talking to people. Sometime those things are peoples life and all they do. I know someone who has a and after school all they do is talk to people. They have friends on but no friends in real life. My third reason is when people do go on all they do is eat junk food and get no exercise. Sometimes they eat potato chips and cookies and have soda. If you do that for week you will be very tired and sleepy. Also you can get very fat. Your body will be unhealthy and out of shape. Now that you have read my reasons, I hope you like them. My reasons where people don't do anything but surf the web, talk to other people all the time, and people eat junk food and get no exercise.
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I think people spending lot time computers enjoying nature things My reasons people nt anything except surf web talk people time site around eating junk exercise Those three reasons My first reason people surf web There million websites go What people go look things buy something The thing homework buisness Also people play many video games computer My second reason people go use web cams Those people could hours talking people Sometime things peoples life I know someone school talk people They friends friends real life My third reason people go eat junk food get exercise Sometimes eat potato chips cookies soda If week tired sleepy Also get fat Your body unhealthy shape Now read reasons I hope like My reasons people nt anything surf web talk people time people eat junk food get exercise
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Dear local newspaper, I just wanted to say that I do I agree with you that some people spend a lot of time on the computer. My reasons are that people need to exersize, go out doors. And have fun. If you keep reading you'll understand why they need to do theis things. My first reason was exersizeing. And the reason why I say exersizeing is because you don't need to be on the computer all day long. So many things that they can do, is run, jog, and go for bike rides. I mean it's ok to go on the computer once and a while to learn but that's why they have books, and school to learn about things. My second reason was going out-side and the reason for that is because people need to get fresh air and not be locked inside all day. Another one was to explore and go on a hike to see what is out there and just have a good time. My other reason was nature. And what I mean by that is you can go to the zoo and learn about stuff there to. Another thing is that you can do much more with out being on the computer all day long. My last reason was you can talk to your friend about stuff, you can go to the mall all day, you can also hang out with your friend and have a sleep over and watch movies. You don't need to stay on the computer all day you need to have fun. This is why I say you don't need to be on the computer. You can do other stuff and still learn with-out being on the computer. For once maby insed of talking online you can actultly go to your friends house and talk. Thank you for your time. Hope to talk to you soon.
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Dear local newspaper I wanted say I I agree people spend lot time computer My reasons people need exersize go doors And fun If keep reading ll understand need theis things My first reason exersizeing And reason I say exersizeing nt need computer day long So many things run jog go bike rides I mean s ok go computer learn s books school learn things My second reason going outside reason people need get fresh air locked inside day Another one explore go hike see good time My reason nature And I mean go zoo learn stuff Another thing much computer day long My last reason talk friend stuff go mall day also hang friend sleep watch movies You nt need stay computer day need fun This I say nt need computer You stuff still learn without computer For maby insed talking online actultly go friends house talk Thank time Hope talk soon
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Dear your at home and you are on the computer. But its been hours maybe even days since you've takin a breath of fresh air outside. This sound cpzy, yet it is a reality for over <@PERCENT1@NUM1> of the population in Just loo around they are in movies, chain resurant at your home, in your office and even in schoold; computers are everywhere. I know that because of over using computers amny experts are concerned that people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising and enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends, I say that because of this peopel every where shold only be allowed to use the computer on a rain everday, say to computers. My point is with computers our days are wasted with vertual games and other downloads. For starter, people are spending too much time on their computers and less time exercising. Over the past two years obeseity has become a major issue in with over of the population obeseity causesan ectreamly higher risk of getting diseases and sickness like diabeaties, heart failure and even depression. recently my cousin passed away from canser caused by her fat or obeseity. My point is we can't sit her doing nothing get up and get moving away from that computer in addition to this people should get off computers and start enjoying nature. A total of <@PERCENT1@NUM2> of personals in don't spend enough time out side. With global warning killing our environment people would care enouhg to psend a little girl of their time outside. didi you know that more and more of the environment is disappering each day? I went to my good friends and expert on all things envieronmental from the instate of clean our world or cow.
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Dear home computer But hours maybe even days since ve takin breath fresh air outside This sound cpzy yet reality PERCENT NUM population Just loo around movies chain resurant home office even schoold computers everywhere I know using computers amny experts concerned people spending much time computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends I say peopel every shold allowed use computer rain everday say computers My point computers days wasted vertual games downloads For starter people spending much time computers less time exercising Over past two years obeseity become major issue population obeseity causesan ectreamly higher risk getting diseases sickness like diabeaties heart failure even depression recently cousin passed away canser caused fat obeseity My point ca nt sit nothing get get moving away computer addition people get computers start enjoying nature A total PERCENT NUM personals nt spend enough time side With global warning killing environment people would care enouhg psend little girl time outside didi know environment disappering day I went good friends expert things envieronmental instate clean world cow
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Dear I am expressing my concern to you about the side effect new technologies, such as computers have an humans. Computers impact humans in a harmful manner because people are spending too much their quality time on their computers which additionally leads to less time spent doing exercise. People also do not get to spend as much as their days outdoors and interacting with friends and family. Firstly, people are spending too much their time surfing the net. Study show that an average spends in total hours a day on the computer, almost double what they should be spending on it. Dr. from the technology society, says' that if this increases time spent on the internet, continues for more years, most will completly lose contact with family and friends outside the social computer network. The average weight a year old has increased from pounds in to pounds today. Statistics show that the main caus for this dramatic increase in weight is due to the acessive amount time spent on computers in addition do not have as much time to exercise. Teenagers need to exercise three times a week for thirty minutes each. the average adolescent only spend ten minutes a week exercising not including gym. All these numbers must change and a way to start would be losing the computer because people are spending too much time on them and less time exercising. Secondly, comuters are effecting the people get to go outside and enjoy nature. Form my personal experience nature is a beautiful thing to be apart now adays I spend way too much time on social networks such as facebook, my space and others. How often do you go outside to take a walk, fo for a bike ride or something else? A study done by shows that the average person living in have only spent a total days outside in the past two years after reciving their new computer. This must change people need to enjoy what this world has to offer. Thirdly, computers have effected the interaction between family and friends. "@CAPS6 people hav only been interacting with family at mandatory times such as school meetings." says Family and friends are a major importance in everyones lives. I love to sit down and talk with my mom over a steaming cup hot chocolate. people now a days do not spend anytime with family and people use computers to interact with friends. It is vitally important that people stop using computers because "before you know it you will have lost all communication with family and friends" says from I.U.M Computers help people lose communication and interaction with fmily and friends. In conclusion, I urge you to make the right desion by quitting using computers and in return will be a much happier and stronger individual. Computers impact humans in a terrible way because people spend too much time on them leading to a lack in exercise, time spent outside and in addition interaction between friends and family. Sorry about the lack organization towards the end, I ran out space. Please excuse the mess. Thank you.
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Dear I expressing concern side effect new technologies computers humans Computers impact humans harmful manner people spending much quality time computers additionally leads less time spent exercise People also get spend much days outdoors interacting friends family Firstly people spending much time surfing net Study show average spends total hours day computer almost double spending Dr technology society says increases time spent internet continues years completly lose contact family friends outside social computer network The average weight year old increased pounds pounds today Statistics show main caus dramatic increase weight due acessive amount time spent computers addition much time exercise Teenagers need exercise three times week thirty minutes average adolescent spend ten minutes week exercising including gym All numbers must change way start would losing computer people spending much time less time exercising Secondly comuters effecting people get go outside enjoy nature Form personal experience nature beautiful thing apart adays I spend way much time social networks facebook space others How often go outside take walk fo bike ride something else A study done shows average person living spent total days outside past two years reciving new computer This must change people need enjoy world offer Thirdly computers effected interaction family friends CAPS people hav interacting family mandatory times school meetings says Family friends major importance everyones lives I love sit talk mom steaming cup hot chocolate people days spend anytime family people use computers interact friends It vitally important people stop using computers know lost communication family friends says IUM Computers help people lose communication interaction fmily friends In conclusion I urge make right desion quitting using computers return much happier stronger individual Computers impact humans terrible way people spend much time leading lack exercise time spent outside addition interaction friends family Sorry lack organization towards end I ran space Please excuse mess Thank
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Dear I'm writing you today so you can see why advanced technology is a positive effect on people. My reasons for wrint this is because computers allow people to talk online to others people learn about faraway places, and finally it teacher hand-eye coordination. As you read my letter I hope you fell the same way. First of all computers allow you to talk to other people online. The reason I feel this way is what if you can't fond your fone in your hose or even your cell phone, you could see if they were online. Also its the same thing as texting, but with a bigger keyboard/screen I can relate to this because I was texting someone and went online to find whtm on too, so we sent aims to each other instead. I hope you can see why computers can be good for people. Secondly not a lot of people will go to the library to look up information for a paper for a school. The reason I feel this way is a computer has google to make finding things easier. Another reason is going to the library cause you send more money to fill up your gas tanks. I can relate this because everytim my family goes to the library we have to fill the car up after we go. This is another reasons why computers a good. Finally the computers can teach hand-eye coordination. The reason for this is because if your writing an email then you should know the keys that your fingers touch. Another reasons why computers are hand-eye coordination is because if your kid take karayta then might have learned to move there hands that fast from somewhere. I can relate ti this because when I was in the first grade there was a guy that you told me and my friends that be need us to get in the truck to help him find his lost puppy, and he tried grabbing me but I pulled my hard away before I became pinned. I hope you can see why we need computers. I would like to that the I for sitting and reading my essay. Once again my reasons for writing where people can talk to other people online, learn about faraway places, and finally hand-eye coordination. I hpoe you will rethink why we should have computers in school.
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Dear I m writing today see advanced technology positive effect people My reasons wrint computers allow people talk online others people learn faraway places finally teacher handeye coordination As read letter I hope fell way First computers allow talk people online The reason I feel way ca nt fond fone hose even cell phone could see online Also thing texting bigger keyboardscreen I relate I texting someone went online find whtm sent aims instead I hope see computers good people Secondly lot people go library look information paper school The reason I feel way computer google make finding things easier Another reason going library cause send money fill gas tanks I relate everytim family goes library fill car go This another reasons computers good Finally computers teach handeye coordination The reason writing email know keys fingers touch Another reasons computers handeye coordination kid take karayta might learned move hands fast somewhere I relate ti I first grade guy told friends need us get truck help find lost puppy tried grabbing I pulled hard away I became pinned I hope see need computers I would like I sitting reading essay Once reasons writing people talk people online learn faraway places finally handeye coordination I hpoe rethink computers school
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Dear Local Newspaper, I agree that computers have a positive effect on people. You learn hand - eye coordination, you don't have to step out to go to the library and it can improve social skills. Continue reading to find out why. Computers, we use them everyday. They are teaching us something. We not even realize it, but they are teaching us hand-eye coordination. We type something and we use our eyes to look at the screen and then our hands to type, one mistake and automatically our hand fix it. Or maybe when we are playing games online, the same thing applies. Our eyes are looking, while our hands are fast at work over the keyboard. Hand-eye Coordination is a skill you need on sports, and I believe that computers, since we spend time on them are the quick way to learn that skill. Next, how many student's parents work? My parents do. Something it becomes difficult to walk to the library, not everyone lives in walking distance to one. That's when a computer helps. If you have a project to do, but your parents work, you can just it up, you might even get more information, then what you can get in the library. Hows that? you ask. Well, for an example, you had to do a project on Let's just say, you managed to go to a library, but apparently there were only books on out of which were checked out. You can always check it out from another library, but that might not come soon enough, on a survey of students said this has happened to them, but the computer saved them. So what else did they say? HELLO Last but not least, a computer improves your social skils. When I first moved here I was a very shy person. When I made a I talking to people who go to my school. I even became friends with them. I'm not saying that you should just stop talking to people in person, and use or and communicate. I am saying is that if you start talking to them online, you know them a little, then when you talk in person you will see you have alot in common, with that person, and soon you can become friends. Another thing, that is somewhat related to this. I have many friends living in and many cousins in over. We know, you can't travel the time, sometimes you can't even get to see them. Thats social networks help. You can keep in touch, plus not even waste minutes on you phone. Can it get better? In conclusion, Computers have a very positive effect on people. From improving hand-eye coordination, to not stepping out to go to the library, and getting that project done in time with a A+ as a grade, to improving your socia skills. Even see the data collected. Thank you for taking your time and effort to read this, I hope it has persuaded many people.
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Dear Local Newspaper I agree computers positive effect people You learn hand eye coordination nt step go library improve social skills Continue reading find Computers use everyday They teaching us something We even realize teaching us handeye coordination We type something use eyes look screen hands type one mistake automatically hand fix Or maybe playing games online thing applies Our eyes looking hands fast work keyboard Handeye Coordination skill need sports I believe computers since spend time quick way learn skill Next many student s parents work My parents Something becomes difficult walk library everyone lives walking distance one That s computer helps If project parents work might even get information get library Hows ask Well example project Let s say managed go library apparently books checked You always check another library might come soon enough survey students said happened computer saved So else say HELLO Last least computer improves social skils When I first moved I shy person When I made I talking people go school I even became friends I m saying stop talking people person use communicate I saying start talking online know little talk person see alot common person soon become friends Another thing somewhat related I many friends living many cousins We know ca nt travel time sometimes ca nt even get see Thats social networks help You keep touch plus even waste minutes phone Can get better In conclusion Computers positive effect people From improving handeye coordination stepping go library getting project done time A grade improving socia skills Even see data collected Thank taking time effort read I hope persuaded many people
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you want your kids & citizens to get fat and lazy? Or be active, learn everyday skills and become more friendly to life people around you? of parents would agree with me on the second idea over the first one. Well I think after reading this those extra will be persuaded. Now a days out of people are over weight or obese. This can be causes by lack of exercise and inactivity. Our children need to learn go out and exercise an hour a day. This could got their eyes off the computer screen. A great way to help encourage to join a sports team or a club. This can work to people away from screens and the course. If we can get people out of the office this could even push them towards nature. Their are great things to at the local park every day. For example you could ride a bike play games or just fool around with friends. Learning could also be a big faster in getting people out of their computer chairs. If they want to look up tell them to use dictionary, theasaurus or a book. If people on the computer but it can be teach kids and drugs. Bt help find carrer options and life. sitting on front of a screen can your health and also. Their are better things to Instead via internet. You can still have fun if you not good at just for instance and friends. If your a boy you could just go like a park and pay carrer base bill or even wrestle. In conclusion I'd say this would want to get up and get outside. Since geting p and side could help you socialize and learn and even loose weight. So now I leave it in the hands of you whether or not to take the challenge. But just to fill you if you stay your computer it can promote the need for glasses obesity.
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want kids citizens get fat lazy Or active learn everyday skills become friendly life people around parents would agree second idea first one Well I think reading extra persuaded Now days people weight obese This causes lack exercise inactivity Our children need learn go exercise hour day This could got eyes computer screen A great way help encourage join sports team club This work people away screens course If get people office could even push towards nature Their great things local park every day For example could ride bike play games fool around friends Learning could also big faster getting people computer chairs If want look tell use dictionary theasaurus book If people computer teach kids drugs Bt help find carrer options life sitting front screen health also Their better things Instead via internet You still fun good instance friends If boy could go like park pay carrer base bill even wrestle In conclusion I d say would want get get outside Since geting p side could help socialize learn even loose weight So I leave hands whether take challenge But fill stay computer promote need glasses obesity
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Dear Newspaper, has lately come to my attention that people were saying that computers aren't important. Well, I strongly disagree with that statement. I think computers teach excellent hand eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about far away places, and even allow you to chat online with family and friends. Computers teach a lot of hand eye coordination. Study's show that of all football players have excellent hand eye coordination. I'm sure this is because after the football players get home from a big game or something they log into and make thier status all about thier win. Plus, they probably pull up pingball and see how long they can go without getting the little ball down the hole. Do you have good hand eye coordination? My second reason that I disagree with the previous statement would have to be that computers give people the ability to learn about far away places without ever leaving home I mean is so much faster than having to go to the library. At the library you would have to first get there, secend pick out your book, and third check out. with a computer in all that time you could be completely finished with you whole project! Finally, the reason why computers are so important is because keeps people in touch. Do you have family members who live far away from you? I I do. I can't always call them on the phone I want to talk to them so I just log on to and if there online I can have my conversation with that person. I don't about you but I'm really close to my grandma. Unfortanitly she doesn't even live anywhere close to hours to me. She's way down in By car thats one and a half days and by plane thats three hours! So so much easier to log on and have a private conversation with her rather than driving a day and a half or flying for three hours. So in conclusion I'm sure you totally agree with me. Computers are just amazing! They help you get hand eye coordination, let you research something super quick, and let you stay in touch with far away friends and family.
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Dear Newspaper lately come attention people saying computers nt important Well I strongly disagree statement I think computers teach excellent hand eye coordination give people ability learn far away places even allow chat online family friends Computers teach lot hand eye coordination Study s show football players excellent hand eye coordination I m sure football players get home big game something log make thier status thier win Plus probably pull pingball see long go without getting little ball hole Do good hand eye coordination My second reason I disagree previous statement would computers give people ability learn far away places without ever leaving home I mean much faster go library At library would first get secend pick book third check computer time could completely finished whole project Finally reason computers important keeps people touch Do family members live far away I I I ca nt always call phone I want talk I log online I conversation person I nt I m really close grandma Unfortanitly nt even live anywhere close hours She s way By car thats one half days plane thats three hours So much easier log private conversation rather driving day half flying three hours So conclusion I m sure totally agree Computers amazing They help get hand eye coordination let research something super quick let stay touch far away friends family
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Dear being at home with nothing to do. You cant play basketball with you friends because you have did hand eye cordenation. You want to learn about but there arnt any books. And you want to talk to your friends. Thats what would have happend if we dident have advances in technology. No handeye cordenation, we wouldent be able to learn about far way places and we coudent online. Ccomputers benifit our lives in so many ways. To begin with, hand eye cordenation is very important. Without we woudent be able to ware or even hold a pensil. of peoples hand eye cordenation has emproved when using a computer. That was proven in a say a by head of human reactions. @CAPS3 knows that your hands are the most oversized part of you body, the computer help down the movements to hone hand eye cordenation. said that in a interview with sience magaziene. When you are clumsy you break things. Importan things sumtimes, like in broke her mothers glass vase. could have been helped if she had used a computer. In addition, computers give us the power to learn about faraway places. No books! of people prefer looking up information on a computer than in a book. a fact. Some people wouldent have heard about the earthquake in if wasent for the websights that brodcasted updates on Campers weudent have heard. In had a front page spread to promote the use of computers instead of books. Books could be outdated but the computer will always have uptodate answers. Also, people need to be able to talk online. Bisness meetings, governments plans, to just chatting with a friend. People need to be able to stay in tuch. If the presedent couldent vidio conference he would be flying everyware. Emale is the only way from talks to her coworkers. I just am located so far away, its so much easier. makes bissnesses and major incoperations flow.@CAPS6 is now the only way kids talk seems. says. lets them feel like there a part of somthing biger then they are. Now, happy, healthy, and educated young and old amaricans. They can do and research whatever they want. Its amazing what technology does. alows you to talk online research faraway places, and practice your handeye cordenation. That sounds like a good thing to me! So computeristic fist are only good. So agree with me
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Dear home nothing You cant play basketball friends hand eye cordenation You want learn arnt books And want talk friends Thats would happend dident advances technology No handeye cordenation wouldent able learn far way places coudent online Ccomputers benifit lives many ways To begin hand eye cordenation important Without woudent able ware even hold pensil peoples hand eye cordenation emproved using computer That proven say head human reactions CAPS knows hands oversized part body computer help movements hone hand eye cordenation said interview sience magaziene When clumsy break things Importan things sumtimes like broke mothers glass vase could helped used computer In addition computers give us power learn faraway places No books people prefer looking information computer book fact Some people wouldent heard earthquake wasent websights brodcasted updates Campers weudent heard In front page spread promote use computers instead books Books could outdated computer always uptodate answers Also people need able talk online Bisness meetings governments plans chatting friend People need able stay tuch If presedent couldent vidio conference would flying everyware Emale way talks coworkers I located far away much easier makes bissnesses major incoperations flow CAPS way kids talk seems says lets feel like part somthing biger Now happy healthy educated young old amaricans They research whatever want Its amazing technology alows talk online research faraway places practice handeye cordenation That sounds like good thing So computeristic fist good So agree
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Some people think that computers take up too much time for the important things. But really everything you would like to know is right there. You can learn about nature, cool websites even history. Here are my reasons on the effect on computers. First, you can learn so much about nature online. You can view many types of animals and study them. Learn about plant and the effect they have on life. Also, you can learn about many things on and how its changing. Secondly, there are many coll websites you can join. Theres games you can play to keep you occupied during the day. You can even chat online with friends or maybe find long lost friends. School sites are available for students of some studying or help. Lastly, computers show you so much about history. People who things and world famous people from back then compared to famous people now. Most important of all, the life changing story about and how it changes peoples life today. I hope I've you enough to agree with me. As you can see computers have many resources you can learn from learning websites and history arent even half of them. Think about! Thank you for listening
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Some people think computers take much time important things But really everything would like know right You learn nature cool websites even history Here reasons effect computers First learn much nature online You view many types animals study Learn plant effect life Also learn many things changing Secondly many coll websites join Theres games play keep occupied day You even chat online friends maybe find long lost friends School sites available students studying help Lastly computers show much history People things world famous people back compared famous people Most important life changing story changes peoples life today I hope I ve enough agree As see computers many resources learn learning websites history arent even half Think Thank listening
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Computers and the have changed the way the world works today. From stocks to instant messaging (@CAPS2) people have based important decisions in their life based on what they have read. Although some people believe that computers are pulling people away from the beauty of nature, relatives, or exersize. I believe that is only helping the world on a day today basis. One example is conversation, many people have close relatives that but over seas, cross country, or even across town. The helps them speak to others that they normally couldn't have a conversation with. On several occasions, my family have planned trips together even though we live across the continent. What could have taken months by letters in the mail took as little as one hour to do over the Another way to speak to friends or family is a website called is a website that allows you to speak to, or send pictures to others. Other websites like this are and of people in have an account on one of these websites. One other way to speak to others, more for business reason, is Multiple servers proud such as or "@ORGANIZATION3 is my personal favorite' says of the newspaper, "@CAPS11 has helped me endlessly if need to contact someone on short notice." That is one reason why I support the use of computers. Another reason I support the use of computers is because <@PERCENT1@NUM1> of all students rely on the for research papers and other assignments. "Even though I still use books," college student, said."The is so much faster and the articles are more up to date. Search are most popularly used, such as or of all computer users with access have at some paint. Another handy program provided by all computer companies is This program is used from everything to research papers to. This program also has a spell check, a punctuation check, and a check for mistakes. The main reason I am writing this paper is because experts have been complain that people have been spending too much time on the computer and has been distracting them from the important things in life. Such as friends, family, and nature. However, from the examples explained in this paper, I have shown that the increases conversation and curiosity of how the world looks and operates. As for exersise, is commonsense to spend as little as one hour working on personal fitness.
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Computers changed way world works today From stocks instant messaging CAPS people based important decisions life based read Although people believe computers pulling people away beauty nature relatives exersize I believe helping world day today basis One example conversation many people close relatives seas cross country even across town The helps speak others normally could nt conversation On several occasions family planned trips together even though live across continent What could taken months letters mail took little one hour Another way speak friends family website called website allows speak send pictures others Other websites like people account one websites One way speak others business reason Multiple servers proud ORGANIZATION personal favorite says newspaper CAPS helped endlessly need contact someone short notice That one reason I support use computers Another reason I support use computers PERCENT NUM students rely research papers assignments Even though I still use books college student said The much faster articles date Search popularly used computer users access paint Another handy program provided computer companies This program used everything research papers This program also spell check punctuation check check mistakes The main reason I writing paper experts complain people spending much time computer distracting important things life Such friends family nature However examples explained paper I shown increases conversation curiosity world looks operates As exersise commonsense spend little one hour working personal fitness
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Dear I think the way how more and more people use computers are bad because, int's not good for people's health, people who use computers lots of times, refuse to spend time with family and friends and you can find more about something that's on a computer by going and studying it yourself. My first reason why computers have bad effects on people who use computers, is the health issue. Health in very important but sitting in front of a computer for hours makes matters worst. By the way you hunch your back in order to see something small on the computer creen, or when you hold on the mouse, waiting to click onm something for long period of time, can cause arthrities. My second reason why computers have bad effects on people who use them. Are that people who are on computers & end to sometimes refuse to spend time with family or friends like for example: say a week ago you made a promise to have a family get together with the family, and they all count on you to come, you get a computers, you go on all these neat websites that you never heard off it's amazing right! WRONG! before you know if, it's the day for the family get together and your line an hour you amke excuse not to come. And that breaks you family's heat....My last reason why, to me computers are a bad idea is you can learn about another the computer by going on to a But its ore fun traveling or meeting people from that place setting in a for and having your neck, back and sore I right, I think I Also idsfun to and ear foods from the culture that you fing cool off that lame computers.(To me that sounds like a good time to invite family and friends!) therefore in conclusion, in my personal opinion computers have bad effects of people health, it can cause later bacj and neck problems maybe even activities. People who use computers a lot or love to spend time on computers refuse to spend time with family and friends, and You can find more about something like a culture or land, if you go and study its yourself instead of going on a computers for hours. I hope my opinion convinces others, hoe computers have bad effects on people who use it a lott, and take action into their own hands and do what is right.
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Dear I think way people use computers bad int s good people s health people use computers lots times refuse spend time family friends find something s computer going studying My first reason computers bad effects people use computers health issue Health important sitting front computer hours makes matters worst By way hunch back order see something small computer creen hold mouse waiting click onm something long period time cause arthrities My second reason computers bad effects people use Are people computers end sometimes refuse spend time family friends like example say week ago made promise family get together family count come get computers go neat websites never heard s amazing right WRONG know s day family get together line hour amke excuse come And breaks family s heat My last reason computers bad idea learn another computer going But ore fun traveling meeting people place setting neck back sore I right I think I Also idsfun ear foods culture fing cool lame computers To sounds like good time invite family friends therefore conclusion personal opinion computers bad effects people health cause later bacj neck problems maybe even activities People use computers lot love spend time computers refuse spend time family friends You find something like culture land go study instead going computers hours I hope opinion convinces others hoe computers bad effects people use lott take action hands right
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Computers have great effects that are positive towards people. This is it teaches hand eye cordanation, allows people to learn about far away places, and to talk to other people online. Computers have great positive effects for everyone. Computers teach hand eye cordanation. When a person is typing they are using their hands to type while looking at the monitor for the letters. Computer games help to teach this in the game things happen very quickly so the person has to ee whats going on and click the correct key fast thus improving hand eye greatly. Studys do show that people who use computers have a better hand eye then some one who dosen't. Coumputers help hand eye and they can teach you about far away places. Someone can learn about far away places by searching it up online. They will get many facts about that place. Sheral from said I heard some one at school mention and didn't know a thing about it so I searched it and got a ton of facts." This shows the computer can help someone learn about foiren countrys and they can talk to people far away. Using the computer soemone could talk to you while your hundreds or thousands of miles away. Tehy can do this through e-mail of video chat. a showed that seven out of ten people prefer video chat its faster and the two people can see each other. However either way they are still fast ways to contact a person far away. Jack from said "@CAPS3 of video chat I was able to talk to and see my cousin from who I almost never see. This gos to show that the computer is a positive thing for people. The computer is helpful in so many ways it teaches hand eye cordniation, it allows people to learn about far away places and it allows for people to talk to other people. Computers are a great thing for everyone."
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Computers great effects positive towards people This teaches hand eye cordanation allows people learn far away places talk people online Computers great positive effects everyone Computers teach hand eye cordanation When person typing using hands type looking monitor letters Computer games help teach game things happen quickly person ee whats going click correct key fast thus improving hand eye greatly Studys show people use computers better hand eye one dose nt Coumputers help hand eye teach far away places Someone learn far away places searching online They get many facts place Sheral said I heard one school mention nt know thing I searched got ton facts This shows computer help someone learn foiren countrys talk people far away Using computer soemone could talk hundreds thousands miles away Tehy email video chat showed seven ten people prefer video chat faster two people see However either way still fast ways contact person far away Jack said CAPS video chat I able talk see cousin I almost never see This gos show computer positive thing people The computer helpful many ways teaches hand eye cordniation allows people learn far away places allows people talk people Computers great thing everyone
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Computers, how far we've come. Computers hold many opertunities for the world and we don't use any of them. Computers have taken many and left them without excersize. Computers fasinate many and can become very adicting if not used only in moderation. Computers are also attention hogs and take away interaction with family. Imagine seven years of your life sitting in front of a computer. You never get up unless you absolutely need to. You even decide to cut the sports from your life. Now imagine what that does to your body. Even if you ate right, the never excersising part woudl kill you. I remember I was at my cousin house when she sugested to play the game fit. If you have never played this before, when you sign in, it does some tests and determines the age of your body. My body was years old. I was a years old in a year old body. All those years gone in front of the computer. I don't want that experience to happen to anouther. Don't make the same mistake as me readers of the current. I have a friend name and she is a computer addict. She would spend days on end on the computer. Sometimes she'd miss school for the computer or come to school just to play on the computer. She'd sometimes get violent when someone tried to pull her away. I hated seeing my friend like this, but mostly I hated how I watched it happen. It started off innocent enough. She enjoyed a certain website on the internet. It would sometimes get scary when she talked to me about it and clearly had played it all night. If you are looking at this story and thinking that would never happen to me, your wrong. I was thinking the same way when I took a look at that website that got her started. Thankfully, I stoped my addiction before it got to serious, but many others like could and will be absorbed by the computers. Many readers reading this right now, should understand how dangerous and read this is, "@CAPS3!.... I'm talking to you!" That is the sound of your family members trying to talk to you when your on the computer. It doesn't work, computers are so attention grabbing, you can't even stand to talk to your own family. My mom does this many times a day to grab my attention and ends up calling my cell phone or I.ming me. Thats really just sad. By doing this you also become detatched which is never a good thing. The more and more you ignore your family for the computer the less of a bond you'll have, the less of a life you'll have. Computers truly are amazing, but the loss of excersise is very unhealthy and rapidly happening. Computers can also be dangerous, many people will get addicted. The more you chat on chat room to strangers, the less you will talk to your family. Computers are the devils tools. They will most certainly destroy you, readers. Alway be careful, computers are not as they seem.
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Computers far ve come Computers hold many opertunities world nt use Computers taken many left without excersize Computers fasinate many become adicting used moderation Computers also attention hogs take away interaction family Imagine seven years life sitting front computer You never get unless absolutely need You even decide cut sports life Now imagine body Even ate right never excersising part woudl kill I remember I cousin house sugested play game fit If never played sign tests determines age body My body years old I years old year old body All years gone front computer I nt want experience happen anouther Do nt make mistake readers current I friend name computer addict She would spend days end computer Sometimes d miss school computer come school play computer She d sometimes get violent someone tried pull away I hated seeing friend like mostly I hated I watched happen It started innocent enough She enjoyed certain website internet It would sometimes get scary talked clearly played night If looking story thinking would never happen wrong I thinking way I took look website got started Thankfully I stoped addiction got serious many others like could absorbed computers Many readers reading right understand dangerous read CAPS I m talking That sound family members trying talk computer It nt work computers attention grabbing ca nt even stand talk family My mom many times day grab attention ends calling cell phone Iming Thats really sad By also become detatched never good thing The ignore family computer less bond ll less life ll Computers truly amazing loss excersise unhealthy rapidly happening Computers also dangerous many people get addicted The chat chat room strangers less talk family Computers devils tools They certainly destroy readers Alway careful computers seem
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Dear out of ten people spend their time on the computers. I believe people should not spend much time on their computers because it can hurt their eyes. They watch inappropriate videos or pictures. Lastly, their bills will get higher. Did you know a lot of people spend their time on the computers? Well I think they should not be sitting on their damage their eyes. When you sit and watch computer your eyes starts to hurt. Then when you go to check your eyes, the doctor will probably give a glasses. My second reason is that people go to inappropriate sites and watch inappropriate videos. One time my friend was sitting in the computer and she started to watch inappropriate videos when her father found out about this, he canceled their internet. Can you imagine the high bills you would get? Why pay too much money for spending much time in the computer, when you can turn off the computer and spend some time with your friends. For example, instead of sitting on the computer much, go outside and play soccer, kickball and more. In conclusion, people should stop spendinding much time on the computers. Computers can hurt your eyes if you sit too much. People watch inappropriate videos. Also your bills will get higher. It seems to me that people need different activities to get them off the computers. I hope you are agree with my ideas.
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Dear ten people spend time computers I believe people spend much time computers hurt eyes They watch inappropriate videos pictures Lastly bills get higher Did know lot people spend time computers Well I think sitting damage eyes When sit watch computer eyes starts hurt Then go check eyes doctor probably give glasses My second reason people go inappropriate sites watch inappropriate videos One time friend sitting computer started watch inappropriate videos father found canceled internet Can imagine high bills would get Why pay much money spending much time computer turn computer spend time friends For example instead sitting computer much go outside play soccer kickball In conclusion people stop spendinding much time computers Computers hurt eyes sit much People watch inappropriate videos Also bills get higher It seems people need different activities get computers I hope agree ideas
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Dear local newspaper, I think that computers are a good thing to have for the following three reasons. First, they help people learn by looking up information on different places. Second, the help people talk to friends and family using Lastly they help people become less stressed by playing computers games. Learning is important and with computers, you're able to learn faster. Computers help you learn about faraway places like It is much easier to learn on the computer than to go to the library and check out a book. If you're working on a project and you needed some last minute information, you could just go to the computer and search you're topic. Learning on a computer is much more convenvent then going to the Another reason computers are good is because you can talk to friends and family who are far away using something called allows someone to talk to another person using the computer. These people could live just down the block or half-way accrose the world. My cousin is living in spain for a semester in college. I've skped with her many times. The cool thing about is that you can acctually see the person you're talking to on the computer screen. is a great way to keep in touch with family and friends who are faraway. My last reason is that computers help lower your stress level by playing games. Computer games are alot of fun to play. They have games that range from the word, to beauty barn. Computer games are a great way to lower your stress because instead of piking your self up with to much work, you'll be calming your selfdown with computer games. They also gave educational games. like, Which country is which. This game teaches you geoagrahy while you have fun. Computers are a great thing to have. They help you learn about faraway places, talk to people who live faraway and play fun computer games. Computers are always going to be used and never put to waste. Theres always something you can do when you go on a computer.
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Dear local newspaper I think computers good thing following three reasons First help people learn looking information different places Second help people talk friends family using Lastly help people become less stressed playing computers games Learning important computers re able learn faster Computers help learn faraway places like It much easier learn computer go library check book If re working project needed last minute information could go computer search re topic Learning computer much convenvent going Another reason computers good talk friends family far away using something called allows someone talk another person using computer These people could live block halfway accrose world My cousin living spain semester college I ve skped many times The cool thing acctually see person re talking computer screen great way keep touch family friends faraway My last reason computers help lower stress level playing games Computer games alot fun play They games range word beauty barn Computer games great way lower stress instead piking self much work ll calming selfdown computer games They also gave educational games like Which country This game teaches geoagrahy fun Computers great thing They help learn faraway places talk people live faraway play fun computer games Computers always going used never put waste Theres always something go computer
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Dear people from the newspaper, I am concerned that people take too much time on the computer because it could cause trouble, voilence, & illegal crimes. First, I am concerned that people spend too much time on the computer because it couses trouble, in people in the do bad stuff like starting rumors, & saying bad stuff about people they dispise, in the teens form ages were envolven with the rumor spreading. This would be bad for all children. All these reasons will lead to the below. Secondly, I am concerned that people spend too much time on the computer because it couses voilence, because the reasons started in the paragraph, if all this continues, then it & lead to voilence, in people died from all the crimes online. threats were found online from big websites like & Lastly, I am concerned that people spend too much time on the computer because it could lead to illegal crimes, In a girl was talking to a boy online then when they decided to meet, he shot & killed her. It turned out he was just a person who lied about who he was online, on a website online, a group men were talking about now much they hated kids so they decided to shot them their bus stops. Thank god that the police caught them before they were to do the crime In conclusion, I am concenred that people are spending too much time on the computer because it causes trouble, voilence, & illegal crimes. This like totally needs to stop before everyone is addicted to spreading rumors. Thank you for your time in reading this letter
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Dear people newspaper I concerned people take much time computer could cause trouble voilence illegal crimes First I concerned people spend much time computer couses trouble people bad stuff like starting rumors saying bad stuff people dispise teens form ages envolven rumor spreading This would bad children All reasons lead Secondly I concerned people spend much time computer couses voilence reasons started paragraph continues lead voilence people died crimes online threats found online big websites like Lastly I concerned people spend much time computer could lead illegal crimes In girl talking boy online decided meet shot killed It turned person lied online website online group men talking much hated kids decided shot bus stops Thank god police caught crime In conclusion I concenred people spending much time computer causes trouble voilence illegal crimes This like totally needs stop everyone addicted spreading rumors Thank time reading letter
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Dear Readers, Everyone now-a-days has a computer. This could be a good thing but mostly its unnatral. People can now do things they couldn't do before; when people move they don't need to send letters to one another, and have to wait days for a reply. Now they just sign into aim, facebook, or myspace. Then they can talk in time. But thats only the good things here are the bad. People spend less time outside they don't look at any of the butey anymore. We don't spend time with our friends any more. I can't even remember the last time I had a face to face convetation with soemone if I didn't have to. People on the internet can do anything they want. You be saying thats a good thing. Right? Well the answer is no! People can hack into almost everything. People can cyber bully others with out any one ever knowing who the other person is. People can also be any one they want online. Say if I was and I wanted to stalk so little years old I could also pretend that I was ten and pretend make friends with the ten year old. When I found out enough information I would then be able to find the ten year old. Before people wern't able to do this. If people start to see what is heppening with our exsistence the more people would stop being stached to their computers. People would start to cut down on the amount of time they spend on their computers and start to live. Take action! Take notice! Start spreding the word!
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Dear Readers Everyone nowadays computer This could good thing mostly unnatral People things could nt people move nt need send letters one another wait days reply Now sign aim facebook myspace Then talk time But thats good things bad People spend less time outside nt look butey anymore We nt spend time friends I ca nt even remember last time I face face convetation soemone I nt People internet anything want You saying thats good thing Right Well answer People hack almost everything People cyber bully others one ever knowing person People also one want online Say I I wanted stalk little years old I could also pretend I ten pretend make friends ten year old When I found enough information I would able find ten year old Before people wer nt able If people start see heppening exsistence people would stop stached computers People would start cut amount time spend computers start live Take action Take notice Start spreding word
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Dear would you want to do in your spare time? Would you go outside and maybe the soccer ball around with your kids, or grab a bag of chips and log onto facebook or your email? The question is, do computers have a negative or positive effect on people. I believe that computers have a negative effect. Talking to friends on the computer doesn't let you learn social skills. Going on the computer can also be very addicting. Finally, it take's away from all the exercise you need. I that after careful consideration you will agree with me that computers have a negative effect on people. Facebook, ichat and email are all fun and easy ways to talk to your friends and family online. However, are you really gaining any social skills by doing this? Talking to friends and family online doesn't help you have good social skills. When you first meet someone in person, you most likely want to to say and how to act. Typing on a keyboard doesn't really let you interact with people. not invite someone over, or go out to lunch with your family istead? Computers also are very addicting. I can say for myself that once I log onto the computer, I might not be off for the next hours. This is the case for many other people too. Going on the computer is addicting. Il that not everyone is using a computer on a daily basis the vast majority of people are. When I'm on facebook and I see the number of people online is one hundred or even two hundred, as time goes by, the number increases. The computer being addicting leads to getting enough exercise. Doctors say that adults and kids should get atleast an hour of exercise a day. Going on the computer takes away from this time. Instead of sitting on the computer for an hour, you could be getting your hour of exercise. instead A lot of times when someone down at the computer, a snack goes with them. This just adds onto the fact getting the exercise is important to stay healthy. I that I would feel a lot better if I went for a run instead of going on the computer. You are probably saying that you have time to manage both, but some people would rather exercise. When these people see you on the computer, kind of example does it set? If everyone limited their time on the computer we would all feel a lot better and be more social. I trust that you will agree with me that computers have a negative effect on people.
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Dear would want spare time Would go outside maybe soccer ball around kids grab bag chips log onto facebook email The question computers negative positive effect people I believe computers negative effect Talking friends computer nt let learn social skills Going computer also addicting Finally take s away exercise need I careful consideration agree computers negative effect people Facebook ichat email fun easy ways talk friends family online However really gaining social skills Talking friends family online nt help good social skills When first meet someone person likely want say act Typing keyboard nt really let interact people invite someone go lunch family istead Computers also addicting I say I log onto computer I might next hours This case many people Going computer addicting Il everyone using computer daily basis vast majority people When I m facebook I see number people online one hundred even two hundred time goes number increases The computer addicting leads getting enough exercise Doctors say adults kids get atleast hour exercise day Going computer takes away time Instead sitting computer hour could getting hour exercise instead A lot times someone computer snack goes This adds onto fact getting exercise important stay healthy I I would feel lot better I went run instead going computer You probably saying time manage people would rather exercise When people see computer kind example set If everyone limited time computer would feel lot better social I trust agree computers negative effect people
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Dear people find the clicking and clacking of computers a nuscense. What they don't realize is thay are helping the youths lives and making them easier and they could be doing the same for them. This is why computers have a very good effect on people. First off computers arn't a bad thing if they are just helping people get to know each other better. You always see ad's for dating websites and other things like that. Did you know that of couples meet online. Thats a lot and to think they would have never if it wern't for computers. Second of all computers provide a tremendous amount of entertainment. There are over on computer games online. of them are free too. I bet almost every kids has played a game on the internet before. Think about it your child could be out getting in trouble or be nice and safe at home playing on the computer. You are probably thinking, computers sound so childish and infantile. Well computers arn't just fun and games. They provide a lot of information. They are very useful for teens in school for projects, but they benefit adults in many ways too. It provides information on vacations, hotels, ext. Also computers now have videos all over on how to do things like how to and other useful information. So as you can see computers arn't just a pain. They help bring people together, provide entertainment and have very useful information. Think about it. A computer might save your life one day. Computers help peoples every day lives and they could be helping yours.
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Dear people find clicking clacking computers nuscense What nt realize thay helping youths lives making easier could This computers good effect people First computers ar nt bad thing helping people get know better You always see ad s dating websites things like Did know couples meet online Thats lot think would never wer nt computers Second computers provide tremendous amount entertainment There computer games online free I bet almost every kids played game internet Think child could getting trouble nice safe home playing computer You probably thinking computers sound childish infantile Well computers ar nt fun games They provide lot information They useful teens school projects benefit adults many ways It provides information vacations hotels ext Also computers videos things like useful information So see computers ar nt pain They help bring people together provide entertainment useful information Think A computer might save life one day Computers help peoples every day lives could helping
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Lately, a technology buzz has hit all over the world. Where ever you look, be it at home, at school, at work, or on the streets, you see people texting, talking on phones, blogging, and other computer related things. This concerns some people. They believe that these generations are relying too much on computers and not spending enough time exercising outside or socializing. But here is where they go wrong. These experts are judging computers too harshly, for it's not like everyone is zoning out in front of a glass screen, sucked into the world beyond. most of these "computer geeks" are using the computer for useful things, while they are also used for entertainment, computers also help society to reconnect with long-lost friends or even get directions to a well-know resuraunt. As you can plainly see, computers are not turning us all into zombies. Computers are sometimes seen as a nusence. Parents complain about the many times they have to drag their sons and daughters from the screen for dinner or a soccer game that started minutes ago. But you see, this doesn't mean its bad. Everyone goes on the computer. "Even though my father complains that I'm on too much," says. "@CAPS2 forgets that has one of his own." This is an example not unlike many other student's parents. About of adults confess that they too have fallen into the new fads such as and So why do we need these things? What seems to make them so important to us? The answer is simple, it makes us feel connected. Then again, if you think about it, maybe not so simple. Many people have different opinions on why the computer is so important to them, but most agree that friends is one big factor. "Everyone is already online." computer technician, informs. "@CAPS6 all your friends are in something, wouldn't you want to as well?" as the famous saying, your friends jumped off a bridge, would you?, flashes through your mind let me answer that for you - Being connected and diving off the deep ends are too different concepts. As you find friends from highschool or just friends from school, your glad that you can talk to them face to face - or computer screen to computer screen - again. Last, but certainly not least, the computer is a great resource. While some people complain, others are using what it has to offer by looking up directions to events or facts for your next report. This is how websites like make billions from the words being typed into the search engine. The facts and places that arise from the computr are like gems waiting to be found. In conclusion, its easy to see why the computer and its resources are so loved. Everyone uses it for different things and different hobbies. Whilesome for pure entertainment, others for information, and another for reconnection. My personal favorite finiding the true treasure of hidden bands, the fantastic ones, that one even knows. And so, this is why I'm convinced the computer is a positive impact on the world.
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Lately technology buzz hit world Where ever look home school work streets see people texting talking phones blogging computer related things This concerns people They believe generations relying much computers spending enough time exercising outside socializing But go wrong These experts judging computers harshly s like everyone zoning front glass screen sucked world beyond computer geeks using computer useful things also used entertainment computers also help society reconnect longlost friends even get directions wellknow resuraunt As plainly see computers turning us zombies Computers sometimes seen nusence Parents complain many times drag sons daughters screen dinner soccer game started minutes ago But see nt mean bad Everyone goes computer Even though father complains I m much says CAPS forgets one This example unlike many student s parents About adults confess fallen new fads So need things What seems make important us The answer simple makes us feel connected Then think maybe simple Many people different opinions computer important agree friends one big factor Everyone already online computer technician informs CAPS friends something would nt want well famous saying friends jumped bridge would flashes mind let answer Being connected diving deep ends different concepts As find friends highschool friends school glad talk face face computer screen computer screen Last certainly least computer great resource While people complain others using offer looking directions events facts next report This websites like make billions words typed search engine The facts places arise computr like gems waiting found In conclusion easy see computer resources loved Everyone uses different things different hobbies Whilesome pure entertainment others information another reconnection My personal favorite finiding true treasure hidden bands fantastic ones one even knows And I m convinced computer positive impact world
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Dier: newspaper I thingk the computers are beneficial and consequencial. Computers are beneficial because thy entertainment, inforormational and super yousfall., I injoy all the cool vidio on youtud while older pepole mite wash the news. You can also send mail, it is most semplr. Then sanding a ordnery envelope. Wating for days or even weeks depnding were you live but wegth e-mail it can get ther in a mater of secons, big deforents right. Pepol who depend on computers can uploud inpotan informashon all the pepol on palands of the poles and army yous the internet on there computers to control speshol equenent like for the army or everiday monrting sestoms for a policeofficer. I mayself yous a computer to resrech school slot like math and history but computer all arnt good pepole abyous it. Some pepol can hack in to other computers and steel importen information and make your life misardol it can effact your haus onlin players spend countless howsr playing it can mak you game wat, stend les time weth your frend and fameli thy play so offen ther eight weekends and required glasses, computers my complateley replace newsepaper.
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Dier newspaper I thingk computers beneficial consequencial Computers beneficial thy entertainment inforormational super yousfall I injoy cool vidio youtud older pepole mite wash news You also send mail semplr Then sanding ordnery envelope Wating days even weeks depnding live wegth email get ther mater secons big deforents right Pepol depend computers uploud inpotan informashon pepol palands poles army yous internet computers control speshol equenent like army everiday monrting sestoms policeofficer I mayself yous computer resrech school slot like math history computer arnt good pepole abyous Some pepol hack computers steel importen information make life misardol effact haus onlin players spend countless howsr playing mak game wat stend les time weth frend fameli thy play offen ther eight weekends required glasses computers complateley replace newsepaper
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Many people think that computers are not a good thing. They think people spend to much time on the computer and are getting less exercise. They are also concerned that looking at the screen could be damaging to your eyes. Those statements maybe true. I believe that computers are beneficial. You can talk to people from other places. You could learn about other places in the world. You can also use the computer to research topics. first off, on the computer you can talk to people. Whether it on a webcam or one of those networks to and chat with each other. On the computer you can chat and talk with people without having to be on the phone and paying a bill for it. For example, I have family in another country and one way we always talk is on the computer. We talk on webcam and chat. Calling someone from another country on the phone gets really expensive. If I didn't have a computer then I would not have that great of contact with family from another country. In addition, You can use the computer to look at foreign countries. Many people including parents have used the computer to look and read into about other countries. mother, whenever plans a vacation, looks up the country we are going to and gets more information about it. Like we went to a hot exotic place, mom looked it up to see what we should pack to go there. If it weren't for the computer we might have packed the wrong items. Lastly, computers are a great source for researching. I can't tell you how many times I have used the computer to research. Books and encyclopedias are great sources but the computer has so much to offer. You have so many links you can go to and sites. You can find pictures, videos, maps, and much more. I have used the computer many times to research, sometimes its a requirement to have a few sites you have gone on to research for your project in school or something. If you have a computer at home you can build up your computer skills for school. Computers are a more positive thing than negative. You can talk to people without the expensive phone bill. You can learn about other places and cultures. Also, you can use it for researching purposes. Computers
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Many people think computers good thing They think people spend much time computer getting less exercise They also concerned looking screen could damaging eyes Those statements maybe true I believe computers beneficial You talk people places You could learn places world You also use computer research topics first computer talk people Whether webcam one networks chat On computer chat talk people without phone paying bill For example I family another country one way always talk computer We talk webcam chat Calling someone another country phone gets really expensive If I nt computer I would great contact family another country In addition You use computer look foreign countries Many people including parents used computer look read countries mother whenever plans vacation looks country going gets information Like went hot exotic place mom looked see pack go If nt computer might packed wrong items Lastly computers great source researching I ca nt tell many times I used computer research Books encyclopedias great sources computer much offer You many links go sites You find pictures videos maps much I used computer many times research sometimes requirement sites gone research project school something If computer home build computer skills school Computers positive thing negative You talk people without expensive phone bill You learn places cultures Also use researching purposes Computers
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To whom it concern, I feel that computers are a great in most people lives. One you can use them for almost everything. two computers are good for you in many ways. It shouldnt affect dailey schedule or just being with your family. People can use computers for almost everything for one their are hundred of websites on the computer. For example, you can play games all different kinds, you can also chat with people, litsen to music, watch videos, look for places and a whole lot more. Computers are very useful in many different ways. Computers are also good for you. They help with you eye cordination. You can also go online and do practice on math, social studies, etc. The internet also has a lot of eduacting games whiten is good for people who had that extra help. It also helps you with you hand cordinations because on the computer you need to know how to type. you get realy good at it you can type without looking. A computer can not get between you dailey schedule or whay u do with your family. Because a computer is a computer you go on it if you need something or you go on it just for fun for example i havea computer at my house and someone goes on it everyday and it never affect what everybody does us kids still go to school my parents still go to work, we eat dinner together we do what we have to do, and the computer never gets in the way. As my conclusion i know that computers are good to have in peoples houses. One you can use them for almost everything. Two computers are good for you. Three i shouldnt affect your daily schedule in anyway.
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To concern I feel computers great people lives One use almost everything two computers good many ways It shouldnt affect dailey schedule family People use computers almost everything one hundred websites computer For example play games different kinds also chat people litsen music watch videos look places whole lot Computers useful many different ways Computers also good They help eye cordination You also go online practice math social studies etc The internet also lot eduacting games whiten good people extra help It also helps hand cordinations computer need know type get realy good type without looking A computer get dailey schedule whay u family Because computer computer go need something go fun example havea computer house someone goes everyday never affect everybody us kids still go school parents still go work eat dinner together computer never gets way As conclusion know computers good peoples houses One use almost everything Two computers good Three shouldnt affect daily schedule anyway
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Dear newspaper people I think computers are good because wat if I have a family member that gose out of town and you want to stay in tuch and I dont have a phone then I can go-on a chatting web sight and stay in with them. When bored I go on google to look up and pichers and play some games. You can look up one think and find something elsa, but it will cech your eyes. Computers are good were ever you go, it can look up for a project for school. Bur ween you are in school it can help you with spelling, and if u got to know wat contrey has the most people the will find the ancer as fast as a snap. Computers are advanceing every year. Seart the was just a screan and a mouse, now we got laptops that you can tack every were. People can get exercis if thay want and thay can enjoy nature thay can bring a laptop. But when you are exercising then you can go right to youtube and lison to some musick and wach funny videos. And thats whay I think computers are good.
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Dear newspaper people I think computers good wat I family member gose town want stay tuch I dont phone I goon chatting web sight stay When bored I go google look pichers play games You look one think find something elsa cech eyes Computers good ever go look project school Bur ween school help spelling u got know wat contrey people find ancer fast snap Computers advanceing every year Seart screan mouse got laptops tack every People get exercis thay want thay enjoy nature thay bring laptop But exercising go right youtube lison musick wach funny videos And thats whay I think computers good
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Dear I am writing this letter to state my opinion on the effects computers have on people. And there are three of them: theft, cyberbully, addition. Now I will write one paragraph about each. My first reason why I feel that computers have bad effects is. theft many people in the identities get stolen for listing private information online (computer) which can leave that person in a lot of debt. How are we going to encourage people to use computers when their at the risk of getting their stolen. If this happening to innocent people it needs to stop we must'nt encourage this online behavior so say no to computers. i understand it really is interesting to learn about people from different countries but their are some cons. Talking online to people you don't know and have never seen, met in person they can pose as someone famous and bully you for their enjoyment. It has been proven that when children even adults get cyberbullied can lead them in the path of depression even suicide. Now I find it quite febble-minded to give up your life for a computer. So again I say no to computers. My last reason why I say no to computers is because people become addicted to the excitement of the computers when eventually lead to the division from friends and family because your lost in the computer world also you forget about you hygene some people even forget to eat. This thing they call computer is a drug, a drug that makes you forget about reality and everything else you used to think of and bring you to computer land. And I say no to computers. I have gave you my opinion and three supporting reasons why I feel the way I do which were because theft, cyberbullying, addiction. Say no computers.
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Dear I writing letter state opinion effects computers people And three theft cyberbully addition Now I write one paragraph My first reason I feel computers bad effects theft many people identities get stolen listing private information online computer leave person lot debt How going encourage people use computers risk getting stolen If happening innocent people needs stop mustnt encourage online behavior say computers understand really interesting learn people different countries cons Talking online people nt know never seen met person pose someone famous bully enjoyment It proven children even adults get cyberbullied lead path depression even suicide Now I find quite febbleminded give life computer So I say computers My last reason I say computers people become addicted excitement computers eventually lead division friends family lost computer world also forget hygene people even forget eat This thing call computer drug drug makes forget reality everything else used think bring computer land And I say computers I gave opinion three supporting reasons I feel way I theft cyberbullying addiction Say computers
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Dear Newspaper I strongly agree with experts on computer's. Those who support advances in technology believe that computer's have a positive effect on people. They say that computers teach us hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn from faraway places and even allow people to talk with others online. Theese effects are true but there are many other bad effects to that they dont like to say. Computers also effect people's visiion as you are really close to the screen, computers are really addicting for many people all around the world and having them do bearly no excercize moving many people to a big problem now n days which is obesity. Computer's also tend to take a lot of time away from people's lives. The way I see it to is that although computer's have some positive effects on people you can change those positive effects in a better way that can keep you fit to and seeing places with your eyes, like you can get practice with hand-eye coordination by simply getting a friend and pass tennis balls back and forth quick so at the same time your exercizing to. Also a computer can have you talk with your friends online but why not talk to them by phone if there far away n go outside and catch some fresh air n if they live close by why not talk to them in person instead. or if you want to learn about a certain far away place why not visit the place instead. There are many things you can do that a computer can do and better. but yet im not saying a computer is all bad at all. I agree that there are both good and bad effects to computers as well as most things in the world we live in. In my opinion to I honestly think there are more bad effects then good effects for computer's.
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Dear Newspaper I strongly agree experts computer s Those support advances technology believe computer s positive effect people They say computers teach us handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places even allow people talk others online Theese effects true many bad effects dont like say Computers also effect people s visiion really close screen computers really addicting many people around world bearly excercize moving many people big problem n days obesity Computer s also tend take lot time away people s lives The way I see although computer s positive effects people change positive effects better way keep fit seeing places eyes like get practice handeye coordination simply getting friend pass tennis balls back forth quick time exercizing Also computer talk friends online talk phone far away n go outside catch fresh air n live close talk person instead want learn certain far away place visit place instead There many things computer better yet im saying computer bad I agree good bad effects computers well things world live In opinion I honestly think bad effects good effects computer s
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I personally think that people should not spend so much time on the computer. One reason why people shouldn't spend so much time on the computer is because people spend to much time on them and not enough time exercising. Another reason why is because people aren't enjoying nature. Finally, my last reason is because people are spending less time interacting with family ans friends. My first reason why people shouldn't spend so much time on the computer is bacause they are spenfing more time on them then exercising. People will end up getting fat if all they do is sit around on their computer. People should be running or going to the gym instead of going on the computer. Even if you have your own equipment at your house to exercis on it's still better then going on the computer and not getting any exercise at all. If people spent as much time exercising then they spend on the computer, then the average weight of a human will go way down. Another reason people should't spend so much time on the computer is because people are spending less time enjoying nature. People should be outside getting fresh air instead of being inside on the computer all day. I personally would way rather be outside playing baseball and getting fit then being inside on the computer getting fat. Even if you look at nature via comuter, it still wan't be the same because you actually aren't outside experiencing it yourself. If people waould spend as much time enjoying nature as they are on the computer. We would be living in a much more healthy and clean word. My last reason why I think people spend so much time on the computer is because they are spending less time interacting with family and friends. People could be in a dark room all day, isolated from everyone they came about just because they are on the computer. That to me just isn't right because they covered he spending quality time with their friends and family, instead they are spending time with their computer. If a person spends all their time on the computer then everyone they care about will gradually be slipping away even if they don't know it. So as you can see, it would be much better if people spend more time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends then spending more time on the computer. even if you don't spend alot of your time on the computer yet, you will gradually spend more and more time on it everyday until eventually it's all you do.
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I personally think people spend much time computer One reason people nt spend much time computer people spend much time enough time exercising Another reason people nt enjoying nature Finally last reason people spending less time interacting family ans friends My first reason people nt spend much time computer bacause spenfing time exercising People end getting fat sit around computer People running going gym instead going computer Even equipment house exercis s still better going computer getting exercise If people spent much time exercising spend computer average weight human go way Another reason people shouldt spend much time computer people spending less time enjoying nature People outside getting fresh air instead inside computer day I personally would way rather outside playing baseball getting fit inside computer getting fat Even look nature via comuter still wa nt actually nt outside experiencing If people waould spend much time enjoying nature computer We would living much healthy clean word My last reason I think people spend much time computer spending less time interacting family friends People could dark room day isolated everyone came computer That nt right covered spending quality time friends family instead spending time computer If person spends time computer everyone care gradually slipping away even nt know So see would much better people spend time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends spending time computer even nt spend alot time computer yet gradually spend time everyday eventually s
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Dear This a letter telling you my opinion about computer. Yes people do spend that time in computers a lot, its because computers are very helpful in many ways. Computers help us with our job, school, work ect. For example science. Im in grade. My teacher gives us homework; every we have to do are facts about anything you want to write about. A lot of people look up bears on and they do their assigment about bears. Jobs; secreatenes always have to use computer for everything in our school secreaterys and teachers use computers for attendance, grading. They check you, attendance, grade, phone number and schedule. Communication, my dad the computer wuth our family from We talk to know how they've been, to know whats new. Like a week ago I was chating to my cousin she told me her dog had puppies. My family also uses the computer, to order. My uncle went to ticketmaster.com and he ordered two tickets for wwe. He also orders his flight tickets in his computer, to go to Well my point is people use computer a lot because they are, very helpful in many ways. Its not good to just be in the computer it good to outside enjoy nature live your life exercise not only to be in shape, but for your health. hope you enjoy and understand my opinion on computers. Thank you for taking your time and reading I really appreciate it.
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Dear This letter telling opinion computer Yes people spend time computers lot computers helpful many ways Computers help us job school work ect For example science Im grade My teacher gives us homework every facts anything want write A lot people look bears assigment bears Jobs secreatenes always use computer everything school secreaterys teachers use computers attendance grading They check attendance grade phone number schedule Communication dad computer wuth family We talk know ve know whats new Like week ago I chating cousin told dog puppies My family also uses computer order My uncle went ticketmastercom ordered two tickets wwe He also orders flight tickets computer go Well point people use computer lot helpful many ways Its good computer good outside enjoy nature live life exercise shape health hope enjoy understand opinion computers Thank taking time reading I really appreciate
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Dear local of latly I have been noticing that some of the citizens of have been using computers and laptops for a good amount of three the some people to the say is a waste of time they could enjoying with family and friends with friends and family far away. helps with research and learn thnigs and help with relaxing people. modern time and the people who disagree enjoy Some family and friends lives far away and you cant talk to them in person. There is always calling them or writing them a letter hot email, facebook, and are easier and to use. When you call you dont know if your them there phones bissy, or they a bad takes long and you better to stay and send on and know you didn't helps in advertisment and sales. Sometimes maybe unrealible because anybody can change anything on the site. Not all things online are like that though. Stay away from scares and things, they will came Some people find the internet could be there from work or sites. There are fun games and to talk to In research the internet helps of people relax and calm down after a long when on the computer or laptop which helps with stress. Computers can help in many ways. There are other realiable things. Plus where ever you go you will find the internet.
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Dear local latly I noticing citizens using computers laptops good amount three people say waste time could enjoying family friends friends family far away helps research learn thnigs help relaxing people modern time people disagree enjoy Some family friends lives far away cant talk person There always calling writing letter hot email facebook easier use When call dont know phones bissy bad takes long better stay send know nt helps advertisment sales Sometimes maybe unrealible anybody change anything site Not things online like though Stay away scares things came Some people find internet could work sites There fun games talk In research internet helps people relax calm long computer laptop helps stress Computers help many ways There realiable things Plus ever go find internet
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Dear Newspaper, In our town, more people are on the computer each day. Some people state that you can do a lot on the computer and talk to people. But, I believe that our town should not support advances in technology. You will have more time to exercise, talk to family and friends in person and to take part in different activities around the town. Do you want to be overweight and not be in shape? Well, if you sit at the computer all day every day, you will become like that. "I think exercise shoud be a part of everybody's day," teacher from stated. You would be so attatched to your computer, that you wouldn't work out. In the state of it is proven that of residents are overweight from not exercising and are overweight by not eating properly. This shows more people in don't exercise than not eating properly. wants to be overweight and you can change that! More people each year make facebook and Some kids in school are on the internet all day talking to friends who live down the street. Students refuse to talk to their friend on the phone. Instead, they do it online. "@CAPS4 can understand their tone of the message sent," stated. You could interpret it in different ways. When you are on the phone, it is a quick and easy way to communicate not waiting for somebody to type back. If you are a person who is always on the computer, plan a get together with your friend to talk in real life. Sidewalk sales, clubs, sports teams, holiday stroll, these are events that every town offers! Instead of sitting dreaming of being on the team, go out and do it! Each town cares about its residents and want them to have fun. That is why towns offer these activities. "@CAPS5 want to make the town interasting and everybody to know each other," says If you participate in these activities, you will meet other kids your age around the town. If your town offers all of these activities, they are helping you out. Being out helping the town is way better than sitting in your house on the computer! In many ways both advancing technology or not, why be inside doing nothing but talking to people? Go and talk to them in real life. Being in shape, talking to people in real life and activities your town offers is the way to go. Thank you for your concern
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Dear Newspaper In town people computer day Some people state lot computer talk people But I believe town support advances technology You time exercise talk family friends person take part different activities around town Do want overweight shape Well sit computer day every day become like I think exercise shoud part everybody s day teacher stated You would attatched computer would nt work In state proven residents overweight exercising overweight eating properly This shows people nt exercise eating properly wants overweight change More people year make facebook Some kids school internet day talking friends live street Students refuse talk friend phone Instead online CAPS understand tone message sent stated You could interpret different ways When phone quick easy way communicate waiting somebody type back If person always computer plan get together friend talk real life Sidewalk sales clubs sports teams holiday stroll events every town offers Instead sitting dreaming team go Each town cares residents want fun That towns offer activities CAPS want make town interasting everybody know says If participate activities meet kids age around town If town offers activities helping Being helping town way better sitting house computer In many ways advancing technology inside nothing talking people Go talk real life Being shape talking people real life activities town offers way go Thank concern
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Dear, would life effect you if you did not have a computer? I strongly belive that computers have a great effect on people all around the world. It helps you at work for a job and at school. Computers also help students and adults talk to people. Many people want to go to places but they do not know what the place looks like or where it is. With a computer, you can find out all of that information. Read in to the minds of the students and see what we have to say on this topic. With a computer it is much easier at your job or at school. Just think, without computers people would need to write every paper by hand and we all know that can take hours. When you type a paper for school, you go to spell check and then you know everything is correct. If you write a paper by hand, there is a huge chance that some words could be spelt wrong. Work get finished a lot a quicker on the computer so you have more time to do other things like hang out with friends. If you rush on a paper, the people reading it will have a tough time trying to figure out what it says, on the computer, you work is always going to be neat. You mcan e-mail your work to a friend or save it to your computer so if. you need to change something for a paper, it will be a quicker than having to rewrite the whole paper over. Computers do not effect me in a horrible way because it helps 'me get my work done faster. Computers help people communicate with other people. By having a computer people can talk to other people. In many schools students ask their friend a question about homework. Without a computer, people would have no way of asking questions and end up getting it wrong. I like to hang out with my friends and in order to do that you have to make plans. When you are on the computer, you can go on facebook and if they are on, talk to them about what they wanted to do kthat night. It is so much easier to do instead of looking up their number and calling them. Many people in the world have old friends from school that they want to stay in touch with. Now with a computer they will have no issue doing that. You will finally be able to look up a place you want to go. Many people in this world like to travel on the computer you can look up maps and see the shortest way to get to the place, you want to go, you will see if they easy way to get there and that might not he by car. i would not want to go to a place that did not look eye catching. Now I can just go on the website and find out 'everything I wanted to know about that place. If a place is hours away, I would not want to travel that far so I would need to know if a place is close to where I live computers really tell you a lot about it and what the weather is mostly like. i use the computer for mostly everything I do. Comming through our minds have showed you what we have thought about the effects computers have on us today. We can make work a lot easier, talk to other ;people, and get imformation on places you want to visit somebody. The computer is a very reliable source for me and you have lost a lot if you do not agree with me on this.
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Dear would life effect computer I strongly belive computers great effect people around world It helps work job school Computers also help students adults talk people Many people want go places know place looks like With computer find information Read minds students see say topic With computer much easier job school Just think without computers people would need write every paper hand know take hours When type paper school go spell check know everything correct If write paper hand huge chance words could spelt wrong Work get finished lot quicker computer time things like hang friends If rush paper people reading tough time trying figure says computer work always going neat You mcan email work friend save computer need change something paper quicker rewrite whole paper Computers effect horrible way helps me get work done faster Computers help people communicate people By computer people talk people In many schools students ask friend question homework Without computer people would way asking questions end getting wrong I like hang friends order make plans When computer go facebook talk wanted kthat night It much easier instead looking number calling Many people world old friends school want stay touch Now computer issue You finally able look place want go Many people world like travel computer look maps see shortest way get place want go see easy way get might car would want go place look eye catching Now I go website find everything I wanted know place If place hours away I would want travel far I would need know place close I live computers really tell lot weather mostly like use computer mostly everything I Comming minds showed thought effects computers us today We make work lot easier talk people get imformation places want visit somebody The computer reliable source lost lot agree
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Dear current I am writing to you on the issue about people spending to much time on computers and not able to spend time with other people like family, friends and others. Also people are getting information off of the computer which is a good thing for important paper that you might have to do or collage essay to get in to that collage. Another reason is that people are truning a bit lazy and not getting to enjoy exerising and getting to get some freish air. To more on I will explain what I mean about being with family and friends. For example let's say that your friends are planing on going to yhis huge beach party that every one is going to. So you tell your friends to pick you up but beofre they come you go on the computer talk to some you know and your friends come to your house to pick you up but you are not for them they pass on by you don't go go to school next day there talking about you miss the party. SO that is any story , it might seen long so, I'm shorting the next part which is the information on computer. Foe example lets say that you doing on paper you . Just need youre more . You find a place you go on find good write come down yet of of the computer finish paper get grade that is good feel happy the end. So that is the only good end of the reason why computres are good. For some reason some people went to stay inside on the computer but other go outside on a good warm day. So what is your reason myspace, facebook other its good if you talk to other people bad if all you worried about if your pics are good, what matters is there you need to be haapy. I think done all I could. So thoses are my reason why computer are good and bad for reasch bad because of nooding to exericis and need to be with friends
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Dear current I writing issue people spending much time computers able spend time people like family friends others Also people getting information computer good thing important paper might collage essay get collage Another reason people truning bit lazy getting enjoy exerising getting get freish air To I explain I mean family friends For example let s say friends planing going yhis huge beach party every one going So tell friends pick beofre come go computer talk know friends come house pick pass nt go go school next day talking miss party SO story might seen long I m shorting next part information computer Foe example lets say paper Just need youre You find place go find good write come yet computer finish paper get grade good feel happy end So good end reason computres good For reason people went stay inside computer go outside good warm day So reason myspace facebook good talk people bad worried pics good matters need haapy I think done I could So thoses reason computer good bad reasch bad nooding exericis need friends
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I believe computers are a benefit to society. Computers help hand eye cordination they make it easy to learn about different places and allow people to talk and video chat. Computers teach hand eye cordination when typing and eventually you get so good you dont ever have to look down at the keyboard. you can search for anything on the internet and if you want to learn about a country you can search it and find out all new things you never knew before. Maybe you want to go on vaction to another country and can't decide which country to go to you can go on the computer and look up tourist attractions in those countrys to decide which are you want to go to. If you are on vaction or live in a different place from you and want to see them you can video chat with them over the computer. Those are the reasons why I think that computers are a benifit to our society.
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I believe computers benefit society Computers help hand eye cordination make easy learn different places allow people talk video chat Computers teach hand eye cordination typing eventually get good dont ever look keyboard search anything internet want learn country search find new things never knew Maybe want go vaction another country ca nt decide country go go computer look tourist attractions countrys decide want go If vaction live different place want see video chat computer Those reasons I think computers benifit society
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Dear editor, Have you ever would to know something so badly that you can't focus on anything else? Have you ever tried to find that information and had an"ah-hah!" moment? What did you use to search for this knowledge? You probably used a computer. All you need to do is type in your request, hit " enter" and viola! Your screen fills with choices of information sites. Computers help so many people with everyday questions. Our country has gotten smarter because of computers. You can converse with friends that have moved across the state, country, or even world. At every click of your mouse there are new things to learn. You can even use the computer for your personal enjoyment. Computers have opened up so many opportunities the world needs to lake. When I was four years old, my best friends at the time moved to florida. I was devastaded. At first, we tried writing letters to each ohter. Then, as we grew older and became busier and busier, or connection with each other halted. As technology and computers have advanced, my friend and I text, e-mail, and instant message each other all the time. It has made our long distance friendship easier and closer. Because of computers, you can communicate with friends you thought were long-lost. You can also meet new people with one of the many sites available. How would you like to talk with someone all the way down in World communication has also opened up many business opportunities. Since the economy is failing, computers will open job spaces, help college students study for their futur career, and hopefully help to improve the lives of many people. Communication is needed for many things to make our world better for generations to came. Instead of going to a noisy arcade, why not play exciting games right in the privacy of your. Any game you can think can probably be found on the From a simple game of solitare to an advanced level of shift, games for any age and difficulty level can be found. New, some people think that all kids are going to do is sit in front of the computer and play games. There are going to be some peole that will refuse to go outside, spend time with their friends or just read outside. There will definitely be some people like that. I can't help it. What we can do is all those that refuse to go outside to do so. I know many people who spend and budget their time wisely and still have a great time. We can also encourage kids to use exercise programs on their computers and video games to improve their health. There are many fun and games that help you to be a better and healthier person while still having fun. The computers we have in our homes right now are equipped with so much information that if you tried to take it all in are you would be overwhelmed. a popular search engine, gives you the power to look up anything you could ever wait to know from the vice president's birthday to the price of eggs in to how wide the is can all be found with the click of a button. this knowledge helps with homework assignments incredibly. Most reference books are out of date and information is inaccurate, but computers are updated so frequently, you have all the facts all the time. I think our country has gotten much smarter because of computers. So whether you want to talk to your long-lost friend in or talk to an expert on osprey in you can find your answer on the computer. While you're at it, play a couple exciting games and learn about the best movies ever released in Have fun and learn lots!
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Dear editor Have ever would know something badly ca nt focus anything else Have ever tried find information ahhah moment What use search knowledge You probably used computer All need type request hit enter viola Your screen fills choices information sites Computers help many people everyday questions Our country gotten smarter computers You converse friends moved across state country even world At every click mouse new things learn You even use computer personal enjoyment Computers opened many opportunities world needs lake When I four years old best friends time moved florida I devastaded At first tried writing letters ohter Then grew older became busier busier connection halted As technology computers advanced friend I text email instant message time It made long distance friendship easier closer Because computers communicate friends thought longlost You also meet new people one many sites available How would like talk someone way World communication also opened many business opportunities Since economy failing computers open job spaces help college students study futur career hopefully help improve lives many people Communication needed many things make world better generations came Instead going noisy arcade play exciting games right privacy Any game think probably found From simple game solitare advanced level shift games age difficulty level found New people think kids going sit front computer play games There going peole refuse go outside spend time friends read outside There definitely people like I ca nt help What refuse go outside I know many people spend budget time wisely still great time We also encourage kids use exercise programs computers video games improve health There many fun games help better healthier person still fun The computers homes right equipped much information tried take would overwhelmed popular search engine gives power look anything could ever wait know vice president s birthday price eggs wide found click button knowledge helps homework assignments incredibly Most reference books date information inaccurate computers updated frequently facts time I think country gotten much smarter computers So whether want talk longlost friend talk expert osprey find answer computer While re play couple exciting games learn best movies ever released Have fun learn lots
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Dear Newspaper people are now using computers. However, everyone is entitled to their own opinion about them. Some people don't like them, and then there's people like me who do like them. Computers can let you communicate faster, you can play all sorts of games for and it provides information. Nine out of ten people love what computers can do for them. Unlike sending and writing letters to people, instant messaging is a much faster and easier way to talk to another person. Sending and receiving letters can take days or weeks, on the other hand, instant messaging takes only a few seconds! Even better, it's Instant messaging is not the only way you can communicate with friends or family, there is also video chat. Video chat is just like talking on the phone but you can also see the person you're talking to. You can be talking on video chat with someone from another country, and guess what? It's also When you make long distant calls, it can be very costly, but video chat won't cost a penny out of your pockets! Not only is a computer good for communication, but you can also play fun and entertaining games! Everyone enjoys playing games, whether you're one or eighty-two. There are websites on the internet and among them there are game sites. Most game sites have virtual games that you can play online for There's one player, two player, and party . This means you could play alone, with a friend, or the whole family. Everyone on in and have a time. Also, computers could be for fun and your used for work. The information. It's like your own personal library at home at a touch of a finger! Either you're doing research on a project, , or just want to be informed, the internet can help you with any subject. All you have to do is search the topic you need whether it's cooking a certain dish, learning about space, trying to spell a word, or anything you can think of, and it'll all be there for you, and once again, for In conclusion, computers are useful for things and these are just a few examples. I hope you think of computers the way I, and millions of other people, do. As you can see, computers impoved the lives of human beings.
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Dear Newspaper people using computers However everyone entitled opinion Some people nt like s people like like Computers let communicate faster play sorts games provides information Nine ten people love computers Unlike sending writing letters people instant messaging much faster easier way talk another person Sending receiving letters take days weeks hand instant messaging takes seconds Even better s Instant messaging way communicate friends family also video chat Video chat like talking phone also see person re talking You talking video chat someone another country guess It s also When make long distant calls costly video chat wo nt cost penny pockets Not computer good communication also play fun entertaining games Everyone enjoys playing games whether re one eightytwo There websites internet among game sites Most game sites virtual games play online There s one player two player party This means could play alone friend whole family Everyone time Also computers could fun used work The information It s like personal library home touch finger Either re research project want informed internet help subject All search topic need whether s cooking certain dish learning space trying spell word anything think ll In conclusion computers useful things examples I hope think computers way I millions people As see computers impoved lives human beings
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Dear I Computers is a new technology that keeps on getting better and better. It can do many things like help you learn something new and see new/old friends. Even some people do online education. Also what a lot of people like about computers is the games. Computers are a great benifit to us and can be useful and fun. The computer can teach us many new and exciting things. There can be a lot to learn too. Somethings you could learn about on the computer are places, people, animals, plants, food, etc. I have once had to find a recipe for carmel apples and to do so I used the computer. Some people use the computer for there education. There are online college and online high school. Its like a new way to be home schooled. Not everyone can go to big so it is easier for them to use an online college. Also, lets say your doing a project and you need information instead of rushing to the library you can use the computer and find it. There are many other things you can do on the computer like visit some friends. I friends, everyone has friends either new friends or old friends. Back then before computers if you wanted to talk to your friend you would have had to send a letter. With computer you can now send a letter faster then before. Its now called an email. Which you just type what you want and click..send it off to your friend. Not all use an email, some use instant messaging. An example of that would be aim or meebo. I moved from to hear and I have friends I don't get to see much. I bet there are many people that have that same issue. Well with the computer you can now see people! chat and see them. For instance is a way to see your friends like that. Its a easy and fun way to stay in touch with friends and even you family. There is still more that a computer can do. Another thing it can do is play video games. They are so much fun to play and what I am talking about is video games. Kids them even teens and adults love. Whenever your bored you can go play online games. Or you can have games you purchesed and play them. They are entertaining and fun too! Even very little kids can play games. Sometimes you can even play with you friends online with a online game. I know when I get bored I go on the computer and play a game called Computers are great and there are pently of more things you can do other than what I was taking about. I hope I have convinced I or showed you how computers are a benifit to us people.
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Dear I Computers new technology keeps getting better better It many things like help learn something new see newold friends Even people online education Also lot people like computers games Computers great benifit us useful fun The computer teach us many new exciting things There lot learn Somethings could learn computer places people animals plants food etc I find recipe carmel apples I used computer Some people use computer education There online college online high school Its like new way home schooled Not everyone go big easier use online college Also lets say project need information instead rushing library use computer find There many things computer like visit friends I friends everyone friends either new friends old friends Back computers wanted talk friend would send letter With computer send letter faster Its called email Which type want clicksend friend Not use email use instant messaging An example would aim meebo I moved hear I friends I nt get see much I bet many people issue Well computer see people chat see For instance way see friends like Its easy fun way stay touch friends even family There still computer Another thing play video games They much fun play I talking video games Kids even teens adults love Whenever bored go play online games Or games purchesed play They entertaining fun Even little kids play games Sometimes even play friends online online game I know I get bored I go computer play game called Computers great pently things I taking I hope I convinced I showed computers benifit us people
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According to economic every hour you spend on the computer, you raise your electricity bill by The average spends hours on the computer everyday. I believe that spending too much time on the computer could be a bad thing. You have economic loss from the electric bill, health loss because you won't be able to exercise as much, and community less because you won't spen as much with your community. Financial loss is something that many people are concerned about. If everybody spent less hour on the computer, they could save off their electric bill. In a survey, out people said they would do anything to save money. So if they spent less time on the computer they would save lots money. In addition to financial loss there is also a health issue. Many people are talking about how americans are becoming obise. Part this is due to spending too much time on the computer. Proffesor says that, "the obisety in is a problem, if people spent less time on the computer and more time exercising, that problem would be solved." out people are obese. If everyone spent less hour on the computer, it would become out Although health is a problem community is a bigger one. People never talk to eachother face to face anymore. They all talk on or Commmunities are spending less time together in real life than on the computer. expert on human behavior, says that when people spend less time on the computer, ther spend more time together. It's a fact that when people spend more time together, they have more fun. So, I would say that spending less time on the computer would be beneficial to our community. It would provides financial, health, and community benefits. These are all important things that we lack if we spend too much time on the commputer.
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According economic every hour spend computer raise electricity bill The average spends hours computer everyday I believe spending much time computer could bad thing You economic loss electric bill health loss wo nt able exercise much community less wo nt spen much community Financial loss something many people concerned If everybody spent less hour computer could save electric bill In survey people said would anything save money So spent less time computer would save lots money In addition financial loss also health issue Many people talking americans becoming obise Part due spending much time computer Proffesor says obisety problem people spent less time computer time exercising problem would solved people obese If everyone spent less hour computer would become Although health problem community bigger one People never talk eachother face face anymore They talk Commmunities spending less time together real life computer expert human behavior says people spend less time computer ther spend time together It s fact people spend time together fun So I would say spending less time computer would beneficial community It would provides financial health community benefits These important things lack spend much time commputer
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I do not believe computers benefit society. Many people spend their life on their computer instead of exercising, going out with friends, or spending time with family. Of will agree they spend at least hours a day on their computer. Which is unneccessary. Why is there so much obesity in the world nowadays? Because of a lack of And who is the #@NUM3 cul? Computers of course. In order for more people to maintain healthy, there needs to be a lot of When someone can sit around all day clicking a mouse or typing keys in, how much are they really getting? Plus, there are many different disorders in the world. inf will agree that with more these sometimes painful disorders could be avoided. Too many people are choosing their computer overexercise and it them many health problems that could've easily been avoided. Secondly, everyone would agree that friends are essential in life. But now people are talknig to their friends online or in computer games instead of going to the them. Online there is much more which often break up friendship. Also, online you new people or make as many new friends. you go and have many more friends, which makes life in general much better. Finally, you wouldn't wants families become would you? Well, this is one of the many effects the members of a family get together which could weaken them as a family. Plus, husbands and wives could not talk very often, often leading in separation or devorce. This could make a child have in decide between a whole family to friends, and family are essential in life, and computers put those in jeopardy. So take a stand and end this reign for good, stop the use of computers before it is too late.
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I believe computers benefit society Many people spend life computer instead exercising going friends spending time family Of agree spend least hours day computer Which unneccessary Why much obesity world nowadays Because lack And NUM cul Computers course In order people maintain healthy needs lot When someone sit around day clicking mouse typing keys much really getting Plus many different disorders world inf agree sometimes painful disorders could avoided Too many people choosing computer overexercise many health problems could ve easily avoided Secondly everyone would agree friends essential life But people talknig friends online computer games instead going Online much often break friendship Also online new people make many new friends go many friends makes life general much better Finally would nt wants families become would Well one many effects members family get together could weaken family Plus husbands wives could talk often often leading separation devorce This could make child decide whole family friends family essential life computers put jeopardy So take stand end reign good stop use computers late
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Dear I have learned that some experts say that people spend too much time on computers when they could be excercising or with friends and family. I, on the other hand, think otherwise. Computers are a great way to learn and communicate with others, here's why: of all, I would like to say how much computers help us in school. Most students use them every day. We can study for tests by looking for websites with lots of information and we can also research topics that we don't understand. For example, if you want to find out how planets form, you can just type it into a search engine and a list of websites will pop up. Another way we use computers in school is when we have to make projects. We can use different tools to set up a slide show while also looking up information on the internet. Lastly, the internet is also a way for teachers to communicate with their students. If the teacher sets up a blog, students can always see what the class is doing, what the homework is, and find cool links that will help them understand certain topics better. Another point I would like to mention is that the experts say that computers deprive us of time with family and friends when the truth is, its the opposite, computers actually take communication to a whole new level. For example, if you wanted to have a chat with an old friend, you could log right on to msn or aim and find out what's new in their lives. A second way to communicate with friend is by a cheap and easy way to contact friends outside the country. Next, you could go a bit more old fashioned and just write an e-mail. It will take longer to get a reply but its still worth the wait in the end. Lastly for parents who kids live far away, video chat is also a good way to communicate because you will be able to see them and hear their voice as well. Lastly, I would like to tell you about just how much we can learn by using a computer. You could just go to a search engine and search any topic in the world and you're bound to finds hundreds of results. It doesn't matter what your interests are because you'll always find great information. The internet also allows you to catch up on recent news such as weather. Next, there are websites that allows you to ask questions and get answers just as fast. You might have to check your sources to make sure they're reliable, but I believe it's still worth it. Lastly, if you are getting ready to go on a trip, you can check flight information with the click of a button. Or maybe you need to find out what the weather will be like, there are many websites for that. There are also websites that can help you learn about the place you'll be staying at as well. Next time, think twice about what you hear about computers because they really aren't all that bad for you. Sometimes it be better to go outside and play but computers do help you learn and communicate with others which are just as important.
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Dear I learned experts say people spend much time computers could excercising friends family I hand think otherwise Computers great way learn communicate others s I would like say much computers help us school Most students use every day We study tests looking websites lots information also research topics nt understand For example want find planets form type search engine list websites pop Another way use computers school make projects We use different tools set slide show also looking information internet Lastly internet also way teachers communicate students If teacher sets blog students always see class homework find cool links help understand certain topics better Another point I would like mention experts say computers deprive us time family friends truth opposite computers actually take communication whole new level For example wanted chat old friend could log right msn aim find s new lives A second way communicate friend cheap easy way contact friends outside country Next could go bit old fashioned write email It take longer get reply still worth wait end Lastly parents kids live far away video chat also good way communicate able see hear voice well Lastly I would like tell much learn using computer You could go search engine search topic world re bound finds hundreds results It nt matter interests ll always find great information The internet also allows catch recent news weather Next websites allows ask questions get answers fast You might check sources make sure re reliable I believe s still worth Lastly getting ready go trip check flight information click button Or maybe need find weather like many websites There also websites help learn place ll staying well Next time think twice hear computers really nt bad Sometimes better go outside play computers help learn communicate others important
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Dear local newspaper, I also agree that computers have a positive effect on people. I agree with this because the computer can teach people things. Also people can talk to each other, and believe / create whatever they want. Computer have a positive effect on people because i believe the computer can teach people a lot. The computer can make things visual to kids and out. I know that when i was younger i used to play math and science games on the computer to help me study for tests. The computer also helps out with adults and their jobs. I don't know what half the adults in the world would do without computers. If you think about all jobs that are happening today also of the computer. Such as e-mail. What would some buisnesses do. without e-mail? also adults like to check websites for the news and to catch upon sports. we can all learn so much from the computer and there are so many people who their jobs on computer. we all learn something everyday and with the computer, we can make it kind. Also the computer benefits online chats e-mail and now even with a cam you can talk face to face with people all over the world I know e-mail helps out so many people who live long distance and e-mail doesn't take long at all. I know thanks to cam and microphones that are buit into computer helped our because now I can talk to all my friends and family and see them I hear them without traveling just simply clicking a button. There are websites now that of taveing to people online and over cam or microphone. Things like this help out so much somepeople just. Think about all those people who have relationships and what not, it off of computers really do help out. Lastly all the people who their imagination off computers, all those people who put that thoughts and feelings into the computer. I know plenty of people who type their feeling because they would never dare say them a loud. Now imagine if computers faded away? That's what i think about what people say such things as the computers not. Everything is useful and everything has at least some sort of positive effect coming out or it. So in my opinion computers do bring out a positive effect to the world.
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Dear local newspaper I also agree computers positive effect people I agree computer teach people things Also people talk believe create whatever want Computer positive effect people believe computer teach people lot The computer make things visual kids I know younger used play math science games computer help study tests The computer also helps adults jobs I nt know half adults world would without computers If think jobs happening today also computer Such email What would buisnesses without email also adults like check websites news catch upon sports learn much computer many people jobs computer learn something everyday computer make kind Also computer benefits online chats email even cam talk face face people world I know email helps many people live long distance email nt take long I know thanks cam microphones buit computer helped I talk friends family see I hear without traveling simply clicking button There websites taveing people online cam microphone Things like help much somepeople Think people relationships computers really help Lastly people imagination computers people put thoughts feelings computer I know plenty people type feeling would never dare say loud Now imagine computers faded away That s think people say things computers Everything useful everything least sort positive effect coming So opinion computers bring positive effect world
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Dear you think computer's are good to use? More and more people use computer, but not everyone agrees that this benefits soceiety I srong disagree. My first reason is because computer's are not safe. My second reason is computer's could get you in a lot of troble. My reason is you never know what could happen on the computer. Read on and see why I disagree. First gonna tell you why I disagree. The reason why I disagree is because computer's are not safe because you could have someone trace where you live at then what? Second - computer's could get you into a lot of trobe such as posting things online or saying mean thing's to people. Next computer's are bad because if someone like's you and you say I dont like you they could post mean and hurt full thing's and then if you friend's see it you will probably get mad. Finally - in concusion thease are all my reason's why I think computer's are not good. You never know what coud happen on a computer there's website's there and some could start a virus on your computer. Also I think computer's are not good because computer's lead to no good so keep your child away from computers. Also be careful what chu
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Dear think computer s good use More people use computer everyone agrees benefits soceiety I srong disagree My first reason computer s safe My second reason computer s could get lot troble My reason never know could happen computer Read see I disagree First gon na tell I disagree The reason I disagree computer s safe could someone trace live Second computer s could get lot trobe posting things online saying mean thing s people Next computer s bad someone like s say I dont like could post mean hurt full thing s friend s see probably get mad Finally concusion thease reason s I think computer s good You never know coud happen computer s website s could start virus computer Also I think computer s good computer s lead good keep child away computers Also careful chu
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I walked into my living room. I saw my brother on the computer talking to his friends on facebook. I thought to my self he's always on the computer never for any school reason. People always says we don't need computers I personaly agree with the statement. In the town everybody mostly has computers. Without a computer to look up for content things, you have to go to the library and check out a bank. Just the other my friend went to the library and checked out a book about the culter. He loved that book he read it in and out, he read it for a book report on different culters. When he handed it into the teacher the when he reached the classroom the teacher looked happy when she gave him back his test he had an He didn't use the internet your computers not mobile like a book if you wanted to learn about something while your traveling in you car you can't plug your computer in and use it unlike a book. Also books are usually funnier to read. Not haveing a computer can conclude to a lot more things like exercising. While my brother is inside all me and my friends are outside playing football, basketball, baseball, soccer, kirkball, and dogeball. We are very thin because what we do almost every Unlike my brother were he is obeast because all he done were before he had the computer he was as thin as us. It is also unhealth to be on the computer all because that can lead to staying update at night, don lead to missing the bus, and also lead to bad grades. Where when we are done with are gaine we whatch a little t.v.. then go to sleep to regain our energy we usually have atleast hrs. of sleep ever which lets us make it through school. We also make the right choses in food to eat to have more energy such as fruit and vegitibales. Were my brother eats all the junk food which helped lead to obesity. Not having a computer can help you spend more time with your family. When we go out to eat my brother is always in a push to get back on to the computer dosen't let us enjoy our food. He usually is much in a rush he picks off of other people's they would be finished faster, when every one wants to enjoy then food. When we want to go out to the movies my brother stays home on the computer. Even if we buy a movie and whatch it at home he won't whatch it with us he's on the computer. It really makes my mom, dad, brothers, and sisters mad that he won't do any thing but play on the computer. Even when are whole family gose out side to play a sport he won't come out and play. It's like he's not part of the familiy anymore. Its like he forgot we were even the reason why I think computes should be in the state of If can lead to and relly bad grades. if you want your kids healthier, better grades, and spend more time with your family then ethier sell your computer or This is happening all over the world.
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I walked living room I saw brother computer talking friends facebook I thought self s always computer never school reason People always says nt need computers I personaly agree statement In town everybody mostly computers Without computer look content things go library check bank Just friend went library checked book culter He loved book read read book report different culters When handed teacher reached classroom teacher looked happy gave back test He nt use internet computers mobile like book wanted learn something traveling car ca nt plug computer use unlike book Also books usually funnier read Not haveing computer conclude lot things like exercising While brother inside friends outside playing football basketball baseball soccer kirkball dogeball We thin almost every Unlike brother obeast done computer thin us It also unhealth computer lead staying update night lead missing bus also lead bad grades Where done gaine whatch little tv go sleep regain energy usually atleast hrs sleep ever lets us make school We also make right choses food eat energy fruit vegitibales Were brother eats junk food helped lead obesity Not computer help spend time family When go eat brother always push get back computer dose nt let us enjoy food He usually much rush picks people s would finished faster every one wants enjoy food When want go movies brother stays home computer Even buy movie whatch home wo nt whatch us s computer It really makes mom dad brothers sisters mad wo nt thing play computer Even whole family gose side play sport wo nt come play It s like s part familiy anymore Its like forgot even reason I think computes state If lead relly bad grades want kids healthier better grades spend time family ethier sell computer This happening world
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Dear Newspaper editor, Computers have been a great advancement in technology, but some people think otherwise. It is a great thing to have some people say but others think it is a hazard to health. I think it is an excellent thing to have. I have come up with reasons to support my opinion. Computers help you keep in touch with distant friends and/or family, they assist you in research, and they even let you do shopping. Firstly, if you have any relatives or friends that live far away computers have websites such as aol or facebook & myspace that you can use to keep in touch with them. Most of them are free to create an account so you don't need to worry about monthly bills for them. So this is a lot better than driving and paying gas for visiting. Computers even have webcams for video chat. With video chat you can see each other & talk at the same time, thats amazing. Secondly, you can search the web for research. If you have a project and you need more information than books give you then just use google or ask.com. You can easily find the details and information you need. All this takes is just a couple minutes, which is alot better than reading for an hour or time. Lastly, if you really want something or need it just shop online. For example if you are a really cool toy that you want to buy for your daughter or son, but its not for sale in stores then buy it off the internet. They even ship your item fast. I like buying off the internet. When I really wanted a bike I saw my mom end up getting it for my birthday. In conclusion, computers are very handy. If you need information, talk to someone, or buy something its got it. I use computers a lot. I think they are very great to have.
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Dear Newspaper editor Computers great advancement technology people think otherwise It great thing people say others think hazard health I think excellent thing I come reasons support opinion Computers help keep touch distant friends andor family assist research even let shopping Firstly relatives friends live far away computers websites aol facebook myspace use keep touch Most free create account nt need worry monthly bills So lot better driving paying gas visiting Computers even webcams video chat With video chat see talk time thats amazing Secondly search web research If project need information books give use google askcom You easily find details information need All takes couple minutes alot better reading hour time Lastly really want something need shop online For example really cool toy want buy daughter son sale stores buy internet They even ship item fast I like buying internet When I really wanted bike I saw mom end getting birthday In conclusion computers handy If need information talk someone buy something got I use computers lot I think great
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Some of you agree that computers don't keep you fit or we spend too much time on them but, they can help you keep in touch with friends and family, meet new people, and save information. Without these important technology devices we wouldn't be able to do any of these things. Most families live all over the country be even in another country, and you don't get to see them very often because of traveling prices, however with the computer they can help us keep in contact with them very easy and quicker than you can say "@LOCATION1." more people make a website that allows us to easily keep up with our distant family. Facebook, of fish, and singles net are all sites that you can find friends or the one that's right for you. This gives you a chance to discover people with the same interest as you. Half of my mom's boyfriends were from these sites. Without these sites there might be less divorces and more happy ending fairy tales. out of people work out home. It's good and you can get things done the. Many people have papers and of important information and it could be lost in a blink of an eye. With technology like this they save with just a click of that mouse. More buisnesses are being held at their households because of this easy going technology. Exercise be important still, with a touch of a button I could talk to my aunt, find the right one for me and save my whole life. New technology like computers can change the world and help things faster.
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Some agree computers nt keep fit spend much time help keep touch friends family meet new people save information Without important technology devices would nt able things Most families live country even another country nt get see often traveling prices however computer help us keep contact easy quicker say LOCATION people make website allows us easily keep distant family Facebook fish singles net sites find friends one s right This gives chance discover people interest Half mom s boyfriends sites Without sites might less divorces happy ending fairy tales people work home It s good get things done Many people papers important information could lost blink eye With technology like save click mouse More buisnesses held households easy going technology Exercise important still touch button I could talk aunt find right one save whole life New technology like computers change world help things faster
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Dear Local Newspaper, opinion on the fact of the computer is that it can be bad for the citizens in in I think that some people are not getting enough exercise and I also think that you can get lazy on the computer is bad too. three reasons for opinion is People are not getting enough exercise, People get lazy and changes while being on the computer an mount of time, They will get addicted to the computer. The first reason is because people are not getting enough exercise I pick that reason because people I know gain a lot of weight and it's kinda of sad because they do nothing but stay on the computer and eat. Another detail is that the computer messes up your eyes by staring at that type of screen. One time I did that and eyes felt weird after getting on the computer. The third detail was that people gets very fragile and weak. I picked that detail because if you get up off the computer and exercise your bones will become weak. The second reason is because people will become lazy and changes for an example people will keep asking you to get stuff and do stuff for them and you would do it because you be a good friend. The second detail is that the person will change, the person will be lazy to go to fun events with you as a freind. The next thing you you wont have a freind anymore. The third detail is that it's like your bestfriend has replaced you for a computer that hurts if a person you know for a long time has replaced you for a computer thats something that will make you depressed and make you wanna commit suicide too me anyways. The third reason is because the person will get addicted to the computer for an example you want to celebrate a birthday and the person says "first I got to beat this level." the person saying that the person is not going to get off the computer. Another detail is that his day will go pass fast and thats like waisting days of life and people who died will do anything to get their life and to waist is not good. The third detail is you will began to hate the person because the person dosen't care about anything but the computer. Those were the reasons to explain opinion on the compter fact in the news paper I read.
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Dear Local Newspaper opinion fact computer bad citizens I think people getting enough exercise I also think get lazy computer bad three reasons opinion People getting enough exercise People get lazy changes computer mount time They get addicted computer The first reason people getting enough exercise I pick reason people I know gain lot weight s kinda sad nothing stay computer eat Another detail computer messes eyes staring type screen One time I eyes felt weird getting computer The third detail people gets fragile weak I picked detail get computer exercise bones become weak The second reason people become lazy changes example people keep asking get stuff stuff would good friend The second detail person change person lazy go fun events freind The next thing wont freind anymore The third detail s like bestfriend replaced computer hurts person know long time replaced computer thats something make depressed make wan na commit suicide anyways The third reason person get addicted computer example want celebrate birthday person says first I got beat level person saying person going get computer Another detail day go pass fast thats like waisting days life people died anything get life waist good The third detail began hate person person dose nt care anything computer Those reasons explain opinion compter fact news paper I read
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Dear Local Newspaper, Spending too much time on the computer is never a good thing. Whether you are doing work or things for pleasure. I strongly believe this because being on the computer too long will mean that you are spending less time excersising, interacting with real family and friends rather than on the internet, and being on computer too long can ruin your vision. Nowadays with all the great advances in technology, peoples are always glued to computer screens. Lets face it, once you go on the computer, it can get pretty addicting with all of the fabulous things you can do and when we get addicted, we don't feel like doing other things like excersising. Studies show that of the kids who use his or her computer for more than hours a day is obese. The cause of this problem is obvious and it is kids being addicted to computers. Since they are so addicted to computers, the do not want to go to the gym or anything. Another example is that in school kids have a choice of what electives the want to take. Many kids would rather choose the computer programming class rather than physical education. This also cuts down on their excersise time. Computers are wonderful things, but when it starts affecting your health and physical fitness, they are enemies. Interacting with others on the computer can be looked at as a positive but it is not since it affects the way you interact in real life. For instance, some people develop a habit from only interacting through the computer that makes them anti-social in real life. Furthermore, some kids can be the most pleasant people to interact with through the computer but then when you used them in real life, they are the quietest people in the world. This happens because they are more comfortable interacting through the computer. Also, they have lost their abilities to interact in real life. Interacting through the computer is great if you have family and friends in other countries but you shouldn't do it so much that you become uncomfortable to interact in real life. Your eyes are one of the most important parts of your body besides the vital parts. Most people do not know this but being on the computer too long puts strain on your eyes which is bad. This strain only lead to unpleasant things. For example, if you we addicted to computers, then there is a large chance you will get glasses someday in your life. A recent poll was taken and over of people who use their computers for more than hours a day have gotten glasses. Another example is that overtime the strain build up and up to the where even with glasses you can hardly see. Imagine a world where your vision is so bad that it is like your eyes are almost closed, that's what happens to people who use their computers too long. Local newspaper, you think that computers are one of the greatest inventions ever, the you are right, however you shouldn't use it too much.
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Dear Local Newspaper Spending much time computer never good thing Whether work things pleasure I strongly believe computer long mean spending less time excersising interacting real family friends rather internet computer long ruin vision Nowadays great advances technology peoples always glued computer screens Lets face go computer get pretty addicting fabulous things get addicted nt feel like things like excersising Studies show kids use computer hours day obese The cause problem obvious kids addicted computers Since addicted computers want go gym anything Another example school kids choice electives want take Many kids would rather choose computer programming class rather physical education This also cuts excersise time Computers wonderful things starts affecting health physical fitness enemies Interacting others computer looked positive since affects way interact real life For instance people develop habit interacting computer makes antisocial real life Furthermore kids pleasant people interact computer used real life quietest people world This happens comfortable interacting computer Also lost abilities interact real life Interacting computer great family friends countries nt much become uncomfortable interact real life Your eyes one important parts body besides vital parts Most people know computer long puts strain eyes bad This strain lead unpleasant things For example addicted computers large chance get glasses someday life A recent poll taken people use computers hours day gotten glasses Another example overtime strain build even glasses hardly see Imagine world vision bad like eyes almost closed s happens people use computers long Local newspaper think computers one greatest inventions ever right however nt use much
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As time goes on, our society becomes more advanced with more and more unnecessary technology, such as the television. What I really want to write about is the computer. Society today has developed a very unhealthy habit, and it is always using the computer. Everyone in the twenty first century uses a computer. The world got so used to having the computer around, that if all the computers in the world were to "break," then most people probably would not know how to Like the basic theory of. Which was that the world was "@CAPS1" to end back in the year two-thousand because everyone thought that the world was going to end. Only because the computer were going to crash and lose all the data that we have ever recorded. Humanity relies way to much on the computer. Since many people rely on the computer to a lot of people "forget" to excersise! Our body needs excersise to live. Excersise one of the most important activities in our daily lives. When you don't excersise, and all you do is eat junk food and drink today, you better bet on your mothers grave that your going to either get diabetes, the fly, heartburn, or any other sickness or disability. You are what you eat is what I say. Life already has enough distractions in it, why add another distraction? All the computer is, is a distraction from keeping you and everyone else healthy. The computer started off as an "innocent" invention. Now a days, people literally worship the computer like it is a People who use the computer all day every day, end becoming very lazy, because all they want to do is sit down and use the computer. In my opinion, everybody should be a part of some physical activity. Whether it is basketball, football, baseball, track, tennis or my favorite thing to do, skateboarding. Everyone should get physically active atleast three times a week for many reason, fact is, that if you excersise three times a week at the least, that your body will function better, you will look better, and you will feel better. excersise can be fun, as long as you make it fun. I hope this essay has really made you think about how you want to live. excersise should be a huge part of your daily routine, now sitting on your buttox all day searching pointless videos on "youtube." The way you want to live your life is up to you. And I hope to that you start living it healthier.
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As time goes society becomes advanced unnecessary technology television What I really want write computer Society today developed unhealthy habit always using computer Everyone twenty first century uses computer The world got used computer around computers world break people probably would know Like basic theory Which world CAPS end back year twothousand everyone thought world going end Only computer going crash lose data ever recorded Humanity relies way much computer Since many people rely computer lot people forget excersise Our body needs excersise live Excersise one important activities daily lives When nt excersise eat junk food drink today better bet mothers grave going either get diabetes fly heartburn sickness disability You eat I say Life already enough distractions add another distraction All computer distraction keeping everyone else healthy The computer started innocent invention Now days people literally worship computer like People use computer day every day end becoming lazy want sit use computer In opinion everybody part physical activity Whether basketball football baseball track tennis favorite thing skateboarding Everyone get physically active atleast three times week many reason fact excersise three times week least body function better look better feel better excersise fun long make fun I hope essay really made think want live excersise huge part daily routine sitting buttox day searching pointless videos youtube The way want live life And I hope start living healthier
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Over one million people on the computer daily. I think being on the computer is unhealthy. So many people abuse themselves staying on to long. You should manage a time schedule so you can still get excercise dont use the computer if needed. People become overweight also. I think people should do something els then use the computer. One main effect that see is many people play the computer too long and are becoming overweight. This can be stopped if we all join together. One person isn't going to change anything. But many of us will. We can be the huge dangerous preditors going for the prey. If there is something els to do besides play the computer do it. If you know your over weight from the computer. You!! Can make a change. If you keep doing other activities you can get skinny again easily. You just gotten make that type of change. A serious issue is people don't wanna take time to make a quick little chart to manage computer useage. The way isee it is if we make a chart then we will know when to get off and twhen to play. This is important because some people take in information better when they have it infront of them. This could make some satisfying results. People use the computer for school work. This is good depending on how long it takes. In my opinon people shouldn't be on the computer or more then hours to hours a day. I think people should get their schoolwork done and get off. I much rather see kids outside playing. The nature and wildlife is much more important. The effects on the computer puts on us can vary. If its not to overweight to not spending time with families, to doing schoolwork. You need to use your time wisely.
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Over one million people computer daily I think computer unhealthy So many people abuse staying long You manage time schedule still get excercise dont use computer needed People become overweight also I think people something els use computer One main effect see many people play computer long becoming overweight This stopped join together One person nt going change anything But many us We huge dangerous preditors going prey If something els besides play computer If know weight computer You Can make change If keep activities get skinny easily You gotten make type change A serious issue people nt wan na take time make quick little chart manage computer useage The way isee make chart know get twhen play This important people take information better infront This could make satisfying results People use computer school work This good depending long takes In opinon people nt computer hours hours day I think people get schoolwork done get I much rather see kids outside playing The nature wildlife much important The effects computer puts us vary If overweight spending time families schoolwork You need use time wisely
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Dear I believe many people spend to much time on computers. It is okay to be on a computer for twenty minutes, to a half an hour. But one hour or more, is too long. People could get sucked in by playing adicting games. Also by online chatting survices like facebook, myspace, instant messaging, and more. Another way, I think someone could spend more time on a computer is working on a report. They might start it lost minute. These are just same of the many ways someone could be sucked into their computers. Have you ever hopped on the computer and played a game? Then you look at the time and its an hour later? Games are very adicting. you can play a game for hours and not notice how much time has passed by. Games are very fun, but they fry your brain. of the human population spends up to an average of two hours on a computer each day. I think, we should eliminate some games off the internent, so people can spend days exercising and hanging out with friends, not playing silly games. Have you ever started a conversation with someone and realized you have been talking for an hour and a half? And that you have homework? of teenages on average spend three hours each day chatting with friends on the internent. Facebook, myspace, instant messaging are all examples of this. It is okay for someone to talk to their friends, but you need to watch the time so you do not get carryied away. I think, we shoud cut down out use on these websites, so children and teenagers can get their homework done. Have you ever been assigned a report and wait till the last minute to get it started? Many teenagers do this. They wait and start their reports the day before their reports are due. They then, are stuck on the internent for hours trying to get it done. Which makes their grade lower then if they were to start it earlyier. of students wait till last minute to do their reports, on average, they spend over four hours on the computer. I think we should make sure that students start their report earlyier so it could bring up their grades. In conclusion i believe people have spent way to much time using computers, due to games, internent chatting, and reports being done last minute. I think if we elimate games off the internent, cut down use on internent chatting, and start reports earlyier, people will start exercising, hanging out with friends and family, get homework done and get higher grades.
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Dear I believe many people spend much time computers It okay computer twenty minutes half hour But one hour long People could get sucked playing adicting games Also online chatting survices like facebook myspace instant messaging Another way I think someone could spend time computer working report They might start lost minute These many ways someone could sucked computers Have ever hopped computer played game Then look time hour later Games adicting play game hours notice much time passed Games fun fry brain human population spends average two hours computer day I think eliminate games internent people spend days exercising hanging friends playing silly games Have ever started conversation someone realized talking hour half And homework teenages average spend three hours day chatting friends internent Facebook myspace instant messaging examples It okay someone talk friends need watch time get carryied away I think shoud cut use websites children teenagers get homework done Have ever assigned report wait till last minute get started Many teenagers They wait start reports day reports due They stuck internent hours trying get done Which makes grade lower start earlyier students wait till last minute reports average spend four hours computer I think make sure students start report earlyier could bring grades In conclusion believe people spent way much time using computers due games internent chatting reports done last minute I think elimate games internent cut use internent chatting start reports earlyier people start exercising hanging friends family get homework done get higher grades
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Do you think being able to look up information on anything or talk to people that are for away is ggod? With a computer these are some things that you will be able to do. Being able to talk to anyone that is far away is good. Some people have family in other countries that they have not seen in a long time and with a computer you can talk to them. the people we have sent to they have a Family here and I have heard of them using computers to talk to them because they miss them. Also if you live in an area that gets bad weather and you can not go anywhere a computer can help pass the time, the people that live in the they can get alot of snow during the winter time and have to stay inside. So if they have a computer they are able to do things play some games or can watch some videos to pass the time. Another thing a computer is good for is that you are able to search for anything. You are able to learn about faraway places even if you have never been there just by looking it up. Some kids do have some trouble with some homework but can use a computer to learn some more about it and hopefully they will now understand how the work is suppose to be done instead of going to the teacher tomorrow and telling them that you did not do it. There are my opinions why a computers have a positive effect on people. By being able to search anything, help children with homework, and pass the time if you have nothing to do.
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Do think able look information anything talk people away ggod With computer things able Being able talk anyone far away good Some people family countries seen long time computer talk people sent Family I heard using computers talk miss Also live area gets bad weather go anywhere computer help pass time people live get alot snow winter time stay inside So computer able things play games watch videos pass time Another thing computer good able search anything You able learn faraway places even never looking Some kids trouble homework use computer learn hopefully understand work suppose done instead going teacher tomorrow telling There opinions computers positive effect people By able search anything help children homework pass time nothing
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Dear minute of the day - millions of computer users around the world hop onto their laptops or desktops, but is it always a good thing? The question has been raised if people spending alot of time on computers is a bad thing. Computers are a bad thing because people spend too much time on them and lose quility time with friends and family. The dangers of online interaction, and the risk of having your information stolen. Countless people around the world face these problems everyday and computer usage should be lessened. Whether teens, kids, or adults are gaming, on websites or typing essays people around the world spend way too much time on their computers. For example, of the of people who have computers with online access of them spend hours a day on them. This is about billion hours of computer usage around the world. Children and adults alike have lost face time or interraction with other human beings face to face. Before computers kids played outside running and playing around. While in present day less than of all children get at least one hour of time outside. Computers are not a bad thing, but its is when they are over used they become hurtful to kids health. These facts have not just contributed, but they are almost the cause of obesity in the world. Computer usage needs to be cut down to size if we are to solve these problems. The additon of online chat to computers has not only increased computer usage but doubled it. The invention of and instant messaging was never meant to be a bad thing, but it sure did turn into one. Online chat allows people to send hatefull and vulgar messages to their enemys without showing their face. In some cases some teens were harrased online so bad they committed suicide. Another bad thing about or is that dangerous criminals can hide behind their computers and lure children or teens to a meeting place where they can be kidnapped. out of users of online chat was lured by a criminal to a " meeting place" and was kidnapped and never seen against last year. Most of these victims do not return or are found. Although the invention of chat online was meant as quick easy communication it became a horror crime in most cases. Millions even billions of dollars have been stolen by internet hackers. These hackers break the security codes and buy things online using other peoples money. Four out five people admit to having multiple sites with personal information on them and out of those four people have had at least one account hacked. This problem continues to grow and hackers feed off of weak sites. If this problem continues to grow the whole world will be bankrupt. These hackers know who you are, your family, your personal information, and where you live. Internet usage needs to be cut down to sites. If we do not then usage will increase, there will be no chat problems and peoples money will get stolen.
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Dear minute day millions computer users around world hop onto laptops desktops always good thing The question raised people spending alot time computers bad thing Computers bad thing people spend much time lose quility time friends family The dangers online interaction risk information stolen Countless people around world face problems everyday computer usage lessened Whether teens kids adults gaming websites typing essays people around world spend way much time computers For example people computers online access spend hours day This billion hours computer usage around world Children adults alike lost face time interraction human beings face face Before computers kids played outside running playing around While present day less children get least one hour time outside Computers bad thing used become hurtful kids health These facts contributed almost cause obesity world Computer usage needs cut size solve problems The additon online chat computers increased computer usage doubled The invention instant messaging never meant bad thing sure turn one Online chat allows people send hatefull vulgar messages enemys without showing face In cases teens harrased online bad committed suicide Another bad thing dangerous criminals hide behind computers lure children teens meeting place kidnapped users online chat lured criminal meeting place kidnapped never seen last year Most victims return found Although invention chat online meant quick easy communication became horror crime cases Millions even billions dollars stolen internet hackers These hackers break security codes buy things online using peoples money Four five people admit multiple sites personal information four people least one account hacked This problem continues grow hackers feed weak sites If problem continues grow whole world bankrupt These hackers know family personal information live Internet usage needs cut sites If usage increase chat problems peoples money get stolen
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Dear editor, do you do all day? The answer to that would probably be sit down in front a computer all day. My friends say that this is very unhealthy, research as proven it and my mom has had experience with the computers. This just isn't healthy for our envierment and people. my friends say that computers are a waste time. Most people who interact on the computer all day don't have a stable diet or even a good excersice ruinte. They say that all the junk kids and grown-ups acumulate in their daily life is unhealthy and will never go away unless they get up. They also say that without excersice our country will be filled with over weight people. Dr. has done extensive research and has proven that computers are bad for you. has gone all over the country to talk to people, and he specifically stresses that more people should get out and enjoy the nature but, no their sitting in front a computer which is not good for them. He's taught people that the time if you get out and have fresh air your life will be so much better. My mom has had experience with computers and asures me that when she was younger you couldn't just sit there and not get out. She says that it's important to interact with your family and friends so you keep a stable relationship. Talking to your family will keep them intact with going on in your life and hanging out with your friends will help with having more a life without your household. She says any kid who does sit in front a computer all day should be disappointed themsleves. Editor you've done a wonderful job since you've taken the job! So, I feel that if you stress the point in your next newspaper about not having computers all the time you should always excersice like my friends say, the research as taught to enjoy your nature and my mother says to interact with your family and friends. I'm sure your next article will be a wonderful dream to people stating facts.
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Dear editor day The answer would probably sit front computer day My friends say unhealthy research proven mom experience computers This nt healthy envierment people friends say computers waste time Most people interact computer day nt stable diet even good excersice ruinte They say junk kids grownups acumulate daily life unhealthy never go away unless get They also say without excersice country filled weight people Dr done extensive research proven computers bad gone country talk people specifically stresses people get enjoy nature sitting front computer good He s taught people time get fresh air life much better My mom experience computers asures younger could nt sit get She says s important interact family friends keep stable relationship Talking family keep intact going life hanging friends help life without household She says kid sit front computer day disappointed themsleves Editor ve done wonderful job since ve taken job So I feel stress point next newspaper computers time always excersice like friends say research taught enjoy nature mother says interact family friends I m sure next article wonderful dream people stating facts
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Dear computers. The subject of so many debates over the years, from lawyers against judges to parents against children. Could it be to much of a good thing? Are computers the cause of increased awkwardness in today's society. Certainly it can't be to good that your entire life is documented on a place where anyone can go. And then there is the content of what you are viewing. I can't wait to get to that paragraph. One of the top picked-through subjects in the world, are people really less interested in exercise than they were in the studies show that in the out of people were overweight. That number has risen to out of as of Amazing! And some of these people might be safer staying inside. If you've played a video game where the player can lose health, you'll know what happens when the bar runs out. You restart. After playing want to try that gravity-defying, head-turning stunt. And let me tell you, there is no restarting after that. Did you know that is recording everything you do online? If say, you are a budding guitarist and are looking around for a new gibson, you'll start getting all these ads for online stores, Because sells your info to businesses. And you give them permission by clicking that continue with install button. So spam email comes. But something even worse is on the way. Your bank account number. Thats right, I went there. If a virus get onto your computers, your many could vanish. So be responsible. This brings us to our last subject. The touchy one. It used to be that you had to buy a magazine or book to witness the exploitation of young women. Now, it is just the click of a button away. And that is bad enough. Young boys are snagged early, their futures now controlled by this disease. But add to that the imense risk of a virus attack, and you're in a heap of trouble. So I'm not saying computers are terrible, just that they they could be to much of a good thing. Sometimes they can be a good way to relieve stress, by taking it out on a hapless alien. Just use the technology at your hands responsibly.
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Dear computers The subject many debates years lawyers judges parents children Could much good thing Are computers cause increased awkwardness today s society Certainly ca nt good entire life documented place anyone go And content viewing I ca nt wait get paragraph One top pickedthrough subjects world people really less interested exercise studies show people overweight That number risen Amazing And people might safer staying inside If ve played video game player lose health ll know happens bar runs You restart After playing want try gravitydefying headturning stunt And let tell restarting Did know recording everything online If say budding guitarist looking around new gibson ll start getting ads online stores Because sells info businesses And give permission clicking continue install button So spam email comes But something even worse way Your bank account number Thats right I went If virus get onto computers many could vanish So responsible This brings us last subject The touchy one It used buy magazine book witness exploitation young women Now click button away And bad enough Young boys snagged early futures controlled disease But add imense risk virus attack re heap trouble So I m saying computers terrible could much good thing Sometimes good way relieve stress taking hapless alien Just use technology hands responsibly
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Dear Newspaper, I strongly agree that computers have effected people in a very positive way. Since more and more people have been using computers, the technology gets higher and people can acess much more things. Computers are good because they are convinent, and provide entertainment. Have you ever wanted to know what the capital of is, or what the weather is in To find out these answers, all you have to do is look them up on the computer! The computer is so convient, that whenever you have a question about anything, you can use the computer! Take my cousing courthey, for example, everyday, her teacher asigns definitions for homework. So, she just looks up the definitions on the computer instead of taking the time to find them in the dictionary. However, isn't the only person who thinks the computer is convinent. When surveyed, of people voted that when they have a question about something the computer is the most convinent item to use. Professor from says, "@CAPS1, since more people are learning how to use the computer, it is becoming more convinent to everyone." In conclusion, many people rely on the computer for information, and you wouldn't want to take that away from them, would you? It's a and your bored, what do you do? How about go on the computer! The computer is a great source of entertainment. Whether its listening to music, playing games, or talking with friends, you will always have fun on the computer. For example, my neighbor, comes home after school by herself. She is usually extremely bored, so, she goes on the computer and plays games, and talk with friends. can also talk to her cousins, and that live in But, is not the only one who talks to relatives on the internet. When surveyed, of people agreed that they talk to relatives from other places on the computer. Dr. from says, "The computer is the main source of entertainment for most teens and adults." you wouldn't want to take away our main source of enteratinment, would you? After school, many teens and adults go rushing to the computers for all different reasons. But, in conclusion, computers have positively affected all people with their amazing convinence, and great sources of entertainment.
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Dear Newspaper I strongly agree computers effected people positive way Since people using computers technology gets higher people acess much things Computers good convinent provide entertainment Have ever wanted know capital weather To find answers look computer The computer convient whenever question anything use computer Take cousing courthey example everyday teacher asigns definitions homework So looks definitions computer instead taking time find dictionary However nt person thinks computer convinent When surveyed people voted question something computer convinent item use Professor says CAPS since people learning use computer becoming convinent everyone In conclusion many people rely computer information would nt want take away would It s bored How go computer The computer great source entertainment Whether listening music playing games talking friends always fun computer For example neighbor comes home school She usually extremely bored goes computer plays games talk friends also talk cousins live But one talks relatives internet When surveyed people agreed talk relatives places computer Dr says The computer main source entertainment teens adults would nt want take away main source enteratinment would After school many teens adults go rushing computers different reasons But conclusion computers positively affected people amazing convinence great sources entertainment
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To whom concern, the joy of just clicking a mouse and all of the sudden you are talking with a friend you haven't seen in years. Computers make this a reality for us, but that isn't the only benefit they offer. Computers help society by providing us with search engines and educational resources allowing us to connect easily with friends and family, helping us communicate importances and plan things and a lot more. First, computers have become a vital part of education and research a like. Students at schools, elementary through college, are able to connect with much more information than without computers. You can even earn a college degree on the computer! That's right online universities are beginning to form. This is great for moms who want to get a degree but have to stay home with their children. Also, computer technology has been applied to research in science and hospitals. New discoveries have advanced with the help of computers that will actually help people's lives! Computers are used to search for a cure to cancer disasters such as earthquakes, and even help see a disease someone has before its symptoms even begin to occur! Computers have helped save lives and benefit lives in ways people never could have imagined sixty years ago. Secondly, computers allow people to connect and reconnect with other people around the I recently got a facebook account, and within a few days I had found and to three friends of mine that had moved away a distant cousin who had moved to that i haven't seen since we was little and even my great grandmother! The possibilities are endless. Email has also been very beneficial to society as well, as helps people communicate and plan events, which brings me to my next topic. Lastly, computers help the communicate with one another. the internet is filled with websites made to benefit our one being If not for computers this program wouldn't have been as succesful and beneficial as has become. Also, is an amazing website that combines education with the aspect of quizzes you on different levels of general knowledge and for each correct answer, donates grains of When i am bored i sometimes go on, and so for i have filled over thirty bowls of while learning at the same time! To conlude, computers have proven to benefit the and all in not only people but the environment, too. Computers help advance research, help people reconnect with one another, and help the communicate, Who knows that computers will help us accomplish next?
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To concern joy clicking mouse sudden talking friend nt seen years Computers make reality us nt benefit offer Computers help society providing us search engines educational resources allowing us connect easily friends family helping us communicate importances plan things lot First computers become vital part education research like Students schools elementary college able connect much information without computers You even earn college degree computer That s right online universities beginning form This great moms want get degree stay home children Also computer technology applied research science hospitals New discoveries advanced help computers actually help people s lives Computers used search cure cancer disasters earthquakes even help see disease someone symptoms even begin occur Computers helped save lives benefit lives ways people never could imagined sixty years ago Secondly computers allow people connect reconnect people around I recently got facebook account within days I found three friends mine moved away distant cousin moved nt seen since little even great grandmother The possibilities endless Email also beneficial society well helps people communicate plan events brings next topic Lastly computers help communicate one another internet filled websites made benefit one If computers program would nt succesful beneficial become Also amazing website combines education aspect quizzes different levels general knowledge correct answer donates grains When bored sometimes go filled thirty bowls learning time To conlude computers proven benefit people environment Computers help advance research help people reconnect one another help communicate Who knows computers help us accomplish next
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Dear, I would like to tell you something. Throughout the ages we have been evolving, from caveman discovering fire to discovering how to fly. With evoloution we discovered technology and in recent years we have been making new technologies rapidly. Some say that some technology like computers are bad, I think that computers are good because they give you the ability to learn about for away places. let you talk to people online and teach hand-eye coordination. Computers let you go places that you ordinarilly wouldn't be able to go to. If you were doing a research projects on and you didn't have any books what would you use? That's right, a computer the internet would have the facts you needed, so you could grade. While on the internet you could talk to friends and family who live for away. The computer goes over long distances and connects both computers so you can bend writing almost instantly. Without computers you wouldn't be able to get in touch with these people. Using computers is good for the body as well as the mind. It helps you with your hand-eye coordination. When you see things on the screen and go to chick it you are actually helping out your body. Some people say that when you are on the computer you aren't interacting with friends and family, but they are wrong. I myself have talked with my sister in a different room while using the computer so the computer lets you interact with friends and family too! I love computers, don't you?
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Dear I would like tell something Throughout ages evolving caveman discovering fire discovering fly With evoloution discovered technology recent years making new technologies rapidly Some say technology like computers bad I think computers good give ability learn away places let talk people online teach handeye coordination Computers let go places ordinarilly would nt able go If research projects nt books would use That s right computer internet would facts needed could grade While internet could talk friends family live away The computer goes long distances connects computers bend writing almost instantly Without computers would nt able get touch people Using computers good body well mind It helps handeye coordination When see things screen go chick actually helping body Some people say computer nt interacting friends family wrong I talked sister different room using computer computer lets interact friends family I love computers nt
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Dear yes, I do believe that for too many people are 'addicted' to the computer, and spread more than enough time on the computer everyday! Not only teenagers but the children and youth have fall into trap of the computer. As I grew up in my younger years I hated the computer all I wanted to do was go outside and play. As I became older I used the computer way more often than I did before I now believe the computer takes time away from family time to get the sitting down to read a good book and hanging out with friends. Insteed of all those fun interacting activities people decide to go on facebook, myspace, twitter, youtube, addicting games, and whatever else they could find. I do not agree with that being sluck to the computer like is to chese. No! If there was our thing in the world that would keep parents and children together, it isn't the computer. Computers distracts kids and teenagers from doing other things in life, also it doesn't follow families to be a family. Before computers were made all people bad was their family. Coming home from school saying "@CAPS3 dad, home from school. What t go play see catch"? Instead of that kids come home from school to see if replied to your facebook message. Computers also cutt off interacting time that families always and to have. instead of talking to myspace, why don't you grab and plays family board game! Or go out to on restaurant, talk about your next vacation and what you'd be interseted doing go to the same field have a game, or to your local base ball field and play kickball, instead of sitting there mesmerized by the computer screen! Okay, I understand that some people just not like to go out and play or engage in physical exercise and that is totally understandable that is still no excuse for sitting at the computer and a book. Reading is yet fun but it is also , with out being in school! As you read your brain to inner works, you or your so you can show off to you friends out family on words that you . It is shown that of strints who read . Not the who sit at the computer all day writing reply .
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Dear yes I believe many people addicted computer spread enough time computer everyday Not teenagers children youth fall trap computer As I grew younger years I hated computer I wanted go outside play As I became older I used computer way often I I believe computer takes time away family time get sitting read good book hanging friends Insteed fun interacting activities people decide go facebook myspace twitter youtube addicting games whatever else could find I agree sluck computer like chese No If thing world would keep parents children together nt computer Computers distracts kids teenagers things life also nt follow families family Before computers made people bad family Coming home school saying CAPS dad home school What go play see catch Instead kids come home school see replied facebook message Computers also cutt interacting time families always instead talking myspace nt grab plays family board game Or go restaurant talk next vacation d interseted go field game local base ball field play kickball instead sitting mesmerized computer screen Okay I understand people like go play engage physical exercise totally understandable still excuse sitting computer book Reading yet fun also school As read brain inner works show friends family words It shown strints read Not sit computer day writing reply
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Dear sun, I find that computers are very useful. They help people in many ways. They let people learn about what is going on in the world, teach hand eye cordination, and let you meet people online. First, people can learn about what is going on around the world. I can find out what is happening where I live by looking up your newspaper. Other people can find out about places they might go. They can find out what the weather is like so they know how to puck when going places. Also, if one of your employees is going camping they can look up a good place to camp and they can look up what kind of dangers there is when you camp so they can avoid them, because if they get sick they can't work. As you can see computers are important. Next, computers teach hand eye ncordination. Many jobs need you to be able to work well with your hands. Lets say one of your printers break down so you call someone to come fix it. They must be able to work well with their hands to fix it. Now lets say the wiring in your lights get messed up. So you call an electrician has to be good with his hands to be able to work with small wires. Both of these people are good with their hands and they could of become that way by using computers. As you can see, computers are important in today's life. Lastly, computers let you meet new people online. Lets say you are all alone after a hard day of making newpapers. You could go online and meet new people in chat rooms and online games. Now lets say that one of your employess just broke up with his girlfriend and he is sad and lonely, so she isn't working as well. He could go on an online dating site and meet the perfect girl. Now when he comes to work he is happier and making more papers and if he makes more papers you make more money. As you can see computers are very important. In conclusion, computers are wonderful machines. They can let people learn about what is going on in the world, teach people good hand eye cordination and let people neet new people online.
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Dear sun I find computers useful They help people many ways They let people learn going world teach hand eye cordination let meet people online First people learn going around world I find happening I live looking newspaper Other people find places might go They find weather like know puck going places Also one employees going camping look good place camp look kind dangers camp avoid get sick ca nt work As see computers important Next computers teach hand eye ncordination Many jobs need able work well hands Lets say one printers break call someone come fix They must able work well hands fix Now lets say wiring lights get messed So call electrician good hands able work small wires Both people good hands could become way using computers As see computers important today s life Lastly computers let meet new people online Lets say alone hard day making newpapers You could go online meet new people chat rooms online games Now lets say one employess broke girlfriend sad lonely nt working well He could go online dating site meet perfect girl Now comes work happier making papers makes papers make money As see computers important In conclusion computers wonderful machines They let people learn going world teach people good hand eye cordination let people neet new people online
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Dear Local Newspaper, I've heard about your problems with computers, and would like to state my opinion. I think that computers teach you more than they, disable you. For example , say you have a research project and you need to look someone up, you go on the computer and you got him. Also, say you want to go far for vacation; like You can go on the internet and find out how they live there. My last reason is that now you can be on the computer and still interact with family and friends. First, I stated the first one because a couple of weeks ago I had a social studies research project. But ig I couldn't use a computer then I would of had to use a book; instead of going on the computer and just looking it up. Another exsample could be like you need pictures to make the project look better . So you can go on google and find a picture to go with you project. But thats not all the internet can help you with. Like say you been planning a trip to for your honeymoon but never been there or know anything about it, but your honeymoon is a month away. You can go on the computer and learn about it. Also now they have online classes and you can learn their language before you go. But to wrap it up I have on more exsample. Lastly, chatting sosme people think because you on the computer all day you can't interact with others, but you can. for exsample, like they have a website called You can chat with all your friends at once. Also they have video chatting, so you can be looking right at the person while your talking, all that's all I can think of. I hope that my lette and probably many others show you about computers actually do.
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Dear Local Newspaper I ve heard problems computers would like state opinion I think computers teach disable For example say research project need look someone go computer got Also say want go far vacation like You go internet find live My last reason computer still interact family friends First I stated first one couple weeks ago I social studies research project But ig I could nt use computer I would use book instead going computer looking Another exsample could like need pictures make project look better So go google find picture go project But thats internet help Like say planning trip honeymoon never know anything honeymoon month away You go computer learn Also online classes learn language go But wrap I exsample Lastly chatting sosme people think computer day ca nt interact others exsample like website called You chat friends Also video chatting looking right person talking s I think I hope lette probably many others show computers actually
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Dear Local Newspaper, I think Computers have a positive effect on people because it helps their education,you can talk to family and friends, and you can get better hand-eye corrdination. Read on to find interesting details about computers and their positive effect. first reason that computers are positive is that it can help you with your education. I mean come on, how many college students do you see without a laptop? You see none. Am I right? You always need a computer because you have to type eveything, and do research for big essay papers. People think "we'll, there's always the library?" your wrong. local library closes at pm. I'm sure college students are yo way later than doing homework. Just imagine, late at night, pm, no library, no computer, and a giant essay due tomorrow. What are you going do? you better get yourself a laptop before the next giant essay comes! even if you did go to the library, who wants to log all of your books down stairs, and drive to the library and then finally get there and realize you forgot something. Thats just a waste of time! Next, computers are positve because you can talk to your friends and family. For one it saves a load of money because email doesn't cost anything! I have a email and I don't pay a cent for it! With a cellphone you have to buy the phone and pay the bill every month. Did you know the average american spends atleast #@NUM2 each month on cellphones? It's out what if you never see a certain family member? I know cousin just had a baby and her dad lives in So, she got a webcam, and now everyday they talk, and her dad gets to see the baby. They think the they always talk about everything day, and other things. After, I have just said all these wonderful things, you look someone in the eyes and then than that computer don't help people. For final reason, computers are positive because you could gain hand-eye corrdination, brother, loves, and I mean obssesive love, loves video games. He's addicted to them! He can't stop playing them, and I dont mind at all. I dont mind because now he can chew gum, jotdown ideas for his essay, think about whats he's gonna have for lunch, and play a video game. How's that for multi tasking! you will be healthier. Think about it, better reflexes, better hand-eye, better and happier doctor! I mean seriously, if you play computer games you can have fun while knowing your going to make your doctor happy. And who do sent want to move your doctor happy! For conclusion, computers have a positive effecton you because they help your education, talk to your friends and family, and have better hand-eye corrdination. Tell me right now that computer don't help people. I know, you can't because computers help us in so many ways.
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Dear Local Newspaper I think Computers positive effect people helps education talk family friends get better handeye corrdination Read find interesting details computers positive effect first reason computers positive help education I mean come many college students see without laptop You see none Am I right You always need computer type eveything research big essay papers People think ll s always library wrong local library closes pm I m sure college students yo way later homework Just imagine late night pm library computer giant essay due tomorrow What going better get laptop next giant essay comes even go library wants log books stairs drive library finally get realize forgot something Thats waste time Next computers positve talk friends family For one saves load money email nt cost anything I email I nt pay cent With cellphone buy phone pay bill every month Did know average american spends atleast NUM month cellphones It s never see certain family member I know cousin baby dad lives So got webcam everyday talk dad gets see baby They think always talk everything day things After I said wonderful things look someone eyes computer nt help people For final reason computers positive could gain handeye corrdination brother loves I mean obssesive love loves video games He s addicted He ca nt stop playing I dont mind I dont mind chew gum jotdown ideas essay think whats s gon na lunch play video game How s multi tasking healthier Think better reflexes better handeye better happier doctor I mean seriously play computer games fun knowing going make doctor happy And sent want move doctor happy For conclusion computers positive effecton help education talk friends family better handeye corrdination Tell right computer nt help people I know ca nt computers help us many ways
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Dear I think that computer have bad effects on people. The first reason why I think this is because people in the world are becoming less healthy kids and adults should stay more. Kids and parents should only be aloud on the computer then go outside. Computers are not so bad because is helpful for looking up information but is harmful u abuse kids play games on the computers and damages there eyes and makes them lazy. Also going outside there are lots of things to do instead of talking with your friend on the computer you should call your friend ask him to come over play games outside. this continues lots of kids will be fit and The second reason why computers are bad is because of what people past on the computer about other people. Do not ever put something put something bad up on the computer because sometimes they are deep secrets and million of people will see and that person might be teased and laughed at. And really the computer could do horrible things you and this person are freinds could break you guys forever. The final reason why the computer is not good is because people are dieing from overweight there is several teams that are on comercials saying that kids and adults up and be wernt for theese heros much much more kids would die faster, when kids die they look at whats in side of them and scientest found big fat chunks around the kids heart. Well thats my theory I hope all of you listen to my advice up shut the computer of and
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Dear I think computer bad effects people The first reason I think people world becoming less healthy kids adults stay Kids parents aloud computer go outside Computers bad helpful looking information harmful u abuse kids play games computers damages eyes makes lazy Also going outside lots things instead talking friend computer call friend ask come play games outside continues lots kids fit The second reason computers bad people past computer people Do ever put something put something bad computer sometimes deep secrets million people see person might teased laughed And really computer could horrible things person freinds could break guys forever The final reason computer good people dieing overweight several teams comercials saying kids adults wernt theese heros much much kids would die faster kids die look whats side scientest found big fat chunks around kids heart Well thats theory I hope listen advice shut computer
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Dear local Newspaper, would you like to be warmly greted by the zingbobway tabe say hi to a far away family memorr again or maybe quicker your relfexes? Well you can! Computers are a use ful way complexing an these tasks. Imagine your family member or friend fighting in the war miles away. Wouldn't you want to see them at least once? Computers allow you to interact with them with webcams. You can see them and talk with them. Not only can you talk with family, you can talk to friends. You can make new friends from around the world without leaving your house. You can have a new best friend every day! Not only can you talk to people on computers, they give you better hand eye coordination, and they quicken your raflexes. Dr. says "@CAPS2 have shown that people who type or use a computer have better reflexes than those who don't." a computer around is easier for school also I remember one time, I had to write a page paper for and it was due the next day. I wrote the beginning it and my hand started to cramp up. I had in finnish my paper soon so I ran to my computer and typed it in half the time I would've spent writing it. I also got a good hand-eye coordination . Not only do you type on it, you learn on it. out computers are used for learning about place and people. Say you just won free tickets to go anywhere in the world with a celebrity at your choosing! With a computer you could research anywhere you want and make that trip the best days your life. And even if you don't like actually going to other places, you can virtually go there on a computer. With computers you can see the the tropical reef fish or the at the. Computers hold the world at your finger lips. So as you can see computers have a positive effect on people. Computers allow people to interact with cites, increase your hand-eye coordination, and allow you to have the world at your fingertips. So stop reading and use a computer!
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Dear local Newspaper would like warmly greted zingbobway tabe say hi far away family memorr maybe quicker relfexes Well Computers use ful way complexing tasks Imagine family member friend fighting war miles away Would nt want see least Computers allow interact webcams You see talk Not talk family talk friends You make new friends around world without leaving house You new best friend every day Not talk people computers give better hand eye coordination quicken raflexes Dr says CAPS shown people type use computer better reflexes nt computer around easier school also I remember one time I write page paper due next day I wrote beginning hand started cramp I finnish paper soon I ran computer typed half time I would ve spent writing I also got good handeye coordination Not type learn computers used learning place people Say free tickets go anywhere world celebrity choosing With computer could research anywhere want make trip best days life And even nt like actually going places virtually go computer With computers see tropical reef fish Computers hold world finger lips So see computers positive effect people Computers allow people interact cites increase handeye coordination allow world fingertips So stop reading use computer
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Dear Advances in technology and computers is a bad thing. When the computer company's such as and make cool updates to their computer systems people do not want to shut their computer off, which is not a good thing. As a child did you spend all of your time indoors and online? Computers take time away from spending time outside, or exercising. And they affect very crucial family time. Computer advances are bad for our country and town. Now-a -days, kids would much rather spend time on their computers than outside. This can have a very negative affect. First of all, it is important that students see and feel nature, and last time I checked they can not do that on a computer. Children need to see animals, smell the sweet scent of flowers and feel the breeze brush against their cheeks. A second reason that going outside is important is for the sun. Even though the sun does have harmful days, it is still important for health that everyone spends some time in the sun. The computer takes times away from nature which is unhealthy and dangerous. Computer also take precious time away from exercise. If people spend all their time on computers, then do they exercise. Everyone is supposed to get at least minutes of activity daily, but no one ever spends that much time working out. Also, obesity numbers have increased greatly since the invention of personal computer and the internet. Obesity can make life difficult for people and can also lead to disease. Life with computers has lead to less people exercising and obesity rates increasing. Another issue computers cause is that people are spending less time with their families. Family is one of the most important things in the world and everyone should spend a few hours daily with their family. Plus with encouregement from their family, many students excel in school and sports, which gives them graet self-confidence. Computers take time away from something that should be thw most important to everyone, family. Many people are affected negatively by computers. The technology takes very important time away from children and adults. It takes time away from the outdoors, exercising, and family. Yes, computers make life easier, but they have a much more negative affect than they do a positive one.
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Dear Advances technology computers bad thing When computer company s make cool updates computer systems people want shut computer good thing As child spend time indoors online Computers take time away spending time outside exercising And affect crucial family time Computer advances bad country town Nowa days kids would much rather spend time computers outside This negative affect First important students see feel nature last time I checked computer Children need see animals smell sweet scent flowers feel breeze brush cheeks A second reason going outside important sun Even though sun harmful days still important health everyone spends time sun The computer takes times away nature unhealthy dangerous Computer also take precious time away exercise If people spend time computers exercise Everyone supposed get least minutes activity daily one ever spends much time working Also obesity numbers increased greatly since invention personal computer internet Obesity make life difficult people also lead disease Life computers lead less people exercising obesity rates increasing Another issue computers cause people spending less time families Family one important things world everyone spend hours daily family Plus encouregement family many students excel school sports gives graet selfconfidence Computers take time away something thw important everyone family Many people affected negatively computers The technology takes important time away children adults It takes time away outdoors exercising family Yes computers make life easier much negative affect positive one
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Dear local Newspaper, I believe that computers are bad news. Most kids come home from school and go on aim. So they can talk to their friends. of are obiese. I feel it is better to play outside with your friends than sitting in a chair playing on the computer. If kids go outside and play with their friends they will have more fun. Also kids will learn how to interact with each other by playing outside together. The kids will see more nature and be bale to learn more about animals. When kids are on computers they are sitting their doing nothing. ALso some kids post pictures of themselves on things like facebook that are not appropriate and cna get them in lots of trouble. They also say things that they wouldn't normally say to a persons face. The computer is simply a way for kids to get in trouble. Whne your outside palying baseball, football or tag with your friends you are getting exercise and your having lots of fun. If you are getting lots of exercise then you are most likely not going to be obies. Some say the computer is good hand eye coordination but catching a football or hitting is bettre. Also some say computers can tell you about far away places but that what school is for. I am saying that exercise and playing with your friends is better than talking in your friends or video chatting with them, are to many over weight people in and the computer is not heloing the cause.
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Dear local Newspaper I believe computers bad news Most kids come home school go aim So talk friends obiese I feel better play outside friends sitting chair playing computer If kids go outside play friends fun Also kids learn interact playing outside together The kids see nature bale learn animals When kids computers sitting nothing ALso kids post pictures things like facebook appropriate cna get lots trouble They also say things would nt normally say persons face The computer simply way kids get trouble Whne outside palying baseball football tag friends getting exercise lots fun If getting lots exercise likely going obies Some say computer good hand eye coordination catching football hitting bettre Also say computers tell far away places school I saying exercise playing friends better talking friends video chatting many weight people computer heloing cause
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Dear press, I wonder if you know that of people out of surveyed by the university out agreed that using lap tops and computers had a very good benefit on their life? I agree that computers benefit society and every day lifes. With a computer, you can interact with people all around the world, they can help with school work, and make every day life eaiser. Five years ago I had to move from to We had to leave all of our family and friends behind. However, with this great tecnology, we could e-mail them. Instant message them, and video chat with them, instead on having to face out money to make long distance calls. Theres many people out their like me. Who have friends and family far away, weather its family in different countries, old school mates and camp friends using a computer is a great way to keep in touch with one another. Using a computer can also more life easier. Moms taking care of their kids might not be able to go to & with one kid not wanting to get off his video games, the other watching their favorite show. Thankfully that man and go online, pick the food that she and the quantity and she can get someone to deliver it. That mother also might not be able to get out and go shopping. So with her computer she can go to her favorite stores website and pick the clothes she wants. And then when comes, a computer can be great not to worry about not having enough time to go and. A computers just have life that much simpiler!. Statistics how or people help online instant or going in. "Computers are great, I can homework and know that if they to write planner than they we to and out. If, they can and more of information on the computer from then they could find in their local library. You can find almost anything with search engins on your computer! Some people do disagree with the use of computers, or some also believe that some people abuse the benefit of computers and spend to much time on it and not exercising and enjoying nature enough. This is true, not as long as you stay reasonable with usage or your computer, it benefits you in many ways. Like I said, its great for keeping connections between people, simpling everyday life, and research for school.
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Dear press I wonder know people surveyed university agreed using lap tops computers good benefit life I agree computers benefit society every day lifes With computer interact people around world help school work make every day life eaiser Five years ago I move We leave family friends behind However great tecnology could email Instant message video chat instead face money make long distance calls Theres many people like Who friends family far away weather family different countries old school mates camp friends using computer great way keep touch one another Using computer also life easier Moms taking care kids might able go one kid wanting get video games watching favorite show Thankfully man go online pick food quantity get someone deliver That mother also might able get go shopping So computer go favorite stores website pick clothes wants And comes computer great worry enough time go A computers life much simpiler Statistics people help online instant going Computers great I homework know write planner If information computer could find local library You find almost anything search engins computer Some people disagree use computers also believe people abuse benefit computers spend much time exercising enjoying nature enough This true long stay reasonable usage computer benefits many ways Like I said great keeping connections people simpling everyday life research school
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Dear local newspaper, I think that computers effect people in a positive way. Computers increases our knowlage, lets us communicate with our friends and family, teaches us hand-eye coordination, and lets us see our news faster. Computers are enjoyable, great pieces of technology. Even though sitting down looking at your computer screen is not very interactive, computers increase our knowlage. Computers have all these websites that are full of great information. You can look up anything you would like to learn about and find exactly what you want. Going to the library for a book on your report would consume extra time. Instead you can look up the facts you need online. Computers also let us communicate with family and friends. Calling someone or sending a letter costs money, but sending on email to someone does not. Many people have family and friends that live far away from them. Through computers they can talk to them as long as they want at no expense. You can also see each other through a webcam. Which you can attach to your computer if it has not have in one allready. Another reason why computers are useful is because they help with hand-eye coordination. Computers require you to type, which is a great skill. While working out an essay by hand is tiring and boring you can type up the essay on you computer. Typing takes to get good at but is very helpful. Finally Computers help us get our news foster. When major things happen, such as the earthquake in it was all over the internet before the news. In conclusion computers are very useful and help us increase our knowlage, communicate with people, help us with hand-eye coordination, and lets us see our news faster. But most importantly computers are fun!
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Dear local newspaper I think computers effect people positive way Computers increases knowlage lets us communicate friends family teaches us handeye coordination lets us see news faster Computers enjoyable great pieces technology Even though sitting looking computer screen interactive computers increase knowlage Computers websites full great information You look anything would like learn find exactly want Going library book report would consume extra time Instead look facts need online Computers also let us communicate family friends Calling someone sending letter costs money sending email someone Many people family friends live far away Through computers talk long want expense You also see webcam Which attach computer one allready Another reason computers useful help handeye coordination Computers require type great skill While working essay hand tiring boring type essay computer Typing takes get good helpful Finally Computers help us get news foster When major things happen earthquake internet news In conclusion computers useful help us increase knowlage communicate people help us handeye coordination lets us see news faster But importantly computers fun
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Dear Newspaper, I believe that advances in technology have many positive effects, such as computers. Computers are great for people of all ages. Computers teach hand-eye coordination and allow people to learn information from all over the world. Lastly, computers allow people to communicate through internet. Advances in technology improve society and the over all way of life around the globe. Advances in technology are amazing. Computers show these advances greatly. With the simple use of a computer, one can learn great hand-eye coordination skills. Typing skills are a great example. Typing skills are needed by almost everyone in the world. Without computers, no one would have these skills. A young child can go on the computer, play a game, and learn basic typing and hand-eye coordination skills to jump start their coordination skills for the rest of their life. Advances in technology are great. These advances in computers can also allow people to learn worldwide information. Many times in school, students are asked to do a report on a different country. It would be very hard to do that report without a computer. The student would need to go through all different books to find specific information needed. With the internet, that project can get done a lot faster just by typing whatever you need to know. How about that family vacation you've always wanted to go on? Need an idea of where to go? Use the internet! All you need to do is type in vacation spots and click enter. Instantly, you will have hundreds of choices right in front of you. This makes life a lot simpler. Do you remember the last time your mom or dad went on a business trip and you couldn't talk to the because they were busy? there is a fix to this with internet. You can communicate with them through or both. Just hookup your to the computer and instantly say good or hows it going. If you have a friend that you can instant message them. It is so easy that it will seem like you are standing right next to them on a matter of seconds. In conclusion, computers and advances in technology are great and can benefit everyone in the world computers tech hand-eye coordination, allow one to learn information from around the world, and allow communication through internet happen instantly. Writers and editors of the newspaper, please agree with me on this topic. Advances in technology can only add posotive effects to the way of life. Support advances in today's technology to help improve life for those of.
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Dear Newspaper I believe advances technology many positive effects computers Computers great people ages Computers teach handeye coordination allow people learn information world Lastly computers allow people communicate internet Advances technology improve society way life around globe Advances technology amazing Computers show advances greatly With simple use computer one learn great handeye coordination skills Typing skills great example Typing skills needed almost everyone world Without computers one would skills A young child go computer play game learn basic typing handeye coordination skills jump start coordination skills rest life Advances technology great These advances computers also allow people learn worldwide information Many times school students asked report different country It would hard report without computer The student would need go different books find specific information needed With internet project get done lot faster typing whatever need know How family vacation ve always wanted go Need idea go Use internet All need type vacation spots click enter Instantly hundreds choices right front This makes life lot simpler Do remember last time mom dad went business trip could nt talk busy fix internet You communicate Just hookup computer instantly say good hows going If friend instant message It easy seem like standing right next matter seconds In conclusion computers advances technology great benefit everyone world computers tech handeye coordination allow one learn information around world allow communication internet happen instantly Writers editors newspaper please agree topic Advances technology add posotive effects way life Support advances today s technology help improve life
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Dear I believe computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination. Computers give people the ability to learn about far away places and people. They even allow people to talk online. Computers are a very usefull piece of machinery. Computers teach hand-eye coordination. When your in school, you need to type lots of prompts, labs, and vocab. Computers help us do that. Typing fast and correctly takes practice. Typing without looking at the keyboard is hand-eye coordination. This will help us later on in life also. Whether it's typing term papers in high school or your application essay for college, you will need the help of computers. Computers give people the ability to learn about far away places. years ago I look a trip to for the first time. I didn't know a lot about the history of so I sat down at my desk and turned on my computer. Suddenly, it was like I was in I read about the delicious food and rich culture. I took a virtual tour of the and the great I heard music and learned some In just hour I visited right from my very own house! Computers can take you on a magical journey to a far away country. Computers allow people to talk to online with other people. This is a very good thing. I have cousins who live in and because of the hour time difference, its not always easy to talk on the phone so we use the computer. My family will send e-mails back and forth with them. Sometimes we will even video chat! networking sights accesible by computer such as or allow us to talk to people who we don't regularly see. On you can even talk to your favorite stars or musicians. Computers let us keep in touch with others. Computers have a positive effect on people. Some experts say that people spend too much time on the computer and while that be true to some people, its not true to everyone. We still exersise, and spend time outside. We still interact with family and friends but know we are also able to do so on the computer. More and more people using computer is a good thing.
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Dear I believe computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination Computers give people ability learn far away places people They even allow people talk online Computers usefull piece machinery Computers teach handeye coordination When school need type lots prompts labs vocab Computers help us Typing fast correctly takes practice Typing without looking keyboard handeye coordination This help us later life also Whether s typing term papers high school application essay college need help computers Computers give people ability learn far away places years ago I look trip first time I nt know lot history I sat desk turned computer Suddenly like I I read delicious food rich culture I took virtual tour great I heard music learned In hour I visited right house Computers take magical journey far away country Computers allow people talk online people This good thing I cousins live hour time difference always easy talk phone use computer My family send emails back forth Sometimes even video chat networking sights accesible computer allow us talk people nt regularly see On even talk favorite stars musicians Computers let us keep touch others Computers positive effect people Some experts say people spend much time computer true people true everyone We still exersise spend time outside We still interact family friends know also able computer More people using computer good thing
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Dear, Local Newspaper writer I believe that computers benefit our society because we could connect to people more faster and easier. And computers good for our society because of we don't have to spend to much time on the phone. That why I think computers benefits our society. "@CAPS1 computers a good thing or bad thing?" Computers are a good thing because you could email your family or friends any time you want too. But sometimes we don't have to be on the computer so long. That why I think computers are a good thing. Without computers it will be different because you have to talk to people on the phone or text message. In my opinion I am really thankful that we have computers. And on computers you could go on everything like and even work on the computer. That without computers it will be different. I think people are not spending to much time on the computer", because a lot of people on the computer to do office work. Computer make things a lot easier for us! But sometimes people take advantage over it. That why I feel people are not spending too much time on the computer. Last but not least that why I know computers benefit's our society.
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Dear Local Newspaper writer I believe computers benefit society could connect people faster easier And computers good society nt spend much time phone That I think computers benefits society CAPS computers good thing bad thing Computers good thing could email family friends time want But sometimes nt computer long That I think computers good thing Without computers different talk people phone text message In opinion I really thankful computers And computers could go everything like even work computer That without computers different I think people spending much time computer lot people computer office work Computer make things lot easier us But sometimes people take advantage That I feel people spending much time computer Last least I know computers benefit s society
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Dear I heard that you wanted some opinions on whether or not computers have a positive effect on people. I know that a lot of people are against these positive opinions but I think computers have a positive effect on people. The main thing that computers are great for is research. Without computers, kids an adults won't be provided with the necissary tools for knowledge. Studies show that out of students have computers at home and that person without computer access gets about of a lower grade because of poor research ability on projects. Another reason why computers are good because it can bring the world together. Facbook, and twitter users can chat with people accross the street, accross the country and even accross the ocean! People in the can play games and chat with people in and even My last reason is that computers are great for buiesnessess. A lot of people have websites for their jobs that can get them well known and for people to know what their buisness is about. Take for example your newspaper. Without computers, you wouldn't be able to get your research or even type or print your newspaper. Your website wouldn't be able to persuade people to read your newspaper. Even though some people might abuse their computer privlages by staying on too long instead of exercising or interacting withpeople but thats them. It's only of people with computers that do it! And so what, its their time and they want to spend it on the computer. What can you do to change? Nothing. And with that, I conclude this letter by letting you know that computers are great for people! They give us research, they help us with school and buiesnessess and they allow us to talk to people around the world.
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Dear I heard wanted opinions whether computers positive effect people I know lot people positive opinions I think computers positive effect people The main thing computers great research Without computers kids adults wo nt provided necissary tools knowledge Studies show students computers home person without computer access gets lower grade poor research ability projects Another reason computers good bring world together Facbook twitter users chat people accross street accross country even accross ocean People play games chat people even My last reason computers great buiesnessess A lot people websites jobs get well known people know buisness Take example newspaper Without computers would nt able get research even type print newspaper Your website would nt able persuade people read newspaper Even though people might abuse computer privlages staying long instead exercising interacting withpeople thats It s people computers And time want spend computer What change Nothing And I conclude letter letting know computers great people They give us research help us school buiesnessess allow us talk people around world
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Dear Newspaper I am writing a letter to you saying that I think its a bad idea for you to make kids stay off of computers because it does teach kids something, it good to do homework on and you can relax when your on it. Well computers teaches kids a lof of things like hand-eye coordination. If kids want to work with computers when there older they can learn new to work with it. There is also websites that can show you how to move yor hands when using a computer. Well when kids come from school always have homework, you need to do it on the comptuer so if you couldn't use computers it would be hard for kids to do there homework. So when they go to school and the class tells the teacher they dont have computers what are they going to do. So when I get out of school and I had a very long day. I go home do my homework and go on the computer and listen to music to relax. If you guy were to take computers away every one would be grumpy all the time. That is why I think you should keep computers and not exercise as much. We get enuf of that in school carry all these heveay books around.
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Dear Newspaper I writing letter saying I think bad idea make kids stay computers teach kids something good homework relax Well computers teaches kids lof things like handeye coordination If kids want work computers older learn new work There also websites show move yor hands using computer Well kids come school always homework need comptuer could nt use computers would hard kids homework So go school class tells teacher dont computers going So I get school I long day I go home homework go computer listen music relax If guy take computers away every one would grumpy time That I think keep computers exercise much We get enuf school carry heveay books around
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Dear news, Computers are a great machine to use. People can research, learn about any topic or subject and let people talk to friends online I think that computers have a good effect on people. Computers are one of the great inventions we have. They are very helpul in our everyday life. When people need to write a paper for school or do a project you can research what you need if you need to know some thing about, a topic that you don't know about, you can look up questions you have about it on the internet. If your writing a paper and need an answer its all on the internet. Suppose you want to go on a family vacation to california you can plan your whole trip right on your computer, you can book a flight, get a hotel room and even see what there is to do you can see the whole world right from your computer. If you want to learn another language you can learn an entire language on your computer. Also if your to busy to go to collage or want to take another class there are even schools online. The computer is a great way to learn about new things. Finally you can talk to friends online websites like facebook and myspace are great ways to keep in touch with your friends. naother positive way is you can instant message friends and family without having to wait so long for a response back. If you want your friends you can just message them. I think that computers have a positive effect on people. They are helpul in many ways such as people can do research, learn about new things and talk to friends I hope, you see my point at view they are samething everyone should have.
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Dear news Computers great machine use People research learn topic subject let people talk friends online I think computers good effect people Computers one great inventions They helpul everyday life When people need write paper school project research need need know thing topic nt know look questions internet If writing paper need answer internet Suppose want go family vacation california plan whole trip right computer book flight get hotel room even see see whole world right computer If want learn another language learn entire language computer Also busy go collage want take another class even schools online The computer great way learn new things Finally talk friends online websites like facebook myspace great ways keep touch friends naother positive way instant message friends family without wait long response back If want friends message I think computers positive effect people They helpul many ways people research learn new things talk friends I hope see point view samething everyone
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I walked into my living room. I saw my mom avidly reading the screen of our computer with pictures of caller masters and logos clastering the web page as well. I thought that the internet had just my mom better than I could that we should go on vacation. More and more people log on to a computer everyday, and although the people willing to change and believe in new advances in technology out on a strong argument of why computers are and there are still some that can only see the negative. I strongly support computers and believe they have a lot of potential. Computers make the work even smaler. They allow to talk to people thousands at miles away man instant. Also, you can reconnect with friends that you can't see anymore. For example, I used to go to an awesome camp and I made same of my best friends there. But they down, and instead of playing sports and having fun, I layed down on my basement to stand up because my sweat glued to the. Then one day, I heard the familiar that my computer's spokes when I receive an instant I the energy to crawl over to the screen, to find out one of my closest friends from wanted to take a bike ride down to the wall, and hang out with some other people we knew. to say I happily respond, "@CAPS2 I definetly want to go," by a long scores of points. been for computers and Instant would all have drifted apart and never talked again. anadem exaggerated argument people use against computer is that everybody that uses them doesn't exercise. I frequent my computer almost every hour, so I made a system to ensure I got exercise. Every time I walk the room my computer is hooked, I grab the pull up right and do I only thought of this system months ago and I have already my own muscles, and I can do pull as at a time but when I started I struggled to do If not for the amazing of computers that me back, I would still do exercise, only to after about a week. Computers give easy to the internet, which has so much information it is. Unless it is a closely grounded secret. You could probably find whatever you want on the internet. Ive gone countless time to find for an essay with the limited textbooks have just isnt what you need. My country project year couldn't have had more than pleces of information from a book! It also makes a great teacher of about any subject as well. As a matter of fact, my language arts teacher told us a story about how ever the a ball that has never done any sort of water sports before, spent weeks watching videos on youtube about how to waterski, and on his first dearly doing tricks. These are only a few of the reasons I think computers are great. They keep friend ships close, give you a reason to exercise, and can teach you anything! I say we spread the good word about computers and let every one know how awesome they are.
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I walked living room I saw mom avidly reading screen computer pictures caller masters logos clastering web page well I thought internet mom better I could go vacation More people log computer everyday although people willing change believe new advances technology strong argument computers still see negative I strongly support computers believe lot potential Computers make work even smaler They allow talk people thousands miles away man instant Also reconnect friends ca nt see anymore For example I used go awesome camp I made best friends But instead playing sports fun I layed basement stand sweat glued Then one day I heard familiar computer s spokes I receive instant I energy crawl screen find one closest friends wanted take bike ride wall hang people knew say I happily respond CAPS I definetly want go long scores points computers Instant would drifted apart never talked anadem exaggerated argument people use computer everybody uses nt exercise I frequent computer almost every hour I made system ensure I got exercise Every time I walk room computer hooked I grab pull right I thought system months ago I already muscles I pull time I started I struggled If amazing computers back I would still exercise week Computers give easy internet much information Unless closely grounded secret You could probably find whatever want internet Ive gone countless time find essay limited textbooks isnt need My country project year could nt pleces information book It also makes great teacher subject well As matter fact language arts teacher told us story ever ball never done sort water sports spent weeks watching videos youtube waterski first dearly tricks These reasons I think computers great They keep friend ships close give reason exercise teach anything I say spread good word computers let every one know awesome
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Dear computer co., computers have a negative effect. Why would you go outside if you could play life - like games on your I lthink that the games on th should be removed so people could enjoy all of the great things in life. If people weren't on all day, people would pay attention to the way they're destroying nature.
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Dear computer co computers negative effect Why would go outside could play life like games I lthink games th removed people could enjoy great things life If people nt day people would pay attention way re destroying nature
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Dear The Your resources, your entertainment, even your communication with people might be fading. you know a large portion of people think this is harming our society. Well I will say I think they don't understand these benifit that computers bring us. Computer act like teachers teaching us without us even knowing it. Hand-eye coordination is a perfect example. Plus, we use computers to learn about places we might want to travel to, or have a conversation with frinds or family living ways away tromus. Computers is an extrodarny piece or technology. First, I like to say everything that you do physically uses hand-eye coordination. Making dinner, riding a bike, driving a car etc. And unfortiunitly not people are the best at hand-eye coordination. One of friends, had horriable hand eye coordination. So for his birthday I decided an getting him a computer. It's been month since his he had his computer and he was trying to hit a baseball at his sons party, he moneged to hit the ball out of where he used to hit it or out of is a termendous increase in only month! Just something simple a computer improved friends hand-eye coordination a termendous amount. Secondly, the computer can help you learn about far away places the or Do you really want to travel up to the icey cold, and piercing winds of the just to learn about it? For some I'd say like that but what if you cant travel up the due to money or flying conditions. I want to be able to study about polar bears and the glaciers without needing to worry. A statics from the of states "@PERCENT2 of people wpould love to experience the thrill and excitement of the lights. But out of those only said they'd actually travel to to see them". So you can see that of those people wouldn't go whether it be due to money or the cold. Thery said thats why they love the computer. They can experience the lights without needing to travel into the bitter cold.Lastly, that better thing to do on the computer than with family you've never met before or don't get to see them. The editor for the Local states "@CAPS7 parents live over miles away. I rarly get to tell to them now because I can't afford to travel that distance ofter. So I use computer, parents and I now communicate more than we used to. I love the computer it helps keep me close to loved ones." you can tell, thanks to the computer we talk more to his parents than he used to! In conclusion, the computer is a gracous device that is extremely benifital to people. The computer teaches us hand-eye coordination, lets us learn about places we other wise would never learn about, and to have conversations with friends or family that we generally dont get to see often. Now you go out and make anyone that says computers are a horrible inventions you tell them exactly why computers are so important!
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Dear The Your resources entertainment even communication people might fading know large portion people think harming society Well I say I think nt understand benifit computers bring us Computer act like teachers teaching us without us even knowing Handeye coordination perfect example Plus use computers learn places might want travel conversation frinds family living ways away tromus Computers extrodarny piece technology First I like say everything physically uses handeye coordination Making dinner riding bike driving car etc And unfortiunitly people best handeye coordination One friends horriable hand eye coordination So birthday I decided getting computer It s month since computer trying hit baseball sons party moneged hit ball used hit termendous increase month Just something simple computer improved friends handeye coordination termendous amount Secondly computer help learn far away places Do really want travel icey cold piercing winds learn For I d say like cant travel due money flying conditions I want able study polar bears glaciers without needing worry A statics states PERCENT people wpould love experience thrill excitement lights But said d actually travel see So see people would nt go whether due money cold Thery said thats love computer They experience lights without needing travel bitter coldLastly better thing computer family ve never met nt get see The editor Local states CAPS parents live miles away I rarly get tell I ca nt afford travel distance ofter So I use computer parents I communicate used I love computer helps keep close loved ones tell thanks computer talk parents used In conclusion computer gracous device extremely benifital people The computer teaches us handeye coordination lets us learn places wise would never learn conversations friends family generally dont get see often Now go make anyone says computers horrible inventions tell exactly computers important
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Dear newspaper, I think that using your computer too much is bad. Some people spend way too much time on the internet. Many people are too focused on the internet and they lack on their normal activities. Also, the computer is bad for people because they will be on the internet all night and get no sleep. This leaves them exausted for the day ahead. Alot of people spend too much time on the internet. Since they are always on the internet, they don't spend alot of time with their families. This causes the internet addicted person to lose relationships with their family and friends. Not exercizing is a result of this addiction also. For example, my stepbrother is always on the internet now. He doesn't talk to anyone because he is so preoccupied with his game. Another problem people encounter with the internet is being too focused. When you are too focused on the internet, you forget there is a whole world out there that needs your help, most people won't do their choires, or make a meal for their family. These people also have no time for their outdoor activities they used to enjoy. Internet addicts usually don't get any sleep. They have no time to study at night because they spend all their extra time on the internet. During the day, they will be very tired in school or work and the internet will be the one to blame. Last month my mom made a facebook. She is constantly on it. When she is on she ignores everything around her. My mom goes to school and she tells me how she never has time to study because she always on the internet. She also stopped reading the bible in her spare time to go on the internet. The internet is a bad thing to get hooked on. You lose relationships with your friends and family because you never get off the computer. People usually don't exercize or do thier chores. This is not a very good addiction to get into.
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Dear newspaper I think using computer much bad Some people spend way much time internet Many people focused internet lack normal activities Also computer bad people internet night get sleep This leaves exausted day ahead Alot people spend much time internet Since always internet nt spend alot time families This causes internet addicted person lose relationships family friends Not exercizing result addiction also For example stepbrother always internet He nt talk anyone preoccupied game Another problem people encounter internet focused When focused internet forget whole world needs help people wo nt choires make meal family These people also time outdoor activities used enjoy Internet addicts usually nt get sleep They time study night spend extra time internet During day tired school work internet one blame Last month mom made facebook She constantly When ignores everything around My mom goes school tells never time study always internet She also stopped reading bible spare time go internet The internet bad thing get hooked You lose relationships friends family never get computer People usually nt exercize thier chores This good addiction get
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Dear The effect that computers have on people is not a positive one. I think people spend way too much time on computers, some information on computers is inaccurate, there are still telephones and cellphones that people can use fir communication. A majority of peoples' time is spent on the computer. Whether its playing games, checking or even working, peoples' valuable time is getting used up. This time could be used by doing more important things such as being with friends and family, being outside with nature or exercising. Being on the computer insteads of exercising has had a huge effect on people. Some people are overweight because they eat and then do not exercise after. My sister works on the all day and she says or ladies at her work are un healthy because all they do is go on the the computer and eat granola bars, wich are usually healthy. If others spent at least a half an hour being outside to some fresh air instead of using a computer most of them would feel a lot better. My doctor always used to tell me and my brother, "@CAPS3 out and play an hour a day!" This is true, and I strongly encourage people to go outside and do an activity as opposed to playing on the computer. The computer is used a lot for researching. Some of the information on the computer is very helpful, but you can never really know what information is inaccurate. At least when you research using a book or encyclopedia, you can trust those sources. What if you had to do a report and you could only use the internet, how would you be able to tell if the information is trustworthy? Sure, computers also teach hand-eye coordination by playing video games, but when in real life, will you need to know how to shoot a dragon or dodge candy that's falling from the sky? This is just an example of unneeded information and skills that keeps people wanting to go back on the computer. Another thing you can do on the computer is communicte with others. When computers weren't invented or even that advanced, people were more than happy to give one another a call. Now with computers, people instant message, or even skype; a webcam website. What even happened to cellphones, you can take.
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Dear The effect computers people positive one I think people spend way much time computers information computers inaccurate still telephones cellphones people use fir communication A majority peoples time spent computer Whether playing games checking even working peoples valuable time getting used This time could used important things friends family outside nature exercising Being computer insteads exercising huge effect people Some people overweight eat exercise My sister works day says ladies work un healthy go computer eat granola bars wich usually healthy If others spent least half hour outside fresh air instead using computer would feel lot better My doctor always used tell brother CAPS play hour day This true I strongly encourage people go outside activity opposed playing computer The computer used lot researching Some information computer helpful never really know information inaccurate At least research using book encyclopedia trust sources What report could use internet would able tell information trustworthy Sure computers also teach handeye coordination playing video games real life need know shoot dragon dodge candy s falling sky This example unneeded information skills keeps people wanting go back computer Another thing computer communicte others When computers nt invented even advanced people happy give one another call Now computers people instant message even skype webcam website What even happened cellphones take
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Dear reader, people have been debating whether or not computers are actually benefiting society, especially now that the majority of now own one of these helpful machines. Computers help people with everyday tasks and are no doubt doing more good than harm. Imagine how impossible it would be for most people to do their jobs without them life would become much harder for the people living on this planet. Think of the successful schools in our country, and then think of which of those schools don't have computers. Computers are the easiest way to look up information, something important when children are learning. Whenever someone needs to know something, they just google it. This comes in handy when researching for that huge project due next week. People have never been so knowledgable. Computers are only important for school, but also in the work place. They serve almost the same environments. Now that computers are so common, people can conveniently type up a paper and submit it to their boss or teacher. It saves time and effort with a more professional result. Computers also serve the important purpose of communication using email or instant messaging, one could communicate with someone on the other side of the world without that enormous phonebill.Some see this as dangerous because you could be chatting with a complete stranger. However, it is also opening your eyes to new cultures. Now it's possible to learn about life in first hand. If computers were no more, it would be extremely hard for a regular person to interact with someone from another country. It's almost like isolation from the world. There are many out there who take great interest in learning other languages. Better ways exist than sitting in a classroom listening to someone talk. As a person on this planet, do you really want to be kept separate from others just because they don't live close enough? A main concern about computers is that no one will want to read books and anything else. However, a recent study shows that after computers came out, more people have begun to read. This proves that just because there is now something fun and new, it doesn't mean everything else is trash. People will still continue to do things they always did, just with something new on their list. In addition, it is the option of everyone w/ other or not they want to spent their time on the computer. If someone doesn't like the idea, they've no right to take it away from someone else computers were created to help the human race not control it. If a person doesn't want one, they don't have to get one, everything is up to them, and that is the way it should remain. The next time you see a computer, don't think of it as some sort of obsession that's keeping people from doing other thinkgs they could be. But as a universal device that allows them to broaden their horizons and learn things they probably wouldn't go to the library to look for comuputers aren't holding anyone back, but pushing everyone forward, whether at work, school, or even the house, they benefit everyone, everywhere.
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Dear reader people debating whether computers actually benefiting society especially majority one helpful machines Computers help people everyday tasks doubt good harm Imagine impossible would people jobs without life would become much harder people living planet Think successful schools country think schools nt computers Computers easiest way look information something important children learning Whenever someone needs know something google This comes handy researching huge project due next week People never knowledgable Computers important school also work place They serve almost environments Now computers common people conveniently type paper submit boss teacher It saves time effort professional result Computers also serve important purpose communication using email instant messaging one could communicate someone side world without enormous phonebillSome see dangerous could chatting complete stranger However also opening eyes new cultures Now s possible learn life first hand If computers would extremely hard regular person interact someone another country It s almost like isolation world There many take great interest learning languages Better ways exist sitting classroom listening someone talk As person planet really want kept separate others nt live close enough A main concern computers one want read books anything else However recent study shows computers came people begun read This proves something fun new nt mean everything else trash People still continue things always something new list In addition option everyone w want spent time computer If someone nt like idea ve right take away someone else computers created help human race control If person nt want one nt get one everything way remain The next time see computer nt think sort obsession s keeping people thinkgs could But universal device allows broaden horizons learn things probably would nt go library look comuputers nt holding anyone back pushing everyone forward whether work school even house benefit everyone everywhere
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Have you ever thought about all the amazing things that computers have done for us? Now, we can learn about anything we want, talk with people on the other side of the world, and even advance in other areas of technology. Computers have, without a doubt, had a positive effect on people. Just imagine this...one second you can be in the blazing deserts of the next in a losh, steamy, jungle thriving with animals...All without leaving your room! Using computers, people can learn about new places and things whenever they want. The millions of resources on the internet make it possible to learn about t other places and times. Although this information be in a local library. Going on the computer is MUCH easier. Who want to go through the trouble of loaning books from the library, when the internet is there for your use any time? No registration to get a library card. No late fees and no waiting lists. It is quite clear that using your computer to do research is a very valuable thing. out of ten people said that they would rather email a person than talk on the phone with them. Now, with computers, people can instant message, or email anyone, anywhere in the world. Making a call from to can be very expensive but with email, I can talk to my friend, free of charge. I remember when she moved to It was sad, but we promised to stay in touch. With e-mail and instant messaging, it was easy to talk, and exchange the latest news! Having the ability to communicate with soemone easily is an unbeliveable privalige, that would be none existant without computers to help us. Lastly, computers have helped people make advances in othe areas of technology. Where would we be in science and medicine without computers? These machines have helped scientists to do experiments. With a simulated expiriment they can be positive that no other variables will affect your results. Now, experiments can be extremely acurate. Computers have helped advance medicine as well. They have been the key to unlocking all sorts of cures for dangerous diseases. Who knows, maybe in years therew ill be a cure for cancer. All of these amazing accomplishments have been positivly effected by computers. ALthough some people think that computers have a negative impact on our day-to-day life, I disagree. People have learning, talking, and advances in technology with one click of a mouse. Computers have effected people positivley in many ways, so, click away! Computers have none of that.
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Have ever thought amazing things computers done us Now learn anything want talk people side world even advance areas technology Computers without doubt positive effect people Just imagine one second blazing deserts next losh steamy jungle thriving animals All without leaving room Using computers people learn new places things whenever want The millions resources internet make possible learn places times Although information local library Going computer MUCH easier Who want go trouble loaning books library internet use time No registration get library card No late fees waiting lists It quite clear using computer research valuable thing ten people said would rather email person talk phone Now computers people instant message email anyone anywhere world Making call expensive email I talk friend free charge I remember moved It sad promised stay touch With email instant messaging easy talk exchange latest news Having ability communicate soemone easily unbeliveable privalige would none existant without computers help us Lastly computers helped people make advances othe areas technology Where would science medicine without computers These machines helped scientists experiments With simulated expiriment positive variables affect results Now experiments extremely acurate Computers helped advance medicine well They key unlocking sorts cures dangerous diseases Who knows maybe years therew ill cure cancer All amazing accomplishments positivly effected computers ALthough people think computers negative impact daytoday life I disagree People learning talking advances technology one click mouse Computers effected people positivley many ways click away Computers none
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Dear the world forty years ago. People would need to travel to visit a library to research, every document, doctors notes, and building plan would have to be written by hand or on an old typewriter. Life would have been much more difficult. Today, computers allow us to communicate with one another, access the millions of websites on the internet and help with school work. Almost everyday, my mon and dad receive friend requests from long lost school friends as well as relatives and current friends. Today's computers allow the world to talk to one another and know what is going on. My dad always says " makes the world go round." With the social networking sites, everyone is receiving tons of about one another. Another way to communicate is by video chat. All computers are equipped with a video camera and you can buy one if you have a This will let you see the person's face are talking to. I have heard many amazing stories about this. One is about a soldier in and his present wife back home. The doctors set up a computer equipped with video chat in the operating room and the soldier was, in a way, in two places at once. The man got to see his newborn baby and his wife. Computers can do amazing things! Another reason computers are great is their accessability to the internet. There is this cool website called If you have an illness or a symtom to something, all you have to do is type it in on the home page and it will list all the possible reasons or outcomes. It also tells you how to treat it and where to find the medicine. If we looked back in time, one would need to travel to a doctor and pay to have your problem checked out. Also computers help out immensely with school work and homework. Many teachers nowadays request or demand students to type their asignments because it is easy to read, and it is easier to correct. I also find it faster to type then print. Say that you need to research the periodic table and write down facts as well as all the elements. There are probably hundreds if not thousands of websites on this subject. All you need to do is type it in on google. You can also add an image by copy and pasting; which will inhance your work. Computers have helped students and teachers. Lastyly, computers (and tehn keyboards) are helping people with hand - eye coordination. Many schools are offering typing classes to try and help students. I recently searched this topic on the internet and it showed a study done by and that people who practice typing at least minutes a day, will experience increased hand-eye coordination to better. This increase would help many, people with low coordination. Today, computers are helping the world in many ways. From communication, to internet accessability, then to helping hand-eye coordination. The world would change for the worse if computers were abandoned.
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Dear world forty years ago People would need travel visit library research every document doctors notes building plan would written hand old typewriter Life would much difficult Today computers allow us communicate one another access millions websites internet help school work Almost everyday mon dad receive friend requests long lost school friends well relatives current friends Today s computers allow world talk one another know going My dad always says makes world go round With social networking sites everyone receiving tons one another Another way communicate video chat All computers equipped video camera buy one This let see person s face talking I heard many amazing stories One soldier present wife back home The doctors set computer equipped video chat operating room soldier way two places The man got see newborn baby wife Computers amazing things Another reason computers great accessability internet There cool website called If illness symtom something type home page list possible reasons outcomes It also tells treat find medicine If looked back time one would need travel doctor pay problem checked Also computers help immensely school work homework Many teachers nowadays request demand students type asignments easy read easier correct I also find faster type print Say need research periodic table write facts well elements There probably hundreds thousands websites subject All need type google You also add image copy pasting inhance work Computers helped students teachers Lastyly computers tehn keyboards helping people hand eye coordination Many schools offering typing classes try help students I recently searched topic internet showed study done people practice typing least minutes day experience increased handeye coordination better This increase would help many people low coordination Today computers helping world many ways From communication internet accessability helping handeye coordination The world would change worse computers abandoned
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Dear Newspaper people, opinion's on what effect's do computer's have on people is without the computer we couldn't research important people and event's. Also we couldn't type important paper's. Last we can talk to other people. Now that first opinion is without the computer we couldn't research important people and events. This is one of reason's because if people didn't know anything about an important person they could look them up. For an example who is harry He was the president. I didn't know who he was or what he did until I looked him up on the internet. second opinion is we wouldn't be able to type important paper's. I say this because people that have mostly have to type paper's. And without the computers everything would have to be hand-writen. Also some people have bad hand writing. last opinion is we can type to people that are online and offline. I say this because if you have to tell a family member, or a friend something important but, you phone is dead or broken you can e-mail them. Or if you have a facebook you can tell them on that. Last you can I.M them. Now that you know three opinion's on what effects computer's have, people can alway's excrise around there house or around there block.
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Dear Newspaper people opinion s effect s computer s people without computer could nt research important people event s Also could nt type important paper s Last talk people Now first opinion without computer could nt research important people events This one reason s people nt know anything important person could look For example harry He president I nt know I looked internet second opinion would nt able type important paper s I say people mostly type paper s And without computers everything would handwriten Also people bad hand writing last opinion type people online offline I say tell family member friend something important phone dead broken email Or facebook tell Last IM Now know three opinion s effects computer s people alway s excrise around house around block
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Dear readers of people today are depating whether having a computer benefits society. Computer benefit society in way like it could help the childer with thrie school work. Not childern are very out going but if they had a computer thatn that will really help them. Not kids have ways to find out what their going to be in live. I'm pretty sure they don't care right now but the computer will help them out. As you can see the computer can help society. Every childern who goes to school has homework since kindergarten to when they end school. The computer can help them with their math homeworks, thier science, and even their sosial studies homework. When your kids get older starting middle school they have to do reports & pajects that recuar knolige tobe able to write or do the paper. If your a and can't take your childern to the libarey to take out books that could get lost and you would have to pay for something that has been but and is not ablt o use again. But the computer all of that to society. The compter can help the comuncation in so ways. kids like to go on to chat and parents think that is their world, but it could happen that they are aranging a group to for. Now a days their are a lot more shier people who are scared to people and be friend. but now their could be a lot more depress. The computer could also help you because you could be late or unable to go to an apointment or to a meeting & you lot the person in. This is a great way why computers help societey. In sociatey their are not a lot of people who now right away what they want to be when they grow up. If they us the computer and are really good at fixing them when the're broken that the ran be as computer are so beautful places that people take pictures of and up loud them into their computer. Some people don't see their talent until someone points it out to them. people could be have a bad day and write a story out of it and send it to some of their friends, their friend can send itto a publushers and make this person As you can see their are so great ways you can use the computer to help your sociatey. Readers the computer can help you in your school work. The computer can help the socitey communicat. It could also help people find their I think that the computer does a great helping the sociatey.
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Dear readers people today depating whether computer benefits society Computer benefit society way like could help childer thrie school work Not childern going computer thatn really help Not kids ways find going live I m pretty sure nt care right computer help As see computer help society Every childern goes school homework since kindergarten end school The computer help math homeworks thier science even sosial studies homework When kids get older starting middle school reports pajects recuar knolige tobe able write paper If ca nt take childern libarey take books could get lost would pay something ablt use But computer society The compter help comuncation ways kids like go chat parents think world could happen aranging group Now days lot shier people scared people friend could lot depress The computer could also help could late unable go apointment meeting lot person This great way computers help societey In sociatey lot people right away want grow If us computer really good fixing re broken ran computer beautful places people take pictures loud computer Some people nt see talent someone points people could bad day write story send friends friend send itto publushers make person As see great ways use computer help sociatey Readers computer help school work The computer help socitey communicat It could also help people find I think computer great helping sociatey
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Dear Newspaper, I strongly believe that technologies for kids and adults to use computers. I strongly believe that people have a bad affection people because you addicted, you spend less time with your family and friends. Finally, you spend less time excercising and doing great opportunities for your self. Clearly, i think that lettng students and adults use computers will take over their mind and make them addicted to the computer. This very bad because when your addicted to something, you can go back. This means you will have time for anything. For example, they micht forget what life is about and what was around for us to live in. Addiction is hard to get over , so don;t live your life in a box and play on nonsens live your life to the fullest. Over all, addiction in everything, including computers and a horrible . Without a doubt, spending too much time on computers will rott your brain and make you lazy. Meaning that the less you excersise, the less active you are. This problem is specially for teens. Teens have computer every week. cell phones, ipods, and many more. Alot of teens get cranky and the become node and neisty to their parents because they are testing to. As people dont excercise and move around alot, cause severe consequences like obesity and cancer. Obesity usually happens when you eating food, but it can also ahppen by not eating and not exercising. People that arent moving become lazy and have no desire to do anything which will an effect . Overall computers cause people to do the excercise and less active which will cause . Lastly, Computers make people spend less and less time with their family, and treat their computer as if the computers are . In everyday life , teens on their cell phones , their computers listening to , music . these electronics are causing. If this goes on alot of teens will loose the people they. Computers are a waste of time because they can make you. because they have affect on people who use computers and other electronics.
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Dear Newspaper I strongly believe technologies kids adults use computers I strongly believe people bad affection people addicted spend less time family friends Finally spend less time excercising great opportunities self Clearly think lettng students adults use computers take mind make addicted computer This bad addicted something go back This means time anything For example micht forget life around us live Addiction hard get live life box play nonsens live life fullest Over addiction everything including computers horrible Without doubt spending much time computers rott brain make lazy Meaning less excersise less active This problem specially teens Teens computer every week cell phones ipods many Alot teens get cranky become node neisty parents testing As people dont excercise move around alot cause severe consequences like obesity cancer Obesity usually happens eating food also ahppen eating exercising People arent moving become lazy desire anything effect Overall computers cause people excercise less active cause Lastly Computers make people spend less less time family treat computer computers In everyday life teens cell phones computers listening music electronics causing If goes alot teens loose people Computers waste time make affect people use computers electronics
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Dear local newspaper, my name is & I think that computers are very usefull and that people learn a lot from them. The computer is very smart and is probably the best technology invented. Computers help when you need to know something about a certian person. example is it helps students with homework. Last reason of why I think computers are useful is that they help you get a hold of family and friends. First example of why I think computers are usefull is they help you if you need facts about a person. One example is you want to go to your a policeman and your leader tells you to meet him at so you go there and he tells you the person they are going after but you dont know anything about him and you need a computer to see what he is convicted for and see his criminal record. example is if your teacher wants you to do a report about" lopez," but you don't know anything about him so you would use the computer and read about his life. Last example is if you want to learn about your countries history and the leaders behind it then you would use the computer. Second example is students and their homework. One example is when your teacher says "I want a essay on and I want it to be neat." But you have very handwriting and you cant do it on paper you will have to use word or a writing program on computer. example is if you forgot to write down your homework in your agenda or something then you can go on the school website and see what your homework is. Last example is if your teacher says find the book about the and you go to the library but everyone is taken but you have one by tomorrow. So you can go on the computer and find a place that is closest to you that has the book. Last reason of why I think computers are helpfull in this society is because they help you get a hold of your friends & family. One example is if it takes to long to write letters to each other so you run use online messengers for example like "@CAPS2" or even "facebook and myspace." example is if you don't send the letter to the write addrees so what you do is go online and ask a friend or family member. Last example is if want to see the person and talk to them so you can go webcam with them and even talk. I hope you agree with my opinion and think computers are usefull an also good for people. It helps people to learn about others and information about them. Second it helps students with school and homework, and lastly because they help you get a hold of family and friends. Therefore, I hope you like my letter and enjoy my opinion.
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Dear local newspaper name I think computers usefull people learn lot The computer smart probably best technology invented Computers help need know something certian person example helps students homework Last reason I think computers useful help get hold family friends First example I think computers usefull help need facts person One example want go policeman leader tells meet go tells person going dont know anything need computer see convicted see criminal record example teacher wants report lopez nt know anything would use computer read life Last example want learn countries history leaders behind would use computer Second example students homework One example teacher says I want essay I want neat But handwriting cant paper use word writing program computer example forgot write homework agenda something go school website see homework Last example teacher says find book go library everyone taken one tomorrow So go computer find place closest book Last reason I think computers helpfull society help get hold friends family One example takes long write letters run use online messengers example like CAPS even facebook myspace example nt send letter write addrees go online ask friend family member Last example want see person talk go webcam even talk I hope agree opinion think computers usefull also good people It helps people learn others information Second helps students school homework lastly help get hold family friends Therefore I hope like letter enjoy opinion
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Dear local Newspaper, I assume you've heard about the ongoing debate about computers. I personally believe that computers do benefit society. I believe this because computers benefit by its online, internet, and overall help in other things. My first reason for why you should believe that they benefit society is that computers have online. By online in chat rooms, bank, etc. this helps because people talking to other people online can beast there their morale. it can boest morale in situations like with military officers, soldiers because they don't get to see their family but online can change that in on instant. Online also helps because you can pay bills to gave bank and it overall saves a trip to the bank & a waste of gas. So, online is my for why you, the local newspaper, should agree with me. My second reason is that the internat benifits a lot. The internet, a marvelous created years ago . Its great because you can buy things it, like on a websites such as ebay, amazon, etc. This helps because it also saves time. The internet is great also because with the internet, you can learn of foreign nations. Finally, the internet helps because you can receive news through it. This benefits society because people can instantly hear about natural disasters & problems occuring in the community, rather than hoping to find it in the new or on television. Thats my second reason for why you should agree that computer do help. My final reason for why computers benefit what the help, overall in other situations used later rather thab just the computer. For example one way the computer can help in the future, is that a student can research info a bout a subject online and it can help raise their grade on a project. Stedy has proven that computer training in the , by playing online games with other people, like in call of duty, helps boost soldiers' accorucy. it helps because it boosts their hand-eye coorination & we all increases their accuracy in target shooting This not seem like much but, on the battle field, it can make the difference between life on death. Computers not only help that but they are plentiful & can be used in places such as libraries on internet cafe. That my final reason for why you should go with computers. Some people might believe that computers are bad thing sina they take time away from exercise, but that can easily be solved by using the internet to buy an indoor joggee. Computers benefit society by using online. the internet, and overall help in future situations. There are the reasons for why I believe you should go for the cause of computers. Thank you for taking the time to read my opinion.
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Dear local Newspaper I assume ve heard ongoing debate computers I personally believe computers benefit society I believe computers benefit online internet overall help things My first reason believe benefit society computers online By online chat rooms bank etc helps people talking people online beast morale boest morale situations like military officers soldiers nt get see family online change instant Online also helps pay bills gave bank overall saves trip bank waste gas So online local newspaper agree My second reason internat benifits lot The internet marvelous created years ago Its great buy things like websites ebay amazon etc This helps also saves time The internet great also internet learn foreign nations Finally internet helps receive news This benefits society people instantly hear natural disasters problems occuring community rather hoping find new television Thats second reason agree computer help My final reason computers benefit help overall situations used later rather thab computer For example one way computer help future student research info bout subject online help raise grade project Stedy proven computer training playing online games people like call duty helps boost soldiers accorucy helps boosts handeye coorination increases accuracy target shooting This seem like much battle field make difference life death Computers help plentiful used places libraries internet cafe That final reason go computers Some people might believe computers bad thing sina take time away exercise easily solved using internet buy indoor joggee Computers benefit society using online internet overall help future situations There reasons I believe go cause computers Thank taking time read opinion
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Dear Newspaper, I think computer use is good because, it will teach people to have hand-eye coordination. Also people will have the ability to learn about different states and countries. I ask people would be able to interact with their family and friends from different towns. Those are all the reasons why I think computers are a good use. The first reason why I think people should use computers is it will teach people to have hand-eye coordination. People will know how to stay focussed with their eyes and also know how to also use their hands all at the same time. To stay focussed with their eyes people would have to wear glasses for the light. Also so when they are typing they wont have to keep looking down all the time. When people coordinate with their hands on the computer its so they know were the different are thats why computers are good. My second reason why computers are good is because people will have the ability to learn about the different states and countries. They can also see how nice or bad the countries and states look. Also they will be able to read about what different cultures they have and religions. In the states also be to read about and how we have a wonderful state. That's why computers are good use. My final reason why the use of computers is good because, people can interact with their family and friends online. There are a lot of different websites you can go to that you can search for one of your family members or friends. You can talk to each other. Also you can talk to them even if their in a different state. You guys can talk about a lot of different things. For example, the family and life and even if you miss them. Thats why computers are good. Those are my reasons why computers are good. Not only can it teach you about hand-eye coordination, family and friends, and about different states. But also you can play a lot of different games and also type on an notepad. Also if your stuck on a math problem you can use the calculator. That's why people should use the computers.
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Dear Newspaper I think computer use good teach people handeye coordination Also people ability learn different states countries I ask people would able interact family friends different towns Those reasons I think computers good use The first reason I think people use computers teach people handeye coordination People know stay focussed eyes also know also use hands time To stay focussed eyes people would wear glasses light Also typing wont keep looking time When people coordinate hands computer know different thats computers good My second reason computers good people ability learn different states countries They also see nice bad countries states look Also able read different cultures religions In states also read wonderful state That s computers good use My final reason use computers good people interact family friends online There lot different websites go search one family members friends You talk Also talk even different state You guys talk lot different things For example family life even miss Thats computers good Those reasons computers good Not teach handeye coordination family friends different states But also play lot different games also type notepad Also stuck math problem use calculator That s people use computers
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Do you think computers have a negative effect on people? Well I don't I think is on easier way to get information faster. The three reasons why I believe computers have a positive effect on people are to learn about faraway places, to have jobs in the computer, business, and you are able to talk to people from faraway. These are many other reasons but I'@CAPS1 only required to talk about three. First of all, you are able to learn about faraway places you can learn about places you aren't able to see in real life. is a faster way to get information about news that wouldn't be able to out on newspaper until the next day. If you dont have money to travel then you could just go on the internet and see the faraway places in many ways, just a better source of information. My second reason is to have a job in the computer business. There are alot of jobs that require computers. If we didn't have computers more and more people would not have jobs. Also, business would be slow because they wouldn't have the information they needed. That is why computers are needed. Lastly, you are able to talk to people from faraway, yes people are able to talk through the phone but its not the some if you get to talk and see the person. Video chat is a great way to make new friends and still talk with your old friends. You can talk to relatives, friends, or anyone you want to talk to. If we didn't have computers you would lose touch with people you know that live faraway from you. That would be a terrible thing. In conclusion computers are an easier way to get information. You can learn about faraway places. You can have a job in the computer business. Lastly, you are able to talk to people from faraway, I think computers are a positive thing.
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Do think computers negative effect people Well I nt I think easier way get information faster The three reasons I believe computers positive effect people learn faraway places jobs computer business able talk people faraway These many reasons I CAPS required talk three First able learn faraway places learn places nt able see real life faster way get information news would nt able newspaper next day If dont money travel could go internet see faraway places many ways better source information My second reason job computer business There alot jobs require computers If nt computers people would jobs Also business would slow would nt information needed That computers needed Lastly able talk people faraway yes people able talk phone get talk see person Video chat great way make new friends still talk old friends You talk relatives friends anyone want talk If nt computers would lose touch people know live faraway That would terrible thing In conclusion computers easier way get information You learn faraway places You job computer business Lastly able talk people faraway I think computers positive thing
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Dear you look on a map of your effect all you see is computers everywhere. A map of the town compouters everywhere the state, the country, and even the world all you see are computers everywhere. need to shut down these computers so can start excersising, enjoying nature, and interacting with our families. It's times to finally help the world soldiers. Men, you look around what do you see. Nothing but obesity. These so called computers are causing this why, look over there. There's He used to weigh over pounds. All he did was use that blasted electrical error call a computer. One day he realized he could do this no longer, and got same exercise. After only a year just wayed pounds. You see, a man named who's a doctor, computer expert, and wrote their books on exercise, nature and family, says, " people would shut off their computers and use the gym, over of obesity would drop. "@CAPS8 must stop the madness men. Soldiers, do you know what's really a share about the enemy fighting? It's causing people to miss out on this beautiful nature. You know says that over of people will never go in nature they get a computer. They don't know what their missing out on. I can picture it now the freshly plump hanging from the full bush of soring green. The mosuelous waterfall that shines it off into a creek.The full dark scenary majestic. Lets not forget the lalaby of the crickets and owls putting you in a deep slumber under the staggering oak trees. This, soldiers, is what need to get people hooked on not time consuming electronics. Men, do you want to know the solders part of this war? The hostages of the computer can't even sped time with their families. They're so busy on and other death comps that the real things important our alone. My friend was one of the captives of the computer. He escaped just in time to stop one of his kids from going to an illegal party. Ever sence then, has put his family before anything. Other families arn't us lucky though. In fact have says that of families with copmuters have no communication and end up splitting up. The computers have gone to far now. Not only did they mess up people's lives, but their family too. This was must end now. Do you see our future now? It's filled with the computers on top. their slaves come at their call. They won't let us excersise to shape, see the beatiful lands of nature,or spend time with our families so can keep it together. This is why fighting this is why were here will you join us?
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Dear look map effect see computers everywhere A map town compouters everywhere state country even world see computers everywhere need shut computers start excersising enjoying nature interacting families It s times finally help world soldiers Men look around see Nothing obesity These called computers causing look There s He used weigh pounds All use blasted electrical error call computer One day realized could longer got exercise After year wayed pounds You see man named s doctor computer expert wrote books exercise nature family says people would shut computers use gym obesity would drop CAPS must stop madness men Soldiers know s really share enemy fighting It s causing people miss beautiful nature You know says people never go nature get computer They nt know missing I picture freshly plump hanging full bush soring green The mosuelous waterfall shines creekThe full dark scenary majestic Lets forget lalaby crickets owls putting deep slumber staggering oak trees This soldiers need get people hooked time consuming electronics Men want know solders part war The hostages computer ca nt even sped time families They re busy death comps real things important alone My friend one captives computer He escaped time stop one kids going illegal party Ever sence put family anything Other families ar nt us lucky though In fact says families copmuters communication end splitting The computers gone far Not mess people s lives family This must end Do see future It s filled computers top slaves come call They wo nt let us excersise shape see beatiful lands nature spend time families keep together This fighting join us
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