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Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever gone somewhere, taken pictures, and posted them on the computer? If you have you will remember where you visited. But atleast you went to or or somewhere. There are some people who are on the computer all day. Instead of experiencing nature and taken on life brings to them, they are on facebook or youtube all day. This disgusts me because there are many fun, beautiful, and entertainings things to do. In opinion I think computers have negative effects on people. People miss out on enjoying nature or interacting with friends and family. Some people do not get exercise anymore and it hurts to see obese people just sit ther and do nothing about there lives. First I'd like to talk about obesity. Did you know that of children are obese at young a young age? Computers take the place of exercising for a young boy or girl. They should go outside and play sports like basketball or soccer. Another thing is those game websites. Children get so caught up in a computer game, everything around them just disappears. All they worry about is winning the game. While playing this game they might eating doritos. Sooner or later five pounds is gained. Then they will regret not exercising and not be able to move. Later in life, when things are bad for them, they will realized on how many fantastic things they missed. Then they will say "@CAPS1 did I do with life?" next point shows that people are not enjoying nature. Have you ever taken a nice walk in the park? I know I have. Well people sit inside all day just taking a peek out the window, but don't think about going outside. Nature is beautiful, smells nice, even refreshing at times. But no. People sit on there butt all day. On the computer accomplishing absolutely nothing. Why can't they go outsite for a walk or a jog? People can see animals like squirrels climbing up a tree. How cute. But instead they play a virtual game where you shoot squirrels with a paint ball gun. So much is missed because of computers. As much as not enjoying nature upsets me, some people blow off their own family just to watch a re-run of family guy on youtube. have we come to? Some children hit their parents because the parents shut the computer off. I'd rather enjoy a meal with family and then just sit down, relax, and talk. Also some people don't get sleep becuse they are "doing something important" and miss a family trip or even school. In conclusion I believe that computers are bad because of obesity, missing nature, and not enjoying company of family & friends.
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Dear Local Newspaper Have ever gone somewhere taken pictures posted computer If remember visited But atleast went somewhere There people computer day Instead experiencing nature taken life brings facebook youtube day This disgusts many fun beautiful entertainings things In opinion I think computers negative effects people People miss enjoying nature interacting friends family Some people get exercise anymore hurts see obese people sit ther nothing lives First I d like talk obesity Did know children obese young young age Computers take place exercising young boy girl They go outside play sports like basketball soccer Another thing game websites Children get caught computer game everything around disappears All worry winning game While playing game might eating doritos Sooner later five pounds gained Then regret exercising able move Later life things bad realized many fantastic things missed Then say CAPS I life next point shows people enjoying nature Have ever taken nice walk park I know I Well people sit inside day taking peek window nt think going outside Nature beautiful smells nice even refreshing times But People sit butt day On computer accomplishing absolutely nothing Why ca nt go outsite walk jog People see animals like squirrels climbing tree How cute But instead play virtual game shoot squirrels paint ball gun So much missed computers As much enjoying nature upsets people blow family watch rerun family guy youtube come Some children hit parents parents shut computer I d rather enjoy meal family sit relax talk Also people nt get sleep becuse something important miss family trip even school In conclusion I believe computers bad obesity missing nature enjoying company family friends
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Dear Local Newspaper, Experts should not be concerned about other people that stay on the computer for a while. Maybe people know what they are doing and have to stay on computers for a long time. They also might like to learn things that they never thought about learning. Most people try not to be overweight. Experts should Not try to have less people on the computer. One reason is that people can chat with one another. It can be friends, families, and more. About of people chat online with families or friends. Chatting can also help you like if there is an emergency. You can tell someone what is going on and call the cops. Without a doubt chatting online is a great way to use the computer during the time your on it. Another reason is that you can search anything you need to know. Maybe if you have to search something for school, the computer can help you. This can have positive effects on people. It can make someone a better person. You can't agree that getting to search anything is a fantastic way of using a computer for a while. A third reason is that it can teach you hand-eye coordination and gives people the ability to learn about faraway places and people. Learning about things you have never dreamed about learning. There are many people and places in the world that you still have to learn about. Is it surprising to you that almost everyone and anyplace that is famous is on the internet. Using the computer this way is another terrific idea. These are all great ways of using the computer. Being on the for a while is not a waste of time. People can you their time wisly on the computer. Surprisingly it is true that all of the reasons are good for the time being on the computer. So you should try to make people be on the computer less often.
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Dear Local Newspaper Experts concerned people stay computer Maybe people know stay computers long time They also might like learn things never thought learning Most people try overweight Experts Not try less people computer One reason people chat one another It friends families About people chat online families friends Chatting also help like emergency You tell someone going call cops Without doubt chatting online great way use computer time Another reason search anything need know Maybe search something school computer help This positive effects people It make someone better person You ca nt agree getting search anything fantastic way using computer A third reason teach handeye coordination gives people ability learn faraway places people Learning things never dreamed learning There many people places world still learn Is surprising almost everyone anyplace famous internet Using computer way another terrific idea These great ways using computer Being waste time People time wisly computer Surprisingly true reasons good time computer So try make people computer less often
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Dear Local Newspaper, Have you ever been running late to a party and just realize you don't have the directions to the person's house? Have you ever had to write a paper and there wen't any books or encyclopedias available? Or have you ever just wanted to catch up with an old friend? you answered yes to at least one of these questions, there is a good chance you have used a computer in your lifetime. Computers have positive effects because they can give you quick and reliable and the can be fun too. To begin with let's go back to that example in the paragraph above. Have you ever been running late to a party and realize you do not have the direction's to the person's house? you have, there are two things you can do in that situation. You can call up the person who probably wan't answer because they're fun at their party, or you can go on the computer, type the person's address in and you will have your directions in seconds. Call me crazy, but this way seems quicker more efficient and reliable. My mother always says to me, "@CAPS1 you're trouble finding go on the computer," because she knows that there is all the in books on the and more. And it's just one click away, sold that, the computer has positive effects on you because it gives you quick and reliable In addition, computers have positive effects on you when you're trying to have fun. For example, is used by teens and adults like, and for one reason only, to socialize with friends via computer. you to another date and wait to see what your last friend's up the best thing to do would be to go on and ask A shows that in a family of five, four of them use the to communicate and socialize with friends. Obviously, this is how computers have a positive effect. In conclusion, whether you're bored at home and it's a rainy day, or you have to nght a research paper you saved until the last minute, a computer will be there for you. Positive effects computers have - are that they are quick and reliable, and they are fun to use.
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Dear Local Newspaper Have ever running late party realize nt directions person s house Have ever write paper nt books encyclopedias available Or ever wanted catch old friend answered yes least one questions good chance used computer lifetime Computers positive effects give quick reliable fun To begin let s go back example paragraph Have ever running late party realize direction s person s house two things situation You call person probably wa nt answer re fun party go computer type person s address directions seconds Call crazy way seems quicker efficient reliable My mother always says CAPS re trouble finding go computer knows books And s one click away sold computer positive effects gives quick reliable In addition computers positive effects re trying fun For example used teens adults like one reason socialize friends via computer another date wait see last friend s best thing would go ask A shows family five four use communicate socialize friends Obviously computers positive effect In conclusion whether re bored home s rainy day nght research paper saved last minute computer Positive effects computers quick reliable fun use
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Dear The has been an argument wheter computers do or do not have a positive effect on people. Some believe, that computers have negative effets on people for example spending too much time, not exercising, and not interacting with family and friends. However, I believe computers have a positive effect on people because it teaches hand-eye coordination, lets people know about faraway places, and allows people to talk online. To conclude, computers have a positive effect on people. Did you know hand-eye coordination can be helpful at times? Well, it true because if you are in distress and the phone is broken and you don't have a cellphone then send an emergency e-mail to one of your friends informing them to call all and since you have hand-eye coordination you can type without having to look down. Also if your in college and have an important essay due tomorrow then hand-eye coordination can really help you write down notes without having to look back at the writing paper. Finally, with hand-eye coordination it can help you can join the army because if you spot a threat you can aim and shoot quickly without having to take out the gun after threat attacks. To conclude, computers teaches hand-eye coordination. Have you ever wanted to go to a forgein places? Well with computers you can do that you can just search the place and see what the place has. Fethermore, if you want to learn to speak a forgein language you can all you have to do is type in the language with a question and search its so easy a baby can do it. Finally, if you want to learn how to cook like forgein places do then type in the type of food or its name and search. To summarize, computers lets people know about forgein places. Have you ever have the feeling that you want to talk to somebody? I know I have this is why computers can help you talk to people online just tree the person's e-mail adresses and type the message. Also you don't have to waste money on paper and envelopes. Finally, having an e-mail is free so you can talk all you want. To conclude, computers help people talk online. In summarization, computers have a positive effect on people. It helps them have hand-eye coordination, learn about new places, and lets them talk.
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Dear The argument wheter computers positive effect people Some believe computers negative effets people example spending much time exercising interacting family friends However I believe computers positive effect people teaches handeye coordination lets people know faraway places allows people talk online To conclude computers positive effect people Did know handeye coordination helpful times Well true distress phone broken nt cellphone send emergency email one friends informing call since handeye coordination type without look Also college important essay due tomorrow handeye coordination really help write notes without look back writing paper Finally handeye coordination help join army spot threat aim shoot quickly without take gun threat attacks To conclude computers teaches handeye coordination Have ever wanted go forgein places Well computers search place see place Fethermore want learn speak forgein language type language question search easy baby Finally want learn cook like forgein places type type food name search To summarize computers lets people know forgein places Have ever feeling want talk somebody I know I computers help talk people online tree person s email adresses type message Also nt waste money paper envelopes Finally email free talk want To conclude computers help people talk online In summarization computers positive effect people It helps handeye coordination learn new places lets talk
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Computers are used world wide everyday, and most of the time is used for a good reason. Computers help out by making possible to get all the info you want, like for a trip. you wanted to go to a close but fancy restaurant you use a computer so you know how far. Computers also help out, making possible to talk to friends that you haven't seen for years. is also great way to meet new people. Let's say you are really stressed at work or school and you forget your book, you can usually bring up on the computer and do there. First, computers help out with traveling, sight seeing and lots more. When you travel, dont you want to know everything? And the biggest detail you want to know is the cost and the computer can usually give you a close to exact price for everything. Now that help's out a bunch when your traveling the world. And also when your site seeing you usually want to find either the most amazing or romantic spot were you are. And you type in "the most romantic spot in somers" should come up with a bunch of spots. So dont drive to miles just to get a map or brochure, use your computer and print one off. Second, there was a friend you haven't seen in years and you want to talk, you can go on the computer. The computer helps in so many ways could even tell you were this person lives and you could surprise visit him/her. When your on the computer, you can even meet new friends and have conversations with them. and even meet them someday. And you and that new friend get along then mabey you and that person could be best friends. So you haven't seen or talked to someone in a while that you knew use the computer to have a chat. Third, say your teacher or boss yelled at you today and no one has been nice to you all day and you forget your homework book or paperwork. Were do you go? the computer, can bring most any paper work or work book you need to get the job done. you forgot your homework book, you dont want to get a falling grade. on this homework. So you go to your computer from there. And you forgot your paper work, and you didn't finish this project for work tonight you would be fired, you could just go on the computer, find the work and finish Also save your job. So that why computers help out so much in this lifetime. Last, that is why in this lifetime you need computers. They help us with our vacation trips. They help with conversation with old friends we haven't seen forever. Also they help with your school and job work. At least of our population use computers every day and with out them our society would colaps/ So think about the decision you are making and will benefit our society or make our society to its knees.
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Computers used world wide everyday time used good reason Computers help making possible get info want like trip wanted go close fancy restaurant use computer know far Computers also help making possible talk friends nt seen years also great way meet new people Let s say really stressed work school forget book usually bring computer First computers help traveling sight seeing lots When travel dont want know everything And biggest detail want know cost computer usually give close exact price everything Now help s bunch traveling world And also site seeing usually want find either amazing romantic spot And type romantic spot somers come bunch spots So dont drive miles get map brochure use computer print one Second friend nt seen years want talk go computer The computer helps many ways could even tell person lives could surprise visit himher When computer even meet new friends conversations even meet someday And new friend get along mabey person could best friends So nt seen talked someone knew use computer chat Third say teacher boss yelled today one nice day forget homework book paperwork Were go computer bring paper work work book need get job done forgot homework book dont want get falling grade homework So go computer And forgot paper work nt finish project work tonight would fired could go computer find work finish Also save job So computers help much lifetime Last lifetime need computers They help us vacation trips They help conversation old friends nt seen forever Also help school job work At least population use computers every day society would colaps So think decision making benefit society make society knees
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Dear Newspaper I firmly believe that computers are beneficial to today's society. Not only do computers help us connect with peopl, but think of how efficiant they can be. And you can't neglect the fact that computers offer a profusion of entertainment. So before you say, "Computers are ruining our society.", please read my reasons why computers are essential. What is the first thing that comes to mind when I you hear 'computers'. Many people think of the chatrooms and Those are two examples of how a computer can bring people together. Imagine you doing a report on life in However, all you can find are those generic articles in old books. A simple solution is talking online to an actual person who lives in Computers can even help connect family members who live long distances from each other. I know that i would be overflowing with bliss if an aunt or uncle contacted me through '@CAPS3' or e-mail. In addition to connecting with people, computers are very efficiant. As students mature, homework is taken seriously. For instance, one of my friends handed in an essay and our teacher did not accept it. Her penmenship was not legible. Typing homework is an easy alternative to handing in messy, unsophisticated work. The efficiency of a computer is also recognized when trying to accomplish seemingly simple tasks. Just imagine how often you'd get lost without your directions from. Or how much you'd mess up if you didn't print out a recipe for dinner. Most importantly, computers are the virtual gateway to all sorts of entertainment. Whether you like playing computer games or even if shopping for the best deal is you game; a computer will suit you. There are. Thousand of website to visit and even more games just waiting to be played. A computer is anyone's passport to leisure and enjoyments. So you make the choice. Is a computer going to benefit society, or will they have catastrophic results. I urge you to remember; computer are a way to connect with people and they are efficiant. Most of all, remember how much you can achieve with a computer.
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Dear Newspaper I firmly believe computers beneficial today s society Not computers help us connect peopl think efficiant And ca nt neglect fact computers offer profusion entertainment So say Computers ruining society please read reasons computers essential What first thing comes mind I hear computers Many people think chatrooms Those two examples computer bring people together Imagine report life However find generic articles old books A simple solution talking online actual person lives Computers even help connect family members live long distances I know would overflowing bliss aunt uncle contacted CAPS email In addition connecting people computers efficiant As students mature homework taken seriously For instance one friends handed essay teacher accept Her penmenship legible Typing homework easy alternative handing messy unsophisticated work The efficiency computer also recognized trying accomplish seemingly simple tasks Just imagine often d get lost without directions Or much d mess nt print recipe dinner Most importantly computers virtual gateway sorts entertainment Whether like playing computer games even shopping best deal game computer suit There Thousand website visit even games waiting played A computer anyone s passport leisure enjoyments So make choice Is computer going benefit society catastrophic results I urge remember computer way connect people efficiant Most remember much achieve computer
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Dear your computer ever crashed, and you needed to do a presentation? Well if so, that means you probably had to do your presentation on paper, the old fashioned way. Recently, there been a debate going on between experts about computers. Some think they make your life more efficient while others think they make you spend too much time on them rather than outdoors. I believe that computers make our lives easier and that the advances in technology have a positive effect on people. I think this because it teaches you skills and updates you on info. around the world, it's efficient for work and helps the environment, and lastly, it let's people stay in touch. Computers have a positive effect on people because it let's family members stay in touch. Emails are an example of this. Instead of mailing a letter, you are electronically sending it. The person recieves it quicker and can answer ina more timely manner. Also, social networking sites help families keep in touch. One example of this is facebook. You can see what the person is doing and chat with them using facebook chat. I relate to this. My cousin lives in so I don't see him a lot. Through facebook, we can talk and update each other on our lives. Lastly, you can see pictures of your family. Many families have accounts on photo sharing sites. This enables them to see pictures or recent vacations or sporting events. They can comment and every member of the family can see how everyone looks/changes throughout the year. That is how computers let people stay in touch. Another reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because it teaches you skills and updates you on information. Computers teach you hand-eye coordination. When you type with a keyboard, you have to know where each letter is. This makes it possible to lok at the screen to recognize my errors. Hand eye coordination is a good skill for everyone to know. Computers update you on world news. Many homepage on the internet have news engines built into them. These news engines keep people updates on major news events. For example, the war in or more recently, the and earthquakes. Without the internet, we would be very behind on important news updates around the world. My last reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because it is efficient for work and they help the environment. Computers help the environment because you are not using as much paper. Throughout the year, use billions of sheets of paper to write letters. With computers that number goes down into the thousands. Why you ask? Emails don't recquire paper. They are electronic, which means no paper. They are also environmentally friendly because news paper companies are going out of buisness. Due to online news paper news is becoming less and less popular. Computers are efficient for work because it is so easy to make presentations. There are so many programs to use, that making a big presentation could take minutes. That is why computers make work easy but help the environment at the same time. As you can see, computers have many positive effect on people. They let family members stay in touch, they teach you skills, and they are efficient for work while being environmentally friendly. That is why I believe computers have a positive effect on people. Let me ask you this question again. your computer ever crashed when you needed to do a big project? Now you know that computers make life efficient. What would you do without them? So now it's your turn, go out and buy a computer because you will be thankful you did.
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Dear computer ever crashed needed presentation Well means probably presentation paper old fashioned way Recently debate going experts computers Some think make life efficient others think make spend much time rather outdoors I believe computers make lives easier advances technology positive effect people I think teaches skills updates info around world s efficient work helps environment lastly let s people stay touch Computers positive effect people let s family members stay touch Emails example Instead mailing letter electronically sending The person recieves quicker answer ina timely manner Also social networking sites help families keep touch One example facebook You see person chat using facebook chat I relate My cousin lives I nt see lot Through facebook talk update lives Lastly see pictures family Many families accounts photo sharing sites This enables see pictures recent vacations sporting events They comment every member family see everyone lookschanges throughout year That computers let people stay touch Another reason computers positive effect people teaches skills updates information Computers teach handeye coordination When type keyboard know letter This makes possible lok screen recognize errors Hand eye coordination good skill everyone know Computers update world news Many homepage internet news engines built These news engines keep people updates major news events For example war recently earthquakes Without internet would behind important news updates around world My last reason computers positive effect people efficient work help environment Computers help environment using much paper Throughout year use billions sheets paper write letters With computers number goes thousands Why ask Emails nt recquire paper They electronic means paper They also environmentally friendly news paper companies going buisness Due online news paper news becoming less less popular Computers efficient work easy make presentations There many programs use making big presentation could take minutes That computers make work easy help environment time As see computers many positive effect people They let family members stay touch teach skills efficient work environmentally friendly That I believe computers positive effect people Let ask question computer ever crashed needed big project Now know computers make life efficient What would without So s turn go buy computer thankful
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I saw in one of the news papers I got in the mail that had an overnight for people to state their opinion on kids computer useage. I took the idea of waiting this letter. Multiple people do have to use computers for multiple things. Such as: homework assignments such as essays, sometimes peoples family members go off to was but can't use cell phones, also online job alpications. To start off with, kids have homework assignment right? Most of the time people have to do essays. I ask my mom lots of times if I can do an essay for school, she say, "why don't you stay after to do it?" have lives so they can't stay after, also at school the computers don't let you go on most websites unlike at home which does. That's mostly one main reasons kids use computers alot. Next,, some family members go off to war. Normally for safly and privacy, they wont let the soldiers life their cellphones, but for other reasons they can use their computers. Usually your family members know that you have a computer and want to contact you so that they to know their ok so they don't have to for two years. So, the base they ace at you can talk to them over video mail. I have an that went to and is now in and we sometimes talk to him over chat when he was in Lastly, job aplications. Most of the time people are home bound but need a job. Tons of commertials show avertisements for jobs online. This is good for all types for people, homebound, elderly, ect. But mostly its good because they sometimes let you have your own business and you get good pay still. In conclution, Some people don't go online just to be online they actually are doing something such as talking to their loved ones that they wont see for along period of time, also school assignments. Plus, if people don't know people very well how do they know if they're active or not kids, and adults, should still be able to use computers when ever they want.
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I saw one news papers I got mail overnight people state opinion kids computer useage I took idea waiting letter Multiple people use computers multiple things Such homework assignments essays sometimes peoples family members go ca nt use cell phones also online job alpications To start kids homework assignment right Most time people essays I ask mom lots times I essay school say nt stay lives ca nt stay also school computers nt let go websites unlike home That s mostly one main reasons kids use computers alot Next family members go war Normally safly privacy wont let soldiers life cellphones reasons use computers Usually family members know computer want contact know ok nt two years So base ace talk video mail I went sometimes talk chat Lastly job aplications Most time people home bound need job Tons commertials show avertisements jobs online This good types people homebound elderly ect But mostly good sometimes let business get good pay still In conclution Some people nt go online online actually something talking loved ones wont see along period time also school assignments Plus people nt know people well know re active kids adults still able use computers ever want
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Dear editor, name is and I believe that computers are a benefit to the world, and people as well. I say this because lots of people can talk to family of friends long distance. Also the computer can teach you lots of thing. Finally it makes you more social. In strong opinion computers are better for the world. Firstly, many people can talk long distance with family of friends. You have web cam and that allows you to chat and see the person. Also is another site where you can talk to friends and then you can have a lot and put pictures of yourself and even videos, even though you can talk on the phone and do all this but on the phone it costs money for a plan. When you use a computer it is completely free. Secondly, the computer teaches you things that help you later on in life, and it let's you know things as well. The computer people made programs that can computers and more really cool. The programs teach you how to type, it is called type to learn or type for fun. Also they have programs that let you know how to read. It is great for kids because they need to know these things any ways. Finally, the computer makes you more social. This is because you have and it let's you know things that happen in school or out of school. You can talk to people on or email each other and have a conversation with them. You can also meet new people from other places and have a good relationship with them. You have friends with and know who they are and won't need to figure it out. So, this is why I believe that having a computer is a good idea, and good to have. You can talk to people long distance. The computer teaches you things for life. Finally it makes you more social with people. So in strong opinion it is a good idea to have a computer.
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Dear editor name I believe computers benefit world people well I say lots people talk family friends long distance Also computer teach lots thing Finally makes social In strong opinion computers better world Firstly many people talk long distance family friends You web cam allows chat see person Also another site talk friends lot put pictures even videos even though talk phone phone costs money plan When use computer completely free Secondly computer teaches things help later life let s know things well The computer people made programs computers really cool The programs teach type called type learn type fun Also programs let know read It great kids need know things ways Finally computer makes social This let s know things happen school school You talk people email conversation You also meet new people places good relationship You friends know wo nt need figure So I believe computer good idea good You talk people long distance The computer teaches things life Finally makes social people So strong opinion good idea computer
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Dear I think computers are good to society, because you can read the news paper online, email your friends and family, and can play games and watch videos or movies. Knowing the latest news is very important, news paper are okay but you have to pay for them with the news paper online you can get the latest news for free! This way you can save money and trees. Heres another way of saving trees. E-mailing is a good to talk so some one far away and it's a lot faster than just regular old mailing. E-mail is also good for e-mailing links to cool websites, on e-mail can send a funny picture or a video or an important notice. So, Computers can be your news paper and a good and fast way of communication. It also can be useful for entertainment. Computers are one of the most popular entertainment sources. Computers allow you to go on game sites, watch videos or movies or play on online game on just a regular game. I know whenever I'm bore I go on my computer and I can always find something to don on line or find a movie to watch. So, computers are very popular, in many areas computers are helpful in news, communication, and entertainment. People just need to look at the positive aspects of computers, then they will see how great they are
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Dear I think computers good society read news paper online email friends family play games watch videos movies Knowing latest news important news paper okay pay news paper online get latest news free This way save money trees Heres another way saving trees Emailing good talk one far away s lot faster regular old mailing Email also good emailing links cool websites email send funny picture video important notice So Computers news paper good fast way communication It also useful entertainment Computers one popular entertainment sources Computers allow go game sites watch videos movies play online game regular game I know whenever I m bore I go computer I always find something line find movie watch So computers popular many areas computers helpful news communication entertainment People need look positive aspects computers see great
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judgment comes from expirience, and expirience comes from bad judgement, qouted from my uncle's dad. Computers haven't been around all that long for the public, so the public has little experience. Therefore, the public also lacks judgement in using computers and the detrimental effects are starting to show. Computers have caused damage to people! To begin with, computers can be a issue for people. In studies in out of who spend their time (@NUM3 or more hours) are wearing glasses. Because of bad effects the screen has on your eyes. Furthermore, computer games are made to be addicting, which causes to sit in front of the computer instead of excercising. This be one of the biggest causes of obesity in My little brother used to be addicted to a flying game, and he sat in front of it for hours every day and started to get fat. As soon as he stopped playing it and going outside more he immediatly started to lose fat. Therefore, people need to move around more instead of sitting in front of the computer. To continue, my second argument is about detrimental effects computers have on the enviroment. First, computers need electricity to run. That electricity comes from power plants. Over of powerplants are coal, petroleum, or natural gas based. When people turn on the computer because they are bored, it wastes electricity that doesn't need to be used. Furthermore, scientists suspect humans are now a major cause of global warming. It is common sense that those powerplants burn their respective fuels to create electricity. In other words there is a definite connection between computers and global warming. Also, the powerplants release pollutants into the air that can eventually cause acid rain. To end with, my last argument is about people's skills. In a school survey, who used their computers for more than hours per day didn't know how to cook or how to even light a match! There is a definite connection between the two as most people just put something in the microwave to eat to be able to go back to the computers as fast as possible. The matches are lit by parents to light fires or candles, But what happens when a natural disaster strikes like in or How will be able to fend for themselves? The only way to cook would be with fire. There wouldn't be microwaves to cook canned food with. Furthermore, how would be able to even start a fire without how to light a match? Evidently excessive computer use could have very detrimental effects in a natural disaster, even to adults, so we need to stop it! Do you want to be thought of as and Should the enviroment, our only home, suffer because of a few bored people? How will we handle a major natural disaster? In conclusion, people are spending too much time on their computers, and they need to stop! People are becoming the environment, and losing important life skills. We need to all come together and cooperate to keep people healthy, to retain our life skills, but most importantly ssave our one and only beautiful
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judgment comes expirience expirience comes bad judgement qouted uncle s dad Computers nt around long public public little experience Therefore public also lacks judgement using computers detrimental effects starting show Computers caused damage people To begin computers issue people In studies spend time NUM hours wearing glasses Because bad effects screen eyes Furthermore computer games made addicting causes sit front computer instead excercising This one biggest causes obesity My little brother used addicted flying game sat front hours every day started get fat As soon stopped playing going outside immediatly started lose fat Therefore people need move around instead sitting front computer To continue second argument detrimental effects computers enviroment First computers need electricity run That electricity comes power plants Over powerplants coal petroleum natural gas based When people turn computer bored wastes electricity nt need used Furthermore scientists suspect humans major cause global warming It common sense powerplants burn respective fuels create electricity In words definite connection computers global warming Also powerplants release pollutants air eventually cause acid rain To end last argument people s skills In school survey used computers hours per day nt know cook even light match There definite connection two people put something microwave eat able go back computers fast possible The matches lit parents light fires candles But happens natural disaster strikes like How able fend The way cook would fire There would nt microwaves cook canned food Furthermore would able even start fire without light match Evidently excessive computer use could detrimental effects natural disaster even adults need stop Do want thought Should enviroment home suffer bored people How handle major natural disaster In conclusion people spending much time computers need stop People becoming environment losing important life skills We need come together cooperate keep people healthy retain life skills importantly ssave one beautiful
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Dear these days are telling kids to go outside instead of vegging out in front of a computer. Computers can but promote bad habits. I try not to use the computer unless I have too for school or to get homework. Please consider the negative effects which are exercising in apropprate content and less interaction with friends/family. Yes internets can be used to find diets and exercise plans but if you would just go to the gym to burn of those pounds everything would be just fine! Internet and computers are designed to suck in your brain, and attack you to all the websites and neat little things. It is more effective just to go to a local or to work out. I swim on a swim team for a I love swimming better than going on the computer. It satisfies my personal needs of exercising. I lost pounds by just swimming for a month. I will run on the tred mill to help me burn of stress or anger. Gyms are way better than computers. I know most of us have seen something inapropprate on the computer. Yes computers give people jobs but there is no need to post pictures or messages that will hurt peoples feelings. I know the other day I saw a really mean comment that made me feel bad for the victim. I know youtube is trying to stop inappropriate content, so hurray for them. Once you give something to the internet it is lost forever. Yes computers have ways to keep in touch with friends but it is better to or visit in person. Like my always said," more, it builds character!" ever I get the chance I my best buddies instead of using the computer. Kids theses days can be mean with out try. You disconnect yourself from your family. Because computers attrack users, there are times where you don't pay attention to others around you. of kids donot do there home work because of computers. Thank you for your time. I think computers are bad and everyone would be happy with out them. They help the obesity level in the nation, let cyber bullying and inappronrate content flow around the internet and lastly block you out from the world. ( someday computers are going to take over the world and you will be sorry you didn't listen to me.)
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Dear days telling kids go outside instead vegging front computer Computers promote bad habits I try use computer unless I school get homework Please consider negative effects exercising apropprate content less interaction friendsfamily Yes internets used find diets exercise plans would go gym burn pounds everything would fine Internet computers designed suck brain attack websites neat little things It effective go local work I swim swim team I love swimming better going computer It satisfies personal needs exercising I lost pounds swimming month I run tred mill help burn stress anger Gyms way better computers I know us seen something inapropprate computer Yes computers give people jobs need post pictures messages hurt peoples feelings I know day I saw really mean comment made feel bad victim I know youtube trying stop inappropriate content hurray Once give something internet lost forever Yes computers ways keep touch friends better visit person Like always said builds character ever I get chance I best buddies instead using computer Kids theses days mean try You disconnect family Because computers attrack users times nt pay attention others around kids donot home work computers Thank time I think computers bad everyone would happy They help obesity level nation let cyber bullying inappronrate content flow around internet lastly block world someday computers going take world sorry nt listen
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Dear paper, name is and I am writing this letter on the count of the computer issue. look on this subject is the oppisite. People spend more time on the computer then exercising, but theycould still be social in chat rooms. People can use laptops out doors. You can spread your imagination with the games you can play. Lets get onto first point, being social. The experts say that people are spending less time with there friends and family then on the computer. They be spending less time with there friend and family physicly, but who said there not being social. Theres facebook, and chat rooms. You can talk to your friend on there so they on being social. Not being physicly social but verbily social. On to next subject the expert say were not enjoying out doors, but the over looked something here it is. If were not enjoying outdoors then half of amarica would be as plae as can be. Then theres laptops. You can use thoughs out doors. People that have laptops can go outside on a sunny day grab some fruit and relax. You could stay out there till the batterie deis. Then just grab the pluge and keep relaxing its easy. Computers also help your imagination. Some computer games help expand your imagination because when your playing games you think of things that could make the game better. Simulaters help you design or even controll things. Some games allow you design and play as a character you created. They help you jobs that you might be intrested in. For me computer games expanded drawing. All these thing can be reversed. No one is a robot that repeats what they do over and over again. Humanity has the power to get off the computer, and go outside or be social. As I just proved everything you can physicly you can do on the computer.
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Dear paper name I writing letter count computer issue look subject oppisite People spend time computer exercising theycould still social chat rooms People use laptops doors You spread imagination games play Lets get onto first point social The experts say people spending less time friends family computer They spending less time friend family physicly said social Theres facebook chat rooms You talk friend social Not physicly social verbily social On next subject expert say enjoying doors looked something If enjoying outdoors half amarica would plae Then theres laptops You use thoughs doors People laptops go outside sunny day grab fruit relax You could stay till batterie deis Then grab pluge keep relaxing easy Computers also help imagination Some computer games help expand imagination playing games think things could make game better Simulaters help design even controll things Some games allow design play character created They help jobs might intrested For computer games expanded drawing All thing reversed No one robot repeats Humanity power get computer go outside social As I proved everything physicly computer
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Dear Computers do put possitive affect on people and it also teaches us. So I think computers are very important and they are needed in people lives. We learn information about the world and about what is going on. It also helps us comunicate with friends and family. Lastly it can help us gather information for homework and projects. First, while we are on the computer it tells us baout the world and different countries. The computers tell us how the war is and about what the president is doing. The computer also gives us information about local news such as weather, traffic reports and if there has been a crime that has happended. We also can find out about the stockmarket which is very important to many people. Second, the computer gives the ability to talk with friends and family. AIM, and are all different ways to interact with each other. Also if we didn't hand something in at school we could always just e-mail our teachers the information that they might need by a spacific date, if a student forgets what the homework was we can just ask on the computer. Many people find old friends that they haven't seen in years, and getting to see them again and how their family is, it could make someone feel happy about knowing that their old friend has grown happy. Lastly, if students have project or homework that they need information on the computer could always help. On the computer there is a lot of information about people, places, thing, and anything you want to know. The computer gives you answer to question you have. You can get pictures and information of the thing you are looking up. It also gives you location and dates of different events that have happened in what you are looking up. Computers are very useful when it comes to sudents education. In conclusion, Computers are a very important part of everyones life. To learn about information that is happening in the world, to talk to friends or family, and to help with school work. Even if people aren't exercising they are increasing their education by finding information. You can still enjoy nature, but not as much as ussuall; you still spend time with family and friends by comunicating on the computer. Computers are one of the gratest inventions, and does have a positive effect on people.
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Dear Computers put possitive affect people also teaches us So I think computers important needed people lives We learn information world going It also helps us comunicate friends family Lastly help us gather information homework projects First computer tells us baout world different countries The computers tell us war president The computer also gives us information local news weather traffic reports crime happended We also find stockmarket important many people Second computer gives ability talk friends family AIM different ways interact Also nt hand something school could always email teachers information might need spacific date student forgets homework ask computer Many people find old friends nt seen years getting see family could make someone feel happy knowing old friend grown happy Lastly students project homework need information computer could always help On computer lot information people places thing anything want know The computer gives answer question You get pictures information thing looking It also gives location dates different events happened looking Computers useful comes sudents education In conclusion Computers important part everyones life To learn information happening world talk friends family help school work Even people nt exercising increasing education finding information You still enjoy nature much ussuall still spend time family friends comunicating computer Computers one gratest inventions positive effect people
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Dear Newspaper people, Isn't computers just swell? I mean why aren't they you can one learn up on your knowledge, two you can play alot of fun games, and last but not least we can talk to our friend. Well I hope you enjoy my essay about the computer world. Have you ever had any diffuclty finding something in a libery? Well forget your libery cards just go on the computer's On there you can fin what ever your looking for. One time I was doing a project on my favorite rocker so my mom told me to check the libery for a book on him but I couldn't find one. So instead I just jumped on my computer but not really jump on but any way so I went on the and guess what! I found all I needed to know about him getting me that rocking at on my project. i mean ther's alot more you can learn with the computer like what's going on in the world around us or even learn about little world around us or even learn about little insects to big plants. Well that's what I got for using the for knowledge. Welcome back! Well now I'm going to tell you about a few games you can play on the computer. The game I'm going to tell you about is my favorite game and called left dead you never played the game your probably like that game sound really hard and scary well is. i'm just kidding can be hard at first and a little scary but still fun. Another game I enjoy playing is a online game called, '@PERSON1," the game is fun and all but takes a while to do and kill the fun stuff. For example I'm a lvl. mage and I can take on lvl. because I can use high leveled spells. but anyways there alot of things to do on a computer. Like me you can kill zombie hared or just do a quest or two, who cares in you hands have fun. Now the last thing I'm going to tell you about is how you can talk to you friends over the well like me I moved so I couldn't really hangout with my friends so I got there so now I can talk and see my friends on a webcam. Another good reason to be able to use the or computer is you can talk to family members who joined the My uncle joined the and he's going to be leaving soon so I'm to be wanting to see him so I'll see him on webcam or be able to chat with him. Well that my reason why a good reason to have a computer. One you can use to learn, two some hard care gaming, and three just talk to friends. Thank you and have a nice day.
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Dear Newspaper people Is nt computers swell I mean nt one learn knowledge two play alot fun games last least talk friend Well I hope enjoy essay computer world Have ever diffuclty finding something libery Well forget libery cards go computer s On fin ever looking One time I project favorite rocker mom told check libery book I could nt find one So instead I jumped computer really jump way I went guess I found I needed know getting rocking project mean ther s alot learn computer like s going world around us even learn little world around us even learn little insects big plants Well s I got using knowledge Welcome back Well I m going tell games play computer The game I m going tell favorite game called left dead never played game probably like game sound really hard scary well m kidding hard first little scary still fun Another game I enjoy playing online game called PERSON game fun takes kill fun stuff For example I m lvl mage I take lvl I use high leveled spells anyways alot things computer Like kill zombie hared quest two cares hands fun Now last thing I m going tell talk friends well like I moved I could nt really hangout friends I got I talk see friends webcam Another good reason able use computer talk family members joined My uncle joined s going leaving soon I m wanting see I ll see webcam able chat Well reason good reason computer One use learn two hard care gaming three talk friends Thank nice day
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I agree with the newspaper, people are spending too much time on the computer and not exercising. everyone knows computers addictive. but people need to get out more. but people making it more addicting by creating things such as never ending games and its distracting people from there life, family, work and exercise.
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I agree newspaper people spending much time computer exercising everyone knows computers addictive people need get people making addicting creating things never ending games distracting people life family work exercise
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Dear Local Newspaper: you think computers are great for everyone? I think computers are one of the greatest inventions ever. What's really great about them is how much you can learn from computers. You can learn hand-eye coordination, learn about faraway places, and talk online to people. Surely, read on to see why computers are very important to us all. Many people think that computers are bad for our mind, but actually they're not. When on computers you can learn hand-eye coordination. You can be able to type well and very fast after a while and improve your eye sight by reading your writing or notes for a paper. Lastly, you can even have fun, relax, and type out your papers for reports. Definitely, read on to see what computers can too. They're a lot of faraway places that have their own specil way of showing you a great time. On the internet, that have a list of vacation spots or places that grab your attention to visit. They give you details on why to visit it and a fair price. Think about it, would it be cool to visit a great place, like Without a doubt, continue reading. Have you ever wanted to play outside but it was raining or your friends were not around. Well, on the computer you can talk online to your friends. You can see how their doing or what their doing and still have a good time. Not to mention, you can even make new friends. Lots of kids and teens go online to make new friends. Surely, you should agree that computers are great. I think computers are very unique and important. That's why so many kids to adults use it the computers so much. They use it to learn hand-eye coordination, learn about faraway places, and talk online to other. Thank you for reading my paper local newspaper.
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Dear Local Newspaper think computers great everyone I think computers one greatest inventions ever What s really great much learn computers You learn handeye coordination learn faraway places talk online people Surely read see computers important us Many people think computers bad mind actually re When computers learn handeye coordination You able type well fast improve eye sight reading writing notes paper Lastly even fun relax type papers reports Definitely read see computers They re lot faraway places specil way showing great time On internet list vacation spots places grab attention visit They give details visit fair price Think would cool visit great place like Without doubt continue reading Have ever wanted play outside raining friends around Well computer talk online friends You see still good time Not mention even make new friends Lots kids teens go online make new friends Surely agree computers great I think computers unique important That s many kids adults use computers much They use learn handeye coordination learn faraway places talk online Thank reading paper local newspaper
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Dear Local Newspaper our technology advance, so do are lives. Computers are a perfect way to better our way of life in ways that are benificial to us and future generations. The use of computers, and the alone allow us to learn about the way of life in other places on talk to people faraway, and express ourselves. Computers give us a bright future. First many people, actually of the worlds population are generally stationary, and line in a local town or city environments. This is why computers are so helpful because they give a way to research other places around the globe. can create an interest in other cultures, and shape our opinions discover things about other places. From there, can look at different topics in a wide spread point of view. In doing this will connect to other ways of life. philosopher and poet state" learn about ourselves through the discovery of others." another particularly handy function of the through computers is can communicate with people who live far away, when couldn't visit otherwise. A study showed that actually of use of the computer is communication with sites like facebook or A scientist in says humans tend to enjoy communication because it gives a sense of unity. This is why so many companies are realizing that sites like and are gaining in popularity." And this is true. It is enjoyable to talk, or email others. Without computers, this couldn't be possible. Lastly, computers give us the chance to express our ideas like never before. Now, stars aren't only made in but now you can make yourself famous on or Just ask who's voice reached out and caught the attention of a major record company. Now, everyone knows his name and listens to his music. Like the more wordy folks can express themselves by blogging their opinions. " About half of computer use, " says to computer weekly, is using blogs and videos to state one's ideas." can persuade others to think do and discover thngs that have discovered. Self-expression is very important to society, and this is why computers have such an affect on people. it is clear, computers have a positive affect on people and society. They allow us to learn about faraway places, communicate with others, and inspire the world around us with our ideas. Welcome to the future.
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Dear Local Newspaper technology advance lives Computers perfect way better way life ways benificial us future generations The use computers alone allow us learn way life places talk people faraway express Computers give us bright future First many people actually worlds population generally stationary line local town city environments This computers helpful give way research places around globe create interest cultures shape opinions discover things places From look different topics wide spread point view In connect ways life philosopher poet state learn discovery others another particularly handy function computers communicate people live far away could nt visit otherwise A study showed actually use computer communication sites like facebook A scientist says humans tend enjoy communication gives sense unity This many companies realizing sites like gaining popularity And true It enjoyable talk email others Without computers could nt possible Lastly computers give us chance express ideas like never Now stars nt made make famous Just ask s voice reached caught attention major record company Now everyone knows name listens music Like wordy folks express blogging opinions About half computer use says computer weekly using blogs videos state one s ideas persuade others think discover thngs discovered Selfexpression important society computers affect people clear computers positive affect people society They allow us learn faraway places communicate others inspire world around us ideas Welcome future
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Dear People of many hours a day do you spend being active? Now answer me this, much time do you spend on you computer? To many today are sitting down in front of a computer, laptop, ecetra, while not enough are lacing up their shoes for a jog. Computers are ruining us, they deter our social skills, damage our health and cause us to be lazy. They are unbenificial to our society. To start with, millions of people sign up for and other website like these to reconnect with people. Do you realize what this means? Now no one has to get in a car and go visit any one else. There is no longer a need to interact with other life forms, nor is there a want to. Lets say there's a woman sitting on her couch. All of a sudden her face lights up with the thought of her friend She gets up to go start the car, but hey eye catches on the computer. She bites her lip, trying to decide wether to go see her, or have an online chat. Feeling lazy, she sits down. Do you really want that happening to everyone? To late it already has. Moving along, i'd like to take a moment to talk about our health. As most of us knows, fresh air is good for us. Imagine this, you're walking through the woods on a trail. The crisp, cool air, tickles you skin, and breathing it in just makes you smile. Your entire body feels energized from the treking. With passels of days like this ahead, you can'@CAPS7 wait. Now imagine this, your sitting in front of a computer, in a hot, stuffy room. You back aches from being in this posistion so long. Plus you think your getting a cold and you have migrane. You'd get off, but you have another app request. You feel like moving back to reality which do you prefer? Above and beyond all this, there's exercise to worry about. I mean, when's the last time that you yourself went on a bike ride? I'm sure you know that it's good for your body if you exercise, but your to busy on the computer. I think it's safe to say that half of would rather update their than get up and move. It's crucial to our health that we get active. To sum up, alot of us are pondering wether or not to spend more time on the compuer. Well here's you answer, "@CAPS6'@CAPS7." Not enough people are interacting now a days, their spending the best years of their lifes stuffed up in a house, and most importantly, let's face it, their getting fat. Computers are taking over our lives it's now, or never, make the change to a better and more satisying lifestyle. Please turn off the computer.
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Dear People many hours day spend active Now answer much time spend computer To many today sitting front computer laptop ecetra enough lacing shoes jog Computers ruining us deter social skills damage health cause us lazy They unbenificial society To start millions people sign website like reconnect people Do realize means Now one get car go visit one else There longer need interact life forms want Lets say s woman sitting couch All sudden face lights thought friend She gets go start car hey eye catches computer She bites lip trying decide wether go see online chat Feeling lazy sits Do really want happening everyone To late already Moving along d like take moment talk health As us knows fresh air good us Imagine re walking woods trail The crisp cool air tickles skin breathing makes smile Your entire body feels energized treking With passels days like ahead CAPS wait Now imagine sitting front computer hot stuffy room You back aches posistion long Plus think getting cold migrane You d get another app request You feel like moving back reality prefer Above beyond s exercise worry I mean s last time went bike ride I m sure know s good body exercise busy computer I think s safe say half would rather update get move It s crucial health get active To sum alot us pondering wether spend time compuer Well s answer CAPS CAPS Not enough people interacting days spending best years lifes stuffed house importantly let s face getting fat Computers taking lives s never make change better satisying lifestyle Please turn computer
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Dear The effects that computers have on me is that it teaches me hand-eye coordination. I learn stuff from the computer, and it is a fun thing to go on. But, I mean those are only my opinions. Well im gonna just go ahead and explain them to you. The good thing about computers is that it teaches you hand-eye coordination which helps you see better with your eyes. Also it helps you with your hands by making you learn how to catch stuff and how to react quickly with your hands. For example I was playing baseball and I couldn't catch very good and I was also learning how to use the computer and because I was able to type fast my hands reacted when I got grounders and pop fly's hit to me. So I was so happy that I lerned how to use the computer and type. But for sure the computer is the best because you can research stuff and you find out more important facts. Also you are learnen more when ever you research anything. I'll tell you one thing though, I like the computer so much because it helps me find out important details and facts about the person that I am doing my project on. Yes I know the computer is so fun because you can go on different websites such as myspace.com, youtube.com, and funnyjunk.com. I go on mspace to talk to my friends and to meet new people that's what I like about myspace I meet new people and make new friends. I go on youtube because I like to listen to music and I watch music videos on their also I watch skate board videos too cause I love to skate! But one thing for sure is that I go on funnyjunk.com to play games cause they have so much fun games that you can play. But my favorite game is the hedgehog. In conclusion those are opinions and reasons to support the effects about computers. So I want you to think about some effects about computers and your opinions about computers and compare them to my opinions? But hey! That's up to you only if you want to.
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Dear The effects computers teaches handeye coordination I learn stuff computer fun thing go But I mean opinions Well im gon na go ahead explain The good thing computers teaches handeye coordination helps see better eyes Also helps hands making learn catch stuff react quickly hands For example I playing baseball I could nt catch good I also learning use computer I able type fast hands reacted I got grounders pop fly s hit So I happy I lerned use computer type But sure computer best research stuff find important facts Also learnen ever research anything I ll tell one thing though I like computer much helps find important details facts person I project Yes I know computer fun go different websites myspacecom youtubecom funnyjunkcom I go mspace talk friends meet new people s I like myspace I meet new people make new friends I go youtube I like listen music I watch music videos also I watch skate board videos cause I love skate But one thing sure I go funnyjunkcom play games cause much fun games play But favorite game hedgehog In conclusion opinions reasons support effects computers So I want think effects computers opinions computers compare opinions But hey That s want
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Do you think computers are helpful? Well you should because, They are the most help full object on the market, also famly members live far away you can im, facebook them or even send and to them. The main thing for tenes or chidren is easly the enjoyment you could watch your favort showes with a click of the mouse or even play freefun games. The coumputer is a very help full object. you have bad handwriting and a report is due you go and tipe up on your computer, and your teacher will think you spent all night. Doing when was easy you will also get a better grade. a big famly trip is coming up you can go online and get the trip easer then you would have , and at low price. Also you can shop its a birth day of you can get gifts for a very low price ever your family lives far and you dont get to see them a lot the internet is the place to gp, you could talk to them with instant messgr or you could facebook then. You could them or, also you could talk to them you can see them on your screen and they can see you on their screen and would be like they in the house with you, the a vecation you could send them and maps of werere your what go even info about the plases. Enjoy ment is the teen favort. you mst your favort show you could got o and sec the show for free!!! Youtube is were you could see something funny, excites, or plain grose. someone like did a asom trick and you mist look up . There are two tipes of games you could play games on the internet like addicting games com or play online are play with freinds. Know you know why the internet is great has games be close to your famly or even get help. So chus to say you think the internet is good its your dicision.
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Do think computers helpful Well They help full object market also famly members live far away im facebook even send The main thing tenes chidren easly enjoyment could watch favort showes click mouse even play freefun games The coumputer help full object bad handwriting report due go tipe computer teacher think spent night Doing easy also get better grade big famly trip coming go online get trip easer would low price Also shop birth day get gifts low price ever family lives far dont get see lot internet place gp could talk instant messgr could facebook You could also could talk see screen see screen would like house vecation could send maps werere go even info plases Enjoy ment teen favort mst favort show could got sec show free Youtube could see something funny excites plain grose someone like asom trick mist look There two tipes games could play games internet like addicting games com play online play freinds Know know internet great games close famly even get help So chus say think internet good dicision
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Dear Local Newspaper, in town use the computer for at least five hours each day. The people are spending way too much time and not benefiting. Computers have an effect on people but in a negative way. People get adicted and distracted and can't get work done. Many inappropriate things are written in computers that children and adults shouldn't read. Lastly people stare at a computer screen all day which can cause brain damage. Effects from computers can be very negative and not beneficial at all. With children at school and adults at jobs, there is most likely a lot of work to get done, but computers should make a person not get the work done. The other day in class the teacher was collecting homework, but out of the kids in our class didn't have the homework. When the teacher asked why the kids didn't do their homework, they said that they were on the computer and forgot about the homework. When the children and adults don't get their work done then grades could be dropped, or people could get fired. The effect is very harmful, and all this happened just because of the adiction and distraction of computers. Since some internet sources are very social, and not all people are kind, mean and inappropriate articles and language could be read. Many children don't know a lot of bad words and certainly no one wants them to be exposed to learning more, so why let them go on the computer and read about these bad things? Adults know more about the harmful language, but why influence them to write the bad things or comment using mean tones. If adults and children aren't exposed to these bad uses of language then our world could easily be made up of better and kinder people. Studies show that if a person stares at a computer screen for at least three hours a day, then in about two weeks time the person brain could be damaged. The screen of the computer in some way with the human brain and if stared at for too long the screen could permenately damage the brain. A student, who studies computer mechanics, quoted, "@CAPS2 help prevent brain damage by limiting the use of computers to only what needs to be done. The mechanics to make the computer screen are not healthy for you!" Who wants to have a damaged brain? Surely this effect could be very serious. So, in the end people should know that computers are not benefiticial. Computers effect people for sure, but not in a way that people would want to be effected. Adiction and distraction from the computer could cause important work to be ignored. Children and adults do not need to learn or be influenced by inappropriate language on the computer. Brain damage could be a serious problem that could be caused by something as simple as looking at a computer screen. try to prevent all these negative effects by limiting the use of your computer. It is very easy to stay clear of any negative effects but it is your choice whether to do so or not.
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Dear Local Newspaper town use computer least five hours day The people spending way much time benefiting Computers effect people negative way People get adicted distracted ca nt get work done Many inappropriate things written computers children adults nt read Lastly people stare computer screen day cause brain damage Effects computers negative beneficial With children school adults jobs likely lot work get done computers make person get work done The day class teacher collecting homework kids class nt homework When teacher asked kids nt homework said computer forgot homework When children adults nt get work done grades could dropped people could get fired The effect harmful happened adiction distraction computers Since internet sources social people kind mean inappropriate articles language could read Many children nt know lot bad words certainly one wants exposed learning let go computer read bad things Adults know harmful language influence write bad things comment using mean tones If adults children nt exposed bad uses language world could easily made better kinder people Studies show person stares computer screen least three hours day two weeks time person brain could damaged The screen computer way human brain stared long screen could permenately damage brain A student studies computer mechanics quoted CAPS help prevent brain damage limiting use computers needs done The mechanics make computer screen healthy Who wants damaged brain Surely effect could serious So end people know computers benefiticial Computers effect people sure way people would want effected Adiction distraction computer could cause important work ignored Children adults need learn influenced inappropriate language computer Brain damage could serious problem could caused something simple looking computer screen try prevent negative effects limiting use computer It easy stay clear negative effects choice whether
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Every where you look people are using computers. Just about everyone has one. Some say that computers are bad for you but they can really benefit society. Computers are used for research, socializing and almost all of our work is done on computers. One of the main things that computers provide is research information. If you want to find out anything, you can find it on the internet. It is an efficient way to study or find information for school. Before the internet and computers, it would take weeks to find enough information for a paper or business work. This was because all information was found in books. Books did not always give you the information you needed whatever was written was all you got. Because of saearch engines and websites, you can type in whatever you want to look up. It is much easier to log onto a computer and type in a question than search an entire book to find an answer. Computers are the best way to research a topic. Computers are also used to socialize. You can chat with almost anyone on the internet. Being social is one of the most important parts of life. It has been proven by science that social people live longer than people who never talk to anyone. The person you're talking to phnes only give you audio and that doesn't give you the some thing. video chat can allow you to show someone a picture or an expression. Computers allow you to see people that you can't see otherwise. For example, if you have a relative that lives far way and you cant him or her, you can see them through video that socializing through computers is pne of the best ways to talk to people. Our is mainly run on computers, without them, it would be very difficult to be aware of an on coming attack or threat. The uses computers to store thir legal files of court cases laws, etc. It is much easier to transfer files digitally than actually sending a paper copy. The store market is also run on computers. You need them to see how you are doing financially computers are essential to our and economy. Although some experts say that computers do us no good, computers benefit our society very much. They help us research, socialize and they help our and economy. Computers are essential to our way of life.
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Every look people using computers Just everyone one Some say computers bad really benefit society Computers used research socializing almost work done computers One main things computers provide research information If want find anything find internet It efficient way study find information school Before internet computers would take weeks find enough information paper business work This information found books Books always give information needed whatever written got Because saearch engines websites type whatever want look It much easier log onto computer type question search entire book find answer Computers best way research topic Computers also used socialize You chat almost anyone internet Being social one important parts life It proven science social people live longer people never talk anyone The person re talking phnes give audio nt give thing video chat allow show someone picture expression Computers allow see people ca nt see otherwise For example relative lives far way cant see video socializing computers pne best ways talk people Our mainly run computers without would difficult aware coming attack threat The uses computers store thir legal files court cases laws etc It much easier transfer files digitally actually sending paper copy The store market also run computers You need see financially computers essential economy Although experts say computers us good computers benefit society much They help us research socialize help economy Computers essential way life
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I think that the computers are good to be used because anybody can use them at anytime or go on it whenever they want to. The reason why I think it is good is because you can contact someone that you know and talk to them whenever you want. Another reason is because you can play games or look for something or even make a research on stuff that you want to know or about something that you were always curious about. A computer is also usefull for better things like using it for when going to work or when a kid in school needs to do a report of project and needs to do it in typing and also to save stuff that you don't want nobody to use. Computers can sometimes be helpfull to people that really need it and that actually need to use it, but it can also be a fun activity to do if anybody doesnt have nothing to do. I think that the computer is awsome because anybody enough can open up their own website and create something what. A lot of people can go on the internet and open an account on a website; for example a or a or a for that what to have an account. These are a lot of people that use the computer in a good way and use it for things that it can actually be used for. So I think that the computers are avery helpfull to people that like seaching for stuff that there curious about or to have to use it for good needs.
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I think computers good used anybody use anytime go whenever want The reason I think good contact someone know talk whenever want Another reason play games look something even make research stuff want know something always curious A computer also usefull better things like using going work kid school needs report project needs typing also save stuff nt want nobody use Computers sometimes helpfull people really need actually need use also fun activity anybody doesnt nothing I think computer awsome anybody enough open website create something A lot people go internet open account website example account These lot people use computer good way use things actually used So I think computers avery helpfull people like seaching stuff curious use good needs
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Computers dont have any affect on kids we just love going on cause we use it for help and this persuade the readers of the local newspaper cause we need to be able to communicate also do writing essays and doing social studies or science homework my ideas are let us go computers cause were not bothering u can just leave us alone and let us do what you need to do cause what computers are what give us information for we have to do and were to do wat we gotta do and u people can just leave us alone cause arent addicting to me or anyone and if we were it still would it matter cause a computers a computer u dont punish it because just punish us from the computer punish us because of it cause its the computer fault it can be addicting cause the computer is device that gives us wat we need and the information we also the computer does favors for us the computer is a amazing thing
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Computers dont affect kids love going cause use help persuade readers local newspaper cause need able communicate also writing essays social studies science homework ideas let us go computers cause bothering u leave us alone let us need cause computers give us information wat got ta u people leave us alone cause arent addicting anyone still would matter cause computers computer u dont punish punish us computer punish us cause computer fault addicting cause computer device gives us wat need information also computer favors us computer amazing thing
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Dear, concerned with an issue that people are using computers and not exersising. This is a very bad thing and we need to let the word out of what can happen if we don't exercise. The first reason why I disagree of the fact that computers help people is because computers really affect your health you will become fat you start having problems with your heart and it can lead to something fatal. Another reason why I think computers are healthy is because comptuers affect the economy alot in so many ways for example computers use up so much electricity it affects the power in all states. Computers also ruin jobs and this is very bad for the economy people will be addictied to computers for so long they wont bother looking for jobs they will just stay on the computer and gamble or buy stuff. The last reason why I think computers are bad is because of some of the illegal stuff people do on computers there are alot of cyber predetors that prey on kids and they end up finding the kid and kidnapp them. There are also other illegal stuff like bad websites or popups that can get you arrested so if kids go on computers they will not no what something means and they will click on it and it can traumitize a kid their whole life. So I hope you can take this letter into recognation and do something about it cause thes computers can affect my health your health and even your childrens health. That is why I have written this letter to you. If you agree with me I thank you.
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Dear concerned issue people using computers exersising This bad thing need let word happen nt exercise The first reason I disagree fact computers help people computers really affect health become fat start problems heart lead something fatal Another reason I think computers healthy comptuers affect economy alot many ways example computers use much electricity affects power states Computers also ruin jobs bad economy people addictied computers long wont bother looking jobs stay computer gamble buy stuff The last reason I think computers bad illegal stuff people computers alot cyber predetors prey kids end finding kid kidnapp There also illegal stuff like bad websites popups get arrested kids go computers something means click traumitize kid whole life So I hope take letter recognation something cause thes computers affect health health even childrens health That I written letter If agree I thank
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Computers can affect the way people are and how they interact. Why is there a need to spend your precious life sitting in front of a compute all day?When you can be getting exercise for example going to your local gym. Computers become a distraction to your social life, thats why you should use them for emergency's and spend more time with your wonderful family and friends. Lastly you can enjoy you surrounding and appreciate life and nature. Computers are meant for business not for people to sit around and to nonsense things. Exercise is very important it helps the human body grow and stay in fit. If your sitting in front of a computer all day your body is going to shut down and won't get the proper exercise. Sports can be just as enjoyable and helps build the human body and gives you the right amount of exercise that your body needs. Sports also build hand and eye coordination just like if your sitting on the couch using a computer. In conclusion exercising can give you all of the same utensils that computers give you but it also benefits citizens more. Family is a wonderful thing in life, but they don't live forever. That's why we should cherries every last moment we have with them. A complete citizens and drives them from family and friends. Computers can take away your social life and you never do go out and meet people and friends. To sum things up computers are a to citizens and cause them to drive out family and friends. Nature is exotic and beautiful and all of us should take care of it and appreciate what we have. Computers can become harmful to nature and destroy homes for animals, for example when you print something from your computer it prints if out on paper. This causes more trees to be knocked down and cut for paper. We should only use paper for emergency's and not splurge on it. We all want the world to be a better place so stop destroying it for our own benefits! In conclusion computers just in the and will cause chaos and destruction. Instead of using them we could be getting the right amount of exercise, and spending it with family, and lastly enjoying nature and our surroundings. I strongly consider that you take my ideas into consideration and hopefully agree with them.
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Computers affect way people interact Why need spend precious life sitting front compute day When getting exercise example going local gym Computers become distraction social life thats use emergency s spend time wonderful family friends Lastly enjoy surrounding appreciate life nature Computers meant business people sit around nonsense things Exercise important helps human body grow stay fit If sitting front computer day body going shut wo nt get proper exercise Sports enjoyable helps build human body gives right amount exercise body needs Sports also build hand eye coordination like sitting couch using computer In conclusion exercising give utensils computers give also benefits citizens Family wonderful thing life nt live forever That s cherries every last moment A complete citizens drives family friends Computers take away social life never go meet people friends To sum things computers citizens cause drive family friends Nature exotic beautiful us take care appreciate Computers become harmful nature destroy homes animals example print something computer prints paper This causes trees knocked cut paper We use paper emergency s splurge We want world better place stop destroying benefits In conclusion computers cause chaos destruction Instead using could getting right amount exercise spending family lastly enjoying nature surroundings I strongly consider take ideas consideration hopefully agree
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In my opinion computers can be entertaining and educational, but should not replace everyday living. Therefore I think that computers harm people and effect them in ways they do not realize. Three reasons that support my decision are the difference between reality and fantacy, family and friends, and your health. Many children and young adults are vulnerable to the assumtion that everything you see on the computer is true. Well, as some find out it is everything but that. The addictive games and electronic features lead you to believe that the people or you see are real life situations and activities. Computers are showing kids the wrong mind frame they need to be in. It affects school work and how they behave. They need to be in the right state of mind and get back to reality. Your family and friends have always been there for you. By your side even through your worst. Unfourtunetly, this addiction to the computer has brought you farther away from them. They are not happy with the way you treat them. They want a change so you can enjoy life again. Interact with a human being, not some graphic designed computer picture. That's all it is anyway, and that picture isn't going to be there for you. Your family and friends last longer than that. Your body is special and your health is important. A computer suggest exercise but you are not going to really do it. You know that and the people who make computer sites know that. Your going to stay there and burn your eyes out from looking at a screen all day. It is not healthy for you or anyone else. Moving you fingers and pushing buttons is not exercise. Your already sitting anyway, so you are not doing anything helpful to yourself. You need to go outside and breathe in air and be in nature. Run around or play a bill game, but not on the computer. In conclusion, you can see how a computer can effect a person. Not only do they mistake fantacy and reality as the same thing, but you lose interaction with your friends and loved ones. Your health is also at risk when you spend hours staring and not moving anything but maybe two fingers. Please consider the risks and believe the facts because honestly, we are losing the chance to live and enjoy the world.
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In opinion computers entertaining educational replace everyday living Therefore I think computers harm people effect ways realize Three reasons support decision difference reality fantacy family friends health Many children young adults vulnerable assumtion everything see computer true Well find everything The addictive games electronic features lead believe people see real life situations activities Computers showing kids wrong mind frame need It affects school work behave They need right state mind get back reality Your family friends always By side even worst Unfourtunetly addiction computer brought farther away They happy way treat They want change enjoy life Interact human graphic designed computer picture That s anyway picture nt going Your family friends last longer Your body special health important A computer suggest exercise going really You know people make computer sites know Your going stay burn eyes looking screen day It healthy anyone else Moving fingers pushing buttons exercise Your already sitting anyway anything helpful You need go outside breathe air nature Run around play bill game computer In conclusion see computer effect person Not mistake fantacy reality thing lose interaction friends loved ones Your health also risk spend hours staring moving anything maybe two fingers Please consider risks believe facts honestly losing chance live enjoy world
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Hi! My name is and I think computers are not bad. I think this because yes, people do play the computer to much, but they can also learn a lot of things. Another reason is that some kids like bullys can stop bulling and spend time on the computer to stay away from stress. You can also talk to your friends and even video chat with them too. Computers can teach you a lot. For example your computer breaks or has virus you can just figure out the problem by yourself. You can also learn or read the news that your missing. For example you can also ask questions that you don't understand and people would answer your question. In moder afoot kids, teens, and even adult computers to look up things that they don't understand. For example, when I read along a book and read a word that I don't know and read around I still don't now I would go to and find what the words mean. Bullys and other people like street people that have computers should stay on the computer and you can just play games. They can play hitting games, shooting games, and even board games. You can even watch fights you want. What ever you want you got it. This is a good thing because then no one will get and everyone will be happy. Bullys can also go on the computer to relax and stay away from people that they hate. The computers can make you relax because you don't have to be around people and you can just tell the computer to do what ever you want. Kids, teens, and adult don't have to leave the house justto talk to a friend or two. I said this because most computers hace a microcam and you can comminicate with others. For example my dad is trying to get a computer with a micro-cam so that he can be incontact with my mom, my brother, my sister, and I. He has to get one because the doesn't live with us any more. He had to leave and go back to Another example, would be that one of your friends move far, far away you can just talk to them on the micro-cam or even send message back and forth. So I think computers are not a bad idea or a bad things. I say this because you can learn, stay good, and communicate.
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Hi My name I think computers bad I think yes people play computer much also learn lot things Another reason kids like bullys stop bulling spend time computer stay away stress You also talk friends even video chat Computers teach lot For example computer breaks virus figure problem You also learn read news missing For example also ask questions nt understand people would answer question In moder afoot kids teens even adult computers look things nt understand For example I read along book read word I nt know read around I still nt I would go find words mean Bullys people like street people computers stay computer play games They play hitting games shooting games even board games You even watch fights want What ever want got This good thing one get everyone happy Bullys also go computer relax stay away people hate The computers make relax nt around people tell computer ever want Kids teens adult nt leave house justto talk friend two I said computers hace microcam comminicate others For example dad trying get computer microcam incontact mom brother sister I He get one nt live us He leave go back Another example would one friends move far far away talk microcam even send message back forth So I think computers bad idea bad things I say learn stay good communicate
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Dear Newspaper of The use of the computer is a controversial topic. Many people have varying opinions & beliefs, But I personally believe that computers have a positive effect on the people who use & operate them. These remarkable devices give people the ability to talk & be social with friends and family members. They let people know what is going on in the world, and give updates on the condition of countries and events. They will also provide information, and give people the ability to research and learn more about a topic or idea. A computer is a necessity in todays society, & to go against it is a proposterous motion. Many people young & old are starting to use the computer to be social with friends & family members through various types of websites & programs. A computer is to talk to someone without physically being there. The social aspect of a computer is rising in popularity and many people are using computers to be social. Social networking sites, and instant messaging programs are just two at the many ways to be socially active on a computer. A social networking site as a website that allows you to make an account and post pictures and information for your friends to see. To take away the computer would take away many peoples social lives. The computer benefits many people socially and this has a positive effect on their lives. Todays news is always with exciting events and horrible disaters that many people like to be updated with. Most people do not like to wait for the newspaper to arrive to read about the fastest news. So they check online and find about it there. Online news is widely popular & extremely beneficial to many people. It provides them with the lastest stories and updated events. Online news was extremely crucial in the lastest disaster, the earthquake in Because online news is so fast and easy to acess. People were donating & helping just a day after the earthquake happened. The fast response is what is helping rebuild from the rubble. Computers provide people with online news & this is definitely beneficial to their lives. Before people starting using computers to research topics & ideas they would use books. They would have to shuffle through piles of pages and articles in newspapers. This is a very inefficient & disorganized way to be research. Now we have the computer. The computer allows you to recall through endless information and topics. It is not possible to an article or essay with information because it will always be in the same place. This allows for guide and efficient research. There are also websites called online databases on the internet. All have to do is type in a keyword or phrase and you have instant research on whatever you wont you wont information on. All this takes time off of research and put it on whatevers else you would wanting to be doing, whether it is writing a paper or doing a presentation. The computer allows for quick and beneficial research. The computer hasn't been in use for that long and it is already helping society expand & grow. It provides a social aspect where you can talk to friends & family. You can provide yourself with the lastest news & stories, and you can do quick & easy research. A computer without a doubt has a positive effect on society and we as people. The experts can say what they want, but the computer is and always will be benefit to society.
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Dear Newspaper The use computer controversial topic Many people varying opinions beliefs But I personally believe computers positive effect people use operate These remarkable devices give people ability talk social friends family members They let people know going world give updates condition countries events They also provide information give people ability research learn topic idea A computer necessity todays society go proposterous motion Many people young old starting use computer social friends family members various types websites programs A computer talk someone without physically The social aspect computer rising popularity many people using computers social Social networking sites instant messaging programs two many ways socially active computer A social networking site website allows make account post pictures information friends see To take away computer would take away many peoples social lives The computer benefits many people socially positive effect lives Todays news always exciting events horrible disaters many people like updated Most people like wait newspaper arrive read fastest news So check online find Online news widely popular extremely beneficial many people It provides lastest stories updated events Online news extremely crucial lastest disaster earthquake Because online news fast easy acess People donating helping day earthquake happened The fast response helping rebuild rubble Computers provide people online news definitely beneficial lives Before people starting using computers research topics ideas would use books They would shuffle piles pages articles newspapers This inefficient disorganized way research Now computer The computer allows recall endless information topics It possible article essay information always place This allows guide efficient research There also websites called online databases internet All type keyword phrase instant research whatever wont wont information All takes time research put whatevers else would wanting whether writing paper presentation The computer allows quick beneficial research The computer nt use long already helping society expand grow It provides social aspect talk friends family You provide lastest news stories quick easy research A computer without doubt positive effect society people The experts say want computer always benefit society
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Dear Computers are beginning to be a problem in many households. I feel that too many people are becoming addicted to computers. People like this are more likely to gain weight, have little social time, and spend too much time inside. In article I have recently read in the it was about experiment on computer use. Dr. a professor stated that his findings showed that people who are addicted to computers only leave their homes to run errands. When this happens, it interferes with their lives as well as their bodies, because our bodies need sunlight. Furthermore, his study also showed that people who go outside more and not on the computer as much tend to be happier. of the study's patients started to be more joyful once they stopped going on the computer as often. I like when the people around me are happy, not grouchy, don't you? I have been noticing some kids in my school that are gaining weight. These are kids who have recently started going on the computer for a couple hours at a time everyday. This is very bad for your health and body. If someone sits at their computer all day eating the food is not being worked off, so it all turn to fat. Moreover, statistics show that of all obese people in a weight loss class had gained their extra weight from sitting at the computer all day. If people treat their bodies this way, they could end up with some type of condition. Last week, intervied year old best friend has been ignoring because he got a computer. Now, friend doesn't want to hang out with or any of his other friends. In addition, when people become addicted to computers, they become less social with friends and other people like parents, teachers, and more. When people push aside their social time for computer games, chat rooms, or movie websites, they lose a large portion of their life. This can be stopped if parents put their foot down, set limits, and make kids spend more time outside. As you can clearly see, computers have some benefits, but they have many disadvantages. Addicted compuer users become less social, they don't go outside and start to "pack on the pounds." effect of this is a world full of people who sit on the computer all day eating food and gaining weight.
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Dear Computers beginning problem many households I feel many people becoming addicted computers People like likely gain weight little social time spend much time inside In article I recently read experiment computer use Dr professor stated findings showed people addicted computers leave homes run errands When happens interferes lives well bodies bodies need sunlight Furthermore study also showed people go outside computer much tend happier study s patients started joyful stopped going computer often I like people around happy grouchy nt I noticing kids school gaining weight These kids recently started going computer couple hours time everyday This bad health body If someone sits computer day eating food worked turn fat Moreover statistics show obese people weight loss class gained extra weight sitting computer day If people treat bodies way could end type condition Last week intervied year old best friend ignoring got computer Now friend nt want hang friends In addition people become addicted computers become less social friends people like parents teachers When people push aside social time computer games chat rooms movie websites lose large portion life This stopped parents put foot set limits make kids spend time outside As clearly see computers benefits many disadvantages Addicted compuer users become less social nt go outside start pack pounds effect world full people sit computer day eating food gaining weight
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Dear I understand that the idea of advances in technology benefiting society is a very controversal topic. However, I support these advances in technology and I believe that computers have a positive effect on people. They allow friends and family who live far away from each other to communicate and stay in touch. Computers allow easy access to the news and online textbooks which provides an enourmous amount of benifits to today's society. In the long run, doing more things by computer instead of on paper will save billions of trees! computers teach us hand-eye coordination which is a tremenciously important skill. These advances in technology are extremely benefitial to our society and should be taken advantage of! "@CAPS1, computer wails as I recieve a video call from cousin, The advantage in technology has provided many new ways for family and I to communicate with each other. cousins and I rarely see one another, but computers make it possible for us to stay connected. Four out of five teenagers would agree that without computers or technological advances, their long-distance relationships with family and friends wouldn't be possible. For example; I go on oovoo once a week to video chat with cousin whom I only see on holidays. Teen says: "Technology such as computers and cell phones are great for teens, but it should be monitored and not used excessively." Computers are great for keeping in touch with family and friends at a distance! Next, computers allow easy access to the news and online textbooks. more people took advantage of this, we could sace millions of trees and have a healthier environment. Environmentalist, says: "@CAPS5 more schools switched to online textbooks they would end up saving thousands of dollars that can be put elsewhere." I agree, friend says. "@CAPS5 we didnt have to take home so many textbooks everyday, I might not have scoliousis!" computers allow quick access to the news, so we can find out about accidents right away instead of waiting for the newspaper to come. computers help children develop hand-eye coordination, which is a very important skill. Computer activities keep our brain excercising and even help us hit more accurately next baseball season! Three out of five kids at say that they didn't have a computer growing up, they wouldn't be as good at their sport. Computers are an extremely useful recource for many things that we need to take advantages of!
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Dear I understand idea advances technology benefiting society controversal topic However I support advances technology I believe computers positive effect people They allow friends family live far away communicate stay touch Computers allow easy access news online textbooks provides enourmous amount benifits today s society In long run things computer instead paper save billions trees computers teach us handeye coordination tremenciously important skill These advances technology extremely benefitial society taken advantage CAPS computer wails I recieve video call cousin The advantage technology provided many new ways family I communicate cousins I rarely see one another computers make possible us stay connected Four five teenagers would agree without computers technological advances longdistance relationships family friends would nt possible For example I go oovoo week video chat cousin I see holidays Teen says Technology computers cell phones great teens monitored used excessively Computers great keeping touch family friends distance Next computers allow easy access news online textbooks people took advantage could sace millions trees healthier environment Environmentalist says CAPS schools switched online textbooks would end saving thousands dollars put elsewhere I agree friend says CAPS didnt take home many textbooks everyday I might scoliousis computers allow quick access news find accidents right away instead waiting newspaper come computers help children develop handeye coordination important skill Computer activities keep brain excercising even help us hit accurately next baseball season Three five kids say nt computer growing would nt good sport Computers extremely useful recource many things need take advantages
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Dear of the Newspaper, is no doubt that computers don'@CAPS6 benefit society. First of all, most people only have a limited amount of time to things. Secondly, many friends would get mad if you can'@CAPS6 see them. Last but not least, you have to watch out for your health. To sum up, computers aren'@CAPS6 always a good thing. From my point of view, time is a big thing. When people get so involved with something, its hard to back away. Thats just like smoking. The nicotine attracks you so once you start, it is very hard to quit. Many lazy people like to put things on hold. In other words, you waste time. The time that you could be spending on homework or even working on a job, your wasting it. Other people know that they need to do something but keep putting it off. For example, you need to paint your house or fix the motor in the car but you keep putting it off. out of people do this in everyday. As you of all people can see, many don'@CAPS6 think too much about time. The next big topic is You and I both know that every one needs a When you don'@CAPS6 interact with your Friends, your friends might not bother trying to talk to you. The might not even go near you if you forget about them. Pets on the other hand need you. They usually just sleep around the house when they are lonely. I'm sure that you know pets need love and need you to play with them. Parents need to be for their kids. When you were little, didn'@CAPS6 you need help? I know I did. Thats why parents need to interact a lot. In conclusion, the more you stick with your friends and stay away from the computer the better you will be. That leads us to the next big topic, health. Staying healthy's no joke. If you want to live long and watch you rkids grow up, the healthier you are the hotter you'll be. Everyone needs exercise. Exercise helps prevent against diseases as well as keepin gyou in shape. out of eople are over weight. When you are sitting in front of a computer screenplay games or sending e-mails, that's just as as palying video games on your You know as well as anyone, most video games are not good for you. Last but not least, most people don'@CAPS6 eat healthy when they play video games or go on the computer. You and I both know, a healthy diet and exersice will give you a happy life. From my point of view, computers don'@CAPS6 benefit society. Time is a big thing which many don'@CAPS6 realize. Secondly, which everyone needs is another important thing to look into. Last but no least, everyone everywhere needds to stay healthy. For a long happy life. As you can see, many people would be better off without computers!
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Dear Newspaper doubt computers CAPS benefit society First people limited amount time things Secondly many friends would get mad CAPS see Last least watch health To sum computers CAPS always good thing From point view time big thing When people get involved something hard back away Thats like smoking The nicotine attracks start hard quit Many lazy people like put things hold In words waste time The time could spending homework even working job wasting Other people know need something keep putting For example need paint house fix motor car keep putting people everyday As people see many CAPS think much time The next big topic You I know every one needs When CAPS interact Friends friends might bother trying talk The might even go near forget Pets hand need They usually sleep around house lonely I m sure know pets need love need play Parents need kids When little CAPS need help I know I Thats parents need interact lot In conclusion stick friends stay away computer better That leads us next big topic health Staying healthy s joke If want live long watch rkids grow healthier hotter ll Everyone needs exercise Exercise helps prevent diseases well keepin gyou shape eople weight When sitting front computer screenplay games sending emails s palying video games You know well anyone video games good Last least people CAPS eat healthy play video games go computer You I know healthy diet exersice give happy life From point view computers CAPS benefit society Time big thing many CAPS realize Secondly everyone needs another important thing look Last least everyone everywhere needds stay healthy For long happy life As see many people would better without computers
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Computers are the way of the future. I believe that computers benefit society. I believe this because computers enable you to talk to family and friends online. It also gives you thousands of websites to learn valuable information from. Lastly it teached hand-eye coordination. First computers alow you to socialize online. I know I get home from school I can talk to virtually any friends online. People against computers say it takes away time from interacting with family, however, this is not true. I talk to all of my aunts via facebook and other social websites. Also my parents are at work the are abile to message me over the computer with out having to go get a phone and call my house. My last reason for this is that it helps me and my friends get intouch easier lets say I'm having a friend come over, but he got sick. He woulden't have to go look up a number and call me, he could just send me a message of the internet. My second reason is that computers help with education. I know that I'm stuck on a problem at home, I'll just go on the computer and look up the answer. Also, I have to do projects, the computer is very helpful for me and many other kids, doing a project, I can't getall of my information from one book so I go on the computer and look up information about the subject. This really improves students grades, because they had more resources and more information to choose from, instead of only the information in the book. My last reason is that using a computer can help with hand-eye coordination. On the computer there are many sites that have very interactive sites the you can really benefit from I know of one website that was able to help me with my fielding in baseball because it had interactive games that would actually help with things is real life, like fielding in baseball. I know there are other websites like this for many other sports like basketball and foot ball. So the computer actually helped with real life activities. To sum it all up I think computers can benefit society a lot. Like being able to communicate with your friends. Also being able to look up school work with. Lastly helping with hand-eye coordination.
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Computers way future I believe computers benefit society I believe computers enable talk family friends online It also gives thousands websites learn valuable information Lastly teached handeye coordination First computers alow socialize online I know I get home school I talk virtually friends online People computers say takes away time interacting family however true I talk aunts via facebook social websites Also parents work abile message computer go get phone call house My last reason helps friends get intouch easier lets say I m friend come got sick He woulde nt go look number call could send message internet My second reason computers help education I know I m stuck problem home I ll go computer look answer Also I projects computer helpful many kids project I ca nt getall information one book I go computer look information subject This really improves students grades resources information choose instead information book My last reason using computer help handeye coordination On computer many sites interactive sites really benefit I know one website able help fielding baseball interactive games would actually help things real life like fielding baseball I know websites like many sports like basketball foot ball So computer actually helped real life activities To sum I think computers benefit society lot Like able communicate friends Also able look school work Lastly helping handeye coordination
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Dear I am writing to tell you about the effects computers have on people. They teach hand-eye coordination, lets people search places, talk online with people like family and friends. First, the computers teach hand eye coordination it helps you become a better speller and type fast or type without looking at the keys I know it helped me and im sure it will help you too. Secondly, computers lets you interact with family and friends and lets you make friends like myspace you talk to your friends and make ones facebook is more mature if you ask me twitter also its just away for you too talk to your friends yahoo, gmail, aol. Even teacher es lets the teachers communicate with parents so it helps you communicate without everyone being in your conversation on the phone. Next, it helps you search and old places like landmarks or bussnesses like salons, nail palors. Gyms and resturant you can even search when a movie is goin to come out. A computer can help you very much in this type of case. In conculsion computers are good they help you inform you and they can teach you I love my computer it helps me with homework and helps me study. Say you cant talk with someone over the phone, you can email or chat with them and it's so cool/fun and it interesting how you can learn things it lets you upload pictures, music videos and you can type essays. The computer is very educational.
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Dear I writing tell effects computers people They teach handeye coordination lets people search places talk online people like family friends First computers teach hand eye coordination helps become better speller type fast type without looking keys I know helped im sure help Secondly computers lets interact family friends lets make friends like myspace talk friends make ones facebook mature ask twitter also away talk friends yahoo gmail aol Even teacher es lets teachers communicate parents helps communicate without everyone conversation phone Next helps search old places like landmarks bussnesses like salons nail palors Gyms resturant even search movie goin come A computer help much type case In conculsion computers good help inform teach I love computer helps homework helps study Say cant talk someone phone email chat s coolfun interesting learn things lets upload pictures music videos type essays The computer educational
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There are so many different sides to this computer problem, well it's simple computers ruin our lives. Now think if it how many do you see your kid on it? Computers messes up kids grades. It stops people from taking a car ride to house. Also people don't ride their bikes a lot. Computers are an outrage. It first starts off with grades. The parents tell their kid go and start your paper. They sayd ok, and then they are down there on facebook. More then not kids and parents abuse the computer. In fact of america do uses it, that might seem like a small percent but thats more than half the country. Me I don't abuse the computer be I need to keep grades up. Most students have because studies show it's because of computers. Also if your son has a lapttop they're not doing work if that is what you think. I have computers, but we have, books for a reason, no spank, pop ups, or no distractions while working. Like one time I was working on a project, a pop-up came up and read trafic rush free to your computer. So dume me downloads it and parents caught me playing. Has this changed your mind. Since you probably haven't changed your mind here is another thing way computer bad, your car. All guys love cars. Computers are holding more thand of people working or driving their cars. Te only person it hasn't affected is dad, he works on his cars day in and day out. grandmom said something interesting to me the after day,"@CAPS3 your dad comes up to visit me more can other sons, ohter sons are carzy for computers."People go bannas for computers today. Latly I have seen less and less people outside anymore. There is only reason for that, all people are shaved in their basement in the dark, so when their light it gurns their eyes it's so bright. Come on did this change your mind yet now. Well since you are still reading on that means you cannot make up your mind. Well here's this people are starting to not want to ride their bikes anymore. That is facebook, this is what they thinks,"@CAPS4 it talk now why I need to ride to talk in person?" That right for what they are think. Because we task a test of all the kids who have facebook, and that's what around all of them said. I know amazing a at home mother said," son's gaining weight, all her does is eat and go on facebook. When he not on during they day, I catch him at night too." That is a sad story for that mohter. I ride bike a lot, this is a real life story: once I was sitting around doing nothing really did mom said we are riding bikes for miles. I got up end did it too. That had to change your mind, or nothing will. So, in conclusing I have no more ideas for no computers and why. But just remember your grades, cars, and your weight. So please, change your mind.
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There many different sides computer problem well s simple computers ruin lives Now think many see kid Computers messes kids grades It stops people taking car ride house Also people nt ride bikes lot Computers outrage It first starts grades The parents tell kid go start paper They sayd ok facebook More kids parents abuse computer In fact america uses might seem like small percent thats half country Me I nt abuse computer I need keep grades Most students studies show s computers Also son lapttop re work think I computers books reason spank pop ups distractions working Like one time I working project popup came read trafic rush free computer So dume downloads parents caught playing Has changed mind Since probably nt changed mind another thing way computer bad car All guys love cars Computers holding thand people working driving cars Te person nt affected dad works cars day day grandmom said something interesting day CAPS dad comes visit sons ohter sons carzy computers People go bannas computers today Latly I seen less less people outside anymore There reason people shaved basement dark light gurns eyes s bright Come change mind yet Well since still reading means make mind Well s people starting want ride bikes anymore That facebook thinks CAPS talk I need ride talk person That right think Because task test kids facebook s around said I know amazing home mother said son s gaining weight eat go facebook When day I catch night That sad story mohter I ride bike lot real life story I sitting around nothing really mom said riding bikes miles I got end That change mind nothing So conclusing I ideas computers But remember grades cars weight So please change mind
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Dear, news paper I think computers are good, this is because you can learn thing's about faraway places using them, you can also hear about the most recent news and you can communicate with people. In school a lot of the research projects on other places focus on other places around the world. When you use a computer you can read articles about the place and also get pictures and use them in a slideshow or photo story. Their are also educational websites that kids can go on to learn their math facts to multuplication tables the computer is a good learning tool. The computer can keep you up-to-date with the news to! their are news website that post minute to minute things about world news and tell the world what kind of desaster happened in some far away place on the other side of the world. A lot of the time families are spread all over the world, you can chat with family or friend's that have moved by a simple chat room and you can catch up on what has been happening in each other's lives and that's a good tool for family to stay in touch the computer has lots of benefits that a lot of people all around the world can use, from learning. About a faraway country to chatting with cuson that lives in california and also knowing whats going on in your own home town.
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Dear news paper I think computers good learn thing s faraway places using also hear recent news communicate people In school lot research projects places focus places around world When use computer read articles place also get pictures use slideshow photo story Their also educational websites kids go learn math facts multuplication tables computer good learning tool The computer keep uptodate news news website post minute minute things world news tell world kind desaster happened far away place side world A lot time families spread world chat family friend s moved simple chat room catch happening s lives s good tool family stay touch computer lots benefits lot people around world use learning About faraway country chatting cuson lives california also knowing whats going home town
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has been a lot of discusion of whether computers effect people in a positive way or in a negative way. I believe that computers effect most people negatively. I think this because people lose their people skills" by talking through the computer, computers also lead to danger, and because people tend to forget about their priorities in life. From what i know. most people that use computers use them to talk to friends and other people around the world. Instead of hangingout with their friends they talk through the computer and if that what they do, more than hanging in person then they won't reconize the facial expressions given to them by certin people, while talking in person you get the full on experience of communicating with them. You get the tome of voide in addition to the facial expressions. You also get the body language which you can't get from on the computer unless you are using webcam. Computers have led to many dangers. These dangers effect every user and their families. have been many cases of young teenagers being tricked by ader users into showing them parts of their body to making the teens believe that the older user can relate to their problems and are the same age. sometime the teen is persuade to leave their home and neighbor hood to meet the other user. Also, another type of danger is cyberbulling. Cybe bulles lower yourself-esteem. The bullies call you names and pick on you and sometimes make you feel suicidal. If we hadnt had any computer then none of these dangers would be occuring. With computers people have lost their judgement in top priorites. Some computers uses tend to forget about the important things in life such as family, schools work, and their own health. Some people would rather stay on the computer than hangout with family and friends. Others tend to choose not to do their homework and work on their social life on the computer instead. Since they are on the computer alot they seem to ignore their health. They don't exercise as much and don't eat as healthy. So in my opinion, life without computers would be good for everyone. People would still have the people skills they had before, their wouldn't be as much danger, and people would focus more on the important thins than their online social lives."
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lot discusion whether computers effect people positive way negative way I believe computers effect people negatively I think people lose people skills talking computer computers also lead danger people tend forget priorities life From know people use computers use talk friends people around world Instead hangingout friends talk computer hanging person wo nt reconize facial expressions given certin people talking person get full experience communicating You get tome voide addition facial expressions You also get body language ca nt get computer unless using webcam Computers led many dangers These dangers effect every user families many cases young teenagers tricked ader users showing parts body making teens believe older user relate problems age sometime teen persuade leave home neighbor hood meet user Also another type danger cyberbulling Cybe bulles lower yourselfesteem The bullies call names pick sometimes make feel suicidal If hadnt computer none dangers would occuring With computers people lost judgement top priorites Some computers uses tend forget important things life family schools work health Some people would rather stay computer hangout family friends Others tend choose homework work social life computer instead Since computer alot seem ignore health They nt exercise much nt eat healthy So opinion life without computers would good everyone People would still people skills would nt much danger people would focus important thins online social lives
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Dear, I think computers do have a positive affect on people but I don't think because of computers is the reason people don't exercise or enjoy nature. People make their own choices in life. The computer is just there. If somebody chooses to be on the computer instead of spending time with their family well thats their choice and problem not the computers. Me for example I love working and playing on the computer. Even though I'm on the computer I still do things like talk to my family, I play basketball, and I chill with my homies. Now thats my choice to do all of that. I can easily just sit up in my room and be on the computer all the time. It's nothing wrong with doing that because that is my choice in life. Nobody should be able to tell you to get off the computer because that is your choice in life. If you want to be on the computer instead of going outside thats your choice. Only you know what is best for you.
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Dear I think computers positive affect people I nt think computers reason people nt exercise enjoy nature People make choices life The computer If somebody chooses computer instead spending time family well thats choice problem computers Me example I love working playing computer Even though I m computer I still things like talk family I play basketball I chill homies Now thats choice I easily sit room computer time It s nothing wrong choice life Nobody able tell get computer choice life If want computer instead going outside thats choice Only know best
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Dear editor, I have heard that some experts are saying that spend too much time online. I thoroughly believe they are mistaken. With the use of internet people can learn about faraway places without spending money to go there. Our military uses internet to talk to their family and friends stateside. Also it helps us aquire great hand-eye coordination. If someone was planning a trip to they would check the internet often. Firstly, they would check out sites to go to in Second, they would check and compare hotels in Thirdly, they would check the weather in Finally, they would check airports for flights going to and from Without the internet planning vacations would be close to impossible. People not only use the internet for pleasure but for communication purphases too. They use web cams to talk online to people in faraway places. It is fast, free, and convinent way to communicate to other people. Our military uses web cams to let the soliders talk to their families. How would you feel if you were a solider fighting for you country and the means to talk to your family is out there, but you could not use it. It is cruel and unjust to keep soliders from talking to their families. Internet also gives us something usefull. It helps us build hand-eye coordination. Hand-eye coordination is used in many things. In basketball you need to be able to look up and dribble at the same time. When you are driving you need to be able to look up and still be able to steer the car. Without hand-eye coordination many more accidents would happen from carliess errors. Internet helps people make the world a safer place. In some aspects the experts are right. We should go out and enjoy nature, but we also need to enjoy and use the internet as well. Some people use it as pleasure and build hand-eye coordination. Whle others use it to talk to their loved ones. Or use it to plan vacations. No matter who you are or what you do internet plays an important part in life.
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Dear editor I heard experts saying spend much time online I thoroughly believe mistaken With use internet people learn faraway places without spending money go Our military uses internet talk family friends stateside Also helps us aquire great handeye coordination If someone planning trip would check internet often Firstly would check sites go Second would check compare hotels Thirdly would check weather Finally would check airports flights going Without internet planning vacations would close impossible People use internet pleasure communication purphases They use web cams talk online people faraway places It fast free convinent way communicate people Our military uses web cams let soliders talk families How would feel solider fighting country means talk family could use It cruel unjust keep soliders talking families Internet also gives us something usefull It helps us build handeye coordination Handeye coordination used many things In basketball need able look dribble time When driving need able look still able steer car Without handeye coordination many accidents would happen carliess errors Internet helps people make world safer place In aspects experts right We go enjoy nature also need enjoy use internet well Some people use pleasure build handeye coordination Whle others use talk loved ones Or use plan vacations No matter internet plays important part life
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Dear of the I strongly believe that computers effect us in a positive way. Computers are advancing and so are their uses, computers are great and they are not our thought process or went to run around outside and play sports. Computers help us find and talk to relatives and friends they allow us to learn different things about farien places. They also are great for research! First and foremost computers are effecting us positively expesally when it comes to finding and talking to family and friends. My mom was adopted and years ago she really wanted to find her birth family, one year later her birth father found her on this website where you can locate family, she found her family and I now have two more and and a cousin I love them all very much. I would not have of been able to get to know them if it wasnt for the computer, speaking of communication, I was working like a dog on this big science prodject I had. we weren't able to do it in person and it impossible for one person to three way four people. So we emailed our ideas and thoughts and were able to get the project done. "@CAPS2 are never enough hours in the day!" something that commonly said. Over of adults complain that never enough time in day. That a statistic from The computer allows you to multi task so you can be on your business call and email your mother so she know that you didn't forget her birthday. In addition, computers help us understand other countries and learn about their culture and how they are doing. are many people who don't have tvs and they get their news from the internet. Also for projects, in grade I had to learn about the country in it would take countless hours to find research in books, you will find a lot of stuff you dont need, but on the computer it fast and easy. If you need to know something you can just type it in and, boom! You have it where as if you were usinf a book you would still be looking for what you need. Time something that we can't afford to waste expessaly in this economy. Furthermore, computers are great for all kinds of research and directions. People who think that people spend too much time on the computer, and exersizing are not always right. I don't know about you, but I am constantly looking up different exersizes to get a flat stomach. Most of my friends do it with me. I also look up directions, finding routs on maps are enfuriating and take for ever. Go on the computer the maps are always updated and you can get easy and fast directions! I don't know about you but I love things fast and easy. Going back to research, what about for solving crimes? Identifying people with finger prints fast so no one can get hurt. In conclusion computers effect us in possitive ways, more and are a great help to society, from locating people, to communication, and all the way to finding valuable and life changing information. I hope that you and I see eye to eye in this matter, advancing computers are our friends not the enemy.
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Dear I strongly believe computers effect us positive way Computers advancing uses computers great thought process went run around outside play sports Computers help us find talk relatives friends allow us learn different things farien places They also great research First foremost computers effecting us positively expesally comes finding talking family friends My mom adopted years ago really wanted find birth family one year later birth father found website locate family found family I two cousin I love much I would able get know wasnt computer speaking communication I working like dog big science prodject I nt able person impossible one person three way four people So emailed ideas thoughts able get project done CAPS never enough hours day something commonly said Over adults complain never enough time day That statistic The computer allows multi task business call email mother know nt forget birthday In addition computers help us understand countries learn culture many people nt tvs get news internet Also projects grade I learn country would take countless hours find research books find lot stuff dont need computer fast easy If need know something type boom You usinf book would still looking need Time something ca nt afford waste expessaly economy Furthermore computers great kinds research directions People think people spend much time computer exersizing always right I nt know I constantly looking different exersizes get flat stomach Most friends I also look directions finding routs maps enfuriating take ever Go computer maps always updated get easy fast directions I nt know I love things fast easy Going back research solving crimes Identifying people finger prints fast one get hurt In conclusion computers effect us possitive ways great help society locating people communication way finding valuable life changing information I hope I see eye eye matter advancing computers friends enemy
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As more and more people are becoming accustomed to using computers, I believe that this is having a negative effect on society. Because of computers people are not exercising as much as they should, which is of crucial importance. In addition, people are becoming unable to envoy and appreciate nature while they still can. Finally, people are slowly being their ability to communicate with family and friends. As every day people are getting in touch with technology they are losing touch with the world around them. Therefore, the advances in technology are having a negative affect on society. When the average, person uses, the computers, be it for business, homework, chatting, or just for fun, they are easily occupied for long periods of time. They consider themselves "too busy" for a thing called exercise which is becoming more and more curcial to our health and well-being. With music, walk, cool friends right in front of us, who has live. Time to go for a walk, jog, or bike ride? with computers, people are the will exercise. In this day and age, when is becoming a we need our exercise more. Every day rainforests indicated on the one, polluted, and clouded. We need and because of the realize ever a screen. We need to write up and appreciate with the As time goes by communication technology through the internet this issue of helping healthy relationships is becoming a progressively worse issue. "@CAPS1 is something that doesn't completely exist on the internet. This means that while you find someone you can call a "friend" online, you never know exactly who they are until you've actually, met them...which could be potentially dangerous. Additionally, the very emotions and human need for interaction that comes with relationships is something their can never be simulated or programmed, no matter how "advanced" your technology is. As you can see, the dependancy on and average of computers is having a negative affect in our society. We are not taking the time for exercise, and human interacting, all of which are to our health. And in a world where it's more important than ever to do. healthy, grateful, and diplomatic, we are slowly losing important. Therefore, are having a negative affect on society.
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As people becoming accustomed using computers I believe negative effect society Because computers people exercising much crucial importance In addition people becoming unable envoy appreciate nature still Finally people slowly ability communicate family friends As every day people getting touch technology losing touch world around Therefore advances technology negative affect society When average person uses computers business homework chatting fun easily occupied long periods time They consider busy thing called exercise becoming curcial health wellbeing With music walk cool friends right front us live Time go walk jog bike ride computers people exercise In day age becoming need exercise Every day rainforests indicated one polluted clouded We need realize ever screen We need write appreciate As time goes communication technology internet issue helping healthy relationships becoming progressively worse issue CAPS something nt completely exist internet This means find someone call friend online never know exactly ve actually met could potentially dangerous Additionally emotions human need interaction comes relationships something never simulated programmed matter advanced technology As see dependancy average computers negative affect society We taking time exercise human interacting health And world s important ever healthy grateful diplomatic slowly losing important Therefore negative affect society
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Dear, name is and I am a students in middle school. I want to state a opinion on how computer effects people. There are many thing like games, chatrooms, socile thing. Also information for homework or for work and jobs. Well let get started opinion on people using ocmputer is good, only fools don't use computers. They help you a lot like, let say I am a coole and I forgot how to do something, I'll just go on the computer and fine it and it that easy. I use a computer all life and I am smart, I even help mom use the comptuer sometimes. Chat room are good to you can make new friends and you can talk to family members, like your mom dad or causen if they live in a different part of the world. I talk to cansen all the time not reuily a little and he live in colombia. I also talk to friends on facebook to ask what was the homework sometimes. Games, games are fun when you get bored or do not have nothing to do. You can play all different kind of games like action or if you want a chenllens you can play hard games i think games like chess or sodotea. To help your brain thnk to exercise your brian. Games can help you knew the computer more like they bored, many people don't even knew how to type with out looking at the borad. I have to look at it. Well thus where same opinion I had about the computer. Even though people think it take time from exercising and interacting with people it not really time. There exercising there brian and they can interacte with people. So till next time
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Dear name I students middle school I want state opinion computer effects people There many thing like games chatrooms socile thing Also information homework work jobs Well let get started opinion people using ocmputer good fools nt use computers They help lot like let say I coole I forgot something I ll go computer fine easy I use computer life I smart I even help mom use comptuer sometimes Chat room good make new friends talk family members like mom dad causen live different part world I talk cansen time reuily little live colombia I also talk friends facebook ask homework sometimes Games games fun get bored nothing You play different kind games like action want chenllens play hard games think games like chess sodotea To help brain thnk exercise brian Games help knew computer like bored many people nt even knew type looking borad I look Well thus opinion I computer Even though people think take time exercising interacting people really time There exercising brian interacte people So till next time
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Dear local Newspaper, In my opinion computers are a help to our plant. The new technology makes life easier to handle. The computer are a help because it teaches hand-eye coordination. You can talk to people, and it is a new way to be entertained. Computers can teache hand-eye coordination because of typing. Whether someone knows it or not when you are typing fast it is help you hands. Also the fact you that if your typing without making is also helping because it makes your hand easier to move. The typing is giving your hand lots of exersise because your hands are moving all over the place. The more you move them the more excersise you can get. Computers can really help hand-eye coordination alot. Computers can also help by talking to people. To talk to people far away is better to talk to on the computer because if you have a webcam you can see each other. You are able to talk to people from different countries. Also computers are able to be used in business meetings when a business has to talk with another from different locations. Like if part of the business is doing a project in hong kong, then the boss can set up a meeting to see how it is going. Another way to use computers to talk to people is to speak with a person you are not able to see in person. Like if a oerson is in the hospital but you're not able to go, then you can talk while seeing each other throw the computer. Computers are a great way to use in communication. Computer are also a new way to get entertained. They can entertain you because there is games that you can play. There are games that come with the computers and a lot of games on the internet. Other they being bored all the time you can play thousands of game with just a click on a mouse. Also to not be bored you can watch videos like youtube. You can listen te musicor watch comedy videos. Video also show a way do express what you feel and sat it in comedy, horror, or sad videos. Also for teenagers there is ways to talk to their friends like facebook. On the website you can talk with anyone on your friends list. In the end computer can help kids, adults, or teenagers. With just a clicking your mouse you can find a new powerful way of technology. And be able to got better hand-eye coordination talk to people and get entertained. So go get yourself a computer and amazed!
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Dear local Newspaper In opinion computers help plant The new technology makes life easier handle The computer help teaches handeye coordination You talk people new way entertained Computers teache handeye coordination typing Whether someone knows typing fast help hands Also fact typing without making also helping makes hand easier move The typing giving hand lots exersise hands moving place The move excersise get Computers really help handeye coordination alot Computers also help talking people To talk people far away better talk computer webcam see You able talk people different countries Also computers able used business meetings business talk another different locations Like part business project hong kong boss set meeting see going Another way use computers talk people speak person able see person Like oerson hospital re able go talk seeing throw computer Computers great way use communication Computer also new way get entertained They entertain games play There games come computers lot games internet Other bored time play thousands game click mouse Also bored watch videos like youtube You listen te musicor watch comedy videos Video also show way express feel sat comedy horror sad videos Also teenagers ways talk friends like facebook On website talk anyone friends list In end computer help kids adults teenagers With clicking mouse find new powerful way technology And able got better handeye coordination talk people get entertained So go get computer amazed
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Dear Local Newspaper are you adminitrating your loacl newapaper to society? You are probably using a computer to type the documents. If the government, businesses, schools, students and local newspaper are using computers for a variety of different tasks then are thet not helpful? Primarily, computers are used for typing, editing and presenting as stated before, local newpaper are required to use computers to present their work. As a member of society, I knew I would not want to read something not typed anyway. The govermnet must announce laws to the people and use typed documents to communicate with different countries & states. Without computers signs, flyers, bussinesses, and even newspapers would not be possible. You are running late to work able to traffic on the hignway. are you supposed to explain to your boss in time? You can simply email him the situation and arrive stress-free to work. Prctically the entire world uses computers as a source of communication, so why be indifferent? Computers make life easier for people through communication like email, social network websites such as facebook and aol, and even video chat. Computers supply an excellent source of communication that is even used throughout schools. Teachers and administrater interact with each other with important message using computers. if computers are important to them, the could they be destructive to society? As a western middle school students, I know the amount of projects and research we are required to do per class. Without the internet this would almost be impossible. The internet allows research to happen. After reseach is finished, the paper or homework assignment must be typed and printed. Without the assitance from computers, ahving naetly-written and well-researched assignments would not be possible. To conclusion, I feel that computers are an excellent advance in technology and should be used as frequently as possiblr. Without them, newspaper could not print, teachers could not communiacte, and students couldn't complete tasks for school. As a student I know they help me with school and communicating with my friends and relatives. If computer are such a helpful source to society, why would people consider them as a concern?
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Dear Local Newspaper adminitrating loacl newapaper society You probably using computer type documents If government businesses schools students local newspaper using computers variety different tasks thet helpful Primarily computers used typing editing presenting stated local newpaper required use computers present work As member society I knew I would want read something typed anyway The govermnet must announce laws people use typed documents communicate different countries states Without computers signs flyers bussinesses even newspapers would possible You running late work able traffic hignway supposed explain boss time You simply email situation arrive stressfree work Prctically entire world uses computers source communication indifferent Computers make life easier people communication like email social network websites facebook aol even video chat Computers supply excellent source communication even used throughout schools Teachers administrater interact important message using computers computers important could destructive society As western middle school students I know amount projects research required per class Without internet would almost impossible The internet allows research happen After reseach finished paper homework assignment must typed printed Without assitance computers ahving naetlywritten wellresearched assignments would possible To conclusion I feel computers excellent advance technology used frequently possiblr Without newspaper could print teachers could communiacte students could nt complete tasks school As student I know help school communicating friends relatives If computer helpful source society would people consider concern
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Dear local newspaper I think that usieng computers help people becuse if we did not have computers we would not now ehey thing about eneyone or eneything like all of the I would not now eneything about them but with computers I know alot about them and there lives like got shot in the back of the head and. got shot to and I know alot about the there white people that to fear in to black people and the same with the wars like world and world and the and and the war there was like plain spy palin flying across and they shot him down becuse we were trying to see if thay had eney nuculer bombs offer there. And the same with google and yahoo with google you can type in eneything and you will get a answer and most liked a corect answer yahoo and google is great for some worke and products end studying becuse you then you do to and that I think that computer are good.
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Dear local newspaper I think usieng computers help people becuse computers would ehey thing eneyone eneything like I would eneything computers I know alot lives like got shot back head got shot I know alot white people fear black people wars like world world war like plain spy palin flying across shot becuse trying see thay eney nuculer bombs offer And google yahoo google type eneything get answer liked corect answer yahoo google great worke products end studying becuse I think computer good
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Hour after hour of gaming online and posting blogs on social networking sights is all one sees. Unaware at there surroundings, many people zone to their computer screens and only break absolutely necessary. That is not what the world should become but that is what is society is creating. Computers do not create positive benefits to society. Because of all the time spent on the computer, people's bodies are taking the negative effects. There is also less and less face-to-face interactions with family and friends. Another huge issue is cyber bulling. These are all problems that should be addressed. With all the time spend on a computer in a stuffy, dark room, how will our bodies be maintained properly? Exercise is a key ingriedient to healthy living. It is like trying to make bread without flour, without that necessity the bread will not rise its full potential. It is the same with the health and functions at our bodies. Exercise must be took part in to burn fat and calories, but it is also needed to build and maintain muscles. In fact, muscles start it is recommended to get in at least one hour of exercise of outside play a days. Not many succeed with this goal, which brings up another negative effect to the body. helps to maintain strong bones. To get the recommended dose of a day you only need to absorb minutes of sunlight a day. It doesn't seem like a lot but of our population is not outside to recieve it. Instead, they are inside on their computers. Parties, lunch breaks, or even a family dinner are great times to socialize. But, what if one day you decided you were going to skip your lunch break with friends and instead spend time posting a daily blog. This is social time lost. If this habit continues you might soon see yourself drifting away from your friends because you don't make the time to spend lunch break with them. Even a child interactions chatting with friends on or anything could be said. Children wont learn at a young age how to think on there fact language. This will effect their later years interviewing for things such as colleges or even jobs. Social skills are the difference between success and failure. Spending life on a computer is equivalent to being a caterpillar in their while at least attempting to be an extreme will turn you and are all created with the ominous cyberbulling. One simple way to prevent this is spending less time in the computer. The effects of cyber bulling can be brutal. A recent study showed that of kids would rather be bullied in face then over the internet. The reason being a of cruelty is displayed through cyberbulling over the internet because it takes much less courage to type something up then it for a bully to say something to them victims face. Such cyberbulling has even led to suicides. In fact, a girl in committed suicide due to cyber bulling just weeks ago. If you don't have In conclusion, computers produce more negative effect on society than good. A lack of exercise and proper body maintenance results. Reduced social interacting and skills also result. And maybe most importantly cyberbulling which takes lives occurs. In prevent society from turning into a social waste and felled with the glow of computer screens, lets all turn the monitor and get outside with nature and all its benefits.
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Hour hour gaming online posting blogs social networking sights one sees Unaware surroundings many people zone computer screens break absolutely necessary That world become society creating Computers create positive benefits society Because time spent computer people s bodies taking negative effects There also less less facetoface interactions family friends Another huge issue cyber bulling These problems addressed With time spend computer stuffy dark room bodies maintained properly Exercise key ingriedient healthy living It like trying make bread without flour without necessity bread rise full potential It health functions bodies Exercise must took part burn fat calories also needed build maintain muscles In fact muscles start recommended get least one hour exercise outside play days Not many succeed goal brings another negative effect body helps maintain strong bones To get recommended dose day need absorb minutes sunlight day It nt seem like lot population outside recieve Instead inside computers Parties lunch breaks even family dinner great times socialize But one day decided going skip lunch break friends instead spend time posting daily blog This social time lost If habit continues might soon see drifting away friends nt make time spend lunch break Even child interactions chatting friends anything could said Children wont learn young age think fact language This effect later years interviewing things colleges even jobs Social skills difference success failure Spending life computer equivalent caterpillar least attempting extreme turn created ominous cyberbulling One simple way prevent spending less time computer The effects cyber bulling brutal A recent study showed kids would rather bullied face internet The reason cruelty displayed cyberbulling internet takes much less courage type something bully say something victims face Such cyberbulling even led suicides In fact girl committed suicide due cyber bulling weeks ago If nt In conclusion computers produce negative effect society good A lack exercise proper body maintenance results Reduced social interacting skills also result And maybe importantly cyberbulling takes lives occurs In prevent society turning social waste felled glow computer screens lets turn monitor get outside nature benefits
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I belive that computers benifit our society for many reasons. Computers have been around for many years now and everywere you go you usualy see one. That must meen people love then. These are so many uses and fun expeirences you can have with a computer. Computers make people happy and that makes for a better society because it is happier. they make people happy because you can play games like tetris, and even cards. Compuer games make people happy because when ever they are bored and does nothing going on you can hop on the computer and play a game. Some of the awsome games featured on a computer are cards, pinball and other great game. The computer makes for a happier home because as soon as kids get home from school they use it for games or chat with freinds. Another reason computers benifit society is because you can now pay bills and buy hings from the internet. When you pay bills or buy things over the internet have is no need to go out and waste money on gas so it makes people very happy when hey save money. It also saves on polution because if a car isn't going out there is less so computers are also saving society as well. My last reason that computers benifit society is they can make you smarter and make you do better in school by learning about often people or cultures. For example on my last research project for social studies I used the computer and got an A. this made me happy so in effect it makes society happy. Now you have my reasons why computers benifit the society. They make us happy, made us smarter, and make us a better society for it. I love computers and everybody else should too.
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I belive computers benifit society many reasons Computers around many years everywere go usualy see one That must meen people love These many uses fun expeirences computer Computers make people happy makes better society happier make people happy play games like tetris even cards Compuer games make people happy ever bored nothing going hop computer play game Some awsome games featured computer cards pinball great game The computer makes happier home soon kids get home school use games chat freinds Another reason computers benifit society pay bills buy hings internet When pay bills buy things internet need go waste money gas makes people happy hey save money It also saves polution car nt going less computers also saving society well My last reason computers benifit society make smarter make better school learning often people cultures For example last research project social studies I used computer got A made happy effect makes society happy Now reasons computers benifit society They make us happy made us smarter make us better society I love computers everybody else
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Dear local Newspaper. I am stating my opinion that the more people use computers the less they spend with their family. I have three ressons why computer are good or bad. Not every one agrees that computer are benefitsal for the society. The positive effect and negative effect that computers have on people. My resson for supporting this that computer are good or bad are that computers have a positive effect on people. The second is to be able to talk to other people on line. The last I have is Spending more time with family than on the computer. The first resson that i have for computers is how they have for computers is how they have positive effect on people. The examples that I have to Support this are that computers tech hand eye coordination, computers given people the ability to Learn about far way place and peop. The second resson that I have on computers is that you talk to people online. The examples that I have to support my are the website that kids us to talk to their friends like myspace and facebook. The place that kid like to go to are tutube and even blogging about everything and everyone. Some of theis thing can be good if you don't post picture or other this on your myspace or facebook. I think that these website are dangers because somebody can hack in to your file and they can try to talk to you like their your friend. The third resson I have to support my is that we should spend more time with our family than being on the computer the whole time I have example on want we should do with or familys instead of being on the computers I have some of games that we can play with our familys instead of being on the computers, The games that we can play with our familys are monopoly, somy, canda landy card, video games, we can also talk to our family instead of talking to our friends the whole time. When we can injoy want we have in live not just with computers but with our family. Inconclusion I am statting my opinion that the more time people spend on computers than with their own family. I have three resson on why computers are good or bad. The r\ess that I have to support my are that computers have a positive effeck on people, to be able to talk to people online, To spend more time with family than on the computer.
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Dear local Newspaper I stating opinion people use computers less spend family I three ressons computer good bad Not every one agrees computer benefitsal society The positive effect negative effect computers people My resson supporting computer good bad computers positive effect people The second able talk people line The last I Spending time family computer The first resson computers computers positive effect people The examples I Support computers tech hand eye coordination computers given people ability Learn far way place peop The second resson I computers talk people online The examples I support website kids us talk friends like myspace facebook The place kid like go tutube even blogging everything everyone Some theis thing good nt post picture myspace facebook I think website dangers somebody hack file try talk like friend The third resson I support spend time family computer whole time I example want familys instead computers I games play familys instead computers The games play familys monopoly somy canda landy card video games also talk family instead talking friends whole time When injoy want live computers family Inconclusion I statting opinion time people spend computers family I three resson computers good bad The ress I support computers positive effeck people able talk people online To spend time family computer
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Dear newspaper, computers does have some cons but they also have a lot of pros. Some pros are they show magnificant pictures of nature and it would pictures until you want to send them by email. You can even order tickets for planes, trains and movies. Let's not forget shopping and internet. If you go on the internet you can find many pictures of any thing you want. Such as pictures of nature, celebrities. About of all picture on the internet are true. A computer can also hold pictures that you take on a digital camera. It can even take a project on a flash drive and then download it. The computer can even email the pictures to any email that exsist. If you want to go to the movies or on vacation you can get the movie tickets online. You can get them at any ticket sales website. If you want to go on vacation you can get your hotel tickets even your plane train, or boat ticket online. Buying tickets isn't the only thing you can do on the internet you can buy stuff to. You can order game cube, x-box, x-box wii, you even computer games. You can even buy the game systems. You can buy house hold appliances. Also you can put clothes and other store products an hold. The internet you can watch videos an almost any website you go on. Some be grass, some be funny others even be wierd. of all teenagers like watching music videos. Some are just the artist sing and dancing in a background other times people make fun of other artists. Even though computers do have pros and cons they have more pros. Like the examples in the passage above.
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Dear newspaper computers cons also lot pros Some pros show magnificant pictures nature would pictures want send email You even order tickets planes trains movies Let s forget shopping internet If go internet find many pictures thing want Such pictures nature celebrities About picture internet true A computer also hold pictures take digital camera It even take project flash drive download The computer even email pictures email exsist If want go movies vacation get movie tickets online You get ticket sales website If want go vacation get hotel tickets even plane train boat ticket online Buying tickets nt thing internet buy stuff You order game cube xbox xbox wii even computer games You even buy game systems You buy house hold appliances Also put clothes store products hold The internet watch videos almost website go Some grass funny others even wierd teenagers like watching music videos Some artist sing dancing background times people make fun artists Even though computers pros cons pros Like examples passage
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Dear local newspaper I dont agree with the people who say people spend to much time on their computers. Because people can lean mostly anything they want all of a computer also there are lots of resomes why people should use advances technology they can teach kids how to find out answers to there homework the fastway instead of reading a book or taken a class and still get the full understeading. The people that say others spend's to much time on there computers are also right about that but they still can interact with friends and family they can play games, speak to each other, even learn new things together, all through a computer. One thing they were right about was to go out and enjoy the nature you cant do that on a computer but you can help the nature on a computer like try to put up a blog. Something that people make so others can see and spred the word and on that blog it can stay stop cuting down trees for stores or stop killing animales for there far or anythin you wont to write. So the people that do read this you should agree with me because you can do lots of things on a computer and learn lot more then you ever thought you could. So go out and find you a computer and find somethine you need to do or learn or just to have some fun.
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Dear local newspaper I dont agree people say people spend much time computers Because people lean mostly anything want computer also lots resomes people use advances technology teach kids find answers homework fastway instead reading book taken class still get full understeading The people say others spend s much time computers also right still interact friends family play games speak even learn new things together computer One thing right go enjoy nature cant computer help nature computer like try put blog Something people make others see spred word blog stay stop cuting trees stores stop killing animales far anythin wont write So people read agree lots things computer learn lot ever thought could So go find computer find somethine need learn fun
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Dear local newspaper, opinion on the effects computers have on people is a positive effect. Three main reasons are that people learn more about cultures, places, and some people work online. first reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because they help you learn about cultures around the world. Learning about cultures is very important because if people travel they need to know how they can respect each other. second reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because they help you learn about places around the world the world. Learning about places is very important because you could get lost. It also helps you by telling you which places are famous to visit. third reason why computers have a positive effect on people is because some people find jobs online. Other people work online. This benefits people in a positive way. In conclusion computers have a positive effect on people because its helps people learn about cultures, places, and jobs around them.
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Dear local newspaper opinion effects computers people positive effect Three main reasons people learn cultures places people work online first reason computers positive effect people help learn cultures around world Learning cultures important people travel need know respect second reason computers positive effect people help learn places around world world Learning places important could get lost It also helps telling places famous visit third reason computers positive effect people people find jobs online Other people work online This benefits people positive way In conclusion computers positive effect people helps people learn cultures places jobs around
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are many people in this world that think always being on the computer is good because they can talk with people online and learn more about the world. But, then are people who disagree with them. I am one of those people. Spending too much time on the computer can really affect your life. People stop exercising, don't enjoy the beauty of nature or life, and they aren't spending enough time with their family and friends. So, I hope that while you read through this letter, you take some of this information into consideration. First of all, when people spend a lot of time on the computer they aren't getting all of the exercise that their body needs. They become lazy and don't want to do anything. This is very bad because it will affect your health and the rest of your life. People become overweight and since they got lazy from always being on the computer, they won't go out and get the exercise that their body needs. People need to enjoy their life! By always being on the computer, they won't be able to. are so many fun and healthy things you can do for your body. You can go play sports and have fun while getting exercise. Many people do this and try to encourage their family and friends to do it with them. But, some of their family and friends are to lazy to do anything because they are always on the computer. Instead, they stay inside the house all cooped up and don't get enough fresh air. This is a horrible thing to do to yourself. Your body needs fresh air, so start enjoying your life a little more people! Finally, people lose contact with family members of their friends because they are to busy on the computer playing games. I know I wouldn't want to lose a friend to the internet ever again and I don't think anyone else would want to either. I once lost a friend or two because I didn't talk to them as much as I used to because I had been too busy on the computer on and games. I felt horrible because I didn't realize that I had been doing that. I really wouldn't want anyone else to lose contact with a family member or lose a friend because of the internet. Its horrible and you don't feel like yourself anymore. Once again I would like to tell you that always being on the internet is not good. You can become lazy, not want to do anything etc., people aren't enjoying their life to the fullest and you can and lose contact with a family member or lose a friend because you spend to much time on the computer. I hope that after reading this, you realize that being on the computer is not always good for you.
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many people world think always computer good talk people online learn world But people disagree I one people Spending much time computer really affect life People stop exercising nt enjoy beauty nature life nt spending enough time family friends So I hope read letter take information consideration First people spend lot time computer nt getting exercise body needs They become lazy nt want anything This bad affect health rest life People become overweight since got lazy always computer wo nt go get exercise body needs People need enjoy life By always computer wo nt able many fun healthy things body You go play sports fun getting exercise Many people try encourage family friends But family friends lazy anything always computer Instead stay inside house cooped nt get enough fresh air This horrible thing Your body needs fresh air start enjoying life little people Finally people lose contact family members friends busy computer playing games I know I would nt want lose friend internet ever I nt think anyone else would want either I lost friend two I nt talk much I used I busy computer games I felt horrible I nt realize I I really would nt want anyone else lose contact family member lose friend internet Its horrible nt feel like anymore Once I would like tell always internet good You become lazy want anything etc people nt enjoying life fullest lose contact family member lose friend spend much time computer I hope reading realize computer always good
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Dear Local Newspaper, I believe that computers are an extremely useful tool in society. It helps people learn new things about different cultures. Also, it lets you communicate with friends and family through the internet, for example, using facebook or Finally, it provides an accurate research tool for school projects, or interviews. First, learning about different cultures helps the world stay together. For example, here, we learn and Each class teaches us to respect more and more of this culture. However, some people don't have the chance to get this land of education, so they turn to the internet. If the computer didn't exist, we might not know about the lifestyle mi away from us. We wouldn't know if their lifestyles are extremely difficult or luxurious. Also, we wouldn't know if we could help them or not. For example, the earthquake in which. It's one step closer to world peace no more war or conflicts. Secondly, the computer helps you communicate to friends and family for in the world. I remember one time I was mailing my family friends who was in risking his life. I knew he couldn't come back to town, so I started to email him, and video chat with him. Whenever I saw his face, I knew that everything was okay. I don't know how I would have without the internet. Other ways lived you could as. Also, just communicating with friends! internet sites, like extremely useful. Finally, you use the computer for educational use. For example, research projects, study tools and essays. Whenever that a research is the internet. This extremely reliable and accurate. However that some of the websites are fake, which is easy to great research to use for school projects. Also, I know many teachers in my school have a blog or page where they put their on, study links, and handouts, just in case we lose them. Whenever there is a test coming up, my teacher, would have links on her go to help use study. Also, is another website that helps us study for vocab. It also has many games that and learn our vocab words. As you can see, the computer helps us in our daily use and makes a positive impact on our society. From educational purposes, to learning cultures and socializing with friends it helps us get through life. As very successful newspaper and people, I assume you will understand how much the computer has made a positive effect in society.
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Dear Local Newspaper I believe computers extremely useful tool society It helps people learn new things different cultures Also lets communicate friends family internet example using facebook Finally provides accurate research tool school projects interviews First learning different cultures helps world stay together For example learn Each class teaches us respect culture However people nt chance get land education turn internet If computer nt exist might know lifestyle mi away us We would nt know lifestyles extremely difficult luxurious Also would nt know could help For example earthquake It s one step closer world peace war conflicts Secondly computer helps communicate friends family world I remember one time I mailing family friends risking life I knew could nt come back town I started email video chat Whenever I saw face I knew everything okay I nt know I would without internet Other ways lived could Also communicating friends internet sites like extremely useful Finally use computer educational use For example research projects study tools essays Whenever research internet This extremely reliable accurate However websites fake easy great research use school projects Also I know many teachers school blog page put study links handouts case lose Whenever test coming teacher would links go help use study Also another website helps us study vocab It also many games learn vocab words As see computer helps us daily use makes positive impact society From educational purposes learning cultures socializing friends helps us get life As successful newspaper people I assume understand much computer made positive effect society
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Dear there has been a lot of talk about how computers effect society. Some "experts" say computers are good for society and some think the opposite computers are bad for society because they make children obese, decrease a person social skills, and even make children less educated. Computers are just plain bad. In recent years studies show that children that use the computer often are less likely and less willing to get active. Dr. says, "The more children use computers is the more time they waste not being active at all." A study conducted the shows that children that use the computer hours a day are more obese then children who use it one hour or less a day. Computers keep children inside all day. A child on the computer is wasting time not being active. The main reason children become fat on the computer is because it is easier to just go on the computer than to walk and exert energy. Computer are a direct cause to child obesity, and they are a threat to society. Some of you think a computer can increase social skills, and you are dead wrong! On a computer you can "talk" to friends, but it is not like you are actually talking to them. On a computer you can talk in privite and say what ever the heck you want. In public if you say something bad you will get in a lot of trouble. A computer offers no face to face interaction. So when a person who uses a computer often is at a social gathering they are usually very awkward. My cousin spends all of his time on the computer and when I went to his on christmas he never took his eyes off the screen! Computers is destroying the social life millions of people. Did you know that people who use the computer often are usually less smart than kids who don't? "Experts" on computers say that computers can be used for infenite nolege. The key word in that fraise is "can". just because kids have knoledge at their finger tips doesn't mean the will use it. On many projects and homework assignments I have record kids say "@CAPS2 I just copied and printed an article on google." copying and printing students don't learn anything. Computers are slowly making people less educated. Ever since the invention of the computer people have seen promise for society. Now computers are destroying society making people fat, socialy weird, and less educated. So how can people still think computers are good?
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Dear lot talk computers effect society Some experts say computers good society think opposite computers bad society make children obese decrease person social skills even make children less educated Computers plain bad In recent years studies show children use computer often less likely less willing get active Dr says The children use computers time waste active A study conducted shows children use computer hours day obese children use one hour less day Computers keep children inside day A child computer wasting time active The main reason children become fat computer easier go computer walk exert energy Computer direct cause child obesity threat society Some think computer increase social skills dead wrong On computer talk friends like actually talking On computer talk privite say ever heck want In public say something bad get lot trouble A computer offers face face interaction So person uses computer often social gathering usually awkward My cousin spends time computer I went christmas never took eyes screen Computers destroying social life millions people Did know people use computer often usually less smart kids nt Experts computers say computers used infenite nolege The key word fraise kids knoledge finger tips nt mean use On many projects homework assignments I record kids say CAPS I copied printed article google copying printing students nt learn anything Computers slowly making people less educated Ever since invention computer people seen promise society Now computers destroying society making people fat socialy weird less educated So people still think computers good
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Dear Local newspaper, I just read about your article regarding the computer usage. In my opinion I think that computers are a good thing. Yet, I believe that it could have a negative influence as well. I believe that computers are one of mankind's best technologies. You can type, learn about historical happenings, different places, and different cultures as well. You can talk to people from far away by using chat or the webcam. That's what I use to speak to my who live in Computers are one of the best things that has happened to me and my life. However, although computer can be such a good thing, it can be bad as well. A lot of people over used it too. I infact know a person and she's a very nice person. She's sweet, caring, loves kids, and has a kind heart. The only thing is, is that she's a addict. She loves Sometime when she comes over, I'll be using my laptop and she'll ask to check her status. My point is, is that she allows to take over her. not cool. I read an article the other day about computer usage in Dr. covered this article on the topic of computer usage. She said "The average american spends four hours or more on the computer. Although there are other people who spend their time outside when it's nice. I congradulate them on that". See, now you heard it from the expert as well. In cocnclusion, I would like to state that computers can have either a positive influence or a negative one as well. So it all depends on how you use it and how much time you spend on it. So my point that I would to come across is that use you computer wisely. Don't spend all of your time on it. Life's too short for that. So spend time with family and friends and go outside too!
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Dear Local newspaper I read article regarding computer usage In opinion I think computers good thing Yet I believe could negative influence well I believe computers one mankind s best technologies You type learn historical happenings different places different cultures well You talk people far away using chat webcam That s I use speak live Computers one best things happened life However although computer good thing bad well A lot people used I infact know person s nice person She s sweet caring loves kids kind heart The thing s addict She loves Sometime comes I ll using laptop ll ask check status My point allows take cool I read article day computer usage Dr covered article topic computer usage She said The average american spends four hours computer Although people spend time outside s nice I congradulate See heard expert well In cocnclusion I would like state computers either positive influence negative one well So depends use much time spend So point I would come across use computer wisely Do nt spend time Life s short So spend time family friends go outside
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Dear much time do you spend on the computer daily, hour, hours. While computers, are amazing advances in technology they are also very bad for you. People spend hours at at time on the computer causing less time exercing, horrible speaking, and dangerous searches. From to the numbers of obese people increased from of citizens to In a recent study the amount of families with computers is now out of compared to the out of in Scientist wonder if they were connected and relized they were. People who spent hours on the computer live a sedentary life style. They are more likly to go on the computer than go exercise. The lack of exercising causes obeseity, and cardovascular problems. Without this valuable exercise more people are . At a visit to the hospitial a surgen said he has seen a huge increase of heart surgreys in the We found that the computer manual booklets says to only go on for an hour at a time. The hottest thing online these days is social networking, whether twitter, or facebook. These social networking allow teens to talk with there friends. But really isn't talking. For example they write going dance. Not only is the spelling wrong but also the grammer. And this language doesnt just stay online, is now now they talk. the grandmother to a social networking said, "I can't even have conversations with her because she is is talking like she is on the computer. so sad." for public speaking and english class, an english teacher for states she has seen a drop in teens ability to write gramaticly correct and when she corrects essay the are written is social networking form. "@CAPS6's hard to see litiature dissolving because kid are spending so much time on the computer. The average day for children in is to go home and going on the computer for hours at a time until a parent comes home. would you like your child to be surfing the internent alone without you for hours when you don't know what they are doing. Parent blockers can only do so much. Children can find out the password and net around The dangers are always there. You can get a lot of good information on the internet but you can also get a lot of bad information. You dont know what your child is searching or who they are talking to on the computer, could be "@CAPS8," the who lives four blocks over.
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Dear much time spend computer daily hour hours While computers amazing advances technology also bad People spend hours time computer causing less time exercing horrible speaking dangerous searches From numbers obese people increased citizens In recent study amount families computers compared Scientist wonder connected relized People spent hours computer live sedentary life style They likly go computer go exercise The lack exercising causes obeseity cardovascular problems Without valuable exercise people At visit hospitial surgen said seen huge increase heart surgreys We found computer manual booklets says go hour time The hottest thing online days social networking whether twitter facebook These social networking allow teens talk friends But really nt talking For example write going dance Not spelling wrong also grammer And language doesnt stay online talk grandmother social networking said I ca nt even conversations talking like computer sad public speaking english class english teacher states seen drop teens ability write gramaticly correct corrects essay written social networking form CAPS s hard see litiature dissolving kid spending much time computer The average day children go home going computer hours time parent comes home would like child surfing internent alone without hours nt know Parent blockers much Children find password net around The dangers always You get lot good information internet also get lot bad information You dont know child searching talking computer could CAPS lives four blocks
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Dear newspaper, some beleive computers do not benefil society, I do. Computers help buisnesses thrive, keep people people aware of what is going on in the world, and allow people to stay in touch with each other. Computers greatly benefit small and large buisnesses across the world. Imagine all the jobs at each buisnesses without a computer. Buisnesses would be unreliable because no instant contact would mean it might take a long time for products to be assembled and shipped. Any buisness owner would cringe at the idea of running of buisness without a computer. When surveyed, out of buisness owners and workers would prefer a computers assistance at work. Almost every modern day buisness relies on at least one computer. For example, companies that mass - produce their products often rely on computers to do jobs more precisely than a worker. Sometimes computer operated robots do dangerous jobs so workers are not at risk. Buisness also need computers to quickly recieve and send information to other buisnesses and people. Buisnesses are not the only need for computers. People use computers as much if not more, than buisnesses. People like you and me use computers to keep in touch with friend and people we know. Thanks to websites like and e-mail people can easily stay in touch. Families use computers to plan get-togethers. Friends use computers to keep contact after grade school or if they do not live nearby. With computers, anyone that is anywhere can be in constant contact with anyone else. People also like to know news imediately. Without computers it would be alot harder to contact the rest of the world. Imagine a natural disaster accuring and not knowing about it right away. In that case we could not send aid to the area. With the recent earthquakes in and Knowledge about the rest of the world is even more important. Newspapers provide news and information but a day or two late and they often use computers to aquire that information. Eighty-seven percent of scientists agree that recieving information would be a lot harder.
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Dear newspaper beleive computers benefil society I Computers help buisnesses thrive keep people people aware going world allow people stay touch Computers greatly benefit small large buisnesses across world Imagine jobs buisnesses without computer Buisnesses would unreliable instant contact would mean might take long time products assembled shipped Any buisness owner would cringe idea running buisness without computer When surveyed buisness owners workers would prefer computers assistance work Almost every modern day buisness relies least one computer For example companies mass produce products often rely computers jobs precisely worker Sometimes computer operated robots dangerous jobs workers risk Buisness also need computers quickly recieve send information buisnesses people Buisnesses need computers People use computers much buisnesses People like use computers keep touch friend people know Thanks websites like email people easily stay touch Families use computers plan gettogethers Friends use computers keep contact grade school live nearby With computers anyone anywhere constant contact anyone else People also like know news imediately Without computers would alot harder contact rest world Imagine natural disaster accuring knowing right away In case could send aid area With recent earthquakes Knowledge rest world even important Newspapers provide news information day two late often use computers aquire information Eightyseven percent scientists agree recieving information would lot harder
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Imagine standing outside, the warm sun dancing on your back, jumping into the pool and feeling the cool water flow around you. But no, that won't happen. Because children and their parents are spending way to much time on their computers. People aren't getting enough excercise, it can be very dangerous and families are spending less time with each other without computers, so its worse with them. I think people need to realize that computers are over the humans. Humans especially children, need exercise. But with computers that isn't really possible. More and more children are becoming obese by the year. Computers are making that happen quicker. Instead of sitting at the computer eating potato chips, children should be outside on their bikes, or swimming, or playing sports with their friends. If it is winter, the least kids could do is go sledding. Children need to expirience nature, not the screen of a computer. The computer can also be very dangerous. year olds are making facebooks! You can find year old on the internet now. Naive teenagers go find "friends" in chatrooms or on and their "friends" lie to them, about their age, another indentity. Many teenagers go and meet someone they met online and end up getting raped or killed. There are many sick people in the world, and many of them use the internet to find people. Lots of teenagers give out personal information like their last name, cellphone number, or where they live, and thats an easy way for predators to find them. It puts them, and their whole family in danger. Computers are breaking up families, and friends. Things like farmpring, etc. are turning people against each other. Some families even eat dinner at the computer. When friends go over other friend's houses, they just sit on the computer. Why is it so fun to just look at the computer screen? Families need to do something together like eat dinner together, go out for ice cream, go shopping, something, anything but going on the computer all day. I'll admit, I am a little addicted to the computer. But I don't go on it like some people. Instead of eating dinner at the computer, go out to dinner as a family. Instead of online shopping, go shopping with your friends. It isn't hard to at back or hours of going on the computer. Am I the only teenager who thinks this? Maybe. But I know that I am benefitting myself by cutting back on the computer. We don't get enough exercise, it can become really dangerous, and family and friends should start spending more time together. Computers can do everything more than humans can, and we need to stop it.
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Imagine standing outside warm sun dancing back jumping pool feeling cool water flow around But wo nt happen Because children parents spending way much time computers People nt getting enough excercise dangerous families spending less time without computers worse I think people need realize computers humans Humans especially children need exercise But computers nt really possible More children becoming obese year Computers making happen quicker Instead sitting computer eating potato chips children outside bikes swimming playing sports friends If winter least kids could go sledding Children need expirience nature screen computer The computer also dangerous year olds making facebooks You find year old internet Naive teenagers go find friends chatrooms friends lie age another indentity Many teenagers go meet someone met online end getting raped killed There many sick people world many use internet find people Lots teenagers give personal information like last name cellphone number live thats easy way predators find It puts whole family danger Computers breaking families friends Things like farmpring etc turning people Some families even eat dinner computer When friends go friend s houses sit computer Why fun look computer screen Families need something together like eat dinner together go ice cream go shopping something anything going computer day I ll admit I little addicted computer But I nt go like people Instead eating dinner computer go dinner family Instead online shopping go shopping friends It nt hard back hours going computer Am I teenager thinks Maybe But I know I benefitting cutting back computer We nt get enough exercise become really dangerous family friends start spending time together Computers everything humans need stop
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Dear local newspaper, I agree that people are spending more time on the computers and less time doing other important stuff. For example, they don't spend time exercising, enjoying nature, and they don't spend time with their family. Those are very important things that people don't undeRstand that they are missing of. First, people that spend a lot of time on the computer don't do exercise. Doing exercise is good for your health. If you don't do exercise when you get older your bones are going to work. Also, you could get fat and that is bad for your heart. Just for being on the computer people don't pay attention to their health. Next, people don't enjoy the beautiful nature that is outside. Is beautiful when you hear the birds singing or seeing the plants outside. People are forgeting about nature. They don't recycle so the planet could be clean. The air that we smell is not clean because they don't care about nature. Instead of being on the computer they chould help so the world could be better. Finally, people don't spend time with the people that love them. Is very important to spend time with your family. People don't realize thats the first thing in life is your family. Instead of being on the computer, is fun going to the beach with your kids, wife, father, and etc. In conclusion, i believe that computers affect on people. People just for being on the computer they don't do exercise, enjoy nature, and they don't spend time with their family. Now that you heard my , i ask you to think about yours.
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Dear local newspaper I agree people spending time computers less time important stuff For example nt spend time exercising enjoying nature nt spend time family Those important things people nt undeRstand missing First people spend lot time computer nt exercise Doing exercise good health If nt exercise get older bones going work Also could get fat bad heart Just computer people nt pay attention health Next people nt enjoy beautiful nature outside Is beautiful hear birds singing seeing plants outside People forgeting nature They nt recycle planet could clean The air smell clean nt care nature Instead computer chould help world could better Finally people nt spend time people love Is important spend time family People nt realize thats first thing life family Instead computer fun going beach kids wife father etc In conclusion believe computers affect people People computer nt exercise enjoy nature nt spend time family Now heard ask think
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Dear Computers have a very positive effect on people. I agree that computers have a positive effect. They teach hand-eye coordination. It gives people the ability to learn about people and places, and you can talk online first reason is that computers teach hand-eye coordination. for example, when you learn how to type, you can memerize the keys. Therefore, you don't have to look down at the keyboard. Computers also teach hand-eye when using a mouse. When you want to click on something you have to look at the screen and move the mouse to click on the icon. final reason that computers teach hand eye is once you what to do, you don't have to serch the screen for an icon. You could just move the mouse to a spot on the screen and no what to do. Computers teach hand-eye coordination when you type, when you move the mouse to click on an icon, and when you memorize all of the icons. second reason is computers make you smarter. For example, if you have a history project, and you need to know about china, you can use the computer. How many times would china be in the newspaper? Using the computer can access quick information. Another example is computers can find information on famous people no one knew about. You could be able to find what college a famous actor went to in a matter of seconds. last example is that a serch engine can look up famous pictures. If you are working on a project that requires pictures, can have the photos you need. Computers make you smarter because you can look up different countries, you could look up people, and famous countries. last reason is computers give you the ability to talk online with friends, for example, you could catch up with friends you don't see that much during school. Talking online is just as fast as texting. Also, you could continue a conversation you had with a friend. Did the bell ring in the middle of a conversation? Well, you can continue it on or Lastly, you can just plain talk. You could make plans, or you can talk about upcoming events. Computers give you access to talking with your friends. In conclusion, computers do have a positive effect on other people. You can get hand-eye coordination, you can look up foreign countries and people, and you can talk with your friends.
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Dear Computers positive effect people I agree computers positive effect They teach handeye coordination It gives people ability learn people places talk online first reason computers teach handeye coordination example learn type memerize keys Therefore nt look keyboard Computers also teach handeye using mouse When want click something look screen move mouse click icon final reason computers teach hand eye nt serch screen icon You could move mouse spot screen Computers teach handeye coordination type move mouse click icon memorize icons second reason computers make smarter For example history project need know china use computer How many times would china newspaper Using computer access quick information Another example computers find information famous people one knew You could able find college famous actor went matter seconds last example serch engine look famous pictures If working project requires pictures photos need Computers make smarter look different countries could look people famous countries last reason computers give ability talk online friends example could catch friends nt see much school Talking online fast texting Also could continue conversation friend Did bell ring middle conversation Well continue Lastly plain talk You could make plans talk upcoming events Computers give access talking friends In conclusion computers positive effect people You get handeye coordination look foreign countries people talk friends
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Since computers were invented, a colossal change in the way society functions has taken place. People how can go on to their computers to communicate with peers, get information on any topic for a school paper, or just because the internet to watch videos and stories. Magazine and newspaper articles, books and even movies and shows sre available on today's computer! This advancement in technology has made the century the most modern era this world has ever seen, and is beneficial to society. The "computer age" has given people in today's society the incredible opportunity to broaden their imaginations through technology. You can, in less than one minute go on the internet type in to whatever movie or book you want and start watching instantly. People have always said that books can take you anywhere you want. Well, the computers can do the same thing, expect with greater efficiency and with more places to choosen from. You can, instead of buying a book, go online and read of the faraway city of or of the eruption of the and you can do it with mind-blowing speed. Some think that by wasting time on computers, people are using up time that could be spent studying or with family. Howeer, any information needed to your knowledge on a topic can be found on the internet. And if you want to spent time with your family, you can even look your computer up to a tv and watch a free movie with the family! The computer age is here and it is exactly. What society needs. Picture this: you're doing a school project on the you know nothing about it. Would you rather drive minutes going and thirty minutes looking withb everything you need, or do you think it's more to spend five minutes looking for the website you need on the internet? Obviously, the later of the is much more reasonable. The computer makes getting research for school or work substantially easier. In addition,you can create entire presentations on a computers with surprising ease! Being an eighth grade student, I dont know I would ever do woithout the internet. I rely on my computer to get all of my research for almost every project, and I even make some of my best project on it! The computer is the likes of all the hard working students and adults much, much easier. People's lives have not only been made easier in the field of research; computer make communicating with friends and familyeasier as well! Through e-mail, video chat and instant messaging., we can communicate with whoever we would, whenever we wort. With some computers, you can even see and talk to any person you wish. Without these computers, we will one again have to resort to snail mail, whcih makes instant communication telephones, we would have no other way to talk. Computers have enhanced communication chill likes so graetly that it's foolish to say their not beneficial to society. How can a machine with so many abilities be for see the computer as a brooden research for school and we want! Bottom line the computer age is here and its amazing.
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Since computers invented colossal change way society functions taken place People go computers communicate peers get information topic school paper internet watch videos stories Magazine newspaper articles books even movies shows sre available today s computer This advancement technology made century modern era world ever seen beneficial society The computer age given people today s society incredible opportunity broaden imaginations technology You less one minute go internet type whatever movie book want start watching instantly People always said books take anywhere want Well computers thing expect greater efficiency places choosen You instead buying book go online read faraway city eruption mindblowing speed Some think wasting time computers people using time could spent studying family Howeer information needed knowledge topic found internet And want spent time family even look computer tv watch free movie family The computer age exactly What society needs Picture re school project know nothing Would rather drive minutes going thirty minutes looking withb everything need think s spend five minutes looking website need internet Obviously later much reasonable The computer makes getting research school work substantially easier In addition create entire presentations computers surprising ease Being eighth grade student I dont know I would ever woithout internet I rely computer get research almost every project I even make best project The computer likes hard working students adults much much easier People s lives made easier field research computer make communicating friends familyeasier well Through email video chat instant messaging communicate whoever would whenever wort With computers even see talk person wish Without computers one resort snail mail whcih makes instant communication telephones would way talk Computers enhanced communication chill likes graetly s foolish say beneficial society How machine many abilities see computer brooden research school want Bottom line computer age amazing
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Computers are over used and controll the minds some people. Computers are parcally to for americas high obesity percentage. Americas teens are not doing homework. And noteveteing time into school because of computers. These high tech machines should be outlowed and given to only those who truly need them. People spend way to much time on computers. The time people spend on the computer is time they should be exersizing. Computers make people obees studys show that of obees americans admit to being adicted to the computer. This is why computers are bad. The internet on computers is unsafe. Expers say that popular chating sites such as myspace are the reason for the sudden incroas in murders, and rapings. The number of convicted criminals as well as sex affenders i tramendus. Yet parents lot the children on them. People don't understand the troubles computers cause. Besides the other factors computers retard teens learning. Teh comkputer is suposed to be a helpful tool and used for leanring. But computers are being used for other things. Computers encourage kids not to study or do homework. Although those are useful becoming sites and tools, these tool arent used often. Computers hurt people in many ways. America should have off computer week to fight back from its evil grie on children. I hope one day we can all turn off out computers for good.
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Computers used controll minds people Computers parcally americas high obesity percentage Americas teens homework And noteveteing time school computers These high tech machines outlowed given truly need People spend way much time computers The time people spend computer time exersizing Computers make people obees studys show obees americans admit adicted computer This computers bad The internet computers unsafe Expers say popular chating sites myspace reason sudden incroas murders rapings The number convicted criminals well sex affenders tramendus Yet parents lot children People nt understand troubles computers cause Besides factors computers retard teens learning Teh comkputer suposed helpful tool used leanring But computers used things Computers encourage kids study homework Although useful becoming sites tools tool arent used often Computers hurt people many ways America computer week fight back evil grie children I hope one day turn computers good
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Dear local newspaper, you think computers have a positive or negative effect on people? I personally think computers have a positive effect on people because with computers many people research about the past. Also I don't agree that computers have a negative effect on anybody because with computers many people learn hand-eye coordinations, gives them the ability to learn about faraway people and places, they also allow people to talk to old friends or family members. Then, computers can also be used to help someone find information about nature such as different trees, plants, animals, and many other things that are involved in nature. After that, computers are also sometimes used to contact people who live faraway from you. Some ways to contact people on a computer are using e-mails, instant message, facebook, myspace, and many other websites. In addition, I think computers have a positive effect on people, but others maya not agree which is fine because not everybody has the same opinion on stuff in the world. Then, computers can be very useful to many people because they can use computers if they need to find information on history, any events that might have went on in the past that might not still be done in the present. Finally, computers are useful to scientists, business workers, many adults, and even children use computers if they need to type something for school or need to find information for a project they're doing.
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Dear local newspaper think computers positive negative effect people I personally think computers positive effect people computers many people research past Also I nt agree computers negative effect anybody computers many people learn handeye coordinations gives ability learn faraway people places also allow people talk old friends family members Then computers also used help someone find information nature different trees plants animals many things involved nature After computers also sometimes used contact people live faraway Some ways contact people computer using emails instant message facebook myspace many websites In addition I think computers positive effect people others maya agree fine everybody opinion stuff world Then computers useful many people use computers need find information history events might went past might still done present Finally computers useful scientists business workers many adults even children use computers need type something school need find information project re
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Dear Local Newspaper, everday technology is developed. One of the biggest and most popular machines in the technocle society is, the computer. Some people don't like computers. The think computers are ruining social skills and healthy bodys. The reason I'm writing to you is to presuade those people to realize the greatness that lies inside a computer. For starters computers help us recive/give One of the great featurs that computers give is email. Without email, we would be completley out of the loop. For example there is a snowday at your childs school, you recive an email from the usper intendent saying school si cancled. Without that email, we woulden't be able to know that Another example, say that you lost your voice to a terrible cold. You don't feel good and need to call work to report being sick. Now you're stuck because you have no voice. you had a computer, you could have simply emailed your boss. Another posative tool computers gives us is making communicating esayer. With all of the social networking now avalible like twitter , and yahoo messanger. It nearly impossible not to stay in contact with friends and faimly using you can look up old friends and faimly. Once youve found them, you can friend request them and become online friends. Once youre online friends you can instant message, video chat, look at their status, and browse their photos. So with a computer nearly impossible not to be able to keep in touch. The last and final reason computers are great is because, they make shopping much esayer. you have used amazon, ebay or overstock, you know what I'm talking about you can buy almost anything online. From electronics to animals. The list is endless. With a computer you can even get your house hold groceries online. For example say your home from work with explosive diharrea. But so you need to go grociery shopping. You've been on the toilet of the day and alls youve got is your laptop. Well you can shop online. So as you can see computers help us communicate, shop and get and recive
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Dear Local Newspaper everday technology developed One biggest popular machines technocle society computer Some people nt like computers The think computers ruining social skills healthy bodys The reason I m writing presuade people realize greatness lies inside computer For starters computers help us recivegive One great featurs computers give email Without email would completley loop For example snowday childs school recive email usper intendent saying school si cancled Without email woulde nt able know Another example say lost voice terrible cold You nt feel good need call work report sick Now re stuck voice computer could simply emailed boss Another posative tool computers gives us making communicating esayer With social networking avalible like twitter yahoo messanger It nearly impossible stay contact friends faimly using look old friends faimly Once youve found friend request become online friends Once youre online friends instant message video chat look status browse photos So computer nearly impossible able keep touch The last final reason computers great make shopping much esayer used amazon ebay overstock know I m talking buy almost anything online From electronics animals The list endless With computer even get house hold groceries online For example say home work explosive diharrea But need go grociery shopping You ve toilet day alls youve got laptop Well shop online So see computers help us communicate shop get recive
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To editor, a beautiful day. The sun is shining, the birds are chirping, and a lazy breeze is flowing through the trees. But you don't notice any of because you're plopped down in front of your comuter tapping away on or email. With modern technology. This is a common scenario. Experts are concerned that excessive computer use can harm your health, hamper your social skills, and cause you to be disconnected from nature. While computers are helpful in our lives too much of one thing is never a good thing. As mentioned, camputers have can a negative effect on your health. Computers cause people to be lazy. They would rather and email than go outside and excersize in the cool, crisp, fresh air. In fact, statistics recently released by the show that computers are the leading reason for obesity. And weight problems are not the only thing computer to worry about. Too much time in front of the computer will also take toll on your eyes. Even local doctors have pointed "@CAPS4 since computers have become a common household item, the number of i have eye has gone up about or more kids every year than the year says of the And if that isn't enough, typing too many this and emails day after day can give you repetetive syndrome, also known as carpal tunnel. Carpal tunnel used to be more when typewriters were big, but dwindled down once computers with newer, easier to type on keyboards came around. But excessive daily use of computers is causing doctors to see more cases of carpal tunnel crop up. is clear that if you want to stay healthy, computer usage should be limited. Secondly, too much time spent on the computer affect your ability to communicate with others. Computers are helpful when you need to talk to someone but people have gott on so used in that they sometimes find awkward to talk to someone face to face. Their eyes look everywhere except for the person, they shift their weight back and forth and struggle to find the right words to say things that should be easy. This awkwardness can also ruin previously close friendships. Friends will talk to each other endlessly through but have no words for each other when they meet face to face. I remember i didn't see one of my friends at all; we just each other daily. When we saw each other at school, we found hard to carry a conversation and took some getting used to talking face to face again. And this isn't the only way friendships are ut on the line by computers. Personal and meaningful conversations sometimes be. You're on the phone with your friend and you're telling her about something important that you need advice on. A few seconds after you begin talking you're interrupted by a loud followed by a "hold on, so and so just me." computers seriously social skills and personal relationships. Another reason to watch how much time you spend on the comuter is that can cause you to
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To editor beautiful day The sun shining birds chirping lazy breeze flowing trees But nt notice re plopped front comuter tapping away email With modern technology This common scenario Experts concerned excessive computer use harm health hamper social skills cause disconnected nature While computers helpful lives much one thing never good thing As mentioned camputers negative effect health Computers cause people lazy They would rather email go outside excersize cool crisp fresh air In fact statistics recently released show computers leading reason obesity And weight problems thing computer worry Too much time front computer also take toll eyes Even local doctors pointed CAPS since computers become common household item number eye gone kids every year year says And nt enough typing many emails day day give repetetive syndrome also known carpal tunnel Carpal tunnel used typewriters big dwindled computers newer easier type keyboards came around But excessive daily use computers causing doctors see cases carpal tunnel crop clear want stay healthy computer usage limited Secondly much time spent computer affect ability communicate others Computers helpful need talk someone people gott used sometimes find awkward talk someone face face Their eyes look everywhere except person shift weight back forth struggle find right words say things easy This awkwardness also ruin previously close friendships Friends talk endlessly words meet face face I remember nt see one friends daily When saw school found hard carry conversation took getting used talking face face And nt way friendships ut line computers Personal meaningful conversations sometimes You re phone friend re telling something important need advice A seconds begin talking re interrupted loud followed hold computers seriously social skills personal relationships Another reason watch much time spend comuter cause
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Dear local newspaper, are beinging questioned if the are good for our society or not. I would have to say that they are good and bad you really can't pick a side. These good because children and teens can get the information they need to teach in school, it allows people to chat with others in different places, and it helps hand-eye cordanation. Those were the good here are some bad things about compters. People spend to much time on the computer instead of exercising, they dont' get to enjoy nature, and people stop interacting with friends and family. Anyone can pick a side. I just can't, because i can relate to both sides. For example. one of the good reasons about computers was that you can chat's with other people around the world. I can relate to that because when i live here in my mom and stepdad live in so i don't see them much but thanks to computer i can chat. With them when ever i want to. Honestly i wouldn't know how my life would be like if i didn't have a computer and i wasn't able I now. Although, can also to one or the bad things about computers, which is that people spent to much time on the them. I can relate to that and so could of the other well, because when i around because go to a after school, go straight on my laptop and around When my grandma pm. She always comes in and "Your on that thing to much you your hands!" in her. So in my opinion I believe that coumpters can be good for our socity and bad; for me there is no side to take. Others might feel the same way, and others not. It's up to them to make a choice, so ask your self," you believe that computers are good or bad for our society?
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Dear local newspaper beinging questioned good society I would say good bad really ca nt pick side These good children teens get information need teach school allows people chat others different places helps handeye cordanation Those good bad things compters People spend much time computer instead exercising dont get enjoy nature people stop interacting friends family Anyone pick side I ca nt relate sides For example one good reasons computers chat s people around world I relate live mom stepdad live nt see much thanks computer chat With ever want Honestly would nt know life would like nt computer nt able I Although also one bad things computers people spent much time I relate could well around go school go straight laptop around When grandma pm She always comes Your thing much hands So opinion I believe coumpters good socity bad side take Others might feel way others It s make choice ask self believe computers good bad society
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Dear Newspaper: you really think computers are that good? Computers are so helpful today almost everyone has one. Computers are wonderful they are great ways to find information, they connect people from all over the world, and offer many opportunities, hopefully at the end of this letter you will agree with me. Firstly, they help people find information. Computers are great ways to find information with google and other programs like it the whole world is at your fingertips. In my school surveys show of all students use the computer to help them research for school projects and asignments with computers you can view many diffrent websites from all around the world about a topic and you can even find online books that you can use, this is one way computers are a great thing out there are two other great reasons. Secondly, with computers the wole world becomes smaller as people begin to know more and more people through the computer. More than of people email, or videochat on a daily baes. Isnt it great when you mnake a great friend in collage but you find out he/she lives halfway around the world, to know that you can still keep in touch with the computer, did you know that many people in the in the military use videochat to keep in touch with their loved one back home? Computers are great because they connect people and allow them to be together even when they cannot be together, but there is still one even better reason why computers are good. Finally, computers ofter many opportunities like education and jobs. Today there are many single parrents more than in any other time according to and the number is still drastickly increasing with this economy some of those parrents could really use a better education to help them bring in more money for their familys, but when can they find time to go to school with work and then the kids? Now there are many online collage courses you can take to get the education you have always wanted with kraigslist and other online adds many people can post job ofering while others can email those people their resume to try to get the job, but by seeing adds posted online people can apply easier from farther away. Computers open many great oppertunities for people. Computers are very cool machines that many people take fergranted, they help give people information, as well as connect people from around the world and offer many oppertunities. So Newspaper I hope you can try to understand my view on why computers are so great.
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Dear Newspaper really think computers good Computers helpful today almost everyone one Computers wonderful great ways find information connect people world offer many opportunities hopefully end letter agree Firstly help people find information Computers great ways find information google programs like whole world fingertips In school surveys show students use computer help research school projects asignments computers view many diffrent websites around world topic even find online books use one way computers great thing two great reasons Secondly computers wole world becomes smaller people begin know people computer More people email videochat daily baes Isnt great mnake great friend collage find heshe lives halfway around world know still keep touch computer know many people military use videochat keep touch loved one back home Computers great connect people allow together even together still one even better reason computers good Finally computers ofter many opportunities like education jobs Today many single parrents time according number still drastickly increasing economy parrents could really use better education help bring money familys find time go school work kids Now many online collage courses take get education always wanted kraigslist online adds many people post job ofering others email people resume try get job seeing adds posted online people apply easier farther away Computers open many great oppertunities people Computers cool machines many people take fergranted help give people information well connect people around world offer many oppertunities So Newspaper I hope try understand view computers great
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Dear after reading your article about advances in technology, I would like to offer my opinion about this contraversal subject. All around the world, people are using computers to do all sorts of things; weather its for games, the buying and selling of items, talking with people in different countries; the possibilites are endless. This is, however, not nessessarally a good thing. Many people become addicted to computers. Esspecialy adolesents, who enjoy the games that computers offer. From personal experience being addicted to computers, I can honestly say that I was under almost complete control by that computer. My grades started to go down, I stopped interacting with my friends and family, and trouble on things. Many parents watch their children go through this and are sometimes helpless to stop it. This poses a large problem for parents. My word of advice; don't let your children become addicted!
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Dear reading article advances technology I would like offer opinion contraversal subject All around world people using computers sorts things weather games buying selling items talking people different countries possibilites endless This however nessessarally good thing Many people become addicted computers Esspecialy adolesents enjoy games computers offer From personal experience addicted computers I honestly say I almost complete control computer My grades started go I stopped interacting friends family trouble things Many parents watch children go sometimes helpless stop This poses large problem parents My word advice nt let children become addicted
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There are some effects computers have on people that I agree with and disagree with. There are many people in the world that use computers every day and some that use it sometimes. Also it always gives you information everytime you use it. I would think that computers give a positive effect on people. Computers can have their likes and dislikes. Not everytime when you need information the computer won't give it to you. There are some websites that give you the right stuff you want to know and others do not fill your mind with positive things. That is one thing I do not like about computers. Do not think that is too bad because computers have alot more fun adavantages. One of the most common and used thing around the world is instant Instant is when you are communicating with another human bean over the online web. Many people use this to get in touch with a close family members or a friend. There are some names for instant and many more! Yes, the computer can be very addicting but once in a while you need to get off and maybe get some fresh air. For some people I agree that they stay on the computer to much and became very lazy. This is one disadvantage that can cause you from exercizing and seeing friends and family. There is no problem if you go on for an hour a day maybe more, but to long is not good. There are so many things for the computer I can't name them all and even buying things off the computers, those are many of the things you can do on your computer. I love going on the computer time to time doing many things I have talked about. Also if you do have one than reading this persuade you into getting one. My opinion is that they give you a very positive effect.
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There effects computers people I agree disagree There many people world use computers every day use sometimes Also always gives information everytime use I would think computers give positive effect people Computers likes dislikes Not everytime need information computer wo nt give There websites give right stuff want know others fill mind positive things That one thing I like computers Do think bad computers alot fun adavantages One common used thing around world instant Instant communicating another human bean online web Many people use get touch close family members friend There names instant many Yes computer addicting need get maybe get fresh air For people I agree stay computer much became lazy This one disadvantage cause exercizing seeing friends family There problem go hour day maybe long good There many things computer I ca nt name even buying things computers many things computer I love going computer time time many things I talked Also one reading persuade getting one My opinion give positive effect
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Dear Local Newspaper, opinion on the effects of computers is that some people are spending to much time on computers they are good to be on for a while but not all day. So first reason why I think spending to much time on computers is not a good thing because it's better to be outside doing other activities with other people all day instead you could hang out with friends and do some sports or something else and if your on the computer all day you will start to lose some friends. second reason why I dont think it is good to be on the computer all day is because if your not exercising you will start to gain weight cause your sitting all day just on the computer so its good to go outside and go for a walk or you could go to a gym so you could do exercise is good for you it will keep you healthy cause I know someone who is on the computer all day and he really does not go outside because he says that computers teach you alot and they do but it is not good to be on it all day. last reason on some bad effects of computers is that some people could use these computers for bad things they could be going on some bad websites and that will just make you to be on the compute even longer you could even become addicted to being on computers because your doing nothing else ans some people have cameras on their computers and some people use them for same bad things so thats why it is better not to be on a computera ll day long. So these were reasons or some bad effects computers could have on people if your not go outside to do some activities or to hang out with some friends.
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Dear Local Newspaper opinion effects computers people spending much time computers good day So first reason I think spending much time computers good thing s better outside activities people day instead could hang friends sports something else computer day start lose friends second reason I dont think good computer day exercising start gain weight cause sitting day computer good go outside go walk could go gym could exercise good keep healthy cause I know someone computer day really go outside says computers teach alot good day last reason bad effects computers people could use computers bad things could going bad websites make compute even longer could even become addicted computers nothing else ans people cameras computers people use bad things thats better computera day long So reasons bad effects computers could people go outside activities hang friends
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Dear I do agree that people should stop spending most of thier day on the computer and start to exercise more or spend time with friends and family. The computer has the ability to let you learn about faraway places but instead of sitting behind a desk and learning about somewhere faraway you should go outside and see it for yourself. Also our country is one of the top that has fat people and I believe that the computer has something to do with this because most of the kids in our school have a facebook and about of those kids are on facebook for at least an hour. This is why people should stop using the internet for most of their day because they are not getting the exercise they need that is why our country is one of the top in the world that has most fast people. The internet does allow you to chat with family and friends but you still need to hand out with your friends outside so you can exercise by playing sports or just going for a walk down the block if you don't you will not have a healthy relationship because someitmes they not even be on the computer so you can chat with them online. Also if you don't go outside and enjoy nature and play with friends then you will become very lazy just by sitting in a chair all day and you would'nt care to do anything anymore.
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Dear I agree people stop spending thier day computer start exercise spend time friends family The computer ability let learn faraway places instead sitting behind desk learning somewhere faraway go outside see Also country one top fat people I believe computer something kids school facebook kids facebook least hour This people stop using internet day getting exercise need country one top world fast people The internet allow chat family friends still need hand friends outside exercise playing sports going walk block nt healthy relationship someitmes even computer chat online Also nt go outside enjoy nature play friends become lazy sitting chair day wouldnt care anything anymore
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Dear, Newspaper I would like to tell you about computers, without them this world would fall apart. For example, some peoples jobs are to fix them, make then, sell them, also some people work from home and need the computer for their jobs. Without them soo many people would out of jobs and geting paidless. Also, kids need them for education reasons, for example, if you had a broken finger and couldent hold a pencil you would have to type. In addition, what if a student needed an answer to a question and there has no to help them they could go online and get the answer and learn. Theres many ways a computer run help a person. For example, they could need directions or some ones phone number or answers. Also, you can buy off line what if you live too far away from your favorite stare you can fast or der it off line. Also I believe kids should get off the computer any go out side and exercise, to day there is to many over weight people if people what for a walk instead of siting on the computer all day there woulden as many over weighted people. In addition, people need exercise without it people would get faty, lazy, sleepy, and some sick, and angery, deppression. it would to every ones benifit if people would exercise more. In addition without computers alot or peoples lives would fall apart, people just need to exercise more and everyting will fine.
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Dear Newspaper I would like tell computers without world would fall apart For example peoples jobs fix make sell also people work home need computer jobs Without soo many people would jobs geting paidless Also kids need education reasons example broken finger couldent hold pencil would type In addition student needed answer question help could go online get answer learn Theres many ways computer run help person For example could need directions ones phone number answers Also buy line live far away favorite stare fast der line Also I believe kids get computer go side exercise day many weight people people walk instead siting computer day woulden many weighted people In addition people need exercise without people would get faty lazy sleepy sick angery deppression would every ones benifit people would exercise In addition without computers alot peoples lives would fall apart people need exercise everyting fine
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Coumputors are mind browning on what they can do. They can make or break somone financhely. They also can perduce amasing graphis that aritist cant perduce. Coumputrs are also for great for recer antal acitivitys, and they also take your life away. I not talking about a real life talking about the activitys you do away from home. Now lets see the benifits and problems we come so far on how we handle money. We use to put it in chets and hide them now all we do is click and type in a securty number. people can also invist in items but invisting is tricky you dont always win. You can win small or lose big they say coumputers today are hd. The screens are made of a liquid crystal fourmula that hardens. The lights in the back pixels do most of the wort to bring stunning graphis to life. On coumputers today people make money by selling graphis they made on coumputers. So this would be another plus on what a coumputor dose to a human. I went to a school to lern how to perduce great graphis. All teens kids and adults have used a coumputer for recerantol acivitys. On todays coumputors you can play games watch videos, and listen on coumputors. People do this to engoy then selfs. Some people ran get in trouble for fooling around on the web. But there is nothing stressed out and just playing some games for a while, personly I like to go on youtube and find funny vidos after school. I use to own a youtube account and get many views. The worst thing about coumpurts is it can ruin plan gobo or somones socal life some people get addicted and cant stop being on the coumputor until it is takin away. For example some people play world of war craft get addicted and cant stop! I had a problem when I had to chek you tube a lot. Well I hoped you readers. No matter what happens I think coumputors bennafit more than the problems
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Coumputors mind browning They make break somone financhely They also perduce amasing graphis aritist cant perduce Coumputrs also great recer antal acitivitys also take life away I talking real life talking activitys away home Now lets see benifits problems come far handle money We use put chets hide click type securty number people also invist items invisting tricky dont always win You win small lose big say coumputers today hd The screens made liquid crystal fourmula hardens The lights back pixels wort bring stunning graphis life On coumputers today people make money selling graphis made coumputers So would another plus coumputor dose human I went school lern perduce great graphis All teens kids adults used coumputer recerantol acivitys On todays coumputors play games watch videos listen coumputors People engoy selfs Some people ran get trouble fooling around web But nothing stressed playing games personly I like go youtube find funny vidos school I use youtube account get many views The worst thing coumpurts ruin plan gobo somones socal life people get addicted cant stop coumputor takin away For example people play world war craft get addicted cant stop I problem I chek tube lot Well I hoped readers No matter happens I think coumputors bennafit problems
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Dear Computers are a sought after item in this day in age, and we are making advances in technology every single day. Social networking sites like and are all over the internet. Computers are good to some exstent, but some kids find the computer essential to their life. Using computers too much will have a bad effect on society. Oreos, are all common sparks for people to be eating while on the computer. Now when you're sitting on the computer daily and for hours eating these sparks. You are begging to become overweight. of kids are overweight and that is unhealthy. A collassal piece of this use the computer daily. There is no doubt obesity is a problem, and computers are making it worse. The people that love to use the computer definetly have some sort of social network account, it be or Kids think they are immune to getting in trouble while posting messages or putting up picture of themselves. In one case a girl actually killed because of nasty messages posted about her. Three have been other cases in which girls have sent a nude pictures of themselves to their boyfriends and other people soul it. There lives will never be the same because they were using the computer too much. Soon we will become the leader of and we will get to the decisions around. If we are getting to know our outside world and we are not learning how to to be social without the internet, don't know how we will end up. will be the ones and all that important stuff. Instead of typing away we should explore the world and learn important things. Hopefully, as we will become independent on computers and we will fit this problem by sending less time on a. Computers are great thing but they should not for going outside with friends and playing baseball.
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Dear Computers sought item day age making advances technology every single day Social networking sites like internet Computers good exstent kids find computer essential life Using computers much bad effect society Oreos common sparks people eating computer Now re sitting computer daily hours eating sparks You begging become overweight kids overweight unhealthy A collassal piece use computer daily There doubt obesity problem computers making worse The people love use computer definetly sort social network account Kids think immune getting trouble posting messages putting picture In one case girl actually killed nasty messages posted Three cases girls sent nude pictures boyfriends people soul There lives never using computer much Soon become leader get decisions around If getting know outside world learning social without internet nt know end ones important stuff Instead typing away explore world learn important things Hopefully become independent computers fit problem sending less time Computers great thing going outside friends playing baseball
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Computers and the were a technological break through. It exposed to the average world, things that were never thought possitive. But as these things advanced over the years, they've become an addiction so bad of an addiction its begun to threaten peoples lives I've been given a choice to s'de with the addicting computers, or to offose them. The only clear choice is to offose. First off, computers have caused the world a decrease in exercise. Studies show out of people who use a computer, do not exercise with less exercise throughout the world, nations are becoming more over weight. This is a huge problem in the united states computers are main cause to why the is over weight and unhealthy by cutting down computers use, we can get our world back into great shape we can bring exercise and health back. Nextly, I'm sure you've all heard of online predators. It's scary just to think about, well as computer technology increased online predators numbers went up. I remember a couple of years ago, I was watching the news and a story came a normal teenage girl, being killed by someone she meton myspace. things like this still go on, and the rate at which they happen are in creasing. by putting people on computers you're putting then at risk of death this is an extreme problem computers have caused. Thus is the last efferct computers have, out of many that I'm going to state time on the computer, is time taken away from family and friends.This can ruin relationship in and outside the family. Now I'm sure you now many people have become extremely addicted to online games. the more they play these games the more they pull away from everyone they knew and loved computers are a leading cause in disfunctional families. they steal the user away from the outside word. these people need to get their families and friends back. You have to act now, before its too late and computers have over taken the world. If you know anyone who has fallen prey to a computer addiction, do what you can to help get them back we need to cutt back on any kind of computer use fast. Hurry, it's now or never.
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Computers technological break It exposed average world things never thought possitive But things advanced years ve become addiction bad addiction begun threaten peoples lives I ve given choice sde addicting computers offose The clear choice offose First computers caused world decrease exercise Studies show people use computer exercise less exercise throughout world nations becoming weight This huge problem united states computers main cause weight unhealthy cutting computers use get world back great shape bring exercise health back Nextly I m sure ve heard online predators It s scary think well computer technology increased online predators numbers went I remember couple years ago I watching news story came normal teenage girl killed someone meton myspace things like still go rate happen creasing putting people computers re putting risk death extreme problem computers caused Thus last efferct computers many I m going state time computer time taken away family friendsThis ruin relationship outside family Now I m sure many people become extremely addicted online games play games pull away everyone knew loved computers leading cause disfunctional families steal user away outside word people need get families friends back You act late computers taken world If know anyone fallen prey computer addiction help get back need cutt back kind computer use fast Hurry s never
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Dear I strongly believe that computers are a big benefit to society these days. There is so much to learn on a computer. And it is a lot more fun to learn of off a computer than a book. For intinst, let's say a student had to do a report, but he couldn't get his hands on any book at all. All the student would have to do is type in a few words on the internet and hundreds of websites pop about any topic he wants to learn. Another reason that a computer benefits society is ways to keep in contact with family and friends if they live to far away. Like me for instints, I live far from my friends. And the only I could talk to them outside of school was on a computer. We would be able to talk in a chat room or on a game. The same goes with Family. Lets, say your childre go on vacation and wants to keep in touch. All you would have to do is type as much as you want and click send and its at the other computer instintly. But, if you was to write a letter through the mail, it would take maybe a week or two to reach your child or the other way around. But, most of all, there are so many cool things you can do on a computer. There are a bunch of games, to play, or videos to watch. You can make music and make money off of it. My favorite would have to be the computer programs. Flash macromedia is the best though. You get to make your own animation clips or even a movie. Computers are really fun to play on. a computer has so many advanrages in today society. Which i'm very thank full for computers and all of the great stuff you do. That is why I believe computers benefit society.
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Dear I strongly believe computers big benefit society days There much learn computer And lot fun learn computer book For intinst let s say student report could nt get hands book All student would type words internet hundreds websites pop topic wants learn Another reason computer benefits society ways keep contact family friends live far away Like instints I live far friends And I could talk outside school computer We would able talk chat room game The goes Family Lets say childre go vacation wants keep touch All would type much want click send computer instintly But write letter mail would take maybe week two reach child way around But many cool things computer There bunch games play videos watch You make music make money My favorite would computer programs Flash macromedia best though You get make animation clips even movie Computers really fun play computer many advanrages today society Which m thank full computers great stuff That I believe computers benefit society
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Dear, play a big role in our world today. For example people use computers to get imformation, talk in chat rooms, mainly to talk to friends and fined friends. I think this messing people up. My first reson for thinking computers messing people up because of the impformation that on the website. For example people past, and blog lies about people online. This ruining many people because this starts rumors and gossip about people. Also the lies that are being posted could interfear with many lives. Another reason computers effect the lives and people the dangerous chat rooms. This not good because your not familliar with the person your talking too. The person could have posed as another person and be very hipocritical. The result of this could be very unpleasent. Like you might give them you number, adress, personal imformation. The outcome to endup in death, kidnapping, ciber bullying. Lastly, I want to talk about the false imformation that given to thousands of people online. Another words the"@CAPS1, Your love" Your On You?" these things are placed on either side of your screen to get money from you. On the other hand they attract the readers attention. For example these passages are set to copy down your number, get your account number then take your money. This doesnt help our peole because its only there for your money. In conclusion from my veiwible stand piont I dont prefer computers a magnificient way for people to spend there time on.
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Dear play big role world today For example people use computers get imformation talk chat rooms mainly talk friends fined friends I think messing people My first reson thinking computers messing people impformation website For example people past blog lies people online This ruining many people starts rumors gossip people Also lies posted could interfear many lives Another reason computers effect lives people dangerous chat rooms This good familliar person talking The person could posed another person hipocritical The result could unpleasent Like might give number adress personal imformation The outcome endup death kidnapping ciber bullying Lastly I want talk false imformation given thousands people online Another words CAPS Your love Your On You things placed either side screen get money On hand attract readers attention For example passages set copy number get account number take money This doesnt help peole money In conclusion veiwible stand piont I dont prefer computers magnificient way people spend time
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Dear You have heard that there are up-sides and down-sides to using a computer. There are many more up-sides though. For example, you can communicate with people, conduct business, and you can use it to learn. A computer is a big need in today's growing technological advances. Communication is not as easy to do by phone anymore because people are always busy and on the computer. You can use computers to meet people from different countries. By doing this we can learn what life is like for them. Through social networks, such as and we can make plans with friends. Computers are an important communication technology. Today most business is conducted over the internet or on a computer. The is all computerized today, and that is a major trade way today. A lot of business transactions and presentations are done out on a computer for maximum efficiency. Computers allow us to conduct business with foreign countries without having to go there. Computers are a huge advancement in business. Computers help us learn a lot about, just about, everything. Search engines let us type in keywords and find multiple websites on that topic. Computers let us research so we get correct information with just a click. This research can be used to write essays in school. Computers help us to learn in school and outside of it. A computer is a huge technological advancement with many uses. It have a few down-sides, but it has many more up-sides. Computers allow you to communicate, conduct business, and learn. Life would be much slower without a computer to speed things up.
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Dear You heard upsides downsides using computer There many upsides though For example communicate people conduct business use learn A computer big need today s growing technological advances Communication easy phone anymore people always busy computer You use computers meet people different countries By learn life like Through social networks make plans friends Computers important communication technology Today business conducted internet computer The computerized today major trade way today A lot business transactions presentations done computer maximum efficiency Computers allow us conduct business foreign countries without go Computers huge advancement business Computers help us learn lot everything Search engines let us type keywords find multiple websites topic Computers let us research get correct information click This research used write essays school Computers help us learn school outside A computer huge technological advancement many uses It downsides many upsides Computers allow communicate conduct business learn Life would much slower without computer speed things
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In my opinion, having computers is avery nice thing and does good in our society. I think this because of three reasons, it allows people to relax and wind down after a long day of work. Second, it allows people to communicate with their friends, it helps with schoolwork and makes things much easier. These are only a few of the reasons why computers do good in our society. off, I'd like to say that after a long day of work, all you want to do is relax. Television gets boring and you just want to sit and play games on the computer. Well, thats a great way of winding down on a rough day. You can go on and watch funny videos or go on and on you friends new photo album. Your computer is to do many things. There are many game , such as come or cam that can be a lot of fun. Do you see why the computers a good way of calming down? Other than winding you down on a rough day at work, on the computer allow you to communicate with friends and family. AIM is a good way to talk to friends and plan get together. Or, you can just have simple talk and are great websites to keep in touch with old friends of you, even make new friends. A lot of teenagers and adults have because it gets. So that you can't get off it. As you get older, you dont talk to your friends that much and soon you don't have many friends at all. prevents that so you can always talk to them. You should always keep in touch with friends. Most importantly, you use the computer for school work. Without it you can't get picture off or type an essay that due. you can't search words on Some teachers require you to type out essays and other don't. You need a computer if your teacher require you to type things. I go on swifts website to see if i have homework dure and that helps me out a teachers put extra credit online. All in all computes are good for society. you can just calm down and relax. Second, you can talk to old friends and keep in touch with new ones. and most importantly, it's very useful when it comes to schoolwork and up pictures/ . Now you must understant when i tell you that computers are important and very useful in society.
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In opinion computers avery nice thing good society I think three reasons allows people relax wind long day work Second allows people communicate friends helps schoolwork makes things much easier These reasons computers good society I d like say long day work want relax Television gets boring want sit play games computer Well thats great way winding rough day You go watch funny videos go friends new photo album Your computer many things There many game come cam lot fun Do see computers good way calming Other winding rough day work computer allow communicate friends family AIM good way talk friends plan get together Or simple talk great websites keep touch old friends even make new friends A lot teenagers adults gets So ca nt get As get older dont talk friends much soon nt many friends prevents always talk You always keep touch friends Most importantly use computer school work Without ca nt get picture type essay due ca nt search words Some teachers require type essays nt You need computer teacher require type things I go swifts website see homework dure helps teachers put extra credit online All computes good society calm relax Second talk old friends keep touch new ones importantly s useful comes schoolwork pictures Now must understant tell computers important useful society
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Dear Readers of the Computers are machines that have been around for years. With internet, you can do things like play games, research information, and even talk to friends and family, all through a computer. Advances in computer technology are beneficial to society for several reasons. These includes that computers improve hand-eye coordination, provide abundant information, and allow people to talk online. As said earlier, using a computer can improve hand-eye coordination. In fact, it is known that computers can immensely improve your reflexes. This reminds me of a time when my brother went to an eye doctor and was told that his eyes had trouble focusing. Patrick, my brother, was then literally assigned by the doctor to play computer games to help his hand-eye coordination. As a matter of fact, agree that computers can have a gargantuah, positive impact on reflexes and hand-eye coordination. If computers heldful in this way and, in some cases, necessary for your eyes, then why would the use of computers be classified as bad when they are clearly a beneficial factor in society? Computers are also beneficial because of what huge resource they are. the internet offers so much information for people of all ages who want to learn and thrive. For example, most schools have their students use computers for research. When I say most schoold, I mean of schools assign students to research using a computer. Principal of new city says, "@CAPS1 students use computers at leat every week if not more. They are fantastic resource with endless information." Computers are getway to countless amounts of knowledge that everyone should have access to. It is well known that almost everyone knows someone who lives far away. I, myself, have friend who lives in that I miss very much. When long-distance phone calls are too expensive most of the world and I rely on computers to talk to out far-away friends. Computers are the bridge between (my friend) and I. However, computers are not only used long distance. I also use computers to e-mail, instant message, video chat, and just stay connected to family and friends. A local teenage boy, says. "I use my computer to stay connected with friends and my family that lives in another county. I don't know what I would do without it." This means that and thousands of others rely on computers for communication with friends and Family. Computers are necessary for reasons. They help people, educate, and connect people. You must have access to a computer in my opinion, in order to thrive in life.
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Dear Readers Computers machines around years With internet things like play games research information even talk friends family computer Advances computer technology beneficial society several reasons These includes computers improve handeye coordination provide abundant information allow people talk online As said earlier using computer improve handeye coordination In fact known computers immensely improve reflexes This reminds time brother went eye doctor told eyes trouble focusing Patrick brother literally assigned doctor play computer games help handeye coordination As matter fact agree computers gargantuah positive impact reflexes handeye coordination If computers heldful way cases necessary eyes would use computers classified bad clearly beneficial factor society Computers also beneficial huge resource internet offers much information people ages want learn thrive For example schools students use computers research When I say schoold I mean schools assign students research using computer Principal new city says CAPS students use computers leat every week They fantastic resource endless information Computers getway countless amounts knowledge everyone access It well known almost everyone knows someone lives far away I friend lives I miss much When longdistance phone calls expensive world I rely computers talk faraway friends Computers bridge friend I However computers used long distance I also use computers email instant message video chat stay connected family friends A local teenage boy says I use computer stay connected friends family lives another county I nt know I would without This means thousands others rely computers communication friends Family Computers necessary reasons They help people educate connect people You must access computer opinion order thrive life
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Dear local newspaper, I think more people shouldn't spent time on their computer. The reasons why I think this is because people should spend time with their family and friends, second they need to exercis more, and last go outside enjoy nature. My first reason is that people that have computers stay in their rooms all day and don't get fresh air. They need to go out and enjoy nature. People who love animals and like to study animals should go out and get fresh air watch the animals study them. Haveing a computer is you could study animals like that is ok but you dont want to got stuck on the computers. go outside and watch them instead of looking at the computer screen. My second reason is that people do get more exercis. People are getting fat because they are sitting at the computer and not doing any movement. Peple are becoming lazy every day because they are on the computers Is you like to be on the computer and study go for a walk, run, joy, or ride a bike to the get some so a while. My last reason is that more people need to interact with their friends and family. People should get off the computer and make some plans with their family.Have a get together with your family and go places and chill. People who be on the computers don't spend time with there family dont know whats going on around them. Some people go into depresion because they are on the computers not enough time with family. These ar my reason why i think that we shouldn't be on the computers. We should spend more time with friends family or go outside, and enjoy nature.
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Dear local newspaper I think people nt spent time computer The reasons I think people spend time family friends second need exercis last go outside enjoy nature My first reason people computers stay rooms day nt get fresh air They need go enjoy nature People love animals like study animals go get fresh air watch animals study Haveing computer could study animals like ok dont want got stuck computers go outside watch instead looking computer screen My second reason people get exercis People getting fat sitting computer movement Peple becoming lazy every day computers Is like computer study go walk run joy ride bike get My last reason people need interact friends family People get computer make plans familyHave get together family go places chill People computers nt spend time family dont know whats going around Some people go depresion computers enough time family These ar reason think nt computers We spend time friends family go outside enjoy nature
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Dear local newspaper, I overheard some people talking about how much time their families spend on the computer. My opinion is that they should not be on the computer staring at a screen for long periods of time. I think this because it takes away time from important tasks, there is something healthier than enclosing yourself with a computer monitor, that would be going outside or being active. Another reason is that you can have more time being around family and friends. First, you shouldn't be spending so much time on the computer. You could be getting other tasks done. Such working, or for most teens, doing homework. Studies show that out of teens get easily distracted by social networking websites such "@CAPS1". "twitter", and "aol". People in the workplace are distracted two. Sometimes the job can get boring, so workers just go on the computer instead of getting things done. Children could be doing chores or just helping around the house a little, but they go on the computer instead. Teens regular routine consists of waking up, getting ready, soing on the computer, school, coming home, snack, and then going back to the computer. We need to break those habits of going back to the computer. Staring at a computer screen for long periods of time is not healthy. Instead, you could be active in a sport, or just going outside and playing." technology goes up seizure rates have also gone up." to a doctor at Being involved in a sport would be healthier and more fun that talking to people online. Also, your not exercising while on the computer, being active keeps your shape along with being fun. The most important reason you shouldn't be on the computer for a long time is because your using valuable time you could have used to spend with family and friends. Most people barely see their family when their at home because their consumed in the computer. Laptops have made it easier to block people out. Bringing it into your room and shutting the door, is the most common way. Hang out with the friends your already talking to online, wouldn't it be better in person? In conclusion, we should limit our computer time to do other tasks, be active, and spend time with friends and family.
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Dear local newspaper I overheard people talking much time families spend computer My opinion computer staring screen long periods time I think takes away time important tasks something healthier enclosing computer monitor would going outside active Another reason time around family friends First nt spending much time computer You could getting tasks done Such working teens homework Studies show teens get easily distracted social networking websites CAPS twitter aol People workplace distracted two Sometimes job get boring workers go computer instead getting things done Children could chores helping around house little go computer instead Teens regular routine consists waking getting ready soing computer school coming home snack going back computer We need break habits going back computer Staring computer screen long periods time healthy Instead could active sport going outside playing technology goes seizure rates also gone doctor Being involved sport would healthier fun talking people online Also exercising computer active keeps shape along fun The important reason nt computer long time using valuable time could used spend family friends Most people barely see family home consumed computer Laptops made easier block people Bringing room shutting door common way Hang friends already talking online would nt better person In conclusion limit computer time tasks active spend time friends family
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Dear people that read the news paper and that have that like to play the computer all day more. Than a hour. I think you should take your time and read my article in this wonderful newspaper. I am writing this article about using the computer more than an hour. My first reason about this computers issue is it makes than not pay attention in the school. To support that reason so you dont think i am making this up is that they play the computer alot and it makes the just think about the computer and not think about school. They play it so much and it can mess up the and they can not focus in school. My second main reason is it makes them allways want to talk about the computer. So if they play it mare than a hour like i said it can cause them to be addicted like drug's it is just like that if you dont want your to be addicted to drugs i hope you woudnt want your own to be addicted to the computer. To continue about your can allways about the computer it can make your sound like they have no life because they play it all day everday and I would hope you woudnt want your to be like this. Most importantly my final reason why you shoudnt let your child play the computer for more than a hour a day. Because they can get over weight. Your well only get up and go to the bathroom, and eat, they will only do stuff that is in the house. Your will not go out side and play and they wont get no exerse at all. I hope you will understand where I am coming from I have a brother that is offering in the hospital right computer too much and it messed and the doctor said he make it not so I am praying that he well make it out alive so I hope you woudnt let you do this it will mess up their life forever. Thank you so much for takeng you own Time to read this article I hope you would remember this article for your whole ontire life.
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Dear people read news paper like play computer day Than hour I think take time read article wonderful newspaper I writing article using computer hour My first reason computers issue makes pay attention school To support reason dont think making play computer alot makes think computer think school They play much mess focus school My second main reason makes allways want talk computer So play mare hour like said cause addicted like drug s like dont want addicted drugs hope woudnt want addicted computer To continue allways computer make sound like life play day everday I would hope woudnt want like Most importantly final reason shoudnt let child play computer hour day Because get weight Your well get go bathroom eat stuff house Your go side play wont get exerse I hope understand I coming I brother offering hospital right computer much messed doctor said make I praying well make alive I hope woudnt let mess life forever Thank much takeng Time read article I hope would remember article whole ontire life
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Dear, are many people who use computers this advanced technology we have. Lots of people life that we had computers they have lots of benefits that come with having computers. But not everyone agrees with this are many people who dont like that people use computers to much it takes away less time from enjoying nature, exerising, and interesting with family and friends. But I think on people with computer such as talking to people who you cant see, looking up information gives people something to do. One of the effects computers have on people is it allows you to talk to people you really dont see. I say this beacause not all your friends go to the same school so you dont see them as much. But they might have email, myspace, and facebook. Surf you cant online. It makes it easier to talk to them instad of driving so you can see them. I think that is are activities you have to do or other activities, they need to do The second effect computers has on people it allows you to look up information. Think of it have you to do a project and you dont always have enough information on what it is to do it. But if your computer it gives lots of you can find information. I think that computer can help you in that way the endless sites of information and of better. Also the might be times go on a trip and know how much it cost and how long its going to take to set to you destination. Well if you look it upon the computer it will be all their for you to see also where else will you find this information you call to questions when consist go to the website. The third effect computers have on people are it gives you something to do. I say this because not all the time will you me to do something to do. Sometimes you will be bored something to do go on computer. The things you can do like play games. Also watch videos on youtube. For example you funny keeps you laughin add on the computer you watch videos. Another thing you can do is download music to your do you ever have line that think of not busy so do it now. See these things you can go on the computer. To conclude I think that computers have lots of effects on people. These are about computer how people spend time on them. But I disagree is many good effects computers can have on people. I hope you agree with me. These are the three effects computers has on people allows you look up information, gives you something to do.
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Dear many people use computers advanced technology Lots people life computers lots benefits come computers But everyone agrees many people dont like people use computers much takes away less time enjoying nature exerising interesting family friends But I think people computer talking people cant see looking information gives people something One effects computers people allows talk people really dont see I say beacause friends go school dont see much But might email myspace facebook Surf cant online It makes easier talk instad driving see I think activities activities need The second effect computers people allows look information Think project dont always enough information But computer gives lots find information I think computer help way endless sites information better Also might times go trip know much cost long going take set destination Well look upon computer see also else find information call questions consist go website The third effect computers people gives something I say time something Sometimes bored something go computer The things like play games Also watch videos youtube For example funny keeps laughin add computer watch videos Another thing download music ever line think busy See things go computer To conclude I think computers lots effects people These computer people spend time But I disagree many good effects computers people I hope agree These three effects computers people allows look information gives something
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Dear, Newspaper I am writing to persuade to put article in the paper about how computers have bad benefits on people. Computers make you unhealthy, bullying takes place on the computer, and it effects how you do in school. First, computers have bad effects on people because it makes you unhealthy. I say this because most people don't get enough exercise. Then you get obese from not having enoughb exercise. Eventually you or not get diabetes from being obese, but most of the time you do. The next reason why lcomputer have bad effects is because kids get bullied on the internet. This is important because when kids get bullied the feel bad about themselves. Then they all get very depressed. This is called cyber bullying. One example is, is that a guy came to our school to talk about his son. his son had killed himself from being bullied on the internent and at school. That is why bullying is an important issue and computers have bad effects on people. My third and final reason why computer have bad effects on people is that kids do bad in school. they do bad in school because they spend so much time on the computer that they stop doing their homework and stop preparing for tests and quizzes. Also kids get distracted in school because all they think or care about is going home and going on the computer. Kids also do bad in school because they eventually think that school is a waste of time and drop out. It is a proven fact that of kids that have dropped out of school was kids that were always on the computer and they said that school was a waste of time. Thats how a computers have on effect on school. Now remember, computers have bad effects on people because it makes people unhealthy. People gets bullied, and it has on effect on your schoolwork. That is how computers have bad effects on people.
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Dear Newspaper I writing persuade put article paper computers bad benefits people Computers make unhealthy bullying takes place computer effects school First computers bad effects people makes unhealthy I say people nt get enough exercise Then get obese enoughb exercise Eventually get diabetes obese time The next reason lcomputer bad effects kids get bullied internet This important kids get bullied feel bad Then get depressed This called cyber bullying One example guy came school talk son son killed bullied internent school That bullying important issue computers bad effects people My third final reason computer bad effects people kids bad school bad school spend much time computer stop homework stop preparing tests quizzes Also kids get distracted school think care going home going computer Kids also bad school eventually think school waste time drop It proven fact kids dropped school kids always computer said school waste time Thats computers effect school Now remember computers bad effects people makes people unhealthy People gets bullied effect schoolwork That computers bad effects people
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Dear,newspaper I think that people should have computers I think that because kids play game to help them learn like math game or read and grown ups can go on websites and watch work out videos and they could pay there bills on the computer to and they dont have it in the store of kids need to do there homework computers are good for that buy thet also have bad stuff like kids say they are doing there homework but they are on youtube myspace or facebook. or other stuff but computers have more good stuff about them they bad things so that? Why I think we should have computers.
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Dear newspaper I think people computers I think kids play game help learn like math game read grown ups go websites watch work videos could pay bills computer dont store kids need homework computers good buy thet also bad stuff like kids say homework youtube myspace facebook stuff computers good stuff bad things Why I think computers
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Dear local Newspaper, Some people say computers have negative affects on family and friend others say computers are an important aspect of society. I would have to agree with the second group of people. Computers help students research information that they need for school. People can talk to there friends on things like facebook or and you can write a rough draft on the computer save it then go back to it and make the final changes from a draft to a final. I will elaborate in the following three paragraphs. Computers are a quick and easy way to look up information for a school project or paper. I can understand people thinking that computers take away from family time but so would a book. A book would probably take up more time and you get less information. For example the book could be about multiple people and you read the entire thing only to get two sentences of information. Another reason computer reasearch is quicker is that you can go from one page get some information and then once you have gotten all the information from that page but you still need more you can just click another link. If people didn't have computers they would have to go to the library and spend time looking them. Is it worth it to use all that time. People can talk to there friends on facebook or Some people say computers distract you from friends when really they help you talk to your friends more. What if your on vacation and your so tired of seeing and talking to your family because you've been with them non stop for a week and you miss your friends. All you have to do id turn on the computer and then you have an intent link to them. Chat rooms also help you meet other people your age from the next town over on enywhere in the country. They even became your new best friend. When you write a paper do you want to have to write it once then go back and write it more times? Theres a much simpler way it's called a computer. You can write your first draft then all you have to do inordre to get a final copy is reread it and make changes when they are nessecary. Computers also help kids spell better. All they have to do is hit a button.
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Dear local Newspaper Some people say computers negative affects family friend others say computers important aspect society I would agree second group people Computers help students research information need school People talk friends things like facebook write rough draft computer save go back make final changes draft final I elaborate following three paragraphs Computers quick easy way look information school project paper I understand people thinking computers take away family time would book A book would probably take time get less information For example book could multiple people read entire thing get two sentences information Another reason computer reasearch quicker go one page get information gotten information page still need click another link If people nt computers would go library spend time looking Is worth use time People talk friends facebook Some people say computers distract friends really help talk friends What vacation tired seeing talking family ve non stop week miss friends All id turn computer intent link Chat rooms also help meet people age next town enywhere country They even became new best friend When write paper want write go back write times Theres much simpler way s called computer You write first draft inordre get final copy reread make changes nessecary Computers also help kids spell better All hit button
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Dear Newspaper, you turn there is technology. It's not going to change. Try a schedule. Encouragment helps a lot of people. Activities keep you mind off things read on to find our more. Scheduleing is important. Limit the time on the computer. For every half hour at least minutes outside or with friends. try to memorize the schedule. Encouragement helps me and alot of people! Try to encourage family and friends, The goverment is also trying to fight this. Encouragement helps. Activities can keep people off the computer. Try neighborhood activities. After-school activities for a while. All kinds of stuff is fun. Do you think scheduling helps? Do you like encouragement? Do activities keep you mind off things? then by far this stuff helps.
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Dear Newspaper turn technology It s going change Try schedule Encouragment helps lot people Activities keep mind things read find Scheduleing important Limit time computer For every half hour least minutes outside friends try memorize schedule Encouragement helps alot people Try encourage family friends The goverment also trying fight Encouragement helps Activities keep people computer Try neighborhood activities Afterschool activities All kinds stuff fun Do think scheduling helps Do like encouragement Do activities keep mind things far stuff helps
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Dear you imagine a world where technology controls human interaction? Its not such a far fetched idea. Some people see this as a great advancement. Not me. I think that computers detach people from reality, create false personas, and has no physical benefit. This is what i think the computers effects have on people. First of all, Computers detach people from reality. Its a lot easier for someone to sit on the computer, browsing aimlessly on some social networking website, than go out and actually meet new people. Sure you send all the friend requests you want, but theres nothing that compares to a first impression that you get from meeting someone in person. The computer can also have an affect on family members and the time spent with them. Secondly, the computer creates false personas. If i had a facebook or account, it would be very easy to say something false about myself, or someone else. The computer dosn't know better. This allows people to gain, "friendships" with others that dont know the real you. I find this as a real problem because eventually lead to shaky or unsteady relationshops. Lastly, I think that the computer offers no physical gain, This nation is in a severe heath crisis. With things easier to get now a days like fast food, and drugs, I don't think that computers help. People need discipline and theres a time and place for everything, including computers. However those that aren't disciplined might use them more than they need to and that isn't good. So you imagine a world controlled by computers? I think that little by little, thats whats happening, slowly taking away the human element. I think the effects will be severe, detaching reality, creating false personas, and offering no physical gain. I don't think its right, but I hope I've persuaded you to think my way.
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Dear imagine world technology controls human interaction Its far fetched idea Some people see great advancement Not I think computers detach people reality create false personas physical benefit This think computers effects people First Computers detach people reality Its lot easier someone sit computer browsing aimlessly social networking website go actually meet new people Sure send friend requests want theres nothing compares first impression get meeting someone person The computer also affect family members time spent Secondly computer creates false personas If facebook account would easy say something false someone else The computer dos nt know better This allows people gain friendships others dont know real I find real problem eventually lead shaky unsteady relationshops Lastly I think computer offers physical gain This nation severe heath crisis With things easier get days like fast food drugs I nt think computers help People need discipline theres time place everything including computers However nt disciplined might use need nt good So imagine world controlled computers I think little little thats whats happening slowly taking away human element I think effects severe detaching reality creating false personas offering physical gain I nt think right I hope I ve persuaded think way
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Dear The I understand that you have some concerns about computers. I don't think you should be concerned though. You should not be concerned because computers are very posotive. They teach us hand-eye coordination, help teach you about faraway places and people, and finally you can talk online with familly and friends. First, computers teach you hand-eye coordination. There are thousands of fun games online that can help improve your reflexes and eyesight. This can help heal or improve some people reflexes by making their eyes more keen. Another thing amazing about computers is that you can learn about far away places and people. This is very helpful because if you want to travel somewhere far away but you can't, you just go to your computer and look it up. Then you feal like you are really there. It can also help you study about people that live far away and that you won't get to meat in person. Finally when you go on your computer you can go online and talk with your family and friends. There are all types of websites you can go on to talk and hang out with with all of your friends and family. The computer is very helpful because it keeps your family and friends together and happy. In conclusion I think computers are a great, fun, and helpful invention. Remember these good characteristics that computers have and please don't take computers away; we need them.
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Dear The I understand concerns computers I nt think concerned though You concerned computers posotive They teach us handeye coordination help teach faraway places people finally talk online familly friends First computers teach handeye coordination There thousands fun games online help improve reflexes eyesight This help heal improve people reflexes making eyes keen Another thing amazing computers learn far away places people This helpful want travel somewhere far away ca nt go computer look Then feal like really It also help study people live far away wo nt get meat person Finally go computer go online talk family friends There types websites go talk hang friends family The computer helpful keeps family friends together happy In conclusion I think computers great fun helpful invention Remember good characteristics computers please nt take computers away need
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How times do you use the computer in one day? A lot right? I think that computers definatly benefit society. The internet helps a lot of people, because its very conveniant computer give people. The computers also lets people talk online with other people. Computers help people because of the internet. The internet makes alot of peoples live easier. One way is for school. I know from my own experiences that the internet helps. If I dont have enough material to study, on the internet help. Another reason that the internet is helpful is for jobs. Did you know that of people the age of have jobs on the internet? The internet can also help people find jobs. The last reason that the internet is helpful is shopping, I remember a time when i needed a special book for school and no book store and no bookstore, my mum ordered it of fine, the internet is very helpul to many people. My that computers are beneficial to our society is that they people the ability to faraways places. many people cannot offerd to go to a lot of places outside the united state., With computers, people can team about there places and at of these places. Sometimes there is even a snow the experience of being there. Another reason that are using and want to learn more. Once, any family got to a wedding in but we didn't know much we went online to find things like. The foods eaten there and what the weather is like. lastly people can learn about where their family corner form. If people know the place that their ancestors came from, but they look it up crime computers. They confind recipes for food, what relign they practice, and what holidays they celebrate. Obuously computer help people about faraway places. My last reason that computers are beneficial to or society is that they allow people to talk with other people. Sometimes, good friends who wants to together loss touch or if one friend, people can find online and take. Did you know that their are many sites that tell you where people you went to highschool with are? Also, there are sites like facebook where people can connect. Another reason is that, people can meet other people online. their are many dating sites such as, that connect people losing that internet. Did you know that of people on dating, sites set ? Sometimes people cannot call each other because its too long distance. Being able to chat onlinee a sites like google, chat or all is very helpul. Without a dubt, computer are very helpful. I think that computer help many, people in our society. People use the internet to help them. People learn about other places and people ccan chat online. -@CAPS1, dont think body about computers, because they have impaced our society greatly!
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How times use computer one day A lot right I think computers definatly benefit society The internet helps lot people conveniant computer give people The computers also lets people talk online people Computers help people internet The internet makes alot peoples live easier One way school I know experiences internet helps If I dont enough material study internet help Another reason internet helpful jobs Did know people age jobs internet The internet also help people find jobs The last reason internet helpful shopping I remember time needed special book school book store bookstore mum ordered fine internet helpul many people My computers beneficial society people ability faraways places many people offerd go lot places outside united state With computers people team places places Sometimes even snow experience Another reason using want learn Once family got wedding nt know much went online find things like The foods eaten weather like lastly people learn family corner form If people know place ancestors came look crime computers They confind recipes food relign practice holidays celebrate Obuously computer help people faraway places My last reason computers beneficial society allow people talk people Sometimes good friends wants together loss touch one friend people find online take Did know many sites tell people went highschool Also sites like facebook people connect Another reason people meet people online many dating sites connect people losing internet Did know people dating sites set Sometimes people call long distance Being able chat onlinee sites like google chat helpul Without dubt computer helpful I think computer help many people society People use internet help People learn places people ccan chat online CAPS dont think body computers impaced society greatly
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Dear weekly, The new millenium brought a new wave of technology. Computers is the main invention that most likely everyone uses. The computers teach us great things such as learning about a vacation spot or a far off country. The computer allows us to talk to friends or family while they are away or even home. Also, typing on the computer teaches us hand eye coordination that can help us with other things. The computer is surely a great invention. Have you ever wanted to go on vacation to somewhere overseas? Well the computer is a great source for learning about these places. The effects it has could be significant. One day some one might want to go to the bahamas, but then finds a new location such as or even In addition the computer benefits students very well. Students usually have to do projects on places in the world and the computer is the main source of intelligence. When I have an essay to do I always use the computer first. Recently my grandmother moved down to and I can only talk to her on the phone. Although on my computer I can actually see her on my screen. The webcam allows me to see me grandma. The computer allows you to keep in touch with friends and family that you do not see on a regular bases. For example or twitter keeps you in touch with friends from high school. The computer can also send emails to friends and family so you can say hello every once in a while. Sports require a great deal of hand eye coordination. The computer makes you better at this. By looking at the screen while typing, gives you a boost on your hand-eye coordination because you are doing two things at once. A sport that requires a lot of this is While the ball is in the air you must focus on it while holding your stick at the correct position. Although hand-eye coordination is mainly taught through the powers of the computer. To conclude, all that I would like to say is that the computer is a great source for intellegence. It also allows you to keep in touch with high school friends and far away family. Finally, the computer teaches you hand-eye coordination. The computer is a very important piece of technology.
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Dear weekly The new millenium brought new wave technology Computers main invention likely everyone uses The computers teach us great things learning vacation spot far country The computer allows us talk friends family away even home Also typing computer teaches us hand eye coordination help us things The computer surely great invention Have ever wanted go vacation somewhere overseas Well computer great source learning places The effects could significant One day one might want go bahamas finds new location even In addition computer benefits students well Students usually projects places world computer main source intelligence When I essay I always use computer first Recently grandmother moved I talk phone Although computer I actually see screen The webcam allows see grandma The computer allows keep touch friends family see regular bases For example twitter keeps touch friends high school The computer also send emails friends family say hello every Sports require great deal hand eye coordination The computer makes better By looking screen typing gives boost handeye coordination two things A sport requires lot While ball air must focus holding stick correct position Although handeye coordination mainly taught powers computer To conclude I would like say computer great source intellegence It also allows keep touch high school friends far away family Finally computer teaches handeye coordination The computer important piece technology
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Dear you want our society to becaome one of obese, lazy with no appreciation for family or friends? you want people to lock a respect for nature? This is the result of excessive of computer usage our society will become lazy, and dependent upon robot slaves and loose, brain washed. People will not be caring for family or friends. Most importantly, our society will have no appreciacion or respect for mother nature. Is this the way you wish our world to be? Have you ever read In the book, the government uses technology to brainwash people and then manipulate them. If our society, like the one in the book, becomes over dependent on computers and technology, then we will collapse from the inside going from a respected world power, to a third world country in. We will need to redesign buildings to have doors big enough for our bodies to fit through. We will not be a respected nation anymore. There will be charities in other countries to send money to build gyms and pools, but nobody will use they. Recent research from says that of people who spend more than an hour and a half on their computer every day are over pounds. People won't remember how to talk. Babies will learn to type instead of talking or walking. Is this good for our country? People say that the best thing you could ever have is a supportive family and a group of good friends. According to a well known psychologist, "People who have more friends have a reduced risk of depression." Friends actually affect you health. People who use the computer too much lose friends and became separated from their families. The mental health effects from this can be horrible, and people sadly will miss out on all the positive parts of life. It's important that people are happy, but if you onlr communicate through e-mail and social networking sites, you aren't social enbough. It is one thing to chat online, but it is better to be able to see someone face to face than a picture on screen. Nobody wants to end up like this, so limit oyur computer usage. With too much computer usage comes a lack of respect for nature, People used to care nature for many reasons, but the biggest is that it affects us everyday, in everything we and own. Everything has a base in nature, even ourselves. The weather outside even on a beautiful day, can be deadly if we don't pay attention to what is going on outside of our safe house. We depend on nature but if we don't respect her, she will kill us. Anything is good in moderation, even a computer. But when we don't limit ourselves, it has bad consequences. We will no longer have a respected society. Our family and friends will dissapear, causing health problems. Worst of all, we will lose all expectation and respect for mother nature. The time to start limiting computer usage is now, or we will have many great problems.
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Dear want society becaome one obese lazy appreciation family friends want people lock respect nature This result excessive computer usage society become lazy dependent upon robot slaves loose brain washed People caring family friends Most importantly society appreciacion respect mother nature Is way wish world Have ever read In book government uses technology brainwash people manipulate If society like one book becomes dependent computers technology collapse inside going respected world power third world country We need redesign buildings doors big enough bodies fit We respected nation anymore There charities countries send money build gyms pools nobody use Recent research says people spend hour half computer every day pounds People wo nt remember talk Babies learn type instead talking walking Is good country People say best thing could ever supportive family group good friends According well known psychologist People friends reduced risk depression Friends actually affect health People use computer much lose friends became separated families The mental health effects horrible people sadly miss positive parts life It s important people happy onlr communicate email social networking sites nt social enbough It one thing chat online better able see someone face face picture screen Nobody wants end like limit oyur computer usage With much computer usage comes lack respect nature People used care nature many reasons biggest affects us everyday everything Everything base nature even The weather outside even beautiful day deadly nt pay attention going outside safe house We depend nature nt respect kill us Anything good moderation even computer But nt limit bad consequences We longer respected society Our family friends dissapear causing health problems Worst lose expectation respect mother nature The time start limiting computer usage many great problems
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Dear, idea about "Computers" is very well thought outside of the box.Well. We sure need computer to look up information these days. Why do we need them now and it dident existed before? Reseach shows over of says computer is everything. Let me explain a little bit further to you what I mean. First, you can look up places, chat with friends and family. oppinion about using the local internet would be that it's good only for those who knows and not trying to be mean. For little world neve should get to bed at least pm, and never to forget about nature outside of fresh air. In conclusion, internet these days are very good for people.
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Dear idea Computers well thought outside boxWell We sure need computer look information days Why need dident existed Reseach shows says computer everything Let explain little bit I mean First look places chat friends family oppinion using local internet would s good knows trying mean For little world neve get bed least pm never forget nature outside fresh air In conclusion internet days good people
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I think the use of computers is very good things in the present day I think this because people use it to research, stay in touch with friends and family, and music. These are all things adults and kids need a like to do. read on and I will explain why this is so important. My first reason why I think computers are good thing is because the are a good source to do research on a specific topic. Kids all over the use the internet to do class projects. Adults can use the computer to look up a certain food resipe. If you need help with something the computer is allways there. Some people even use the computer for a job. Computers can help with a lot of things. Another reason why computers are a big help because you can stay in touch with friends and family. A great thing to use on a computer is a web cam. With this you can see and talk to people on a lillte camray even if they are far away. You can also go on myspace of face book. Theare two websites that are used to post pictures and to talk to chosen friend. It is a good way for people to get to know you. A similar thing to this is instant messaging. You can use this to talk to friends and many on line. Don't stop reading there is more thing! My last reason why computer are sutch a great thing to have is because you can do do mutch with music on the computer. You can use the computer to listen to music, and put music on to and ipod or player. Some people use the computer to make music. You can get a progrem that you can make heats and put it together to make some kind of a song. music is a great thing that all age groups love. That is why I think haveing a computer is a very positive thing. You can do researching, say in touch with friends and family, and do a lot with music. There is so mutch more then thease thing that a computer is good for. I don't think the world would be the same without computers.
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I think use computers good things present day I think people use research stay touch friends family music These things adults kids need like read I explain important My first reason I think computers good thing good source research specific topic Kids use internet class projects Adults use computer look certain food resipe If need help something computer allways Some people even use computer job Computers help lot things Another reason computers big help stay touch friends family A great thing use computer web cam With see talk people lillte camray even far away You also go myspace face book Theare two websites used post pictures talk chosen friend It good way people get know A similar thing instant messaging You use talk friends many line Do nt stop reading thing My last reason computer sutch great thing mutch music computer You use computer listen music put music ipod player Some people use computer make music You get progrem make heats put together make kind song music great thing age groups love That I think haveing computer positive thing You researching say touch friends family lot music There mutch thease thing computer good I nt think world would without computers
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Dear newspaper, I know that computers can place a person in its spell, but in reality it's one of the most necesary things we need in our lifetime. Computers are used for many things like school work, planning that trip you always wanted to go to, and reading the latest news. Read the following to know just how important computers really are. You know now when you have that project due for science class about protoplasms. You want to do as you can so you have that at. When you realize that the one book you find on it wont help you with the score you want you realize that the nextplace to look is the computer. The computer gives you an unlimited amount of information that will help you in any report. When a teacher gives you a book to do a biography on, for example, "The life and times: You want to go beyond what they give you and search, for instances, his neighborhood, his inspiration, and the influences he had. You will find all this in the computer. When you see a sale on a "five nights and four days" trip to you want to know what better sale they have. When you start to notice that your family needs a vacation what is the only place to look. You can'@CAPS3 look for that trip of a lifetime in a book. Sure you can find out that is having that big blowout sale, but you cant search up the best deal. I've done a research with seven of my friends and that six of those seven parents have deal on a trip to on their accounts. If you're a great fan of road trips you'll find a deal or for the lowest only find out by computer. If you live in and you want to have a trip to the this deal is really good. If you live in the and you know the hottest day in the is coming you will be ready to get those beach balls and that blanket ready, but if you think computers are a waste of time then you wont know that all the beaches open and will be sending free drinks all day. You will be at home eating a watching old reruns of The Not only will it tell you news in your erea, but will tell you about that devastating earthquake in You'll also be informed about what people are doing to help them and what you can do to help. So not only is the computer good for going on and you can help get your grade to an A+ on that history report. It also works well for giving your children a memory they will always remember. They also help you to get ready and not be stock in your house on that nice day in Maybe if you find that great deal or help your kid get a better grade then you will realize how good the computer is.
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Dear newspaper I know computers place person spell reality s one necesary things need lifetime Computers used many things like school work planning trip always wanted go reading latest news Read following know important computers really You know project due science class protoplasms You want When realize one book find wont help score want realize nextplace look computer The computer gives unlimited amount information help report When teacher gives book biography example The life times You want go beyond give search instances neighborhood inspiration influences You find computer When see sale five nights four days trip want know better sale When start notice family needs vacation place look You CAPS look trip lifetime book Sure find big blowout sale cant search best deal I ve done research seven friends six seven parents deal trip accounts If re great fan road trips ll find deal lowest find computer If live want trip deal really good If live know hottest day coming ready get beach balls blanket ready think computers waste time wont know beaches open sending free drinks day You home eating watching old reruns The Not tell news erea tell devastating earthquake You ll also informed people help help So computer good going help get grade A history report It also works well giving children memory always remember They also help get ready stock house nice day Maybe find great deal help kid get better grade realize good computer
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Dear Local Newspaper show that of humans in the alone spend most of their time on a computer or laptop. I believe that the effect of computers has a negative effect on humans because it creates people to have a lack in exercise and it limits the physical interaction with others. As a nation, we can lower the statistic above and create a better environment altogether. The amount of people that lack a sufficient quantity of exercise has risen in the past decade. Doctor who is expert in the connections between health and computers, surveyed people. Out of those people, said they rarely go outside because theu are trapped in the cyber world. This shocking percent proves that only one in twenty people actually get some tyoe of exercise. stated, "this shocking means that most -if not all- all people are unhealthy physically, which is a problem that must be solved." goes on to say that being on a computer for most of the day and not exercising is what contributes ti unhealthiness. In addition to lacking exercise, many humans are losing the physical interaction that they should have. As humans have become, modernized with technology, most humans lose the physical interaction that they world normally have encountered if they we not on the computer. agreed with this statement and said, " I am a college greaduate; I have a degree and all, but I wasn't always like this. When I was younger, I owned a computer. As soon as I got home from school, I would always go on the computer. I wouldn't talk to anyone-not even my family! If I could go back and change that, I would." This statement proves that the lack of physical interaction with human is a crucial subject to touch on. regreted it all and changed his ways once got to high school. No one wants to live with regrets, so physical human interactions are necessary to live a non-regretful life. the lack of human interaction and lack of exercise are problems that need to be solved as soon as possible. In conclusion, using computers has started a growing epidemin in the The most important reasons as to why computers have anegative effect on humans are it limits the amount of exercise, and it almost destroys the physical interactions between humans. Thank you for your attention, and remeber one thing: Computers can always have a negative effect on many humans lives.
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Dear Local Newspaper show humans alone spend time computer laptop I believe effect computers negative effect humans creates people lack exercise limits physical interaction others As nation lower statistic create better environment altogether The amount people lack sufficient quantity exercise risen past decade Doctor expert connections health computers surveyed people Out people said rarely go outside theu trapped cyber world This shocking percent proves one twenty people actually get tyoe exercise stated shocking means if all people unhealthy physically problem must solved goes say computer day exercising contributes ti unhealthiness In addition lacking exercise many humans losing physical interaction As humans become modernized technology humans lose physical interaction world normally encountered computer agreed statement said I college greaduate I degree I nt always like When I younger I owned computer As soon I got home school I would always go computer I would nt talk anyonenot even family If I could go back change I would This statement proves lack physical interaction human crucial subject touch regreted changed ways got high school No one wants live regrets physical human interactions necessary live nonregretful life lack human interaction lack exercise problems need solved soon possible In conclusion using computers started growing epidemin The important reasons computers anegative effect humans limits amount exercise almost destroys physical interactions humans Thank attention remeber one thing Computers always negative effect many humans lives
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click, clack that the sound computer keys being hit right now. Computers are everywhere these days, even in the poorest places like In Dreadful, humble, time conservative computers are taking away the meaning and enjoyments life that are offered to us. Computers are our sourse infromation, and time liesure these days, but we are fogetting that there is a life away from them as well such as having family time, and taking walks in the beautiful, nature. To much use a computer is leading to aweful health. Computers can cause many fatal problems such as seeing and vision problems, and obisity, due to the fact that you sit all day and work out. Computers are like mind, and body eaters the slowly take away from you and let you cry, and weap the rest your life, you agree? Do you know the says that the second biggest leading cause obisity is computer? Yes that is true! I have experinced problem. While growing up. When I was I was adictied to the computer. Day and night my eyes were guled to the computer screen. I had nothing on my mind except computer, my mom got mad at me and yelled at me to get away from it, but I didn't. Slowly, slowly I started to put on heavy, awful faton myself, and later I found out I was over weight my age. To this day I have not lost the weight I put on from using the computer, and I am sure others are to. Obesity just doesn't happen from eating to much. It also happens from not doing any cardio activities, which the computer stps us from doing. So basically the computer is unhealth. As said by people from the state Time consuming computers, are taking away family time from many family these days. Do you know that families aren't getting to spend the time with each other as the wish, reason being computers? Kids are on the computer playing games, moms finding a resipe online to make dinner, and dad is buying another stock online. Yes that happens a lot, insded doing those things they could be doing something else, but no computer work is more important. My family used to spend a lot time together, but because the computer I never get to do anything with my family now. Do you know the time health say kids who spend time with their family are bound to become more better parents than who spend time with family. I bet you are a really good family man/women and spend time with please take these computers away and make families come together once again. has the most beautiful nature ever, the birds, the animals, the times and the fall time. If anyone ever wants to see nature they should come to but the sad thing is that the people aren't appriating nature themselves because they are do busy with things such as computers. I know one time we went to a comp out, and we were ready nature and this boy brings his computer, and wouldn't you know it the whole got people forgot about nature and played with the boys computer. So many people missed out on the nature and the beautiful animals seen one the such as yellow through that time was amazing and it is very unfortunet that many people missed out on that event. People these days are once again not apricating nature, which one day they will regret, because the fact the one day you not be around to enjoy this got given let the computer tell you what to do lets be the boss and ourself. It is now or never the decision is in your hand, make the right decision and say no to computers. Go out their enjoy nature, spend time with you family, and get healthy. Be the smart, and well educated people. (I know you are) and tell the world to not getting told by the computer what you can, and cant do, be the boss control. Yes computers are fun, giving, but is bad. Say no to computers if you you will regret it.
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click clack sound computer keys hit right Computers everywhere days even poorest places like In Dreadful humble time conservative computers taking away meaning enjoyments life offered us Computers sourse infromation time liesure days fogetting life away well family time taking walks beautiful nature To much use computer leading aweful health Computers cause many fatal problems seeing vision problems obisity due fact sit day work Computers like mind body eaters slowly take away let cry weap rest life agree Do know says second biggest leading cause obisity computer Yes true I experinced problem While growing When I I adictied computer Day night eyes guled computer screen I nothing mind except computer mom got mad yelled get away I nt Slowly slowly I started put heavy awful faton later I found I weight age To day I lost weight I put using computer I sure others Obesity nt happen eating much It also happens cardio activities computer stps us So basically computer unhealth As said people state Time consuming computers taking away family time many family days Do know families nt getting spend time wish reason computers Kids computer playing games moms finding resipe online make dinner dad buying another stock online Yes happens lot insded things could something else computer work important My family used spend lot time together computer I never get anything family Do know time health say kids spend time family bound become better parents spend time family I bet really good family manwomen spend time please take computers away make families come together beautiful nature ever birds animals times fall time If anyone ever wants see nature come sad thing people nt appriating nature busy things computers I know one time went comp ready nature boy brings computer would nt know whole got people forgot nature played boys computer So many people missed nature beautiful animals seen one yellow time amazing unfortunet many people missed event People days apricating nature one day regret fact one day around enjoy got given let computer tell lets boss ourself It never decision hand make right decision say computers Go enjoy nature spend time family get healthy Be smart well educated people I know tell world getting told computer cant boss control Yes computers fun giving bad Say computers regret
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Dear Readers of has been borught to my attention that there is dilema on the effect of computers on people. Well I believe that having computers around are good because. Computers help students do there school work better. They also give the ability to learn about far away places. Lastly, computers allow people to talk to othe people online or webcam. My first reason I believe computers are good to have around is. They help students do there school work. Sometimes teachers give assignments out and you have to write an essay. the student does on a computer they might get a higher grade because looks neater and more proffestional. Computers especially help out college students. A college university took poll one time. of student wouldn't know what to do they didn't have there computer or laptop. One student even said "@CAPS2 I didn't have my laptop I would probably fail most of my classes." Computers can be very helpful when comes to student school work. My second reason that I believe computers are good to have around is. They give the ability to learn about far away places or other coutries. I took a poll one time of how many people use a computer to find out whats going on in other countries, of them said they go on the computer to find out what's going on in another countries. Computers can be very handy when you want to know whats going on in other countries. My last reason why computers are good to have around is. Say you married and you are pregnant unless your guy of course, but your spouse is in and you couldn't them. Well computers these days have webcams. So now you really need to talk to him or her you can by using webcam. So readers of the Can you see now why I believe that having computers around is good. helps students do there school work. gives the ability to learn about far away places and countries. also gives the change to talk to people with webcams.
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Dear Readers borught attention dilema effect computers people Well I believe computers around good Computers help students school work better They also give ability learn far away places Lastly computers allow people talk othe people online webcam My first reason I believe computers good around They help students school work Sometimes teachers give assignments write essay student computer might get higher grade looks neater proffestional Computers especially help college students A college university took poll one time student would nt know nt computer laptop One student even said CAPS I nt laptop I would probably fail classes Computers helpful comes student school work My second reason I believe computers good around They give ability learn far away places coutries I took poll one time many people use computer find whats going countries said go computer find s going another countries Computers handy want know whats going countries My last reason computers good around Say married pregnant unless guy course spouse could nt Well computers days webcams So really need talk using webcam So readers Can see I believe computers around good helps students school work gives ability learn far away places countries also gives change talk people webcams
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