Scribbles> It seems fine the way it is.<br/><br/>The reason Nazhun mentioned your family name, is because your character bio states that your family gave you up for apprenticeship after you broke the last straw, so to say. I imagine they won't be too happy if Erin would screw up the apprenticeship as well, hence the little reminder.<br/><br/>Nazhun didn't expect her to blindly accept the deal, despite his words saying otherwise. If you really heeded his words there and then, he would've taken Erin for a fool.<br/><br/>I'm imagining the whole "I'm upper class and you're not" aura she portrayed at the guards is something common for her, and even if she didn't portray it directly at Nazhun, it would quite certainly be something the wizard could've gotten annoyed over as the time passed by.<br/><br/>Giulianna> My apologies. I missed your last update to your own post, or at least somewhere after you told me you were going to change it, I somehow forgot to keep track of that. I'll work with your post, but do remind that your character's been in the city for the better part of two years, and the pay for apprentice should easily cover whatever she earns in that sleezehole.