She manipulated the garment in a cogitative mode. she vocalized. ‘Hmm,’ ‘This attire is verifiably marvelous. What is it constituted from?’ the most ‘From meritorious velveteen,’ defined her interlocutor, simpering coincidentally. it?’ ‘Is iterated the party of the first part. felicitous.’ ‘That’s 2. Keep sentences Concise and should average fewer than twenty words. •They concise. for unnecessary wordiness. •Be -Avoid redundancies. Past history the color blue visible to the eye in conjunction with free gift mentally imagine Avoid beginning sentences with ‘What’. Wordy What annoys me is his always singing when I’m trying to sleep He annoys me because he always sings when I try to sleep. Tight: Avoid beginning sentences with the phrase reasons is’ ‘The Wordy The reason is because I wanted to travel. Tight: I did it because I wanted to travel. Avoid beginning sentences with and followed by an “What” “is”: Wordy What he meant to say is he forgot to set is alarm.
She manipulated the garment in a cogitative mode. ‘Hmm,’ she vocalized. ‘This attire is verifiably marvelous. What is it constituted from?’ ‘From the most meritorious velveteen,’ defined her interlocutor, simpering coincidentally. ‘Is it?’ iterated the party of the first part. ‘That’s felicitous.’ 2. Keep sentences Concise and •They should average fewer than twenty words. •Be concise. for unnecessary wordiness. -Avoid redundancies. Past history the color blue visible to the eye in conjunction with free gift mentally imagine Avoid beginning sentences with ‘What’. Wordy What annoys me is his always singing when I’m trying to sleep Tight: He annoys me because he always sings when I try to sleep. Avoid beginning sentences with the phrase ‘The reasons is’ Wordy The reason is because I wanted to travel. Tight: I did it because I wanted to travel. Avoid beginning sentences with “What” and followed by an “is”: Wordy What he meant to say is he forgot to set is alarm.
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