Looks fine to me Kath.  :D  I like it.  Some grammar issues, but nothing serious, although it'd have taken her about a week to get to Emon from Syngorn probably, although depending on the animal form she used to get there, (which you didn't specify that I saw at least, kinda appreciate if ya did), that time would be cut considerably.  Just making sure we're understood since, despite what some people have said, there IS travel time between the various cities and such.  And there WILL be travel time to consider anytime there's a potential for a night time ambush, just so we're all clear.  :P