### Chinese: A字短裙会很显瘦，比较适合胖女孩，上衣要选择紧身一些的，形成层次感会更显瘦。
### English: The short dress will be very thin, more suitable for fat girls, the shirt to choose some tightness, the formation of a level feeling will be more thin.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "short dress instead of a-line skirt". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "more suitable for fat girls". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "shirt instead of top". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "will be very thin". There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "the formation of a level feeling".

### Improved English: A-line skirt makes people seem slimmer and is suitable for fat girls; it’s better to choose tight-fitting upper outer garment so as to form a sense of layers and make you look slimmer.