conversations using grade-level-appropriate academic vocabulary for scientific discourse. Edits and Corrections: The following edits and corrections must be made as a condition of adoption: # Grade Component Page Current text Proposed corrected Reason for edit Level number(s) text 1 K TG: Weather SIS 1B the daytime sky. the daytime sky, I Grammatical “In “In and Sky I can see…” can see…” error, fragmented sentence 2 1 TG: 37 (multiple Finalize the list to Finalize the list to Factual error places) make sure students make sure students Saying that Explaining Organisms understand that all understand that all plants “breathe” living things move, living things move, is a grow, breathe, grow, need air, misconception. and need reproduce, and need All cells use food. food. oxygen and release carbon dioxide- but that is NOT the same as breathing. They all need “air”? 3 1 LR: Sky 12 In summer sunrise In summer, sunrise Grammatical Watchers happens early. happens error Missing a comma 4 1 LR: Sky 12 In winter the Sun In winter, the Sun Grammatical Watchers rises later. rises later. error Missing a comma 5 2 TG: Matter LA 3C Oh, no! Oh no! Grammatical error Remove the 6 2 TG: 98 you have you have to Typographical “magine “Imagine Ecosystem to design an design an Diversity Missing a capital I to begin the sentence
conversations using grade-level-appropriate academic vocabulary for scientific discourse. Edits and Corrections: The following edits and corrections must be made as a condition of adoption: # Grade Level Component Page number(s) Current text Proposed corrected text Reason for edit 1 K TG: Weather and Sky SIS 1B “In the daytime sky. I can see…” “In the daytime sky, I can see…” Grammatical error, fragmented sentence 2 1 TG: Explaining Organisms 37 (multiple places) Finalize the list to make sure students understand that all living things move, grow, breathe, and need food. Finalize the list to make sure students understand that all living things move, grow, need air, reproduce, and need food. Factual error Saying that plants “breathe” is a misconception. All cells use oxygen and release carbon dioxide- but that is NOT the same as breathing. They all need “air”? 3 1 LR: Sky Watchers 12 In summer sunrise happens early. In summer, sunrise happens Grammatical error Missing a comma 4 1 LR: Sky Watchers 12 In winter the Sun rises later. In winter, the Sun rises later. Grammatical error Missing a comma 5 2 TG: Matter LA 3C Oh, no! Oh no! Grammatical error Remove the 6 2 TG: Ecosystem Diversity 98 “magine you have to design an “Imagine you have to design an Typographical Missing a capital I to begin the sentence
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