Since you brought it up, out of curiosity I read a little bit of it. Honestly I'm fine with tropes, cliches etc... I have no real pet peeves as it were. Once of the back and forth's between Healergirl and another poster brought up verisimilitude. That for me is the only thing. You want all orcs to be nothing but evil and all elves to be haughty and humans to be noble, fine with me. It is just a matter of consistency. If you want things to be more complex, great! I'm adaptable. ^_^<br/><br/>My only issue is that "complexity" quickly turns into "counter-culture preachy". And I don't like dark dark settings. Although I've come to realize that my personal view of dark doesn't quite seem to match up with others. For many it seems rather binary, either it is all Disney Princesses or utter blackness. I prefer a color slide on my story's color thank you very much.<br/><br/>ANYWAY... I'm rambling. The point is, I think everything is fine so far ^_^