you want to emphasize the object of the action. •When Johnny Jensen, our shipping clerk, shipped your order on November 15. Your order was shipped November 15. actor is unknown or you want to deemphasize the actor •When You waste my time. Time is being wasted. When you want to provide some variety to sentence structure. • Word Choice: 1. Keep language simple and easy to understand. She manipulated the garment in a cogitative mode. she vocalized. ‘Hmm,’ ‘This attire is verifiably marvelous. What is it constituted from?’ the most ‘From meritorious velveteen,’ defined her interlocutor, simpering coincidentally. it?’ ‘Is iterated the party of the first part. felicitous.’ ‘That’s 2. Keep sentences Concise and should average fewer than twenty words. •They concise. Watch for unnecessary wordiness. •Be -Avoid redundancies. Past history the color blue visible to the eye in conjunction with
•When you want to emphasize the object of the action. Johnny Jensen, our shipping clerk, shipped your order on November 15. Your order was shipped November 15. •When actor is unknown or you want to deemphasize the actor You waste my time. Time is being wasted. • When you want to provide some variety to sentence structure. Word Choice: 1. Keep language simple and easy to understand. She manipulated the garment in a cogitative mode. ‘Hmm,’ she vocalized. ‘This attire is verifiably marvelous. What is it constituted from?’ ‘From the most meritorious velveteen,’ defined her interlocutor, simpering coincidentally. ‘Is it?’ iterated the party of the first part. ‘That’s felicitous.’ 2. Keep sentences Concise and •They should average fewer than twenty words. •Be concise. Watch for unnecessary wordiness. -Avoid redundancies. Past history the color blue visible to the eye in conjunction with
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