### Chinese: 用心去做方能成功，用细致去塑造精致，美缝我们是认真的。
### English: Do it with heart to succeed, use meticulousness to shape refinement, beauty sewing we are serious.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "we are serious about creating exquisite things". There is a major error of problems with grammar, other than orthography at "Do it with heart to succeed". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "beauty sewing".

### Improved English: Do it with heart and we can succeed; we are serious about creating exquisite things with our attention to details, and we are serious about cleaning seams.