Aiden - I need you to make a couple changes in your post if that's okay.<br/><br/>First off you mention that she has a ball gag in her mouth which is not the case. It's a very large ring gag.<br/>If you're unfamiliar, it'd probably look something like that. So he would be able to hear her screams since her mouth was open she just wouldn't be able to talk freely.<br/><br/>(http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3575/3340924139_8e00da6a42.jpg?v=0)<br/><br/><br/>You also mention that Claudia is very short like her mother. She's 5'5 in her character profile. I don't think that's very short. I think 5'6 is average. I mean, I'm 5'2 in real life... that's pretty short. Also she'd probably be a bit taller than that at this moment because since she's taught she's standing on her tippy toes. I think that would add an inch or two for sure. That's not to say she's not looking up at Ari still but... it's just a point I thought was worth mentioning.<br/><br/>The last thing I had was more of a question then a change? When you say whipping her hips do you mean her sides (when I say hips I generally think sides) or do you mean her sex. I was a little bit confused cause you said it was the third round across her hips and I don't remember any other across her hips since the last one was over  her sex. (or so I thought? Correct me if I'm confused).<br/><br/>Also when you said Don't stain the floor? Did you intend for that to be with blood or cum? I just wanted to know if that was supposed to be indicative of saying that she was bleeding at this moment.