5263 Alfred 148.27 8.4.2.170j Minor clarification: As in comment. Accept TGah editor – Replace "Max NDP to execute proposed Paging period" with "Max changes in NDP Paging Period document field". Also TWT interval under all does not appear headings that include anywhere else in the CID 5263. draft. I think this refers to "TWT Wake Interval". So replace "TWT interval" with TWT Wake Interval". 5264 Alfred 148.48 8.4.2.170j This table lists actions As in comment. Accept TGah editor – and for value 2 and 3 it to execute proposed the wording can be inline changes found in with the other values document (and the NDP Paging under all procedure subclause) by headings that include replacing "STA" with CID 5264. "Wake up". Also in P148L64 it is not needed to specify that the Bits 30-31 are reserved as this is already shown in figure 8-575a24. So remove the sentence in P148L64. 5272 Alfred 181.22 8.4.2.170y There is no need to Remove this Accept TGah editor – specify that the sentence. Also to execute proposed Reserved field is 4 bits. remove any changes provided by Similarly there is no need occurrence of "is the commenter. to say what is the bit x bits and" from length of the fields. The this subclause. figure already shows that. 5302 Alfred 286.17 9.42a.1 The subfield in the S1G As in comment. Accept TGah editor – Capabilities element is to execute proposed called "TWT Responder changes provided by Support". Please replace the commenter. "TWT Responder" with "TWT Responder Support". Idem for replacing "TWT responder Support" with TWT Responder Support" throughout the Another clarification in the paragraph that follows in P286L23: it is confusing to say " a STA with which it is associated" because the STA is associated with the AP not the other way around. So replace "with which it is associated" with "that is associated to the AP".
5263 Alfred 148.27 8.4.2.170j Minor clarification: Replace "Max NDP Paging period" with "Max NDP Paging Period field". Also TWT interval does not appear anywhere else in the draft. I think this refers to "TWT Wake Interval". So replace "TWT interval" with TWT Wake Interval". As in comment. Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes in document under all headings that include CID 5263. 5264 Alfred 148.48 8.4.2.170j This table lists actions and for value 2 and 3 it the wording can be inline with the other values (and the NDP Paging procedure subclause) by replacing "STA" with "Wake up". Also in P148L64 it is not needed to specify that the Bits 30-31 are reserved as this is already shown in figure 8-575a24. So remove the sentence in P148L64. As in comment. Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes found in document under all headings that include CID 5264. 5272 Alfred 181.22 8.4.2.170y There is no need to specify that the Reserved field is 4 bits. Similarly there is no need to say what is the bit length of the fields. The figure already shows that. Remove this sentence. Also remove any occurrence of "is x bits and" from this subclause. Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes provided by the commenter. 5302 Alfred 286.17 9.42a.1 The subfield in the S1G Capabilities element is called "TWT Responder Support". Please replace "TWT Responder" with "TWT Responder Support". Idem for replacing "TWT responder Support" with TWT Responder Support" throughout the Another clarification in the paragraph that follows in P286L23: it is confusing to say " a STA with which it is associated" because the STA is associated with the AP not the other way around. So replace "with which it is associated" with "that is associated to the AP". As in comment. Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes provided by the commenter.
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