Task: Writing own version of Cinderella changing some elements of story A long, long time ago in a small house lived a girl called Cinderella. She lived with her dad, with her rued mum and two step sisters. One day Cinderella, her mum and her step sister strolold though her wonderfull village. They herd the King said is “there going to be a ball.” Cinderella really wan’ted to go but her mum said “No”. Then Cinderella qickelly home criing with tirs. The step sister got ready and there mum. Her step sister and her mum went to the larage ball.
Task: Writing own version of Cinderella changing some elements of story A long, long time ago in a small house lived a girl called Cinderella. She lived with her dad, with her rued mum and two step sisters. One day Cinderella, her mum and her step sister strolold though her wonderfull village. They herd the King said “there is going to be a ball.” Cinderella really wan’ted to go but her mum said “No”. Then Cinderella qickelly home criing with tirs. The step sister got ready and there mum. Her step sister and her mum went to the larage ball.
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