There's one thing I would like to bring regarding their interactions, and I have teetered on this because I'm not certain there is a polite way to bring it up. But it keeps happening, and it seems pretty normalized to Elliquiy.<br/><br/>But narrative for the sake of insulting and reframing another character's actions is not cool. It never is. And it's difficult to bring it up because I know what the retort is. It's, "Well this is just whst my character is thinking!" but there are ways to convey your character dislikes what another person is doing without exposition. Having an internal dialogue with yourself in a way nobody can intereact, though, contributes nothing other than creating atmosphere--so if you're going to do it, at least make it worthwhile to read and not pure cattiness.<br/><br/>I don't want to create more contentiom but plauing in proximity to that is a turn off. It's turning Uxi off. She never gets turned off!  And incidentally, please, plesse feel free to do this to Uxi. I'm an emotional masochist and I love getting dragged! But please don't do this to other people.  :-(<br/><br/><br/><br/>