IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs CR for MU EDCA parameters Date: 2017-11-28 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Laurent Cariou laurent.cariou@intel.com Introduction Interpretation of a Motion to Adopt A motion to approve this submission means that the editing instructions and any changed or added material are actioned in the TGax Draft. The introduction and the explanation of the proposed changes are not part of the adopted material. Editing instructions formatted like this are intended to be copied into the TGax Draft (i.e. they are instructions to the 802.11 editor on how to merge the text with the baseline documents). TGax Editor: Editing instructions preceded by Editor” are instructions to the TGax editor to modify existing material in the TGax “TGax As a result of adopting the changes, the TGax editor will execute the instructions rather than copy them to the TGax Draft. Clause Page Comment Proposed Change Resolution "its MIB variables Cite the specific Revised agree with the comment. – n related to CWminand variables or delete the Delete the note and apply the CWmax" -- lazy note. changes as proposed in doc . specification 27.2.6 "A STA that has not Replace cited text Revised agree with the commenter. – received an MU EDCA with "A STA that has Apply the changes as proposed in Smith Parameter Set element from received an MU doc . the AP to which it is EDCA Parameter Set associated does not follow element from the AP the procedure described in to which it is this subclause." Why not associated follows make this positive rather the procedure than negative. Much better described in this subclause."
IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs CR for MU EDCA parameters Date: 2017-11-28 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Laurent Cariou laurent.cariou@intel.com Introduction Interpretation of a Motion to Adopt A motion to approve this submission means that the editing instructions and any changed or added material are actioned in the TGax Draft. The introduction and the explanation of the proposed changes are not part of the adopted material. Editing instructions formatted like this are intended to be copied into the TGax Draft (i.e. they are instructions to the 802.11 editor on how to merge the text with the baseline documents). TGax Editor: Editing instructions preceded by “TGax Editor” are instructions to the TGax editor to modify existing material in the TGax As a result of adopting the changes, the TGax editor will execute the instructions rather than copy them to the TGax Draft. Clause Page Comment Proposed Change Resolution "its MIB variables related to CWminand CWmax" -- lazy specification Cite the specific variables or delete the note. Revised – agree with the comment. Delete the note and apply the changes as proposed in doc . Smith 27.2.6 "A STA that has not received an MU EDCA Parameter Set element from the AP to which it is associated does not follow the procedure described in this subclause." Why not make this positive rather than negative. Much better Replace cited text with "A STA that has received an MU EDCA Parameter Set element from the AP to which it is associated follows the procedure described in this subclause." Revised – agree with the commenter. Apply the changes as proposed in doc . n
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