can’t be a “shall” behaviour. 6797 207.19 Mismatched Pick one term and Revised: terms: "Quiet to it. Time Period Operation (Figure 27-8 (Quieting time period operation)". Is is Quiet or Quieting? 6799 207.52 Awkward Change to "with Accepted: phrasing: "with dialog toekn the matching matching the dialog token response token" or and response some other less token". awkward wording. Accepted: 6801 207.57 Use of Change "Quite" to undefined term: "Quiet". "the Quite Time Period". Quite what? 6802 207.57 Unclear and Change Accepted: possibly garbled "requested" to text: "the "requester". requested HE STA". What does this mean? Elsewhere in the same section we have "requester" HE STA so perhaps this is a misprint. 6803 207.57 Descriptive Change "can" to Duplicated: 5744 language used "may". where it seems normative language must have been intended: the HE STA "can" transmit frames. The ability of the HE STA to transmit
can’t be a “shall” behaviour. 6797 207.19 Mismatched terms: "Quiet Time Period Operation (Figure 27-8 (Quieting time period operation)". Is is Quiet or Quieting? Pick one term and to it. Revised: 6799 207.52 Awkward phrasing: "with the matching dialog token and response token". Change to "with dialog toekn matching the response token" or some other less awkward wording. Accepted: 6801 207.57 Use of undefined term: "the Quite Time Period". Quite what? Change "Quite" to "Quiet". Accepted: 6802 207.57 Unclear and possibly garbled text: "the requested HE STA". What does this mean? Elsewhere in the same section we have "requester" HE STA so perhaps this is a misprint. Change "requested" to "requester". Accepted: 6803 207.57 Descriptive language used where it seems normative language must have been intended: the HE STA "can" transmit frames. The ability of the HE STA to transmit Change "can" to "may". Duplicated: 5744
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