### Chinese: A字短裙会很显瘦，比较适合胖女孩，上衣要选择紧身一些的，形成层次感会更显瘦。
### English: An A-line skirt will look slimming, and is more suitable for fat girls, the jacket should choose tighter, form a layered sense of thinner.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "the jacket should choose tighter". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "form a layered sense of thinner". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "look slimming". There is a minor error of problems with grammar, other than orthography at "An A-line skirt will look slimming".

### Improved English: A-line skirt makes people seem slimmer and is suitable for fat girls; it’s better to choose tight-fitting upper outer garment so as to form a sense of layers and make you look slimmer.