Yep, it looks good!  It makes sense to me that even a guy who has a lifetime of experience in rough situations would be pretty freaked out when his eyes suddenly start acting like he's staring into a floodlight.  Like, how do you even deal with that?<br/><br/>Also, I think Havel's just going to outlevel everyone at this rate.  That's what, three marks so far?  Havel knows what's up.<br/><br/>Also, I don't think I gave Queluna a second stat to highlight for Ambrosea, so let's go with<em>weird</em>.  Shit, I wonder who could use a Weird friend right now?  Does Havel know Ambrosea?