OMG you two, what a great beginning! Whatever time and effort you have been putting in together is paying off - you've got my attention. Feels like a real relationship there, the history between the two characters still their own with no one else knowing the details, but it is full and textured and delicious. I, for one, am highly encouraged (and just a little bit intimidated but wanting to reach for an approximation of caliber) - great job!