Activity 2 The following two emails should be written using formal language - Identify the informal language mistakes in both emails: Formal Email – Employee Requesting Sick Leave from HR Manager: Hi there Dermot, This is about my sick leave entitlement for my job at Union Bank. I want 4 days of sick leave for some minor surgery I plan to have in April. Tell me of any files I need to arrange for this and the deadline? Here’s a document with my job info for you. I’ll be back with some dates for that sick leave. Thanks, Sarah Formal Email - From Office Manager to all Staff: Hey everybody, This is about your timesheets. I don’t have all of them up-to-date. Can you hurry and send them for June, July and August? I’m going to email again if you don’t send them to me soon. Cheers, Office Manager Activity 2 (continued) The following email should be written using formal language - Identify the informal language mistakes and rewrite them in a formal language style. Informal Email –Company Employee Replying to a Customer Order: Hi Customer,
Activity 2 The following two emails should be written using formal language - Identify the informal language mistakes in both emails: Formal Email – Employee Requesting Sick Leave from HR Manager: Hi there Dermot, This is about my sick leave entitlement for my job at Union Bank. I want 4 days of sick leave for some minor surgery I plan to have in April. Tell me of any files I need to arrange for this and the deadline? Here’s a document with my job info for you. I’ll be back with some dates for that sick leave. Thanks, Sarah Formal Email - From Office Manager to all Staff: Hey everybody, This is about your timesheets. I don’t have all of them up-to-date. Can you hurry and send them for June, July and August? I’m going to email again if you don’t send them to me soon. Cheers, Office Manager Activity 2 (continued) The following email should be written using formal language - Identify the informal language mistakes and rewrite them in a formal language style. Informal Email –Company Employee Replying to a Customer Order: Hi Customer,
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