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their STA-to-STA service and report it to their AP during the request? AP then advertises this value during the Quiet time setup. There is a chance of collision but it should be fairly small. This also helps the case where multiple disjoint set of STAs associated with the same AP request quiet time for the same type of service. This comment also applies to section 27.16.3 describes that the requesting STA (in its request to the AP) indicates the identifier it has picked for the STA-to-STA service it wishes to run during the time. 3129 96.24 9.4.2.223 "The Vendor Specific Service ID field contains a public unique identifier assigned by the IEEE." Oh no it doesn't. The IEEE doesn't assign anything. The IEEE registration authority assigns various things like OUIs and CIDs - none of which are 2 octets. (OK, they do provide 2 octet EtherTypes, but there's no way they are going to use that resource for this purpose.) Remove cited sentence here and wherever it occurs. Add sentence mapping how a value provided by the IEEE Registration Authority is mapped into this field. Define which of the namespaces provided by the IEEE Registration Authority can be used for this purpose. 6469 96.23 9.4.2.223 Vague and uninformative language: "indicates a specified operation". Which oiperation? Where is it specified? Provide additional, clarifying information. If this operation is specified elsewhere in the draft, say so and provide a reference. If the specification is by the vendor, and thus outside the scope of Duplicated : CID 3041
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