<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=185062.msg9100849#msg9100849">Quote from: Cyrano Johnson on 24-10-2013, 21:07:53</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I mainly said "more in the nature of stage directions" to bring across the need for brevity. We can add a request that planning thread posts also be in the third-person past tense if it would make things easier, I have no problem with that.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>I would certainly appreciate third person past tense from everyone when I do another scene like this.  :-) I will PM you what I have after I check it over one more time.<br/><br/>Saria, I went with "ma'am" instead of "sir" to address the captain, let me know if that's okay.