OOC<br/>Hi,<br/>I totally know what you are talking about. I feel like it is kind of just blah right now and we can definitely change things up a bit. Add a little bit of drama somewhere. We can make her hesitant about the future but she tries to hide it really well. Deep down she is really scared that things won't work out. She still loves him but she is really scared still.<br/><br/>What kind of hook do you think would be good for our scene? I think something with a lot of drama definitely needs to happen but I am just not sure what exactly that could be.<br/><br/>Ahhh yes that right I did forget about that? Should I change the times according to her time like if he sent it at 12:00 and she just checked it and replied put like 17:00?<br/><br/>AAA111