Going to try to catch up a bit, sorry if I miss something, let me know and I'll quickly add it!<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=337699.msg16032453#msg16032453">Quote from: pdragon on 16-11-2021, 01:13:00</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Here's my go at the territory stuff.<br/><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">territory</div><div class="spoiler_body"><strong>Your Territory</strong><br/>Your territory, at default, is a couple of blocks of slightly disreputable city (trouble <em>crime</em>). Along with you, you have a crew of a handful of relatively loyal roughs and employees who can manage day-to-day issues and basic enforcement.<br/><br/>It is located in the <strong>Red Lamp District</strong> district, famous for it's <strong>hookers</strong> and <strong>drugs</strong>.<br/><br/>The base of your territory is located in <strong>The Chocolate Star Brothel</strong>.<br/><br/>Each of you may select a feature or a business that exists in your territory:<br/><ul class="bbc_list"><li><strong>Business:</strong> There is a business in your territory that you and the faction manage. On each faction turn, your faction gains 2d6 coins. This may be selected more than once.</li></ul><br/><br/>Additionally, we want to learn a little bit about the people and factions that surround your territory. Each player may (optionally) select either:<br/><ul class="bbc_list"><li>1 Friend/Lover and 1 Enemy</li></ul><br/><strong>Friend: </strong><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Pecky Becky</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/c5xqVQw.png)(https://i.imgur.com/FZNzY5A.jpg)</div></div> a member of <div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">The Flock</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/Fd7q0zR.png)(https://i.imgur.com/qT1YBLZ.png)(https://i.imgur.com/gxQno7t.png)(https://i.imgur.com/pM2B4Bp.jpg)(https://i.imgur.com/iojVHwR.jpg)</div></div> a gang that deals in potions, poisons, drugs, and other questionable alchemic substances. They've also been known to do hit work as well for a price. Becky is a trusted contact that Ophelia uses to conduct any business she may have with the gang, such as buying contraceptive potions and various drugs the brothel offers as part of their "refreshments".<br/><br/><strong>Enemy:</strong> <div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Victoria Faithshield</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/aiL3JAI.jpg?1)</div></div> a devout cleric of the church. Several years ago Ophelia hired her sister <div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Amelia</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/80VUjvp.jpg)</div></div> as a prostitute, and Victoria has held a grudge against her ever since, not just for whoring out her sister, but also for the blasphemous outfits she wears while doing so. Her indignation has only grown as she's started to suspect Ophelia is a blood sucking vampire. <br/><br/><br/><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Chocolate Star Brothel Images</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/0pJYVJG.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/UdRtuwV.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/4c8Px1e.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/7ttrt9E.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/as86Jkd.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/yPUGnnC.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/6hrszbK.jpg)</div></div><br/>Also as a little quirk, since silver is one of Ophelia's weaknesses, the brothel only deals in gold and copper coins, no silver coins allowed!<br/></div></div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>As with the others, I'm good with the choccy star being the hideout, I'll copy-paste some stuff from this over to my additions.<br/><br/><strong>Your Territory</strong><br/>Your territory, at default, is a couple of blocks of slightly disreputable city (trouble<em>crime</em>). Along with you, you have a crew of a handful of relatively loyal roughs and employees who can manage day-to-day issues and basic enforcement.<br/><br/>It is located in the<strong>Red Lamp District</strong>district, famous for it's<strong>hookers</strong>and<strong>drugs</strong>.<br/><br/>The base of your territory is located in<strong>The Chocolate Star Brothel</strong>.<br/><br/>Each of you may select a feature or a business that exists in your territory:<br/><ul class="bbc_list"><li><strong>Library:</strong> Library: You have access to a large stockpile of information. When you have access to the library, take +1 to your Spout Lore moves.<br/>Hidden within the alleyways of the Red Lamp District, <div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Cartographer Cecilia</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/jVDjcd0.png)</div></div> has set up what is affectionately known as the underground library. Though she'd normally charge for her services, having the protection of your faction she has agreed to lend her services free of charge. <br/></li></ul><br/><br/>Additionally, we want to learn a little bit about the people and factions that surround your territory. Each player may (optionally) select either:<br/><ul class="bbc_list"><li>1 Friend/Lover and 1 Enemy</li></ul><br/><strong>Friend: </strong><br/><br/><strong>Enemy:</strong><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Marvin Blake</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/k8WZxrZ.png)</div></div>a rival gangster and the one who kept an iron grip on Malin's fathers debts. Working out of Anchor Lane, a row of seedy taverns lined along the docks in the western district, around southgate. Earning well from rigged gambling, those who fail to settle their debts are forced to do favors for his crew of bandits, mostly comprised of sailors and otherwise rough-cut men.<br/><br/><br/><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Chocolate Star Brothel Images</div><div class="spoiler_body">(https://i.imgur.com/0pJYVJG.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/UdRtuwV.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/4c8Px1e.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/7ttrt9E.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/as86Jkd.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/yPUGnnC.jpg)<br/>(https://i.imgur.com/6hrszbK.jpg)</div></div><br/>Also as a little quirk, since silver is one of Ophelia's weaknesses, the brothel only deals in gold and copper coins, no silver coins allowed!<br/><br/><hr/><hr/><br/>I think it'd be an interesting idea if, assuming Pdragon is alright with it, having Ms. Victoria Faithshield as a designated friend of Malin, creating a bit of an interesting conflict of interest.<br/>Also figured we could use a library given most of our characters have barely enough intelligence to talk coherently :^)<br/><br/><br/><br/><strong>Pandora’s</strong>misguided behavior endangers their very soul!<br/>_______ has stood by me in battle and can be trusted completely.<br/>I respect the beliefs of<strong>Ithica</strong>but hope they will someday see the true way.<br/>_______ is a brave soul, I have much to learn from them.<br/><br/>I think for Ophelia, maybe altering one of the bonds, perhaps something like;<br/>My friends are<strong>Ophelia's</strong>enemies, it's my duty to keep them from clashing.<br/><br/>As for Radja, either of the open bonds could work well, but I rather like the brave soul one for her, and I think it fits well given her personality and nature.