<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=213034.msg10488435#msg10488435">Quote from: Kimera on 13-09-2014, 21:34:05</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Given that Hyena's character and mine come from the same village, they probably know each other?<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Very likely, for a number of reasons since Laughing's character is of a well known (in the mist) clan and your character is one of the Seven Swordsmen.<br/><br/>That said, let me give you my initial thoughts on Terumi:<br/><br/>Overall, she looks great!  However, there are a few key things I would like to point out to you:<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Samehada: Azura has been a very skilled sword fighter and thus selected to become one of the village wielder of one of the seven swords of mist. She was chosen by the sentient blade Samehada to become its wielder. The two have a sort of love/hate relationship going on with Samehada often quoting she's too hot for him (because of her fire chakra) but which could be misinterpreted as she has quite a good looking body as well.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>While I don't have any problems with her having this Sword, I have to question the method by which she received it.  Traditionally, in order to obtain ownership of one of the Seven Swords, one must<em>kill it's previous owner.</em>Yes, Samehada has a mind of it's own and can choose it's master, it is only if there is a LOT of Chakra to consume, such as when Killer Bee obtained it.  That brings me to another point:  I don't believe that Samehada is Sentient.  In fact, I believe it more like an animal than a thinking being, so I don't believe it would be 'quoting' anything.<br/><br/>In regards to the above, perhaps you can expand upon her bio a little more?  It feels rather brief and doesn't off too much detail other than the very basics.<br/><br/>Other than that, I think she looks good.  I'll let the others look her over now and ask any questions they may have of her.  Remember, everyone should offer their opinions of everyone's character so we have no glaring issues halfway through the game.   ;D