Writing style: it's all fine with me, however it goes.  I'm back to 3rd-person to match!<br/><br/>For the clothing - I'm going to say that Daria is dressed as she appears in the image... let's say that's a halter-top under the shirt, and it's quite plausible she'd have a skirt... but I don't want to spoil TH, or the boys at the table.  :-)   So I'll say she's in black jeans this time.<br/>