7925 Mark 70.27 Descriptions of the Delete ", Wake Revise –generally RISON four cases TBTT agree with Negotiation comment - TGax when Wake TBTT subfield = [0/1]" in editor shall make Negotiation Subfield = each cell (4 the changes shown 1 and deletions) in 11-17/0777r8 scheduling/scheduled that are marked when = 0) are missing with CID 7925. 7926 70.43 Spurious asterisk Delete the asterisk Revise Mark –generally RISON agree with comment but other instances changed the asterisk to the words NOTE”, “see so that is what is proposed here - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in that are marked with CID 7926. 7927 71.30 There can be no TWT Change the cell to Reject the accept Mark – request to accept "N/A" outcome is also since a scheduled used to accept a STA cannot make a suggest or request (see 70.35) demand. 7928 71.33 It says "(See" in the Change to "(see" Accept TGax Mark – RISON 4th column editor make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 7928. 7929 73.22 are no Delete the cited Revise generally Mark – restrictions on the text; also at line 49. agree with frames transmitted by Also fix at line 56 to comment - TGax the schedul- only refer to the editor shall make ing STA of the scheduled STA the changes shown broadcast TWT SP." -- in 11-17/0777r8 but the scheduling that are marked STA is the AP, so the with CID 7929. next para does introduce restrictions 7930 Mark 73.09 "Feedback can be At line 8 and line 33 Revise generally – RISON contained is the QoS change "PS-Poll agree with Control or and QoS Null comment , but in the HE variant HT frames" to "QoS changing the text in Control field of the Null frames and a different way by frame, " -- a PS-Poll PS-Poll frames eliminating the cannot carry either contained in qualifying phrase - Control Wrapper TGax editor shall frames" make the changes shown in that are marked with CID 7930.
7925 Mark RISON 70.27 Descriptions of the four cases when Wake TBTT Negotiation Subfield = 1 and scheduling/scheduled when = 0) are missing Delete ", Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield = [0/1]" in each cell (4 deletions) Revise –generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 7925. 7926 Mark RISON 70.43 Spurious asterisk Delete the asterisk Revise –generally agree with comment but other instances changed the asterisk to the words “see NOTE”, so that is what is proposed here - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in that are marked with CID 7926. 7927 Mark 71.30 There can be no TWT request to accept since a scheduled STA cannot make a request (see 70.35) Change the cell to "N/A" Reject – the accept outcome is also used to accept a suggest or demand. 7928 Mark RISON 71.33 It says "(See" in the 4th column Change to "(see" Accept – TGax editor make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 7928. 7929 Mark 73.22 are no restrictions on the frames transmitted by the schedul- ing STA of the broadcast TWT SP." -- but the scheduling STA is the AP, so the next para does introduce restrictions Delete the cited text; also at line 49. Also fix at line 56 to only refer to the scheduled STA Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 7929. 7930 Mark RISON 73.09 "Feedback can be contained is the QoS Control or in the HE variant HT Control field of the frame, " -- a PS-Poll cannot carry either At line 8 and line 33 change "PS-Poll and QoS Null frames" to "QoS Null frames and PS-Poll frames contained in Control Wrapper frames" Revise – generally agree with comment , but changing the text in a different way by eliminating the qualifying phrase - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in that are marked with CID 7930.
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