I never really audited anyone's sheets, because it's tedious and boring.  But I noticed a flaw in your character that needs to be fixed, Virgil.<br/><br/>You use the adopted trait to pick up a racial trait.  The adopted trait only allows you to pick up race traits.  There is a difference between racial traits and race traits.  I will admit that it's a sneaky way of trying to get a feat in exchange for a trait, but you will have to change some things around for now.<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">You were adopted and raised by someone not of your race, and raised in a society not your own.<br/><br/>Benefit: As a result, you picked up a race trait from your adoptive parents and society, and may immediately select a race trait from your adoptive parents’ race.</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>And:<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Adaptable Flatterer (Fetchling)<br/>Adrift (Aasimar)<br/>Adroit (Kasatha)<br/>Advantageous Distraction (Goblin)<br/>Adventurous Explorer<br/>Aerial Observer (Sylph)<br/>Alchemical Breath (Kobold, Green-Scaled)<br/>Almost Human (Half-Orc)<br/>Among Humans (Kitsune)<br/>Animal Friend (Gnome)<br/>Animalistic Affliction<br/>Anticipate Evil (Tiefling)<br/>Arcane Dabbler (Elf)<br/>Arcane Prodigy (Drow)<br/>Arcane Student<br/>Arms Master (Tiefling)<br/>Artistic Dilettante<br/>Aspiring Bard (Human)<br/>Assimilated Native<br/>Auspicious Tattoo<br/>Balloon Headed (Goblin)<br/>Bauble Fascination (Ratfolk)<br/>Beast Bully (Tiefling)<br/>Bent Body (Tiefling)<br/>Big Boned (Tiefling)<br/>Big Ears (Goblin)<br/>Bitter Heart (Changeling)<br/>Blade Bravado<br/>Blessing of Darkness (Tiefling)<br/>Blood Algorithm (Android)<br/>Blood of Dragons<br/>Blood Stalker (Tiefling)<br/>Boar Resilience (Wereboar-kin)<br/>Bog Scamp (Kobold, Black-Scaled)<br/>Born Damned (Tiefling)<br/>Born in the Light (Dhampir)<br/>Born to the Water<br/>Bouncy (Goblin)<br/>Bralani's Step (Aasimar)<br/>Bred for War<br/>Brewmaster (Dwarf)<br/>Brute (Half-Orc)<br/>Buried Anxiety (Tiefling)<br/>Burnished Skin (Aasimar)<br/>Business Venturer (Ratfolk)<br/>Businessman (Gnome)<br/>Canopy Prowler (Catfolk)<br/>Caravan Drover (Half-orc)<br/>Carefully Hidden (Human)<br/>Carnation Scales (Kobold)<br/>Celestial Community (Racial, Aasimar)<br/>Celestial Tracker (Aasimar)<br/>Cellular Match<br/>Cellular Match (Android)<br/>Centaur Vengeance (Centaur)<br/>Chain Master (Tiefling)<br/>Child of Platinum (Dwarf)<br/>Clearheaded (Dwarf)<br/>Clergy Member (Aasimar)<br/>Cold Fortitude (Kobold, White-Scaled)<br/>Colonial Entitlement<br/>Colonial Sympathizer<br/>Color Thief (Goblin)<br/>Creative Manipulator (Changeling)<br/>Creative Reality (Racial, Ganzi)<br/>Crocodile Swim (Werecrocodile-kin)<br/>Cruel Rager (Half-orc)<br/>Curse in the Blood (Skinwalker)<br/>Dark Magic Affinity (Tiefling)<br/>Deadly Rush (Tiefling)<br/>Deathkeeper (Human)<br/>Deathtouched (Bloodline)<br/>Death’s Deputy (Tiefling)<br/>Deep Marker (Dwarf)<br/>Destined Pioneer (Human)<br/>Dilettante Artist (Elf)<br/>Divine the Mystery (Human)<br/>Dog-Sniff-Hate (Goblin)<br/>Dowsing (Suli)<br/>Draconic Echo (Kobold, Blue-Scaled)<br/>Draconic Lineage (Race)<br/>Dualborn (Suli)<br/>Durable Change (Werebear-kin)<br/>Earthsense (Oread)<br/>Elaborate Trapper (Kobold, Blue-Scaled)<br/>Elven Reflexes (Half-Elf)<br/>Elven Serenity (Half-Elf raised by Elves)<br/>Enduring Heritage (Tiefling)<br/>Enlightened Warrior (Aasimar)<br/>Ethical Leader (Aasimar)<br/>Ever Home<br/>Ever Wary (Tiefling)<br/>Expert Distractor (Ifrit)<br/>Eyes of the Sun (Human)<br/>Failed Apprentice (Half-Elf)<br/>Faith Healer (Aasimar)<br/>Family Connections (Tiefling)<br/>Fanatic (Human)<br/>Feline Instinct (Weretiger or Weretiger-kin)<br/>Fiend Blood (Bloodline)<br/>Fiendish Sniper (Tiefling)<br/>Fiery Glare (Ifrit)<br/>Fight with the Flock (Werebat or Werebat-kin)<br/>Final Embrace (Dhampir)<br/>Finish the Fight (Half-Orc raised by Orcs)<br/>Fire-Tongued (Kobold, Red-Scaled)<br/>Firebug (Kobold, Red-Scaled)<br/>Flair for Destruction (Tiefling)<br/>Following Breeze (Sylph)<br/>Forest Senses (Gnome)<br/>Forlorn (Elf)<br/>Foul Belch (Goblin)<br/>Freed Slave (Halfling)<br/>Freedom Fighter (Halfling)<br/>Friendless (Tiefling)<br/>Frost Spitter (Kobold, White-Scaled)<br/>Genie Blood (Human)<br/>Glib Barrister<br/>Goblin Foolhardiness (Goblin)<br/>God Scorn (Tiefling)<br/>Golden Scales (Kobold)<br/>Goldsniffer (Dwarf)<br/>Good Influence (Aasimar)<br/>Grounded (Dwarf)<br/>Half-Forgotten Secrets (Dhampir)<br/>Harrow Born<br/>Harrow Chosen (Human)<br/>Heat Fortitude (Kobold, Red-Scaled)<br/>Helpful (Halfling)<br/>Historian (Human)<br/>Horse Lord<br/>Ice Walker<br/>Icy Mementos (Kobold, White-Scaled)<br/>Illusion Obsession (Gnome)<br/>Inciter (Tiefling)<br/>Industrious (Gnome)<br/>Infernal Influence (Human)<br/>Inheritor<br/>Inheritor (Gillman)<br/>Innocent (Aasimar)<br/>Inquisitive Banterer (Catfolk)<br/>Instant Friendship (Suli)<br/>Inured to Disease (Wererat-kin)<br/>Iron Control (Half-Orc raised by Humans)<br/>Keeper of the Ancestral Scrolls<br/>Kobold Faith (Kobold)<br/>Kobold Herbalist (Kobold, Green-Scaled)<br/>Lantern Spirit (Aasimar)<br/>Lasting Ferociousness (Half-orc)<br/>Latent Psion (Human)<br/>Legacy of Sand (Half-Orc)<br/>Lettered (Halfling)<br/>Lightning-Blessed (Kobold, Blue-Scaled)<br/>Lillend's Harp (Aasimar)<br/>Linguistic Genius (Dhampir)<br/>Liquid-Tongued (Kobold, Blue-Scaled)<br/>Lycanthropic Bloodlust (Werewolf-kin)<br/>Magic in the Blood (Changeling)<br/>Malign Instrument (Tiefling)<br/>Marid's Fury (Undine)<br/>Marked by Nature’s Magic (Skinwalker)<br/>Market Rat<br/>Martyr's Blood (Aasimar)<br/>Master of the Sudden Strike<br/>Masterful Demeanor (Human)<br/>Mastery of Form (Skinwalker)<br/>Militant Merchant (Dwarf)<br/>Mind Trapper (Dhampir)<br/>Motherless (Tiefling)<br/>Nanite Revival (Android)<br/>Neutralizing Gut (Race, Tiefling)<br/>Nine-Tailed Scion (Kitsune)<br/>Nomadic<br/>Numerological Gift (Dhampir)<br/>Old Before Your Time (Dhampir)<br/>Ooze Defense (Kobold, Black-Scaled)<br/>Open Hand and Mind<br/>Operatic<br/>Outcast (Half-Orc)<br/>Pain Artist (Tiefling)<br/>Pearl Diver (Half-elf)<br/>Perfect Servant (Halfling)<br/>Persuasive (Elf)<br/>Planar Negotiator (Aasimar)<br/>Planetar's Visions (Aasimar)<br/>Poisonous Upbringing (Drow)<br/>Practiced Impression (Suli)<br/>Pragmatic Polytheist (Human)<br/>Prankster (Gnome)<br/>Prayer Breaker (Tiefling)<br/>Precision Hearing (Werebat or Werebat-kin)<br/>Pride of the Diamond Empire (Human)<br/>Prideful Temper (Tiefling)<br/>Prolong Magic (Tiefling)<br/>Proud Tribesman<br/>Providential Passenger (Halfling)<br/>Purple Scales (Kobold)<br/>Pustular (Goblin)<br/>Pyromancer (Aasimar)<br/>Rapscallion (Gnome)<br/>Rat Squeeze (Wererat-kin)<br/>Relic Hunter (Human)<br/>Repel Sin (Tiefling)<br/>Repulsive (Tiefling)<br/>Reviving Rest (Werebear-kin)<br/>Rude Songs (Goblin)<br/>Ruthless (Dwarf)<br/>Sandy Ambush (Oread)<br/>Scamper (Race, Ratfolk)<br/>Scholar of Ruins (Human)<br/>Scrapper (Half-Orc)<br/>Scrounger (Halfling)<br/>Seeker of Brightness (Elf)<br/>Selective Health (Aasimar)<br/>Sensual Graces (Dhampir)<br/>Shadow Stabber (Tiefling)<br/>Shadow Stalker (Fetchling)<br/>Shared Curse (Werewolf-kin)<br/>Sharkchild (Wereshark-kin)<br/>Shield Bearer<br/>Shift the Blame (Tiefling)<br/>Shoreline Skirmisher (Wereshark-kin)<br/>Skater's Balance (Kobold, White-Scaled)<br/>Skilled Telepath (Lashunta)<br/>Slave Smuggler (Halfling)<br/>Slaver<br/>Slippery Step (Undine)<br/>Slithering Stride (Kobold, Green-Scaled)<br/>Smoke Resistant (Kobold, Red-Scaled)<br/>Snake Hater (Aasimar)<br/>Snap Ignition (Ifrit)<br/>Sneaky Swimmer (Kobold, Black-Scaled)<br/>Soul Eater (Tiefling)<br/>Speech of the Wilds (Aasimar)<br/>Spellcaster’s Anathema (Race, Dwarf)<br/>Sphinxfriend (Human)<br/>Spidery Climber (Kasatha)<br/>Spirits in the Stone (Human)<br/>Stargazer<br/>Statuesque (Oread)<br/>Stoic Dignity (Oread)<br/>Strength of Body (Wereboar-kin)<br/>Successful Shirker (Halfling)<br/>Suicidal (Tiefling)<br/>Superior Clutch (Tiefling)<br/>Superstitious<br/>Survivalist (Human)<br/>Tactile Telekinesis (Lashunta)<br/>Tattooed Mystic (Human)<br/>Tempter's Tongue (Tiefling)<br/>Terrifying Lunge (Werecrocodile-kin)<br/>Thoroughbred (Human)<br/>Thrall Spotter (Dhampir)<br/>Thunderborn (Sylph)<br/>Tiger's Claw (Weretiger or Weretiger-kin)<br/>Tongue of Many Towns<br/>Tough Skin (Tiefling)<br/>Toxophilite (Aasimar)<br/>Trade Talk (Half-elf raised by Humans)<br/>Trailblazer<br/>Transitional (Triaxian)<br/>Traumatic Shift (Skinwalker)<br/>Triaxian Dragonslayer (Triaxian)<br/>Trifler<br/>Tropical Botanist (Elf)<br/>Tunnel Fighter (Dwarf)<br/>Tusked<br/>Twilight Zeal (Tiefling)<br/>Ugly Swine (Goblin)<br/>Undead Slayer (Dhampir)<br/>Underling (Tiefling)<br/>Undine Loyalty (Undine)<br/>Unearth Secrets (Tiefling)<br/>Unflappable Arrogance (Ifrit)<br/>Unidentifiable Appeal (Dhampir)<br/>Vermin Wrangler (Gnome)<br/>Vile Kiss (Tiefling)<br/>Voice of Velvet<br/>Warrior of Old (Elf)<br/>Warsmith (Dwarf)<br/>Wary (Aasimar)<br/>Wasteland Hunter (Human)<br/>Weathered (Fetchling)<br/>Well-Informed (Halfling)<br/>Whiteout (Undine)<br/>Wild Domesticator (Half-elf)<br/>Wild Ferocity (Half-orc)<br/>Wild Shadow (Halfling)<br/>Wild Stride (Elf)<br/>Wind-Carried Voices (Sylph)<br/>World Traveler (Human)<br/>Youthful Mischief (Elf)<br/>Zest for Battle (Dwarf)</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>