Clause 32.2.8.3.4 Comments CID Clause Page/Line Comment Proposed Change Resolution 198 32.2.8.3.4 83.33 It is not clear how the as in the comment Revised OOK symbol modulated TGba Editor makes the OFDM symbol. Either changes as shown in add equation or refer to 802.11-18/1898r2 the LDR/HDR data symbol waveform generation CID Clause Page/Line Comment Proposed Change Resolution 673 32.2.8.3.4 83.21 The text reads "For HDR, Change "OOK" Revised the WUR-Sync field is in the text The sentence was changed constructed as a to refer to the Sync-bit multicarrier on-off sequence and so is “OOK” keying (MC-OOK) signal. no longer applicable. The OOK signal is constructed as TGba Editor makes the bit-wise complement changes as shown in of the 32-bit sequence 802.11-18/1898r2 W, where each bit in the sequence has duration 2 and ╬╝s, W is defined in Equation (32-4)." The term is used in the first sentence and OOK is used in the second. This is inconsistent. CID Clause Page/Line Comment Proposed Change Resolution 674 32.2.8.3.4 83.22 The text reads "For HDR, Change "is" to "shall Revised the WUR-Sync field is be" in the text: "For TGba Editor makes constructed as a HDR, the WUR-Sync changes as shown in multicarrier on-off field is constructed as 802.11-18/1898r2 keying (MC-OOK) signal. a multicarrier on-off The OOK keying (MC-OOK) signal is constructed as signal. The MC-OOK the bit-wise complement signal shall be of the 32-bit sequence constructed as the W, where each bit in the complement of
Clause 32.2.8.3.4 Comments CID Clause Page/Line Comment Proposed Change Resolution 198 32.2.8.3.4 83.33 It is not clear how the OOK symbol modulated the OFDM symbol. Either add equation or refer to the LDR/HDR data symbol waveform generation as in the comment Revised TGba Editor makes changes as shown in 802.11-18/1898r2 CID Clause Page/Line Comment Proposed Change Resolution 673 32.2.8.3.4 83.21 The text reads "For HDR, the WUR-Sync field is constructed as a multicarrier on-off keying (MC-OOK) signal. The OOK signal is constructed as the bit-wise complement of the 32-bit sequence W, where each bit in the sequence has duration 2 ╬╝s, and W is defined in Equation (32-4)." The term is used in the first sentence and OOK is used in the second. This is inconsistent. Change "OOK" in the text Revised The sentence was changed to refer to the Sync-bit sequence and so “OOK” is no longer applicable. TGba Editor makes changes as shown in 802.11-18/1898r2 CID Clause Page/Line Comment Proposed Change Resolution 674 32.2.8.3.4 83.22 The text reads "For HDR, the WUR-Sync field is constructed as a multicarrier on-off keying (MC-OOK) signal. The OOK signal is constructed as the bit-wise complement of the 32-bit sequence W, where each bit in the Change "is" to "shall be" in the text: "For HDR, the WUR-Sync field is constructed as a multicarrier on-off keying (MC-OOK) signal. The MC-OOK signal shall be constructed as the complement of Revised TGba Editor makes changes as shown in 802.11-18/1898r2