Okay, two posts each so it's now a case of post where you see an opportunity...<br/><br/>After the openning scenes conclude, then we move to the next phase where (say) Amber is walking down a corridor, reading a book or something and Peter spots her, thinks she's Beryl and trots up, says "something like "Hey sweetie, want to meet me after practice tonight?" And Amber is like, "Do I know you? Get lost creep!"<br/><br/>I think we should hold off having the scene where Amber and Beryl get together and tell each other about their new boy/girl friend, and this creepy girl/boy who keeps coming on to them... We need to have that scene fairly near the middle of the story, after things get totally confusing for poor Peter and Sophie.<br/><br/>By the way, Prince, is Peter's alter-ego "Highlighter-Man"? *chuckles*