the voice of the narrator, and to hold the attention of the reader. Mostly precise word choice, carefully crafted sentences, and varied transitional elements contribute to the effective style, lending clarity and coherence narrative’s mostly to the flow of events. The suspenseful ending focuses attention on the plight of the narrator and invites the reader to continue to the next chapter. Lab Rat Chapter #2 B2>Just as I was starting to doze off, a flash of light filled my room. I opened my eyes and looked at my floor, only to find it covered with glowing green slime. I blinked and rubbed <B2 my eyes to make sure what I was seeing was real. When I opened my eyes, the slime was still there, glowing even B3>I brighter than before. knew I had to get out of there <B3, so I opened the window next to my bed and began to climb out. I stopped short when I saw the endless blackness that replaced the lush, green lawn my father had cared so much about.
the voice of the narrator, and to hold the attention of the reader. Mostly precise word choice, carefully crafted sentences, and varied transitional elements contribute to the narrative’s mostly effective style, lending clarity and coherence to the flow of events. The suspenseful ending focuses attention on the plight of the narrator and invites the reader to continue to the next chapter. Lab Rat Chapter #2 B2>Just as I was starting to doze off, a flash of light filled my room. I opened my eyes and looked at my floor, only to find it covered with glowing green slime. I blinked and rubbed my eyes to make sure what I was seeing was real. <B2 When I opened my eyes, the slime was still there, glowing even brighter than before. B3>I knew I had to get out of there <B3, so I opened the window next to my bed and began to climb out. I stopped short when I saw the endless blackness that replaced the lush, green lawn my father had cared so much about.
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