need criticism okay originally started free write wrote school decided go depth with im curious improve far walked village expecting merchants trading animals running around people enjoying lives nothing people wildlife even plants wilting knew something wasnt right even barbaric orcs mischievous spirits wouldve left trace behind exploring desolate area quite time came upon large wooden building town hall assumed figured clues happened area inside showed sign damage almost like everyone decided leave thing showed life tapestry wizard bravely falling combat manticore coldness air pierced side knot formed stomach blood running cold pull together youre better this youve never backed before now thought youve dealt plenty before cyclopes jinn whats bad th  thought interrupted sounds marching filled head quickly hid near window see arrived sounds snickering growling goblins yet looked perplexed was arent using tunnels said one goblin ive heard rumors defenseless town secret path leading tressure filled castle thought ripe taking never thought itd easy besides last time used tunnels headed dwarf central literally said one front pulled bow arrow readied shot waiting see force necessary goblins stopped right tracks began sniff air dozen goblins turned direction making heart pump loud enough could surely hear it one goblin began charge town hall jolt stop goblins known quite difficult scare would even call stupid fearless look fear confusion goblins face body contorted showed even toughest warriors crack hid watching arms flail legs twist turn torso bend odd angles sounds bones snapping flesh mashing screamed agony body began float comrades screamed terror desperately trying anything help him yells cries help goblin suddenly stopped body went limp hooded figure materialized hand goblins back dropping ground type mist flowing hand goblins stared disbelief hooded figure spoke one word sumegruser skeletal hands rose ground held goblins hooded figure approached screams echoed throughout village sound heard miles type necromancer knew prepared deal one skilled turned around prayed every god knew would make one piece slowly crept towards window left realized hooded figure would likely hear try get away grabbed chair threw window right hooded figure turned towards noise repeated phrase skeletal hands rose grabbed chair jumped window raced village expecting grabbed hands moment heart felt like bursting chest barely able calm myself felt lost nearby forest everything looking same screams goblins still eched though area making area feel unescapable running seemingly endless forest began feel adrenaline leave body came across body water began pass exhaustion near water heard someone say single word mullebal cold boney hands rose water dragged in tightening unearthly grip me water gushed lungs could feel life draining me like prey constrictor act fast could faintly see figures dragging depths skeletal warriors dressed types gear villager tunics cleric robes began ponder many lives necromancer claimed reanimated focus dont much time thought eyes wandered around murky abyss searching anything could use escape last eyes found something rune barely held together attached clerics robes hastily unsheathed sword slashed wildly breaking many undead warriors bodies quickly broke bodies reformed began drag again cleric closer time arms reach best could lunged forward grabbed rune speedily turning pages could barely read incantation option water flooded mouth read spell aloud thoron yelled bolt lightning struck skeletons completely vaporizing them also hitting me never thought much pain divine electricity could bring never want experience again potions better effective advertise thought slowly began float towards surface wishing never gone village peeked head water greeted night sky goblin screams seemed stop underwater assumed worst crawled onto shore coughing water constantly wandered randomly woods barely able tell anything apart attempted drowning certainly help physically recover sleep seemed enticing moment rest headno screamed realized stupid was falling asleep yelling probably alerting everything area stumbled throughout mazelike forest barely conscious joy hope came came across quiet village extinguished realized went circle right back village options crept around ghost town making sure quiet possible thought perhaps tapestry secrets reveal maybe even happened town quietly snuck town hall ready run sight necromancer find everything been lurking towards tapestry could clearly see tapestry meant hide something quietly removed tapestry finding dark tunnel must goblins talking about thought myself stared seemly endless abyss wondering mysteries hidden there grabbed torch fall used flint light it