677 32.2.9.2 84.26 The text reads "The other Remove the word Revised- coefficients are selected "other". Change from BPSK, the sentence to " Agree in principle with the 64-QAM, or The coefficients commenter. To avoid It is unclear what is are selected from confusion, modify the the purpose of the word BPSK, QPSK, corresponding sentence. "other", I believe it is a 16-QAM, typo or TGba editor to make the changes shown in 265 32.2.9.2 84.27 1024 QAM was adopted Change the Revised- as an optional feature in sentence as 11ax, and thus, WUR can follows: Add 1024-QAM in the also consider supporting "The other corresponding text. it. coefficients are selected from TGba editor to make the BPSK, QPSK, changes shown in 16-QAM, 256-QAM, or 1024-QAM." 196 32.2.9.2 84.14 Remove " The MC-OOK as in the Revised- symbol corresponding to comment each input bit for Delete the corresponding LDR ... SymHDROff and sentences and the tables. SymLDROn denote OFF But, add the definition of and ON symbols with 2 “SymLDROn”, duration for WUR ╬╝s “SymLDROff”, HDR, respectively.". and “SymHDROn”, since Table 32-8 and because “SymHDROff” already maps the those terms are used in the information to the spec. codebits. Here the text only needs to discuss TGba editor to make the how to map the coded changes shown in bits to waveform 213 32.2.9.2 84.00 We should be consistent Replace the table Revised- with SymHDROn and entries SymHDROff "[SymHDROn, Agree in principle with the SymHDRoff]" commenter. Delete Table with 32-10 and 32-11 because "[SymHDROn, those tables are duplicated. SymHDROff]" Table 32-8 and 32-9 and already maps the "[SymHDROff, information to the encoded SymHDRon]" bits. with "[SymHDROff, TGba editor to make the SymHDROn]" changes shown in
677 32.2.9.2 84.26 The text reads "The other coefficients are selected from BPSK, 64-QAM, or It is unclear what is the purpose of the word "other", I believe it is a typo Remove the word "other". Change the sentence to " The coefficients are selected from BPSK, QPSK, 16-QAM, or Revised- Agree in principle with the commenter. To avoid confusion, modify the corresponding sentence. TGba editor to make the changes shown in 265 32.2.9.2 84.27 1024 QAM was adopted as an optional feature in 11ax, and thus, WUR can also consider supporting it. Change the sentence as follows: "The other coefficients are selected from BPSK, QPSK, 16-QAM, 256-QAM, or 1024-QAM." Revised- Add 1024-QAM in the corresponding text. TGba editor to make the changes shown in 196 32.2.9.2 84.14 Remove " The MC-OOK symbol corresponding to each input bit for ... SymHDROff and SymLDROn denote OFF and ON symbols with 2 ╬╝s duration for WUR HDR, respectively.". since Table 32-8 and already maps the information to the codebits. Here the text only needs to discuss how to map the coded bits to waveform as in the comment Revised- Delete the corresponding sentences and the tables. But, add the definition of “SymLDROn”, “SymLDROff”, “SymHDROn”, and “SymHDROff” because those terms are used in the spec. TGba editor to make the changes shown in 213 32.2.9.2 84.00 We should be consistent with SymHDROn and SymHDROff Replace the table entries "[SymHDROn, SymHDRoff]" with "[SymHDROn, SymHDROff]" and "[SymHDROff, SymHDRon]" with "[SymHDROff, SymHDROn]" Revised- Agree in principle with the commenter. Delete Table 32-10 and 32-11 because those tables are duplicated. Table 32-8 and 32-9 already maps the information to the encoded bits. TGba editor to make the changes shown in LDR
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