Hikari:  I really only note one thing, since you're new.  Skills are the enemy.  Strip out that big skill list, and spent the points on attributes.  Having, maybe, one or two skills would be best.  I'd suggest cranking up her body and reducing the cost by taking a few levels of "not so strong" or something.  GURPS has this same problem, it's real easy to get fooled into taking lots of skills when you're better off just pumping the underlying attribute way up.