### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: I haven't been to Richang for a long time, and the fruit is still so delicious & it's full of real materials. The first time I ordered barbecued pork bun was the southern taste of my favorite soft flour!
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "&". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "barbecued pork bun". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "the southern taste of my favorite soft flour". There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "my favorite".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!