Evaluation Question Tip Revision Technique Double underlineclauses Reduce half of clauses to participles or beginning withwhich participial phrases by deleting the pronouns is, which are, that is, that who, which, or that and the be verb. If necessary, and the remaining words. are, who is, who are. rearrange ANALYZING THE REVISION PROCESS Study these revisions, and answer the questions that follow. Responding to the Revision Process 1. How do the writer’s revisions improve the thesis statement? Why do you think the writer reworded the end of the sentence? 2.
Evaluation Question Tip Revision Technique Double underlineclauses beginning withwhich is, which are, that is, that are, who is, and who are. Reduce half of clauses to participles or participial phrases by deleting the pronouns who, which, or that and the be verb. If necessary, rearrange the remaining words. ANALYZING THE REVISION PROCESS Study these revisions, and answer the questions that follow. Responding to the Revision Process 1. How do the writer’s revisions improve the thesis statement? 2. Why do you think the writer reworded the end of the sentence?
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