more clear pieces of pieces of pieces of evidence. evidence. Or evidence. the evidence does not support the claim. Conclusion The conclusion The conclusion The conclusion The conclusion sums up the sums up part of sums up little or does not sum up supporting the supporting no supporting the evidence. evidence and evidence and evidence. The The claim is not restates the restates the claim is unclear restated. claim. claim. or not restated. Sentence The writer uses The writer uses Sentence Sentences lack Fluency and a variety of some variety in structure is formal structure; Word Choice sentence sentence simple and word choice may structures and structure and unvaried; word often be word choices. word choice. choice is mostly inaccurate. accurate. Conventions The writer The writer The writer Errors in makes few to no makes several makes frequent grammar, errors in errors in errors in spelling, and grammar, grammar, grammar, punctuation spelling, and spelling, and spelling, and prevent the punctuation that punctuation that punctuation that reader from fully do not interfere do not interfere sometimes understanding with with interfere with the essay. understanding. understanding. understanding. Final Score Appendix T: Traffic Safety Facts Article-Modified Occupant Protection Seat belt use in 2012 was 86 percent, up from 84 percent in 2011. This is a huge increase from 79 percent in 2003 and 58 percent in 1994. This result is from the National Occupant Protection Use Survey (NOPUS), which is the only survey that provides nationwide probability-based observed data on seat belt use in the United States (DOT HS 811 691). In 2012, there were 21,667 occupants of passenger vehicles (passenger cars, pickup trucks, vans, and SUVs) who died in motor vehicle traffic crashes. Of the 21,667 total occupants killed, 9,679 were restrained. Restraint use was not known
more clear pieces of evidence. pieces of evidence. pieces of evidence. Or the evidence does not support the claim. Conclusion The conclusion sums up the supporting evidence and restates the claim. The conclusion sums up part of the supporting evidence and restates the claim. The conclusion sums up little or no supporting evidence. The claim is unclear or not restated. The conclusion does not sum up the evidence. The claim is not restated. Sentence Fluency and Word Choice The writer uses a variety of sentence structures and word choices. The writer uses some variety in sentence structure and word choice. Sentence structure is simple and unvaried; word choice is mostly accurate. Sentences lack formal structure; word choice may often be inaccurate. Conventions The writer makes few to no errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation that do not interfere with understanding. The writer makes several errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation that do not interfere with understanding. The writer makes frequent errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation that sometimes interfere with understanding. Errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation prevent the reader from fully understanding the essay. Final Score Appendix T: Traffic Safety Facts Article-Modified Occupant Protection Seat belt use in 2012 was 86 percent, up from 84 percent in 2011. This is a huge increase from 79 percent in 2003 and 58 percent in 1994. This result is from the National Occupant Protection Use Survey (NOPUS), which is the only survey that provides nationwide probability-based observed data on seat belt use in the United States (DOT HS 811 691). In 2012, there were 21,667 occupants of passenger vehicles (passenger cars, pickup trucks, vans, and SUVs) who died in motor vehicle traffic crashes. Of the 21,667 total occupants killed, 9,679 were restrained. Restraint use was not known
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