IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs LB 200 Comment Resolution for Clause 4.13 Date: 2014-17-03 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email 2075 Allston Way, Suite 200, Chittabrata Ghosh Nokia +1-650-200-7566 Berkeley, CA 94704 Yongho Seok LGE yongho.seok@lge.com CID Clause Page Comment Proposed Change Resolution 1012 4.13 4 35 The term "group" is alredy Replace "Group" and Revised overloaded: GCR group "Grouping" and related terms membership and .11ac in .11ah with a specific term. - TGah editor to make group membership. changes shown in Adding another unqualified under the use of "group" is going to heading for CIDs cause confusion. 1012, 1015, 1667, 1819, 2323, 2324, 2358, 2359, 2835. 1013 4.13 4 46 "The AID assignment criteria Review all uses of "can" in the Revised can depend on STA location" document (117 instances) and replace any with "might" that Comments: Reviewed Review the WG11 Style do not meet the WG11 occurrences of “can” document. WG11 style is to meaning of the verb. and revised to use "can" in the sense of "is in this “might” able to, given the rules defined section. TGah Editor in this document". If you will review all the have not described how this other occurrences of can can be performed, it in other “can” should be an express of sections possibility using "might". FYI on REVmb during one ballot we had 660 separate comments on the use of "can", which gave rise to the WG11 interpretation. 1014 4.13 4 53 "Grouping of non-AP STAs Review all use of "may". Revised may be used to reduce network Replace that do not mean energy consumption" "is hearby permitted to" with Comments: Reviewed "May" is used with a particular an alternate permitted verb occurrences of “can” meaning in IEEE-SA (might/can/should/shall). and revised to in this section. TGah
IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs LB 200 Comment Resolution for Clause 4.13 Date: 2014-17-03 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Chittabrata Ghosh Nokia 2075 Allston Way, Suite 200, Berkeley, CA 94704 +1-650-200-7566 Yongho Seok LGE yongho.seok@lge.com CID Clause Page Comment Proposed Change Resolution 1012 4.13 4 35 The term "group" is alredy overloaded: GCR group membership and .11ac group membership. Adding another unqualified use of "group" is going to cause confusion. Replace "Group" and "Grouping" and related terms in .11ah with a specific term. Revised - TGah editor to make changes shown in under the heading for CIDs 1012, 1015, 1667, 1819, 2323, 2324, 2358, 2359, 2835. 1013 4.13 4 46 "The AID assignment criteria can depend on STA location" Review the WG11 Style document. WG11 style is to use "can" in the sense of "is able to, given the rules defined in this document". If you have not described how this can can be performed, it should be an express of possibility using "might". FYI on REVmb during one ballot we had 660 separate comments on the use of "can", which gave rise to the WG11 interpretation. Review all uses of "can" in the document (117 instances) and replace any with "might" that do not meet the WG11 meaning of the verb. Revised Comments: Reviewed occurrences of “can” and revised to “might” in this section. TGah Editor will review all the other occurrences of “can” in other sections 1014 4.13 4 53 "Grouping of non-AP STAs may be used to reduce network energy consumption" "May" is used with a particular meaning in IEEE-SA Review all use of "may". Replace that do not mean "is hearby permitted to" with an alternate permitted verb (might/can/should/shall). Revised Comments: Reviewed occurrences of “can” and revised to in this section. TGah