<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=178680.msg8565814#msg8565814">Quote from: EndofDivine on July 13, 2013, 05:10:25 pm</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Well Demi, I poked around your introduction thread and I think I can give you some advice that might help. I'd say your biggest issue is that you aren't really selling yourself very well...you're just kinda answering their questions and that's it. They want to get to know you as a person not as just another person applying to their forums. Instead of just doing one line replies, add some flavor to it. Tell stories about yourself that relate to the question or explain in detail why you answered a certain way. Instead of saying "I would go to Sweden, because they have one of the lowest crime rates in the world" you could say something like "I would choose to go to Sweden. The people there are really interesting and the country has a very unique culture that you can't really find anywhere else. It's also a beautiful country- nothing is more beautiful to me than a snow covered forest." Just something like that to add some personality.<br/><br/>Anyway, I hope that can help you. I'm rooting for ya, Demi. Good luck and hope you're not waiting too much longer.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Thank you very much for the advice<br/>