group of S1G STAs using S1G AP has data buffered “When Multicast ID, S1G AP may for a of S1G STAs that belong indicate the group of STAs in to a Multicast AID, it indicates this segment count element condition in the page slice element (8.4.2.170c) of DTIM beacon (8.4.2.170c) transmitted in a and transmit their multicast DTIM beacon. The S1G STAs that data at assigned TIM interval detect this indication will wake up or time slots sequentially for at the assigned beacon interval to their reception." determine the TIM and extract the assigned time slots that carry the buffered multicast data. The S1G AP transmits the buffered multicast data within the assigned time slots for the S1G STAs’ reception.” 2604 212 6 9.51 The word "13 bits" is not Delete "13 bits" Accepted necessary. 2770 211 51 9.51 Segment count element is Please clarify Revised The text is changed to – used only for TIM S1G AP has data buffered “When segmentation that can be used for a group of S1G STAs that to indicate Page Segment i.e. belong to a Multicast AID, it a group of AIDs but not an indicates this condition in the page individual AID. It is not clear slice element (8.4.2.170c) why STA can check whether transmitted in a DTIM beacon. S1G AP may have their The S1G STAs that detect this buffered multicast data to indication will wake up at the deliver within the current assigned beacon interval to DTIM interval by checkinig determine the TIM and extract the the DTIM beacon. It is not assigned time slots that carry the clear why "If S1G AP has buffered multicast data. The S1G multicast data to deliver to the AP transmits the buffered group of S1G STAs, the multicast data within the assigned group of S1G STAs will time slots for the S1G STAs’ receive the multicast data at reception.” the assigned time slots" unless Hope it’s clear. a RAW is used for such
group of S1G STAs using Multicast ID, S1G AP may indicate the group of STAs in segment count element (8.4.2.170c) of DTIM beacon and transmit their multicast data at assigned TIM interval or time slots sequentially for their reception." “When S1G AP has data buffered for a of S1G STAs that belong to a Multicast AID, it indicates this condition in the page slice element (8.4.2.170c) transmitted in a DTIM beacon. The S1G STAs that detect this indication will wake up at the assigned beacon interval to determine the TIM and extract the assigned time slots that carry the buffered multicast data. The S1G AP transmits the buffered multicast data within the assigned time slots for the S1G STAs’ reception.” 2604 212 6 9.51 The word "13 bits" is not necessary. Delete "13 bits" Accepted 2770 211 51 9.51 Segment count element is used only for TIM segmentation that can be used to indicate Page Segment i.e. a group of AIDs but not an individual AID. It is not clear why STA can check whether S1G AP may have their buffered multicast data to deliver within the current DTIM interval by checkinig the DTIM beacon. It is not clear why "If S1G AP has multicast data to deliver to the group of S1G STAs, the group of S1G STAs will receive the multicast data at the assigned time slots" unless a RAW is used for such Please clarify Revised – The text is changed to “When S1G AP has data buffered for a group of S1G STAs that belong to a Multicast AID, it indicates this condition in the page slice element (8.4.2.170c) transmitted in a DTIM beacon. The S1G STAs that detect this indication will wake up at the assigned beacon interval to determine the TIM and extract the assigned time slots that carry the buffered multicast data. The S1G AP transmits the buffered multicast data within the assigned time slots for the S1G STAs’ reception.” Hope it’s clear.
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