Morgan looks good, with a few minor issues.<br/><br/>Ego stress should only go up to 4.<br/><br/>Morph Stunt should list which stunt you're paying for. The ones you don't have Refresh spent on are still present in your morph, but don't provide mechanical bonuses (so, if you don't pay Refresh for the Stealth stunt, you can still be all semi invisible, but you don't get a +2 to your rolls for it). You can swap which one is 'active' during downtime.<br/><br/>There are some minor typos.<br/><br/><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Typos</div><div class="spoiler_body">Enhanced Vision (Infrared/UV)'<br/>Enhanced Vision (Infrared/UV)<br/><br/>MORRIGAN was exceptionally skilled at detecting X-Risks and Xeno-Contact.<br/>This is weirdly written; 'skill at pattern recognition, forecasting, and TITAN research' is probably better way of phrasing it.<br/><br/>asetic lifestyle <br/>ascetic<br/><br/>Grok description cuts off mid sentence.<br/></div></div><br/><br/>When you come up with a way to insert them into the game, let me know and I'll set up your entrance. The group can probably help out if you're stumped.<br/><br/><hr/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=243891.msg12144673#msg12144673">Quote from: Kunoichi on 11-03-2016, 07:03:08</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Ah, so I can just spend a fate point and use my action to stop the disassembler swarm from destroying all the data, then?  I imagine either Impulsive Femme Fatale or Wild Artificial could be good aspects I'd use to justify it, since I've already been roleplaying Antimony as having been faking how into the sex she was getting while remaining more acutely aware of her surroundings than she at first appeared.<br/><br/>Would I be able to have her disconnect from the tacnet at the same time?  I'm kinda suspecting it's been compromised...<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>That sounds reasonable.<br/><br/>Disconnecting from the tacnet is basically a 'free action'; doing stuff via mesh inserts is basically thinking it and having it happen. More complex stuff (doing things to other people's stuff over the mesh) are actions in of themselves, so you'll need some excuse as to why you can do multiple things.