Only thing I see is the picture, nothing wrong with it per say but the Suloise are fair haired and light eyes. Think Germans, it might be interesting to make her Rhennee, they are more like gypsies. >.< I know I should put an explanation of what each subrace looks like. I'll have to dig out the Greyhawk magazine and do that. :) I see it as an interesting twist on the Sule. :)