I should have known that would just spur you on. Brat. Right, onto matters at hand. I've made my post under the assumption that the story is currently moving forward via two separate scenes. And I'm sure between all of us we'll find a way to club them together in due course.<br/><br/>I do have one other request to make - you'll notice at the top of my two most recent posts, I've made references to the characters' names and whom they're in the scene with. Only just realised that those things are kind of vital considering we are using first-person narrative. So moving forward, can those little headers be incorporated into all your posts?<br/><br/>