Okay, here's my thoughts on everything:<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=240466.msg11997239#msg11997239">Quote from: Kimera on 17-01-2016, 15:35:12</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><div align="center"><strong><span class="bbc_size" style="font-size: 20pt;">Nami (Namika); C+ Shaman</span></strong></div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Just a note:  By being classed as a Shaman, her magic must revolve around nature of some kind.  Like how Hiro is a Battlemage and his magic revolves around offense and Liete being a Healer means her magic revolves around, well, healing obviously!<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><div align="center">Race: Lizard girl</div><div align="center">(http://orig15.deviantart.net/a59b/f/2009/148/1/4/primal_beauty_by_chalosan.jpg)</div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>I am okay with her being a Lizard girl, but I would imagine that her race/species is very rare.  Remember, Orcs, Humans, and Elves are the top three races in this world, easily outnumbering the rest.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><div align="center"><strong>{Appearance}</strong><br/>Height: Varies    Weight: Varies    Age: 18<br/></div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>You may want to make specifics on her height and weight.  I mean, I doubt she can change that.  Lizard-girls are like Elves, Humans, and Orcs in that regard.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><strong>{Personality}</strong><br/><br/>Nami is a sweetheart and always eager to help. Her untamed wild nature often gets her into trouble though as she has little notion of restraint...or rules. Because her spells are so strong and dangerous, Nami relies more on her physical prowess then her magics. <br/>[/center]<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>If she relies on her physical prowess over her magic ability, her magic should bolster her physical talents.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><div style="text-align: left;"><strong>{Strengths}</strong></div> <div style="text-align: right;"><strong>{Flaws}</strong></div><div style="text-align: left;"><strong>% Durability</strong> </div> <div style="text-align: right;"> <strong>Social Stigma @</strong></div><div style="text-align: left;"><strong>% Incredible strong for her size and flexible</strong> </div> <div style="text-align: right;">  <strong>Wild spirit @</strong></div><div style="text-align: left;"><strong>% Amphibian (equal at home on land as underwater)</strong> </div> <div style="text-align: right;">  <strong>Her increadible innate power can be overwelming, even for her @</strong></div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Now, I know what you are speaking about in the social stigma, but that may want to be downsized some for reasons below.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><div align="center"><span class="bbc_size" style="font-size: 15pt;"><strong>~ Ability Statistics ~</strong></span><br/><br/><strong>Guild Scores:</strong>  Ranked from S, A, B, C, D, and F, these are the scores the Guild Lords have given your character<br/><br/><div align="center"><span class="bbc_u">Strength:</span> B <strong>A / S (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Agility:</span> A <strong>B / A- (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Speed:</span> B <strong>A+ / S (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Endurance:</span> B <strong>A / A+ (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Senses:</span> B+ <strong>B+ / A- (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Spellwork:</span> D* <strong>D- / F (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Intelligence:</span> C <strong>C / D (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><span class="bbc_u">Teamwork:</span> A <strong>C / D- (under Call of the Wild)</strong><br/><br/>*her spells are quite powerful, but like her spirit, her spells are wild, untamed and very hard for her to keep control.<br/></div></div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>The bolded above is what I would suggest for a Lizard-girl Mage.  The reasons being is that you seem to want to have a more physical focus, so her Spellwork's got a lot of work to go over, so those other stats seem to fit better.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><strong>Signature Spell:</strong>  Your character's most powerful and/or unique spell<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>We can work with this below.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><span class="bbc_u">Spell Name:</span> Call of the Wild<br/><span class="bbc_u">Range:</span> Personnal<br/><span class="bbc_u">Strength Rank:</span> A<br/><span class="bbc_u">Description:</span> This spell calls out the feral nature of Nami's wild spirit. It greatly improves her physical attributes (A+), but she no longer can use any of her other spells and she looses any form of sentient reasoning, effectively becoming a wild animal. She still retains a sense of friend and foe. She keeps fighting until the threat is done. The spell only wears off after she has satisfied all her other physical needs (sexual interests, beware!)<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>A powerful and dangerous spell, it seems to turn her to her feral, primal instincts at a cost to everything not physical.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><span class="bbc_u">Spell Name:</span> Chameleon<br/><span class="bbc_u">Range:</span> Personnal<br/><span class="bbc_u">Strength Rank:</span> C<br/><span class="bbc_u">Description:</span> This spell allows her to change and adapt the color of her skin into that of her surroundings, allowing her to blend in perfectly with the terrain<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Chameleon is different from invisible, so while she could change color, she would be very difficult to find, especially when standing still.  I would also imagine that maximum effectiveness means she must be nude since this changes color of her skin and not what she wears or holds.  However, I agree with Annie that this is a perfect fit as her signature spell.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><span class="bbc_u">Spell Name:</span> Song of Nature<br/><span class="bbc_u">Range:</span> Huge area<br/><span class="bbc_u">Strength Rank:</span> A<br/><span class="bbc_u">Description:</span> With this song, she is able to call forth the plant spirits in order to let barren area's to repopulated with plantlife. The longer she channels the spell, the greater the area she can convert but the spell is very taxing to keep up. <br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>I don't see a major offensive skill, but I can see it working with the next spell.  I would suggest that it is D-S rank, depending on how long she sings and uses the spell, since the longer she uses it, the more plantlife is grown.  It's only growing plants, nothing more.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><span class="bbc_u">Spell Name:</span> Call of Entanglement<br/><span class="bbc_u">Range:</span> Large Area<br/><span class="bbc_u">Strength Rank:</span> B+<br/><span class="bbc_u">Description:</span> When plants are nearby, Nami is able to call for their aid, summoning roots and vines to grapple and ensnare anyone within reach. <br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>I see no issues with this one.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><strong>Non-magic Skills:</strong>  Between three and five<br/><strong>#</strong> Hunting/tracking<br/><strong>#</strong> Stealth <br/><strong>#</strong> Excelent swimmer and diver (her physiology allows her to breath under water)<br/><strong>#</strong> Wrestling, grappling, contact sports<br/><strong>#</strong> Herbalism<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Rather than breathing underwater, perhaps she can hold her breath for very long times.  I mean, Lizards don't have gills!  Other than that, sounds good to me.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote"><strong>{Biography}</strong><br/><br/><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Spoiler: Click to Show/Hide</div><div class="spoiler_body">Hailing from the warm and humid tropical jungles and mangroves from the Far South, Nami was undergoing a rite of passage  when she was found by a group of explorers. The young shaman was only 16 at the time and on her own for over a year now in order to get in tune with the many spirits of the land. Believing the encounter with the humans to be part of her spirit quest, the lizardgirl decided to follow them and so she was brought back to the kingdom of Alderun. Surprisingly, the savage girl seemed to have a natural affinity with magic, something that was regarded as impossible for any of the uncivilised cultures and species. <br/><br/>At first, the researchers at the Bureau of Magical Aptitude had tried to 'tame' her in order to learn more about her. However, as it became clear she was sentient and quite a handful to keep in line, they couldn't just keep her locked up in a cage for study. So as a radical idea, it was decided to put her to school like any other child with the hope that being among others of her own age would help her to adopt more human standards and thus easier to control.<br/><br/>The project was only slightly succesful, as Nami still remained a wild spirit, but at least she no longer fears humans and accepts living with them, although not always by their rules.<br/><br/>Now 18, Nami, like any other teen with magical talent was able to apply for the Magical University</div></div></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>I am not fond of the idea that she is considered a true primitive.  I would imagine that Lizard-people live in small villages scattered around the world.  They are not so primitive that they can't speak like Elves, Humans, or Orcs.  They just like to keep to themselves.  It's hard to explain how I feel about this.  Something is really striking the wrong cord with me.<br/><br/>*Shakes head*  All of these changes have diluted my interest in the game by a lot.  I still need to think about everything for a little bit.  My muse has been lacking a lot and I fear that I big reason has been this game.  I will come to a decision soon.<br/><br/><strong><span class="bbc_size" style="font-size: 14pt;">I am NOT 100% calling the game quits</span></strong>, rather, I just need to sort my thoughts better.