### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: It's been a long time since I came to Richang, and the fruit fish is still so delicious & the real material is sufficient. The first time I order barbecued pork buns, it is the southern taste of soft flour I love!
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "&". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "fruit fish". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "the real material is sufficient". There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "barbecued pork buns". There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "I love!".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!