Alright, time for my review on LH's CS.<br/><br/>The blood chain attack, Chishio Rasshu no Jutsu, seems a little bit odd to me. Earlier in your CS, you said your character didn't bleed, however when you described that move, you said that the whip comes from your bleeding wound. Perhaps I'm paying too much attention to the adjectives you used? I assume that Takeshi uses his chakra to force his blood out, it was just worded weirdly, at least to me.<br/><br/>Then there's the issue with the Naki Chishio no Jutsu. If it were a Genjutsu, it would be acceptable, but even as foregone the reality is in Naruto, Kishimoto gives an explanation of why every jutsu is able to do what it does, if that makes sense. Kakashi's and Obito's Kamui is able to one-hit KO opponents because it sends whatever part of the body caught within the black hole into a different dimension. Kakashi is not allowed to use this more than a few times otherwise he risks dying from chakra exhaustion or losing his Sharingan through over exertion. The question I am asking here is why does looking at Takeshi cry blood cause the other person's body to react that way? I can't think of a jutsu similar to what you described and the closest I get to a good comparison is a Genjutsu. The other point that I am trying to make here is, while you did give the jutsu the limitation that it could not be used in a fight with more than one person, it is still very deadly in team combat since all you would need to win is for the opponent to be mildly bleeding and for the rest of us to distract reinforcements so you can take them down one-by-one.<br/><br/>All in all, Takeshi is a very interesting character, and yeah, the bio needs to be fleshed out a bit more, but it's whatever. For fun, I tried to see how my character Tsuneo would deal with your character and I came to the conclusion that it'd have to remain a long-distance battle with all of the use of Tsuneo's Genjutsu, mixing in some Fire-style jutsu. I get the feeling that if you get too close to Takeshi and he nicks you with a kunai and you start bleeding, it is pretty much GG no re right there. The only way to beat him would be to exhaust him using Genjutsu, combined with clones and an excessive use of Substitution Jutsu before being able to land a finishing blow.<br/><br/>EDIT: wasn't the 3rd Hokage like 60-70 when he first retired to give Minato the chance to be the 4th? I imagine some other random would be Hokage. But we can keep it Konohamaru for simplicities sake.