Okay, Aiden, I don't see any problems with Tsuneo, so he's good.<br/><br/>@Laughing:  Takeshi looks good, but I have a couple of questions and concerns regarding his Jutsu.  His jutsu is quite powerful and I just wanted to comment on them for a moment:<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Nenshou Abura no Justu - (Burning Oil Technique) This technique collects blood into the mouth of the practioner and lets the ninja expel it upon a victim, infused with chakra the blood takes on an oil like quality and superheats it to boiling levels to try and sear the opponent. Though there are clever uses of this technique in setting up more dangerous scenarios this is a strictly offensive maneuver. - Rank: D<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>This sounds fine.  Pretty much melee range unless he has super spitting skills :P<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Chisiho Rasshu no Justu - (Blood Lash Technique) Cutting the palm open, the user of this technique infuses his chakra into his bleeding wound to summon forth a barbed chain of red blood to be utilized as a weapon. Typically this offensive just is meant to ensnare a limb and then be tugged to tug at muscle and flesh though more creative variants exist or to capture an opponent. Skilled practitioners can create weighted chains and add additional combos with the chain via other techniques. - Rank: D<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Okay, this seems fair.  It seems that at the moment it is just a whip with a sharp spike on the end, so that sounds reasonable.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Chishiho Guujin no Justu - (Blood Puppet Technique) The ninja uses this technique typically by pricking or cutting the fingertips to allow blood to flow which is utilized with chakra to fling wires into an opponent's arms, legs and throat. In this fashion he can manipulate an opponent like a crude marionette or even a fresh corpse with more absolute control. This technique can be used for the purposes of making a living shield, a kamikaze puppet, or simply cause an opponents limbs to jerk and over exert as they move to throw them off balance, creating openings and setting traps. - Rank: C<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Okay, here is where there may be problems.  This feels more like an Rank: A or B technique.  I know it is quite similar to the Puppet Technique in all regards, but even a puppeteer needs many years of practice before they can use fine strands of chakra and attach them to another person.  Is there a weakness to this technique that allows it to be of a lower rank?<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Kibaku Shigai no Justu - (Exploding Corpse Technique) This brutal technique is utilized by the ninja infusing his chakra into a dead body to reanimate the blood and infuse an explosive property via explosive tags. When the ninja wishes, he releases chakra to flash boil the coagulated blood inside of the corpse, making it violently blow up. Victims are burned by the blood and cut and harmed by the bone that fragments from the explosion and also prone to disease. - Rank: C<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Okay, this seems fine, as long as it's dead bodies only, which it seems obvious that it is.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Chishio Shingon no Justu - (Blood Mantra Technique) This technique makes use of any cloth stained with the ninja's blood, typically in the forms of bandages upon still bleeding wounds. The soaked bandages or cloth is then sharpened, animated and controlled through the chakra in the blood to serve as a weapon that can ensnare or cut. When combined with taijutsu this becomes a very deadly and effective method of keeping an opponent at bay or drawing someone whom prefers distance to be drawn into range of more dangerous attacks. The cloth can also be used to set up snare traps if saturated in blood. - Rank: B<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>This looks pretty good, but why, if I may ask, is this so high up?  I would assume it would be, at most, a C-Rank skill.  It seems to have more liabilities than strengths and looks like a last resort type of skill that most should be able to use.  What makes this B-Rank?<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Ryoushi Vijon no Justu - (Hunter Vision Technique) [UNKNOWN] This technique causes the ninja to become blind temporarily and usually involves a blindfold to effectively work. Pooling chakra into the eyes however he gains a new vision of clarity. For he becomes capable of sensing body heat within his surroundings, be they animal or human. So long as they have blood flowing through their veins they become capable of seeing them. Opening his eyes or removing the blindfold breaks the jutsu. - Rank: B<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Looks good to me.  Kind of a psudo-version of the Hyuuga technique, but weaker in all aspects.  Though, again, why is this technique ranked so high?  It feels more like a C-Rank skill.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Naki Chishiho no Justu - (Weeping Blood Technique) [UNKNOWN] This is one of the most advanced of the Chishiho Techniques as the practitioner begins to weep actual blood which the chakra within the tear ducts denies oxygen giving it the distinct black coloring. When utilized his gaze becomes a weapon causing the blood in a single victim to rebel and try to escape the body through anyway it can. The process is painful though no debilitating and depending how injured the victim is can be slow and downright torture or it can be mercifully quick. In short a seriously injured person will likely bleed out in under a minute whilst someone without any injuries has one to three minutes before losing enough blood. The user of this jutsu cannot break his gaze nor blink once his eyes lock with his victim or the jutsu breaks prematurely. Because it can only affect one target at a time it is ill advised against multiple hostiles. - Rank: A<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Okay, now here's the real meat of the problem.  This is scary powerful, perhaps the most powerful technique of all the skills of everyone submitted so far.  I can see that there are more liabilities, but it's pretty much an almost instant-kill technique.  Is it safe to assume that he has not mastered it yet?  It feels to be on the level of a Maegko Sharigan ability.<br/><br/>Other than that, the Bio is....quite short.  Doesn't give very much background at all on the character himself and just seems to focus on the clan.  Perhaps you can extend it some?  Flesh it out a little more?<br/><br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=213034.msg10485908#msg10485908">Quote from: AidenWhite on 13-09-2014, 03:09:24</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I think it's entirely fine that Nanase has both the Rasengan and Chakra-enhanced Strength. And I agree, KS, that use for Kage Bushin, I don't think even a pervert like Naruto would've thought of that o.o As for the number of clones, if I recall correctly, a weakened Kakashi (who is notorious for not having a good chakra supply) was able to summon a dozen clones. Annie even said that Nanase rarely does 10, since it can be assumed that it'd take up a lot of chakra.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>True.  I never said it wasn't fine.  Though, it appears that she's only recently mastered the Chakra-enhanced strength, so it can't be quite as big a power boost as say.....Sakura at the start of the Akatsu Arch?  As for the clones, weren't they regular clones and not physical?  I figured Kakashi only had a max of 5-6 at a time......but that could be because he uses both Sharigan and huge, flashy techniques all the time.  But, we can assume she as passed on a fairly large Chakra supply from Naruto, so that's fine.<br/><div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote">Quote</div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">As for Naruto being alive, why not? He would seem like a stubborn old man who won't go into his grave. How old was Madara before he properly died? Naruto controlled Nature-based chakra, I think that could extend his lifetime as well as having the Nine-tails inside of him.  <br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>Well, you do have a point.  Besides, Naruto being alive means one less Tailed Beast NPC to worry much about.