<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=98037.msg4266237#msg4266237">Quote from: DTW on 16-02-2011, 12:13:08</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I don't really think Masato is being disruptive. He turned Zara away, She got mad , He tries to make her feel better by hiring her.<br/><br/>If he wanted to be disruptive ,he could've called zara a  name or snapped at her.<br/>He's simply trying to make amends by hiring both her and Fiona.<br/><br/>I think one of the reason there's a disconnect between Masato, Accitus and the rest ofg roup  is because Atticus is incharge of making sure nothing really bad happens in the teahouse.<br/><br/>Most inculding Masato find Zara's  tantrum to be funny, Atticus  is so focused on protecting the johns/janes and whores that he  hasn't noticed the comical nature of what's going on<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>o.O<br/><br/>You know you don't have to defend yourself or what your character does. Just remember what character do and think are not what writers know. I<em>could</em>have Atticus more sympathetic to your character, DTW, and understand better the situation, but that would firstly be really boring for me to write, secondly be really boring to read and thirdly plain out of character. He's a seasoned whore, he's been in over half a dozen brothels and has lived in them for more than half his life, he knows how the structure works and how fragile it is, especially if a john gets it into his head to try and act more dominant over the whores than the Master of the house himself.