It's great, Dar, I was really interested reading it. The abilities seem to jar a little with each other, but I don't mind that so much for now - though I do worry about the telekinesis. She's sort of powerful enough already, if you really look into that whole unbreakable ability. I don't think she'll need that undiscovered ability (and also with the aesthetic of a tiger, it's all up close and leaping and jumping and melee, not stand from a distance with a hand to the temple).<br/><br/>Also, where did she grow up?! You say its United Kingdom but there's all these references to high school and college and american football. Did she go to a school in the UK where they taught american football? Did she go to germany at some point? - I'm guessing that's where "futbol" comes from. If it's just a case of terminology, that's fine (it's school and university btw :) ) that's fine I just thought that maybe from the "second generation" part that she actually grew up somewhere else and that's where the other references were coming from.<br/><br/>Technology - nanotech AND synthetic spider silk that's strong as kevlar? There's no justification for it in the biog.<br/><br/>Apart from these, Tigress can post IC - we can work on the profile whilst we're RPing.