"culmulative" Probe Responses containing culmulative information in one Service Advertisement element if the requesting STAs are FILS-STAs. Stephen 10 27 T SK Why is the current status Remove or change the McCann Yong of the service useful? It's Service Status telling the STA that the behaviour network supports a service which is unavailable. As this is for network selection, I don't think this is necessary. Yunsong 10 9 T SK This paragraph seems to Delete the first Yang Yong describe procedural sentence (for bahaviors and is not duplication) and move related to the element the second sentence to content or format. the end of the second paragraph in 10.25.3.4.3 (Solicited PAD procedure). Joseph 10 9 T SK The sentences: "The Delete the sentences Levy Yong Service Advertisement and move this element is included in the information to section Probe Response returned 10 if not already by the AP in response to a adequately captured Probe Request from a there. non-AP STA that has one or more matching Service Hashes. For each matching Service Hash, the AP includes a corresponding Basic Service Information Descriptor." is confusing and not necessary to define the element. It is describing when the element is used and behavior should not be described in section 8. Richard 10 19 T SK Service status is not a Eliminate Service status Roy Yong useful concept in the from the document. context of this standard. Add necessary text Either the service is describing how service available or it is not. become "unavailable". Inclusion of the Service Hash in any information
"culmulative" Probe Responses containing culmulative information in one Service Advertisement element if the requesting STAs are FILS-STAs. Stephen McCann 10 27 T SK Yong Why is the current status of the service useful? It's telling the STA that the network supports a service which is unavailable. As this is for network selection, I don't think this is necessary. Remove or change the Service Status behaviour Yunsong Yang 10 9 T SK Yong This paragraph seems to describe procedural bahaviors and is not related to the element content or format. Delete the first sentence (for duplication) and move the second sentence to the end of the second paragraph in 10.25.3.4.3 (Solicited PAD procedure). Joseph Levy 10 9 T SK Yong The sentences: "The Service Advertisement element is included in the Probe Response returned by the AP in response to a Probe Request from a non-AP STA that has one or more matching Service Hashes. For each matching Service Hash, the AP includes a corresponding Basic Service Information Descriptor." is confusing and not necessary to define the element. It is describing when the element is used and behavior should not be described in section 8. Delete the sentences and move this information to section 10 if not already adequately captured there. Richard Roy 10 19 T SK Yong Service status is not a useful concept in the context of this standard. Either the service is available or it is not. Inclusion of the Service Hash in any information Eliminate Service status from the document. Add necessary text describing how service become "unavailable".
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