Ebadger, In general I like your concept. It is an interesting character to say the least. I am not sure about the familiar however. Is she part of how he fights? Or just a companion for sex for him? I am not sure why the shape changing ability is for a bird. It does not seem as practical as you make your character out to be.<br/><br/>I do have shape shifters in this world. My thread here deals with that.( a quote from the thread.)<br/>--------------<br/><br/>"There are legends among the Elves that speak of an ancient race, called the Draelren. Have you ever heard of them? They can shapeshift to the forms of different animals. Human in appearance if they wish, or Elven. They were Allied with the Elves centuries ago. But when humans came, they brought disease with them and nearly wiped them all out."<br/><br/>-----------------------<br/><br/>https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=221585.0<br/><br/>You can if you want have Olivia be a companion/indentured servant if you like. If she is a Draelren, she can be your companion. I dislike the use of slaves in a game. Though I do not mind a person selling themselves to cover a debt, but it has to be a contractual thing.<br/><br/>If you would like to alter your story just a little bit and have Olivia as your partner/companion who is a Draelren, I wouold be delighted. I would like to see more shape shifters in the world. The feather he crafted could be a binding he used to keep her with him, or something like a wedding ring, binding them together?