5003 146.36 8.4.2.170j "The Zero Offset of Modify as "The Revise generally – Group subfield is Zero Offset of with commenter, Tgah optionally present in the Group subfield is editor to execute TWT Group Assignment optionally proposed changes field and when a STA present in the found in document transmits multiple TWT TWT Group under all requests for multiple Assignment field headings that include TWT flows, the next because a STA CID 5003. TWT Group Assignment may transmit field might not include multiple TWT the Zero Offset of the requests for Group subfield implying multiple TWT that the Zero Offset of flows expecting the Group subfield is the that the Zero same for each of the Offset of Group TWT flows." is not clear subfield is same enough. for each of the TWT flows. When a STA may transmit multiple TWT requests for multiple TWT flows, the TWT Group Assignment field in the responding frames other than responding to first requst, may not include the Zero Offset of Group subfield implying that the Zero Offset of Group subfield for each TWT flow is same as the latest value assigned in responding frames." 5023 286.38 9.42a1 "..., provided that the Append an Reject there are – STA has indicated that it example as "..., many reasons for a is in a power save mode provided that the STA to remain awake, and no other condition STA has some of which are requires the STA to indicated that it is included in subclauses remain awake." need an in a save scattered throughout example to clarify. mode and no the standard and its other condition amendments and requires the STA some of which are part to remain awake, of the TGah draft e.g. no STACK is amendment and some required to of which are not transmit, or no requirements of the further requests standard, but are for different TWT choices on the part of flows to send are an implementation. existing even if There is no value in the TWT attempting to provide a requesting STA full or partial list of transmits S1G these reasons. The Capabilities commenter has element with the suggested a partial list TWT Grouping containing only a few
5003 146.36 8.4.2.170j "The Zero Offset of Group subfield is optionally present in the TWT Group Assignment field and when a STA transmits multiple TWT requests for multiple TWT flows, the next TWT Group Assignment field might not include the Zero Offset of the Group subfield implying that the Zero Offset of the Group subfield is the same for each of the TWT flows." is not clear enough. Modify as "The Zero Offset of Group subfield is optionally present in the TWT Group Assignment field because a STA may transmit multiple TWT requests for multiple TWT flows expecting that the Zero Offset of Group subfield is same for each of the TWT flows. When a STA may transmit multiple TWT requests for multiple TWT flows, the TWT Group Assignment field in the responding frames other than responding to first requst, may not include the Zero Offset of Group subfield implying that the Zero Offset of Group subfield for each TWT flow is same as the latest value assigned in responding frames." Revise – generally with commenter, Tgah editor to execute proposed changes found in document under all headings that include CID 5003. 5023 286.38 9.42a1 "..., provided that the STA has indicated that it is in a power save mode and no other condition requires the STA to remain awake." need an example to clarify. Append an example as "..., provided that the STA has indicated that it is in a save mode and no other condition requires the STA to remain awake, e.g. no STACK is required to transmit, or no further requests for different TWT flows to send are existing even if the TWT requesting STA transmits S1G Capabilities element with the TWT Grouping Reject – there are many reasons for a STA to remain awake, some of which are included in subclauses scattered throughout the standard and its amendments and some of which are part of the TGah draft amendment and some of which are not requirements of the standard, but are choices on the part of an implementation. There is no value in attempting to provide a full or partial list of these reasons. The commenter has suggested a partial list containing only a few
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