I don't know enough about Mage to comment on the mechanics. Like her Willpower looks high, but there could just be a Mage thing that gives you extra WP. So I dunno.<br/><br/>But I feel like everyone who posts a character should get some kind of feedback from the other players, so here goes:<br/><br/>1. You said she's seen some strange stuff in the places she was acting as security guard for. Has she ever guarded anyplace that she now knows for a fact is a front for something else? Like, secret passages that a non-Mage wouldn't have perceived, a situation where the boss specifically told her to ignore specified unusual activity, etc.<br/><br/>2. I can see she has Order Status so she isn't a total recluse. But has she been less reserved as part of Mage society than she was in mundane society?<br/><br/>3. How separate are her identities? Does she have a different name she uses when she's Masqued? Different friends? I suspect she's undergone some wardrobe changes. Does she have clothes (or phones, or other things) that "belong" to one identity and not the other?