Can anyone give me some feedback on wether or not this works?  Or will fit with the group well?<br/><br/><br/>Name:      Erianthe<br/>Race:         Cloud Walker<br/>Height:      7’7”<br/>Weight:      363lbs<br/>Measures:      40” 32” 42” D<br/>Skin:         Azure<br/>Hair:         Silver<br/>Eyes:         Starscape<br/><br/>High Concept:    Cloud Walker Knight Errant<br/>Trouble:      Lost girl.<br/>First Adventure:   Paladin of Thunder<br/><br/>Great:<br/>--Physique<br/>Good:<br/>--Athletics<br/>--Fighting<br/>Fair:<br/>--Notice<br/>--Storm Calling<br/>--Will<br/>Average:<br/>--Contacts<br/>--Empathy<br/>--Lore<br/>--Resources<br/><br/>Refresh:  2<br/><br/>Stunt:<br/>--Equipment:  Plathinium War Gear (Effect:  ???)<br/><br/><br/>History:<br/>High Concept:<br/>Erianthe was born to a clan of spiritual nomads standing in a range of eight to nine feet tall with slender builds proportionate to elves.  Though not much lighter than they look, water vapor will hold them up just as well as solid earth, and when they fall, they tend to drift unhurt to the next cloud, or the ground.  They also have a natural knack for the Storm of Thunder.<br/><br/>Trouble:<br/>When Erianthe was still a little girl, her clan was assailed by forces she does not remember.  Her mother cast her over the edge of a high cloud rather than allow her to be slain or captured.  She was taken in by the church of a wise and honorable goddess of war and storms—Agathea.<br/><br/>Raised among people half her size, Erianthe spent much of her youth in study, training, and prayer, preferring listening to talking.<br/><br/>First Adventure:<br/>Upon completing the training for her order, she undertook a loan journey into dangerous mountains to retrieve meteoric ore of the holy metal Plathinum.  She faced a variety of challenges, pushing her athletic puissance, combat skills, and faith to the limit.  She found a fallen star of the holy metal in the horde of a wyvern.  Forced to battle with this toxic creature, she drove her spear into it’s back but missed its heart.  Deprived of her weapon, Erianthe called out to Agathea for aid.  The goddess opened her heart to the Storm, and she hammered a bolt of lighting into the monster through the spear, cooking it’s heart.<br/><br/>Being almost eight feet tall, Erianthe found there was only sufficient plathinium in a fallen star to forge a halberd, armored corset, and greaves.<br/><br/>