At 1966.22 change STA performing secure password-based, or PSK, authentication uses SAE authentication.” “A to STA performing password-based authentication uses PSK or SAE authentication.” “A At 1966.33 add an extra 4—PSK authentication using a weak passphrase is vulnerable to offline “NOTE cracking. SAE authentication is not vulnerable to this.” and renumber the subsequent NOTEs in this subclause. CID 7277 What does "or clock estimate" mean? Delete NOTE 2 Mark RISON 11.24.6.4 1771.20 Discussion: The wording is actually offset estimate”, and this term is defined in Equation (11-6) at 1772.45. Proposed changes: In Figure 11-37 change NOTE 2 as follows: NOTE 2—Initiating STA can compute either an RTT orand a clock offset estimate Add a paragraph break after the sentence (second sentence of the para, ending at 1772.41. “802.1AS”) Add a NOTE at 1772.47, italicising t1 and t4 and using a consistent prime symbol after them throughout this subclause: NOTE—The initiating STA might also track this clock offset over time to derive an estimate of the difference between the initiating STA’s time base and the responding STA’s time base, and thereby improve the accuracy of its derivation of and from the TOD and TOA fields. t1’ t4’ Number all the NOTEs in this subclause, and also in Subclause 9.6.8.33. Add a after base,” at 1159.22. “time Proposed resolution: REVISED Make the changes shown under changes” for CID 7277 in <this document>, which clarify the intent of “Proposed clock offset estimation. Identifiers Comment Proposed change CID 7208 For MLME-FINETIMINGMSMT.request, Change the text as indicated in the Mark RISON "Set to the value of t1 (see Figure 6-17)" is comment 6.3.58 misleading because it is not set to the t1 in the 339.1 figure but to the time for the previous request. Ditto t4. And for the .indication it's the time in the FTM frame, which is again not the t1 and t4 in the figure
At 1966.22 change “A STA performing secure password-based, or PSK, authentication uses SAE authentication.” to “A STA performing password-based authentication uses PSK or SAE authentication.” At 1966.33 add an extra “NOTE 4—PSK authentication using a weak passphrase is vulnerable to offline cracking. SAE authentication is not vulnerable to this.” and renumber the subsequent NOTEs in this subclause. CID 7277 Mark RISON 11.24.6.4 1771.20 What does "or clock estimate" mean? Delete NOTE 2 Discussion: The wording is actually offset estimate”, and this term is defined in Equation (11-6) at 1772.45. Proposed changes: In Figure 11-37 change NOTE 2 as follows: NOTE 2—Initiating STA can compute either an RTT orand a clock offset estimate Add a paragraph break after the sentence (second sentence of the para, ending “802.1AS”) at 1772.41. Add a NOTE at 1772.47, italicising t1 and t4 and using a consistent prime symbol after them throughout this subclause: NOTE—The initiating STA might also track this clock offset over time to derive an estimate of the difference between the initiating STA’s time base and the responding STA’s time base, and thereby improve the accuracy of its derivation of t1’ and t4’ from the TOD and TOA fields. Number all the NOTEs in this subclause, and also in Subclause 9.6.8.33. Add a after “time base,” at 1159.22. Proposed resolution: REVISED Make the changes shown under “Proposed changes” for CID 7277 in <this document>, which clarify the intent of clock offset estimation. Identifiers Comment Proposed change CID 7208 Mark RISON 6.3.58 339.1 For MLME-FINETIMINGMSMT.request, "Set to the value of t1 (see Figure 6-17)" is misleading because it is not set to the t1 in the figure but to the time for the previous request. Ditto t4. And for the .indication it's the time in the FTM frame, which is again not the t1 and t4 in the figure Change the text as indicated in the comment
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