This is great! I know a lot of people are searching for the plot but I think they missed the point. Art is what you make it, whether you are the creator or the observer. Art is about the emotion it illicits and the impact it has on you. It doesn't matter if you liked this story or not, it is about how it makes you think about things. Not saying there isn't room for improvement, but this deserves a lot more credit than I think it's been getting in this audience. Maybe it isn't the right type of content for youtube, but as long as it is important to the creators, it should be recognized here. Keep up the good work Waffsicle!