Hmm... I'm still not liking the character.  It think it's just be my mood though.  I'll probably be a bit saner after I get some sleep.<br/><br/>I think you're talking too much about your character in terms of fighting an killing, and that sets off a lot of alarm bells with me.  Of course, I brought up torch and pitchfork wielding mobs, so it's not exactly fair to you for me to think that.  Try to tell me a bit more about your character as a character though; what he likes, what his goals are, some of his habits and quirks.  Favorite food, etc.<br/><br/>(There's a very high chance that I'm going to have major objective warping plot twists in every single adventure I run, which makes a character that doesn't just take the most straightforward route to solve problems very handy.)