Well, you saw through the trap easily enough :P<br/><br/>You actually wrote the scene pretty closely to how I was going to: human arrow, fired out of the forest, etc. etc.  One edit I'll ask you to make, though: after the arrow's fired, there's a muffled curse and the sound of a pair of feet crunching snow just inside the treeline.  So far as you can tell, there's only one archer, but there may be more hiding, and it's too dark to see them from where your characters are.<br/><br/>In the future though, I have to ask that you only write for your own character(s).  I'll control everyone and everything else in the world, since I have things planned, and though you hit it on the mark this time, you may not in the future.  But because you did it so well, I suggest you keep the post as is (aside from the edit) and then stick to your character from here on out :)<br/><br/>As for myself, I'm doing pretty good.  Starting a new game called Arctica: Vostok *wink nudge* (shameless self-advertisement :p) and enjoying the last few days of spring break.  You?<br/><br/>BTW, I have to go now, but I'll post tomorrow.  Luma, feel free to post in the mean time.  There was a single arrow fired at you that thunked into the cart, followed by a muffled curse and footsteps.