Looks good to me.  Would you be fine with my character forcing yours to do something to the siren?  As a rough idea, something along the lines of her telling you "Whip her, and if it's not good enough I'll whip the both of you"?<br/><br/>And just to be clear, are there any things you don't want to have happen to your character, a list of set limits?  I just want to be clear what you don't want to do, because I'll pretty much consider anything on that list to be fair game.