<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=213034.msg10502804#msg10502804">Quote from: King Serperior on 17-09-2014, 13:32:09</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Haha, wow, that was fast!  I have to ask you, Aiden, if the arrivals from the Sound were there 'late' on purpose?  After all, the Chunin and Jonin from each village were allowed to come a week ahead of the ceremony so that they may rest if they so chose.  You seem to imply that the Sound arrived on the day of the Ceremony, no?  It's not a problem if you didn't intend them to though.  It would actually make sense with the rough relationship between the Leaf and Sound.<br/><br/>That said, I am hoping to begin my post today and have it up soon.<br/><br/>I hope Laughing has been paying attention to the OOC because I'd really hate to have to send another message as a reminder to clarify his character's jutsu, post his character in the Character thread, and let him know that the game has now started   :-\<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Sorry for being quiet Annie I know how much you adore me. I take it my jutsu's are under question. Some are too weak for their rank and some are too strong apparently.<br/><br/>The blood puppeteer does affect other people but with a more crude nature. In short it doesn't hold up in essence to a true puppeteer's techniques. Employed as a means of say using a corpse as a suicider or to try and make an enemy miss by making him overextend or misstep. Im sure I could come up with other methods of employment but the idea was it is defensive against living attackers. Employed against say multiple attackers, crowd control.<br/><br/>Most issue is with the Weeping Blood technique. Basically its a true jutsu, not a genjustu. The idea was he maintains eye contact  with a person to take control of their own chakra within the bloodstream and force said blood to flee their body however it can. Theres several limitations to this technique because of how deadly it is. One is he cannot blink and has to maintain the technique during the entire time, meaning it is not good against multiple targets. Two, theres a period for the opponent to do something since it is not an instant kill move. Finally forcing his eyes to turn away or shut breaks it. Naturally there is also the obvious flaw in that this technique doesn't work against a substitution, clone, shadow clone or puppet or anything without blood. Against a ninja, he'd really have to wound them in order for it to be effective enough to avoid being counterattacked. In short it's meant as an assassination technique.<br/><br/>Blood Mantra Technique's strength in my view lied with reach and versatility since the bandages are effectively soaked in blood and animated to cut and snare, enhancing basic taijustu. If you have suggestions on how to make it more suitable for A Rank please do so. It was meant to be a signature technique amongst Chisiho clan.<br/><br/>As for Hunter Vision Technique, it is near perfect recon, able to detect living targets from their clones and substitutions since they wouldn't have blood in them. Think of Detective Mode for ninja's and you get the idea. It makes hiding from him a lot more difficult and makes him an impressive tracker in regards to a wounded quarry.<br/><br/>I have no problem lowering the justus you deemed too weak or making them suitably stronger, I also have no issue raising the grade of those you have deemed stronger.<br/><br/>As for further backstory I figured to make it up as we go. Basically the man was out to be inducted into his own clan. Unless he proves worthy of the title than he is in a sense less than a person.<br/><br/>EDIT: I am sorry to hear about your loss King. I lost my father a year and a half ago and I can relate to this big time.