### Chinese: 亲爱的小主，首先非常感谢您的认可和评价，支雲会努力越做越好!
### English: Dear little master, first of all thank you very much for your recognition and evaluation, the sky will try to do the better!
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "the sky". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "little master". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "recognition and evaluation". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "the sky will try to do the better". There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "first of all".

### Improved English: Dear customer, we would like to first thank you for your affirmation and comment, and Zhi Yun will work hard and get better and better!