Thanks for taking the time to review these changes. Please thank the editor and then give specific, constructive feedback about what you feel needs to change in order for the revision to be acceptable.
感谢您花时间审核这些修订。也请您向编辑者说声谢谢，并请您对怎样修改才能达到可接受的标准给出一些明确的、有建设性的反馈意见。