Write an email to my English Literature professor asking for help on an issue I'm having with my thesis
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dear professor [professor's name],

i am writing to you today to ask for your help with an issue i am having with my thesis. i have been working on my thesis for the past few months, and i am really struggling to get it to a point where i am happy with it. i have read through your feedback multiple times, and i have tried to incorporate your suggestions, but i am still not sure if i am on the right track.

i am particularly struggling with the introduction and conclusion of my thesis. i am not sure how to introduce my topic in a way that is both interesting and informative, and i am not sure how to conclude my thesis in a way that leaves the reader with a clear understanding of my main points.

i would be very grateful if you could take a look at my thesis and give me some feedback on how i can improve it. i am particularly interested in your thoughts on my introduction and conclusion, but any feedback you have would be greatly appreciated.

thank you for your time and consideration.

sincerely,
[your name]
assistant
Dear Professor [Professor's name],

I am writing to you today to ask for your help with an issue I am having with my thesis. I have been working on my thesis for the past few months, and I am really struggling to get it to a point where I am happy with it. I have read through your feedback multiple times, and I have tried to incorporate your suggestions, but I am still not sure if I am on the right track.

I am particularly struggling with the introduction and conclusion of my thesis. I am not sure how to introduce my topic in a way that is both interesting and informative, and I am not sure how to conclude my thesis in a way that leaves the reader with a clear understanding of my main points.

I would be very grateful if you could take a look at my thesis and give me some feedback on how I can improve it. I am particularly interested in your thoughts on my introduction and conclusion, but any feedback you have would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely,
[Your name]
assistant