1st sentence: the likelihood and “… edit GER3 35 4.24 Consistency with the terminology consequences of loss, damage or used elsewhere in this document deterioration due to unpredictable events (compare with Paras 6.76 (e), (f) such as fire, flooding or other natural or and 6.85 (b)) as well as in the human initiated occurrences induced Safety Requirements NS-R-3 and hazards.” subordinated Safety Guides. edit IND 12 4.24 Records concerning the radioactive waste Paraphrasing for better expression and its storage that need to be retained for an extended period should be stored in a manner properly such that minimizes the likelihood and consequences of loss, damage or deterioration due to unpredictable events such as fire, flooding or other natural or human initiated occurrences can be minimized. 4.24 The original wording may be any records are inadvertently destroyed, “If clar UK 57 misinterpreted, as asking for the records that survive are likely to become consideration to be given to more valuable operators should – deletion of the remaining records, evaluate their records retention strategy in in the event that a proportion of the such circumstances.” pre-existing records are accidently destroyed. IRQ 8 5 Safety considerations in the design of Ensuring safety during operation of predisposal waste management facilities predisposal waste management for radioactive waste should be specified facilities. (such as ventilation systems, engineering shields, etc.) 5 This section could be made more concise The original text contains a UK 58 and better targeted if it focused on issues significant amount of guidance that specific to the management of radioactive is applicable to all activities with wastes. The Guidance on the Management any type of nuclear matter and is of Higher Activity Wastes that has been adequately covered in other Safety
edit GER3 35 4.24 1st sentence: “… the likelihood and consequences of loss, damage or deterioration due to unpredictable events such as fire, flooding or other natural or human initiated occurrences induced hazards.” Consistency with the terminology used elsewhere in this document (compare with Paras 6.76 (e), (f) and 6.85 (b)) as well as in the Safety Requirements NS-R-3 and subordinated Safety Guides. edit IND 12 4.24 Records concerning the radioactive waste and its storage that need to be retained for an extended period should be stored in a manner properly such that minimizes the likelihood and consequences of loss, damage or deterioration due to unpredictable events such as fire, flooding or other natural or human initiated occurrences can be minimized. Paraphrasing for better expression clar UK 57 4.24 “If any records are inadvertently destroyed, the records that survive are likely to become more valuable – operators should their records retention strategy in such circumstances.” The original wording may be misinterpreted, as asking for consideration to be given to deletion of the remaining records, in the event that a proportion of the pre-existing records are accidently destroyed. IRQ 8 5 Safety considerations in the design of predisposal waste management facilities for radioactive waste should be specified (such as ventilation systems, engineering shields, etc.) Ensuring safety during operation of predisposal waste management facilities. UK 58 5 This section could be made more concise and better targeted if it focused on issues specific to the management of radioactive wastes. The Guidance on the Management of Higher Activity Wastes that has been The original text contains a significant amount of guidance that is applicable to all activities with any type of nuclear matter and is adequately covered in other Safety evaluate
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