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169 6.3.1 54 Make sure the test set-up is correct The use of punctuation is not consistent in this section so I changed them to be consistent and correct. Patrick McShane Editorial Resolved 170 6.4.1 57 … without oil backing … I am not sure what is “oil backing “. And stating “no risk” is perhaps an avoidable absolute. Does it mean that on the other side of the tank there is a volume of oil in contact with the metal where the weld is taking place Patrick McShane Editorial Unresolved, maybe define oil backing. 171 6.4.4 60 … typically used for smaller transformers .. Define smaller, add an appropriate range. Patrick McShane Resolved 172 6.4.6 60 The nitrile (Buna-N) or fluorocarbon (Viton .. Typically it is improper to include product trade names into the standards, especially when well known generic terms exist. Patrick McShane Resolved 173 6.5.2 62 There should be no noncontacts, commonly referred to as dead spots, or simultaneously normally open and normally closed contacts Recommend making this statement clearer. Patrick McShane Resolved 174 6.6.2 65 Electronic Temperature Monitor (ETM) for LTI .. Consider the ETM acronym to Section 3.2 Patrick McShane Rejected , ETM is only used within a two consecutive sentence place. 175 7.1 70 Off Line De-Energized Processing methods Please contact Paul Boman to determine if he has alternative instructions for alternative fluids, and if so, please add to this section. Patrick McShane Rejected, no alternative instructions available, just fluid handling methods. 176 7.1 71 The format for the bullet sequence is out of whack. Recommend using numerics 1-4 here. Patrick McShane Resolved 177 Below 7.2 74 Add a section here on dry-out by retrofilling with natural esters, which naturally reduce the moisture in the insulating paper and in the fluid itself via chemical processes? Patrick McShane Unresolved
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