My apologies, Panda. I should have put "work in progress" on top when I copied it from draft 1. It's far from finished and the high concept shall be set in time. I apologize for the lengthy adventure, but figuring this is on pbp rather than table top, I had hoped the verbosity wouldn't matter so much. It is there not so much due to creativity, but rather the lack thereof. I apologize for the lengthy read!<br/><br/>HH helped me create the character. It's true that the sheet lacks a template, but it was my understanding that was okay as long as the character was solid? I'll address the other issues later, and see what I can shift around in aspects.