Tyr, can I get you to change just a bit more? The Elves do not have a college and humans are not allowed in the Elven lands. The Elves however travel frequently into human lands and can be persuaded with a lot of gold to take on an apprentice. May I suggest changing "he transferred to an elven mage college," to something along the lines of "His parents bribed an elven mage into taking him on as an apprentice."<br/><br/>This can lead to a lot more knowledge of Elven magic. His Elven Master can also help him with the corruption thing, giving him some methods to contain it and use it. (note:<strong> human mage Masters forbid the use of anything demonic or dark in nature,</strong>hence when he becomes apprenticed to the Elf, he is able to tap into these forces with the knowledge of the Elves, who are not so finicky. They use whatever they can to accomplish what they want. Yes they are haughty by nature, but also greedy for gold. Also they are not allowed to teach in the Midlands Mage College, but are allowed to take classes. They do this with a great deal of tongue in cheek humor. Pretending to be impressed while secretly laughing at the humans.)<br/><br/>Doing this will allow you to use a wider variety of spells, but of course in the beginning level you have to rely on wits and making friends with the fighters you find. Does that work?<br/><br/>I suggest you edit directly instead of using a copy paste. Much easier.   ;D<br/><br/>------<br/><br/>Stormwyrm I like it a lot. Brings in mind the simple fact that Blanca seldom reach over 5 feet tall. His Mom had to be tall for her race. And the Norori are very tall and muscular, like the average is over 6 feet tall and the tallest would be closer to 8 feet. The picture in my mind of a tall brawny Norori warrior falling for a tiny Blanca elf is sweet. Had to have been a very painful childbirth, and he should be a bit taller and stronger than the rest of the Blanca. Thin maybe, but not quite into his maturity yet is good. He will grow!<br/><br/>---------<br/><br/>Raven, I like your character very much, lots of potential there. I do not see any problems. Remember you will have nothing on you when you wake up in the cave. No weapons and no armor, no possessions except the clothes you wore to bed, if any.<br/><br/>-------<br/>Affy, I love your character and I think it is very well done. You arrive with nothing as well, everyone is equal in that respect.<br/><br/>------<br/><br/>Muse you know I love Jord! He is a great character! Will be much needed and his ability to fly is not magical, so he won't be limited. Remember the Faela are seldom found outside of Elven Lands. They are not known for being quite that adventurous. Will put him in a unique position of being out of his normal element!<br/><br/>----------<br/><br/>Going to do my character in a separate post, as I have yet to get it finalized in Google.<br/><br/><br/>