9814 Young Hoon 37.23 Not clear what "the format defined below" Per comment. Revised – Kwon means here. It's better to have figure that describes the format for Multi-STA BlockAck, Will to figure instead. Or, it can also refer to Figure 9-32. TGax editor shall incorporate changes in 9815 Young Hoon 37.24 Normative descript is not appropriate in clause Delete the Revised – Kwon 9. sentence BlockAck Will convert to frames shall be informative text. supported if either UL MU or TGax editor shall A-MPDU incorporate operation is changes in supported.", and describe the normative behavior in Clause 10 or Clause 27. 9816 Hoon 38.01 First, the first sentence should start with a Modify the first Revised – Kwon "NOTE". And, the sentence is somewhat sentence to misleading as there's no acknowledgement "NOTE -- The TID Revised to make contained in the Per AID TID Info subfield. subfield contains the text under the TID for which NOTE in the main the body text. acknowledgment or block TGax editor acknowledgment incorporate contained in the changes in Per STA Info subfield applies.". 9817 Young Hoon 38.04 Does the TID value set to 15 imply a As in the Revised – Kwon management frame or an action frame? In this comment. note, it is said to be a management frame, but Will clarify that it is in Table 9-24b and in sub-clause 27.4, it is said a management to be an action frame. Clarification is needed. frame. TGax editor shall incorporate changes in 9818 Young Hoon 39.62 In subclause 10.12, it says "An A-MSDU may As in the Revised – Kwon be fragmented and each fragment transmitted comment. within a single QoS Data frame, when the Agree in principle. recipient has indicated support for reception of fragmented A-MSDUs.", which implies that TGax editor shall can be fragmented. Therefore, text in incorporate 10.12 and text in line 62 contradict each other. changes in Need clarification.
9814 Young Hoon Kwon 37.23 Not clear what "the format defined below" means here. It's better to have figure that describes the format for Multi-STA BlockAck, instead. Or, it can also refer to Figure 9-32. Per comment. Revised – Will to figure TGax editor shall incorporate changes in 9815 Young Hoon Kwon 37.24 Normative descript is not appropriate in clause 9. Delete the sentence BlockAck frames shall be supported if either UL MU or A-MPDU operation is supported.", and describe the normative behavior in Clause 10 or Clause 27. Revised – Will convert to informative text. TGax editor shall incorporate changes in 9816 Hoon Kwon 38.01 First, the first sentence should start with a "NOTE". And, the sentence is somewhat misleading as there's no acknowledgement contained in the Per AID TID Info subfield. Modify the first sentence to "NOTE -- The TID subfield contains the TID for which the acknowledgment or block acknowledgment contained in the Per STA Info subfield applies.". Revised – Revised to make the text under NOTE in the main body text. TGax editor incorporate changes in 9817 Young Hoon Kwon 38.04 Does the TID value set to 15 imply a management frame or an action frame? In this note, it is said to be a management frame, but in Table 9-24b and in sub-clause 27.4, it is said to be an action frame. Clarification is needed. As in the comment. Revised – Will clarify that it is a management frame. TGax editor shall incorporate changes in 9818 Young Hoon Kwon 39.62 In subclause 10.12, it says "An A-MSDU may be fragmented and each fragment transmitted within a single QoS Data frame, when the recipient has indicated support for reception of fragmented A-MSDUs.", which implies that can be fragmented. Therefore, text in 10.12 and text in line 62 contradict each other. Need clarification. As in the comment. Revised – Agree in principle. TGax editor shall incorporate changes in
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