Cassie is basically a runaway from a rich family, drifting on the rim, we can work with that. I will make some suggestions to improve on it. All but the 'rules' one are optional.<br/><br/>Rules:<br/>You are 2 points over budget in attributes. Values of 4 and 5 are more expensive, with a value of 4 costing 5 points and a value of 5 costing 7 points. That is the most likely cause of the error.<br/><br/>Skills (general):<br/>You have very combat&action oriented skills. This is not D&D. In a month of roleplaying, not a single shot has been fired. This will probably change, but combat is not the main focus of the game. All in all, we don't use the dice all that often.<br/><br/>Skills (details):<br/>I would have expected a woman of her upbringing to know some etiquette.<br/>Survival is more of an 'outdoorsman' skill that you find on hunters, trappers and other very rural folks. But maybe Cassie was crossbow-hunting for sport, as many noble and rich folk do.<br/>People without the empathy skill tend to be awkward in social situation. But given Cassie's high perception, she can 'wing it' better than most so this is not a 'must-have'.<br/>Stealth would go very well with her current skillset.<br/><br/>Background:<br/>The Verse of Firefly has a nobility. Cassie's focus on archaic weapons and the attempt at an arranged, political marriage go right up that alley. So if you want, you can make her blue-blooded.<br/><br/>Equipment:<br/>Again, this is not D&D. Your weapons are probably some of your more important posessions but you could use that space to also define your character better. Maybe she has some pictures of someone important whom she left behind? Some memorabilia?<br/><br/><br/><br/>Some questions:<br/><br/>Is Cassie's father or her husband-to-be actively hunting her? Is there some kind of bounty to bring her back home? How bad of a thing will happen to her if she returns? Does she have the option of just returning home?<br/><br/>The job she pulled that went sour, where did it take place and who or what was the goal? And how vengeful is the target? Will someone come looking for her if one of her former teammates spills the beans or was it a 'nothing personal, just business' thing?<br/><br/>Where is Cassie now? How desperately does she need passage and can she pay?<br/><br/><br/><br/>Satan_Klaus<br/><br/>PS: The question about Shan Yu is a quote from Firefly. He was a famous sadist-philosopher. So basically, what I am asking is: How is your stance on BDSM (Character and player may answer differently, of course, to allow for non-consent scenes).