Main concept:<br/>- I like the idea of the cause being a neighbour he cheated with, it makes the moving sound more logical.<br/>- How important is Maine? I never heard of that city until now, so I'm completely unfamiliar with it. If it's just a name filler then it should be fine though, but if it's going to involve city street names and the like then I'll need a lot of OOC help.<br/>- Will the neighbours play an important role in the spooky parts? I like that idea.<br/>- I was under the impression that the house would be a bit backward, how close are the other neighbours?<br/><br/>Characters/ ghost:<br/>Realtor: It would be awesome if you give this ghost some kind of element that all characters share. This could be something physical, like intense blue eyes, a mental trait/ some kind of typical behaviour, or strange word she always mentions. Later on in the story it could help identify the family what's going on and that it's really her who is all those different people. This would of course be near the end of the story that they find out about this, but it'd be a cool addition.<br/><br/>Rubber man: Maybe it could also end up being the face of her favourite actor, a neighbour man that she's close to, and maybe even her son and daughter? Desires change after all. ;)<br/>The face could change with the several times that she unzips the mask, and seeing those faces could trigger new urges in the mother to make love to the other characters. (This would be up to helvorn and whoever is involved as well of course, but I'm game.) :p<br/><br/>The boy: can he also befriend the son? The son could even be tricked into helping that boy to capture his sister, without realising that he's doing something wrong. I like the idea of this leading to a love affair between the siblings down the line, when he does discover that something is awfully wrong and he tries to protect his sister.<br/><br/><hr/><br/>The father: I think it makes sense that he was caught cheating with the neighbour.<br/><br/><hr/><br/>More feedback will follow soon, have to leave to work now. I hope to give more feedback in 9 hours when I'm back home.