<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=161759.msg7527251#msg7527251">Quote from: AribethAmkiir on 12-01-2013, 09:36:53</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I think I've had my fill of this.  The game's turned into nothing more than preamble to an orgy.  This coupled with a lack of suspenseful buildup or escalating tension has simply caused me to lose interest.  There are a number of interesting characters and I was thoroughly impressed by people's writing ability.  I wholeheartedly wish that was all it took to keep my interest.  <br/><br/>I wish you guys the best of luck with this.  Maybe azz can kill Jess off in a dramatic way which will actually put some focus on the horror and off of the inevitable orgy. <br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>I am sorry to see you go but if I could offer you a few words to think about...<br/><br/>An orgy will only happen if we want our characters too and honestly the tension will start building once that door is unlocked.  Right now tension would be at a minimum because most is trying to come up with an escape route or not taking it truly seriously.  Once that door is open and they are truly facing the unknown the tension will rise pretty quick.  At the moment characters building relationships that will be tested once they are out once they leave into the main school.  Things are going to build a little slowly during this part anyway because they are in what they mostly think is a safe room, so what little tension that was there in the beginning has slacked off.