<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=268456.msg13247075#msg13247075">Quote from: Capone on 03-06-2017, 17:01:10</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Got another post with Benny up.<br/><br/>Just want to make a note that, while I'm doing my best to tread carefully, some of Benny's interactions with Sarah may come off as uncomfortable. He will never be mean-spirited or malicious towards her, but I can imagine some might find his obvious discomfort offensive nonetheless. I'm trying to portray him realistically without being offensive, but if it ever seems to far <em>do not</em> be afraid to contact me and let me know so I can adjust or, if need be, make edits to a post.<br/><br/>I'm walking a fine line, I think, as everything about Benny in my mind causes me to love him because he's such a flawed character, but because of those flaws it's possible people will begin <em>hating</em> each time I post as him. Please, <em>please</em> feel free to give me feedback if he seems irredeemably awful. I want to try and make him at least somewhat sympathetic, such as his perspective on Jenna as revealed with the latest post, but... well, again, it's a fine line.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Hey sorry I missed this.<br/><br/>I think you're handling Benny rather well.  Sure he's a bit of a jerk,   but, point in fact I sort get where he's coming from.  It's hard to adjust things,  and well...  Sarah kind of turned things on his head.  I think the character is positively believable.  I mean in character the whole sort of end to the friendship weighs on her,   but,   ya know?  I don't expect her to ever actually hate him.  Depressed about the loss?  Sure,  but, eh, from time to time I think she'll keep poking him trying to let him know that they should still hang out.  Maybe not in the same ways,  but, she'd like to pass back into his circle of friends.<br/><br/>Just expect her to probably do it in a bitchy and or catty way.<br/><br/>I mean he's not even being particularly mean, just kind of a jerk.