### Chinese: 我住在上水，为何订单会在海辉花园
### English: I live in Sheung Shui, why would I order Hai Fai Garden
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "Sheung Shui instead of Shangshui". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "Hai Fai Garden instead of Haihui Garden". There is a minor error of problems with grammar, other than orthography at "would I order instead of why would I order".

### Improved English: I live in Shangshui, and why is the order in Haihui Garden?