### Chinese: 好几年没去吃日昌了，各种小店粤菜的崛起分散了客流。
### English: I haven't eaten Richang for several years, and the rise of Cantonese cuisine in various small shops has dispersed the passenger flow.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "I haven't eaten Richang". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "dispersed the passenger flow". There is a minor error of terminology is non-standard or does not fit context. terminology is used inconsistently at "Cantonese cuisine".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a few years as emerging little Cantonese restaurants scattered the customers.