I just finished reading through it, and I'm liking a lot of things about it as well. If we do use it, I'd probably remake Mephis as a member of the Concubi race from it, though she'd still have the same backstory otherwise. I'd probably also see if I could have her afflicted with that Blowjob Mastery curse, partly because it's fitting for her and partly because it leans into some of my interests as well. x3