Okay, so, first off; writing quality of everyone is rather superb, so no qualms there ;D<br/><br/>Reading over things, I realized one thing that I took for granted, which I should have probably noted, so my bad there - namely the creation of details; unless I note that something exists or happens, it's best to take it that it's not there at all or await the result of actions to see if they're successful.<br/><br/>In this case the most major cases were survivors other than the PCs (who were meant to be the only survivors due to a plot related reason) and getting a fire set up with relative ease (with the logs being waterlogged and all).  Anyways, minor hiccups and wrinkles to be ironed out early I suppose, so I'll just have to make a few minor reshuffles but I can roll with it so no worries or need to edit posts :-)<br/><br/>Otherwise, I think we're starting off great!