Looks good. Mercurial has dropped some useful plot hints in his first character post too; one systems related and one regarding a book in Kevin's locker.<br/><br/>Maybe we could have a "snippet" scene or two that are not time continuous in school first, before Kevin is invited to the ladies' home. Maybe one in the sports equipment room and perhaps one quickie in an empty classroom or something like that. Possibly there could also be some ongoing bondage Kevin has to endure/enjoy under his school uniform most days...