facilities. last sentence: of management “Examples clar GER2 30 4.14 Wrong App. is cited in this Para. system lifetime provisions are provided in App. 2 5.” The Mmanagement systems should make JAP E3 4.14 Editorial provision for Line 2 (p.17) in App. 2. 5 …provided JAP E4 4.14 Editorial Line 2 (p.17) CAN 19a 4.15 Change “… management facilities are Since management system is X 1st sent. maintained,…” to “…management facility is singular then typically it is one maintained,…”. waste management facility. However, if the intention was to mean that there could be multiple facilities under one management system, then this comment can be disregarded. 1st sentence: management system “The edit GER3 31 4.15 Grammar. should be designed to ensure that the safety of the radioactive waste management facilities are is maintained, …” edit IND 8 4.15 The management system should be Paraphrasing for better expression designed to ensure that the safety of the radioactive waste management facilities are maintained, and that the quality of the records and of subsidiary information on radioactive waste inventories is preserved, with account taken of the duration of the management and storage periods and the consecutive management steps are taken into account, for example, clearance,
facilities. clar GER2 30 4.14 last sentence: “Examples of management system lifetime provisions are provided in App. 2 5.” Wrong App. is cited in this Para. JAP E3 4.14 Line 2 (p.17) The Mmanagement systems should make provision for Editorial JAP E4 4.14 Line 2 (p.17) …provided in App. 5 2. Editorial CAN 19a 4.15 1st sent. Change “… management facilities are maintained,…” to “…management facility is maintained,…”. Since management system is singular then typically it is one waste management facility. However, if the intention was to mean that there could be multiple facilities under one management system, then this comment can be disregarded. X edit GER3 31 4.15 1st sentence: “The management system should be designed to ensure that the safety of the radioactive waste management facilities are is maintained, …” Grammar. edit IND 8 4.15 The management system should be designed to ensure that the safety of the radioactive waste management facilities are maintained, and that the quality of the records and of subsidiary information on radioactive waste inventories is preserved, with account taken of the duration of the management and storage periods and the consecutive management steps are taken into account, for example, clearance, Paraphrasing for better expression
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