Vocabulary s/he has used subject-specific Vocabulary used in correct context but not – – including verbs ie always grammatically correctly ie vocabulary, some abstract symbolises to celebrate, worn and lost. Some use of adjectives rather than and blood symbolises blood white to create noun phrases ie bright red coulour rather than symbolises of peace symbols of peace or white symbolises peace Tense consistent past tense, with one use of – passive tense White poppies are worn by Tenses - needs greater use of passive tense ie – … rather than Remembrance Day is celebrated People celebrate ….
Vocabulary – s/he has used subject-specific vocabulary, some abstract including verbs ie celebrate, worn and lost. Some use of adjectives to create noun phrases ie bright red coulour Tense – consistent past tense, with one use of passive tense – White poppies are worn by … Vocabulary – used in correct context but not always grammatically correctly ie symbolises to blood rather than symbolises blood and white symbolises of peace rather than symbols of peace or white symbolises peace Tenses - needs greater use of passive tense ie Remembrance Day is celebrated rather than People celebrate ….
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