<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=98195.msg4282026#msg4282026">Quote from: ZameRagues on 20-02-2011, 06:13:05</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">okay I'm burnt, as well as fairly satisfied with what I've written. That means I have filled in my background on my plothooks sheet, I wrote a lot more then I thought I was going to.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Story looks awesome! It is accepted. Though I got a couple issues with your character. First, switch razorclaw shifting for elven accuracy. Next, Prime shot is your class feature, not a feat. Unless I'm making a mistake in reading, or you meant to write something else down. Tell me what is up with the feat, change it if needed, exchange the powers, hit me back to check it over, and we'll see about getting your feet wet in the IC. ^_^<br/><br/>PS: Was about to ask why you were using a shortsword in your off hand, but then I read story. Can't fuss over story. :P