<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=167462.msg7853070#msg7853070">Quote from: esclavage on 09-03-2013, 20:48:19</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">I don't mind.  This was precisely what I was asking for when I began to write her accent.  Your constructive criticism is noted and appreciated.   :-)<br/><br/>Secondly, you've probably pointed out my biggest foibile as a writer which is I tend to be very wordy.  It is one of the reasons I was.concerned with being able to keep pace with the group game.  Hopefully, I can learn to cut things down to keep a good pace with you all.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div>I quite liked the post-length.  It was succinct and to the point for descriptive narrative and very well written.  I meant the monologue question as a technical qualifier - since there were no verbal replies to her speech - was it technically a monologue rather than dialog?<br/><br/>