<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=260005.msg12845255#msg12845255">Quote from: Cassandra LeMay on 17-12-2016, 00:47:25</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">All in all I like her. What I am not completely certain is how you square Hot-Blooded with Patient. Perhaps "hot-blooded" as one of her strongest aspects is a bit much? You could replace it with "high tolerance to alcohol" just for a fun quirk and to mention that again?<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Eh, I had it cause it's more 'anime' than 'passionate' or something would be. I kinda wanted something like that cause I tend to always RP calm, methodical characters, and I wanted someone who would make poor but interesting choices and drive the plot. Maybe 'Feisty'?<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Why did she develop this strong interest in fighter planes? Was a family member involved with the military? Did she grow up around a military base? If you say she just is this way that's okay, but perhaps it would be interesting to develop that part of her background a bit more?</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>That's a good point. I was going mostly with a) because they're cool and b) military is really the only option if you want to fly a space-jet. I can add more there on the next re-write.<br/>Oh, right. Are we on a colony or something? Want to know if I should try and incorporate the sister more or not. I'm not exactly clear on where we're set.<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Her rank: Given that you state that she isn't really all that suited to the military life, I am tempted to rule her a 2nd Lt. If you really want her to be a 1st Lt., that rank will probably be probationary and something she will have to work on keeping.</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>2nd Lt. is fine; only had her as 1st Lt. since it seemed like the default for her age/experience, and it seemed to be the equivalent of Army Enlisted Private/PFC/Specialist, which you seem to just get  for hanging around long enough and not fucking up too bad.<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">And don't worry about the "personality" part. Some people like to add it to a profile, some don't. As long as I get enough from the character profile to get a solid idea on a character's personality I am not worried if someone spelly it out in detail or not.</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Ok. ^^