which AC Agree with the comment. could The ..” sentene is “if participate redundant and is deleted. in contention. TGax editor, please make changes as shown in document 11-18/444r2 under CID 12212 11161 324.05 CCA rules are referred to Add a Revised: once in the D2.0. A clause Note3 reference is missing of where Agree with the comment and which rules to follow for CCA rules the text is revised to make it HE STA during a Quiet are defined more clear. Time Period. for HE STA e.g., TGax editor, please make clause changes as in 27.16.4.2 document 11-18/444r2 and or under CID 11161 other relevant clauses in the draft. 11361 323.27 Fix references to different Fix all Revised: Quiet Time Period instances elements. There is only one in this The text is revised element (call Quiet Time section accordingly Period Setup) and the (including Control field identifies if fig 27-13) this is a request, response or to refer to TGax editor, please make setup flavor of the element. the correct changes as shown in Similarly, there is only element document 11-18/444r2 Quiet Time Period action and frame under CID 11361 frame and the content (i.e., name. Add flavor of the Quiet element) spec text to determines whether it is a make request, response or setup reference frame. to the Control field in the element to the type of and procedure. 11871 324.45 Repetitive use of a word in Reword Accepted: the same sentence the 2nd sentence in TGax editor, please make the note as: changes as shown in "The document 11-18/444r2 under CID 11871 mitigation
which AC could participate in contention. Agree with the comment. The “if ..” sentene is redundant and is deleted. TGax editor, please make changes as shown in document 11-18/444r2 under CID 12212 11161 324.05 CCA rules are referred to once in the D2.0. A clause reference is missing of which rules to follow for HE STA during a Quiet Time Period. Add a Note3 where CCA rules are defined for HE STA e.g., clause 27.16.4.2 and or other relevant clauses in the draft. Revised: Agree with the comment and the text is revised to make it more clear. TGax editor, please make changes as in document 11-18/444r2 under CID 11161 11361 323.27 Fix references to different Quiet Time Period elements. There is only one element (call Quiet Time Period Setup) and the Control field identifies if this is a request, response or setup flavor of the element. Similarly, there is only Quiet Time Period action frame and the content (i.e., flavor of the Quiet element) determines whether it is a request, response or setup frame. Fix all instances in this section (including fig 27-13) to refer to the correct element and frame name. Add spec text to make reference to the Control field in the element to the type of and procedure. Revised: The text is revised accordingly TGax editor, please make changes as shown in document 11-18/444r2 under CID 11361 11871 324.45 Repetitive use of a word in the same sentence Reword the 2nd sentence in the note as: "The mitigation Accepted: TGax editor, please make changes as shown in document 11-18/444r2 under CID 11871
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