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Dear local newspaper, I think effects computers have on people are great learning skills/affects because they give us time to chat with friends/new people, helps us learn about the globe(astronomy) and keeps us out of troble! Thing about! Dont you think so? How would you feel if your teenager is always on the phone with friends! Do you ever time to chat with your friends or buisness partner about things. Well now - there's a new way to chat the computer, theirs plenty of sites on the internet to do so: facebook, myspace ect. Just think now while your setting up meeting with your boss on the computer, your teenager is having fun on the phone not rushing to get off cause you want to use it. How did you learn about other countrys/states outside of yours? Well I have by computer/internet, it's a new way to learn about what going on in our time! You might think your child spends a lot of time on the computer, but ask them so question about the economy, sea floor spreading or even about the you'll be surprise at how much he/she knows. Believe it or not the computer is much interesting then in class all day reading out of books. If your child is home on your computer or at a local library, it's better than being out with friends being fresh, or being perpressured to doing something they know isnt right. You might not know where your child is, forbidde in a hospital bed because of a drive-by. Rather than your child on the computer learning, chatting or just playing games, safe and sound in your home or community place. Now I hope you have reached a point to understand and agree with me, because computers can have great effects on you or child because it gives us time to chat with friends/new people, helps us learn about the globe and believe or not keeps us out of troble. Thank you for listening.
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Dear local newspaper I think effects computers people great learning skillsaffects give us time chat friendsnew people helps us learn globe astronomy keeps us troble Thing Dont think How would feel teenager always phone friends Do ever time chat friends buisness partner things Well s new way chat computer plenty sites internet facebook myspace ect Just think setting meeting boss computer teenager fun phone rushing get cause want use How learn countrysstates outside Well I computerinternet s new way learn going time You might think child spends lot time computer ask question economy sea floor spreading even ll surprise much heshe knows Believe computer much interesting class day reading books If child home computer local library s better friends fresh perpressured something know isnt right You might know child forbidde hospital bed driveby Rather child computer learning chatting playing games safe sound home community place Now I hope reached point understand agree computers great effects child gives us time chat friendsnew people helps us learn globe believe keeps us troble Thank listening
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Dear I believe that using computers will benefit us in many ways like talking and becoming friends will others through websites like facebook and mysace. Using computers can help us find coordibates, locations, and able ourselfs to millions of information. Also computers will benefit us by helping with jobs as in planning a house plan and typing a page report for one of our jobs in less than writing it. Now lets go into the wonder world of technology. Using a computer will help us in life by talking or making friends on line. Many people have myspace, facebooks, aim, these all benefit us by having conversations with one another. Many people believe computers are bad but how can you make friends if you can never talk to them? I am very fortunate for having a computer that can help with not only school work but my social life and how I make friends. Computers help us with finding our locations, coordibates and millions of information online. If we didn't go on the internet a lot we wouldn't know how to go onto websites that help us with locations and coordinates like Would you rather use a computer or be in When your supposed to be vacationing in Million of information is found on the internet. You can as almost every question and a computer will have it. Would you rather easily draw up a house plan on the computers or take hours doing one by hand with ugly erazer marks all over it, you are garrenteed that to find a job with a drawing like that. Also when appling for a job many workers must write very long papers like a word essay on why this job fits you the most, and many people I know don't like writing words non-stopp for hours when it could take them I hav an a computer. That is why computers we needed a lot now adays. I hope this essay has impacted your descion on computers because they are great machines to work with. The other day I showed my mom how to use a computer and she said it was the greatest invention sense sliced bread! Now go out and buy a computer to help you chat online with friends, find locations and millions of information on one click of the button and help your self with getting a job with neat, prepared, printed work that your boss will love.
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Dear I believe using computers benefit us many ways like talking becoming friends others websites like facebook mysace Using computers help us find coordibates locations able ourselfs millions information Also computers benefit us helping jobs planning house plan typing page report one jobs less writing Now lets go wonder world technology Using computer help us life talking making friends line Many people myspace facebooks aim benefit us conversations one another Many people believe computers bad make friends never talk I fortunate computer help school work social life I make friends Computers help us finding locations coordibates millions information online If nt go internet lot would nt know go onto websites help us locations coordinates like Would rather use computer When supposed vacationing Million information found internet You almost every question computer Would rather easily draw house plan computers take hours one hand ugly erazer marks garrenteed find job drawing like Also appling job many workers must write long papers like word essay job fits many people I know nt like writing words nonstopp hours could take I hav computer That computers needed lot adays I hope essay impacted descion computers great machines work The day I showed mom use computer said greatest invention sense sliced bread Now go buy computer help chat online friends find locations millions information one click button help self getting job neat prepared printed work boss love
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Dear, More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. Those who support advances in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on people. Others have different ideas. A great amount in the world today are using computers, some for work and spme for the fun of it. Computers is one of mans greatest accomplishments. Computers are helpful in so many ways, news, and live streams. Don't get me wrong way to much people spend time on the computer and they should be out interacting with others but who are we to tell them what to do. When I grow up I want to be a author or a journalist and I know for a fact that both of those jobs involve lots of time on time on the computer, one spend more time then the other but you know exactly what getting at. So what if some expert think people are spending to much time on the computer and not exercising, enjoying natures and interacting with family and friends. For all the expert knows that its how must people make a living and we don't know why people choose to use the computer for a great amount of time and to be honest it's non of my concern and it shouldn't be the so called experts concern. People interact a thousand times a day on the computers. Computers keep lots of kids of the streets instead of being out and causing trouble. Computers helps the locate most wanted criminals. As you can see computers are more useful to society then you think, computers benefit society.
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Dear More people use computers everyone agrees benefits society Those support advances technology believe computers positive effect people Others different ideas A great amount world today using computers work spme fun Computers one mans greatest accomplishments Computers helpful many ways news live streams Do nt get wrong way much people spend time computer interacting others tell When I grow I want author journalist I know fact jobs involve lots time time computer one spend time know exactly getting So expert think people spending much time computer exercising enjoying natures interacting family friends For expert knows must people make living nt know people choose use computer great amount time honest s non concern nt called experts concern People interact thousand times day computers Computers keep lots kids streets instead causing trouble Computers helps locate wanted criminals As see computers useful society think computers benefit society
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Dear Local Newspaper, I have found that many experts say that computers do not benifit our society. In some cases this is true but in most cases studdies show that computers can help people. While nothing beats talking in person computers can get really close such examples are webcams or e-mail. of students who get good grades refer to reliable websites for reasearch or to help find good books. Also online catalouges or advertisments help the economy of stores worldwide. people were not allowed to use computers most of the modern would not exist. said that the best form of modern communication is the computer because of the ability to write, talk, or write back for much cheaper! Almost every single event i go to is planed on a computer by communication such as e-mail "@CAPS2 a student ever needs homework because lam out sick or needs help studying for a test then contact their teacher through the best form of communication for them always e-mail. Even the post office uses computers to get letters and boxes to people. The president of the post office, said "@CAPS3 would be imposible to get mail to our coustmers were not for computers telling us where a zip code is or how heavy a box is." that tell people what is happening around the world would not exist were not for the moder communication abilities that computer provid us. Because information can be commucated so quick. so can reasearch. When the country of took a pole of people used computer for any type of reasearch, of those were students currently in school and of them have good grades. When the same survey was taken in the of people used computers fore reasons and were students who had good grade were not posible for me to access documents in the online I probably would not have gotten an A+ on my assignment! Could you amagine suddenly your Newspaper reporters couldn't use the internet to work on their reports? The articles would probably be after the events occur. Most buissness, including the Newspaper, use the internet to advertise, shop, or read. The association of reported that in of used a website and of them were in good positions. The president of imports said that they use an online catalouge because is cheaper, but they can also promote that is to save trees, or for the castomer's convinence. Small can make websites to promote them selves and explain their star to potential coustomers. the owner of said that the internet saved her resturant. wer not for the internet more people would be jobless in In conclusion computer help everyday people and without them most convinences would not exist. They help communicate around the world. Computers help people reaserch subjects for school reports, and they make the current economy get better everyday. In moderation computers are the most useful tool out there.
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Dear Local Newspaper I found many experts say computers benifit society In cases true cases studdies show computers help people While nothing beats talking person computers get really close examples webcams email students get good grades refer reliable websites reasearch help find good books Also online catalouges advertisments help economy stores worldwide people allowed use computers modern would exist said best form modern communication computer ability write talk write back much cheaper Almost every single event go planed computer communication email CAPS student ever needs homework lam sick needs help studying test contact teacher best form communication always email Even post office uses computers get letters boxes people The president post office said CAPS would imposible get mail coustmers computers telling us zip code heavy box tell people happening around world would exist moder communication abilities computer provid us Because information commucated quick reasearch When country took pole people used computer type reasearch students currently school good grades When survey taken people used computers fore reasons students good grade posible access documents online I probably would gotten A assignment Could amagine suddenly Newspaper reporters could nt use internet work reports The articles would probably events occur Most buissness including Newspaper use internet advertise shop read The association reported used website good positions The president imports said use online catalouge cheaper also promote save trees castomer s convinence Small make websites promote selves explain star potential coustomers owner said internet saved resturant wer internet people would jobless In conclusion computer help everyday people without convinences would exist They help communicate around world Computers help people reaserch subjects school reports make current economy get better everyday In moderation computers useful tool
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Dear I know having computers has a positive effect on people. The computers connect families, contain information which is great for peoples education, and are very conveint. Computors are a step into the future and we should take advantage of it. First off the internet or e-mail will help family members connect. My family, which lives hours away by car, love to talk with me by e-mail. This helps me connect with my family and is just another reason why we should have computors. Another reason that includes family is when the family is just sitting around and are calling everywhere just to find a board game, it would just be easier to go online to find it. This way it would be quick and easy to find that one board game. The last reason why a computer would help a family is if a family wants to get in to any kinds of activities and they need the number they could just go online. On the internet the family could find the numbers, the and some information about it. This way more and more families can do activities together. As one can see the computer is bringing more and more families together. An other reason why the computers are good for society is educations. With information at the tip of your fingers more and more people will want to learn. Now a days people try to find the out, but will all the tools on the computers mae people get the education. Secondly computers are another way to go to collage. If you arn't up to going to school/collage because your sick. You wouldn't have to miss anything because with a click of a button you will have the materials needed for what was missed. Lastly everyone knows that in most classrooms can't afford one computer. The children want computors so hard. If they were to get one it would change so much. They would be able to learn so much more than before. The children could lean about different countries far away. As a result computers would improve the way we learn. The last reason why computers are so helpful is convience. Now a say the world is crazy, so if we don't have to go out or talk to someone we won't. The computer will offer the ability to confrence will other people so that there would be communication between work parttners. With the ability to talk with another for work would make us a lighter nation. This is only one of the many reasons computers are very conviente, subssiquently computers are conviente because you could book flights, vacations, rentals, and much more. With a click of a button you should be going to or a nice vacation.
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Dear I know computers positive effect people The computers connect families contain information great peoples education conveint Computors step future take advantage First internet email help family members connect My family lives hours away car love talk email This helps connect family another reason computors Another reason includes family family sitting around calling everywhere find board game would easier go online find This way would quick easy find one board game The last reason computer would help family family wants get kinds activities need number could go online On internet family could find numbers information This way families activities together As one see computer bringing families together An reason computers good society educations With information tip fingers people want learn Now days people try find tools computers mae people get education Secondly computers another way go collage If ar nt going schoolcollage sick You would nt miss anything click button materials needed missed Lastly everyone knows classrooms ca nt afford one computer The children want computors hard If get one would change much They would able learn much The children could lean different countries far away As result computers would improve way learn The last reason computers helpful convience Now say world crazy nt go talk someone wo nt The computer offer ability confrence people would communication work parttners With ability talk another work would make us lighter nation This one many reasons computers conviente subssiquently computers conviente could book flights vacations rentals much With click button going nice vacation
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Dear I think that computers have a negative affect on us! How many people have acess to a camputer daily in america.. and how many people go on at least an hour a That means that people cant exercise are wasting many are have the posibility of physical that sound good to you? Think of everything you done when you write a letter. I got up and got all the materials and sit back down. After In done writing have to put all the materials away and then put the letter in the mailbox and walk all the way back. Well this is what I had to do. Now think how you write an email sitdown and move your fingers. Do you see the difference? instead of getting a good walk to your friends house to talk to you just in him/er. Did you know that you can literally but from on your computer. Instead of around with this that can add anything you your computer gives away information they information lead to that and then everthing you have wouldbe gone. All this so you can go online. Believe it or not, you can phisically get hurt for being on the computer, to long. thing is that when you at a computer what happened to my grandpa is that when you are in a wood chair all day you can get ardthritis in your muscle thing th.
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Dear I think computers negative affect us How many people acess camputer daily america many people go least hour That means people cant exercise wasting many posibility physical sound good Think everything done write letter I got got materials sit back After In done writing put materials away put letter mailbox walk way back Well I Now think write email sitdown move fingers Do see difference instead getting good walk friends house talk himer Did know literally computer Instead around add anything computer gives away information information lead everthing wouldbe gone All go online Believe phisically get hurt computer long thing computer happened grandpa wood chair day get ardthritis muscle thing th
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Did you know that more and more people these days are depending on computers for their safety, natural education, and their social life? In my opinion, the increasing use of computers is not benefiting society. Initially, ones safety while using a computer is at risk. To begin, when someone is talking to another on a computer, they never know who is at the other end of it. For example, a small girl was playing a game on the computer and a person began talking to her, it could be a predator. She will never know unless they meet us somewhere. At this point, it maybe too late. Moreover, studies show that of people's information is more widely exposed in the last years due to the new chat websites. Such as myspace and facebook. In these websites, people share their information. With this, their safety is at risk. Finally, people should stop using computers as much as they are now, in order to keep their safety safe. Furthermore, enjoying nature is a must, in our world full of immense landscapes, wide waters, dense forests, and lush valleys. you depend on your computer to teach you about the world, you should cease this use. One must actually be outside, experiencing the feel, the smell, and even the taste of nature. A recent study shows that people who actually went to the grand canyon could write a page essay on what they had learned. The people who didn't go and simply read information off their computer, could not write this much. Finally, society needs to back away from their computers, and stop into. Thirdly, a person's social life could be ruined from the use of computers for many reasons. One reasons for this could be that a person spends all their time on their computer instead of spending time with their family and friends. Sure, you can chat with people online, but that's nothing like chatting in person. There is no need to talk to a friend or family member online, when you could do it in person. Finally, someone takes an embarrasing picture of you and puts it on their computer, it is there forever. Thus, you can lose friends, whether you're the person in the picture or the addict who put the picture on. With this, you can easily ruin your family/social life by using your computer too often. How would you feel it was your fault that someone's safety is at risk? Wouldn't you rather enjoy nature in person instead of which it on your computer and not get the fall effect? Couldn't you talk to your friends and family in person rather than ignore them to use your computer? There are numerous ways in which the increasing rate of computer use does not benefit society. I encourage you to agree with me that computers can put one safety at risk decrease their education of nature and ruin their social life.
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Did know people days depending computers safety natural education social life In opinion increasing use computers benefiting society Initially ones safety using computer risk To begin someone talking another computer never know end For example small girl playing game computer person began talking could predator She never know unless meet us somewhere At point maybe late Moreover studies show people s information widely exposed last years due new chat websites Such myspace facebook In websites people share information With safety risk Finally people stop using computers much order keep safety safe Furthermore enjoying nature must world full immense landscapes wide waters dense forests lush valleys depend computer teach world cease use One must actually outside experiencing feel smell even taste nature A recent study shows people actually went grand canyon could write page essay learned The people nt go simply read information computer could write much Finally society needs back away computers stop Thirdly person s social life could ruined use computers many reasons One reasons could person spends time computer instead spending time family friends Sure chat people online s nothing like chatting person There need talk friend family member online could person Finally someone takes embarrasing picture puts computer forever Thus lose friends whether re person picture addict put picture With easily ruin familysocial life using computer often How would feel fault someone s safety risk Would nt rather enjoy nature person instead computer get fall effect Could nt talk friends family person rather ignore use computer There numerous ways increasing rate computer use benefit society I encourage agree computers put one safety risk decrease education nature ruin social life
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of people agree that computers make life less complicated. I also agree with this. Using computers teaches hand-eye coordination, gives people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and lets people talk online with other people. I think that these are all very important. Why wouldn't you want to have strong hand-eye coordination? I think this a very important skill. Computers help teach hand-eye coordination and they keep it strong. While you're looking at the screen your hand is moving the mouse where you want it to go. Good hand-eye coordination is used for a lot of things; mostly everything. If you play some sports like baseball, hand-eye is one of the most important elements. Why not make that stronger off of the feild? Also, hand-eye can be used to while taking notes. Hand-eye is involved with almost everything you do. you can't have a poor hand-eye coordination or else you won't be able to function properly. out of doctors agree that hand-eye very important for healthy living. I love to travel, but I want to know about the place I'm going to before I get on the phone to go there." said a science teacher at He feels the way, I'm sure, a lot of people feel. They want to know about the place they are going to and they want it to be current. The computer has plenty information about a lot of different places in the world. Some books don't offer as much information or they need to be updated. Computers are also very good for learning about other cultures and traditions. No one wants to be ignorant right? People want to know what's going on in the world quick and easy. The computer does this. I remember when I was about our phone broke in our house. We couldn't go out and get one right away either. The only way we were able to communicate with our family and friends was by computer. The computer made it easier to e-mail everyone and tell them why we weren't answering our house phone. This happens more often than you think. People need to communicate through computer a lot. At work, if you need to talk to an employee or co-worker and you can't leave your desk, you can just e-mail the information to them. out of employees say that it is much faster and easier to e-mail information as opposed to talking them on the phone or in person. A lot of people agree that computer make life a lot easier. Computers teach hand-eye coordination and they let you communicate with other people. The most critical reason is that computers let people learn about faraway places and people. You can make a difference in the way people feel about computers. Write to your local newspaper. It's now or never!"
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people agree computers make life less complicated I also agree Using computers teaches handeye coordination gives people ability learn faraway places people lets people talk online people I think important Why would nt want strong handeye coordination I think important skill Computers help teach handeye coordination keep strong While re looking screen hand moving mouse want go Good handeye coordination used lot things mostly everything If play sports like baseball handeye one important elements Why make stronger feild Also handeye used taking notes Handeye involved almost everything ca nt poor handeye coordination else wo nt able function properly doctors agree handeye important healthy living I love travel I want know place I m going I get phone go said science teacher He feels way I m sure lot people feel They want know place going want current The computer plenty information lot different places world Some books nt offer much information need updated Computers also good learning cultures traditions No one wants ignorant right People want know s going world quick easy The computer I remember I phone broke house We could nt go get one right away either The way able communicate family friends computer The computer made easier email everyone tell nt answering house phone This happens often think People need communicate computer lot At work need talk employee coworker ca nt leave desk email information employees say much faster easier email information opposed talking phone person A lot people agree computer make life lot easier Computers teach handeye coordination let communicate people The critical reason computers let people learn faraway places people You make difference way people feel computers Write local newspaper It s never
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Dear reader, has had a dramatic effect on human life. It has changed the way we do almost everything today. The most well know, is the computer. This device has allowed people do buy things online, talk to people online, and also provides entertainment for some people. All good qualities that make everyones lives easier. Imagine you look into your refrigerator and you notice it's almost empty. Someone is using the car and you need to go grocery shopping and the store is too far. What do you do? Well you could go on a computer and look for food online. Ther are many great deals and some companies even deliver for free! The amazing and easy way to buy food without leaving your house. But food isn't all you can purchase. Many products are sold through the computer. Need new toys for kids? Or how about a new hat for your friend? Maybe even more curtains for your room? Well at the easy access of internet on a computer, you can buy all those items and more. The computer has also the way of communication. Let's say someone wants to talk to a friend or relative that lives far away in another country. someone dosen't own a phone or they can't make the call, all these is to be in you on the computer. You can communicate with anyone just by using your email adress. Now friends and families can talk to each other over the ease of the computer. Just type to want to say and "boom," instant, on the chat. Let's face it. No matter what a child or even teenager . But now with a computer all that can change. With just one click you could actually be watching a movie from the comfort of your own home. But what you don't want a movie? No entertainment like listing to musics, watching fun, and probable the most popular playing games. Everyone loves to play a game every once in a while, and with the selection of thousands of online games, these isn't or person who can't fled atleast our game enjoyable. There are even games for educational fun that many kids love. With all the entertainment a computer can produce; who could hate it? All in all the computer is a revolutinizing device that has changes the way we shop, communicate, and find exciting entertainment. To be able to do so much with just a couple clicks; new that I find extravagant. It blows my mind to see and think, "@CAPS1 we can do this now, I wonder what we can accomplish in the future.
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Dear reader dramatic effect human life It changed way almost everything today The well know computer This device allowed people buy things online talk people online also provides entertainment people All good qualities make everyones lives easier Imagine look refrigerator notice s almost empty Someone using car need go grocery shopping store far What Well could go computer look food online Ther many great deals companies even deliver free The amazing easy way buy food without leaving house But food nt purchase Many products sold computer Need new toys kids Or new hat friend Maybe even curtains room Well easy access internet computer buy items The computer also way communication Let s say someone wants talk friend relative lives far away another country someone dose nt phone ca nt make call computer You communicate anyone using email adress Now friends families talk ease computer Just type want say boom instant chat Let s face No matter child even teenager But computer change With one click could actually watching movie comfort home But nt want movie No entertainment like listing musics watching fun probable popular playing games Everyone loves play game every selection thousands online games nt person ca nt fled atleast game enjoyable There even games educational fun many kids love With entertainment computer produce could hate All computer revolutinizing device changes way shop communicate find exciting entertainment To able much couple clicks new I find extravagant It blows mind see think CAPS I wonder accomplish future
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In the we have the technology of a computer. Some say that the computers are good for the society. I disagree, I believe that it is bad for a few reasons. Some of the reasons are obesity, cramps, more sexual harrassment and even cyber bullying. First if people don't get off the computers and go out to exercise then it will cause obesity. Think of it this way, if you watch a kid that didn't have to go to school his entire life and he started off at pounds. The only thing the kid will want to do is play on the computer and he will gain weight. Next, tip-top-tip-top, that's all you hear when a kid is on the computer, teens come home from school and go straight to the computer and don't get off about on a school night. These are the kids that are likely to get bad cramps. they get the cramps form typing to fast, hard and too long. They also can get the cramps from just sitting down for to long then trying to get up but can't because it hurts to much to decide to move anywhere. There's also a lot more of sexual harassment that is going on some kids goin to a chat room to talk to their friends about some great news, but when they get out of the chat room they are all mad and pissed off. The reason is because someone was making fun of them and they didn't like it. This happens maybe close to of the time that teens and even parents go into chat rooms online. This is the third reason on why computers have an huge effect on people. The last reason that computers have a huge effect on people is because of cyberbullying. cyberbullying is when someone bullies you but just online instead. Have you realized that children became poor or sick because they dont want to be hurt or killed over something very stupid? Well, I have and it's not nice, and now the god thing is if a kid goes to school online he/she get cyberbullied because he's not smart enough or if he/she don't have the money to go to school. The cyberbullying normally occures in a chat room online. There is where all of the family will either become broke with no money or food. They even lose their kid or the house that they live in because someone wanted to act all big and bad to be popular in school. In conclusion, these are only a few ways that computers effects people. The obesity, cramps, sexual harrassment and cyberbullying are not a joke and it's not fun to get done to you. Now it's your turn to tell us what you think about the computers. Do you think computers are good and benefits society or is it bad a rot little kids brains to make their lives horrible for them to live with?
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In technology computer Some say computers good society I disagree I believe bad reasons Some reasons obesity cramps sexual harrassment even cyber bullying First people nt get computers go exercise cause obesity Think way watch kid nt go school entire life started pounds The thing kid want play computer gain weight Next tiptoptiptop s hear kid computer teens come home school go straight computer nt get school night These kids likely get bad cramps get cramps form typing fast hard long They also get cramps sitting long trying get ca nt hurts much decide move anywhere There s also lot sexual harassment going kids goin chat room talk friends great news get chat room mad pissed The reason someone making fun nt like This happens maybe close time teens even parents go chat rooms online This third reason computers huge effect people The last reason computers huge effect people cyberbullying cyberbullying someone bullies online instead Have realized children became poor sick dont want hurt killed something stupid Well I s nice god thing kid goes school online heshe get cyberbullied s smart enough heshe nt money go school The cyberbullying normally occures chat room online There family either become broke money food They even lose kid house live someone wanted act big bad popular school In conclusion ways computers effects people The obesity cramps sexual harrassment cyberbullying joke s fun get done Now s turn tell us think computers Do think computers good benefits society bad rot little kids brains make lives horrible live
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Dear people acknowledge the great advances that computers give us, but they also put us at disadvantages. Computers have been known to help develop health issues. As people become more intune with the online world, they tend to interact with their family less. Don't forget the danger of online predators - they're deadly. people who do nothing, but watch television are often refered to as cauch potatoes. Those who are glued to their computer screens are no better. It is stated by numerous of top doctors that too much time spent on the computer can cause damage to your health. Exercise is highly stressed by doctors around the globe and the only exercise a computer addict will be doing is typing up a storm. They can submerge themselves into obesity. This often causes depression as it begins to sink in. Addition itself is a serious health issue. I wouldn't be surprised if they add a computer wing to rehab centers sometime in the near future. These problems are slowly spreading and we must come together to abolish them! Family time is an treasured value, to the people, but lately, computers are ruining this tradition. With so people absorbed with online drama, friends, and even video games, family interaction is declining. People slowly remove themselves from reality and enter an alternate world of cyberspace. They only emerge from their rooms to use the bathroom and eat, scarcely resting. This can cause great tension or sorrow in families. Who can erase the horrifying stories of abduction from their memories? Online predators are highly dangerous and extremely clever. Your children could be talking to someone they believe is another teenager looking for a friend to console in when, really, they are a forty-year-old serial killer waiting to find the right time to attack. Studies show that one fourth of online users have had an encounter with a dangerous person.
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Dear people acknowledge great advances computers give us also put us disadvantages Computers known help develop health issues As people become intune online world tend interact family less Do nt forget danger online predators re deadly people nothing watch television often refered cauch potatoes Those glued computer screens better It stated numerous top doctors much time spent computer cause damage health Exercise highly stressed doctors around globe exercise computer addict typing storm They submerge obesity This often causes depression begins sink Addition serious health issue I would nt surprised add computer wing rehab centers sometime near future These problems slowly spreading must come together abolish Family time treasured value people lately computers ruining tradition With people absorbed online drama friends even video games family interaction declining People slowly remove reality enter alternate world cyberspace They emerge rooms use bathroom eat scarcely resting This cause great tension sorrow families Who erase horrifying stories abduction memories Online predators highly dangerous extremely clever Your children could talking someone believe another teenager looking friend console really fortyyearold serial killer waiting find right time attack Studies show one fourth online users encounter dangerous person
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Dear I feel that computers do take away from peoples life and arent as important than the other factors of life. First of all you know that the world is becoming obease because of lack of exercise. Also people don't realize that warming is becomeing a big problum. Finally familys arn't as close as they used to be. these are all the reasons why computers arn't important to human socioty. First of the world is becomeing obease and cumputers play a huge part in this. Computers don't make people exercise they basicly just sit down on there couch and use the computer this won't help amarica get back into shape. Also computers become a habbit if a person uses a computer everyday of there life it will become an addiction then they won't be able to stop. Finally when people use the computer they don't realize the lack exersise there getting. This is the first reason why computeres are a bad thing. Next warming is mealting the polar ice caps. Computers play a part in warming because they use electricty and thjen the electrisity melts the polar ice caps. If this keeps happining then they will all melt and we will not have a shorline and half of the world will be fluded. Finally computers play a huge part in warming because of the fact that they are so popular. This is another reason why computers are bad. Finally the last reason why computers are bad is because they take away from your family life. For instance there are more and more familys splitting up now and sientest sat that of the time it's because of technolagy. When on peroson is on the computer the other people feel that they love the computer more than they love themselfs. Then they split up for good. This is the last reason why I feel computers are bad. In conclution you can see that computeres are a bad thing. First of all you can see that amarica is becomeing obease because of the computers. Also computers are causeing warming and are eventually goung to flood the earth. And last but not least computers take away from peoples family life and cause them to split up and become unhappy. These are all the reasons why computers are bad.
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Dear I feel computers take away peoples life arent important factors life First know world becoming obease lack exercise Also people nt realize warming becomeing big problum Finally familys ar nt close used reasons computers ar nt important human socioty First world becomeing obease cumputers play huge part Computers nt make people exercise basicly sit couch use computer wo nt help amarica get back shape Also computers become habbit person uses computer everyday life become addiction wo nt able stop Finally people use computer nt realize lack exersise getting This first reason computeres bad thing Next warming mealting polar ice caps Computers play part warming use electricty thjen electrisity melts polar ice caps If keeps happining melt shorline half world fluded Finally computers play huge part warming fact popular This another reason computers bad Finally last reason computers bad take away family life For instance familys splitting sientest sat time s technolagy When peroson computer people feel love computer love themselfs Then split good This last reason I feel computers bad In conclution see computeres bad thing First see amarica becomeing obease computers Also computers causeing warming eventually goung flood earth And last least computers take away peoples family life cause split become unhappy These reasons computers bad
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Dear local newspaper I raed ur argument on the computers and I think they are a positive effect on people. The first reson I think they are a good effect is because you can do so much with them like if you live in mane and ur cuzin lives in califan you and him could have a wed chat. The second thing you could do is look up news any were in the world you could be stuck on a plane and it would be vary boring when you can take but ur computer and go on ur computer at work and start doing work. When you said it takes away from exirsis well some people use the computer for that too to chart how fast they run or how meny miles they want and sometimes what they eat. The thrid reson is some peolpe jobs are on the computers or making computers for exmple when you made this artical you didnt use a type writer you used a computer and printed it out if we didnt have computers it would make ur a lot harder. Thank you for reading and whe you are thinking adout it agen pleas consiter my thrie resons.
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Dear local newspaper I raed ur argument computers I think positive effect people The first reson I think good effect much like live mane ur cuzin lives califan could wed chat The second thing could look news world could stuck plane would vary boring take ur computer go ur computer work start work When said takes away exirsis well people use computer chart fast run meny miles want sometimes eat The thrid reson peolpe jobs computers making computers exmple made artical didnt use type writer used computer printed didnt computers would make ur lot harder Thank reading whe thinking adout agen pleas consiter thrie resons
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My three detaileds for this news paper article is one state you opinion about the effects of computers. Seconde give detailed resons that will persuade of the local newspaper to agree with yor postition. This are my three ideas to the news paper article. To bigin my opinion about the computer effects are wast time. Many people wast time computers like fat people insted by insted by in the computer go and run or exercising. Insted be computer go out ur girlfriend or family or family or friends to have fun. So be incomputer to long is bad many kids wach bad stuff like for adults. Is good to be in computer but not to long. To start you shod agree with me becasue my detailed and my reason. My resons are many airs the bas stuff like porn. Many kids wach that it ruins ther mainly and the futur. They get addicted to that watching. So people that use computer for good stuff its old for mids for good ganes of good. This are my detailed and resons for yor with me. To bigin and going to organize my ideas and well and present them clearly. It good to be at the computer but not the long insted go out plat and exersus. abd yor can enjoy life insted be in computer. The bad things many kids wach bad stuff and cmputer has relly bad staff. The computer is use for evrye thing this days. This how organize my ideas. In conclusion this are my ideas for the news papaer. Ols I state my opinion on computer effects. I give detailed and resons that will persuade local news paper and to agree with me. Think I organize my ideas as much present them clearly. This are my ideas so could new papaer to se computers effects.
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My three detaileds news paper article one state opinion effects computers Seconde give detailed resons persuade local newspaper agree yor postition This three ideas news paper article To bigin opinion computer effects wast time Many people wast time computers like fat people insted insted computer go run exercising Insted computer go ur girlfriend family family friends fun So incomputer long bad many kids wach bad stuff like adults Is good computer long To start shod agree becasue detailed reason My resons many airs bas stuff like porn Many kids wach ruins ther mainly futur They get addicted watching So people use computer good stuff old mids good ganes good This detailed resons yor To bigin going organize ideas well present clearly It good computer long insted go plat exersus abd yor enjoy life insted computer The bad things many kids wach bad stuff cmputer relly bad staff The computer use evrye thing days This organize ideas In conclusion ideas news papaer Ols I state opinion computer effects I give detailed resons persuade local news paper agree Think I organize ideas much present clearly This ideas could new papaer se computers effects
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Dear, In this world today we should have everyone useing computers. Computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places and people, and even allow people to talk online with other people. Today computers are like the worlds biggest book of knowledge. everything you need to know is in a computer. You can look up faraway places, and zap theres everything you need to know write in front of you. Computers are fast and easy, everyone can use them. Today kids are so addicted to computers everyday they are on them. There are so many websites that kids and teens go on, like and facebook ect. on these websites kids as young as ten years old are chatting with friends and putting up pictures. Thers is also webchat websites that allow you to use a webcame and talk to people anywhere in the world. Computers are a great way to get in touch with people. Everyone should have a computer in there home today.
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Dear In world today everyone useing computers Computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give people ability learn faraway places people even allow people talk online people Today computers like worlds biggest book knowledge everything need know computer You look faraway places zap theres everything need know write front Computers fast easy everyone use Today kids addicted computers everyday There many websites kids teens go like facebook ect websites kids young ten years old chatting friends putting pictures Thers also webchat websites allow use webcame talk people anywhere world Computers great way get touch people Everyone computer home today
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Dear The computer blinked to life and an image of a blonde haired girl filled the screen. It was easy to find out how life was in thanks to the actual girl explaining it. Going to the library wouldn't have filled one with this priceless information and human interection. Computers are a nessessity of life if soceity wishes to grow and expand. They should be supported because they teach hand eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about faraway places, and allow people to talk to others online. Firstly, computers help teach hand eye coordination. Hand-eye coordination is a useful ability that is usod to excel in sports. In a recent survey, of kids felt their hand eye coordination improves after computer use. Even a simple thing like tying can build up this skill. Famous neurologist stated in an article last week that, "@CAPS3 and computer strength the When on the computer, you automatically process what the eyes see into a command for your hands." hand eye coordination can improve people in sports such as baseball and basketball. If someone wan't to become better in these sports, all they'd need to do was turn on the computer. Once people become better at sports, they're more likely to play them and become more healthy. In reality, computers can help with exercising instead of decreasing it. Additionaly, computers allow people to access information about faraway places and people. If someone wanted to reasearch all they'd need to do was type in a search would be presented to them in it would link forever to search through countless things. Also, having the ability to learn about cultures can make peole peole and their cultures, they understand others something. Increase tolerance people are. Computers are a resourceful tool that they can help people in every different aspect of life. Lastly, computer and in technology can allow people to chat. Computer chat and video chat can help the all different nations. Bring on good terms places other than can help us understand story comes out about something that happend in people can just go on their computer and ask an actual citizen their take on the matter. Also, video chat and online conversation can cut down on expensive phone bills. No one wants to pay more than they have to in this economy. Another good point is that you can acess family members you scaresly visit. It can help you connect within your own family more. Oviously, computers are a useful aid in todays era. their advancements push the world foreward to a better place. Computers can help people because they help teach handeye coordination, give people the bility to learn about faraway places and people, and allow people to talk online with others. Think of a world with no computers or technologicall advancements. The world would be sectored and unified, contact between people scare, and information even. The internet is like thousands or librarys put together. Nobody would know much about other nations and news would travel slower. Is that the kind of palce you want people to live in?
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Dear The computer blinked life image blonde haired girl filled screen It easy find life thanks actual girl explaining Going library would nt filled one priceless information human interection Computers nessessity life soceity wishes grow expand They supported teach hand eye coordination give people ability learn faraway places allow people talk others online Firstly computers help teach hand eye coordination Handeye coordination useful ability usod excel sports In recent survey kids felt hand eye coordination improves computer use Even simple thing like tying build skill Famous neurologist stated article last week CAPS computer strength When computer automatically process eyes see command hands hand eye coordination improve people sports baseball basketball If someone wa nt become better sports d need turn computer Once people become better sports re likely play become healthy In reality computers help exercising instead decreasing Additionaly computers allow people access information faraway places people If someone wanted reasearch d need type search would presented would link forever search countless things Also ability learn cultures make peole peole cultures understand others something Increase tolerance people Computers resourceful tool help people every different aspect life Lastly computer technology allow people chat Computer chat video chat help different nations Bring good terms places help us understand story comes something happend people go computer ask actual citizen take matter Also video chat online conversation cut expensive phone bills No one wants pay economy Another good point acess family members scaresly visit It help connect within family Oviously computers useful aid todays era advancements push world foreward better place Computers help people help teach handeye coordination give people bility learn faraway places people allow people talk online others Think world computers technologicall advancements The world would sectored unified contact people scare information even The internet like thousands librarys put together Nobody would know much nations news would travel slower Is kind palce want people live
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Dear Local Newspaper, I belive that computers have a negative effect on peoples lives. I belive this because who spend to much time on the computer don't get out as much as they should, don't spend enough time with their family, and the computer can't do everything. My first reason is I belive that people need to get out more. When they don't get out, they don't exersise and that is very unhealthy. Instead of watching the games or the scores they should get out and play the game. I also belive that they should enjoy nature because I feel like they are wasting the beauty of nature all around them. We wouldn't want to waste our abilities and privalges would we? Another reason is that they do not spend enough time with family. If you have family near you, then you should take advantage of that and interact with one another. You can have fun with your family by playing games. You can also have fun by just hanging out, which boost your social skills and the computer can't always do that, which brings me to my next point. The computer can't do everything, so take advantage of what you have now. Some computer time is fine, but it can be very dangerous by getting addictted to it. The computer have lots of information, but there is nothing that you can't find in a book. Your computer can't love your dog, so there is a reason why we should get off the computer. There are pleanty of other things that you can do that you can't do on the computer, including sports, taking care of family, and any of your hobbys. Remember that the computer be great from time to time, but it can not live your life for you. That is why I belive that we should spend less time on the computer, and more time getting out, and having fun with family, and that the the computer can't do everything.
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Dear Local Newspaper I belive computers negative effect peoples lives I belive spend much time computer nt get much nt spend enough time family computer ca nt everything My first reason I belive people need get When nt get nt exersise unhealthy Instead watching games scores get play game I also belive enjoy nature I feel like wasting beauty nature around We would nt want waste abilities privalges would Another reason spend enough time family If family near take advantage interact one another You fun family playing games You also fun hanging boost social skills computer ca nt always brings next point The computer ca nt everything take advantage Some computer time fine dangerous getting addictted The computer lots information nothing ca nt find book Your computer ca nt love dog reason get computer There pleanty things ca nt computer including sports taking care family hobbys Remember computer great time time live life That I belive spend less time computer time getting fun family computer ca nt everything
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Dear Local Newspaper, I must admit that the experts are centainly right cause I know people that stay on the computer all day and thats really not good if you ask me. Instead of being on computers learning about faraway places, and talking to other people, you should go exercising, you should relax, and you should interact with family and friends. Exercising is much more better than being on a computer, and I say that to say this. When your on a computer just sitting there playing online games and checking other things out, or whatever the case be, you get board, and hungry, and I know theres some snacks around you while your doing whatever your doing. Instead of being on a computer for or hours or maybe even all day getting fat. There are many ways you can exercise. You can take walks, you can go joggin, you could play a sport, I mean there are a lot of things you can do when your not on a computer. I know some people that could be workin all day and still come home to there computer. Rest is good also. You don't always have to jump on your computer, you could just relax watch a movie, eat some pop corn and just enjoy yourself, you could even take a nap for a little while or something but you don't always have to get straight on your computer if you really don't have to use it. The way I see it is family, and computers are always going to be there but at the same time which one is more important. Friends aren't always dependable so you really don't need them around only a selected few, but thats not the point. Both family, and your true friends have feelings, and if your not spending time with them over a computer that your gonna have when you leave, and come back home too something isn't right. Tomorrow isn't promised, we live for today. So enjoy life while you got the chance, and spend time doing something active, with family and friends, and if your really into computers, try to balance your time out.
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Dear Local Newspaper I must admit experts centainly right cause I know people stay computer day thats really good ask Instead computers learning faraway places talking people go exercising relax interact family friends Exercising much better computer I say say When computer sitting playing online games checking things whatever case get board hungry I know theres snacks around whatever Instead computer hours maybe even day getting fat There many ways exercise You take walks go joggin could play sport I mean lot things computer I know people could workin day still come home computer Rest good also You nt always jump computer could relax watch movie eat pop corn enjoy could even take nap little something nt always get straight computer really nt use The way I see family computers always going time one important Friends nt always dependable really nt need around selected thats point Both family true friends feelings spending time computer gon na leave come back home something nt right Tomorrow nt promised live today So enjoy life got chance spend time something active family friends really computers try balance time
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Well computers can be a good or a bad thing. I don'@CAPS1 realy see computers can be a bad thing for me. I also know computers can or will help people all around the world. I think computers has positive effects on people like me. Computers teaches hand-eye coordination. It can help if you need to find out reasearch for a school project. You can create lots of things on computers like music, desiner logos, banners and lots of other creative things. With computer you can look up available homes and apartments. You can even go online and fill out a job application and save trips to stores cool is that!! Well im a regular person not rich not famous but computers provide lot of information people use today. Thats why I think that computers has a positive effects on people and you don'@CAPS1 have to be super smart to use one.
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Well computers good bad thing I CAPS realy see computers bad thing I also know computers help people around world I think computers positive effects people like Computers teaches handeye coordination It help need find reasearch school project You create lots things computers like music desiner logos banners lots creative things With computer look available homes apartments You even go online fill job application save trips stores cool Well im regular person rich famous computers provide lot information people use today Thats I think computers positive effects people CAPS super smart use one
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Dear of the daily, I am writing you to address the issue of computers in our society today. Each day new discoverys are made from the people that use computers in our society, however many people say that computers are harmful to are communtiy. Today I am going to convince you and society that computers are not as much as on issue as some people say they are. To begin with discoverys in our nation have been advancing rapidly. Each day new discoverys are benefiting our society however they are only being made possible by the help of computers. Without computers some for dieseases would have never been discovered and more people. Would have died. Secondly, computers have also increased medical care and have been the cave between life or death. Finnaly, computers help speed up production rates of cars household neccessitys, and many more objects. Have you ever been bored at home and looking for something to do on that dark, rainy, chilly night? Yes, exactly what I thought well the new technology advances in social-networking can even help the most bored and lonelyest people and give them something to do. Even if your just looking to talk to someone you can easily do that on the internet. So you people out there looking for that special someone will always be able to look somewhere. With all the social networks like twitter, myspace, facebook, and youtube you will always have something to do. During this economic recestion it seems that finding a job is so hard, however the internet comes to the rescue yet again. The internet can help you find a job twice if not three times as fast. Many people also speed up their word by using the computer. With microsoft things are lot easier to do work that you need to make up I hope that everyone can understand how much the computer help you, rather then hurt you. of the newspaper, I hope you and the rest of the community can see that computer help you more that they hurt you. Thank you very much for your time and effort that you put in to listen to me.
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Dear daily I writing address issue computers society today Each day new discoverys made people use computers society however many people say computers harmful communtiy Today I going convince society computers much issue people say To begin discoverys nation advancing rapidly Each day new discoverys benefiting society however made possible help computers Without computers dieseases would never discovered people Would died Secondly computers also increased medical care cave life death Finnaly computers help speed production rates cars household neccessitys many objects Have ever bored home looking something dark rainy chilly night Yes exactly I thought well new technology advances socialnetworking even help bored lonelyest people give something Even looking talk someone easily internet So people looking special someone always able look somewhere With social networks like twitter myspace facebook youtube always something During economic recestion seems finding job hard however internet comes rescue yet The internet help find job twice three times fast Many people also speed word using computer With microsoft things lot easier work need make I hope everyone understand much computer help rather hurt newspaper I hope rest community see computer help hurt Thank much time effort put listen
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Dear local Newspaper a take all your computer and given to the people around the world for the can stay in their houses chating with their family and friend. Computers help people around the world to connect with other people computer help kids do their homework and look up staff that happen around the world.
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Dear local Newspaper take computer given people around world stay houses chating family friend Computers help people around world connect people computer help kids homework look staff happen around world
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Dear local newspaper, you ever see a child on the computer for hours and nothing could get them off? Well I believe that this is very harmful for the child since it doesn't allow them to exersice, interact face to face with people or use their minds to the best of their The more and more we advance in society we get laziar and forget to about these essential things. I think taking a step back from using computers could benefit society more than using them. Obesity in the is at its highest of kids in the agree that they only exersice once a week and would rather spend time on the computer. Think of this, of kids. Thats more than of children. I took the and compared it in children who don't the benefit of this technology. I learned that of children there exersice only once a week. That's for less what these computers are doing to of children are overweight and of them develope heart of blood problems as adults. I by exercise in to go and play with friends or bike, or go for a jog. It doesn't sound hard does it? If we make a to spend this than on computers I think we can reduce this obesity amount and I believe ran as on overall country. On the computer we have popular websites like and More websites allow you interact with people over the island. This could be in more ways than one. These computer websites are allowing anyone to talk in people who could have the interest in mind. More than out of people in my school say they have one of these accounts and have personal posted on them. With this personal info, could and with these websites the crime rate has gone up Also, these websites cause people to their social skills. People spend hours on these websites talking to people and forget how to talk face to face. of students say they would say something online that they wouldn't say to someone's face. This creates more problems in schools and could possibly make someone hurt someone else or themselves. I've heard all over the news about suicides and because of computers and I believe with less of them people would spend more time with their family and or nation would be closer and safer. Computers dont allow you to explore nature and use your mind to the best of its ability. Computers make it easy and I myself, think it makes me laziar because it allow me to read a book there or read about other people, instead of going to a library and getting a book. Computers take away time to actually use your mind and problem solve in real life solution. There's years and I've learned I can be on the computer for hours playing them and not realize it at all. Without them, would make a difference. Kids are living through computers and we can change them.
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Dear local newspaper ever see child computer hours nothing could get Well I believe harmful child since nt allow exersice interact face face people use minds best The advance society get laziar forget essential things I think taking step back using computers could benefit society using Obesity highest kids agree exersice week would rather spend time computer Think kids Thats children I took compared children nt benefit technology I learned children exersice week That s less computers children overweight develope heart blood problems adults I exercise go play friends bike go jog It nt sound hard If make spend computers I think reduce obesity amount I believe ran overall country On computer popular websites like More websites allow interact people island This could ways one These computer websites allowing anyone talk people could interest mind More people school say one accounts personal posted With personal info could websites crime rate gone Also websites cause people social skills People spend hours websites talking people forget talk face face students say would say something online would nt say someone s face This creates problems schools could possibly make someone hurt someone else I ve heard news suicides computers I believe less people would spend time family nation would closer safer Computers dont allow explore nature use mind best ability Computers make easy I think makes laziar allow read book read people instead going library getting book Computers take away time actually use mind problem solve real life solution There s years I ve learned I computer hours playing realize Without would make difference Kids living computers change
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Dear local newspaper, I've heard that not many people think computers benefit society. I disagree with that. Computers benefit society by teaching hand-eye coordination, allowing people to learn about foregin places, and allow people to communicate with others online. Some people were basically born with hand-eye coordination, but most people weren't, like me, for example. But, thanks to computers, my hand-eye coordination has gone up! "On average, computers can increase a persons hand-eye coordination by up to says Think of it, just by learning to tye, your hand-eye coordination can go up That's amazing! Having good hand-eye coordination will get you far in life, and helps with small, everyday things such as playing an instrument, or doing household chores. It also helps in sports. You need good hand-eye coordination to throw, catch, and aim. If more people spend more time on the computer, then the population's hand-eye coordination would increase, and who wouldn't want thats. Have you ever heard of It is a country in that no one really knows much about. By looking it up on the computer, you can become an expert on the country! The computer gives us access to a lot of knowledge, and will make us more of people around the world. This can improve our travel. Instead of going to the same place every vacation, you can go to a place you saw online that looks just as exciting. Also, by learning about other countries and the people in them, we gain respect for them. We also learn about their traditions, and culture. "The internet gives us access to the world," says "we can learn so many new things that will make us more of people, countries, and the environment." is right, we can also be aware of the environment. Since global warming is a problem, we can learn how o preserve foreign places by learning about them on the internet. With a click of a mouse you can virtually have the whose world at your fingertips! In a recent study of people said they don't have time to meet with old friends. The internet, however has made it quick and easy to talk to people online. Websites like and can keep your social life in tact, and can even reunite yu with old friends. For example, suggest family. You can keep in touch wih many people trough Also, you can make new friends. Most teens say they are always willing to meet new people, and the internet is a great way to do so! Sites like and can can help you find friends by connecting you in a chat room to a random person, just to talk. I once talked with someone on for over an hour! We found that we both have accounts and keep in touch there! This also helps you gain confidence because you have the courage to say something over the computer that you would't say real life. The computer can really amp up your social life. As you can see. computers don't just "your barain," they imprdove hand-eye coordination, help you learn about far away places, and improve your social life by allowing you to talk to others. Computers benefit the society more than anymore will ever know!
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Dear local newspaper I ve heard many people think computers benefit society I disagree Computers benefit society teaching handeye coordination allowing people learn foregin places allow people communicate others online Some people basically born handeye coordination people nt like example But thanks computers handeye coordination gone On average computers increase persons handeye coordination says Think learning tye handeye coordination go That s amazing Having good handeye coordination get far life helps small everyday things playing instrument household chores It also helps sports You need good handeye coordination throw catch aim If people spend time computer population s handeye coordination would increase would nt want thats Have ever heard It country one really knows much By looking computer become expert country The computer gives us access lot knowledge make us people around world This improve travel Instead going place every vacation go place saw online looks exciting Also learning countries people gain respect We also learn traditions culture The internet gives us access world says learn many new things make us people countries environment right also aware environment Since global warming problem learn preserve foreign places learning internet With click mouse virtually whose world fingertips In recent study people said nt time meet old friends The internet however made quick easy talk people online Websites like keep social life tact even reunite yu old friends For example suggest family You keep touch wih many people trough Also make new friends Most teens say always willing meet new people internet great way Sites like help find friends connecting chat room random person talk I talked someone hour We found accounts keep touch This also helps gain confidence courage say something computer wouldt say real life The computer really amp social life As see computers nt barain imprdove handeye coordination help learn far away places improve social life allowing talk others Computers benefit society anymore ever know
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Dear off, I beileve that computers are very helpfull to many people by looking up information, or talking to friends. Although many kids should be spending their time outside, the computer is a well-occupied environment that helps kids learn and interact with others. I believe kids should have the right to stay on the computer as long as they desire. Although, they should always make time go outside, hang out with friends, ect. The computer be fun but its always important to get outside and enjoy nature. Another reason why students should not spend all their time on the computer is because of their health. If a child gets addicted to the computer it will affect how he interacts with other and do serious damage to their brain. Although, I believe children should have the right on the computer, it's always important to spend time outside enjoying nature. Another reason why I think children should have the right to the computer is because of the information they learn and discover. Many kids grow up to have a career in computer makings or program designing. Some kids have their education online or to teach others. The computer is a non-stop generation of intelligence based to help people learn, play and discover. Many people have dream to one day build a computer or make new programs. All students should have the right to spend time on the computer but also to save time to spend outside and with friends. Everyone has their own perspective on how they think and if staying on the computer all day is a good thing. I do not think kids should do this because it might affect their health and how other think of them.
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Dear I beileve computers helpfull many people looking information talking friends Although many kids spending time outside computer welloccupied environment helps kids learn interact others I believe kids right stay computer long desire Although always make time go outside hang friends ect The computer fun always important get outside enjoy nature Another reason students spend time computer health If child gets addicted computer affect interacts serious damage brain Although I believe children right computer s always important spend time outside enjoying nature Another reason I think children right computer information learn discover Many kids grow career computer makings program designing Some kids education online teach others The computer nonstop generation intelligence based help people learn play discover Many people dream one day build computer make new programs All students right spend time computer also save time spend outside friends Everyone perspective think staying computer day good thing I think kids might affect health think
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Do you think that computers are useless? Or do you think they could be useful in many ways? I remember my older sister had to do some research on the computer gave her all of the information she needed. The issue to grapple with is, more and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. I strongly think that does benifit society in many ways! Heres why, the computer allows you to get in touch with friends, research people, places or things, and relax and enjoy playing on a fun, entertaining website! My first reason is that allows you to talk to family or friends so you all get back in touch if a friend of yours moved to a diffrent state, then you can easily get back in touch straight from the computer. "@CAPS2's nice to send emails or pictures to friends, but if you do from the computer then gets done so much faster!" one of my neighbors. My next reason is that you can research anything you want like people, places or things and all refferances will come up. is good to research for any projects, or school assignments you have. I remember my brother was working on his project. Everything he had trouble with, he found directly on the computer! My final reason is that there are alot of fun and exciting websites that you can relax and play on! These websites can keep you busy, and you wont be bored while playing! "@CAPS4 im bored I go on the computer and play games, that I find on my younger cousin, Computers make people become adicted to them. Yes but, you will be learning some interesting things on how the internet works. More and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society. I strongly beleive that they do benefit society, heres why you can get in touch with people, you can research, and play fun games! now or never to decide what you think! Call me and we will talk this through.
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Do think computers useless Or think could useful many ways I remember older sister research computer gave information needed The issue grapple people use computers everyone agrees benefits society I strongly think benifit society many ways Heres computer allows get touch friends research people places things relax enjoy playing fun entertaining website My first reason allows talk family friends get back touch friend moved diffrent state easily get back touch straight computer CAPS s nice send emails pictures friends computer gets done much faster one neighbors My next reason research anything want like people places things refferances come good research projects school assignments I remember brother working project Everything trouble found directly computer My final reason alot fun exciting websites relax play These websites keep busy wont bored playing CAPS im bored I go computer play games I find younger cousin Computers make people become adicted Yes learning interesting things internet works More people use computers everyone agrees benefits society I strongly beleive benefit society heres get touch people research play fun games never decide think Call talk
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Computers a good because you can get infermation, you can play games, you can get pictures, But when you on the computer you might find something or someone that is bad or is viris. If ther is a vris you might want shut off the computers so it does not get worse. The are websites for kids, like games, there are teen games, there are adult games. Also pictures are bad for kids because most of the time they lead to inapropreit pictures. You should only look up infermation that you need not things like wepons or knifes. Also there are differnt kinds of companies like is a good place to get computers so is
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Computers good get infermation play games get pictures But computer might find something someone bad viris If ther vris might want shut computers get worse The websites kids like games teen games adult games Also pictures bad kids time lead inapropreit pictures You look infermation need things like wepons knifes Also differnt kinds companies like good place get computers
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Dear Newspaper, Computers are high tec and have expanded in an everyday thing. They play a big role in society. Computers have been improved to do many different things without them we would barely get any thing done. Although kids should start goind outside more, computers teaches kids new things, and it is useful. With computers kids are rarely going outside. A lot of our population of the are obese, including kids. Because of this they are staying inside and on their computer. Kids need to go outside evry once and while to get some fresh air and exercise. If they limit their time on the computer and do some active game it would be better for the child. Since computers are rapidly growing and adapting kids spend half of the day on it just stareing at the screen playing some flash game, like run escape. Instead of wasteing their time doing that they should go outside, take a walk just do something! Computers teaches kids new things. Google something like trees. You would get bunch of websites containg information about trees. Kids also play games, if they don't know it, some of the games they play are teaching them stuff, for an example, my little sister, goes on a site called nickeloden.com I see that right and it teaches her stuff she didn't know before. from those types of games it prepared her for kindergarden. Now a days more and more sites keep adapting and becoming known like bing. Computers are real useful. suppose you want to know whats goind on at work. So click your mouse on internet explorer and get your email. With computers, you could go on social networking sites, like facebook and connect with friends. You can also go on instant messageing site to talk to friends and see what there up to. For your entertainment you could play games. Remember though to not stay on too long. Computers are big deal in our community. Life would be very difficult without them. But remember not to stay on too long! Although kids should start going outside, computers, teaches kids new things, and is useful.
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Dear Newspaper Computers high tec expanded everyday thing They play big role society Computers improved many different things without would barely get thing done Although kids start goind outside computers teaches kids new things useful With computers kids rarely going outside A lot population obese including kids Because staying inside computer Kids need go outside evry get fresh air exercise If limit time computer active game would better child Since computers rapidly growing adapting kids spend half day stareing screen playing flash game like run escape Instead wasteing time go outside take walk something Computers teaches kids new things Google something like trees You would get bunch websites containg information trees Kids also play games nt know games play teaching stuff example little sister goes site called nickelodencom I see right teaches stuff nt know types games prepared kindergarden Now days sites keep adapting becoming known like bing Computers real useful suppose want know whats goind work So click mouse internet explorer get email With computers could go social networking sites like facebook connect friends You also go instant messageing site talk friends see For entertainment could play games Remember though stay long Computers big deal community Life would difficult without But remember stay long Although kids start going outside computers teaches kids new things useful
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Dear local newspaper, people throughout the world use, or own computers. Although there are people who think computers are good for you, others could say different. While you are on the computer you can become more socal by talking with friends or family. Also, while you are on the computer you not notice it but; your hand-eye coordination is improving, and finally, you are able to search with a click of a button, instead of searching your topic through dozens of books. Computers have very benefits. One being chating, or talking online to friends, and family. You have a distant friend that you haven't talked to in a while. With a computre you are able to re connect with your buddy. If you have an acount that is safe to chat on, you be able to make new friends. That would be good for you, socally. It is always good to have friends, and stay in touch with family. Some people find it hard to play a piano because they cannot look at the music and have their hands be doing something else. On a computre your hand-eye-coordination improves over time because, you are searching a topic as your hands are typing. Also, this is a great memory excirsise for your fingers. You eventually memorize where all of the keys are located. People without computres have to search through books to find information on their topic. Others with computers, just have to type in their topic and all the information they need is right infront of them. You are able to see pictures of your topic or even video's! Not books that I know, can search a topic, show you pictures, and videos of it with one resource! people debate the fact if computres are good for you or not. If you ask me, computres are great for people. It allows people to be socal, and talk to old friends; it also improves your hand-eye coordination, and finally; it gives you the option to search a topic without all the hastle of searching through dozens of books. So now the question is up to you; are computers good for people, or not?
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Dear local newspaper people throughout world use computers Although people think computers good others could say different While computer become socal talking friends family Also computer notice handeye coordination improving finally able search click button instead searching topic dozens books Computers benefits One chating talking online friends family You distant friend nt talked With computre able connect buddy If acount safe chat able make new friends That would good socally It always good friends stay touch family Some people find hard play piano look music hands something else On computre handeyecoordination improves time searching topic hands typing Also great memory excirsise fingers You eventually memorize keys located People without computres search books find information topic Others computers type topic information need right infront You able see pictures topic even video s Not books I know search topic show pictures videos one resource people debate fact computres good If ask computres great people It allows people socal talk old friends also improves handeye coordination finally gives option search topic without hastle searching dozens books So question computers good people
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Dear Newspaper People, I think that computers do benefit society for a few reasons. Computers make work easier they can do things people can't like solve difficult problems, and kids like playing games on them. Computers make work easier and neater. Typing is often faster than writing, and is always easier to read. Studies have also shown that people who use computers to do work finish faster and have up to more free time to do whatever they want. Computers also have e-mail, which allows you to send work that you have done to your boss without printing it and wasting paper. Computers can solve difficult problems that people either can't do, or don't want to waste their time doing. If you need to solve a math problem you use a calculated or a computer. So you don't have to figure it out yourself. I have to do a lot of math problems for homework and I think it is much easier to use a calculator. My last reason why computers are good is that kids like playing games on them. A lot of people say that kids shouldn't play computer games but some of them are educational. Even non-educational games help kids to have fun and have something to look forward to after their work is done. of kids say that they are happier when they have something fun to look forward to, and happier kids do better work. I hope that after reading this you will understand how much computers contribute to society.
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Dear Newspaper People I think computers benefit society reasons Computers make work easier things people ca nt like solve difficult problems kids like playing games Computers make work easier neater Typing often faster writing always easier read Studies also shown people use computers work finish faster free time whatever want Computers also email allows send work done boss without printing wasting paper Computers solve difficult problems people either ca nt nt want waste time If need solve math problem use calculated computer So nt figure I lot math problems homework I think much easier use calculator My last reason computers good kids like playing games A lot people say kids nt play computer games educational Even noneducational games help kids fun something look forward work done kids say happier something fun look forward happier kids better work I hope reading understand much computers contribute society
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I agree that computers deffinately are an advantage to our society. I think this because they help us communicate and video chat with family and friends online, used as a great tool with school work, or work purposes. Most of all for the enjoyment of children and now the fun computer games help them prepare for real life consequences,like how the game webkinz teaches kids to care for pets. "@CAPS1 you have a my "@CAPS6, please friend request me", I replied. Later that night, I get home and check my a new notification pops up and I am now friends with my My entire family is on and I think it's so usefull for several reasons, like making plans and parties. I hate writing invitations, but now every year for my birthday party I just type them up, taking less than five minutes. Or, for an even simpler way of sending invatations you can even just type an email or message. In fact, I just got invited to a party yesterday over It's so easy, you just create an event and tag all of your friends in the note. Also, it's so easy to get because you automatically get notified. Technology like this drastically makes life easier. For example, have you ever gotten something new and just can't wait to show your friends? Well, now you can, in the comfort of your own home. All you need is a webcam and you can instantly connect with one of your friends that have one too. "@CAPS14, I love what you've done to your room, the pink wallpaper is so cute!" I said. "@CAPS15 you! I love your hair today. It's so pretty," says I love webcamming with my friends because you can see and hear them as if they were in the same exact you. As you can see, webcamming is so much easier than spending more time money, and my moms time and getting a ride over her house. Computers make life so much more convienent. Another example how this is so much easier is now computers help you with school work. Have you ever had to write a report? Well, now many times teachers especially enjoy them typed because many students have messy hand writing and most kids won't like writing it anyways. Like myself, I type faster than I write and that's why I agree that computers benefit society. Most importantly, computers can help you find a good job online and even help type a great resume for you. How impressive would that be? If I was applying for a professional position of a job, I know I'll type my resume. In conclusion, that's how computers are so helpful, beneficial, important and fun to our society.
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I agree computers deffinately advantage society I think help us communicate video chat family friends online used great tool school work work purposes Most enjoyment children fun computer games help prepare real life consequences like game webkinz teaches kids care pets CAPS CAPS please friend request I replied Later night I get home check new notification pops I friends My entire family I think s usefull several reasons like making plans parties I hate writing invitations every year birthday party I type taking less five minutes Or even simpler way sending invatations even type email message In fact I got invited party yesterday It s easy create event tag friends note Also s easy get automatically get notified Technology like drastically makes life easier For example ever gotten something new ca nt wait show friends Well comfort home All need webcam instantly connect one friends one CAPS I love ve done room pink wallpaper cute I said CAPS I love hair today It s pretty says I love webcamming friends see hear exact As see webcamming much easier spending time money moms time getting ride house Computers make life much convienent Another example much easier computers help school work Have ever write report Well many times teachers especially enjoy typed many students messy hand writing kids wo nt like writing anyways Like I type faster I write s I agree computers benefit society Most importantly computers help find good job online even help type great resume How impressive would If I applying professional position job I know I ll type resume In conclusion s computers helpful beneficial important fun society
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Dear Local Newspaper, name is and I am a citizen. I believe that computers do NOT benefit society of all! In opinion, they make our town worse. People spend way too much time on their computers and less time exercising, enjoying nature, and interacting with family and friends. All of these things are computers are doing to our society and it's time to make a stop to it! First of all, people are on the computer way too much. Teens are on social networking sites, adults are on chatrooms, and kids are playing computer games. Instead of that, people should be playing outside, or going for a walk in the park. Did you know that of adults are overweight? If people cut back the amount of time indoors, we could probably bring that number way down. Also, who knows teens are doing on the computer. Computers have good things but they can also be bad. For example, chatrooms who knows kind of people are in chatrooms. Children need to be careful about they say or show on the internet. Instead of playing games or talking to their boyfriends and girlfriends, teens should go outside and exercise. Second, more citizens need to enjoy nature and the beautiful senery around them. Were all so busy running to check our e-mail, we don't notice a beautiful day it is outside. On a nice or day, people should take this kids to a local park or pond. This reminds me of last when I went to cousins house. aunt only allowed us to watch one hour as a day, that included the computer. We were outside every single day, even if we were just staring into the clouds. This kept us active and enjoy the environment. last reason why computers are badly affecting society is that computers take time away from interacting with family and friends. I know your thinking, when your on the computer you are talking to family and friends, but it isn't the same. Instead of instant messaging call them. Maybe even invite them our to talk face to face. That reminds me of sister. When I get home, she will normally be on Now, instead of getting up and coming to talk to me she will text me "@CAPS3's up?" or "@CAPS4 was your day?" Computers help people communicate, but they also take communication away. As you can see, I have given you three reasons why I strongly believe computers are badly Not only but everywhere! You need to open your eyes and understand that people spend way too much time on computers, they allow people to not enjoy nature, or interact with their families. Please I'm asking you to understand that our society will crash it we don't fix this issue. So are you going to do about it?
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Dear Local Newspaper name I citizen I believe computers NOT benefit society In opinion make town worse People spend way much time computers less time exercising enjoying nature interacting family friends All things computers society s time make stop First people computer way much Teens social networking sites adults chatrooms kids playing computer games Instead people playing outside going walk park Did know adults overweight If people cut back amount time indoors could probably bring number way Also knows teens computer Computers good things also bad For example chatrooms knows kind people chatrooms Children need careful say show internet Instead playing games talking boyfriends girlfriends teens go outside exercise Second citizens need enjoy nature beautiful senery around Were busy running check email nt notice beautiful day outside On nice day people take kids local park pond This reminds last I went cousins house aunt allowed us watch one hour day included computer We outside every single day even staring clouds This kept us active enjoy environment last reason computers badly affecting society computers take time away interacting family friends I know thinking computer talking family friends nt Instead instant messaging call Maybe even invite talk face face That reminds sister When I get home normally Now instead getting coming talk text CAPS s CAPS day Computers help people communicate also take communication away As see I given three reasons I strongly believe computers badly Not everywhere You need open eyes understand people spend way much time computers allow people enjoy nature interact families Please I m asking understand society crash nt fix issue So going
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Dear, I think the effects that computers do on people are really positive. Computers can be used for all sorts of things. Examples like finding things out about history. People that changed the world and other information. Computers give the power for children to learn. For example, their are lots of websites that offer online tutoring or good ways to help you pass school. Other positive way is online dateing sites. You can meet new people and is a good way to make life even better. Popular sites like and so on make a good way to keep in touch with friends from your past, or even make new ones. But the most that I think thats the best in my opinion is going to school online. Once your done with colloge and you are a nuse, for an example you can get a higher degree like a registered nurse then being a I think computers has a positive effect on people.
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Dear I think effects computers people really positive Computers used sorts things Examples like finding things history People changed world information Computers give power children learn For example lots websites offer online tutoring good ways help pass school Other positive way online dateing sites You meet new people good way make life even better Popular sites like make good way keep touch friends past even make new ones But I think thats best opinion going school online Once done colloge nuse example get higher degree like registered nurse I think computers positive effect people
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Dear is a rumor going around saying that computers are a negitive affect in a childs life. I disagree. A computer can help a kid in so many ways, it can help students with homework, let students talk to friends, and help with school projects. And besides, most kids don't don't stay on the computer very long anyways. Homeworks, it's a big role in school, if you don't do it or worse don't get it can you down. That's why computers have websites that help a child learn how do do a problem or a social studies question if they don't know. If you go to the school web page then theres a link that brings you in a math games. Theres even a to a science website. This helps a child so they don't get stressed out over homework. A computer also helps a students interact with friends. A social life is very important to a grater. This is where a computer can have aim, facebook, and even myspace help a kid impact with friends. If a kid got into a fight at school can come home and to work it out and not leave it unseatled. A computer also new friends from other towns. Teens need to and make new friesnd will helps as in life. If a teen helps with a then they can ask a for help. Every student gets a take home project at social point in the time of running out to the store to buy paper and pencils. you can stay home, have money and typee the essay. Computers can help with a social studies or a science project. You can print pictures and find information. Drawing can be a hastle and messy, so it saves time and the mess. If are words you dont understandd then you can look them out. Computers are and best way to do a project. Computers, everyone uses them, they help our parents just as much as uss. They help us with homework, let us talk to friends, and even help us do our projects! Computers are one of the best technology we have
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Dear rumor going around saying computers negitive affect childs life I disagree A computer help kid many ways help students homework let students talk friends help school projects And besides kids nt nt stay computer long anyways Homeworks s big role school nt worse nt get That s computers websites help child learn problem social studies question nt know If go school web page theres link brings math games Theres even science website This helps child nt get stressed homework A computer also helps students interact friends A social life important grater This computer aim facebook even myspace help kid impact friends If kid got fight school come home work leave unseatled A computer also new friends towns Teens need make new friesnd helps life If teen helps ask help Every student gets take home project social point time running store buy paper pencils stay home money typee essay Computers help social studies science project You print pictures find information Drawing hastle messy saves time mess If words dont understandd look Computers best way project Computers everyone uses help parents much uss They help us homework let us talk friends even help us projects Computers one best technology
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Dear I think computers have a positive effect on people. Where would we be without them? Computers teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about any subject they want, and allow people to communicate with each other, no matter how far away. Obviously, computers are beneficial. I think computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, as I said earlier. I know people say that where you are on be computer, you spend less time exercising, but the computers help you with you throwing skills. Hand ey coordination also applies for if you want to be a surgeon/doctor. You need to have steady hands. What we ready to do whatever is needed. See, they do have a positive effect. I think computers have a positive effect on people. They give people the ability to learn about anything they want on the internet. Say you want to be an engineer when you grow up, you might want to learn anything and everything you can to be successful later on in that carer. What about a doctor, you would want to know how many years of college and med school are required to get your medical degree. A computer helps you learn about those things. It can also teach you about tons of other things. Again, how could they not be positive. I think computers have a positive effect on people. Another thing they can do out of a hundred others is let you communicate with other people no matter how far away. Mail can so my where with enough, yes, but is free and gets there in less than a minutes where mail can lake weeks to go far. For example, what if you came from another country. You wouldn't want to lose touch with people you grew-up with. With a computer, you could use skype to see now new the person. Talking on the phone or mailing doesn't even compare to that. You could never lose touch! Computers help people do all kinds of things. I conclusion, computers have a positive effect on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, give people the ability to learn about any subject they want, and allow people to communicate with each other, no matter how far away. There are no bad reason that could top any of these. They make sense. So, what do you think? Do you think they are good for us, or do we need less computers?
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Dear I think computers positive effect people Where would without Computers teach handeye coordination give people ability learn subject want allow people communicate matter far away Obviously computers beneficial I think computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination I said earlier I know people say computer spend less time exercising computers help throwing skills Hand ey coordination also applies want surgeondoctor You need steady hands What ready whatever needed See positive effect I think computers positive effect people They give people ability learn anything want internet Say want engineer grow might want learn anything everything successful later carer What doctor would want know many years college med school required get medical degree A computer helps learn things It also teach tons things Again could positive I think computers positive effect people Another thing hundred others let communicate people matter far away Mail enough yes free gets less minutes mail lake weeks go far For example came another country You would nt want lose touch people grewup With computer could use skype see new person Talking phone mailing nt even compare You could never lose touch Computers help people kinds things I conclusion computers positive effect people They teach handeye coordination give people ability learn subject want allow people communicate matter far away There bad reason could top They make sense So think Do think good us need less computers
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Dear Have you ever wondered what effect computers have on people? It is a very negative effect. Computers are one of the main reasons of why kids do not exercise and become obese, it can effect students' grades, and by being on the you are isolating yourself from your loved ones. First of all, more and more kids are using computers way more often than they should. The result of this, you ask? Since computers are used daily, especially by young adolescents, it is likely for that child to become obese. Researches from well-known colleges, such as and discovered that of kids who spend more than two hours on the are obese or will become heavier when they are older. After speaking with graduate from he told me that when children spend more time on the they are doing nothing but staring at a bright screen that can damage their eyes, and not spending their time outside enjoying the beautiful weather. As a consequence, kids start to gain body fat from sitting on a coach staring at the all day instead of exercising! My second reason of why computers are a negative effects on kids is that it can harm your grades! After I spoke with a current student at she told me that the reason why her grades drop is because she is too busy on etc. She does not focus on her work like she should and because she doesn't, her grades go from to low This shows that even "A" students are getting bad grades from being on the Additionally, from being on the so much and not paying attention at work, it can effect your best grades on the This shows that by always going on the you hurt your academic skills. My last and final reason of why computers have a negative effect on children is because it harms your social skills of being on outgoing, talkative individual! Everytime you log into that death trap device, your selfesteem becomes lower because you never talk to friends or call them. You just sit on a hard chair, looking at an electronics device that is going to take you no where in life. Also, you are pushing your loved ones away by being on You will end up never spend time with them and you will never call your friends to see what they are up to if you keep on going on the Furthermore, if your mom or dad tells you to get off your you become cranky and rude to your family just becuase you want to go back on your favorite electronic device. Do you really want to act that way to your family? So, in summing up, computers are a negative effect on many young individuals, and the reasons for this are that you have less time to exercise, it harms your grades, and you are not able to be as interactive with people by being on the The real question is, though, is do you think computers have a negative or positive effect on people?
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Dear Have ever wondered effect computers people It negative effect Computers one main reasons kids exercise become obese effect students grades isolating loved ones First kids using computers way often The result ask Since computers used daily especially young adolescents likely child become obese Researches wellknown colleges discovered kids spend two hours obese become heavier older After speaking graduate told children spend time nothing staring bright screen damage eyes spending time outside enjoying beautiful weather As consequence kids start gain body fat sitting coach staring day instead exercising My second reason computers negative effects kids harm grades After I spoke current student told reason grades drop busy etc She focus work like nt grades go low This shows even A students getting bad grades Additionally much paying attention work effect best grades This shows always going hurt academic skills My last final reason computers negative effect children harms social skills outgoing talkative individual Everytime log death trap device selfesteem becomes lower never talk friends call You sit hard chair looking electronics device going take life Also pushing loved ones away You end never spend time never call friends see keep going Furthermore mom dad tells get become cranky rude family becuase want go back favorite electronic device Do really want act way family So summing computers negative effect many young individuals reasons less time exercise harms grades able interactive people The real question though think computers negative positive effect people
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Dear has been brought to my attention that some people feel that computers are bad for us. Some people say that they are a distraction to our physicaland mental health. Although I can see how some people would think this, I believe that computers are a good benifit to all society. I believe this because computers can help people learn, stay intach with friends or family that live faraway, and stay orginized. Sometimes people are on the computer, learning and they don't even know Simply by visiting the homepage, you automaticly see the news feeds of things happening around the world. Other times people go online diliberatly to learn. If someone is thinking about going to then they would probably go on the internet to learn about Simply by searching equadore many choices will pop up you climate, sesonal weather, hotel options, and other farts. But thats not the only way people are learning on the internet. Now, many college students have the option of taking their lessons online. This is because some students like calm quietness or own house the distractions of sitting in class. Friends could be a big distraction in class, but how can you stay intouch with your friends if they moved away? I remember in second grade my bestfriend, move away. I was so sad. I badey ever talked to her, but then one day our parents set us up on a vidio chat! I felt like I was right their with her! This was great, and I though about how many people could use this to talk to relatives or friends. Another great way to stay intouch into friends and family is through e-mail. By writing a message and sending can make staying in touch so easey, and your personal wants can chat and emails are a easey thing to send world wide. So many people love to type on a keyboard as well, but so many different papers that you type could be lost. I, for me, hate clutter, and I have so many school binders for papers to be lost in. This is why I take great advantage of typing my paper every chance I get. My computer keeps me orginiced because I could never loose my work. File save, is an idiot proof way to keep all your files in a safe place. Then all you have to do is press print to get a hard copy. I am sure that many people love using their computer for the same reason. Also, I myself am a much faster typer than I am writer so my work is a lot needey on the computer. As you can see their are plenty of reasons why using a computer is goof for our society you can learn, stay intouch with friends and family, and stay orginiced. Many people, could agree with me. Don't you?
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Dear brought attention people feel computers bad us Some people say distraction physicaland mental health Although I see people would think I believe computers good benifit society I believe computers help people learn stay intach friends family live faraway stay orginized Sometimes people computer learning nt even know Simply visiting homepage automaticly see news feeds things happening around world Other times people go online diliberatly learn If someone thinking going would probably go internet learn Simply searching equadore many choices pop climate sesonal weather hotel options farts But thats way people learning internet Now many college students option taking lessons online This students like calm quietness house distractions sitting class Friends could big distraction class stay intouch friends moved away I remember second grade bestfriend move away I sad I badey ever talked one day parents set us vidio chat I felt like I right This great I though many people could use talk relatives friends Another great way stay intouch friends family email By writing message sending make staying touch easey personal wants chat emails easey thing send world wide So many people love type keyboard well many different papers type could lost I hate clutter I many school binders papers lost This I take great advantage typing paper every chance I get My computer keeps orginiced I could never loose work File save idiot proof way keep files safe place Then press print get hard copy I sure many people love using computer reason Also I much faster typer I writer work lot needey computer As see plenty reasons using computer goof society learn stay intouch friends family stay orginiced Many people could agree Do nt
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Dear local Newspaper, in the society we live in, more and more people are using computer including me. The computor in my opinion has to be one of the best inventions ever. The bad part is that these "exports" think spending time on the computer is a bad idea when they fail to see the good in computers. Student can use computers to get information on almost about anything, you could use computer to talk to friend and family members, and you confuse it as a navigator to find directions to a certain location if you cant find your way or if your lost. One of the best things about computers is that you can find various amounts of information. That opition is useful for children that attend school , looking to find information for a certain project they need to finish. You can also use the information on the computer to study if your textbook isnt doing you only good. Also if a student is looking for a job in their local area they look on the internet for jobs needing employees. Computers also can be used for communication. You could have a long lost realtive you havent spoken to in a while, you can easily find him on the internet. Online communicating is also good for chatting with schoolmates if you forgot the homework or need help with homework. Im not a big fan of this but online chatting can be use for online dating if your to lazy to go out. One of my favorite options on the computer is that you can use it to navigate a certain location you want to go to. Lets just say you forgot where a relatives house is you can easily type in your address and his address and easily get directions. You can use this method for almost anywhere you want to go. If this did not convince you that that a computer is a great piece of technology, then your crazy. The computers is like a magical box that can be used for anything so I advice you get one.
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Dear local Newspaper society live people using computer including The computor opinion one best inventions ever The bad part exports think spending time computer bad idea fail see good computers Student use computers get information almost anything could use computer talk friend family members confuse navigator find directions certain location cant find way lost One best things computers find various amounts information That opition useful children attend school looking find information certain project need finish You also use information computer study textbook isnt good Also student looking job local area look internet jobs needing employees Computers also used communication You could long lost realtive havent spoken easily find internet Online communicating also good chatting schoolmates forgot homework need help homework Im big fan online chatting use online dating lazy go One favorite options computer use navigate certain location want go Lets say forgot relatives house easily type address address easily get directions You use method almost anywhere want go If convince computer great piece technology crazy The computers like magical box used anything I advice get one
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Dear local Newspaper A lot more people uses computers daily but not everyone agrees that it benefits society. Those people who supports advsnces in technology believe that computers have a positive effect on the people and I agree on some circumstances but looking at the situation cleary I dont agree due to the fact that its better not spending to much time on the computers. First because its way better excercising, enjoying nature and lastly interacting with family. why I dont agree that people should be in ther computer more their doing things better in life. First, becacuse it's useful to exercise. Talking a walk around the nieghborhood of just going for a hike with people you know. Even better going to the gym its such a better way to spend your evening instead sitting infront of a computer doing nothing but to look at a screen all day and plus exercising makes you stay in perfect fit, healthy and strong for as long as you live. A computer can just kill you not in reality but sitting all day only on the computer eating when you feel like it and no exercise that is whats going to kill you and make you become so lazy to do nothing. I know nobody would want that for sure. enjoy nature live life the way it needs to. Gods creations of nature is the must beautiful thing in this world dont let it go all to waist. Jump off a waterfall or go to the park let the wind hit your face. Make imaginations become real and just enjoy what natures about. Third and last, interact with your family and friends. Spend time with them and watch movies or any sports channels. Go with them for some ice cream. Dont let them feel left out or unloved. The mall is a great way to spend time with your friends or family also going to water parks like six flag or lake compound of place like nomads or chuckie cheese its a great way places to spend and interact with your family and friends it also can bring closer as well. This is why I think sitting infront of a computer screen all day, first its a waist of time when you go do some exercise or enjoy nature or lastly interact with your family and friends, why sitting infront of a computer as a waist of time and negative why to spend your days of living life. Technology holds you back from the real things in life. Thank you for reading my letter and hope you take it in consideration. Good day!
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Dear local Newspaper A lot people uses computers daily everyone agrees benefits society Those people supports advsnces technology believe computers positive effect people I agree circumstances looking situation cleary I dont agree due fact better spending much time computers First way better excercising enjoying nature lastly interacting family I dont agree people ther computer things better life First becacuse s useful exercise Talking walk around nieghborhood going hike people know Even better going gym better way spend evening instead sitting infront computer nothing look screen day plus exercising makes stay perfect fit healthy strong long live A computer kill reality sitting day computer eating feel like exercise whats going kill make become lazy nothing I know nobody would want sure enjoy nature live life way needs Gods creations nature must beautiful thing world dont let go waist Jump waterfall go park let wind hit face Make imaginations become real enjoy natures Third last interact family friends Spend time watch movies sports channels Go ice cream Dont let feel left unloved The mall great way spend time friends family also going water parks like six flag lake compound place like nomads chuckie cheese great way places spend interact family friends also bring closer well This I think sitting infront computer screen day first waist time go exercise enjoy nature lastly interact family friends sitting infront computer waist time negative spend days living life Technology holds back real things life Thank reading letter hope take consideration Good day
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Dear local newspaper, my name is I am and I go to naylor school. I am writing to you convince that computers have a positive effect on people. Please read the following reasons. Computers have a positive effect on people. Your able to communicate with people all over the world. When my brother goes on the computer he get's to talk to my family in I like to use skpye because when we talk to family in we use a webcam to keep in touch with my family. They teach hand eye coordination and help me in ping-pong. It help me wacth the ball in computer and I do the same in the wreak. You have lot's of access to different information, my mom found a job in the computer. Everybody have access to weather or news, Some say it's a lack of exercise. People get addicted to the computer. Some can get obese and mess with your love life. These are the reasons why I belive computers are good for society. This is why people should agree that advance in technology. Technology keeps on upgrading.
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Dear local newspaper name I I go naylor school I writing convince computers positive effect people Please read following reasons Computers positive effect people Your able communicate people world When brother goes computer get s talk family I like use skpye talk family use webcam keep touch family They teach hand eye coordination help pingpong It help wacth ball computer I wreak You lot s access different information mom found job computer Everybody access weather news Some say s lack exercise People get addicted computer Some get obese mess love life These reasons I belive computers good society This people agree advance technology Technology keeps upgrading
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I think computers are good because you can talk to your friends and family on the computers. People needs computers to look for a job. Some people spend to much time on the computers then on homework people need to stop.
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I think computers good talk friends family computers People needs computers look job Some people spend much time computers homework people need stop
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Dear Computers have a negitive affect on people and their to connect with others because they always are on the computer and never outside. My first reason is that computers hurt your eyes after a long time sitting at them. People I know have complained of their eyes hurting after using the computer. Studys show taht of all people who use the computer after a long time are more likly to loose their eye sight than people who are outside all day. Another one of my reasons is people who are inside on electronics all day are less likly to have good people skills. If you don't have good people skills then you probibly wont have alot of friends and if you need them it would probibly be over the computer. And you never know what they could be like. Also if your inside all day then you will not get the proper excersize could be very bad you and others. My third and final reason is that people will makes fun of you if you sit inside all day don't come out because your on the computer. If you ar on the computer you are more likly to fail in school you don't do your homework or projects but instead your on the computer playing games. And your more likly to get into fights with your parents or guardians because your on the computer and they never see you or hear from you. Also they wont be able to go online and pay their bills witch could be bad for everyone. So these are just some of the reasons I think computers could be bad. Thank you.
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Dear Computers negitive affect people connect others always computer never outside My first reason computers hurt eyes long time sitting People I know complained eyes hurting using computer Studys show taht people use computer long time likly loose eye sight people outside day Another one reasons people inside electronics day less likly good people skills If nt good people skills probibly wont alot friends need would probibly computer And never know could like Also inside day get proper excersize could bad others My third final reason people makes fun sit inside day nt come computer If ar computer likly fail school nt homework projects instead computer playing games And likly get fights parents guardians computer never see hear Also wont able go online pay bills witch could bad everyone So reasons I think computers could bad Thank
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The effect of people using computers isn't anything bad couse you learn a lot from it. In some ways when you use the computer and you type, the typing exercises your fingers. Your fingers will get muscle and will teach you to remember where to type without looking down on the keyboard. People sometimes using computer is good because if your writing letters you don't have to use pencil you can just type it and print. The typing does all the work for you so you won't spend hours writing to someone. Computers are helpful to people for example, ir your researching about or you can find almost all the information on the computer in a instant click. Computers save time and does a lot of work. Computers are helpful piece of technology and one of the best.
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The effect people using computers nt anything bad couse learn lot In ways use computer type typing exercises fingers Your fingers get muscle teach remember type without looking keyboard People sometimes using computer good writing letters nt use pencil type print The typing work wo nt spend hours writing someone Computers helpful people example ir researching find almost information computer instant click Computers save time lot work Computers helpful piece technology one best
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People are spending too much time on computers. People that spend to much time on the computer do not have time to interact with family or friends. People spened to much time on the computer. The kids that spend time on the computer get bad grades. They also get tired every easy. First of all people spend to much time on the computer. of kids spend to hours on the computer. I once spent hours on my computer on A lot of kids go on and iTunes. My friend spent hours on those websites. People spend way to long on the computer. Another reason, kids that spend time on the computer get bad grades. of kids that spend a lot of time on the computer forget to study for test. Once I spent all night on the computer and the next day I failed a test. Kids forget to do homework to. My friend was having so much fun on the computer he forget to do his homework. Kids should get off the computer and worry about school. My final reason, kids get tired from being on the computer for so long. of kids get so tired they can't do anything once they get off the computer. I got so tired from being on the computer for so long I took a nap. of kids forget they made plans after school. One kid was so tired he blow the plans off that he made with his friends. Kids need to get away from the computer. In conclusion, kids spend to much time on computers. People spend to much time on computer. Kid end up getting bad grade because they spend time on the computer. Aslo, kids get tired very quickly from being on the computer. Something has to be done about this.
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People spending much time computers People spend much time computer time interact family friends People spened much time computer The kids spend time computer get bad grades They also get tired every easy First people spend much time computer kids spend hours computer I spent hours computer A lot kids go iTunes My friend spent hours websites People spend way long computer Another reason kids spend time computer get bad grades kids spend lot time computer forget study test Once I spent night computer next day I failed test Kids forget homework My friend much fun computer forget homework Kids get computer worry school My final reason kids get tired computer long kids get tired ca nt anything get computer I got tired computer long I took nap kids forget made plans school One kid tired blow plans made friends Kids need get away computer In conclusion kids spend much time computers People spend much time computer Kid end getting bad grade spend time computer Aslo kids get tired quickly computer Something done
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Dear you think the computers don't help you with research? Well, if you really think about it computers help you. You can't always gain wait by just looking or staying on a computer. And you can defenetly still talk with kids, friends, and family members on computer. you no if books have all the information you need for school project, or your own family history. Maybe books have our history of wars and of our heros. Try and see if you can find the first ancestor of your family. The computer are the reasons why we no our history and know about actors, slaves, sergents, and much more. Have you gain weight just from staying on the computer for too long. I haven't gain a pound or an ounce since I've been on computer. Not only can you gain weight or lose weight just by being on the computer. How you know if the person on the computer is not looking for diet foods or fat free things? Or if the person is eating while being on the computer. you get large phone bills just for a two minute long distance call? Why you think we have enternet websites such as myspace, facebook, twitter, msn and lots more. Most of my family members life in and and just for a call its like ten dollars for a minute. While you can be on the internet for about day to night and still pay the same price. So what you choose pay over thirty dollars just for a long distance call or stay on the computer. Or get bad grades for doing the bad research. Its you chooce, choose now if either talk with family and friends on phone and pay over your bill money or stay on web chat for how long you want and still get the same bill price.
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Dear think computers nt help research Well really think computers help You ca nt always gain wait looking staying computer And defenetly still talk kids friends family members computer books information need school project family history Maybe books history wars heros Try see find first ancestor family The computer reasons history know actors slaves sergents much Have gain weight staying computer long I nt gain pound ounce since I ve computer Not gain weight lose weight computer How know person computer looking diet foods fat free things Or person eating computer get large phone bills two minute long distance call Why think enternet websites myspace facebook twitter msn lots Most family members life call like ten dollars minute While internet day night still pay price So choose pay thirty dollars long distance call stay computer Or get bad grades bad research Its chooce choose either talk family friends phone pay bill money stay web chat long want still get bill price
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Dear, Local Newspaper here to inform you that the time we spend on computers is needed because it helps you with information, it helps you to become smarter and it helps you with hand-eye coordination. I will now explain to you why the time we spend on computers is needed by stating these three reason. My first reason I'll like to state that will convince you with the time we spend on computer's are needed is it helps us with information and it teaches stuff about place's, people, culture and more it teaches us useful information which takes a while to learn so the time we spend on computeres is needed to learn new information. My second reason I'll like to state that will convince you with. The time we spend on computer's are needed is it helps us to become smarter. Say if you needed help with fractions you can go on a math site it helps you with it. Computers make you become become smarter. And at the end of the day it's about who's smarter not who does more excerise. My third and final reason which contribute to why we spend the time we spend on computer are needed because it teaches you good hand-eye coordination because it help with typing and become more faster to do essay's and when you have good hand-eye coordination you dont make a lot of mistake's typing. So I have come to my conclusion why a lot of computer time is needed because it helps with information, you become smarter, and it teaches good hand-eye coordination this is why a lot of computer time is needed probably even more computer time is needed. A lot of computer time is needed because you get smarter plus it beneifts society.
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Dear Local Newspaper inform time spend computers needed helps information helps become smarter helps handeye coordination I explain time spend computers needed stating three reason My first reason I ll like state convince time spend computer s needed helps us information teaches stuff place s people culture teaches us useful information takes learn time spend computeres needed learn new information My second reason I ll like state convince The time spend computer s needed helps us become smarter Say needed help fractions go math site helps Computers make become become smarter And end day s s smarter excerise My third final reason contribute spend time spend computer needed teaches good handeye coordination help typing become faster essay s good handeye coordination dont make lot mistake s typing So I come conclusion lot computer time needed helps information become smarter teaches good handeye coordination lot computer time needed probably even computer time needed A lot computer time needed get smarter plus beneifts society
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Dear newspaper, I feel as though internet or computers act as an advantage in sosiety rather than a problem. They help with school work, like projects or email. You can even take college online now! People also use the internet for media or to simply catch up with friends. One of the most important reasons to have a computer is for school orenented reasons. Like having a project that you need to get notes for or making a power poin presentation. One other great reson is for the teachers. There computers can help them teach a class in a way that is both fun and easy to undersand. The new uprizing in computer use has brought about new ways of getting a college degree. Now you even just simply get in bed turn on your lap top and take college classes right on your computer! I dont know about you guy's but I'd much rather take college in the own comfort of my home then drive to a campus all the time. Another great use for the internet is e-mail to e-mail makes our lives a lot easier now that more people use it. It can send us school starts like a early dismiste or a way to catch up with old highschool frends. Another great reson for the internet is for mention or just to have fun and relax. of people that have computers use them for media or fun reasons, like gamelry, or to go on to youtube. Please add this article into your news paper so that the computer can be put out there as a helping add, and not something that is going to make the whole world obise because thats not just from computers. Its the people who use computers, felt that they dont get exercise not the computers. So why put them out in a bad way.
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Dear newspaper I feel though internet computers act advantage sosiety rather problem They help school work like projects email You even take college online People also use internet media simply catch friends One important reasons computer school orenented reasons Like project need get notes making power poin presentation One great reson teachers There computers help teach class way fun easy undersand The new uprizing computer use brought new ways getting college degree Now even simply get bed turn lap top take college classes right computer I dont know guy s I d much rather take college comfort home drive campus time Another great use internet email email makes lives lot easier people use It send us school starts like early dismiste way catch old highschool frends Another great reson internet mention fun relax people computers use media fun reasons like gamelry go youtube Please add article news paper computer put helping add something going make whole world obise thats computers Its people use computers felt dont get exercise computers So put bad way
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Have you ever had the time completely fly by while you're on the computer? You go on at and all of a sudden it's seven at night. People should spend less time on the computer because they should be outside, it takes away time with your family, and there are other ways to look up information. You should be outside, enjoying the fresh air and playing sports, not stuck inside all day with your eyes glued to a screen. When you're on the computer all day, you're just sitting there. You're not moving around at all. Seventy-two percent of kids who spend all their time on the computer are over weight. Being on the computer on a beautiful is like blocking out the birds' songs on the first day of Nature is amazing, and you should be outside enjoying it, not cooped up in a stuffy room leaning over a man-made machine. People should spend a lot less time on their computer. When you're on the computer, time really flies by. You lose your whole day to it, and wouldn't you rather be doing something more fun? You can be alone on the computer in a dark room. You should be with your family and and friends. Computers are going to be around for a long time, and when they die down it will only be because something better came along. Your baby brother won't be a baby forever and your grandparents might not even be there tomorrow. Don't you want to spend as much time as you can with them? You're changing too, so you be off to college or have to move far away for buissness. "They grow up so fast. They're adults in a blink of an eye." my grandma said to my mom. Almost of parents feel that same way. So, don't spend all your time alone with a machine, be with your loving family and chairish each moment. People should spend less time on the computer because there are other ways to look up information and learn about new places. There are so many books in the world, about any topic you can imagine. Using books to look up information is better than typing in the word into google because it's important to learn how to use an index and find the book on the shelf. A trip to the library not be your cup of sunshine, so if you want to learn about a place, why don't you go to that place? If you're doing a report on for school it would be a lot of fun to go to for a few days to learn about it. And you can take pictures with your own camera, not just a picture you found online. It would be a really fun family trip. Even if you're doing your report on a place as boring as you could still probably have a lot of fun, hanging out with your family together. In conclusion, people should spend less time on the computer and more time being outside, with family, and at really fun places. Why would you want to stare at a screen all day when you could be having this much fun?
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Have ever time completely fly re computer You go sudden s seven night People spend less time computer outside takes away time family ways look information You outside enjoying fresh air playing sports stuck inside day eyes glued screen When re computer day re sitting You re moving around Seventytwo percent kids spend time computer weight Being computer beautiful like blocking birds songs first day Nature amazing outside enjoying cooped stuffy room leaning manmade machine People spend lot less time computer When re computer time really flies You lose whole day would nt rather something fun You alone computer dark room You family friends Computers going around long time die something better came along Your baby brother wo nt baby forever grandparents might even tomorrow Do nt want spend much time You re changing college move far away buissness They grow fast They re adults blink eye grandma said mom Almost parents feel way So nt spend time alone machine loving family chairish moment People spend less time computer ways look information learn new places There many books world topic imagine Using books look information better typing word google s important learn use index find book shelf A trip library cup sunshine want learn place nt go place If re report school would lot fun go days learn And take pictures camera picture found online It would really fun family trip Even re report place boring could still probably lot fun hanging family together In conclusion people spend less time computer time outside family really fun places Why would want stare screen day could much fun
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Dear local newspaper, I am writing this letter to you to show on how people get effected from computers. It effects people very well and teaches people many things for just one technology. Computers effects many people for what it does. Computers have many advantages that people learn very quickly. Many people love computers. It is one of the most best inventions to everyone around the world. They teach positive things for people to learn. Computer even have a positive effect on people across the world. They teach many things for people to learn and that have already learned. Such as, hand-eye cordination. When you type up words it teaches you to see better with your eyes. Computers also, give people the ability to see, understand, and gives information about people across the world. Celebraties are very popular on computers or other technologies. Computers help you learn things better than any other technologies. Anything you can get on any other technologies. There is a guarantee of you will find it on your computer. Computers are just like other technologies but in some categories they're much better than the others. Computers are very important in life because without computers we would not learn how to communicate with each other. If we did not have phones to use to call someone. On the computer if you go online you can maybe talk to someone by their email address. You can talk to someone that you have not talk to in years. You can look images or videos that you haven't seen in years. On computers, you can find out information from news that week of or even the day of. In conclusion all I say is that without computers in this world. What would it be like? Most technologies that are not as good computers will be popular without computers. I wonder what it will be like?
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Dear local newspaper I writing letter show people get effected computers It effects people well teaches people many things one technology Computers effects many people Computers many advantages people learn quickly Many people love computers It one best inventions everyone around world They teach positive things people learn Computer even positive effect people across world They teach many things people learn already learned Such handeye cordination When type words teaches see better eyes Computers also give people ability see understand gives information people across world Celebraties popular computers technologies Computers help learn things better technologies Anything get technologies There guarantee find computer Computers like technologies categories re much better others Computers important life without computers would learn communicate If phones use call someone On computer go online maybe talk someone email address You talk someone talk years You look images videos nt seen years On computers find information news week even day In conclusion I say without computers world What would like Most technologies good computers popular without computers I wonder like
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Computers are the greatest tool mankind has. They give people acsess to more information than anything else in the world. they ler us connect faraway places with one click of the button without computers people would never know and learn or do as much as can without computers modern planes or cars would not exist. without computer this very test probaly would not exist so no sconclusion to much time on the computor, because theres more to do than one can doin lifetime
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Computers greatest tool mankind They give people acsess information anything else world ler us connect faraway places one click button without computers people would never know learn much without computers modern planes cars would exist without computer test probaly would exist sconclusion much time computor theres one doin lifetime
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Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever wondered how to get somewhere and you didn't have a map or near you and the only thing that was the near you was a Well I am saying you should go on it and search were you want to go. Computers are very helpful in every one's daily life they have so many facts and interesting things on them, about again trying to figure out were someone lives it's very easy, go on google and type in someones's adress and there you go. The is also very good because have you ever thought about one of your friends or a special someone and you havent seen them in like a really long time and you miss them well no problem mostley all computers have some sort of camera in them were you could video chat or just chat regular on the enternet. That is very helpful because even though you could just go on the phone and call them it's better to do it online because how about if you havent seen them you want to see a picture of them they could just send it to you on some sort of chat page or just your email. It is so much better then mailing one picture in the mail and it takes days for the mail to come if you could do it the faster way on line and on video chat it will be better.. The is also very helpful because how about one day you want to go some were and you dont know what the weather is going to be well you could go to put on the tv and see but there is so many communications and you cant really see because they move the weather days fast. On the you could type the weather in for one week and it will tell you and you could look at it for as long as you want and it will stay there so you could see the whole week without the screen having fast as the image is not in the light light or if it's to dark. The is so helpful. People do say that it is good to get off the and go for a walk outside in nature I do agree with that but people and children do get their exercising by walking around the house and going outside going shopping. Computers are helpful and nice and another thing is say one day you are online and you are looking at clothes or shoes and you want to buy them but you dont want to go to the mall a half hour away from were you live you could just buy them online and they will be shipped to your house and you dont even have to lift a fingure. They are also good because they have like a dictionary on it were if you dont know how to spell a word you type it in the best way you can and it corrects your spelling and tells you what the word is, also the computers have pictures of everything, if you want to see how something looks like you can type it in and shows you. with all the facts I have given you I hope you agree with me that computers are very helpful nice and safe.
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Dear Local Newspaper Have ever wondered get somewhere nt map near thing near Well I saying go search want go Computers helpful every one s daily life many facts interesting things trying figure someone lives s easy go google type someones s adress go The also good ever thought one friends special someone havent seen like really long time miss well problem mostley computers sort camera could video chat chat regular enternet That helpful even though could go phone call s better online havent seen want see picture could send sort chat page email It much better mailing one picture mail takes days mail come could faster way line video chat better The also helpful one day want go dont know weather going well could go put tv see many communications cant really see move weather days fast On could type weather one week tell could look long want stay could see whole week without screen fast image light light s dark The helpful People say good get go walk outside nature I agree people children get exercising walking around house going outside going shopping Computers helpful nice another thing say one day online looking clothes shoes want buy dont want go mall half hour away live could buy online shipped house dont even lift fingure They also good like dictionary dont know spell word type best way corrects spelling tells word also computers pictures everything want see something looks like type shows facts I given I hope agree computers helpful nice safe
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Dear of society I am writing this letter to you to explain the many benefits towards computers. My first reason will explain the many ways computers help you beleive that people using computers is a very good idea. They beleive this because computers make you really focus and pay attention. This gives you really great eye sight and amazing hand eye cordonation. A important ability that computers have is they are able to teach you about far away places depending on were you live. The reason people would probobility want to visit one of these places on a website would probobility be for vacational purposes. My third reason to why I feel we should keep computers is. There is a lot of websites you can join so that you can speak to your friends as long as there online. IAM, exc. These are all great uses for computers. Also people who own a well paying email system on these computer that tells them who wants to sell a piece of machinary, or anything that involves buisness ethics. Now you know my three very important reasons to why computers are a great way to get hand eye cordonation. A great way to learn about other states. And so you can talk to friends and have a email for buisness purposes. I hope you have enjoyed reading this and hope to see you on my side toward this topic.
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Dear society I writing letter explain many benefits towards computers My first reason explain many ways computers help beleive people using computers good idea They beleive computers make really focus pay attention This gives really great eye sight amazing hand eye cordonation A important ability computers able teach far away places depending live The reason people would probobility want visit one places website would probobility vacational purposes My third reason I feel keep computers There lot websites join speak friends long online IAM exc These great uses computers Also people well paying email system computer tells wants sell piece machinary anything involves buisness ethics Now know three important reasons computers great way get hand eye cordonation A great way learn states And talk friends email buisness purposes I hope enjoyed reading hope see side toward topic
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Dear To begin, I understand that people don't like computers because they are over used. If the computers are so bad then they shouldn't be used, but how I see it is that they also bring more good than bad. These points to computer wellfare are they bring sourses, their is interaction between people, and computers are going to advance more over time. Even though these people think they are overused they still use them. So, even I use the computer a lot, but it could be used for good. First and foremost, these computers can get sources online that can't be found in books. Their are search engines that you can find your topics on. Then, when you find your source it has info that could have been skipped over. They can show the other side of they story that they didn't say in the book. your projects that you used to have to go to the library for you now can do from home, that itself is a step that you aren't considering. For instance if people are on a lot of the time is research. Furthermore, people can interact with friends over the computer. They can talk, send pictures, or play games. For example, i play xbox and I talk to my friends over that a lot of the time. Even a video game is fun as being with them, quoted from "I have a computer not for friends, but for work". This shows that even large important still use it for work. people say using a computer is like learning to ride a bike. My mom told me a story that she met my dad because he fixed her computer at her job. So, I am here with my parents because of a computer. None the less, the computers are at their begining and they will further improve. So people that are on have a reason for why they are on the computer. This advancement is going to advance again and again so there won't be a way to stop it thus, people will be on it only more and more so there is no chance of stopping the outbreak of computers. Then you will try to stop them with "computers eat your brain". We all know that is garbage. To conclude, I implore you not to try and change the habits of others. I that if people want to use computer they can. I say this with the sources, the friends and the advanement.
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Dear To begin I understand people nt like computers used If computers bad nt used I see also bring good bad These points computer wellfare bring sourses interaction people computers going advance time Even though people think overused still use So even I use computer lot could used good First foremost computers get sources online ca nt found books Their search engines find topics Then find source info could skipped They show side story nt say book projects used go library home step nt considering For instance people lot time research Furthermore people interact friends computer They talk send pictures play games For example play xbox I talk friends lot time Even video game fun quoted I computer friends work This shows even large important still use work people say using computer like learning ride bike My mom told story met dad fixed computer job So I parents computer None less computers begining improve So people reason computer This advancement going advance wo nt way stop thus people chance stopping outbreak computers Then try stop computers eat brain We know garbage To conclude I implore try change habits others I people want use computer I say sources friends advanement
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Dear Local Newspaper, I am an grade student at I was reading your paper and I notice you had an article on how people are spending too much time on the computer and not enough time going outside, getting exercise, enjoying nature, and that it doesn't benifit society. i completly disagree with these comments. let me explain... Having computers definatly benifits for all students. Sometimes kids forget their text books at school. But if they have a computer, they can just google the information. That way they get there homework done, and don't have to take a zero. Another thing is, I am sure you have heard of a website called, study island. If you havn't, i'ts a website for all the students in the to take online courses for math, reading, and science. They are time consuming, but they count for a huge chunk of our grade. So, if we get an on study island we get an in one of our classes.. Not only does the computer help students but it helps me in a kind of personal way. I love the piano. But, there are no instructions in my area. However, there is a program on the computer called synewnisia. It helps you learn all kinds of songs on your keyboard or piano. The piano helps my hand-eye coordination as well as it teaches discipline and dedication. Now, synewnesia isn't the only free instrument learning program. There are many others! This helps people who can't afford lessons, and learning an instrument can help you acheive things later in life. Now, one thing you said in your article is that people aren't getting enough exercise because of sitting in front of a computer all day. This is not completly true. In fact, most people go on the computer researching diet plans or local gyms. How do I know this? Well one day when I went on google the top search of the day was, "weight watchers diet plan". Also, my mom uses an online video workout website, for her bad back. So not only does the computer help for diets, they can help physical therapy also. So with this letter I hope you realize that the computer does benifite our society, yes, we should not spend too much time on it. But, online learning sessions can be time consuming. It helps many people figure out the right deit and workouts so they can stay happy and healthy.
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Dear Local Newspaper I grade student I reading paper I notice article people spending much time computer enough time going outside getting exercise enjoying nature nt benifit society completly disagree comments let explain Having computers definatly benifits students Sometimes kids forget text books school But computer google information That way get homework done nt take zero Another thing I sure heard website called study island If hav nt its website students take online courses math reading science They time consuming count huge chunk grade So get study island get one classes Not computer help students helps kind personal way I love piano But instructions area However program computer called synewnisia It helps learn kinds songs keyboard piano The piano helps handeye coordination well teaches discipline dedication Now synewnesia nt free instrument learning program There many others This helps people ca nt afford lessons learning instrument help acheive things later life Now one thing said article people nt getting enough exercise sitting front computer day This completly true In fact people go computer researching diet plans local gyms How I know Well one day I went google top search day weight watchers diet plan Also mom uses online video workout website bad back So computer help diets help physical therapy also So letter I hope realize computer benifite society yes spend much time But online learning sessions time consuming It helps many people figure right deit workouts stay happy healthy
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ARE YOU Computers are great, they're great because of these reasons. Kids can do homework on computers, also you could video chat with friends and family finally because you could look up just about anything you want on the computer. Computers are great because kids can do there homework on the computer, thats good because if they forgot there book in school or something like that then they could just get the answers of the computer. Its also good for business men because they count on computers for all there files. Computer are also great because you can video chat with friends and family. Video chatins is awesome because if a friend or relative goes out of town they could just brings there labtop of webcam and then you can talk to them whenever. Video chatins is also good for company's if there buyer is in a different country they could just video chat all the information.Finally, computers are great because they are so resourceful. There are hundreds of websites where all you have to do is type in what you want to know and there will be thousands of links for you to search and get your answer. They ere also resourceful for pictures or maybe even powerpoint presentation! In conclusion, computers are great because, kids can get there homework done, also its good for video chat finally because the internet is very resourceful.
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ARE YOU Computers great re great reasons Kids homework computers also could video chat friends family finally could look anything want computer Computers great kids homework computer thats good forgot book school something like could get answers computer Its also good business men count computers files Computer also great video chat friends family Video chatins awesome friend relative goes town could brings labtop webcam talk whenever Video chatins also good company s buyer different country could video chat informationFinally computers great resourceful There hundreds websites type want know thousands links search get answer They ere also resourceful pictures maybe even powerpoint presentation In conclusion computers great kids get homework done also good video chat finally internet resourceful
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Over the past decade, the percentage of people using computers has increased by approximately All of a sudden the world and its people have become dependent on information that computers provide. The variety of data bases and resources the increased communication and the skills computers allow you to portray and prove that they are essential for this generation. Communication over computers benefit now society can interact between one another. Personally I have been able to talk and see my family who live overseas through the advanced technology on computers. Different communication programs include and e-mail, the most commonly used cite. Without having access to a computer and its contents residents have a difficult time embarking themselves within the rest of society. For school events, sport schedules, and keeping in touch with far away family and friends. Computers allow all of these essentials to be part of society, and the way this generation has decided to start our lives. Paretns and teenagers these days have become very lazy in comparison to the way they used to behave. They are nit interested in going to the library in order to research information on people, places, and family heritage. Computers have been a huge convenience in a persons life by allowing all the information that was once in books to be contained throughout the internet. For example if you are doing a project for school. the internet will provide you with any information you need. It is truely astonishing how much one electronic instrument can impact and influence a life. Being a student, I am commonly curious about what references teachers are making and additional information that is not provided. The internet allows any person in possesion of a computer to research what they have wondered about and to give a response on the subject almost immediately the benefits of computers can practically cover the few negative effects as it is a way to let a person discover various information on any desired subject. Besides searching for information, computers can be used to document data of your own. Microsoft has invented several applications of which allow you to graph information design presentations, and neatly record drafts of writing. No person is flawless and is incapable of mistakes. Microsoft helps take your exentuated imperfections and hide them by doing things as little as making a neater copy of your essay, or putting your lists of data into graph form to make it more eye-friendly to viewers. Society has become reliant to sources scattered throughout the date bases on computers and by directly looking at the negative effects that a computer can have on aperson and therefore putting restrictions on this information source will enable society to have to positive donations that computers these days have on our way of life.
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Over past decade percentage people using computers increased approximately All sudden world people become dependent information computers provide The variety data bases resources increased communication skills computers allow portray prove essential generation Communication computers benefit society interact one another Personally I able talk see family live overseas advanced technology computers Different communication programs include email commonly used cite Without access computer contents residents difficult time embarking within rest society For school events sport schedules keeping touch far away family friends Computers allow essentials part society way generation decided start lives Paretns teenagers days become lazy comparison way used behave They nit interested going library order research information people places family heritage Computers huge convenience persons life allowing information books contained throughout internet For example project school internet provide information need It truely astonishing much one electronic instrument impact influence life Being student I commonly curious references teachers making additional information provided The internet allows person possesion computer research wondered give response subject almost immediately benefits computers practically cover negative effects way let person discover various information desired subject Besides searching information computers used document data Microsoft invented several applications allow graph information design presentations neatly record drafts writing No person flawless incapable mistakes Microsoft helps take exentuated imperfections hide things little making neater copy essay putting lists data graph form make eyefriendly viewers Society become reliant sources scattered throughout date bases computers directly looking negative effects computer aperson therefore putting restrictions information source enable society positive donations computers days way life
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in has become far more advanced. Computers are one of the most futiristic objects. The computer is good for connecting to people around the world. However, computers have bad effects on people's lives. Children are taking time out of their homework to go on the computer, citizens are gaining weight, and children are being kidnapped. School is very important and valuable if you want to suceed in life. However, computers have made it difficult for students to concentrat on their homework. This is a horrible habbit and a bad effect on students every where. Students grades will suffer and will not obtain class credits if this problem is not mentioned. Obesity is a huge problem in five out of every ten are either overweight or obese. This can lead to death. The problem is that people are spending hours on the computer each day. Most of that time can be used to exercise. Exercising can be an important benefit to someone's life. If this problem is not addressed millions of americans will be overweight, is a very serious and dangerous topic. Every month dozend of kids are kidnapped. Since the internet was invented there is a twenty percent increase rate of kids missing children will go on poppular networking websites such as and twitter and give out their important information. Pedophiles use the internet to trick children in to giving their address. This problem needs to stop and be addressed by the police. Everyday, more and more people use computers. Compuers have good and bad effects on peoples lives. The bad effects are very serious and dangerous. How would you feel if your child fails school, gains weight, or gets kidnapped because of the computer?
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become far advanced Computers one futiristic objects The computer good connecting people around world However computers bad effects people s lives Children taking time homework go computer citizens gaining weight children kidnapped School important valuable want suceed life However computers made difficult students concentrat homework This horrible habbit bad effect students every Students grades suffer obtain class credits problem mentioned Obesity huge problem five every ten either overweight obese This lead death The problem people spending hours computer day Most time used exercise Exercising important benefit someone s life If problem addressed millions americans overweight serious dangerous topic Every month dozend kids kidnapped Since internet invented twenty percent increase rate kids missing children go poppular networking websites twitter give important information Pedophiles use internet trick children giving address This problem needs stop addressed police Everyday people use computers Compuers good bad effects peoples lives The bad effects serious dangerous How would feel child fails school gains weight gets kidnapped computer
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Dear Newspaper, I'm writing to you about the debate that you are having asking if people should use computers. The article stated "more and more people use computers, but not everyone agrees that this benefits society." I think people should not use computers. Also technolgy needs to slow down, it's getting to advanced. My first reason why people need to stop spending time on computers is, you don't want to always say to your on your honeymoon "we could to from our computer. And your life will go by fast and you want notice it, your all fat and old. Also of people who use computers are over weight because they don't exercis. Secondly the more technology there is, we are going to have less. In addition it feels better when you work and not just sit on your computer, getting a mounthly cheak. In conclusion you live a happier life when explore the. In of people who use computer commit suicide. Also if it was or to me I would the use of computers. Bead all the about computers and you will think but like me. I use to be a computer geek.
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Dear Newspaper I m writing debate asking people use computers The article stated people use computers everyone agrees benefits society I think people use computers Also technolgy needs slow s getting advanced My first reason people need stop spending time computers nt want always say honeymoon could computer And life go fast want notice fat old Also people use computers weight nt exercis Secondly technology going less In addition feels better work sit computer getting mounthly cheak In conclusion live happier life explore In people use computer commit suicide Also I would use computers Bead computers think like I use computer geek
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You find this hard to beleive, but many people think computers put a negative attitude on people. Now you be saying thats not true, that everyone has a computer, but the truth is they don't and they believe it puts negative attitude on people. People have many reasons for owning a computer and one is friends. Did you some people own computers because they want to stay in touch with friends from differnt states who live far away. For example, many people use or to connect with friends. I can make a connection because I have both a and that I use to stay in contact with family friends from all over. Some people, like myself, even have friends from different countries! I that many people want to learn about people from differnt countries and this is one way to do it right now I am learning some new things about the because I am friends with someone who lives in While on this wonderful adventure of learning you even get yourself into a vacation adventure. A recent test was taking stating that out of people like to travel but don't where. Some people say that people spend to much time on the computer but not enough enjoying nature.These people are wrong if one is on a computer and they are chating with someone from a differnt state or country then that person might persuade them to take a visit there. For example they would be able to go to the internet type in the place they want to visit and get photographs and information about the place. As a result, people would still get to enjoy nature. Sometimes using the computer could be educational. Many people disagree with that statement but its true. For example when on the computer many people in their senior year of high school use it to take online college courses to get their degree because going to a regular college affect their work scheduale. This could also help students in any grade learn more about the topic they are studing. It would also help them on their reports. For example they would be able to get pictures and other information anytime they wanted to. As a result, the students grades would increase. I hope many of you agree with my statement and help spread the word that computers could be positive on the mind. As a result for those who didn't agree with the statement that they are positive not negative I hope that you will redecide on your opion.
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You find hard beleive many people think computers put negative attitude people Now saying thats true everyone computer truth nt believe puts negative attitude people People many reasons owning computer one friends Did people computers want stay touch friends differnt states live far away For example many people use connect friends I make connection I I use stay contact family friends Some people like even friends different countries I many people want learn people differnt countries one way right I learning new things I friends someone lives While wonderful adventure learning even get vacation adventure A recent test taking stating people like travel nt Some people say people spend much time computer enough enjoying natureThese people wrong one computer chating someone differnt state country person might persuade take visit For example would able go internet type place want visit get photographs information place As result people would still get enjoy nature Sometimes using computer could educational Many people disagree statement true For example computer many people senior year high school use take online college courses get degree going regular college affect work scheduale This could also help students grade learn topic studing It would also help reports For example would able get pictures information anytime wanted As result students grades would increase I hope many agree statement help spread word computers could positive mind As result nt agree statement positive negative I hope redecide opion
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Dear I, agree that computers are benefits society. The computers have positive effect on people like hand-eye coordination. I helps you learn about other country religios, and other thing. You can communicate, meet other people, and chat tru computers. Another positive fact about computer is that you can find all the information you need and fast. In other words is that computer help a lot of people.
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Dear I agree computers benefits society The computers positive effect people like handeye coordination I helps learn country religios thing You communicate meet people chat tru computers Another positive fact computer find information need fast In words computer help lot people
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