19 5.2 18 The last sentence of the first paragraph reads: Suggest rewording. It does not take a Yes Thaden Editorial Resolved in Draft 5A "This combination of moisture, heat, and combination of factors to effect. Any one of oxygen is the key factor that them can do it. affects …" Suggest rewording to "Moisture, heat, and oxygen are the key factors that effect the rate …" 20 5.4 18 The second paragraph is redundant to 5.3.2, Delete paragraph and renumber subclauses Yes Thaden Editorial Could not identify which should be 5.4.1, if this is not 5.4. correctly. referenced sections 21 5.4 18 Suggest deleting this subclause and putting Delete this subclause and add related info to Yes Thaden Editorial There has been no related information in what was subclause what was 5.3.2. Section 5.3.2 since 5.3.2. beore the 2006 verision 22 5.4 19 Figure 2 is redundant to 5.3.2 (new 5.4.1) Delete information Yes Thaden Technical There has been no Section 5.3.2 since beore the 2006 verision 23 5.4 19 The bullets would be more appropriate in 5.9. Move information as appropriate to 5.9 and Yes Thaden Technical Resolved Only one bullet refers to Furan. In the fix reference to 5.8. paragraph there is a reference to section (subclause) 5.8, which should be 5.9. 24 5.3.2 20 IEC Standard 61198 is referenced but is not in Add reference to clause 2 Yes Thaden Technical Resolved reference clause 2. 25 5.3.3 21 Figures numbers jump from 2 to 5. Fix figure numbers Yes Thaden Editorial Resolved 26 5.3.3 21 What does [xvii] refer to? Roman numerals Fix as appropriate Yes Thaden Editorial Resolved appear elsewhere in this subclause. 27 5.4.1 23 Cigre TB445 referenced but not listed in clause Add to clause 2. Yes Thaden Technical TB 445 not referenced 2. in Guide 28 5.4.1 24 IEC 60422 referenced but not listed in clause 2 Add to clause 2. Yes Thaden Technical Resolved
19 5.2 18 The last sentence of the first paragraph reads: "This combination of moisture, heat, and oxygen is the key factor that affects …" Suggest rewording to "Moisture, heat, and oxygen are the key factors that effect the rate …" Suggest rewording. It does not take a combination of factors to effect. Any one of them can do it. Yes Thaden Editorial Resolved in Draft 5A 20 5.4 18 The second paragraph is redundant to 5.3.2, which should be 5.4.1, if this is not 5.4. Delete paragraph and renumber subclauses correctly. Yes Thaden Editorial Could not identify referenced sections 21 5.4 18 Suggest deleting this subclause and putting related information in what was subclause 5.3.2. Delete this subclause and add related info to what was 5.3.2. Yes Thaden Editorial There has been no Section 5.3.2 since beore the 2006 verision 22 5.4 19 Figure 2 is redundant to 5.3.2 (new 5.4.1) Delete information Yes Thaden Technical There has been no Section 5.3.2 since beore the 2006 verision 23 5.4 19 The bullets would be more appropriate in 5.9. Only one bullet refers to Furan. In the paragraph there is a reference to section (subclause) 5.8, which should be 5.9. Move information as appropriate to 5.9 and fix reference to 5.8. Yes Thaden Technical Resolved 24 5.3.2 20 IEC Standard 61198 is referenced but is not in reference clause 2. Add reference to clause 2 Yes Thaden Technical Resolved 25 5.3.3 21 Figures numbers jump from 2 to 5. Fix figure numbers Yes Thaden Editorial Resolved 26 5.3.3 21 What does [xvii] refer to? Roman numerals appear elsewhere in this subclause. Fix as appropriate Yes Thaden Editorial Resolved 27 5.4.1 23 Cigre TB445 referenced but not listed in clause 2. Add to clause 2. Yes Thaden Technical TB 445 not referenced in Guide 28 5.4.1 24 IEC 60422 referenced but not listed in clause 2 Add to clause 2. Yes Thaden Technical Resolved
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