So I'm reading over my last post, and have some concerns.  Specifically about Alzeggra's character.<br/><br/>I assume that she's no stranger to death and danger, which might account for a jaded attitude, but the way she acted kind of seems... cold, I guess.<br/><br/>It makes sense that she'd be more focused on Rachel at the moment, but I worry that I want readers to at least<em>like</em>Alzeggra instead of finding her overly mean.  It's still near the beginning and all, but first impressions do count for something.