Hello EnglishMaster.  I'd say that looks pretty darn good for a first draft.<br/><br/>I don't know if we want to use something like this or not but here's a basic character outline which could help fill in the small details.  Not that we have to use anything like this just thought I would throw it out there.  ~LOLz~<br/><br/>Character name:<br/><br/>Age: Would vary depending on at what point in the story we start the game.  ~grins~<br/><br/>Sexual Preference:<br/><br/>Description : (http://)<br/><br/>Character Personality:<br/><br/>Hobbies - Interests:<br/><br/>Background information:<br/><br/>I'll work up Miranda's character sheet and get it up here this evening.<br/>This game is going to be very fun and am really looking forward to playing in it.<br/><br/>~Nim