Okay, here's a slight spoiler for the post.  I may come across as mean, but I'm honestly trying to give a constructive criticism.<br/><br/>Melisa, I was reading through your post and your character bio and I noticed that you switch tenses a LOT.  You go from past tense to present tense, and sometimes you use your verbs in the wrong way.  It's just one of those things that sticks out a lot to me, and didn't know if you'd want some help with that or not.  I can give examples if you'd like, or just shut my mouth if you don't like. =P