### Chinese: 我住在上水，为何订单会在海辉花园
### English: I live in Sheung Shui, why the order will be in Hai Fai Garden
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "why the order will be in Hai Fai Garden". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "Sheung Shui". There is a minor error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "I live in Shangshui".

### Improved English: I live in Shangshui, and why is the order in Haihui Garden?