I don't think it would sound Japanese to a Japanese speaker. ;) Jin is usually a chinese word, which<em>can</em>be transliterated into Japanese. Ryu is totally japanese all the way. Kitsune in Kanji is all one character, so the 'Kit' isn't easily isolated. The only way you could spell it is with Hiragana or Katagana, which is used for transcribing foreign languages...<span class="bbc_size" style="font-size: 12pt;">仁 龍</span><span class="bbc_size" style="font-size: 14pt;"> キットサゲ</span>which is in fact pronounced Jin Ryu Ki To Sah Gey.<br/><br/>Granted, Naruto has characters literally called A, B, and C... Naruto's name itself is a type of ramen. Kumogakure's characters have the dumbest naming conventions, with names like Darui, Samui and Karui literally just being adjectives you use to describe someone's disposition.<br/><br/>I think Kaigan isn't really great, to be honest. In fact, I don't think it even belongs in the pdf.<br/><br/>As you mentioned, it seems incomplete but also kind of poorly written... It says 'Chakra Cost: 8' but also has a per round cost (3 every 2 rounds)  equal to Byakugan's... BUT a +6 bonus to Attack AND Defense AND Saving throws is huge, it's in fact better than the Byakugan or Sharingan at 20th level. Honestly, it's really overpowered and I don't like it at all. The wisdom penalty is... nothing. Unless you're a sacred fist, it doesn't effect you at all until after the battle. It's a burst power-up mode and that is... dumb.<br/><br/>I thought Jin-Ryu was going to be a regular guy, but he's got a doujutsu hidden in him that is mechanically better than the Sharingan and Byakugan without requiring any level investments... Even if you wanted to play the angle that Jin-Ryu is secretly from a hidden family, I don't know if it'll come up in this game. I plan on going to level 9 at most...