to 'Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only' 472 77 8.4.2.170b "The PRAW Change "PRAW Revised Indicator Indicator" in subfield ..." P77/L59, P77L64, does not match P77/L65, and the subfield P79/L17 to name in the "PRAW figures: Figure Indication". 8-401cl, cm, cn and in other paragraphs (e.g. P77/L11). 474 78 8.4.2.170b The following Rephrase the Revised sentence "The sentence as Same Group follows: "The Indication bit Same Group is defined Indication bit is similarly for set to 0 for PRAW." is PRAW." ambiguous. What does it mean by similarly? 477 79 8.4.2.170b The Access For consistency, Revised Restricted to change the Paged STAs subfield "Access Only subfield Restricted to in the Figure Paged STAs does not Only" in Figure match the 8-401cp to definitions "Paged STAs' described in Access". P79/L14 and P79/L42, where the subfield name "Paged STAs' Access" is used. Discussion CID 472 indicates typos in mentioning Indication” between figure and its reference in text. CID 474 “PRAW accepted the comment but modified the statement moving it to the PRAW description. Also, we modified the text based on the suggestions made in the comment. Also, CIDs 157 and 477 suggest changing STAs Only’ “Paged Access” to Restricted to Paged STAs Only.” “Access We revised the comments. Propose:
to 'Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only' 472 77 8.4.2.170b "The PRAW Indicator subfield ..." does not match the subfield name in the figures: Figure 8-401cl, cm, cn and in other paragraphs (e.g. P77/L11). Change "PRAW Indicator" in P77/L59, P77L64, P77/L65, and P79/L17 to "PRAW Indication". Revised 474 78 8.4.2.170b The following sentence "The Same Group Indication bit is defined similarly for PRAW." is ambiguous. What does it mean by similarly? Rephrase the sentence as follows: "The Same Group Indication bit is set to 0 for PRAW." Revised 477 79 8.4.2.170b The Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only subfield in the Figure does not match the definitions described in P79/L14 and P79/L42, where the subfield name "Paged STAs' Access" is used. For consistency, change the subfield "Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only" in Figure 8-401cp to "Paged STAs' Access". Revised Discussion CID 472 indicates typos in mentioning “PRAW Indication” between figure and its reference in text. CID 474 accepted the comment but modified the statement moving it to the PRAW description. Also, we modified the text based on the suggestions made in the comment. Also, CIDs 157 and 477 suggest changing “Paged STAs Only’ Access” to “Access Restricted to Paged STAs Only.” Propose: We revised the comments.
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