main tank but not sure as most transformers McShane also have DETC, often de-energized TCs when operating. Pls clarify if this section pertains to both or not. If pertains only to LTC, include in the title and in the “Load” paragraph. Should this section address both LTC and DETCs? 157 5.8.3 31 Table 3 Suggested temperature rise See coment 32 above. Patrick Editorial Resolved – recommendations McShane 158 5.9 33 Figure 3 is an example of the information that I would move this sentence to the paragraph Patrick Editorial Resolved should be provided with the samples. Samples above after the sentence the sample in McShane “Wrap collected from different locations should be plastic or place in a sealable plastic. separated and clearly identified so that analysis Separating and clearly identifying samples is of the results will be logical. Samples should be a good practice but the practice, by itself, protected from the environment. The use of does not guarantee the analysis results will be sealed plastic bags is a method of separating logical. samples. This info is redundant to previous paragraphs in this section. 159 5.10 35 and are I understand the wording Patrick Editorial Resolved …real … don’t “more apparent than this be make McShane real” . Can be deceptive, thus clearer? E.g. “…can difficult to locate and identify.” 160 5.10.2 35 Investigated further. Changed because are not a type Patrick Editorial Resolved “fan guards” of noise. McShane 161 6 35 Restore seems out of place, perhaps the Patrick Editorial Resolved …to restore many … to McShane author meant” attend to” 162 6.1.1 36 At the time this guide was published, the only Is this statement still correct or has some new Patrick Editorial No, resolved recognized method for evaluating technologies available since this statement McShane
main tank but not sure as most transformers also have DETC, often de-energized TCs when operating. Pls clarify if this section pertains to both or not. If pertains only to LTC, include “Load” in the title and in the paragraph. Should this section address both LTC and DETCs? McShane 157 5.8.3 31 Table 3 – Suggested temperature rise recommendations See coment 32 above. Patrick McShane Editorial Resolved 158 5.9 33 Figure 3 is an example of the information that should be provided with the samples. Samples collected from different locations should be separated and clearly identified so that analysis of the results will be logical. Samples should be protected from the environment. The use of sealed plastic bags is a method of separating samples. I would move this sentence to the paragraph above after the sentence “Wrap the sample in plastic or place in a sealable plastic. Separating and clearly identifying samples is a good practice but the practice, by itself, does not guarantee the analysis results will be logical. This info is redundant to previous paragraphs in this section. Patrick McShane Editorial Resolved 159 5.10 35 …real and are … I don’t understand the wording “more apparent than real” . Can this be make clearer? E.g. “…can be deceptive, thus difficult to locate and identify.” Patrick McShane Editorial Resolved 160 5.10.2 35 Investigated further. Changed because “fan guards” are not a type of noise. Patrick McShane Editorial Resolved 161 6 35 …to restore many … Restore seems out of place, perhaps the author meant” to attend to” Patrick McShane Editorial Resolved 162 6.1.1 36 At the time this guide was published, the only recognized method for evaluating Is this statement still correct or has some new technologies available since this statement Patrick McShane Editorial No, resolved
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