Ladies, it is I who's responsible for the mix-up. In the excitement of getting the story started, I didn't discuss smaller details like discussing a scene on the OOC thread before starting to post about it, or making sure everyone is comfortable with both asking for and making edits to posts.<br/><br/>Please put that down to my inexperience (this is my first group story - another one I'd planned didn't take off, the OOC thread was left hanging), and please let's get things back on track.<br/><br/>From now on, we all should have at least one post on the OOC thread about the next scene in the story, making sure to mention our character's positions and actions (not in detail but just the broad idea). And even then it may often happen that while writing a post, someone may slip in a line which either may be contradictory to someone else's post or be an indirect case of godmoding. It's not a crime - and all it needs is a simple edit.<br/><br/>In any such case, the OOC is there for this purpose itself. We can bring them up, and issues can be easily resolved. Personally, I do edits on almost every game of mine - they just make the story flow better, and they never take up more than a few minutes of anyone's time.<br/><br/>So please let's put aside our irritations and frustrations, and let's make sure these little problems are ironed out.<br/><br/>I thought I had a good story idea when I posted this on the thread looking for players - but with the inputs from the three of you, I truly believe it can be an awesome crime saga to play out. Let's give it another chance please.<br/><br/>I'm sorry for the mess.