IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Additional MAC comment resolutions - III Date: 2013-04-26 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Dorothy 1322 Crossman ave, Sunnyvale, Aruba Networks +1 408 227 4500 Stanley CA CID 1172 1172 1295.24 10.26.2.1 Clause 10.26.2 states Change the following text "QMF policy "QMF policy is advertisement...", the communicated overview (10.26.2.1) doesn't mention anything through the QMF Policy about advertising the QMF element as described in Policy. 8.4.2.119." to "QMF policy is advertised and exchanged using the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119." Discussion: The comment is on the QMF policy advertisement and configuration procedures section, – “Overview” see the text below. The commenter notes that although the title of the section includes “advertisement”, the current text in the first paragraph does not include mention of and asks that the “advertisement”, introductory text be modified. The commenter asks for the following change: From policy is communicated through the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119 “QMF Service Management Frame Policy element). To policy is advertised and exchanged the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119." “QMF The commenter’s change seems reasonable, and exchanged” is a more detailed description “advertised than Suggest also including mention of the STA in the second sentence. “communicated. Proposed resolution: Revised Change from policies are exchanged and implemented between two QMF STAs. QMF policy is communicated “QMF through the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119 (Quality-of-Service Management Frame Policy
IEEE P802.11 Wireless LANs Additional MAC comment resolutions - III Date: 2013-04-26 Author(s): Name Affiliation Address Phone email Dorothy Stanley Aruba Networks 1322 Crossman ave, Sunnyvale, CA +1 408 227 4500 CID 1172 1172 1295.24 10.26.2.1 Clause 10.26.2 states "QMF policy advertisement...", the overview (10.26.2.1) doesn't mention anything about advertising the QMF Policy. Change the following text "QMF policy is communicated through the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119." to "QMF policy is advertised and exchanged using the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119." Discussion: The comment is on the QMF policy advertisement and configuration procedures – “Overview” section, see the text below. The commenter notes that although the title of the section includes “advertisement”, the current text in the first paragraph does not include mention of “advertisement”, and asks that the introductory text be modified. The commenter asks for the following change: From “QMF policy is communicated through the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119 Management Frame Policy element). To “QMF policy is advertised and exchanged the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119." The commenter’s change seems reasonable, “advertised and exchanged” is a more detailed description than “communicated. Suggest also including mention of the STA in the second sentence. Proposed resolution: Revised Change from “QMF policies are exchanged and implemented between two QMF STAs. QMF policy is communicated through the QMF Policy element as described in 8.4.2.119 (Quality-of-Service Management Frame Policy Service