### Chinese: 在新化红茶展馆，福建茶商看中一款名为“冰里春”的高山茶，当即下订单。
### English: At the New Black Tea Exhibition Hall, Fujian Tea Merchants watched a high mountain tea called Ice Spring, when ordered immediately.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "Ice Spring". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "Fujian Tea Merchants". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "watched". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "when ordered immediately". There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "New Black Tea Exhibition Hall".

### Improved English: In the exhibition hall of Xinhua black tea, a tea merchant from Fujian took a fancy to a high mountain tea named “spring in ice” and placed an order immediately.