<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=168396.msg7886597#msg7886597">Quote from: guardtherealm on March 14, 2013, 11:25:19 pm</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I crawl out from the small cave I had been taking shelter in.  My whole body was on fire with the hunger.  The only blood I had were already dead animals, and their blood was foul.  Looking around, my senses are still heightened despite my terrible physical state.  I smell the animals around, smell dirt and night.  Grabbing my small satchel, I start toward the edge of the road, that I had stumbled up the day before.  But no travelers yet.  Creeping along the road, hidden by shadows, I walk without a destination, just hoping to drink.  "just one drink" I say aloud.  "one drink and I can think".  With my family dead, my lands burned.  There is nothing to return too.  But a life without purpose is a waste.  "just one drink, and you can think" I say again.  Then a smell.  Fire.  Smoke.  The burning in my body eases at the new smells.   I let my nose slowly lead me toward the smoke.  The smell grows stronger, but still no light is seen in the dark.   My feet carry me onward, the smell getting stronger. New smells are arriving.  Flowers, bread, blood..... Getting closer, a light appears faint in the distance. I slow my pace more, and take a wide path around the light, slowly getting closer to its source.....<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Should I switch from first person?