3028 Abhishek 67.57 Either TIM frame or replace 'and' with 'or' Revised agree in principle with – Patil FILS Discovery the comment. frame will included at the beginning of a broadcast TWT - replace and with or 3029 Abhishek 68.02 The operation applies Remove: "and before the next Patil to current TWT SP - TWT SP" and make reference to the sentence doesn't "current" TWT SP. Change need to discuss about sentence as following: "Bit number what happens outside N in the traffic indication virtual the current TWT SP bitmap is 0 if the AP does not intend to transmit to the STA or to trigger the STA for an UL MU transmission during the current TWT SP." 4452 Albert 68.60 Period missing at end Add period at the of sentence after Petrick of sentence "reserved" 4460 Albert 68.62 Period missing at end Add period at the of sentence after Petrick of sentence "reserved" 4686 Albert 68.60 Period missing at end Add period at the of sentence Petrick of sentence "reserved" 4697 Albert 68.62 Period missing at end Add period at the of sentence after Petrick of sentence "reserved" 7918 Mark 67.60 The field names are Change to "DTIM Count field" and RISON not referred to "DTIM Period field" correctly 7919 Mark 68.01 " the AP does not Delete "or trigger the STA for an RISON intend to transmit to UL MU transmission" the STA or to trigger the STA for an UL MU transmission" -- triggering is done by transmitting to the STA
3028 Abhishek Patil 67.57 Either TIM frame or FILS Discovery frame will included at the beginning of a broadcast TWT - replace and with or replace 'and' with 'or' Revised – agree in principle with the comment. 3029 Abhishek Patil 68.02 The operation applies to current TWT SP - the sentence doesn't need to discuss about what happens outside the current TWT SP Remove: "and before the next TWT SP" and make reference to "current" TWT SP. Change sentence as following: "Bit number N in the traffic indication virtual bitmap is 0 if the AP does not intend to transmit to the STA or to trigger the STA for an UL MU transmission during the current TWT SP." 4452 Albert Petrick 68.60 Period missing at end of sentence Add period at the of sentence after "reserved" 4460 Albert Petrick 68.62 Period missing at end of sentence Add period at the of sentence after "reserved" 4686 Albert Petrick 68.60 Period missing at end of sentence Add period at the of sentence "reserved" 4697 Albert Petrick 68.62 Period missing at end of sentence Add period at the of sentence after "reserved" 7918 Mark RISON 67.60 The field names are not referred to correctly Change to "DTIM Count field" and "DTIM Period field" 7919 Mark RISON 68.01 " the AP does not intend to transmit to the STA or to trigger the STA for an UL MU transmission" -- triggering is done by transmitting to the STA Delete "or trigger the STA for an UL MU transmission"
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