Elf: your post is fine as far as pushing the idea out and the reasoning behind it.<br/><br/>As for the dress... You are rights. It's a one piece unit that once unbuttoned or unzipped behind her neck,  it would go down her body,  not up.<br/><br/>As for lusty,  he can edit anyway he likes,  as long as it makes sense.<br/><br/>As with red,  I just found it hard to believe that he unfastened her bra when he didn't specify how he'd go about doing it.  While that's not so much important, how,  what is important is how she reacts or What she feels.  Coming from a friend who was rectangular and flipping out on Nic after mentioning their feelings on everyone's behalf,<br/><br/>Like I said,  the key is to not scare her off but ease her into it.