Looks good, then, Saric.<br/><br/>@Muse, then:<br/><br/>Saric's right--just a little more adjustment should be fine, though, 'cause we're in the ballpark!<br/><br/>Keeping in mind that a Secret of this nature, being unrequited, may cause trouble down the line.   ;D  Particularly so if the PC who rescued Naomi prefers boys.<br/><br/>If it is ever discovered (and as a Foible it will be constantly coming back to haunt poor Naomi), then it will have to become a regular Forte (which will require Training Points and maybe Style Dice) and be replaced by something suitable to the situation!<br/><br/>Aoife has her work cut out for her at this point.   :-)