<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=66222.msg2952529#msg2952529">Quote from: Schrödinger on 19-04-2010, 18:13:18</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Still'd like a little help with my guy's Aspects, please. I'm horrible, haven't really thought how to fix this. Willing to start from scratch, though.<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>Well, one thing about Keagan...your High Concept should reflect your template, and what you've listed ("Too Curious for His Own Good") seems like it would fit better as another Aspect.  Your High Concept is, in a nutshell, what separates Keagan from every other were-raven out there.  We already know he's a Corax (equivalent), but what makes him stand out?<br/><br/>To quote page 54 (because I suck at summarizing this properly):<br/><br/>High Concept<br/>Once you’ve decided on the template, you probably have a direction for your high concept (unless you chose the Pure Mortal template, in which case you’ll need to come up with a character idea now). But there’s more to this step than just saying “Oh, I’m a wizard.” (After all, your template does that!) Here’s where you start nailing down the core parts of your character that make him a unique version of that template.<br/><br/>In short, your high concept is a phrase that sums up what your character is about—what and who he is. It’s an aspect (page 98), one of the first and most important ones for your<br/>character.<br/><br/>Think of this aspect like your job, your role in life, or your calling—it’s what you’re good at, but it’s also a duty you have to deal with, and it’s constantly filled with problems of its own. That is to say, it comes with some good and some bad. There are a few different directions you can take this:<br/><br/>You could take the idea of “like your job” literally, as with Karrin Murphy’s high concept: Special Investigations Lead Detective.<br/><br/>You could just go with the template’s requirement without further embellishment, relying on the rest of character creation to show how you’re more than just a carbon copy of that<br/>character type, as with Michael Carpenter’s high concept: Knight of the Cross.<br/><br/>You could throw on an adjective or other descriptor to the template’s requirement to further define your own take on the idea, like Molly Carpenter’s high concept: Wizard-In-Training.<br/><br/>You could mash up the required high concept from the chosen template with a role or profession in society, as with Harry Dresden’s high concept: Wizard Private Eye.<br/><br/>You could combine the requirement from the template with how your character is connected to his family, especially if his family is well-connected or well-known. This is seen with Thomas Raith’s high concept: Fallen Prince of the Raith Family (since everyone in the Raith family is a White Court Vampire, the high concept still covers the requirement in an implied way).