(1) Sometimes when Isabelle goes shopping she leaves her two-year-old son Maximilian in the backseat of her station with the windows closed. (2) Normally when she returns Maximilian is O.K.? (3) But on one hot summer day when Isabelle returned to the car, Maximilian’s body overheated and he fainted. (4) The paramedics was able to rescue Maximilian and Isabelle learned an extremely valuable lesson. (5) It should not, however, have taken nearly losing her son to learn not to leave a child alone in the car. 1. What change, if any, should be made in Maximilian’s body overheated, and he sentence 1? fainted. No revision is needed. Change two-year-old to two-years-old Change Isabelle to Isabelle’s 4. What change, if any, should be made in Change shopping to shop sentence 4? Make no change Change paramedics to paramedic 2. What change, if any, should be made in Change rescue to resque sentence 2? Change was to were Make no change Change Normally to Normal Change returns to returning 5. What sentence be added after BEST Change the question mark to a period sentence 3? Make no change In 15 minutes a car can 3. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 3? temperatures as high as 172˚F. Maximilian has many friends. But on one hot summer day when Isabelle likes to go shopping on Isabelle returned to the car and Tuesdays. Maximilian’s body overheated and he Maximilian and Isabelle like going to fainted. the park together. One hot summer day when Isabelle returned to the car, she found Maximilian’s body overheated and he fainted. But on one hot summer day, when Isabelle returned to the car, Circle the word that comes first in alphabetical order. wheel wreck which wagon lock latch lane
(1) Sometimes when Isabelle goes shopping she leaves her two-year-old son Maximilian in the backseat of her station with the windows closed. (2) Normally when she returns Maximilian is O.K.? (3) But on one hot summer day when Isabelle returned to the car, Maximilian’s body overheated and he fainted. (4) The paramedics was able to rescue Maximilian and Isabelle learned an extremely valuable lesson. (5) It should not, however, have taken nearly losing her son to learn not to leave a child alone in the car. 1. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1? Change two-year-old to two-years-old Change Isabelle to Isabelle’s Change shopping to shop Make no change 2. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 2? Change Normally to Normal Change returns to returning Change the question mark to a period Make no change 3. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 3? But on one hot summer day when Isabelle returned to the car and Maximilian’s body overheated and he fainted. One hot summer day when Isabelle returned to the car, she found Maximilian’s body overheated and he fainted. But on one hot summer day, when Isabelle returned to the car, Maximilian’s body overheated, and he fainted. No revision is needed. 4. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4? Change paramedics to paramedic Change rescue to resque Change was to were Make no change 5. What sentence BEST be added after sentence 3? In 15 minutes a car can temperatures as high as 172˚F. Maximilian has many friends. Isabelle likes to go shopping on Tuesdays. Maximilian and Isabelle like going to the park together. Circle the word that comes first in alphabetical order. wheel wreck wagon which lock lane latch
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