Duplicate: CID 5344 6466 95.55 Variant Change used for the to same feature: "STA-2-STA operation". A matter of a few sentences earlier we have "STA-to-STA". Which is it? 6794 207.06 Incorrect (or at Clarify. Revised: The text is revised to improve the 1 least unclear) clarity use of definite article: "the STA-to-STA operation". Is there only one such STA-to-STA operation? 7183 207.06 27.16.3 Does Please clarify it Duplicated: 5344 here has the same meaning with what is defined in 802.11-2016 "A peer-to-peer link is defined to be either a Direct Link within a QoS BSS, a TDLS, or a STA-to-STA communication in an IBSS." 5744 207.07 "Can" is not a Can-->Should Counter: Change to “can” normative text, “may”. change to "should" 6793 207.06 Incorrect (or at Clarify. Revised: The test is revised to improve the least unclear) clarity use of definite article: "the HE STA which". Is there only one such HE STA? Rejected: it is not a 207.07 "should" is Use "shall" or mandatory behaviour, it ambiguous remove this expression. sentence.
6466 95.55 Variant used for the same feature: "STA-2-STA operation". A matter of a few sentences earlier we have "STA-to-STA". Which is it? Change to Duplicate: CID 5344 6794 207.06 Incorrect (or at least unclear) use of definite article: "the STA-to-STA operation". Is there only one such STA-to-STA operation? Clarify. Revised: The text is revised to improve the clarity 7183 207.06 27.16.3 Does here has the same meaning with what is defined in 802.11-2016 "A peer-to-peer link is defined to be either a Direct Link within a QoS BSS, a TDLS, or a STA-to-STA communication in an IBSS." Please clarify it Duplicated: 5344 5744 207.07 "Can" is not a normative text, change to "should" Can-->Should Counter: Change “can” to “may”. 6793 207.06 Incorrect (or at least unclear) use of definite article: "the HE STA which". Is there only one such HE STA? Clarify. Revised: The test is revised to improve the clarity 207.07 "should" is ambiguous expression. Use "shall" or remove this sentence. Rejected: it is not a mandatory behaviour, it 1
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