(6) Jeremiah noticed that the driver’s body came crashing through the windshield while the passenger stayed in his seat. (7) It is because the passenger was wearing a seatbelt that he was not hurt in the wreck. 1. What change, if any, should be made in 4. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 5? sentence 1? As they were driving, Jeremiah cruised Change rainie to rainy across the road and the driver was Change still to tills forced to hit the brakes. Delete for Jeremiah cruised across the road as they Make no change were driving, the driver was forced to hit the brakes. 2. What change, if any, should be made in As they were driving Jeremiah cruised sentence 3? across the road, and the driver was forced to hit the brakes. Change driver’s to drivers No revision is needed. Insert a after seatbelt Delete not 5. Which sentence could BEST be added after Make no change sentence 7? 3. What change, if any, should be made in As a result, Jeremiah understood why he sentence 4? should wear a seatbelt. The two workers were on their lunch Change made to break. Change dificult to difficult Jeremiah got his new scooter for Change it to its Christmas. Make no change Jeremiah’s friend likes to ride a bicycle as well. Are the following sentences a simile or not a simile? Riding a bike without a helmet is like diving into an empty swimming pool. simile Do not play along the railroad tracks. not a simile Is the underlined word an adverb or a verb? Breath or blood tests measure alcohol consumption. verb Correct the sentences. what time are curfew asked matt time is our curfew?” asked Matt. “What
(6) Jeremiah noticed that the driver’s body came crashing through the windshield while the passenger stayed in his seat. (7) It is because the passenger was wearing a seatbelt that he was not hurt in the wreck. 1. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 1? Change rainie to rainy Change still to tills Delete for Make no change 2. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 3? Change driver’s to drivers Insert a after seatbelt Delete not Make no change 3. What change, if any, should be made in sentence 4? Change made to Change dificult to difficult Change it to its Make no change 4. What is the BEST way to revise sentence 5? As they were driving, Jeremiah cruised across the road and the driver was forced to hit the brakes. Jeremiah cruised across the road as they were driving, the driver was forced to hit the brakes. As they were driving Jeremiah cruised across the road, and the driver was forced to hit the brakes. No revision is needed. 5. Which sentence could BEST be added after sentence 7? As a result, Jeremiah understood why he should wear a seatbelt. The two workers were on their lunch break. Jeremiah got his new scooter for Christmas. Jeremiah’s friend likes to ride a bicycle as well. Are the following sentences a simile or not a simile? Riding a bike without a helmet is like diving into an empty swimming pool. simile Do not play along the railroad tracks. not a simile Is the underlined word an adverb or a verb? Breath or blood tests measure alcohol consumption. verb Correct the sentences. what time are curfew asked matt “What time is our curfew?” asked Matt.
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