does nothing get transmitted at all? 426 "is negotiated and agreed Delete "and agreed on Accepted on during negotiation" -- during negotiation" Changed wording these are the same thing, throughout accordingly in baseline conventions 418 "The direction(s) of LMR Clarify Revised feedback(s) is Rewrote/removed (are) negotiated at service paragraph establishment." -- so can be ISTA-to-RSTA only (unlike HEz)? 419 "In both directions, LMR Delete, or change to a Accepted feedback is neither NOTE, referring to the use Now refer to Acktion No acknowledged" -- this of Action No Ack frames Ack frame format follows from it being in Action No Ack frames 420 "LMR feedback is As it says in the comment reported in the next Replaced sounding sounding sequence. " but sequence with the Figures 11-xx indicate measurement exchange the LMR feedback is after the sounding sequence, not part of it 421 What is the "sounding Clarify sequence" for VHTz? Is it Added language that the NDPA NDP NDP from defines “Sounding Figure 11-xx in sequence” 11.22.6.4.4.2? 416 What is the point of Delete in all cases Revised having units "[ms]" if there Removed are no numbers or other marks on the axis? 179 This is not IEEE Fix the issue mentioned in Revised language. the comment. Rewrote/removed paragraph 430 Spurious full stop Delete one of them Accepted Fixed typo 428 "TOA and TOD format" -- Change "format" to Revised what is this? "reporting". Ditto line 14 Rewrote/removed paragraph 431 Same comments re See comments on that Accepted secured wording as for subclause Changed wording 11.22.6.4.3.4 accordingly 432 Same comments re See comments on that Accepted secured wording as for subclause Changed wording 11.22.6.4.3.4 accordingly TGaz Editor: replace subclause 11.22.6.4.4 with the following revised text, changes relative to 0.5
does nothing get transmitted at all? 426 "is negotiated and agreed on during negotiation" -- these are the same thing, in baseline conventions Delete "and agreed on during negotiation" throughout Accepted Changed wording accordingly 418 "The direction(s) of LMR feedback(s) is (are) negotiated at service establishment." -- so can be ISTA-to-RSTA only (unlike HEz)? Clarify Revised Rewrote/removed paragraph 419 "In both directions, LMR feedback is neither acknowledged" -- this follows from it being in Action No Ack frames Delete, or change to a NOTE, referring to the use of Action No Ack frames Accepted Now refer to Acktion No Ack frame format 420 "LMR feedback is reported in the next sounding sequence. " but the Figures 11-xx indicate the LMR feedback is after the sounding sequence, not part of it As it says in the comment Replaced sounding sequence with measurement exchange 421 What is the "sounding sequence" for VHTz? Is it the NDPA NDP NDP from Figure 11-xx in 11.22.6.4.4.2? Clarify Added language that defines “Sounding sequence” 416 What is the point of having units "[ms]" if there are no numbers or other marks on the axis? Delete in all cases Revised Removed 179 This is not IEEE language. Fix the issue mentioned in the comment. Revised Rewrote/removed paragraph 430 Spurious full stop Delete one of them Accepted Fixed typo 428 "TOA and TOD format" -- what is this? Change "format" to "reporting". Ditto line 14 Revised Rewrote/removed paragraph 431 Same comments re secured wording as for 11.22.6.4.3.4 See comments on that subclause Accepted Changed wording accordingly 432 Same comments re secured wording as for 11.22.6.4.3.4 See comments on that subclause Accepted Changed wording accordingly TGaz Editor: replace subclause 11.22.6.4.4 with the following revised text, changes relative to 0.5
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