how are particular stakeholders being addressed? (audience tracked throughout) structure of the analysis clear intro, conclusion and main avoid neutral verbs eg. STRUCTURAL Skilful control of the features of informs, expresses, states – CONTROL AND comparative analysis, including the body paragraphs USE OF highly proficient use of structure, METALANGUAGE conventions and language, including thoughtful and deliberate paragraphing the use of relevant metalanguage. use of to discuss what the writer is attempting specific verbs to do/effect on the reader (PLUMBER) where appropriate, identification of techniques, devices and structures the writer is using eg. appeals, exclusive language, metaphor, irony, cause and effect, deductive reasoning etc. MECHANICS OF Highly expressive, fluent and accurate choice of vocabulary - sharp, precise economy of EXPRESSION coherent written language that analytical (vs summative/descriptive) sentencing leading to Longer is not necessarily better need to be concise – – employs the skilful and accurate use of spelling, punctuation and syntax. economical and concise expression Avoid repetition lack of repetition (in expression, quotes, ideas, start of Do not have any stand-along summary sentences sentences/paragraphs etc.) Best test: have you incorporated analysis into flow of sentences if you are finding long sentences difficult sentence? – to control, shorten them accurate spelling use of appropriate punctuation esp. apostrophes, quotation – marks etc.
how are particular stakeholders being addressed? (audience tracked throughout) STRUCTURAL CONTROL AND USE OF METALANGUAGE Skilful control of the features of comparative analysis, including the highly proficient use of structure, conventions and language, including the use of relevant metalanguage. structure of the analysis – clear intro, conclusion and main body paragraphs thoughtful and deliberate paragraphing use of specific verbs to discuss what the writer is attempting to do/effect on the reader (PLUMBER) where appropriate, identification of techniques, devices and structures the writer is using eg. appeals, exclusive language, metaphor, irony, cause and effect, deductive reasoning etc. avoid neutral verbs eg. informs, expresses, states MECHANICS OF EXPRESSION Highly expressive, fluent and coherent written language that employs the skilful and accurate use of spelling, punctuation and syntax. accurate choice of vocabulary - sharp, precise analytical (vs summative/descriptive) sentencing – leading to economical and concise expression lack of repetition (in expression, quotes, ideas, start of sentences/paragraphs etc.) flow of sentences – if you are finding long sentences difficult to control, shorten them accurate spelling use of appropriate punctuation – esp. apostrophes, quotation marks etc. economy of Longer is not necessarily better – need to be concise Avoid repetition Do not have any stand-along summary sentences Best test: have you incorporated analysis into sentence?