### Chinese: 我在犹豫要不要交定金的时候，他们就会邀请他们所谓的经理来告诉你，你今天只要把定金交了我们就能给你多少的优惠。
### English: When I hesitate to pay the deposit, they invite their so-called manager to tell you how much discount we can give you as long as you pay the deposit today.
### Errors: There is a major error of incorrect translation does not accurately represent the correct translation at "as long as you pay the deposit today". There is a major error of incorrect translation includes information not present in the correct translation at "so-called manager". There is a minor error of problems with grammar, other than orthography at "When I hesitate to pay the deposit".

### Improved English: As I hesitated about whether to pay the deposit, they would invite their so-called manager to tell me that once I paid the deposit on that day, they could give me certain discount.