<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=167462.msg7853019#msg7853019">Quote from: yesiroleplay on 09-03-2013, 20:31:51</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I for one had to use the translation to make any sense of most of the phrases.<br/>I found that a bit disruptive of the flow, and since a listener wouldn't really have a problem understanding her accent (though they might have a problem understanding the drunken slur version), I think you should tone it down in the written form. - You did ask for opinion.<br/><br/>The posts, dialog (monologue?), and character were all wonderful!  I'm looking forward to more of Ginny.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>I don't mind.  This was precisely what I was asking for when I began to write her accent.  Your constructive criticism is noted and appreciated.   :-)<br/><br/>Secondly, you've probably pointed out my biggest foibile as a writer which is I tend to be very wordy.  It is one of the reasons I was.concerned with being able to keep pace with the group game.  Hopefully, I can learn to cut things down to keep a good pace with you all.