4742 Alfred 94.27 Only UL MU Capable STAs update Add quoted text as in comment. Revised in – Asterjadhi their MIBs. And they do so when principle with the certain conditions occure as defined comment. Modify the in10.2.4.2. Change to something like sentence to limit it to this: The most recent MU EDCA HE non-AP STAs Parameter Set element is used by an and to reference "UL MU Capable STA" to update the section 27.2.3, as in appropriate MIB variables, "as the proposed text in defined in 10.2.4.2 (HCF contention doc . based channel access (EDCA))." 4744 Alfred 94.63 This sentence is unclear. Rephrase it Replace with "The MU EDCA Revised in – Asterjadhi so that it is clear that this is the time Timer field indicates the duration principle with the during which the STA is supposed to of time, in units of TUs, during comment. Modify the use the MU EDCA parames. which the HE STA uses the sentence by including provided MU EDCA parameters the proposed changes for the corresponding AC, as in doc . defined in 27.2.3 (Obtaining an EDCA TXOP for UL MU capable STAs). 5843 Huizhao 94.62 MU EDCA timer field description is Change the sentence: "The MU Revised agree in – Wang not clear EDCA Timer field indicates the principle with the duration of time, in units of 8 comment. TUs, for which the provided MU Modify the sentence EDCA parameters are used by an by including the HE STA after reception of a changes defined in Basic variant Trigger frame for the proposed changes the corresponding AC." in doc . To: "The MU EDCA Timer field indicates the duration of time, in units of 8 TUs, is used by an HE non-AP STA to disable EDCA function after reception of a Basic variant Trigger frame which contains User Info field AID matching its AID for the corresponding AC." 5911 James Yee 94.31 The 2nd sentence of the paragraph Delete the sentence. Rejected the – describing the EDCA Parameter Set sentence clarifies that Update Count is a repeat of the it is for MU EDCA description in 9.4.2.29 (802.11-2016) parameters and not and is unnecessary. for EDCA parameters.
4742 Alfred Asterjadhi 94.27 Only UL MU Capable STAs update their MIBs. And they do so when certain conditions occure as defined in10.2.4.2. Change to something like this: The most recent MU EDCA Parameter Set element is used by an "UL MU Capable STA" to update the appropriate MIB variables, "as defined in 10.2.4.2 (HCF contention based channel access (EDCA))." Add quoted text as in comment. Revised – in principle with the comment. Modify the sentence to limit it to HE non-AP STAs and to reference section 27.2.3, as in the proposed text in doc . 4744 Alfred Asterjadhi 94.63 This sentence is unclear. Rephrase it so that it is clear that this is the time during which the STA is supposed to use the MU EDCA parames. Replace with "The MU EDCA Timer field indicates the duration of time, in units of TUs, during which the HE STA uses the provided MU EDCA parameters for the corresponding AC, as defined in 27.2.3 (Obtaining an EDCA TXOP for UL MU capable STAs). Revised – in principle with the comment. Modify the sentence by including the proposed changes in doc . 5843 Huizhao Wang 94.62 MU EDCA timer field description is not clear Change the sentence: "The MU EDCA Timer field indicates the duration of time, in units of 8 TUs, for which the provided MU EDCA parameters are used by an HE STA after reception of a Basic variant Trigger frame for the corresponding AC." To: "The MU EDCA Timer field indicates the duration of time, in units of 8 TUs, is used by an HE non-AP STA to disable EDCA function after reception of a Basic variant Trigger frame which contains User Info field AID matching its AID for the corresponding AC." Revised – agree in principle with the comment. Modify the sentence by including the changes defined in the proposed changes in doc . 5911 James Yee 94.31 The 2nd sentence of the paragraph describing the EDCA Parameter Set Update Count is a repeat of the description in 9.4.2.29 (802.11-2016) and is unnecessary. Delete the sentence. Rejected – the sentence clarifies that it is for MU EDCA parameters and not for EDCA parameters.
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