I've done some edits myself, under the expectation that Atroxia will be changing her 'stinks of offal' to 'stinks of alcohol' or some similar remark. If these edits don't satisfy, let me know and I'm happy to do more to keep things smooth.<br/><br/>Post directly after the 'Offal' comment: (https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=229860.msg11320042#msg11320042) I remove any verbal retort to Atroxia in an effort to remove any dismissal of Atroxia there. I also toned down the language in his comment about 'pets' not being involved -- so that he still cuts off the Forbidden One (as his reaction is dependent on that), but the comment is direct -- keeping the rudeness only in the interruption.<br/><br/>Post where shit gets real: (https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=229860.msg11331234#msg11331234) I removed the last three paragraphs responding to the Forbidden One, and calling out Atroxia, entirely. Added a bit to the first paragraph about Vholdran putting the Pact wording up on his little holographic display.<br/><br/>Idle question: There is an effect stopping us from teleporting IN to the Castle, is there anything keeping us from teleporting out?