own business, this would provide employment for all the people employed 7) in the business. 7) For example, businessmen could use the money to pay 8) office staff and workers to work for them. 8) As a result, the government would make money from the business in taxes created by employment. Body Paragraph 2 * Example *Result *Topic sentence solution #2 – 9) A second solution to the problem of unemployment is that the 9) government should provide work schemes for people. 10) For instance, 10) unemployed people work for a company instead of just getting money 11) from the government. 11) Consequently, they would learn new skills and could apply for new jobs. *Example *Explanation *Topic sentence solution #3 * Result Body Paragraph 3 – 12) Finally, the government should make young people do a period 12) of job training after they finish their studies. 13) Sometimes a university 13) degree is not enough to get a job because employers want their employees 14) to have training or work experience too. 14) For instance, law students need some work experience to develop their ability as well as their 15) knowledge. 15) Because of this, graduates with work experience may get jobs more quickly. *Signal word + thesis *Repeat solutions (#1, #2, #3) *Advice Conclusion 16) In conclusion, although the problem of unemployment affects every 16) country, there are solutions to this problem. 17) The government should 17) help new businesses with financial support, and provide more training for 18) unemployed people and students. 18) I believe that the only way to solve this problem is to spend money. Analyse Use the above to answer the questions below. What is the problem ? ____________________________________________ Why is this a problem (causes and/or effects)? What suggestions does the writer make? What examples/results does the writer give to support the solutions? SUGGESTIONS Examples & RESULTS Linking Words - Which LW are used to explain:
own business, this would provide employment for all the people employed in the business. 7) For example, businessmen could use the money to pay office staff and workers to work for them. 8) As a result, the government would make money from the business in taxes created by employment. 7) 8) * Example *Result *Topic sentence – solution #2 Body Paragraph 2 9) A second solution to the problem of unemployment is that the government should provide work schemes for people. 10) For instance, unemployed people work for a company instead of just getting money from the government. 11) Consequently, they would learn new skills and could apply for new jobs. 9) 10) 11) *Example *Explanation *Topic sentence – solution #3 * Result Body Paragraph 3 12) Finally, the government should make young people do a period of job training after they finish their studies. 13) Sometimes a university degree is not enough to get a job because employers want their employees to have training or work experience too. 14) For instance, law students need some work experience to develop their ability as well as their knowledge. 15) Because of this, graduates with work experience may get jobs more quickly. 12) 13) 14) 15) *Signal word + thesis *Repeat solutions (#1, #2, #3) *Advice Conclusion 16) In conclusion, although the problem of unemployment affects every country, there are solutions to this problem. 17) The government should help new businesses with financial support, and provide more training for unemployed people and students. 18) I believe that the only way to solve this problem is to spend money. 16) 17) 18) Analyse Use the above to answer the questions below. What is the problem ? ____________________________________________ Why is this a problem (causes and/or effects)? What suggestions does the writer make? What examples/results does the writer give to support the solutions? SUGGESTIONS Examples & RESULTS Linking Words - Which LW are used to explain:
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