<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=261903.msg12964686#msg12964686">Quote from: Alias on 08-02-2017, 04:29:12</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">posted in Danger room. <br/><br/>Firstly, sorry for the length, it's sort of a big moment for Salem and I write too much sometimes. I put a page break at the point it switches from reaction to action. And, the italic section is not relevant to this scene at all. That should help. Should we move location? switch up post order for the fight scenes? does everyone want to react to the plan again? :p<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Post order would be a good idea.<br/>