<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=240466.msg11975830#msg11975830">Quote from: King Serperior on 10-01-2016, 23:31:55</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Sounds well enough, though we should keep the rumors of a sea goddess confined to the area where she grew up.  It's really not like anyone would believe her if she claimed it since a few people would claim the same thing.  However, you may want to tone down the weather control via emotions.  It would make better since that she has powerful water magic, but little to no refinement, thus she overdoes it.  If a little blast of water is needed, she blasts it with huge amounts of it.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Well that's basically why she has a C in spellwork. Lots of collateral when she uses her magic. Gonna drop the symbiosis spell, since it makes little sense in this version and change the name of slippery skin to 'touch of the jellyfish', for more water/ocean flavor.<br/><br/>Also, even though it might hold some truth, I mentioned it was a 'local' legend. Also, Susumi herself isn't going to mention it as she considers her 'forster' parents as her real family, no matter what the real truth might be. One of Susumi's main goals is to be accepted like a normal girl back home and able to control her magic (and not flood an entire street, just to put out a small kitchen fire  ;) )