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is not a duplicate is nconsistencies. Probe Response element as described in 10.1.4.3.1"). Move some of the text that describes the contents of the Short Probe Response element content to 10.1.4.3.1. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 3170 318 50 This paragraph has become too long. It is best to split and adapt it into multiple paragraphs to improve its readability. As in comment. Revised - Agree with the commenter in principle. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 3054 318 52 This is indended to be an introductory para, but .11ah adds lots of detailed rules about S1G probe operation. By all means add a sentence describing the existence of an S1G short probe, but move the detail to an existing detailed subclause, or (better) a new subclause specific to S1G. Also you might want to consider which of the criteria in 10.1.4.3.4 (REVmc D3) need to be changed for .11ah. Revised - Agree with the commenter in principle. TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1 3582 318 54 If an S1G STA and if it receives a Probe Request frame with Short Probe Response Option element, then Short Probe Response frame may be transmitted by the responding STA as a probe response. Not sure what this sentence is saying. Remove "and if it" or otherwise fix the grammar of the if/then phrasing Revised - The sentence has been removed because the sentence is redundant with other sentences (by the resolution to CID 3171). TGah Editor to make changes shown in 14/1154r1
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