2) Strong topic and concluding sentences. Your topic sentences should: 1) state the main idea of the paragraph AND function as a mini-thesis. 2) connect the new paragraph to the previous one (transitioning is usually a matter of using one word-- however, similarly, furthermore--or a short phrase--in contrast to). Your concluding sentences should: 1) offer a summary of the paragraph (its meaning; your point).
The camera at the bald-eagle nest near Codorus State Park at Hanover has begun livestreaming its fourth season of round-the-clock video to viewers worldwide. The video is available through the website of the Pennsylvania Game Commission, which partners in the project with HDOnTap, Comcast Business and Codorus State Park.
Bald eagle egg hatches in Hanover nest. Image courtesy of Pennsylvania Game. A bald eagle watches an egg hatch in a nest in Hanover. Image courtesy of Pennsylvania Game Commission, HDOnTap and Comcast Business.he Pennsylvania Game Commission installed a live-streaming eagle cam focused on the nest in December. Since then, according to spokesman Travis Lau, say more than 640,000 people from across the country have watched the live stream, and many of them check in daily.