IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Clause 8.4.4.21 Comment Resolutions Date: 2015-05-12 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone SK Yong Apple Inc CID Commenter Clause Page Line Type of Assignee Comment Proposed Change Number (C) Comment (C) 1518 Richard Roy 8.4.4.21 14 2 G Stephen Change: "The Service Information to: "The User Service McCann, Response ANQP-element is used to Information Response SK Yong provide detailed service information element is sent by an AP in a between STAs, using the GAS GAS Query Response to a protocol, in response to a Service STA in response to a User Information Request ANQP-element. Service Information Request The Service Information Response ANQP-element received from ANQP-element is included in a GAS the non-AP STA." Query Response, sent by the AP to the non-AP STA." 1589 Joseph Levy 8.4.4.21 14 2 T Stephen The way the Service Information Replace the following two McCann, Response ANQP-element is used sentences: "The Service SK Yong does not need to be described in Information Response clause 8. Therefore the description element is used to provide should be removed. detailed service information between STAs, using the GAS protocol, in response to a Service Information Request ANQP-element. The Service Information Response element is included in a GAS Query Response, sent by the AP to the non-AP STA." With: "A GAS Query Response may contain a Service Information Response element to provide requested service information." Proposed resolution: Revised Change the following setentece in 8.4.4.21 from Service Information Response ANQP-element is used to provide detailed service information between STAs, using the GAS protocol, in “The response to a Service Information Request ANQP-element. The Service Information Response ANQP-element is included in a GAS Query Response, sent by the AP to the non-AP STA." To Service Information Response ANQP-element contains the detailed service information in response to a Service Information Request “The ANQP-element."
IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Clause 8.4.4.21 Comment Resolutions Date: 2015-05-12 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone SK Yong Apple Inc CID Commenter Clause Number (C) Line (C) Type of Comment Assignee Comment Proposed Change 1518 Richard Roy 8.4.4.21 14 2 G Stephen McCann, SK Yong Change: "The Service Information Response ANQP-element is used to provide detailed service information between STAs, using the GAS protocol, in response to a Service Information Request ANQP-element. The Service Information Response ANQP-element is included in a GAS Query Response, sent by the AP to the non-AP STA." to: "The User Service Information Response is sent by an AP in a GAS Query Response to a STA in response to a User Service Information Request ANQP-element received from the non-AP STA." 1589 Joseph Levy 8.4.4.21 14 2 T Stephen McCann, SK Yong The way the Service Information Response ANQP-element is used does not need to be described in clause 8. Therefore the description should be removed. Replace the following two sentences: "The Service Information Response is used to provide detailed service information between STAs, using the GAS protocol, in response to a Service Information Request ANQP-element. The Service Information Response is included in a GAS Query Response, sent by the AP to the non-AP STA." With: "A GAS Query Response may contain a Service Information Response to provide requested service information." Proposed resolution: Revised Change the following setentece in 8.4.4.21 from “The Service Information Response ANQP-element is used to provide detailed service information between STAs, using the GAS protocol, in response to a Service Information Request ANQP-element. The Service Information Response ANQP-element is included in a GAS Query Response, sent by the AP to the non-AP STA." To “The Service Information Response ANQP-element contains the detailed service information in response to a Service Information Request ANQP-element." Page element element element element