Thank you, Mistress. :)<br/><br/>I try my best... But I do get the feeling that I'm somehow responsible for lack of inspiration.<br/><br/>I was hoping that the music might draw the rest of the group back to the practice so we could actually meet the new bass player... But I guess I was wrong?<br/><br/>Kaz, Honey... I was also hoping that posting Carry singing the entire (if somewhat modified) song might give you some inspiration to post? After all, they are<em>your</em>lyrics IRL as well as your characters IC.<br/><br/>Hope you don't mind me messing with them a bit, but like Carry said, as a poem they work just fine. As a song, they need an even metre to fit into a musical verse structure, and also the musical phrases need to work. 90% of music is 90% predictable and if you have a good ear you can sing along to a tune you've never heard before! I actually wish I could record the tune I have in my head, so you guys could all hear it!