powerful way. It successfully addresses the self-doubt that often comes with the examination of one's own cultural past. Excellent poetry.” Jesse Cadman Home School, Rhyll The First Poem of May “A wonderful piece about longing and unattainability, but written without cloying sentimentality.” Lin Chen St Michael’s Cities “Cities are as much characters as Collegiate, Hobart people. This poem plays with this idea with great skill.” Lilith Cole Hobart College, Mount An Evening Walk at "Fog shrouds the treetops, Nelson the Behest of a yearning / Branches touch the Passerine mist like parting lovers / Brushing an ink wash over the landscape / And me..." Stunning imagery to start a beautifully constructed poem.” Darcy Edwards Trinity Grammar Seeds of Memories “One of the strengths of poetry is School, Summer Hill the way it can cover a lot of time quite quickly and efficiently. This piece does that beautifully, with sadness and warmth wrapped up together.” Arthur Pearce Orana Steiner, Weston The Scientist in Love “This is a wonderfully honest poem. The lines don't always scan perfectly, but we can forgive that when the idea developed throughout the piece is so well handled. Great job.” Bonnie Rudd Hastings Secondary Homeless “I love the rhyming pattern of this College- Port piece - it is reminiscent of the Macquarie Campus, classic bush poets like Paterson Port Macquarie and Lawson, and is a perfect choice for the subject. Thank you for writing this.” Marion Scott St Michael’s Ode to the “This piece is testament to Collegiate, Hobart poetry's ability to focus on an object within a moment and bring it to life in a way that forces us to appreciate it.” Anagha Valappil St Michael’s Dragonfly “A simple, elegant description of a Collegiate, Hobart beautiful moment. Classy.” Anna Walls St Michael’s The Boy on the Bush “A touching and witty Collegiate, Hobart with the Burnt Blonde examination of infatuation, Hair longing and disappointment which, in the end, brings a stroke of wisdom.”
powerful way. It successfully addresses the self-doubt that often comes with the examination of one's own cultural past. Excellent poetry.” Jesse Cadman Home School, Rhyll The First Poem of May “A wonderful piece about longing and unattainability, but written without cloying sentimentality.” Lin Chen St Michael’s Collegiate, Hobart Cities “Cities are as much characters as people. This poem plays with this idea with great skill.” Lilith Cole Hobart College, Mount Nelson An Evening Walk at the Behest of a Passerine "Fog shrouds the treetops, yearning / Branches touch the mist like parting lovers / Brushing an ink wash over the landscape / And me..." Stunning imagery to start a beautifully constructed poem.” Darcy Edwards Trinity Grammar School, Summer Hill Seeds of Memories “One of the strengths of poetry is the way it can cover a lot of time quite quickly and efficiently. This piece does that beautifully, with sadness and warmth wrapped up together.” Arthur Pearce Orana Steiner, Weston The Scientist in Love “This is a wonderfully honest poem. The lines don't always scan perfectly, but we can forgive that when the idea developed throughout the piece is so well handled. Great job.” Bonnie Rudd Hastings Secondary College- Port Macquarie Campus, Port Macquarie Homeless “I love the rhyming pattern of this piece - it is reminiscent of the classic bush poets like Paterson and Lawson, and is a perfect choice for the subject. Thank you for writing this.” Marion Scott St Michael’s Collegiate, Hobart Ode to the “This piece is testament to poetry's ability to focus on an object within a moment and bring it to life in a way that forces us to appreciate it.” Anagha Valappil St Michael’s Collegiate, Hobart Dragonfly “A simple, elegant description of a beautiful moment. Classy.” Anna Walls St Michael’s Collegiate, Hobart The Boy on the Bush with the Burnt Blonde Hair “A touching and witty examination of infatuation, longing and disappointment which, in the end, brings a stroke of wisdom.”
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