photograph was taken after the ceremony had concluded, and the Chinese workers had left for the dinner party. 4 The Chinese were paid fairly, $31/month in gold, $1 more than the Irish workers, because they provided their own lodging.5 The Reviewer suggests that this entire statement be deleted. In researching the topic of Chinese railroad workers, it is very easy to find numerous good reports of their work ethic, exacting skill, and other contributions cited by their Caucasian supervisors. They were generally considered to be superior by all measures, including white workers. Space prohibits listing these. 1, Francisco Newsletter, Transcontinental Railroad “San May 15, 1869, page 2, col 2, paragraph 2, line Postscript”, 11. 2, Francisco Newsletter, Transcontinental Railroad “San May 15, 1869, page 4, col 2, paragraph 1, line 9. Postscript”, 3, Francisco Newsletter, Transcontinental Railroad “San May 15, 1869, page 4, col 2, paragraph 2. Postscript”, 4, Section: Chinese Labor, paragraph 9, approx. 5, paragraph 8. Lesson:25 Industrialization clearly brought benefits to some. On B The text leads the student to the erroneous conclusion that the broader society did not benefit from industrialization. The Section:1 March 26, 1883, Alva Vanderbilt threw a party to text itself in Section 2 on Improved Technology, New Paragraph:1 show off her family's new home in New York City. Production Methods notes that there were benefits that were Lines:1-3 enjoyed by all not just the rich: techniques of mass production enabled workers to “These produce more goods per day at a lower cost, which meant they were sold at lower prices to customers. As prices dropped, more Americans could afford to buy manufactured products that improved their daily lives. that had once been handmade and costly were now widely available, allowing Americans to devote more time and money to other pursuits.” The text does not provide quantitative analysis of the benefits and injuries of industrialization. Not every factory was run like the Triangle Shirt Co., and some industries paid relatively generous wages. The Reviewer suggest the following re-write:
photograph was taken after the ceremony had concluded, and the Chinese workers had left for the dinner party. 4 The Chinese were paid fairly, $31/month in gold, $1 more than the Irish workers, because they provided their own lodging.5 The Reviewer suggests that this entire statement be deleted. In researching the topic of Chinese railroad workers, it is very easy to find numerous good reports of their work ethic, exacting skill, and other contributions cited by their Caucasian supervisors. They were generally considered to be superior by all measures, including white workers. Space prohibits listing these. 1, “San Francisco Newsletter, Transcontinental Railroad Postscript”, May 15, 1869, page 2, col 2, paragraph 2, line 11. 2, “San Francisco Newsletter, Transcontinental Railroad Postscript”, May 15, 1869, page 4, col 2, paragraph 1, line 9. 3, “San Francisco Newsletter, Transcontinental Railroad Postscript”, May 15, 1869, page 4, col 2, paragraph 2. 4, Section: Chinese Labor, paragraph 9, approx. 5, paragraph 8. Lesson:25 Section:1 Paragraph:1 Lines:1-3 Industrialization clearly brought benefits to some. On March 26, 1883, Alva Vanderbilt threw a party to show off her family's new home in New York City. B The text leads the student to the erroneous conclusion that the broader society did not benefit from industrialization. The text itself in Section 2 on Improved Technology, New Production Methods notes that there were benefits that were enjoyed by all not just the rich: “These techniques of mass production enabled workers to produce more goods per day at a lower cost, which meant they were sold at lower prices to customers. As prices dropped, more Americans could afford to buy manufactured products that improved their daily lives. that had once been handmade and costly were now widely available, allowing Americans to devote more time and money to other pursuits.” The text does not provide quantitative analysis of the benefits and injuries of industrialization. Not every factory was run like the Triangle Shirt Co., and some industries paid relatively generous wages. The Reviewer suggest the following re-write:
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