I hear all the best stories begin with a kneecapping. :D<br/><br/>That was a very fun read and you chose the right song for it. Sweet Home Alabama is just so upbeat..<br/><br/>It sets up the story well to begin too.<br/><br/>Your timeline is fine. The game's set in 2519 and I was going ot mention that but I see it already factors it in.<br/><br/>I was going to have Thalia join the ship as new crew at the start of the game but she could've been around a while. I have it in her history that she doesn't normally stay on ships more than 6 months, but that's because of her habit of irritating people.