### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: It has been a long time since I came to Richang. The fruit is still very tasty & the ingredients are abundant. This is my first time to order BBQ pork buns. It is the Southern taste of soft flour that I love.
### Errors: There is a minor error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "& instead of and". There is a minor error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "BBQ pork buns instead of Cha Siu Bao". There is a minor error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "the Southern taste of soft flour instead of the Southern taste of fluffy flour".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!