Hey, I wouldn't mind a bit of feedback as I complete my character. There's some stuff I haven't filled out, but I actually would like to brainstorm a connection or two between my character and other ones. I also would like to know if I've been filling this out correctly.  :-[<br/><br/>As far as the central trait, the private investigator one seemed well suited to someone who was an FBI agent, so I picked that. I shamelessly have copy/pasted things out of the resources available to me, so I hope that doesn't bother anyone.<br/><br/><div class="spoiler_container"><div class="spoiler_header" onclick="hideSecond (this);" role="button">Incomplete Sheet For People's Perusal</div><div class="spoiler_body"><strong>Name:</strong> Ysabel Hargrarves<br/><strong>Concept</strong>: female FBI agent who was suddenly issued a burn notice<br/><strong>Description:</strong> Woman in her thirties. Pic pasted below.<br/><br/><div align="center">(http://blog.badonlinedates.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/07/Sexy-Woman-480x320.jpg)</div><br/><span class="bbc_u">Traits and Signs</span><br/><strong>Central Trait:</strong> Private Investigator— Surveillance, phone-tapping, subterfuge, and brawling.<br/>(Shameless eavesdropper, reads other people's mail.) 3/4 (Good: 3)<br/><br/><strong>Side Trait</strong>: Intelligent — Putting clues together to form a valid hypothesis, understanding the meanings of obscure names and words, impressing similarly intelligent or erudite people. This trait represent a broad intelligence, whereas a trait like “scientist” includes intelligence highly focused on the specific area of knowledge. (rapidly finishes sudoku, easily predicts outcomes of books or shows) 3/4 (Normal: 2)<br/><br/><strong>Side Trait:</strong> Casing — Looking over an area to find easy means of illicit access, suitable hiding places, useful escape routes, etc. (Eyes that seem to dart about the room) 3/4 (Superior: 4)<br/><br/><strong>Flaw:</strong> Sucker for a Pretty Face — Penalty die when resisting manipulation by an attractive person. (Terrible flirt)<br/><br/><span class="bbc_u">Stuff</span><br/><strong>Finances:</strong> <em>Haven't figured it out yet.</em><br/><strong>Equipment:</strong> <em>Haven't figured it out yet.</em><br/><br/><span class="bbc_u">Background</span><br/><strong>Motivation:</strong> Desperately wants a normal life<br/><strong>Secret:</strong> Fell in love and had an affair with another FBI agent who was married.<br/><strong>Important Person:</strong> Spencer Evens from the Investigative Training Unit at Quanitco, the FBI Academy, who encouraged her to think for herself.<br/><strong>Personal History:</strong> <em>Haven't figured it out yet.</em><br/></div></div><br/>I've avoided writing backstory, finances, and equipment, because I feel like I need to know more about plot/other characters before filling in that blank.<br/><br/>Ack, ninja'd by kylie!  :-)