# Grade Component Page Current Text Proposed Reason for Level Number(s) Corrected Text Edit 1 7 Unit 7 1, 1st and the and then Missing the Lesson 17 paragraph communication communicate “n” 2 8 Unit 9 3 (Correct Incorrect “mediums” Lesson 9 (highlighted plural form) plural form yellow) for “medium” Social Content Citations: The panel identified the following social content violations: # SC Grade Component Page Current Text Proposed Reason for Code Level Number(s) Corrected Text Citation 1 A.2. 8 Unit 6 5 21 males and Replace some More equity Forces and 2 females of the males between Motion scientists and with females in males and engineers are those careers. female available for Or add females scientists students to do in those engineers research careers. California Department of Education, August 2018
# Grade Level Component Page Number(s) Current Text Proposed Corrected Text Reason for Edit 1 7 Unit 7 Lesson 17 1, 1st paragraph and the communication and then communicate Missing the “n” 2 8 Unit 9 Lesson 9 3 “mediums” (highlighted yellow) (Correct plural form) Incorrect plural form for “medium” Social Content Citations: The panel identified the following social content violations: # SC Code Grade Level Component Page Number(s) Current Text Proposed Corrected Text Reason for Citation 1 A.2. 8 Unit 6 Forces and Motion 5 21 males and 2 females scientists and engineers are available for students to do research Replace some of the males with females in those careers. Or add females in those careers. More equity between males and female scientists engineers California Department of Education, August 2018
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