### Chinese: 能否帮忙跟进一下，因为比较着急，谢谢你
### English: Could you help me with the follow-up because I'm in a hurry. Thank you
### Errors: There is a minor error of punctuation error at "Missing period at the end of the sentence".

### Improved English: Could you help follow up on it because I’m in a hurry, thank you.