### Chinese: 好久没来日昌了，水果捞还是那么好喝&真材实料足，第一次点叉烧包，就是我爱的松软面粉的南方口感！
### English: It's been a long time since I came to Richang, and the fruit dish is still so good & genuine, the first time I ordered BBQ pork buns, it is the southern taste of light flour that I love!
### Errors: There is a major error of wrong grammatical register (eg, inappropriately informal pronouns). internal inconsistency (not related to terminology) at "&". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "BBQ pork buns". There is a minor error of incorrect translation has stylistic problems at "the southern taste of light flour".

### Improved English: I haven’t been to Richang for a long time, and the Fruit Mix is still delicious and has a lot of real stuff in it, it was the first time for me to order Cha Siu Bao, and it has the Southern taste with fluffy flour which I enjoyed!