TUP<br/><br/>It's all very interesting and involving so far, and you've strung along the mystery of the nature of the island and its curse well. The Saurians are well fleshed-out, with Kelcis's reptilian mindset making for quite a tense and involving encounter. Anthropological (or<em>sauro</em>logical) detail always makes for interesting reading and, though my character is no scholar, the historical and cultural digressions give big flavour to the setting. I can't speak for sexual content, since this hasn't popped up with Eshalu on a GM/PC basis, but so far the pacing has been good.<br/><br/>My only suggestion at this stage (others may occur to me later) is that the party would, even to Saurians, let alone humans, seem to be quite strange in its composition (noblewoman, scholar, high elf, wild elf). I'd expect the group to draw greater attention for its composition, together with the fact that they are crashing together through the wilds of Dra Sirdu.