the present instance, is this showing really a definition? If so, say so. 6473 97.43 9.4.2.225 Vague and Provide additional, Duplicated: uninformative clarifying information. CID 3041. language: "indicates a If this operation is The quoted specified operation". specified elsewhere in text was Which oiperation? the draft, say so and removed. Where is it specified? provide a reference. If the specification is by the vendor, and thus outside the scope of this draft, delete the word "specified". 7777 96.22 9.4.2.223 What does "the HE Clarify. Same in Revised: STA support it can 9.4.2.224 and Additional transmit frames" 9.4.2.225. text is added mean? to 9.4.2.242.3 to address the comment. 8203 95.54 9.4.2.223 What does "improve explain or delete Revised: probability" mean? Additional Improve with respect text is added to what? to 9.4.2.242.2 address the comment. 8206 95.48 9.4.2.223 Is there a field in the as in comment Rejected: It is HE Capability define in element to indicate Table 9-262z support for this feature? If not then I believe it needs to be added. 9112 96.37 9.4.2.224 The term "Vendor Clarify and use a Rejected: The Specific Service consistent term at the “Vendor Identifier" is used in cited places. "Vendor Specific Figure 9-589cz, Specific Service ID" Service "Vendor Specific may be the suitable Identifier” is Service ID" on one to use. In addition, addressed by P96L22 and also an example of such a CID 3041 . "Vendor Specific Service ID may be The change of Service Type" on useful to avoid "Vendor P207L48, which confusion with many Specific appear to be the same specific service related Service Type" parameter. terms introduced by on P207L48 the IEEE 802.11aq was addressed draft. by the companion
the present instance, is this showing really a definition? If so, say so. 6473 97.43 9.4.2.225 Vague and uninformative language: "indicates a specified operation". Which oiperation? Where is it specified? Provide additional, clarifying information. If this operation is specified elsewhere in the draft, say so and provide a reference. If the specification is by the vendor, and thus outside the scope of this draft, delete the word "specified". Duplicated: CID 3041. The quoted text was removed. 7777 96.22 9.4.2.223 What does "the HE STA support it can transmit frames" mean? Clarify. Same in 9.4.2.224 and 9.4.2.225. Revised: Additional text is added to 9.4.2.242.3 to address the comment. 8203 95.54 9.4.2.223 What does "improve probability" mean? Improve with respect to what? explain or delete Revised: Additional text is added to 9.4.2.242.2 address the comment. 8206 95.48 9.4.2.223 Is there a field in the HE Capability element to indicate support for this feature? If not then I believe it needs to be added. as in comment Rejected: It is define in Table 9-262z 9112 96.37 9.4.2.224 The term "Vendor Specific Service Identifier" is used in Figure 9-589cz, "Vendor Specific Service ID" on P96L22 and also "Vendor Specific Service Type" on P207L48, which appear to be the same parameter. Clarify and use a consistent term at the cited places. "Vendor Specific Service ID" may be the suitable one to use. In addition, an example of such a Service ID may be useful to avoid confusion with many specific service related terms introduced by the IEEE 802.11aq draft. Rejected: The “Vendor Specific Service Identifier” is addressed by CID 3041 . The change of "Vendor Specific Service Type" on P207L48 was addressed by the companion
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