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3499 1211.28 8.6.22.2 "Multiple elements can appear in this frame." Like what? Anything? This is underconstrained. List what can, and makes sense, to put here; or something Clarify what elements are sensible or expected in this frame. Proposed resolution: Reject Discussion: a more comprehensive contribution is needed to resolve this comment. A more in-depth analysis of the spec would be needed to collect a list of all elements. 3692 1525.13 10.1.4.3.3 "perform the basic access procedure defined ... prior to the transmission": as if we didn't know the definition was prior to the transmission. It also is unclear whether this procedure is to be followed just once or each time a Probe Request frame is to be transmitted, and exactly why there may be more than one transmission of a Probe Request frame. Since "prior to the transmission" is not part of the procedure defined in 9.3.4.2, this really is a sentence. Replace "9.3.4.2 (Basic access) prior to the transmission of each of one or more Probe Request frames, each with an SSID indicated in the SSID List and the BSSID from the primitive." with "9.3.4.2 (Basic access). Perform this procedure prior to each transmission of a Probe Request frame. Each of these transmitted