Does the paragraph end with a hook? ____ yes ____ no Suggestions: Additional Comments: I think you should… I liked the part when… What revisions should be made Rearranging: (Use the yellow highlighter) Editing Guide: to rearrange the structure of paragraphs or sentences to make them more effective? Make to the author’s Deleting: Are there repetitions that could be (Use the green highlighter) paper so they eliminated? Is there information that does not directly support the topic of can see where heroism? they need to make changes. Explain why you highlighted Editing: Are there mistakes in conventions that certain (Use the blue highlighter) should be corrected before the draft can be considered polished? (grammar, sentences in the spelling, incomplete sentences, etc.) right hand column. your partner’s paper based on your edits:
Does the paragraph end with a hook? ____ yes ____ no Suggestions: I think you should… Additional Comments: I liked the part when… Editing Guide: Make to the author’s paper so they can see where they need to make changes. Explain why you highlighted certain sentences in the right hand column. (Use the yellow highlighter) Rearranging: What revisions should be made to rearrange the structure of paragraphs or sentences to make them more effective? (Use the green highlighter) Deleting: Are there repetitions that could be eliminated? Is there information that does not directly support the topic of heroism? (Use the blue highlighter) Editing: Are there mistakes in conventions that should be corrected before the draft can be considered polished? (grammar, spelling, incomplete sentences, etc.) your partner’s paper based on your edits:
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