Ok, looking through a few other things; Brandon, you should have one less feat, unless I missed something. Three at first level (Base feat, one for being human, and one for being a Warrior), one at 2 (bonus), one at 3 (standard), one at 5 (bonus), and one at 6 (standard). One too many bonus feats. Since you only bought your one bonus Shikai ability, despite listing Expanded Shikai x2, I'll just edit out the x2, and everything will be correct there. Assuming I'm not misreading. Also, I need you to pick which save is your good save, and which is your bad, so I can actually list your saving throws, there.<br/><br/>Hunter, still need one more Shikai ability, since you have 2.