IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Comment Resolutions for 9.30.3 Date: 2014-09-02 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Chu Marvell Abstract This submission proposes comment resolutions for subclause 9.30.3: 3036, 3487, 3488, 3489, 3490, 3491, 3787. Interpretation of a Motion to Adopt A motion to approve this submission means that the editing instructions and any changed or added material are actioned in the TGah Draft. This introduction is not part of the adopted material. Editing instructions formatted like this are intended to be copied into the TGah Draft (i.e. they are instructions to the 802.11 editor on how to merge the text with the baseline documents). TGah Editor: Editing instructions preceded by Editor” are instructions to the TGah editor to modify “TGah existing material in the TGah draft. As a result of adopting the changes, the TGah editor will execute the instructions rather than copy them to the TGah Draft. CID Clause P L Comment Propose Change Resolution Num 9.30.3 60 " HT Control Review all use of "which" Revise 6 9 which can be used" (generally 'that' is OK) - ungrammatical. and replace "which" with Discussion: generally In the general case, ", which" or "that" when with the comment. confusion between not preceded by a Comment 3486 already "which" and "that" preposition. remove from the “which” can change the sentence. So no further meaning. change is required here Please review the English grammar for Refer to CID 3486 "that vs which". Good: "receives an
IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Comment Resolutions for 9.30.3 Date: 2014-09-02 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Chu Marvell Abstract This submission proposes comment resolutions for subclause 9.30.3: 3036, 3487, 3488, 3489, 3490, 3491, 3787. Interpretation of a Motion to Adopt A motion to approve this submission means that the editing instructions and any changed or added material are actioned in the TGah Draft. This introduction is not part of the adopted material. Editing instructions formatted like this are intended to be copied into the TGah Draft (i.e. they are instructions to the 802.11 editor on how to merge the text with the baseline documents). TGah Editor: Editing instructions preceded by “TGah Editor” are instructions to the TGah editor to modify existing material in the TGah draft. As a result of adopting the changes, the TGah editor will execute the instructions rather than copy them to the TGah Draft. CID Clause Num P L Comment Propose Change Resolution 9.30.3 60 " HT Control which can be used" - ungrammatical. In the general case, confusion between "which" and "that" can change the meaning. Please review the English grammar for "that vs which". Good: "receives an Review all use of "which" (generally 'that' is OK) and replace "which" with ", which" or "that" when not preceded by a preposition. Revise Discussion: generally with the comment. Comment 3486 already remove “which” from the sentence. So no further change is required here Refer to CID 3486 9 6
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