4765 Alfred 69.32 are some issues As in comment. Revise TGax – 0 in this Figure. First editor to make some parts are changes as in missing (TWR field is 11-17/0777r6 that 8, 2, or 0 in length, are marked with Broadcast TWT ID CID 4765 needs to be underlined). Also in order to avoid confusion between a normal TWT element and a broadcast TWT element I suggest having two Figures, one for TWT element (with one TWT parameter set, as in baseline), and another one for broadcast TWT element (with one or more TWT parameter sets, this to be tied to the value broadcast = 1 and wake TBTT interval value 0). 4766 Alfred 69.55 The Broadcast TWT As in comment. Revise TGax – 0 ID is present when the Impacts also the editor to make Broadcast is 1, paragraph that changes as shown however the describes the in 11-17/0777r6 functionality of the definition of Wake that are marked Broadcast TWT ID TBTT Negotiation with CID 4766 depends on the value in the next of the Wake TBTT paragraph (which interval value. If the as is refers only to value is 0 then this is a when the Broacast broadcast TWT is and need to element. If the value is add the case when 1 then this is a TWT broadcast is 1). request/response that Also to generalize is negotiating the call this field broadcast TWT IDs of something else (as that (those) particular Wake TBTT is value(s). restrictive now). Also please make these changes to all those fields that depend on these settings in the remaining paragraphs of this subclause.
4765 Alfred 69.32 are some issues in this Figure. First some parts are missing (TWR field is 8, 2, or 0 in length, Broadcast TWT ID needs to be underlined). Also in order to avoid confusion between a normal TWT element and a broadcast TWT element I suggest having two Figures, one for TWT element (with one TWT parameter set, as in baseline), and another one for broadcast TWT element (with one or more TWT parameter sets, this to be tied to the value broadcast = 1 and wake TBTT interval value 0). As in comment. Revise – TGax editor to make changes as in 11-17/0777r6 that are marked with CID 4765 4766 Alfred 69.55 The Broadcast TWT ID is present when the Broadcast is 1, however the functionality of the Broadcast TWT ID depends on the value of the Wake TBTT interval value. If the value is 0 then this is a broadcast TWT element. If the value is 1 then this is a TWT request/response that is negotiating the broadcast TWT IDs of that (those) particular value(s). As in comment. Impacts also the paragraph that describes the definition of Wake TBTT Negotiation in the next paragraph (which as is refers only to when the Broacast is and need to add the case when broadcast is 1). Also to generalize call this field something else (as Wake TBTT is restrictive now). Also please make these changes to all those fields that depend on these settings in the remaining paragraphs of this subclause. Revise – TGax editor to make changes as shown in 11-17/0777r6 that are marked with CID 4766 0 0
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