Alrighty, I'll get to it. Keep in mind that none of this is a personal attack on you Muse, I'm just trying to undestand the character and get her to fit.<br/><br/><em>Often pulled back with a sword shaped hair pin that, when removed from the barette, becomes a full sized magically enhanced claymore, a gift from Anais.</em><br/><br/>This ability isn't on your sheet.<br/><br/>When did she awaken? At what point in her life, exactly?<br/><br/>You forgot Resonance, nature and demenor<br/><br/>And mages only get wonders, and pay in accordance to how much it would cost, sphere-wise. Not counting the shapeshifting ability, the sword is at least Wonder 2. It can be a fae treasure, but it still counts as a wonder CC wise. That's why they get such a broad background.<br/><br/>I still don't see anything that would justify Catalina a world champion in melee. A score of 3, maybe, 4 at most. You don't get that good in just 5 years, no matter your teacher. Is it really that important for your concept?<br/><br/>Please list your freebie spending, and answers to the survey.