### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: It's been a long time since I came to Richang. The fruit scramble is still tasty and full of real ingredients. It is my first time to order barbecued pork buns, which I like with the southern taste of soft flour!
### Errors: There is a minor error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "fruit scramble instead of fruit mix". There is a minor error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "barbecued pork buns instead of cha siu bao". There is a minor error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "soft flour instead of fluffy flour".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!