Haibane I think you don't need to recount events or others words in order when you are recounting as part of your character's mental map of thins, her thinking. But its problematic when you actually say that things has happened out of order from what has been played.<br/><br/>For example it was ok for Lacuna to write how Candice felt about James touching her before writing about whipping but telling that she was getting after James touched (when it was long finished) is troublesome for others to play. It gets too confused.<br/><br/>Thats my take on subject. I hope I got my point across.