Looks good Tyr, the only thing I hesitate on is the demon thing. Tentacles are not really a part of this world. That reeks of Cthulu (or however it is spelled) Demons can exist but are in another dimension and so extremely rare and not really viable here. It could be construed as an unequal advantage. You won't have any magic to start with. It is there, but you are unable to use it.<br/><br/>This part could be reworked to a simple corruption, maybe a demonic influence, but nothing that will manifest in here.<br/><br/>~ During an unsanctioned summoning, he evoked a demonic spirit that granted him an uncanny mastery of the magic schools, but planted a seed of corruption inside of him.<br/>~ As he performed magic, his corruption began to grow, causing his "thoughts" to become darker and more sinister.<br/>~ His first sexual experience his does not remember, as he blacked out and apparently raped a trio of fellow students with shadow-like tendrils as well as his penis. Realizing the potential danger within himself, he used his family's connections to whitewash the incident and transferred to a different school, one which was primarily Elven/Half Elven.<br/><br/><br/>The rest of it I like. Will wait for Muse's opinion.