3123 Adrian 69.28 802.11ah defines the Change the Revise TGax – 0 TWT element as element ID editor to make extensible. definition to changes as shown .11ax indicates that indicate it is not in 11-17/0777r1 the body of the extensible, or add that are marked element can be a count subfield in with CID 3123 repeated for the Control field. Broadcast, and presumably relies on the Length field to determine the number of such repeats. These are incompatible. 4463 69.32 Figure Align figure to fit on Accept Albert Petrick 0 misaligned page 4701 Albert 69.32 Figure 9-589av figure to fit on Duplicate of Petrick 0 misaligned page comment identified in Duplicate of CID column 4765 Alfred 69.32 There are some issues As in comment. Revise TGax – 0 in this Figure. First editor to make some parts are changes as shown missing (TWR field is in 11-17/0777r1 8, 2, or 0 in length, that are marked Broadcast TWT ID with CID 4765 needs to be underlined). Also in order to avoid confusion between a normal TWT element and a broadcast TWT element I suggest having two Figures, one for TWT element (with one TWT parameter set, as in baseline), and another one for broadcast TWT element (with one or more TWT parameter sets, this to be tied to the value broadcast = 1 and wake TBTT interval value 0).
3123 Adrian 69.28 802.11ah defines the TWT element as extensible. .11ax indicates that the body of the element can be repeated for Broadcast, and presumably relies on the Length field to determine the number of such repeats. These are incompatible. Change the element ID definition to indicate it is not extensible, or add a count subfield in the Control field. Revise – TGax editor to make changes as shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 3123 4463 Albert Petrick 69.32 Figure misaligned Align figure to fit on page Accept 4701 Albert Petrick 69.32 Figure 9-589av misaligned figure to fit on page Duplicate of comment identified in Duplicate of CID column 4765 Alfred 69.32 There are some issues in this Figure. First some parts are missing (TWR field is 8, 2, or 0 in length, Broadcast TWT ID needs to be underlined). Also in order to avoid confusion between a normal TWT element and a broadcast TWT element I suggest having two Figures, one for TWT element (with one TWT parameter set, as in baseline), and another one for broadcast TWT element (with one or more TWT parameter sets, this to be tied to the value broadcast = 1 and wake TBTT interval value 0). As in comment. Revise – TGax editor to make changes as shown in 11-17/0777r1 that are marked with CID 4765 0 0 0 0