<div class="quoteheader"><div class="topslice_quote"><a href="https://elliquiy.com/forums/index.php?topic=67019.msg3213201#msg3213201">Quote from: cere on 28-06-2010, 08:44:07</a></div></div><blockquote class="bbc_standard_quote">Now while you two writers are both pillow biting...err...I mean asleep! Yes...that's it...asleep! Sleeping face down! Or, maybe not...maybe you are star gazers...that is...you sleep on your back.  Whew! Well...while you are doing whatever you're doing in bed anyway...chewing on a pillow or star gazing...I've been thinking.<br/><br/>I know...I know...it's not  like me to get the grey matter to join up some synapses but it can happen occasionally...even by accident! Well, back on track...my 'thinking' is along the lines of...this...<br/><br/>...a twist in The Art <del>tail</del> tale...  Now before I say anything...I want it perfectly understood that I don't want to change anyone's current muse...I know how difficult they are to crank up, believe me! <br/><br/>So here is something to ponder over...a two phase (or more) approach... what if Gianna keeps herself hidden from proceedings in the first phase...operates through others...her masked puppets who do her bidding...say two of each sex...whilst she commands them.  She could sit in a secure position, throne like, but either masked or in darkness...enjoying keeping Nicholas and Kelly fully occupied with her game. <br/><br/>The second phase may be a mock escape...letting the two of them think that they have made it out of the building and into the surrounding woodland...but Gianna has them tracked and on video...almost in a human zoo situation...a few drugged darts (or hallucinogens for a bit of surreal mind fucking ??) and whoosh...back they come into the dungeon for the next phase.  <br/><br/>These are simply ideas that we can mull over...and change completely or refine. Perhaps Nile would like to overlay this concept with a challenge or two with the prize, if they are successful, being a choice between options for Gianna's next piece of fun?? <br/><br/>Have I gone beserk or is there something here that you like? It's ok if not, believe me! I won't be offended. <br/> 8-)<br/></blockquote><div class="quotefooter"><div class="botslice_quote"></div></div><br/>How the hell ya been Cere?!   :D<br/><br/>Hmm, well I spent a day thinking and mulling around these plot twists. I am sorry to say my muse is having a hard time accepting them. I do not like the first idea where Gianna keeps herself hidden and operates through others. It just does not seem like something Gianna would do, and it sounds like a lot of boring posts I would have to write up, LOL (I am sorry, I couldn't find any other way to tell you without just saying it). Now the second plot idea... I wouldn't twist and turn like a grumbling old hag if you two wanted to play it that way, but again my muse is having a hard time grabbing onto it. I can see them attempting escapes, and I can see Gianna having the technology and resources to track them down and bring them back under what you described. It would even give Gianna an excuse to punish them more servere than normal for their attempt, and it would keep the roleplay turning into something smut-like (not that smut-rps are bad, mind you!). I have learned though, that when I start rping plays that involve mind control (not to be confused with brain washing)...I QUICKLY loose interest in the roleplay. So if those drugged darts or surreal mind fucking does not involve mind control than I wouldn't mind trying on the second plot twist for size.<br/><br/>:-*