PS NGA 3.1, 4.1, 4.2, ed Use of the term when referring to other parts What is the proper term? Accept. “clause” 5 (two of this document. Highlighted in red in original Clause/Chapter/Paragraph/Sector/Section? Will use “clause” document. Pick one term for consistency. okay 3, and 8.1.5 PS NGA 6.2.1.4 and er Use of the term when referring to other What is the proper term? Reject. “paragraph” 10.2 (both in parts of this document. Highlighted in red in original Clause/Chapter/Paragraph/Sector/Section? Only one where comment document. is used in “paragraph” Pick one term for consistency. bubbles) original, and that is a general statement about other documents such as regulations. okay PS NGA 5, 6.1 (two ed Use of the term when referring to other What is the proper term? Accept. “section” 6.2, parts of this document. Highlighted in red in original Clause/Chapter/Paragraph/Sector/Section? Will use “clause” 6.2.1.3 (in document. Pick one term for consistency. okay comment bubble) , and 11.8 PS NGA 1.1 Line 9 ed Add Change to read: offered, and Accept. …services instructions… PS NGA 3.1 Line 21 ed On page 8--Add comma Change to read: to, and used by… Accept …supplied PS NGA 3.1 Line 24 ed On page 8--Add comma Change to read: use, or other… Accept …end PS NGA 3.2 Line 8 teed Add acronym for Marine Traffic Management Add: MTM Marine Traffic Management Accept
PS NGA 3.1, 4.1, 4.2, 5 (two and 8.1.5 ed Use of the term “clause” when referring to other parts of this document. Highlighted in red in original document. What is the proper term? Clause/Chapter/Paragraph/Sector/Section? Pick one term for consistency. Accept. Will use “clause” okay PS NGA 6.2.1.4 and 10.2 (both in comment bubbles) er Use of the term “paragraph” when referring to other parts of this document. Highlighted in red in original document. What is the proper term? Clause/Chapter/Paragraph/Sector/Section? Pick one term for consistency. Reject. Only one where “paragraph” is used in original, and that is a general statement about other documents such as regulations. okay PS NGA 5, 6.1 (two 6.2, 6.2.1.3 (in comment bubble) , and 11.8 ed Use of the term “section” when referring to other parts of this document. Highlighted in red in original document. What is the proper term? Clause/Chapter/Paragraph/Sector/Section? Pick one term for consistency. Accept. Will use “clause” okay PS NGA 1.1 Line 9 ed Add Change to read: …services offered, and instructions… Accept. PS NGA 3.1 Line 21 ed On page 8--Add comma Change to read: …supplied to, and used by… Accept PS NGA 3.1 Line 24 ed On page 8--Add comma Change to read: …end use, or other… Accept PS NGA 3.2 Line 8 teed Add acronym for Marine Traffic Management Add: MTM Marine Traffic Management Accept 3,
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