No worries, Vel! Glad you are alright. I equate dangerous storms like that with tornadoes! Where are you, if you don't mind my asking? I am on the West Coast, and yes I was in the path of the eclipse. I got to experience it, Was really awesome!<br/><br/>As far as your character, CS, I think he is great! The cultural clash is a good story hook. The fact he is trying to fit into the southern culture and still retain his Northern attitude is what makes him special.<br/><br/>Vel has a good grasp on what I perceive as the Elven world as well. Honorable, dignified and elegant, but still very much aware of all the nuances of human interactions. I do not see the ELves as above human failings, as they do take advantage of it for their own purposes. They are just as susceptible to greed, jealousy and pride, though I like to think most are very good at hiding their darker tendencies.<br/><br/>I am enjoying this very much!