Paragraph Member Clause/ Type of COMMENTS Proposed change Comments from Figure/ Table Body/ clause comment the IECEx Country General/ Secretariat and J technical/ Munro editorial US Overall The contents of this CD are not Member body comments received The document as mature enough to progress to DV should be addressed as part of a presented included yet. subsequent CD for subsequent all the relevant Member Body comment. requirements of the draft CD. It has now been updated to reflect the issued CD and so is as mature and complete as it can be at this stage. US 1 G This document is clearly stated to Provide a more definitive reference This document as only apply as a supplement to to ISO/IEC 80079-34, Edition 1 stated only ISO/IEC 80079-34, Ed 1.0 as it throughout the document. supplements relates to non-electrical ISO/IEC 80079-34 equipment, yet this document Where a direct reference to Edition 1 for Annex does not utilize the text and ISO/IEC 80079-34, Edition 1 is not A. Hence there is wording from ISO/IEC 80079-34, sufficient, then include only that not need to include and thus, does not provide the information which actually any additional text guidance as it says it does. supplements the document. or reference to that document. In some cases, it is likely better to directly copy the wording from ISO/IEC 80079-34, Edition 1 (as shown in some comments below)
Member Body/ Country Clause/ Paragraph Figure/ Table Type of comment General/ technical/ editorial COMMENTS Proposed change Comments from the IECEx Secretariat and J Munro US Overall The contents of this CD are not mature enough to progress to DV yet. Member body comments received should be addressed as part of a subsequent CD for subsequent Member Body comment. The document as presented included all the relevant requirements of the draft CD. It has now been updated to reflect the issued CD and so is as mature and complete as it can be at this stage. US 1 G This document is clearly stated to only apply as a supplement to ISO/IEC 80079-34, Ed 1.0 as it relates to non-electrical equipment, yet this document does not utilize the text and wording from ISO/IEC 80079-34, and thus, does not provide the guidance as it says it does. Provide a more definitive reference to ISO/IEC 80079-34, Edition 1 throughout the document. Where a direct reference to ISO/IEC 80079-34, Edition 1 is not sufficient, then include only that information which actually supplements the document. In some cases, it is likely better to directly copy the wording from ISO/IEC 80079-34, Edition 1 (as shown in some comments below) This document as stated only supplements ISO/IEC 80079-34 Edition 1 for Annex A. Hence there is not need to include any additional text or reference to that document. clause
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