For her background, I think it looks good! I wouldn't worry about comparing it to another PC's. I think it paints a good history of where she came from and helps see who she is. That's what I wanted from Rusty's background and I am similarly satisfied with it.<br/><br/>If you want a romance between PC's, I can see Rusty as liking her at the start, though given his personality type she might not exactly be the type to see it. I could see him as trying to work up the nerve to ask her to the dance, perhaps trying to even take a bolder, daring initiative to it as is his style, but being attracted to someone might make that challenging for him at the start.<br/><br/>But that's just an option!