IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs MAH Assigned comments Date: 2014-11-5 Author(s): Name Company Address Phone email Mark 2560 55th St +1 303 Spectralink Hamilton Boulder, CO 80301 USA 441 7553 CID 3150 (MAC) 3150 98.23 4.5.2.1 Figure B.6 (IEEE Std 802.11 Insert the modified Figure B.6 of infrastructure model) of IEEE IEEE P802 D2.0 in the subclause P802 D2.0 is more adequate to 4.5.2.1, and replace the reference describe distribution of MSDUs to Figure 4-14 by the reference to within a DS.. the new figure. Discussion: The context is: Figure 4-14 is: Figure B.6 (from 802-2014): Presumably, this version of Figure B.6 (from the approved 2014 802 Std) is the one refrenced by the commenter as modified Figure B.6 of IEEE P802 D2.0”. “the It does seem that Figure B.6 the data paths, which is the subject of this paragraph, more clearly than Figure 4-14, so generally the comment is agreed. However, the text also needs to reference specific STAs and APs by name, to discuss the data flow explicitly. So, Figure B.6 needs to be enhanced to add STA and AP identifiers. This is shown/suggested in the figure below. Proposed resolution: Revised Insert the figure shown in <this document> in the Proposed Resolution to CID 3150, as new Figure 4-14a, near the second paragraph of 4.6.2.1. Change the first sentence of 4.6.2.1 second paragraph to start, to the ESS “Refer network in Figure 4-14a (IEEE 802.11 Infrastructure model) …” New Figure 4-14a: Figure 4-14a IEEE 802.11 Infrastructure model –
IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs MAH Assigned comments Date: 2014-11-5 Author(s): Name Company Address Phone email Mark Hamilton Spectralink 2560 55th St Boulder, CO 80301 USA +1 303 441 7553 CID 3150 (MAC) 3150 98.23 4.5.2.1 Figure B.6 (IEEE Std 802.11 infrastructure model) of IEEE P802 D2.0 is more adequate to describe distribution of MSDUs within a DS.. Insert the modified Figure B.6 of IEEE P802 D2.0 in the subclause 4.5.2.1, and replace the reference to Figure 4-14 by the reference to the new figure. Discussion: The context is: Figure 4-14 is: Figure B.6 (from 802-2014): Presumably, this version of Figure B.6 (from the approved 2014 802 Std) is the one refrenced by the commenter as “the modified Figure B.6 of IEEE P802 D2.0”. It does seem that Figure B.6 the data paths, which is the subject of this paragraph, more clearly than Figure 4-14, so generally the comment is agreed. However, the text also needs to reference specific STAs and APs by name, to discuss the data flow explicitly. So, Figure B.6 needs to be enhanced to add STA and AP identifiers. This is shown/suggested in the figure below. Proposed resolution: Revised Insert the figure shown in <this document> in the Proposed Resolution to CID 3150, as new Figure 4-14a, near the second paragraph of 4.6.2.1. Change the first sentence of 4.6.2.1 second paragraph to start, “Refer to the ESS network in Figure 4-14a (IEEE 802.11 Infrastructure model) …” New Figure 4-14a: Figure 4-14a – IEEE 802.11 Infrastructure model
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