Dear Professor Murciano, RE: Mont Royal Capitals Startup Project Partnership with Shuo We have been evaluating the possibilities of forming a partnership through reciprocal exploration of We found that Shuo was having each other’s business plans. some difficulty in finding a solid value proposition for his startup fund, whereas I needed a partner to brainstorm an implementation plan for my proposal. Fortunately, we complemented objective. He agreed to proceed with my business ideas, each other’s whereas I gained some inspirations through the research he had put down for his initial project. During the process of collaboration, we realized that our strengths and weaknesses, as well as the vastly different skill sets and experiences we were able to contribute to the mutual project. While Shuo was a great listener discussi my opinions and ideas, he did not shy away offer me critical feedback. He brought in original ideas and approach for tackling existing obstacles. He also greatly his networking resources and human capital to our project. In hindsight, we feel that the final project has been a remarkable opportunity to foster communication skills and adapt to the latest environment of remote learning. Grand Proposal Initially, Shuo crafted an grand proposal for his own project. We decided to build upon his existing work by using it as a template to finalize our proposition for Mont Royal Capitals. We agreed to write out respective sections of the proposal to our own, and then proofread writing. Overall, that technique has been very helpful as each other’s it enabled me to scrutinize our writings in the eyes of a potential investor. Personally, I find writing the grand proposal challenging because it was my first attempt to convince readers in words with the purpose of selling a hypothetical company. Basic analytical writing skills including, word choice, grammar, tone, structure of the – document certainly played a vital role in constructing a cogent argument to support the – sales pitch. The writing process was not only inherently demanding in its business context but also refreshing as a necessary revisit to English writing basics. Three Pieces My three pieces supporting documents were: 1) a memo about the current Chinese economy, 2) a pro forma detailing the projected financial costs and returns of the proposal, and 3) a 1-page letter to UC Berkeley faculty in search of intellectual support.
Dear Professor Murciano, RE: Mont Royal Capitals Startup Project Partnership with Shuo We have been evaluating the possibilities of forming a partnership through reciprocal exploration of each other’s business plans. We found that Shuo was having some difficulty in finding a solid value proposition for his startup fund, whereas I needed a partner to brainstorm an implementation plan for my proposal. Fortunately, we complemented each other’s objective. He agreed to proceed with my business ideas, whereas I gained some inspirations through the research he had put down for his initial project. During the process of collaboration, we realized that our strengths and weaknesses, as well as the vastly different skill sets and experiences we were able to contribute to the mutual project. While Shuo was a great listener discussi my opinions and ideas, he did not shy away offer me critical feedback. He brought in original ideas and approach for tackling existing obstacles. He also greatly his networking resources and human capital to our project. In hindsight, we feel that the final project has been a remarkable opportunity to foster communication skills and adapt to the latest environment of remote learning. Grand Proposal Initially, Shuo crafted an grand proposal for his own project. We decided to build upon his existing work by using it as a template to finalize our proposition for Mont Royal Capitals. We agreed to write out respective sections of the proposal to our own, and then proofread each other’s writing. Overall, that technique has been very helpful as it enabled me to scrutinize our writings in the eyes of a potential investor. Personally, I find writing the grand proposal challenging because it was my first attempt to convince readers in words with the purpose of selling a hypothetical company. Basic analytical writing skills – including, word choice, grammar, tone, structure of the document – certainly played a vital role in constructing a cogent argument to support the sales pitch. The writing process was not only inherently demanding in its business context but also refreshing as a necessary revisit to English writing basics. Three Pieces My three pieces supporting documents were: 1) a memo about the current Chinese economy, 2) a pro forma detailing the projected financial costs and returns of the proposal, and 3) a 1-page letter to UC Berkeley faculty in search of intellectual support.
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