<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=333824.msg15902118#msg15902118">Quote from: PhantomPistoleer on 28-06-2021, 21:21:11</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">All right, Keyotess-- as I said, I really liked the character.<br/><br/>1.  Could you explain her high Dex and Cha?  I don't mind them, I just wanna know.  With a 20 Cha, she is among the most beautiful and captivating women on the face of the planet.</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>She has high dex and cha from natural ability combined with training in dancing, singing and acting.  I don't see Cha as being related to physical beauty, that is what Feat Attractive is for.  Cha is about the strength of personality.  Mick Jagger is a great example of someone who has lots of Cha but is rather ugly. Most politicians have lots of Cha as well, but most of them are also physical average.   But yeah, see her Cha as being equal parts natural talent and training.<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">2.  I love her skills, and this is the type of character that I just LOVE to run.  A beautiful dame that's just brimming with talent!  However, the way you had it before was a little confusing, so I hope I've cleared it all up.  The character has a lot of skill points, so I am just gonna take your word for it that she has 26 points in them.</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Double checked my total and have to make a small correction.  Notice, Search and Sense Motive each had to drop by 1 point.<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">3.  As to her feats... ugh, WHAT.  A.  BABE!  I just want to throw henchmen her way so she can fuck em' up!  I loved what you did there.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Thanks!  Feats can be very powerful when used correctly. :)<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">4.  Your powers are hard to read, though.  I don't know where you're putting points and where you're getting drawbacks.  I tried to go through it, but it was difficult to simplify.  I honestly couldn't make heads or tails of what you were doing.  This area needs to be fixed.  Please look at the sheets I've done for Kathadon and Hatless to get an idea of what I'm looking for.</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Dang, thought I had made it easy to read, but apparently not. I will reformat.  But basic idea is that she has two powers.  Immunity to sonic attacks and her Sonic Attack with 9 versions to it.  I am taking Power Drawback: Full Power (pp 126) on all of the versions of Sonic Attacks and only in about 3 cases was it important.   I made all ranges Touch, her scream starts from her mouth and spreads out in a cone from there.  And her powers are either instant or continuous, they only last as long as she is actively maintaining them.<br/><br/>Hopefully this is in the format you prefer.<br/><br/><strong>Immunity:</strong>Sonic: 10 pp<br/><strong>Sonic Attack: </strong>total 28 pp<br/><em>Sonic Scream:</em><strong> Blast:</strong>10 (Extra:<strong>Area Cone</strong>(100 feet); Feat:<strong>Progression </strong>1 (250 feet); Flaw:<strong>Range</strong>(Touch); Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 20 pp<br/>AP:<em>Deafening Scream: </em><strong>Sonic Control:</strong>(Dazzle Auditory) 10, [Extra:<strong>Area Radius to Cone</strong>(100 feet); Flaw:<strong>Range: Touch</strong>; Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>]; 1 pp<br/>AP:<em>Stunning Scream:</em><strong>Stun:</strong>7 [Extra:<strong>Area Cone</strong>(70 feet), Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>]; 1 pp<br/>AP:<em>Push Scream</em><strong>Trip</strong>10 [Extra:<strong>Area Cone</strong>(100 feet),<strong>Knockback</strong>, Flaw:<strong>Range</strong>(Touch), Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 1 pp<br/>AP:<em>Counter Wave</em><strong>Nullify</strong>(Sonic/Auditory) 10 [Extra:<strong>Area Cone </strong>(100 feet),<strong>Duration</strong>(continuous); Flaw:<strong>Range</strong>(Touch); Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 1 pp<br/>AP:<em>Disorienting Scream</em><strong>Nauseate</strong>7 [Extra: Area Cone (70 feet); Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 1 pp<br/>AP:<em>Mesmerizing Voice</em><strong>Mind control</strong>10 [Extra:<strong>Area Cone</strong>(100 feet); Flaw:<strong>Range</strong>2 (Touch),<strong>Duration</strong>2 (Continuous),<strong>One Command</strong>,<strong>Sense Dependent</strong>(auditory); Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 1 pp<br/>AP:<em>Emotional Song</em><strong> Emotion Control</strong>10 [Extra:<strong>Area Cone</strong>(100 feet); Flaw:<strong> Range 2</strong>(Touch),<strong>Duration 2</strong>(Continuous),<strong>Sense Dependent</strong>(auditory); Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 1 pp<br/>AP<em>Sonic Wall</em><strong>Create Object</strong>10 [Extra:<strong>Moveable</strong>; Flaw:<strong>Duration</strong>(Continuous),<strong>Limited</strong>(only wall shape); Power Drawback:<strong>Full Power</strong>] 1 pp<br/><br/><br/><br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><strong>Abilities</strong><br/><strong>STR: </strong> 10 [+0]; <strong>DEX:</strong> 18 [+4]; <strong>CON:</strong>  16 [+3]; <strong>INT:</strong> 14 [+2]; <strong>WIS: </strong> 14 [+2]; <strong>CHA:</strong> 20 [+5]<br/><br/><strong>Skills:</strong><br/><strong>Acrobatics </strong> 6 [+10]; <strong>Bluff</strong> 1 [+6]; <strong>Climb</strong> 4 [+4]; <strong>Computers</strong> 2 [+4]; <strong>Concentration</strong> 5 [+8]; <strong>Diplomacy</strong> 1 [+6]; <strong>Disable Device</strong> 2 [+4]; <strong>Disguise</strong> 5 [+10]; <strong>Drive</strong> 2 [+6]; <strong>Escape Artist</strong> 3 [+7]; <strong>Gather Info</strong> 4 [+9]; <strong>Intimidation</strong> 2 [+7]; <strong>Investigate</strong> 2 [+4]; <strong>Medicine</strong> 2 [+4]; <strong>Notice</strong> 5 [+8]; <strong>Profession:</strong> 6 [+8]; <strong>Sleight of Hand</strong> 2 [+4]; <strong>Knowledge</strong> (Art) 7  [+9]; <strong>Knowledge</strong> (Pop Culture) 4 [+6]; <strong>Perform</strong> (singing) 7 [+12]; <strong>Perform</strong> (dancing) 7 [+12]; <strong>Perform</strong> (acting) 7 [+12]; <strong>Search</strong> 5 [+8]; <strong>Sense Motive</strong> 5 [+8]; <strong>Stealth</strong> 4 [+8]; <strong>Survival</strong> 2 [+5]; <strong>Swim</strong> 3 [+3]<br/><br/><strong>Feats:</strong><br/><strong>All out Attack</strong>, <strong>Attractive</strong> 2, <strong>Attack Bonus</strong> (Melee) 3, <strong>Attack Specialization</strong> (Baton) 2, <strong>Blind Fighting</strong>, <strong>Chokehold</strong>, <strong>Defensive Attack</strong>, <strong>Defensive Roll</strong> 4, <strong>Distract</strong>, <strong>Dodge Bonus</strong> 6, <strong>Equipment</strong> 2, <strong>Elusive Target</strong>, <strong>Improved Disarm</strong>, <strong>Improved Initiative</strong>, <strong>Improved Throw</strong>, <strong>Improved Trip</strong>, <strong>Power Attack</strong>, <strong>Prone Fighting</strong>, <strong>Skill Mastery</strong> (Acrobatics, Acting, Singing, Dancing), <strong>Stunning Attack</strong>, <strong>Takedown</strong>, <strong>Uncanny Dodge</strong> (Auditory), <strong>Well Informed</strong> <br/><br/><strong>Combat Stats</strong><br/><strong>BaB:</strong> +3, +6 melee, +10 baton<br/><strong>Grapple:</strong> ?;<br/><strong>Damage:</strong> +0 melee, +2 baton;<br/><strong>BdB:</strong>  +3 (+9 w/ dodge bonus);<br/><strong>Initiative:</strong> +8 (+4 Dex, +4 Improved Initiative)<br/><br/><strong>Saves:</strong><br/><strong>Toughness</strong> +3 (unarmed), +5 (w/ armored shirt), +9 (w/ defensive roll) <strong>Fortitude:</strong> +5 <strong>Reflex:</strong> +5 <strong>Will:</strong> +5<br/><br/><strong>Equipment</strong>: 7/10 ep<br/>Collapsible Baton <strong>Strike</strong> 2 [Feat: <strong>Subtle</strong>] (3 ep)<br/>Undercover Shirt <strong>Protection</strong> 2 [Feat: <strong>Subtle</strong> (3 ep)<br/><strong>Smart Phone</strong><br/><br/><br/><strong>Total:</strong> 150:  <strong>Attributes:</strong>32,  <strong>Combat:</strong> 18 , <strong>Skills:</strong>26,  <strong>Feats:</strong>36,  <strong>Powers:</strong> 38<br/><br/>Abilities 32 + Skills 26 + Feats 36 + Combat 12 + Saves 6 + Powers: 38 = 150<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>