The article that lies herein, was, in a manner of speaking (but not literally speaking - &#x27;in a manner of speaking&#x27; is just a phrase), so overly verbose in many places that it drowns the reader in verbal diarrhea as thick as pea soup. That is to say, I, as a reader, felt that the author (of this article) could have made these points in a more reachable, succinct fashion.