Vocabulary very limited range of verbs and misunderstanding of the meaning of the word – ie , trying to be or the effect of the prefix. single adjectives golden, blue unfortunately adventurous but .. Although one use of modal, there are instances Tense consistent past tense and one example when it was required and not used ie a child can – of modal ie where he could play (could) have Strengths Issues consistent, but short and No real linking between paragraphs. Genre undeveloped Cohesion – – Also repetition ie Inconsistency in tense People. Structure information limited but organised, – also creates lack of cohesion. As is a series of opening, when, why poppies, types, perhaps simple sentences this also creates a list-like piece lacking ending. Paragraphed. leading to lack of cohesion. Cohesion within sentences, ie use of pronouns – Sentence structures over dependent on simple – for and for It Remembrance Day ones poppies sentences. White poppies are worn by pacificsts. Mostly simple sentences. Two examples of Could be White symbolise of peace. White complex using basic subordinator because. poppies are worn by pacifists because white is Where s/he has tried to used to symbolise peace. use complex sentences, there are issues with structure and meaning could be lost. ie It not just that soldiers lost the life …
Vocabulary – very limited range of verbs and single adjectives ie golden, blue , trying to be adventurous but .. Tense – consistent past tense and one example of modal ie where he could play misunderstanding of the meaning of the word unfortunately or the effect of the prefix. Although one use of modal, there are instances when it was required and not used ie a child can (could) have Strengths Issues Genre – consistent, but short and undeveloped Structure – information limited but organised, opening, when, why poppies, types, perhaps lacking ending. Paragraphed. Cohesion – within sentences, ie use of pronouns It for Remembrance Day and ones for poppies Mostly simple sentences. Two examples of complex using basic subordinator because. Cohesion – No real linking between paragraphs. Also repetition ie People. Inconsistency in tense also creates lack of cohesion. As is a series of simple sentences this also creates a list-like piece leading to lack of cohesion. Sentence structures – over dependent on simple sentences. White poppies are worn by pacificsts. White symbolise of peace. Could be White poppies are worn by pacifists because white is used to symbolise peace. Where s/he has tried to use complex sentences, there are issues with structure and meaning could be lost. ie It not just that soldiers lost the life …
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