OK lots of work for me to do then  :P<br/><br/><strong>Andyz </strong>your sheet looks fine, I can't see any issue presently.<br/><br/><strong>Senti</strong>, you seam to have only spent 31 freebies on Morag's sheet and you seam to be missing a point from secondary abilities spread having only spent 8 dots instead of 9.<br/><br/>Other than that the sheet looks fine, might want to note down a bit about your "Goblin" spirit companion thing.<br/><br/><br/><strong>Cadavar</strong>, your sheet looks fine to me I can't see any fault, although you may want to mark the renown as permanent rather than temporary hehe.<br/><br/>One thing with both of you however is that I would prefer you replace charmed existence with a merit from the revised books, the Second Sight merit from the Fianna tribe book may work well for one of you perhaps.<br/><br/><strong>Grovercjuk</strong>, I love the idea and concept it is much more fleshed out and gives me a better picture of who the character is, really great :)<br/><br/>You have not seamed to choose any backgrounds however, and are missing a point from your primary attributes you have 6 where you should have 7.  You also have 20 freebie points to spend and are missing a point of Rage for your Auspice.<br/><br/>We do have a slight issue with the fact that now there are three Philodox concepts proposed if Miyu is still interested, as she has not posted anything here yet  although she did respond to me when I pmed her about it.<br/><br/><br/><br/>