7923 Mark 72.37 " the TWT Flow Delete "scheduled" Revise –generally Identifier subfield agree with contains a value that comment - TGax indicates editor shall make recommendations on the changes shown the types of in 11-17/0777r1 frames that are that are marked transmitted by with CID 7923. scheduled STAs during the broadcast TWT SP, encoded according to Table 262k1" -- but that table discusses both the scheduling STA and scheduled STA 7924 Mark 70.27 "Description when Change "1" to "0" Revise deleting – RISON transmitted by a the earlier sentence TWT scheduling is logically STA, Wake TBTT equivalent, simpler Negotiation and easier to subfield = 1" is understand, as the incompatible with " fields have the The same meaning Wake TBTT when the Wake Negotiation subfield is TBTT Negotiation set to in TWT bit is set to 1, elements transmitted regardless of by a responding STA whether requesting, and by a responding, scheduling STA." at scheduled or line 2 above scheduling STA sets the bit. TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7924. 7925 Mark 70.27 Descriptions of the Delete ", Wake Revise –generally RISON other four cases TBTT agree with Negotiation comment - TGax when Wake TBTT subfield = [0/1]" in editor shall make Negotiation Subfield = each cell (4 the changes shown 1 and deletions) in 11-17/0777r1 scheduling/scheduled that are marked when = 0) are missing with CID 7925. 7926 70.43 Spurious asterisk Delete the asterisk Revise Mark –generally RISON agree with comment but other instances changed the asterisk to the words NOTE”, “see so that is what is proposed here - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in that are
7923 Mark 72.37 " the TWT Flow Identifier subfield contains a value that indicates recommendations on the types of frames that are transmitted by scheduled STAs during the broadcast TWT SP, encoded according to Table 262k1" -- but that table discusses both the scheduling STA and scheduled STA Delete "scheduled" Revise –generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7923. 7924 Mark RISON 70.27 "Description when transmitted by a TWT scheduling STA, Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield = 1" is incompatible with " The Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield is set to in TWT elements transmitted by a responding STA and by a scheduling STA." at line 2 above Change "1" to "0" Revise – deleting the earlier sentence is logically equivalent, simpler and easier to understand, as the fields have the same meaning when the Wake TBTT Negotiation bit is set to 1, regardless of whether requesting, responding, scheduled or scheduling STA sets the bit. TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7924. 7925 Mark RISON 70.27 Descriptions of the other four cases when Wake TBTT Negotiation Subfield = 1 and scheduling/scheduled when = 0) are missing Delete ", Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield = [0/1]" in each cell (4 deletions) Revise –generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 7925. 7926 Mark RISON 70.43 Spurious asterisk Delete the asterisk Revise –generally agree with comment but other instances changed the asterisk to the words “see NOTE”, so that is what is proposed here - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in that are
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