### Chinese: 除去这些他们的服务点费收的也比其他家公司的高。
### English: In addition to these their service point fees were higher than other companies.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "their service point fees were". There is a minor error of problems with grammar, other than orthography at "In addition to these".

### Improved English: Apart from these, their service point fee is also higher than that of other companies.