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Tanemmirt imi tmuddeḍ seg wakud-ik akken ad tesneqdeḍ ibelliden-a. Ur tettura ad tesnemreḍ wid yettarun daɣen ad asen-tmuddeḍ tikta ibennun, tid ibanen, tid icudden ɣer yibeddilen i tettwaliḍ laqen akken aceggir ad yettwaqbel.