Review by ">= of D1.1) SIFS & =< Figure BRPIFS" 9-58 and either contains replacing some TXSS by errors, "Initiator typos TXSS" and and the R-TXSS by terms "Responder TXSS TXSS" and throughout or define the acronym properly elsewhere. Discussion: Could not find in this or similar figures. SIFS & = BRPIFS” “= Since the terms and are used elsewhere in the draft, propose to define such “I-TXSS” “R-TXSS” acronyms. Note that the acronym is already defined in section 3.3. Proposed resolution: Revised In Figure 9-57, change "= SIFS = BRPIFS" to ">= SIFS & =< BRPIFS" Insert the following two acronyms in section 3.3: I-TXSS: Initiator R-TXSS: Responder TXSS 2180 2194.62 21.5.3.2.4 (From Editor Change Panel reference Review of to D1.1) " the 21.5.3.2.4.6 indices P(k), in the range of NCBPS/2 to as defined in 21.5.3.2.6 (OFDM modulation)" - wrong reference Proposed resolution: Accepted 2181 2195.25 21.5.3.2.4 (From Change Editor reference Panel to Review of 21.5.3.2.4.6 D1.1)
Review of D1.1) Figure 9-58 contains some errors, typos and the terms and by ">= SIFS & =< BRPIFS" and either replacing by "Initiator TXSS" and R-TXSS by "Responder TXSS" throughout or define the acronym properly elsewhere. Discussion: Could not find “= SIFS & = BRPIFS” in this or similar figures. Since the terms “I-TXSS” and “R-TXSS” are used elsewhere in the draft, propose to define such acronyms. Note that the acronym TXSS is already defined in section 3.3. Proposed resolution: Revised In Figure 9-57, change "= SIFS = BRPIFS" to ">= SIFS & =< BRPIFS" Insert the following two acronyms in section 3.3: I-TXSS: Initiator TXSS R-TXSS: Responder TXSS 2180 2194.62 21.5.3.2.4 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) " the indices P(k), in the range of NCBPS/2 to as defined in 21.5.3.2.6 (OFDM modulation)" - wrong reference Change reference to 21.5.3.2.4.6 Proposed resolution: Accepted 2181 2195.25 21.5.3.2.4 (From Editor Panel Review of D1.1) Change reference to 21.5.3.2.4.6
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