<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=157589.msg7246984#msg7246984">Quote from: Koekje on 19-11-2012, 17:46:03</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Anything I need to add to make my profile properly accepted, cap'n? :)<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Technically, your character is fine. Just some small details.<br/><br/>Everyone else has picked a picture for their character, so you might consider finding one as well, though this is optional.<br/>Also, you might want to write a 'relationships' section like the other players have done.<br/>Finally, you missed a rather tense moment in the roleplay. It is not finished, yet, but when it is you will certainly hear about it even if your character was not present. Lose a few words about what your character thinks about the conflict or how he reacts to the conflicting parties afterwards.<br/><br/>Satan_Klaus