All right, Keyotess-- as I said, I really liked the character.<br/><br/>1.  Could you explain her high Dex and Cha?  I don't mind them, I just wanna know.  With a 20 Cha, she is among the most beautiful and captivating women on the face of the planet.<br/><br/>2.  I love her skills, and this is the type of character that I just LOVE to run.  A beautiful dame that's just brimming with talent!  However, the way you had it before was a little confusing, so I hope I've cleared it all up.  The character has a lot of skill points, so I am just gonna take your word for it that she has 26 points in them.<br/><br/>3.  As to her feats... ugh, WHAT.  A.  BABE!  I just want to throw henchmen her way so she can fuck em' up!  I loved what you did there.<br/><br/>4.  Your powers are hard to read, though.  I don't know where you're putting points and where you're getting drawbacks.  I tried to go through it, but it was difficult to simplify.  I honestly couldn't make heads or tails of what you were doing.  This area needs to be fixed.  Please look at the sheets I've done for Kathadon and Hatless to get an idea of what I'm looking for.<br/><br/><strong>Abilities</strong><br/><strong>STR: </strong>10 [+0];<strong>DEX:</strong>18 [+4];<strong>CON:</strong>16 [+3];<strong>INT:</strong>14 [+2];<strong>WIS: </strong>14 [+2];<strong>CHA:</strong>20 [+5]<br/><br/><strong>Skills:</strong><br/><strong>Acrobatics </strong>6 [+10];<strong>Bluff</strong>1 [+6];<strong>Climb</strong>4 [+4];<strong>Computers</strong>2 [+4];<strong>Concentration</strong>5 [+8];<strong>Diplomacy</strong>1 [+6];<strong>Disable Device</strong>2 [+4];<strong>Disguise</strong>5 [+10];<strong>Drive</strong>2 [+6];<strong>Escape Artist</strong>3 [+7];<strong>Gather Info</strong>4 [+9];<strong>Intimidation</strong>2 [+7];<strong>Investigate</strong>2 [+4];<strong>Medicine</strong>2 [+4];<strong>Notice</strong>6 [+9];<strong>Profession:</strong>6 [+8];<strong>Sleight of Hand</strong>2 [+4];<strong>Knowledge</strong>(Art) 7  [+9];<strong>Knowledge</strong>(Pop Culture) 4 [+6];<strong>Perform</strong>(singing) 7 [+12];<strong>Perform</strong>(dancing) 7 [+12];<strong>Perform</strong>(acting) 7 [+12];<strong>Search</strong>6 [+9];<strong>Sense Motive</strong>6 [+9];<strong>Stealth</strong>4 [+8];<strong>Survival</strong>2 [+5];<strong>Swim</strong>3 [+3]<br/><br/><strong>Feats:</strong><br/><strong>All out Attack</strong>,<strong>Attractive</strong>2,<strong>Attack Bonus</strong>(Melee) 3,<strong>Attack Specialization</strong>(Baton) 2,<strong>Blind Fighting</strong>,<strong>Chokehold</strong>,<strong>Defensive Attack</strong>,<strong>Defensive Roll</strong>4,<strong>Distract</strong>,<strong>Dodge Bonus</strong>6,<strong>Equipment</strong>2,<strong>Elusive Target</strong>,<strong>Improved Disarm</strong>,<strong>Improved Initiative</strong>,<strong>Improved Throw</strong>,<strong>Improved Trip</strong>,<strong>Power Attack</strong>,<strong>Prone Fighting</strong>,<strong>Skill Mastery</strong>(Acrobatics, Acting, Singing, Dancing),<strong>Stunning Attack</strong>,<strong>Takedown</strong>,<strong>Uncanny Dodge</strong>(Auditory),<strong>Well Informed</strong><br/><br/><strong>Combat Stats</strong><br/><strong>BaB:</strong>+3, +6 melee, +10 baton<br/><strong>Grapple:</strong>?;<br/><strong>Damage:</strong>+0 melee, +2 baton;<br/><strong>BdB:</strong>+3 (+9 w/ dodge bonus);<br/><strong>Initiative:</strong>+8 (+4 Dex, +4 Improved Initiative)<br/><br/><strong>Saves:</strong><br/><strong>Toughness</strong>+3 (unarmed), +5 (w/ armored shirt), +9 (w/ defensive roll)<strong>Fortitude:</strong>+5<strong>Reflex:</strong>+5<strong>Will:</strong>+5<br/><br/><strong>Equipment</strong>: 7/10 ep<br/>Collapsible Baton<strong>Strike</strong>2 [Feat:<strong>Subtle</strong>] (3 ep)<br/>Undercover Shirt<strong>Protection</strong>2 [Feat:<strong>Subtle</strong>(3 ep)<br/><strong>Smart Phone</strong><br/><br/><br/><strong>Total:</strong>150:<strong>Attributes:</strong>32,<strong>Combat:</strong>18 ,<strong>Skills:</strong>26,<strong>Feats:</strong>36,<strong>Powers:</strong>38<br/><br/>Abilities 32 + Skills 26 + Feats 36 + Combat 12 + Saves 6 +<br/>