flexibility to control this draft. The current transition. triggered TWT rules do not allow the operation suggested by the commenter because the current rules also recommend that the requesting STA does not send frames outside of the SP. What is being suggested is really, a proposal for a new mode of operation and would need a more complete description to be considered. 6089 Jian Yu 74.52 The ax draft contains Refine the whole Revise generally – description for 11ah paragraph and agree with draft without an clarify which part is comment - TGax clarification. For for ax and which editor shall make example, there is part is for ah. the changes shown description for channel Maybe should also in 11-17/0777r8 width of 1MHz and add ah spec as a that are marked 2MHz for a BSS, whch reference with CID 6089. seems very strange 6350 71.04 Unclear wording: "... Change "as" to Revise generally John – Coffey 0 contains 0s as the "because". agree with TWT ..." looks at first comment but sight as if the TWT language is whatever contains 0s. changed In context it seems significantly - TGax that the "as" means editor shall make "because" here. The the changes shown stray clause tacked on in 11-17/0777r8 at the end by a comma that are marked doesn't help. with CID 6350. 6351 John 71.04 The sentence in the Change the comma Revise generally – Coffey 0 fifth column has to a semicolon. agree with independent clasues comment - TGax linked by a comma editor shall make without a coordinating the changes shown conjunction. This is in 11-17/0777r8 ungrammatical usage that are marked and it hurts clarity. with CID 6351. 6352 John 73.09 Garbled text: Change "is" to "in". Revise generally – Coffey 0 "Feedback can be with comment - contained is the QoS TGax editor shall Control field". make the changes shown in that are marked with CID 6352.
flexibility to control this transition. draft. The current triggered TWT rules do not allow the operation suggested by the commenter because the current rules also recommend that the requesting STA does not send frames outside of the SP. What is being suggested is really, a proposal for a new mode of operation and would need a more complete description to be considered. 6089 Jian Yu 74.52 The ax draft contains description for 11ah draft without an clarification. For example, there is description for channel width of 1MHz and 2MHz for a BSS, whch seems very strange Refine the whole paragraph and clarify which part is for ax and which part is for ah. Maybe should also add ah spec as a reference Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 6089. 6350 John Coffey 71.04 Unclear wording: "... contains 0s as the TWT ..." looks at first sight as if the TWT whatever contains 0s. In context it seems that the "as" means "because" here. The stray clause tacked on at the end by a comma doesn't help. Change "as" to "because". Revise – generally agree with comment but language is changed significantly - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 6350. 6351 John Coffey 71.04 The sentence in the fifth column has independent clasues linked by a comma without a coordinating conjunction. This is ungrammatical usage and it hurts clarity. Change the comma to a semicolon. Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r8 that are marked with CID 6351. 6352 John Coffey 73.09 Garbled text: "Feedback can be contained is the QoS Control field". Change "is" to "in". Revise – generally with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in that are marked with CID 6352. 0 0 0
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