Story is amyeuuuuuses, yes.<br/><br/>Revision proposals on Charms:<strong>Bulwark of Many</strong>'s first purchase allows (Dexterity+1) targets to be protected by Defend Other, possible repurchase to increase to (Dexterity + 3), upgrading the same sort of way that Iron Whirlwind does.<strong>Guardian in Five Directions</strong>looks good for now.<strong>Glorious Guardian Star</strong>feels like an Essence 4 charm (though that particular point isn't really significant in this game) and smells like it should either be a Simple Charm that offers a many-targetted Defend Other, or if it stays Reflexive should have an additional cost of 1wp.<br/><br/>Purchases are, subsequently, legit!