Just a couple minor things:<br/><br/>- I'll probably get sick of writing mech battles if I have to do it too often, so I'd prefer to only write in battles for Beth and not any of the NPCs I made up. Anyone is free to use the NPCs themselves of course.<br/><br/>- I saw the public service announcement as more of a commercial shoot than a rally, though I suppose there could be both (we could even just assume the commercial shoot went off without trouble and skip it). Also, if the date matters at all her message said it was in two days and she sent the message while Mira was on her date. She had her match the day before that.<br/><br/>If it is a rally open to the public, then all the other characters should feel free to show up.