i suppose I started it messed up by not weaving enough of our characters into it.<br/><br/>Chula got that part right, even if the sudden introduction of new elements made it look like the story was going to fly in a million diferent directions instead of ever coming near accomplishing it's goal.<br/><br/>(And Kirby's contribution seemed to have gotten missed by everyone but CHula.  I missed it, but read it as we had two different ways to continue the story and asked Blinkin to choose one.)