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5073 MARC 160.01 8.4.2.170l "The Sounding Option subfield is set to 0 to indicate" -- value of field is important not the act of changing it to 0. Similar issue at 160.18 and 160.24 and 161.15 Change to "A Sounding Option subfield equal to 0 indicates" Reject – there are at least 120 instances of the cited phrasing in the baseline standard, so the group prefers that a centralized style authority makes a decision on the question to apply to all amendments before accepting the proposed change while also noting that in many instances in both the baseline and the draft amendment, the converse of a condition indicated by a particular value is easily contraindicated by the phrase “otherwise, the bit is set to x”, but there is no convenient, concise, equivalent phrase that can be used to express the converse condition if the suggested alternative phrasing is used. 5104 147.46 8.4.2.170j "Each bit in the bitmap corresponds to one minimum channel (see 8.4.3.170y (SST Operation element)) for the band in which the TWT responding STA's associated BSS is currently operating, with the least significant bit corresponding to the lowest numbered channel of the operating channels of the BSS." is not clear enough unless the minimum channel width means 1MHz or 2MHz, i.e. SST Channel Unit information in SST Operating Eleent is required. Change to "Each bit in the bitmap corresponds (see 8.4.3.170y (SST Operation element)) to one minimum width channel (that is 1MHz or 2MHz as indicated in Primary Channel Number subfield of S1G Operating Element) for the band in which the TWT responding STA's associated BSS is currently operating, with the least significant bit corresponding to the lowest numbered channel of the operating channels of the BSS." Revise – generally agree with commenter, TGah editor to execute proposed changes found in document under all headings that include CID 5104. 5185 Liwen Chu 144.32 8.4.2.170j is no TWT field in the element. Full name of the field should be used. As in comment Revise – generally agree with commenter, TGah editor to execute proposed changes found in document under all