I have to say, the format here is really working well--I think that scene would have taken three weeks or more in any other game I've played. I'm also having a lot of fun.<br/><br/>I just wanted to mention though, you introduced a few minor errors with your edits. Titles are not supposed to be capitalized unless they are used to address someone directly in place of a name or are followed by a name. "The Doctor considered her patient as he was restrained" isn't correct unless our CMO arrived on the<em>Vanguard</em>in a blue box.  :P