Hey, Hexed, two things.<br/><br/>When i make these templates I use tabs for formatting.  This includes undoing the bold face before I put in the tabs.  if you use the tabs i put in for you, your text won't be in bold face.<br/><br/>I think you might have missed some errata!  I'm checking your bonus point expenditures.  Okay, got it.  You paid the correct cost for everything you bought but you're missing some really great opportunities here.<br/>A.  You get 4 free specialties.<br/>B.  Willpower is no longer the sum of the two highest virtues.  Willpower is normally a base rating of 5.<br/>In this game, for these mortals, willpower is a base rating of three, and we'll gain two dots when we exalt.<br/>C.  Missed opportunities:  Willpower and Virtues are<em>very powerful</em>--both in and of themselves and in that they contribute to motes.  They now only cost one bonus point each. I would<em>strongly</em>advise you to shuffle some points around in order to raise virtues and willpower.<br/>D.  You missed the experience points.<br/>E.  Missed one.  The dot in sail costs 2 instead of 1.  Suggestion:  Drop the second dot out of melee to put the first dot in sail.  Move that bonus point into Valour.  Spend 2 EXP to raise melee back to 2.<br/><br/>While i also question it, I love that  this is a gladiator with above average inteligence.  :)  The average wits sucks for her.  Maybe drop a dot from perception into wits, and then put it back with 4 exp?  Anyways.<br/><br/>*  *  *<br/><br/>Cren-kun!  *pounces*  Why didn't you say so when we were doing game stuff together last night?  Let me help!<br/><br/>You're little koneko-chan needs her master!