Hmm... If you make him too old then the children won't be able to connect to him. At that age age differences still play a large role. You could make him a year older, maybe two, but after that the children would likely have a really hard time to connect to him. You'd need a good backstory why he's milf hunting though, most 18 / 19 year olds feel too insecure to go after a free spirited woman of 37. Especially one that's already settled and has a husband as well. Unless you still go with him getting possessed by some kind of spirit that fancies the mother of course.<br/><br/>I thought you were after the daughter with the neighbour though?<br/>Currently the Realtor ghost is after the husband and son, the rubberman is after the mother, and I thought the neighbour was after the daughter. If the neighbour is after the mother as well, then who is after Jessica? ???<br/><br/><br/><br/>So to summarise what we currently have for a plot;<br/><br/>The Morgan family is a typical American family, with two working parents and two children. After the father was caught cheating by his wife, they decided to start life over elsewhere. Life in the metropolis they came from has left its traces on all of them, and was tearing the family apart. Helen wants to rekindle the romance with her husband, and prevent him access to the woman he cheated with. Additionally, she wants them to get closer to their children again, who deal with their own problems.<br/><br/>After looking around for a house, they find something promising in the back skirts of Maine that looks perfect and suits their needs exactly. Helen and her husband can easily find a new job in Maine, while there is a good high school available for Jessica and David. The neighbourhood looks great and provides easy access to all kinds of services. The realtor is a friendly professional woman, who gives them all the details they need to make up their mind and for Helen it's like a dream coming true. After discussing things with the rest of the family, they all seem in favour of it, except for David who has a hard time adjusting to new environments and will lose the two friends he's close to.<br/><br/>Several weeks later, they move over to the new house after they worked out all the details. Jessica is quickly accepted at her new high school, while David becomes friends with a neighbour, which helps him to settle easier and accept their new life. The father moved over to the Maine division of his company, while Helen picked up her job as a freelance journalist again.<br/><br/>However, unknown to the family, the house has a history...<br/><br/>At night they hear strange noises, and soon our family is plagued by weird dreams as well. In fact, they're not even sure whether or not they really are dreams. They don't know about this from one another though, and try their best to ignore what's happening.<br/><br/><hr/><br/>I took a bit of creative freedom to fill in some of the holes in a sensible way, but this is pretty much what we have so far?<br/>Details like the history of the house and what may or may not be in the basement can be filled in during the story.<br/><br/>By the way, as a start position of the story I would appreciate an introduction from dapoet or firefly with something like the above, and then having us start at the day that the truck with all their belongings pulls up, on the day that they move into the new house, or perhaps the day after they moved into their new house.<br/><br/>Else it could take a really long time before we even start at the house and the ghosts can make an appearance. How do you all feel about this?