USE PARAGRAPHS Avoid: Using different tenses (past/present etc). Giving the back-story / etc use onomatopoeic VERBS! “Bang!” “Smash” – Apostrophe issues only use if you KNOW they are needed. – Missing full stops. long conversations and lengthy dialogue. –
USE PARAGRAPHS Avoid: Using different tenses (past/present etc). Giving the back-story “Bang!” / “Smash” etc – use onomatopoeic VERBS! Apostrophe issues – only use if you KNOW they are needed. Missing full stops. long conversations – and lengthy dialogue.
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