5447 David 160.05 8.4.2.170l The fragment "bitmap Replace "or Accept TGah editor – Hunter indicating on which permitted" with to execute proposed channels there is "or permitted by changes provided by expected or permitted to the AP". Also, the commenter. be transmission activity for clarity, at a given time", which is replace in the definitions clause "indiicating on 8, is confusing but also which channels contains a veiled there is expected requirement. "Permit" is or permitted to allowed in a definition be transmission when the definition is for activity at a given a term that means some time" with other entity is permitting, "indicating on or not, a certain action. whiich channels However, in this case the transmission is defined term might either expected directly control allowed or permitted by activity. Also: the the AP during a "expected or permitted" given time makes the definition period". vague at best -- which is it? Do the bits indicate expecctations or specify permissions? 5448 David 160.18 8.4.2.170l The fragment "to indicate Replace "to Accept TGah editor – Hunter that STAs associated indicate that to execute proposed with the SST AP that STAs associated changes provided by transmits the SST with the SST AP the commenter. element are permitted to that transmits the transmit frames" is SST element are ambiguous about what is permitted to doing the indicated transmit frames" permitting. with "to indicate that the SST AP (that transmits the SST element) permits the STAs associated with it to transmit frames". 5449 David 160.30 8.4.2.170l The fragment "indicates Replace Accept TGah editor – Hunter the maximum permitted "indicates the to execute proposed PPDU bandwidth for a maximum changes provided by transmission on the permitted PPDU the commenter. indicated channel" is bandwidth for a ambiguous as to whether transmission on the indicated permission the indicated is a matter of regulation, channel" with definition of MCS, limit of "indicates the each STA, or what. maximum PPDU bandwidth permitted by the AP for a transmission on the indicated channel".
5447 David Hunter 160.05 8.4.2.170l The fragment "bitmap indicating on which channels there is expected or permitted to be transmission activity at a given time", which is in the definitions clause 8, is confusing but also contains a veiled requirement. "Permit" is allowed in a definition when the definition is for a term that means some other entity is permitting, or not, a certain action. However, in this case the defined term might directly control allowed activity. Also: the "expected or permitted" makes the definition vague at best -- which is it? Do the bits indicate expecctations or specify permissions? Replace "or permitted" with "or permitted by the AP". Also, for clarity, replace "indiicating on which channels there is expected or permitted to be transmission activity at a given time" with "indicating on whiich channels transmission is either expected or permitted by the AP during a given time period". Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes provided by the commenter. 5448 David Hunter 160.18 8.4.2.170l The fragment "to indicate that STAs associated with the SST AP that transmits the SST element are permitted to transmit frames" is ambiguous about what is doing the indicated permitting. Replace "to indicate that STAs associated with the SST AP that transmits the SST element are permitted to transmit frames" with "to indicate that the SST AP (that transmits the SST element) permits the STAs associated with it to transmit frames". Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes provided by the commenter. 5449 David Hunter 160.30 8.4.2.170l The fragment "indicates the maximum permitted PPDU bandwidth for a transmission on the indicated channel" is ambiguous as to whether the indicated permission is a matter of regulation, definition of MCS, limit of each STA, or what. Replace "indicates the maximum permitted PPDU bandwidth for a transmission on the indicated channel" with "indicates the maximum PPDU bandwidth permitted by the AP for a transmission on the indicated channel". Accept – TGah editor to execute proposed changes provided by the commenter.