I wouldn't say you're looking stupid. You've said it yourself, you don't have much experience with this style, so I'm offering constructive criticism (I hope :) ).<br/><br/>Up til the present the two characters haven't met, so their actions would be occurring at roughly the same time. While Sara was wrestling with one ghoul inside the building, the others were still trying to get it, and that was where Blake found and killed them. It wouldn't have taken him more than maybe 20 or 30 seconds to move to the point he was looking in the window.<br/><br/>It's just a matter of syncing things up in your head, merging the two perspectives into one story, so you can post on from there.<br/><br/>When you post like this, there is no harm in overlapping time with the other persons. It doesn't have to continue on right from the point they left off, as that way you can put in your characters thoughts, feelings, perceptions of what has happened as well.<br/><br/>Writing a story with someone you've never written with before can be tricky. There's always going to be some degree of adjusting things, and talking through stuff like this helps build a better story. Generally it would be done separate from the story thread, but since this is all we presently have to work with, I'm putting it here.