4714 60 This paragraph is very partial. As in comment. Revised. Depending on the purpose of it, either expand it to cover the case TGax Editor to make changes as being discussed correctly or remove shown in it. all headings that contain CID 4714. 10187 60 "MU should be "OFDMA" As in comment. Agreed. because OFDMA is an MU transmission inherently. Removed TGax Editor to “MU”. make changes as shown in all headings that contain CID 10187. 62 "transmission resource" should be As in comment. Agreed. "RUs". Changed to TGax Editor “RUs”. to make changes as shown in all headings that contain CID 10188. 9249 63 It says "Multi-STA BlockAck frames Change the sentence "Multi-STA Agreed. are used by the to acknowledge BlockAck frames are used by the the transmissions from multiple AP to acknowledge the Changed to "Multi-STA BlockAck non-AP STAs." But Multi-STA transmissions from multiple frames can be used by the AP to BlockAck can be also used by non-AP STAs." to "Multi-STA BlockAck acknowledge the UL-MU STAs. See 9.3.1.9.1 and 27.4.1 for frames may be used by the AP to transmissions. ". example. I am not sure of the acknowledge the UL-MU TGax Editor to make changes as intention of this sentence, but transmissions. " shown in assume it was written to describe Or delete this sentence. all headings that the UL-MU sequence in accordance contain CID 9249. with the previous two sentences. And the AP can also acknowledge STAs with Compressed BlockAck frames using DL-MU transmission. 5733 64 "scheduled trigger frame are Chagne to soemthign like the Agreed. sent...", this sentece reads like such following, "Schedueld trigger scheduled trigger frame is frame can be sent..." Changed to schedule of “The mandatory behavior. However, these Trigger frames schedule may can be set up between the whether HE AP setups scheduled non-AP STA and the AP using trigger frame is part of scheduling TWT operation.” algorithm and shouldn't be TGax Editor to make changes as mandated. in all headings that contain CID 5733.
4714 60 This paragraph is very partial. Depending on the purpose of it, either expand it to cover the case being discussed correctly or remove it. As in comment. Revised. TGax Editor to make changes as shown in all headings that contain CID 4714. 10187 60 "MU should be "OFDMA" because OFDMA is an MU transmission inherently. As in comment. Agreed. Removed “MU”. TGax Editor to make changes as shown in all headings that contain CID 10187. 62 "transmission resource" should be "RUs". As in comment. Agreed. Changed to “RUs”. TGax Editor to make changes as shown in all headings that contain CID 10188. 9249 63 It says "Multi-STA BlockAck frames are used by the to acknowledge the transmissions from multiple non-AP STAs." But Multi-STA BlockAck can be also used by non-AP STAs. See 9.3.1.9.1 and 27.4.1 for example. I am not sure of the intention of this sentence, but assume it was written to describe the UL-MU sequence in accordance with the previous two sentences. And the AP can also acknowledge STAs with Compressed BlockAck frames using DL-MU transmission. Change the sentence "Multi-STA BlockAck frames are used by the AP to acknowledge the transmissions from multiple STAs." to "Multi-STA BlockAck frames may be used by the AP to acknowledge the UL-MU transmissions. " Or delete this sentence. Agreed. Changed to "Multi-STA BlockAck frames can be used by the AP to acknowledge the UL-MU transmissions. ". TGax Editor to make changes as shown in all headings that contain CID 9249. 5733 64 "scheduled trigger frame are sent...", this sentece reads like such scheduled trigger frame is mandatory behavior. However, whether HE AP setups scheduled trigger frame is part of scheduling algorithm and shouldn't be mandated. Chagne to soemthign like the following, "Schedueld trigger frame can be sent..." Agreed. Changed to “The schedule of these Trigger frames schedule may can be set up between the non-AP STA and the AP using TWT operation.” TGax Editor to make changes as in all headings that contain CID 5733.
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