<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=100680.msg4468375#msg4468375">Quote from: Ryuka Tana on 06-04-2011, 02:28:53</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">"Again, I have nothing to add, i read your post, and I still feel that subtext implies he is ready... The stuff below my post tells you what my future intentions consist of as far as the information that I have. I'm not giving a Facebook status, even if I added in his emotional response, it wouldn't add more sentence. I would say, 'he cast his spell with steely resolve', or 'he drew his bow and stared down the field in anticipation'. You want me to add something like that, fine, but then don't give me an arbitrary sentence count."<br/><br/>"I will add a simple extension to give a sense of emotion that I feel is implied in subtext, that's fine. I agree to disagree, that is the best you'll get, because I don't (and won't) feel that I haven't said what needed to be said until you provide me with the results of my Fort save (at the very least). I am not angry, or upset, or doing anything but making a point. I ended my post with the solutions to the problem, of which I have no problem with any of them. I will adjust my post, and it will be left as I adjust it, because I have no desire to subjugate my own play (or writing) style consistently in the future. If you are dissatisfied with it (even given whatever response I may make after the events unfold), I will leave if you want. I don't want to make this an actual argument, but I will if you wish to try to force me to play against my style."<br/><br/>"I take no offense to the idea that maybe you don't like my style, so let's not make it anything more than that. I'll say once more, with no malice or anger, I will edit my post. If you dislike it, decide if you dislike it enough to ask me to leave, and let us leave it at that."<br/><br/>"If Yorubi has a problem with my commenting on her grammar, I would thank her to tell me that. She did not ask for your defense any more than she asked for my criticism. I think she can fight her own battles (if she even sees it that way). I, however, meant only to help her notice something, not to sling insults."<br/><br/>"I pointed out and issue with your grammar, which is objective. I can say, definitively, that your grammar is incorrect. You cannot, however, objectively comment on my style of writing. You can say whether YOU like it or not, but not whether or not it is correct. Don't compare objectivity to subjectivity, when they are definitely not the same."<br/><br/>"I disagree with the assessment that there is something wrong with the post, you can insist that there is a million times, but you will never be 'right', only insistent. However, I can say, for sure, that 'i and he' is not correct, whereas 'he and I' is correct (I'm specifically choosing to use an unrelated piece of grammar, because I am intending this time not to try to use previous grammar issues as an insult)."<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>No one has attacked you. As a GM it is my job to mediate, referee, and moderate the players. Not everyone gets along, this counts both OOC and IC. I've told you already to add more. All you are doing now is being insulting. Your signature does not conclude your feelings toward this, because you are simply brushing off our comments. Your thoughts on her grammar without taking the same time to accept critique on your writing is simply insulting. You've made run on sentences, used commas in places of colons and semi-colons, as well as use inappropriate dialog. You gave your opinions without being asked them, and yes I say opinions and not facts because as of the time line in this roleplay, many people are uneducated and don't have your characters 22 intelligence. This may be how they act toward it, and this just adds more fun.<br/><br/>I stated once I hadn't asked people to leave. You are doing nothing at this point but be unbudging. I didn't ask you to flex your writing style, I simply asked you to give more effort and abide by my initial posting rules. You are being problematic at this point, and now I'll ask you to either calm down and abide by rules or leave. This is the last I'll say of it.<br/><br/>Feel free to ignore his post, as he has had two chances now to simply fix it and not argue. He has chosen not to do such, so we will continue on. I'm not gonna slow down things for people who just want to debate about small things instead of simply listen to the GM and have some fun.