SCREENPLAY READERS SCRIPT ANALYSIS GRID STORY SCORE 77 Concept is fresh and/or original 78 Concept is/contains a strong and/or buzzworthy hook 79 is well executed/interweaved well 82 First 10 pages set up the story well 80 First 10 pages are compelling 76 Script is well structured 72 Every scene in the script feels essential 71 Scenes are the appropriate length 75 Stakes are clear/conflict is strong and/or compelling 80 Characters' choices the story forward 84 Pacing is strong and the story keeps moving 69 Story is not overly complicated or hard to follow 71 Story is not bogged down by exposition 72 Tension builds/escalates throughout 75 The climax/resolution is satisfying CHARACTER / DIALOGUE 78 Protagonist(s) is (are) likable and/or compelling 72 Supporting characters are likable and/or compelling 78 No characters were extraneous 79 Dialogue reads naturally/believable within this story 74 Dialogue reveals character READABILITY 96 Format/presentation adheres to industry standards 80 Spelling, punctuation, grammar, and usage 77 Action text is concise, not overly descriptive/prose 76 Action text "shows" instead of "tells" 76 Overall readability AVERAGE SCORE 77.08 RECOMMENDATION PASS
SCREENPLAY READERS SCRIPT ANALYSIS GRID STORY SCORE Concept is fresh and/or original 77 Concept is/contains a strong and/or buzzworthy hook 78 is well executed/interweaved well 79 First 10 pages set up the story well 82 First 10 pages are compelling 80 Script is well structured 76 Every scene in the script feels essential 72 Scenes are the appropriate length 71 Stakes are clear/conflict is strong and/or compelling 75 Characters' choices the story forward 80 Pacing is strong and the story keeps moving 84 Story is not overly complicated or hard to follow 69 Story is not bogged down by exposition 71 Tension builds/escalates throughout 72 The climax/resolution is satisfying 75 CHARACTER / DIALOGUE Protagonist(s) is (are) likable and/or compelling 78 Supporting characters are likable and/or compelling 72 No characters were extraneous 78 Dialogue reads naturally/believable within this story 79 Dialogue reveals character 74 READABILITY Format/presentation adheres to industry standards 96 Spelling, punctuation, grammar, and usage 80 Action text is concise, not overly descriptive/prose 77 Action text "shows" instead of "tells" 76 Overall readability 76 AVERAGE SCORE 77.08 RECOMMENDATION PASS