<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=189056.msg10082230#msg10082230">Quote from: MistressVoluptas on 05-06-2014, 16:26:27</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Thats a good point. You're completely right I might to tone it down as I intended after the inital flash. Some of it is my writing I suppose xD I grew up on Agatha Christie and Harry Potter  I suppose I developed a bad habit of wanting to be fair in my writing and not throw out things that people can go "Oh you never mentioned that guy and he's the killer and the butler is martian spy!? HAX! Dear Madam I cry Hax!" over. A lot of things I had reason, but and yes they are weak and designed to make anyone that good reason to doubt her draw that was kind of the point I was making xD I did have IC explanation beyond that. It's hard to play someone Hiding that they're hiding something by pretending to let something slip. <br/><br/>I'm going to have to note the different between writing styles RP seems to be a different beast at where D&amp;D seems to be concerned. xD Hiding subtle things behind blatant things doesn't seem to work here xD makes me sad, but no worries. I guess it's more about mechanics story after all<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Your writing is good from what I've seen. :) I would just suggest, if your intention is to remain concealed, that you should do a more thorough job of it.<br/><br/>As for difference between pen and paper and forum, well alot of it is your group. My pen and paper D&D group is ALL about details. Hell if you don't explicitly state at the end of a fight "I recover the daggers I threw and arrows I shot" then you done lost those bad boys. Forget to say you retrieve your rope? No more rope. So I may just be holding up a higher standard than Calrond wishes to hold people to, in which case I'll happily ease off and just go with the flow.