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conll	6	Genetic risk does carry its consequences and should not be taken lightly within the family circle . Afterall , what affects one family may or may not affect another although the families has a common genetic make up , shared by either of the parents . In cases where an individual has gotten to know of a genetic disorde...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 5, "start": 4, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "After all", "end": 18, "start": 17, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "member", "end": 23, "start": 23, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": "even", "end": 29, "start": 29...
conll	8	Sometimes some family structure and cultural beliefs can influence the pattern of communication . Depending on whom the genetic risk was discovered from : the son or daughter for example , the parents who knows about this would decide who gets told and whom takes the precedence in being ' allowed ' to tell . For exampl...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 2, "start": 1, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "structures", "end": 4, "start": 3, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "who", "end": 17, "start": 16, "type": "PRON" }, { "correction": "in", "end": 23, "start": 22, ...
conll	9	The notion of authority also extended ' vertically ' . For example , a grandmother may have more authority to pass on information than an aunt , even when she is not at genetic risk herself while the aunt is . From a practitioner 's perspective these findings are important because if lay constructs of the family and ki...	[ { "correction": "extends", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "if", "end": 29, "start": 28, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "and", "end": 37, "start": 36, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "", "end": 61, "start": ...
conll	12	Focus on the negative side of the annouance of genetic risk first . Large numbers of patients with the genetic risk would want to keep it as a secret as the genetic risk may indicates their high chance to carry certain disease . Especially for the young people without marrige , if he / she is known to have some genetic...	[ { "correction": "Focusing", "end": 1, "start": 0, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": "announcing", "end": 9, "start": 6, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "risks", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": ", large", "end":...
conll	16	We ca n't make a law to push a carrier of a known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives about his genetic problem . It is immoral and impractical . Firstly , someone having what kinds of disease belongs to his or her privacy . Privicy protection belongs to one 's human rights . If a law requires someone to tell oth...	[ { "correction": "which", "end": 7, "start": 6, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "pushes", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "VERB:SVA" }, { "correction": "with", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "", "end": 18, "start": 17...
conll	17	However , from the ethical point of view . To the carrier himself of herself , he of she should have a feeling of resposiblity to tell his or her relatives their genetic disorder . By doing this , they may be able to save some lives of their relatives . It is because a carrier with bad gene may not necessary have those...	[ { "correction": "an", "end": 4, "start": 3, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "", "end": 10, "start": 8, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "", "end": 19, "start": 12, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "feel", "end": 21, "start": 20, "type"...
conll	65	As it is a genetic risk , the patient next - of - skin might have a high chance of carrying the risk , hence the need to inform their relatives is important so that necessary prevention actions could be taken before unforeseen circumstances might occur . For example , if you are the only child in a family and unfortuna...	[ { "correction": "'s", "end": 9, "start": 9, "type": "NOUN:POSS" }, { "correction": "kin", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": "will", "end": 15, "start": 14, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "", "end": 27, "start": ...
conll	89	Furthermore , you are also being responsible for your next generations by telling the truth that you are a carrier of a genetic risk . If your wife is not aware of the truth and give birth to the baby , it will be possible for your child to carry the same genetic risk as well . Being the parent , you are not responsibl...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "telling", "end": 8, "start": 8, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "", "end": 13, "start": 11, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 19, "start": 18, "ty...
conll	95	Personally I feel that we still should take our responsibility to tell them the situation . Since this will really affect their lives , what we should do is to try to make it in a positive way . We can not let it go . We should know that although we may affect their lives , we can still let them make correct choices in...	[ { "correction": "should still", "end": 7, "start": 5, "type": "WO" }, { "correction": "it as", "end": 8, "start": 8, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "about", "end": 13, "start": 13, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "since", "end": 17, "star...
conll	102	Firstly , the information concerning to the genetic is something personally which is also a privacy like people 's bank card key . Other people should not be told without the person 's permission even though they are his or her family or relatives . The government should set the law to protect this kind of privacy . On...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 3, "start": 2, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "", "end": 7, "start": 5, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "genetics", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "personal", "end": 11, "start": 10, ...
conll	115	People may feel angry , depressed , or even guilty about their results . In some cases , a carrier can suffer tension within a family because the result is also related to the others ' risk somehow . However , I believe it is just a usual reaction to this situation . In addition , though it can be possible in some case...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 19, "start": 18, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "carriers", "end": 20, "start": 19, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "from", "end": 22, "start": 22, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "results", "end": 29, "star...
conll	133	Secondly , although social network takes time for people to chat online but not face to face , they may still decide a time online to meet others face to face in the daily life . In this case , the social network helps people to increase the frequency of talk . For example , if social network does not exist , the busin...	[ { "correction": "networks", "end": 5, "start": 4, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "make", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "amount", "end": 49, "start": 48, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": "they", "end": 50, "star...
conll	134	The social network may also creat some negative impacts for the people . The largest negative impact is that due to the online network , some people start to use and rely on internet every minute . They take too much time of using online social network and thus do not have time to have their daily meeting with people i...	[ { "correction": "Social", "end": 2, "start": 0, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "networks", "end": 3, "start": 2, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "create", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "on", "end": 10, "start"...
conll	167	First , with the function of social media sites that connects the people , everyone is able to interact and communicate with friends and families , or even strangers without any time and place constraints . Through the social media sites , we can chat with our friends who stay in Europe and New Zealand . There are over...	[ { "correction": "Firstly", "end": 1, "start": 0, "type": "MORPH" }, { "correction": "being to", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "connect", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "VERB:SVA" }, { "correction": "", "end": 12, "s...
conll	200	Twitter , Facebook and Skype are some social media sites which enable us to keep in touch with our friends or family who are in other cities or countries . Through those sites we are able to talk to them , to know what their activities are and who their friends are , etc . From the surface point of view it is no doubt ...	[ { "correction": "of the", "end": 7, "start": 7, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "", "end": 19, "start": 18, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "these", "end": 32, "start": 31, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "a", "end": 57, "start": 56, "...
conll	209	Social media has reshaped the way of communication . In real life , we communicate with one another as equal participants . We share ideas , stories and forge friendship based on mutual respect . However , communication on social media is largely based on " broadcasting and listening " . When we use facebook and post p...	[ { "correction": "we", "end": 7, "start": 6, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "communicate", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "MORPH" }, { "correction": "friendships", "end": 30, "start": 29, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "we", "end": 62, ...
conll	210	The broadcasting and viewing model is not good for forging relationships . However , it is good for sharing information . On social media , everyone is a broadcaster and a viewer . With my social network account , I seldom read newspapers or go to news websites anymore ; because I can easily read them from the status o...	[ { "correction": ", however", "end": 13, "start": 11, "type": "PUNCT:LONG" }, { "correction": "Because", "end": 33, "start": 33, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "of", "end": 34, "start": 33, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "", "end": 51, "st...
conll	215	Social media enables people from different parts of the world to communicate with one another . People used to write letters and send post cards to keep in touch with ones live far away from them in the past . It can take a few days or weeks for those to receive the messages . Nowadays , what people need to do is just ...	[ { "correction": "people who", "end": 31, "start": 30, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "lived", "end": 32, "start": 31, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "would", "end": 42, "start": 41, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "messages", "...
conll	226	Firstly of all , social media can make it more convenient for people to make friends and contact each other . Years ago when these modern products have not been popular , the way for people to communicate or contact people far way are still restricted in making phone calls , sending emails or writing letters . Some wil...	[ { "correction": "First", "end": 1, "start": 0, "type": "MORPH" }, { "correction": "makes", "end": 8, "start": 6, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "were", "end": 28, "start": 27, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "", "end": 30, "start": 2...
conll	227	However , social media may do some harm to people 's life . It will make people spend more time on chatting on the internet rather than communicate face to face such that the interpersonal skill will be badly affected . Some people spend a lot of time in it and forget their real life . Actually , I have seen some peopl...	[ { "correction": "lives", "end": 12, "start": 11, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "People", "end": 17, "start": 13, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "might", "end": 17, "start": 17, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "", "end": 21, ...
conll	228	In conclusion , the showing up of social media sites is a double edged sword . It can make our life simpler . People can promote their friendship and relationship through these social media . Whereas , it can also make people forget to communicate to their family and friends in the real life and affect negatively to th...	[ { "correction": "emergence", "end": 6, "start": 4, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "They", "end": 17, "start": 16, "type": "PRON" }, { "correction": "lives", "end": 21, "start": 20, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "friendships", "end": 28,...
conll	248	First and foremost , we should realize that social media world is not trustworthy and real . Everyone can easily make up the personality and characteristics they want . They can become anyone . Though social media do create relationships , relationships and friendships are only firm and real if people have gone through...	[ { "correction": "the", "end": 8, "start": 8, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "or", "end": 15, "start": 14, "type": "CONJ" }, { "correction": "could", "end": 19, "start": 18, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "; they", "end": 30, "start":...
bea	4	My favourite sport is volleyball because I love plays with my friends . Volleyball is a sport play every place , when I travel on the beach I like plays with my sister in the sand and after we are going to the sea . It is very funny . when I was young I like plays with the ball in the playground and my friend and I pla...	[ { "correction": "playing", "end": 9, "start": 8, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": "that", "end": 17, "start": 17, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "is played", "end": 18, "start": 17, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "everywhere", "end...
bea	7	In my opinion I think that public transport in future is going to continue to be used because there are a lot of people that does n't have enough money to pay for a car even if it is used , so public transport continue to have future but people are going to use more the cars then bus or underground . If we think about ...	[ { "correction": ",", "end": 6, "start": 3, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "", "end": 10, "start": 8, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "in the future", "end": 17, "start": 17, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "do", "end": 26, "start": 25...
bea	11	Public transportation is an important invention in human history , it brings amount of benefits in our life . For instance , we take subway in order to avoid stocking in traffic . It is true that moving by car is more convenient than take public transportation , however , it would cause more damage to our life and harm...	[ { "correction": ". It", "end": 11, "start": 9, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "a number", "end": 13, "start": 12, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 24, "start": 24, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "being stuck", "end": 30, "...
bea	13	The pleasure of traveling People go , people come . Every day lots of people are travelling abroad but , what 's the best way to do an international travel ? The most important option to travel is , by far , the plane . But , even when it 's true that it 's the faster option , you must be very carefuly at time to get o...	[ { "correction": "trip", "end": 30, "start": 29, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": "for", "end": 36, "start": 35, "type": "PART" }, { "correction": "if", "end": 49, "start": 48, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "fastest", "end": 57, "start": 5...
bea	15	In modern societies , there are lots of friends around our daily lives . Big project could not be finished without co - operations . Friends could be communicated and exchanged the ideas , feelings and funny things happened around ourselves . More importantly , the parents give our lives and they touch us knowledge and...	[ { "correction": "in", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "projects", "end": 16, "start": 15, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "cooperation", "end": 24, "start": 21, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": "can communicate", "en...
bea	25	Everybody has his favourite sport . My favourite sport is football game . On our school or villiage football stadium i spend a lot of time every day . Usually i play football with my classmates . Before training i ran 1 - 2 kilometres and my legs get a power and my body gets an energy . Our team has a hard - working co...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 12, "start": 11, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": "At", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "village", "end": 18, "start": 17, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "I", "end": 21, "start": 20, ...
bea	27	Dear Paul , I have seen your notice in the academy newspaper and I 'm quite interested . I have no plans for this summer so I think it is a good idea to spend it . I was born in the UK so I can be a very good teacher of English . Although I came to Spain ten years later so I can speak with them in Spanish if it was nec...	[ { "correction": "advertisement", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 25, "start": 25, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 43, "start": 43, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "could", "end": 46, "start"...
bea	28	In my opinion public transport wo n't be suffered by the shortage in demand . Because not everyone afford to buy their own car . Besides there are lots of low income people who ca n't buy their own car . So I think public transport 's future is bright .	[ { "correction": ",", "end": 3, "start": 3, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "suffer", "end": 9, "start": 7, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "from", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "a", "end": 11, "start": 10, ...
bea	32	When I was a child , I had a lot friends and they were very important for me . We ever played in the park or we talked about our tastes , music , boys , we laugh a lot of ... But when I was a teenager I began to live situations that I did not like it , for instance , the girls said to me bad things or they talked bad a...	[ { "correction": "to", "end": 17, "start": 16, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "always", "end": 21, "start": 20, "type": "ADV" }, { "correction": "laughed", "end": 38, "start": 37, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 48, "start...
bea	39	Hello Alex , how are you . Are you free for weckend , have you any plans . Me and my friends go to the cinema , and I invite you to go with us . If you are interesedt , find me at 8 clock near the cinema entrance .	[ { "correction": "?", "end": 7, "start": 6, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "at", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 11, "start": 11, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "weekend", "end": 12, "start": 11, ...
bea	45	Run for your life My favourite sport is run . I like to running fast so fast in fact that it feel me as if I run on air and the feet do not hardly touch the ground between the strides . My favourite place to run is in the forest but I like to run sportive too . I am likeing to feel the ground under my feet is soft so s...	[ { "correction": "running", "end": 9, "start": 8, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": "run", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 15, "start": 15, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "feels", "end": 22, "s...
bea	55	Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake . He was at Sarah 's house when suddenly he left all the bathroom dirty and went to his house . so he went back to Sarah 's house and clean all the bathroom , but Sarah already knew that he left the bathroom like this so before Michael entered to the...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 26, "start": 25, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "So", "end": 36, "start": 35, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "cleaned", "end": 45, "start": 44, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "", "end": 46, "start": 45, ...
bea	61	we think that in the future the planet will be in bad conditions and the trees will be dissappearing , after that we will be having wars . In 30 years we will have changed our anatomy , also we will be eating fast food , on the other hand , the north pole will have melted totally . The temperature will have become craz...	[ { "correction": "We", "end": 1, "start": 0, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "a", "end": 11, "start": 11, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "condition", "end": 13, "start": 12, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "disappear", "end": 19, "star...
bea	63	Good day , My name is Fouad and I would like to talk about my favorite sport , Volleyball one of the most beautiful sports ever and I used to practise this sport 3 times a week since 1980 , the reasons for my enjoyment with this sport are as follows : 1- make me fit and healthy 2- classy game no friction between player...	[ { "correction": "Hello", "end": 2, "start": 0, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "volleyball", "end": 19, "start": 18, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 19, "start": 19, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "have", "end": 29, "start"...
bea	64	As citizens of village , we totally care about environment of our village . Every sunday , we do a mutual cooporation where anyone can treat rubbish as good as they treat themselves . We clean the dirty ditch , sweep rubbish then we bury rubbish . Whilst , we recyling inorganic rubbish too . From inorganic , we can mak...	[ { "correction": "this", "end": 3, "start": 3, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "really", "end": 7, "start": 6, "type": "ADV" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 9, "start": 9, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "Sunday", "end": 16, "start": 15, ...
bea	66	Transportation is the heart of any city whether it is public or private . Nowadays people prefer own vehicles rather than public transportation . day by day folk are more crazy about own vehicles which leads dark future of public transportation firstly . i agree with given statement that there would be tough time for p...	[ { "correction": ",", "end": 7, "start": 7, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "their", "end": 17, "start": 17, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "Day", "end": 25, "start": 24, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "their", "end": 32, "start": 32, ...
bea	67	I go for a walk to a park every day with my lovely two Corgi dogs . I met many people in the park . I never thought about , people got so many pet . In the peak time in the park is very busy even thought the park is huge ! Some people are very friendly the same as their dog . But some people are very rude and their dog...	[ { "correction": "two lovely", "end": 14, "start": 12, "type": "WO" }, { "correction": "meet", "end": 19, "start": 18, "type": "VERB:TENSE:LONG" }, { "correction": "it before", "end": 29, "start": 29, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": ". People", "...
bea	72	Last year , My friend Michael was at school when he heard about a short story competition , he liked the idea so he decided to enter the competition . but there was a fees in order to join the competition , he had no money . fortunately he have a lot of friends they can lent him . he phoned me and asked me to lent him ...	[ { "correction": "my", "end": 4, "start": 3, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": ". He", "end": 19, "start": 17, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 22, "start": 22, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "fee", "end": 35, "start": 34, ...
bea	75	All around the world pupils are waiting for finishing school . They are eager to begin a new life as adults . But when they reach in - between period , confused feelings cross their minds . As a rule after last exams they do n't know what university to choose . What they will do in future they see , like in a fogg . In...	[ { "correction": "to", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "PART" }, { "correction": "finish", "end": 9, "start": 8, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 26, "start": 26, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 40, "start": 40, ...
bea	78	Peter looked at his watch and knew that he had to do something immediately , after listening conversations of his new neighbours . They are planning to rob a very precious thing from Museum tonight . He does n't have much time to prove their plan and he could not wait to let it happen . It is his town and it is his dut...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 15, "start": 14, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "to the", "end": 17, "start": 17, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "were", "end": 25, "start": 24, "type": "VERB:TENSE:LONG" }, { "correction": "steal", "end": 28, ...
bea	79	I am beleving that there is no future for the public transpot , using trains is mor convient and low expenses also to decrease the carpon gases which affecting the ozone , people should be aware about the effect of using the public transpotation on the econmics and enviroment , goverements shall encarge the people to u...	[ { "correction": "believe", "end": 3, "start": 1, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "transport", "end": 12, "start": 11, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "more", "end": 17, "start": 1...
bea	82	I was , last month , in a fantastic restaurant , Woolypools . It is small but comfortable and famous for his big burguers . Woolypools is a speciallist of meal , it 's a meal restaurant . In my opinion the restaurant can be better , respect to meat , but it is perfect to have dinner with your friends . I have expects t...	[ { "correction": "Last month", "end": 0, "start": 0, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "at", "end": 7, "start": 2, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "its", "end": 22, "start": 21, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "burgers", "end": 24, "start":...
bea	84	In my town we create a small organization for more healthy environment , beauty touch and to be attractive . the citizens in the town must participate in this , the citizen will take the responsibility for specific day to clean the town and put the rubbish into correct place and clean tree and plant more of it .	[ { "correction": "have created", "end": 5, "start": 4, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "a", "end": 9, "start": 9, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "The", "end": 21, "start": 20, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "of", "end": 23, "start":...
bea	85	I 'm agree with the opinion that the famous people , such as politicians and film stars deserve to have a private life without journalists following them all the time . is horrible have a person behind you all the time , you not have a life , not peace , not a happy . In adition all pearsons have the right to privacy a...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 2, "start": 1, "type": "CONTR" }, { "correction": "", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 17, "start": 17, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "It", "end": 31, "start": 31, "type": "P...
bea	87	Once upon a time was one little ant called Penny , he was really small in compared with the others . He hated to be like that because most of the ants made fun of him until one day something horrible and inevitable happen . It was a dark night it was raining until a big active volcano explosion buried them into the und...	[ { "correction": ", there", "end": 4, "start": 4, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "a", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": ". He", "end": 12, "start": 10, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "", "end": 16, "start": 15, "...
bea	88	I have many favorite sports . One of them I 'm keen on playing basketball the best . I always spend more time on playing it . I usually play basketball everyday around at least thirty minutes per day . After a hard day at University I go home and then I go to the stadium to play it . One thing makes sure that I already...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 9, "start": 6, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "most", "end": 17, "start": 16, "type": "ADV" }, { "correction": "every day", "end": 32, "start": 31, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "for", "end": 32, "start": 32, ...
bea	89	With the sweeping progress of development and the booming of population , many agricultueal land , forest and ocesn had been used to destroyed to build more constructure and transport networks . From my own perspective , I believe that it will bring many drawbacks to the environment or even human and animals . To start...	[ { "correction": "populations", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "a lot of", "end": 13, "start": 12, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "agricultural", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "ocean", ...
bea	90	Nowadays the languages are very important , and more English . This is not my first time that I study English . I have been studying English since I was child and I never speak and learn so well since I decided to go to London one course to learn this language . I have taken that decision because I was tired to try to ...	[ { "correction": ",", "end": 2, "start": 1, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "", "end": 9, "start": 7, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "in particular", "end": 10, "start": 10, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 15, "start": 14...
bea	91	The car is n't the best way for for the transport , because it produce much pollution , however the public transport is better to do a journey . It can carry many people without problems . Nowadays in the cities developed there are many possibilities for public transport , like bus , train , subway , tram etc.these opt...	[ { "correction": "forward", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "produces", "end": 15, "start": 14, "type": "VERB:SVA" }, { "correction": "a lot of", "end": 16, "st...
bea	93	I love to play cricket . I am enthusiastic towards this game . My favourite team is India because I belongs to this country . In India , 85 percent people follow cricket . In 1993 , Indian cricket team won his first world cup and that 's change the direction of air in favour of cricket and everyone start to follow this...	[ { "correction": "about", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "am", "end": 21, "start": 20, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "from", "end": 22, "start": 21, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "of", "end": 30, "start": 30, ...
bea	94	Dear Jo , It 's glad to hear you are going to visit to my country . I am looking forward for this . I can give you any advice on traveling and working in my country . l wish you will have a impressed time . The weather is neither hot nor cold all year , you need n't bring too many clothes because you can buy in here . ...	[ { "correction": "great", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "ADJ" }, { "correction": "", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "to", "end": 22, "start": 21, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "hope", "end": 40, "start": 39, "t...
bea	95	My favorite sport is swims . It 's because swim is really fun . Also I think swim can keep our body fit and it can make the people who swim feel cool when it is in a hot day . The advice that I give to someone who want to start swimming . It is not be afraid of water , otherwise they may not learn swim and also when th...	[ { "correction": "swimming", "end": 5, "start": 4, "type": "MORPH" }, { "correction": "swimming", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "MORPH" }, { "correction": "swimming", "end": 18, "start": 17, "type": "MORPH" }, { "correction": "your", "end": 21, ...
bea	96	Dear Camp director , My name is Eider and I am 21 years old . I had read your advertisement in the newspaper ! And I am really sure that I am the person that you are finding . I am monitor in the free time , and I am looking for a temporal job to improve my English . Neither I have problems for working in a kitchen , w...	[ { "correction": "camp", "end": 2, "start": 1, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "", "end": 17, "start": 16, "type": "VERB:TENSE:LONG" }, { "correction": ", and", "end": 25, "start": 23, "type": "PUNCT:LONG" }, { "correction": "looking for", "end": ...
bea	97	The city where I live is a small village . All residents take great care of the environment . Organized shares , where everyone clean up the village . All residents segregate garbage thrown into suitable containers . Thus helping to protect our environment to make it clean , safe , in order to not jeopardize our variou...	[ { "correction": "cleans", "end": 25, "start": 24, "type": "VERB:SVA" }, { "correction": ", thus", "end": 39, "start": 37, "type": "PUNCT:LONG" }, { "correction": "and", "end": 51, "start": 51, "type": "CONJ" }, { "correction": "throws", "end": 73, ...
bea	98	Travelling in their own car is way more comfortable than taking a ride in public transportation.there are several reason to consider . Firstly , the bus is always drop by to get a passenger that take a more time than expected to time of travel . Secondly , the public vehicle route are more far than usual route . Thirdl...	[ { "correction": "your", "end": 3, "start": 2, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "on", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "transportation . There", "end": 16, "start": 15, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "stopping", "end": 30...
bea	99	As far as I 'm concerned , I tend to disagree with the decision of mineral extraction . More details and reasons will be elaborated in the following paragraphs to support my opinion . To begin with , extract the mineral will be harmful to our environment . There are breathtaking sights on the outskirts of my hometown ....	[ { "correction": "", "end": 15, "start": 12, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": "extracting", "end": 39, "start": 38, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": "disappear", "end": 80, "start": 78, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "", "end": 93, ...
bea	105	The sports days were held on Kwai Chung Sports Ground in 12th and 13 th November . That weather was partly cloudy . I got there by MTR . I arrived the sports ground at 7:40 a.m. This year I 've join the 100 - metre race . On the first day before the sports day begin , we have the opening ceremony . The athletic represe...	[ { "correction": "on", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "13th", "end": 15, "start": 13, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "The", "end": 18, "start": 17, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "at", "end": 31, "start": 31, ...
bea	108	One upon a time there was a tiger who lives in a beautiful landscape with her boyfriend and her 3 daughters . The tiger was the mom names Amanda of 25 years old , the herders kill her parents , because the herders were poor and do n't have enough food to survive , so they kill them . The tiger 's boyfriend was a lion n...	[ { "correction": "Once", "end": 1, "start": 0, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 4, "start": 4, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "lived", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "a", "end": 26, "start": 25, ...
bea	110	Hello Riley , about the question you made me in your letter , it has been hard to give you an answer because I know how much you love both . Last night I made a decision . I think that you should give up from your music classes . You have classes since you were nine years old and you already know how to play piano , so...	[ { "correction": "asked", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": ". It", "end": 14, "start": 12, "type": "PUNCT:LONG" }, { "correction": "", "end": 46, "start": 45, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "been having", "end": 52, "st...
bea	112	The most exciting day of my life was the 3rd of June , last year . I had an exam . That day I woke up early because I was nervous . Then I revise Maths as at home , before to go at school , as at school , before to begin the exam . When I started to read the tracks I fell agitated and I thought that I was n't able to f...	[ { "correction": "", "end": 13, "start": 12, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "revised", "end": 35, "start": 34, "type": "VERB:TENSE:LONG" }, { "correction": "", "end": 37, "start": 36, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "", "end": 40, "start":...
bea	116	Everything was dark . She open her eyes and the first thing that she saw was the black sky . A dark sky without stars . She got up and look around . She was in a part of the woods where she used to go to think and relax . She started to take consciousness although she could n't remember how she arrived there . She had ...	[ { "correction": "opened", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "looked", "end": 31, "start": 30, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 56, "start": 56, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "got", "end": 64, ...
bea	117	The development of human kind in technology is seen everywhere . In case of transportation technology , in this twenty first century we have various option like Plan that can fly with the cloud , train that fast and big enough that carry hundreds of people and travel hundreds of mile an hour and boat that much bigger a...	[ { "correction": "the", "end": 12, "start": 12, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 22, "start": 22, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "options", "end": 26, "start": 25, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 26, "start": 26...
bea	119	I had a wonderful day yesterday because I was in the beach all the afternoon . I went with my parents and my sister . The beach is located in A Guarda and its name is O Muiño . There are a lot of people in the beach . The water was very cold and I could n't swim , then I played football in the sand of the beach . I too...	[ { "correction": "on", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "", "end": 14, "start": 13, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "were", "end": 41, "start": 40, "type": "VERB:TENSE:LONG" }, { "correction": "on", "end": 46, "start": 4...
bea	120	No future for a public transpotr ? is this claim or no ? will we see on our roads the public transport afer 5 or eve 10 years yet ? that is really so interesting question/ i think that it all depands from the development . now we can see that more and more people prefer travelling by car . yes , i agree , if you planed...	[ { "correction": "transport", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "Is", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "ORTH" }, { "correction": "true", "end": 10, "start": 10, "type": "ADJ" }, { "correction": "not", "end": 12, "start": 11, ...
bea	123	I 'd like to tell you about my favorite restaurant its name is " Lemon " I go there every week it has different food from any restaurants I 'd like chicken crispy with garlic sauce It 's Excellent choice for me and My favorite appitizer is susage and in order that desert I 'd rather " Vadge " cake with chocolate sauce ...	[ { "correction": ".", "end": 10, "start": 10, "type": "PUNCT:LONG" }, { "correction": "It 's", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "OTHER" }, { "correction": ".", "end": 16, "start": 16, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": ". It", "end": 22, "start":...
bea	126	Michael wake up at the morning and he read the newspaper . He read in the newspaper an interesting noticie . The noticie was about a competition . The competition is about write stories . Michael was excited because he is great writer and he decided to compete . First , he found an idea for the story and he decided to ...	[ { "correction": "woke", "end": 2, "start": 1, "type": "VERB:TENSE" }, { "correction": "in", "end": 4, "start": 3, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "", "end": 8, "start": 7, "type": "PRON" }, { "correction": "In", "end": 15, "start": 12, "t...
bea	132	My favourite season of the year is summer . Why am I making this choice you clearly can ask , I love sun and good weather . Yes it is true that during summer the temperature is very hot and you can rarely stay near the sun because you finish t be burn by the sun . In spite of this , summer is a very good moment to enjo...	[ { "correction": "do", "end": 11, "start": 10, "type": "VERB:TENSE:LONG" }, { "correction": "make", "end": 13, "start": 12, "type": "VERB:FORM" }, { "correction": ":", "end": 20, "start": 19, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": ",", "end": 28, "s...
bea	133	Dear USA SUMMER CAMPS , I saw your advertisement in the USA and I 'm very interested in the position of childminder you are advertising . I 'm eighteen years old and I 'm doing a languages translation degree at university at the moment , that 's why I need to work in order to pay my fee . I have some experience working...	[ { "correction": "newspaper", "end": 12, "start": 11, "type": "NOUN" }, { "correction": ". That", "end": 46, "start": 44, "type": "PUNCT:LONG" }, { "correction": "fees", "end": 58, "start": 57, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": "of", "end": 67, ...
bea	134	It had been a very long and tiring day , but Tom felt he had achieved something really good . He finally , after 5 years , won swimming competition . It was really importatnt for him because he was training for 5 long years since he was 15 and he have n't got any achievements . He was very happy and he decided to celeb...	[ { "correction": "a", "end": 28, "start": 28, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "important", "end": 35, "start": 34, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "to", "end": 36, "start": 35, "type": "PREP" }, { "correction": "had been", "end": 40, "start"...
bea	136	· Introduction This report will examine the different activities we can do in our leisure time in Castelldefels . · Activities to kill time As our town is well - known for our magnificul beaches along the Mediterranean coast and for the Olympic Canal of Castelldefels , many foreign or local people come here to do activ...	[ { "correction": "pass", "end": 23, "start": 22, "type": "VERB" }, { "correction": "the", "end": 23, "start": 23, "type": "DET" }, { "correction": "magnificent", "end": 34, "start": 33, "type": "SPELL" }, { "correction": "and", "end": 50, "start...
bea	139	Nowadays there are many people that are learning foreign language , for me is a good thing that more people learn this , but is it worth learning a foreign language ? Firstly , there are more multinational companies that need people to speak other languages , so that means that the people who know to speak foreign lang...	[ { "correction": ",", "end": 1, "start": 1, "type": "PUNCT" }, { "correction": "who", "end": 6, "start": 5, "type": "PRON" }, { "correction": "languages", "end": 10, "start": 9, "type": "NOUN:NUM" }, { "correction": ". For", "end": 12, "start": ...

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Genetic risk does carry its consequences and should not be taken lightly within the family circle . Afterall , what affects one family may or may not affect another although the families has a common genetic make up , shared by either of the parents . In cases where an individual has gotten to know of a genetic disorde...

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Sometimes some family structure and cultural beliefs can influence the pattern of communication . Depending on whom the genetic risk was discovered from : the son or daughter for example , the parents who knows about this would decide who gets told and whom takes the precedence in being ' allowed ' to tell . For exampl...

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The notion of authority also extended ' vertically ' . For example , a grandmother may have more authority to pass on information than an aunt , even when she is not at genetic risk herself while the aunt is . From a practitioner 's perspective these findings are important because if lay constructs of the family and ki...

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Focus on the negative side of the annouance of genetic risk first . Large numbers of patients with the genetic risk would want to keep it as a secret as the genetic risk may indicates their high chance to carry certain disease . Especially for the young people without marrige , if he / she is known to have some genetic...

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We ca n't make a law to push a carrier of a known genetic risk to tell his or her relatives about his genetic problem . It is immoral and impractical . Firstly , someone having what kinds of disease belongs to his or her privacy . Privicy protection belongs to one 's human rights . If a law requires someone to tell oth...

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However , from the ethical point of view . To the carrier himself of herself , he of she should have a feeling of resposiblity to tell his or her relatives their genetic disorder . By doing this , they may be able to save some lives of their relatives . It is because a carrier with bad gene may not necessary have those...

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As it is a genetic risk , the patient next - of - skin might have a high chance of carrying the risk , hence the need to inform their relatives is important so that necessary prevention actions could be taken before unforeseen circumstances might occur . For example , if you are the only child in a family and unfortuna...

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Furthermore , you are also being responsible for your next generations by telling the truth that you are a carrier of a genetic risk . If your wife is not aware of the truth and give birth to the baby , it will be possible for your child to carry the same genetic risk as well . Being the parent , you are not responsibl...

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Personally I feel that we still should take our responsibility to tell them the situation . Since this will really affect their lives , what we should do is to try to make it in a positive way . We can not let it go . We should know that although we may affect their lives , we can still let them make correct choices in...

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Firstly , the information concerning to the genetic is something personally which is also a privacy like people 's bank card key . Other people should not be told without the person 's permission even though they are his or her family or relatives . The government should set the law to protect this kind of privacy . On...

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People may feel angry , depressed , or even guilty about their results . In some cases , a carrier can suffer tension within a family because the result is also related to the others ' risk somehow . However , I believe it is just a usual reaction to this situation . In addition , though it can be possible in some case...

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Secondly , although social network takes time for people to chat online but not face to face , they may still decide a time online to meet others face to face in the daily life . In this case , the social network helps people to increase the frequency of talk . For example , if social network does not exist , the busin...

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The social network may also creat some negative impacts for the people . The largest negative impact is that due to the online network , some people start to use and rely on internet every minute . They take too much time of using online social network and thus do not have time to have their daily meeting with people i...

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First , with the function of social media sites that connects the people , everyone is able to interact and communicate with friends and families , or even strangers without any time and place constraints . Through the social media sites , we can chat with our friends who stay in Europe and New Zealand . There are over...

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Twitter , Facebook and Skype are some social media sites which enable us to keep in touch with our friends or family who are in other cities or countries . Through those sites we are able to talk to them , to know what their activities are and who their friends are , etc . From the surface point of view it is no doubt ...

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Social media has reshaped the way of communication . In real life , we communicate with one another as equal participants . We share ideas , stories and forge friendship based on mutual respect . However , communication on social media is largely based on " broadcasting and listening " . When we use facebook and post p...

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The broadcasting and viewing model is not good for forging relationships . However , it is good for sharing information . On social media , everyone is a broadcaster and a viewer . With my social network account , I seldom read newspapers or go to news websites anymore ; because I can easily read them from the status o...

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Social media enables people from different parts of the world to communicate with one another . People used to write letters and send post cards to keep in touch with ones live far away from them in the past . It can take a few days or weeks for those to receive the messages . Nowadays , what people need to do is just ...

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Firstly of all , social media can make it more convenient for people to make friends and contact each other . Years ago when these modern products have not been popular , the way for people to communicate or contact people far way are still restricted in making phone calls , sending emails or writing letters . Some wil...

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However , social media may do some harm to people 's life . It will make people spend more time on chatting on the internet rather than communicate face to face such that the interpersonal skill will be badly affected . Some people spend a lot of time in it and forget their real life . Actually , I have seen some peopl...

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In conclusion , the showing up of social media sites is a double edged sword . It can make our life simpler . People can promote their friendship and relationship through these social media . Whereas , it can also make people forget to communicate to their family and friends in the real life and affect negatively to th...

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First and foremost , we should realize that social media world is not trustworthy and real . Everyone can easily make up the personality and characteristics they want . They can become anyone . Though social media do create relationships , relationships and friendships are only firm and real if people have gone through...

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My favourite sport is volleyball because I love plays with my friends . Volleyball is a sport play every place , when I travel on the beach I like plays with my sister in the sand and after we are going to the sea . It is very funny . when I was young I like plays with the ball in the playground and my friend and I pla...

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In my opinion I think that public transport in future is going to continue to be used because there are a lot of people that does n't have enough money to pay for a car even if it is used , so public transport continue to have future but people are going to use more the cars then bus or underground . If we think about ...

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Public transportation is an important invention in human history , it brings amount of benefits in our life . For instance , we take subway in order to avoid stocking in traffic . It is true that moving by car is more convenient than take public transportation , however , it would cause more damage to our life and harm...

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The pleasure of traveling People go , people come . Every day lots of people are travelling abroad but , what 's the best way to do an international travel ? The most important option to travel is , by far , the plane . But , even when it 's true that it 's the faster option , you must be very carefuly at time to get o...

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In modern societies , there are lots of friends around our daily lives . Big project could not be finished without co - operations . Friends could be communicated and exchanged the ideas , feelings and funny things happened around ourselves . More importantly , the parents give our lives and they touch us knowledge and...

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25

Everybody has his favourite sport . My favourite sport is football game . On our school or villiage football stadium i spend a lot of time every day . Usually i play football with my classmates . Before training i ran 1 - 2 kilometres and my legs get a power and my body gets an energy . Our team has a hard - working co...

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27

Dear Paul , I have seen your notice in the academy newspaper and I 'm quite interested . I have no plans for this summer so I think it is a good idea to spend it . I was born in the UK so I can be a very good teacher of English . Although I came to Spain ten years later so I can speak with them in Spanish if it was nec...

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28

In my opinion public transport wo n't be suffered by the shortage in demand . Because not everyone afford to buy their own car . Besides there are lots of low income people who ca n't buy their own car . So I think public transport 's future is bright .

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32

When I was a child , I had a lot friends and they were very important for me . We ever played in the park or we talked about our tastes , music , boys , we laugh a lot of ... But when I was a teenager I began to live situations that I did not like it , for instance , the girls said to me bad things or they talked bad a...

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39

Hello Alex , how are you . Are you free for weckend , have you any plans . Me and my friends go to the cinema , and I invite you to go with us . If you are interesedt , find me at 8 clock near the cinema entrance .

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45

Run for your life My favourite sport is run . I like to running fast so fast in fact that it feel me as if I run on air and the feet do not hardly touch the ground between the strides . My favourite place to run is in the forest but I like to run sportive too . I am likeing to feel the ground under my feet is soft so s...

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55

Michael closed the door and knew at that moment he had made a mistake . He was at Sarah 's house when suddenly he left all the bathroom dirty and went to his house . so he went back to Sarah 's house and clean all the bathroom , but Sarah already knew that he left the bathroom like this so before Michael entered to the...

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61

we think that in the future the planet will be in bad conditions and the trees will be dissappearing , after that we will be having wars . In 30 years we will have changed our anatomy , also we will be eating fast food , on the other hand , the north pole will have melted totally . The temperature will have become craz...

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Good day , My name is Fouad and I would like to talk about my favorite sport , Volleyball one of the most beautiful sports ever and I used to practise this sport 3 times a week since 1980 , the reasons for my enjoyment with this sport are as follows : 1- make me fit and healthy 2- classy game no friction between player...

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As citizens of village , we totally care about environment of our village . Every sunday , we do a mutual cooporation where anyone can treat rubbish as good as they treat themselves . We clean the dirty ditch , sweep rubbish then we bury rubbish . Whilst , we recyling inorganic rubbish too . From inorganic , we can mak...

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Transportation is the heart of any city whether it is public or private . Nowadays people prefer own vehicles rather than public transportation . day by day folk are more crazy about own vehicles which leads dark future of public transportation firstly . i agree with given statement that there would be tough time for p...

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I go for a walk to a park every day with my lovely two Corgi dogs . I met many people in the park . I never thought about , people got so many pet . In the peak time in the park is very busy even thought the park is huge ! Some people are very friendly the same as their dog . But some people are very rude and their dog...

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Last year , My friend Michael was at school when he heard about a short story competition , he liked the idea so he decided to enter the competition . but there was a fees in order to join the competition , he had no money . fortunately he have a lot of friends they can lent him . he phoned me and asked me to lent him ...

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75

All around the world pupils are waiting for finishing school . They are eager to begin a new life as adults . But when they reach in - between period , confused feelings cross their minds . As a rule after last exams they do n't know what university to choose . What they will do in future they see , like in a fogg . In...

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78

Peter looked at his watch and knew that he had to do something immediately , after listening conversations of his new neighbours . They are planning to rob a very precious thing from Museum tonight . He does n't have much time to prove their plan and he could not wait to let it happen . It is his town and it is his dut...

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79

I am beleving that there is no future for the public transpot , using trains is mor convient and low expenses also to decrease the carpon gases which affecting the ozone , people should be aware about the effect of using the public transpotation on the econmics and enviroment , goverements shall encarge the people to u...

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I was , last month , in a fantastic restaurant , Woolypools . It is small but comfortable and famous for his big burguers . Woolypools is a speciallist of meal , it 's a meal restaurant . In my opinion the restaurant can be better , respect to meat , but it is perfect to have dinner with your friends . I have expects t...

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84

In my town we create a small organization for more healthy environment , beauty touch and to be attractive . the citizens in the town must participate in this , the citizen will take the responsibility for specific day to clean the town and put the rubbish into correct place and clean tree and plant more of it .

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85

I 'm agree with the opinion that the famous people , such as politicians and film stars deserve to have a private life without journalists following them all the time . is horrible have a person behind you all the time , you not have a life , not peace , not a happy . In adition all pearsons have the right to privacy a...

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87

Once upon a time was one little ant called Penny , he was really small in compared with the others . He hated to be like that because most of the ants made fun of him until one day something horrible and inevitable happen . It was a dark night it was raining until a big active volcano explosion buried them into the und...

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88

I have many favorite sports . One of them I 'm keen on playing basketball the best . I always spend more time on playing it . I usually play basketball everyday around at least thirty minutes per day . After a hard day at University I go home and then I go to the stadium to play it . One thing makes sure that I already...

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89

With the sweeping progress of development and the booming of population , many agricultueal land , forest and ocesn had been used to destroyed to build more constructure and transport networks . From my own perspective , I believe that it will bring many drawbacks to the environment or even human and animals . To start...

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90

Nowadays the languages are very important , and more English . This is not my first time that I study English . I have been studying English since I was child and I never speak and learn so well since I decided to go to London one course to learn this language . I have taken that decision because I was tired to try to ...

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91

The car is n't the best way for for the transport , because it produce much pollution , however the public transport is better to do a journey . It can carry many people without problems . Nowadays in the cities developed there are many possibilities for public transport , like bus , train , subway , tram etc.these opt...

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93

I love to play cricket . I am enthusiastic towards this game . My favourite team is India because I belongs to this country . In India , 85 percent people follow cricket . In 1993 , Indian cricket team won his first world cup and that 's change the direction of air in favour of cricket and everyone start to follow this...

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94

Dear Jo , It 's glad to hear you are going to visit to my country . I am looking forward for this . I can give you any advice on traveling and working in my country . l wish you will have a impressed time . The weather is neither hot nor cold all year , you need n't bring too many clothes because you can buy in here . ...

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95

My favorite sport is swims . It 's because swim is really fun . Also I think swim can keep our body fit and it can make the people who swim feel cool when it is in a hot day . The advice that I give to someone who want to start swimming . It is not be afraid of water , otherwise they may not learn swim and also when th...

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96

Dear Camp director , My name is Eider and I am 21 years old . I had read your advertisement in the newspaper ! And I am really sure that I am the person that you are finding . I am monitor in the free time , and I am looking for a temporal job to improve my English . Neither I have problems for working in a kitchen , w...

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97

The city where I live is a small village . All residents take great care of the environment . Organized shares , where everyone clean up the village . All residents segregate garbage thrown into suitable containers . Thus helping to protect our environment to make it clean , safe , in order to not jeopardize our variou...

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98

Travelling in their own car is way more comfortable than taking a ride in public transportation.there are several reason to consider . Firstly , the bus is always drop by to get a passenger that take a more time than expected to time of travel . Secondly , the public vehicle route are more far than usual route . Thirdl...

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99

As far as I 'm concerned , I tend to disagree with the decision of mineral extraction . More details and reasons will be elaborated in the following paragraphs to support my opinion . To begin with , extract the mineral will be harmful to our environment . There are breathtaking sights on the outskirts of my hometown ....

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The sports days were held on Kwai Chung Sports Ground in 12th and 13 th November . That weather was partly cloudy . I got there by MTR . I arrived the sports ground at 7:40 a.m. This year I 've join the 100 - metre race . On the first day before the sports day begin , we have the opening ceremony . The athletic represe...

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108

One upon a time there was a tiger who lives in a beautiful landscape with her boyfriend and her 3 daughters . The tiger was the mom names Amanda of 25 years old , the herders kill her parents , because the herders were poor and do n't have enough food to survive , so they kill them . The tiger 's boyfriend was a lion n...

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Hello Riley , about the question you made me in your letter , it has been hard to give you an answer because I know how much you love both . Last night I made a decision . I think that you should give up from your music classes . You have classes since you were nine years old and you already know how to play piano , so...

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The most exciting day of my life was the 3rd of June , last year . I had an exam . That day I woke up early because I was nervous . Then I revise Maths as at home , before to go at school , as at school , before to begin the exam . When I started to read the tracks I fell agitated and I thought that I was n't able to f...

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Everything was dark . She open her eyes and the first thing that she saw was the black sky . A dark sky without stars . She got up and look around . She was in a part of the woods where she used to go to think and relax . She started to take consciousness although she could n't remember how she arrived there . She had ...

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The development of human kind in technology is seen everywhere . In case of transportation technology , in this twenty first century we have various option like Plan that can fly with the cloud , train that fast and big enough that carry hundreds of people and travel hundreds of mile an hour and boat that much bigger a...

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119

I had a wonderful day yesterday because I was in the beach all the afternoon . I went with my parents and my sister . The beach is located in A Guarda and its name is O Muiño . There are a lot of people in the beach . The water was very cold and I could n't swim , then I played football in the sand of the beach . I too...

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No future for a public transpotr ? is this claim or no ? will we see on our roads the public transport afer 5 or eve 10 years yet ? that is really so interesting question/ i think that it all depands from the development . now we can see that more and more people prefer travelling by car . yes , i agree , if you planed...

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I 'd like to tell you about my favorite restaurant its name is " Lemon " I go there every week it has different food from any restaurants I 'd like chicken crispy with garlic sauce It 's Excellent choice for me and My favorite appitizer is susage and in order that desert I 'd rather " Vadge " cake with chocolate sauce ...

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Michael wake up at the morning and he read the newspaper . He read in the newspaper an interesting noticie . The noticie was about a competition . The competition is about write stories . Michael was excited because he is great writer and he decided to compete . First , he found an idea for the story and he decided to ...

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My favourite season of the year is summer . Why am I making this choice you clearly can ask , I love sun and good weather . Yes it is true that during summer the temperature is very hot and you can rarely stay near the sun because you finish t be burn by the sun . In spite of this , summer is a very good moment to enjo...

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Dear USA SUMMER CAMPS , I saw your advertisement in the USA and I 'm very interested in the position of childminder you are advertising . I 'm eighteen years old and I 'm doing a languages translation degree at university at the moment , that 's why I need to work in order to pay my fee . I have some experience working...

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It had been a very long and tiring day , but Tom felt he had achieved something really good . He finally , after 5 years , won swimming competition . It was really importatnt for him because he was training for 5 long years since he was 15 and he have n't got any achievements . He was very happy and he decided to celeb...

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· Introduction This report will examine the different activities we can do in our leisure time in Castelldefels . · Activities to kill time As our town is well - known for our magnificul beaches along the Mediterranean coast and for the Olympic Canal of Castelldefels , many foreign or local people come here to do activ...

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Nowadays there are many people that are learning foreign language , for me is a good thing that more people learn this , but is it worth learning a foreign language ? Firstly , there are more multinational companies that need people to speak other languages , so that means that the people who know to speak foreign lang...

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