<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=189056.msg10082166#msg10082166">Quote from: Paladin101 on 05-06-2014, 15:58:43</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Some of the explanations are thin. You're a 'hedge mage' who has access to spells only powerful wizards and sorcerers can use? Again, I'm not saying my character is going to exclaim "Egads Holmes something is afoot!" but I am simply suggesting some extra effort in concealing your characters capabilities. If it's thrown in our faces enough times, some of us are gonna start asking questions. And yes, not to be a dick, again, but what Glyph said also stands up as why my character's hackles are raised. Why is this chick wearing a stage dancer outfit of floss and bandaids suddenly here out of no where, and apparently capable of large scale magic, and trusted by her master to do seduction. I mean...no offense but come on! It's kinda throwing that shit in our face ASKING us to draw conclusions. lol <br/><br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Thats a good point. You're completely right I might to tone it down as I intended after the inital flash. Some of it is my writing I suppose xD I grew up on Agatha Christie and Harry Potter  I suppose I developed a bad habit of wanting to be fair in my writing and not throw out things that people can go "Oh you never mentioned that guy and he's the killer and the butler is martian spy!? HAX! Dear Madam I cry Hax!" over. A lot of things I had reason, but and yes they are weak and designed to make anyone that good reason to doubt her draw that was kind of the point I was making xD I did have IC explanation beyond that. It's hard to play someone Hiding that they're hiding something by pretending to let something slip.<br/><br/>I'm going to have to note the different between writing styles RP seems to be a different beast at where D&D seems to be concerned. xD Hiding subtle things behind blatant things doesn't seem to work here xD makes me sad, but no worries. I guess it's more about mechanics than story after all<br/><br/>But I do appreciate the help a lot ^^  *resumes smexy bard squeezing*