Good job on that Urban. It felt very real.<br/><br/>I have began noticing an element of writing from several of you and various other writing partners which I seem to lack. There is a lot of color analogies included in the description of the scene or the characters mindset. I've found that I tend to write in a very technical and robotic sense and it's something I'm trying to work on to add more depth to my writing. It's tough though because I tend to fall back to old habits quick. Anyway, thought I'd throw that out there. I feel like I'm growing as a writer, thanks to you all.<br/><br/>On a side note, I'm surprised no one has commented to my shamelessly ripping a very famous line from Aliens.<br/><br/><strong>Edit:</strong>HOLY SHIT, URBAN! I just glanced at the logs you posted. You really put a lot of work into those logs! I had no idea it was that much stuff! I thought you were referring to what Haibane posted, thinking she had taken your logs and inserted them into your posts. But in truth she had simply summarized your logs. It's gonna take me a week to read all of that. lol Good job man!