All makes sense to me, in any event, and looks good. XD My main condition is that Doryn's Estate be a bit outside of the City itself, though he has some apartments that he stays in while he can't go back and forth, like when he's really caught up in a case or otherwise engaged in business. I picture Doryn's thing being a sort of... come into town, stay for a few days, head back out to his estate, stay there for a few days unless summoned or his presence is required, and so on. To and from Doryn's Estate, in otherwords, is a meaningful journey and probably the kind of thing that you can be ambushed while undertaking.<br/><br/>Hence him having, say, some kind of small residence in the city.<br/><br/>:-)<br/><br/>I'm going to have to think of my post for a bit, anyway, especially since Doryn is kind of off by himself doing his own thing in the next section. :-) If you'd like, you two are welcome to do another exchange of posts wherein Ethirdir and Hani get to know each other a bit more and engage in the sale of her stolen jewel. n' then I'll post more Doryn stuff after that...<br/><br/>...*hrms*.<br/><br/>Or I can type up a tiny tiny little bit that wraps up Doryn's part of the last scene, and sends him.. wherever.. and leave the larger "what's going on with Doryn now" bit for after the next exchange.<br/><br/>Just let me know what you think. XD<br/><br/><em>Isn't that demanding of screen-time when he doesn't strictly need it.</em>