Thank you everyone for the kind feedback.<br/><br/>What do you mean out of his league? You won't know until you're actually interacting with her, I think.<br/><br/>Hopefully, I didn't make her too intense. It was how the character felt and how she wanted me to guide her along in her current scene.<br/><br/><br/>Edit: LeSane I did some edits to make it flow a little better and to limit some of the typos in there. You might want to just look it over once more.