I will let everyone else offer their thoughts on your character, but it looks fine to me, Muse! If you want, the Plathinium War Gear could be a two-refresh extra (bringing you down to your minimum of 1 refresh). They're in chapter 11 of the Fate core. I'd encourage everyone to look at them, in case they look attractive. Extras are the general category used for powers, magical equipment, and so on not covered by the innate skills of stunts.<br/><br/>Also, everyone should remember that Fate is fairly flexible, as am I, in terms of game play. If in the first couple of weeks, you feel that you dislike something about your character, feel free to ask me about changing it around. I might be reluctant if you've been using it very heavily and bested several antagonists with it, but in general, I'll try to be pretty amenable.<br/><br/>I'm still sort of working on what all you guys will be exploring, but there should be plenty of time to get to know people who you don't share backstory with. It would be nice if we could get everything squared in a day or two, however. We now have everyone, and I personally would love to play!