Thanks Anith and Michi. Glad to know people like my writing. Its a passion of mine and I am in the process of really trying to improve my grasp of grammar and such; so it helps to know I'm doing it right.<br/><br/>I honestly do think your writing is good Anith. Maybe your ability to write the more detail oriented part helps to "hide" what you think you lack? I find myself seeing Bella cackling and can feel her from your writing. Too me as a reader, that is amazing.<br/><br/>I haven't gone over your posts with a fine tooth comb, but I really don't notice many mistakes. Its easier seeing other people mistakes than one's own, that's for sure. So yeah great work.<br/><br/>