marked with CID 7926. 7927 71.30 There can be no TWT Change the cell to Reject the accept Mark – RISON request to accept "N/A" outcome is also since a scheduled used to accept a STA cannot make a suggest or request (see 70.35) demand. 7928 71.33 It says "(See" in the Change to "(see" Accept TGax Mark – 4th column editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7928. 7929 73.22 are no Delete the cited Revise generally Mark – RISON restrictions on the text; also at line 49. agree with frames transmitted by Also fix at line 56 to comment - TGax the schedul- only refer to the editor shall make ing STA of the scheduled STA the changes shown broadcast TWT SP." -- in 11-17/0777r1 but the scheduling that are marked STA is the AP, so the with CID 7929. next para does introduce restrictions 7930 Mark 73.09 "Feedback can be At line 8 and line 33 Revise generally – RISON contained is the QoS change "PS-Poll agree with Control field or and QoS Null comment - TGax in the HE variant HT frames" to "QoS editor shall make Control field of the Null frames and the changes shown frame, " -- a PS-Poll PS-Poll frames in 11-17/0777r1 cannot carry either contained in that are marked Control Wrapper with CID 7930. frames" 7931 73.45 There are 3 instances Change each to Accept Mark of "(Re-)Association" "(Re)Association" in the document 7932 Mark 73.58 There are 2 instances Change each to Accept RISON of "FILS discovery "FILS Discovery frame" in the frame" document
marked with CID 7926. 7927 Mark RISON 71.30 There can be no TWT request to accept since a scheduled STA cannot make a request (see 70.35) Change the cell to "N/A" Reject – the accept outcome is also used to accept a suggest or demand. 7928 Mark 71.33 It says "(See" in the 4th column Change to "(see" Accept – TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7928. 7929 Mark RISON 73.22 are no restrictions on the frames transmitted by the schedul- ing STA of the broadcast TWT SP." -- but the scheduling STA is the AP, so the next para does introduce restrictions Delete the cited text; also at line 49. Also fix at line 56 to only refer to the scheduled STA Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7929. 7930 Mark RISON 73.09 "Feedback can be contained is the QoS Control field or in the HE variant HT Control field of the frame, " -- a PS-Poll cannot carry either At line 8 and line 33 change "PS-Poll and QoS Null frames" to "QoS Null frames and PS-Poll frames contained in Control Wrapper frames" Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7930. 7931 Mark 73.45 There are 3 instances of "(Re-)Association" in the document Change each to "(Re)Association" Accept 7932 Mark RISON 73.58 There are 2 instances of "FILS discovery frame" in the document Change each to "FILS Discovery frame" Accept
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