1883 9.41.5 207 45 "If the Action subfield of Add indented bullets with the commenter the NDP Paging Response is at "If the NDP Paging 0: If the NDP Paging Requestor is a non-AP Revised: Requester STA is a non- AP STA" and " If the STA, it shall send a (NDP) NDP Paging TGah editor to make PS-Poll or uplink trigger Requestor is a n AP" changes shown in frame addressed to the NDP Paging Responder. If the NDP Paging Requester STA is an AP, it shall send an NDP CTS to self with the duration field set to zero." Wrong use of colon and capitals etc. If using bullets then stick to them. 2145 9.41.5 184 51 change "the TWT change "the TWT Agree with the commenter NDP Command Reply field of Command Reply Paging NDP Paging Response field of NDP Paging Revised: Setup TWT element" to " the Response TWT TWT Command Reply element" to " the TGah editor to make field in TWT element of TWT Command changes shown in NDP Paging Response " Reply field in TWT element of NDP Paging Response " 2146 9.41.5 101 30 There's no Minimum Sleep Change to "Min Sleep Agree with the commenter NDP Duration field Duration field" Paging Revised: TGah editor to make changes shown in 2221 9.41.5 184 22 Have some questions to the Please clarify the text Reject: text in line 22 page 184, in line 22 page 184 to including: there is no address the questions Comment fails to identify indication info in the NDP asked by the comment. an issue. Paging field as defined in Figure 8-401de. Then, how In response to the to indicate a NDP request or commenter: a NDP response? Does it use the TWT Request NDP Paging field is in indicator? If so, then can a TWT element (Figure STA request a TWT and NDP paging at the same Yes, it should use TWT time? element as described in the paragraph
1883 9.41.5 207 45 "If the Action subfield of the NDP Paging Response is 0: If the NDP Paging Requester STA is a non- AP STA, it shall send a (NDP) PS-Poll or uplink trigger frame addressed to the NDP Paging Responder. If the NDP Paging Requester STA is an AP, it shall send an NDP CTS to self with the duration field set to zero." Wrong use of colon and capitals etc. If using bullets then stick to them. Add indented bullets at "If the NDP Paging Requestor is a non-AP STA" and " If the NDP Paging Requestor is a n AP" with the commenter Revised: TGah editor to make changes shown in 2145 9.41.5 NDP Paging Setup 184 51 change "the TWT Command Reply field of NDP Paging Response TWT element" to " the TWT Command Reply field in TWT element of NDP Paging Response " change "the TWT Command Reply field of NDP Paging Response TWT element" to " the TWT Command Reply field in TWT element of NDP Paging Response " Agree with the commenter Revised: TGah editor to make changes shown in 2146 9.41.5 NDP Paging 101 30 There's no Minimum Sleep Duration field Change to "Min Sleep Duration field" Agree with the commenter Revised: TGah editor to make changes shown in 2221 9.41.5 184 22 Have some questions to the text in line 22 page 184, including: there is no indication info in the NDP Paging field as defined in Figure 8-401de. Then, how to indicate a NDP request or a NDP response? Does it use the TWT Request indicator? If so, then can a STA request a TWT and NDP paging at the same time? Please clarify the text in line 22 page 184 to address the questions asked by the comment. Reject: Comment fails to identify an issue. In response to the commenter: NDP Paging field is in TWT element (Figure Yes, it should use TWT element as described in the paragraph
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