205 A.2.1 Ed Header is useless, since there is no other Delete this header subsection in A.2 NL 28 210-211 A.2.1 ed Sentence does not Remove from line 210 or add ‘run’ smoothly “substance groups” it after non-halogenated substances in line 211 as follows: database contains both halogenated “The substances or substance groups and substances” or database contains both halogenated “The substances or substance groups and substances or substance groups” NL 29 212-214 A.2.1 ed Explanation of Criteria 3 substances is not in which are categorized into Criteria 1 “[…] place to be added here since similar explanations (currently regulated), Criteria 2 (for assessment), for Criteria 1 and Criteria 2 are not provided and Criteria 3 (for information only) where the reporting threshold value is given based on the Besides, the message around threshold is not lowest applicable regulatory limit or stakeholder relevant here requirements in the market of specific applications. Criteria 1 and 2 substances are based on regulatory requirements, and therefore have mandatory declaration, while Criteria 3 substances have non-mandatory declaration as they are based on market specific requirements.” GB 215-217 A.2 te the foundation for inclusion/exclusion of the Delete lines 215 - 217 “give 28 halogen in the low halogen definition” is not correct. Also how can categories provide the motivation of limits? Furthemore, TC111 (and therefore this standard) only cover environmental matters. Hence the text is incorrect as it implies that this “health and” standard goes beyond the scope of TC111. NL 30 217 A.2.1 ed No clear to state on the health and the motivation of the limits, based on the “based “[…]and environmental health and environmental aspects legislation or aspects” market requirements.” NL 31 218 A.3 - Title ed What are the additional halogenated substances? Remove the word from the title: “additional” containing additional halogenated “Materials substances to consider environmental aspects”
205 A.2.1 Ed Header is useless, since there is no other subsection in A.2 Delete this header NL 28 210-211 A.2.1 ed Sentence does not ‘run’ smoothly Remove “substance groups” from line 210 or add it after non-halogenated substances in line 211 as follows: “The database contains both halogenated substances or substance groups and substances” or “The database contains both halogenated substances or substance groups and substances or substance groups” NL 29 212-214 A.2.1 ed Explanation of Criteria 3 substances is not in place to be added here since similar explanations for Criteria 1 and Criteria 2 are not provided Besides, the message around threshold is not relevant here “[…] which are categorized into Criteria 1 (currently regulated), Criteria 2 (for assessment), and Criteria 3 (for information only) where the reporting threshold value is given based on the lowest applicable regulatory limit or stakeholder requirements in the market of specific applications. Criteria 1 and 2 substances are based on regulatory requirements, and therefore have mandatory declaration, while Criteria 3 substances have non-mandatory declaration as they are based on market specific requirements.” GB 28 215-217 A.2 te “give the foundation for inclusion/exclusion of the halogen in the low halogen definition” is not correct. Also how can categories provide the motivation of limits? Furthemore, TC111 (and therefore this standard) only cover environmental matters. Hence the text “health and” is incorrect as it implies that this standard goes beyond the scope of TC111. Delete lines 215 - 217 NL 30 217 A.2.1 ed No clear to state “based on the health and environmental aspects” “[…]and the motivation of the limits, based on the health and environmental aspects legislation or market requirements.” NL 31 218 A.3 - Title ed What are the additional halogenated substances? Remove the word “additional” from the title: “Materials containing additional halogenated substances to consider environmental aspects”
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