### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: For a long time not to come to Chongqing, the fruit harvest is still so good to drink & real material enough, the first time the fork burning bag, is my love of the southern taste of lean soft flour!
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "Chongqing instead of Richang". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "drink & real material enough". There is a major error of incorrect translation is missing content from the correct translation at "fork burning bag instead of char siu bao". There is a major error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "For a long time not to come to Chongqing". There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "is my love".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!