### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: It's been a long time since I came to Richang. The fruit fishing is still so delicious & the real ingredients are sufficient. The first time I ordered the char siu bun, it was the southern taste of the soft flour I love!
### Errors: There is a minor error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "fruit fishing". There is a minor error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "&". There is a minor error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "the southern taste of the soft flour I love". There is a minor error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "It's been a long time since I came to Richang.".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!