Ok, tough is one thing, but let's look at what you've got there from a realistic writing PoV. In the time it takes Blake to empty a clip (silenced, so you wouldn't hear more than a cough, and probably not that if you're fighting at the time), Sara manages to go out through a window, around a hill and to the main building.<br/><br/>Now, I think we may have gotten some wires crossed here. I took it from your writing to mean that the small building was set close by the large one, within the same compound, based on what you'd written. You didn't have Sara covering much ground.<br/><br/>What Blake expected to see was Sara finishing off the ghoul inside, as it wouldn't have taken long for him to deal with the ones outside .... a matter of seconds really.<br/><br/>You might want to look a little at how you're writing there. I recognise the * marks for actions, but when writing like this you don't really need to use those. It's enough to just describe the actions, and to put speech in between speech marks. For myself, I use italics to signify thoughts, as it changes the look of the text, so makes it that bit easier to set apart.