### Chinese: A字短裙会很显瘦，比较适合胖女孩，上衣要选择紧身一些的，形成层次感会更显瘦。
### English: A short skirt will be very thin, more suitable for fat girls, tops to choose some tight, forming a sense of layers will be more thin.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "A short skirt will be very thin". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "tops to choose some tight". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "forming a sense of layers". There is a major error of problems with grammar, other than orthography at "will be more thin". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "A short skirt will be very thin, more suitable for fat girls,".

### Improved English: A-line skirt makes people seem slimmer and is suitable for fat girls; it’s better to choose tight-fitting upper outer garment so as to form a sense of layers and make you look slimmer.