### Chinese: 我在犹豫要不要交定金的时候，他们就会邀请他们所谓的经理来告诉你，你今天只要把定金交了我们就能给你多少的优惠。
### English: When I hesitate to pay the deposit, they will invite their so-called manager to tell you how much of a discount we can give you as long as you pay the deposit today.
### Errors: There is a minor error at "I". There is a minor error at "itate". There is a minor error at "will". There is a minor error at "you". There is a minor error at "today".

### Improved English: As I hesitated about whether to pay the deposit, they would invite their so-called manager to tell me that once I paid the deposit on that day, they could give me certain discount.