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must be a hardware appliance. NDcPP: 3.1 Case3, 3rd paragraph It is unclear the word “similar” Network Devices as appose to identical Network Devices. Need to elaborate or define the word “similar” 2 Repeat of #37. The term ‘similar’ has been removed from the description. NDcPP: Table 1 - column “warning” is misspelled in “Display wanring for local storage space” Replace with “warning” 3 Typo corrected NDcPP: Table 1 - column “Identification” is misspelled. “User Identificiation and Authentication” Replace with “Identification” 3 Typo corrected NDcPP: A.1 Audit Events for Optional SFRs – “Management of of cryptographic keys. Remove the extra “of” 3 word removed
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