Beside pointing out any mistakes or asking for additional details, I’ll describe how I interpreted your character’s Life at Tachibana based off your profile. This will help me when having the school body interact with the character during the game so let me know if I fumbled.<br/><br/>Just a few notes before I begin, it doesn’t matter what your character is wearing in their pic, they’ll be dressed in uniform like everyone else during school. Also, I am going to quantify what people wrote (later) under “Defining Talents” but that’s not important, it’s only for the dice system I mentioned in the “Rules and Guidelines” under “On Handling Combat and Competition.”<br/><br/><hr/><br/><strong>ZameRagues – Sam Milligan</strong><br/>Notes:<br/>- The Kleptomania should be an interesting RP hook. I’m curious to see what you have in mind with it.<br/><br/>Life at Tachibana:<br/>Despite his active participation in sports and his exotic heritage, the name “Sam Milligan” rings few bells within the student body. The young Irish teen has effectively (and quite miraculously) managed to keep a low profile throughout his time at Tachibana High and, while some might raise an eye-brow, giggle or ogle his odd choice in accessories, most tend to leave him be. The gamer barely registers even amongst the groups he occasionally hops between; a blessing in disguise considering how most would react if they knew of the company he kept. Sam has no favourite classes but appears to have a natural intelligence, one which allows him to simply drift in and out of focus during lessons while still managing to achieve an above average grade.<br/><br/><hr/><br/><strong>Zarazel – Kiroshi Makamida</strong><br/>Notes:<br/>- Add “Eye-Colour” under “Appearance” please, I can’t really tell from the pic.<br/><br/>Life at Tachibana:<br/>Besides the admiration the teachers have for him and the soft spot the ruffians do (perfect for a punch or two), Kiroshi is best known for his intellect and musical talent; two areas which can be appreciated most by his geeky clique. However, despite his academic scores, the teachers are concerned over his lack of drive and ambition as well as the constant attempts to skip gym.<br/><br/><hr/><br/><strong>TheRomanticPerv - Katsu Kouseitani</strong><br/>Notes:<br/>- I didn't mention the soccer team bit because I'm not sure if you want the entire school knowing about that.<br/><br/>Life at Tachibana:<br/>Katsu might not be looking to impress anyone but he’s certainly earned a lot of respect as a strong figure during his time at Tachibana, a reputation that has so far brought him almost as much trouble. If it isn’t some punk trying to knock him down a notch, it’s a couple of love-struck teens battling for his affection. This attention has allowed Katsu to form a clique around himself, one which he allows only a few to enter based on a set of terms which confuses most teens. Katsu’s discipline has also been noted, both in the dojo and class, with his grade reaching an above average level. His talent at martial arts has even earned him the title of “Tachibana’s Bruce Lee,” one which the students constantly use when arguing “who would win” when comparing him to the school’s other artists. Finally, Katsu is known for his love of history in class and a mediocre talent with football.<br/><br/><hr/><br/><strong>Snake – Akihiro Sabreheim</strong><br/>Notes:<br/>- Remove “Physical Activities” from “Academics”.<br/>- He’s seventeen but the only classes are for sixteen and eighteen year students; did he stay back or skip a grade?<br/>- You forgot to mention he’s a part of the “Archery Club” in “Physical.”<br/>- I’m guessing that people will have to find his little book of “private fantasies” if they want to uncover his secrets? :P<br/><br/>Life at Tachibana:<br/>When he’s not keeping to himself, Akihiro is known to actually be quite reliable, a fact that most remain oblivious to due to the tall teen’s attempts to “fly under the radar.” He might stand out like a beacon in a crowd but this doesn’t keep him from being an enigma to most. He excels in biology and chemistry but fairs poorly in all other classes. He also takes part in martial arts, archery, painting and a little swimming on the side but only at an average to above average level.<br/><br/><hr/><br/><strong>Sharon – Grace Casey</strong><br/><br/>Notes:<br/>- Are you sure you want to take such a harsh (bitchy) path? It might be difficult to interact with others in the RP and I’m not sure how much I’d be able to help. The teachers don't really feature much.<br/>- She’s seventeen but the only classes are for sixteen and eighteen year students; did she stay back or skip a grade?<br/><br/>Life at Tachibana:<br/>Grace is liked by the staff but absolutely reviled by the students, to the point where it’s rare for any to give her a chance. Unfortunately, the healthy relationship she has with the teachers does not translate into grades, leaving her with mediocre marks. Outside of class she’s an above average runner and swimmer, enough to make a team if she wanted but not to excel.