Wow thanks for the hellos. I need to get on my toes to keep up. Back, sleep BACK I say!<br/><br/>**** Update *****<br/><br/>Having made my first post I have decided to do to following to make Jonah's hallucinations clear to the reader such that no one gets confused about what is happening in and out of his head.<br/><br/>His hallucination are in red<br/>they are separated into their own paragraphs using ellipses if necessary<br/>they are in a present tense instead of past<br/><br/>What I would like to know is does that collection if delimiters detract. Would it be better presented in some other way?<br/><br/>If you have any input feel free to let me know. I had not realized that this character would be quite so complex to play and post. It is really some work to put all that BB code in the right places and not botch anything up so I would like to get it to a good stable method early on.<br/><br/>Thanks much<br/><br/>L