<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=141555.msg6389266#msg6389266">Quote from: AribethAmkiir on 04-06-2012, 11:08:22</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I apologize.  It gets a bit messy in certain areas, I'm going to go edit and polish it now.   Serves me right for not polishing it before posting it.<br/><br/>I'm glad you enjoyed it Caitlin, even in its current state.  <br/><br/>I look forward to reading your intro, wicca.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>I did notice a couple of small mistakes yeah, but it wasn't really distracting. There was one 'hand out' instead of 'hang out' and 'was' instead of 'wasn't' when it came to Max' maturity for owning a gun. The rest didn't distract from reading at all and I couldn't recall them. Even so, you made far less mistakes then I made with the introduction. That one received in total 5 proof reads and edits, 3 from me and 2 from Adonis. It still has some mistakes too (in fact I spotted a run instead of ran in the 1st line), but they shouldn't distract too much either.<br/><br/><br/>I liked your introduction so far Wicca, but it does give a lot of questions with what else happened during the other days. I'm curious to all of that. ^_^<br/><br/>I do have a small tip though, were you using a text editor when writing your post or did you use the spell check on the forums? There were a couple of spelling mistakes that could easily be filtered out. Otherwise it was a good read though!