Inadequate Sample Dialectical Journal Entries (Quotations and Notes) Student Name:________________ Book Title/Author: by Gary Paulsen Hatchet Date: Quotations from Text with Page Number Notes from Me kept coming back to that. I know how that feels. I have nothing too. “It He had nothing.” (This connection is rather shallow. It needs (No page number indicated) more elaboration.) I feel that way too. wer bad, he thout, but maybe not that “Things (Again, this connection does not appear to have bad.” any thought behind it.) (This text excerpt has 2 misspellings and does not include a page number.) An Inadequate Double-Entry Journal Contains the Following: Fewer than 10 entries from the book.  Quotations from the text are incomplete or contain misspelled words.  text” entries do not indicate that entire book was read.  “from me” entries demonstrate incomplete thoughts or connections and seem hastily written. Entries lack elaboration.  “from Plot Diagram Assignment Reminder: English 10 Regular Students: Fill in one of the following plot diagram for your novel. “choice” English 10 Honors Students: Fill in one plot diagram for East of Eden and one plot diagram for your novel. “choice”
Inadequate Sample Dialectical Journal Entries (Quotations and Notes) Student Name:________________ Book Title/Author: Hatchet by Gary Paulsen Date: Quotations from Text with Page Number Notes from Me “It kept coming back to that. He had nothing.” (No page number indicated) “Things wer bad, he thout, but maybe not that bad.” (This text excerpt has 2 misspellings and does not include a page number.) I know how that feels. I have nothing too. (This connection is rather shallow. It needs more elaboration.) I feel that way too. (Again, this connection does not appear to have any thought behind it.) An Inadequate Double-Entry Journal Contains the Following:  Fewer than 10 entries from the book.  Quotations from the text are incomplete or contain misspelled words.  “from text” entries do not indicate that entire book was read.  “from me” entries demonstrate incomplete thoughts or connections and seem hastily written. Entries lack elaboration. Plot Diagram Assignment Reminder: English 10 Regular Students: Fill in one of the following plot diagram for your “choice” novel. English 10 Honors Students: Fill in one plot diagram for East of Eden and one plot diagram for your “choice” novel.