Oi, I just read your post Ari. Could you remove your 'time stamp' altogether maybe? the ??? smiley looks kinda weird in it and as long as they're in the same location we don't need to put the time stamp in every time.<br/><br/>Additionally and I hope you don't take offense to this, but could you respell Caitlain to Caitlin? It made me wince a little to see her name 'butchered' like that. :-s<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">He turned back to Luna and Kate, “either of you see anything that we could use as a safe hour closer than that library?”</blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Was 'hour' meant to be 'house'? I was confused when I read that.<br/><br/><br/>I enjoyed the rest of your post, it really makes me eager to start posting again! ;D<br/>I can't wait till I'm home to start writing. I want to make a small update for Illumina with our other game and I still have to write a reply for a 1x1, but I definitely hope to team up with Willie and do some exploring in the mall too!<br/><br/>(I also had a semi sexy scene in mind where Caitlin changes into some fresh clothes, -snickers- Willie might even get a peek or two.) Naturally I'll keep such a scene realistic, but Caitlin is still a woman and appreciates nice lingerie, even if she has to hurry to get it all on and all. :P