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Quotes: Emotions/Viewpoint/Feelings in search of bread and adventure imagining I was one of the Tour de France greats limitations of a bike, rather than its freedoms he becomes uninspired and it impedes his image “However,…gear…an inflated sense of sporting prowess…” “tackling the gentle contours” a renewed sense of energy and enthusiasm, a feeling of passion begins to flow “and suddenly…silence.” The ellipsis and sudden full-stop him seem like he’s having a spiritual awakening. “British Lycra Brotherhood” He feels… Viewpoint and Attitude Exemplar: Charles Starmer-Smith develops a progression of attitude towards biking throughout his life. First, as a boy, he begins with “in search of bread and adventure” which shows he feels a sense of searching, as if the bike will propel him to find new adventures so he feels an excitement and anticipation for more “adventure”. The bike seems to make him use his imagination as if he feels like it makes him more than his simple self. “freedom of pedal power as I sped past vineyards, forests and fields, imagining…” he uses alliterative “p” as if he is thinking that he is more powerful, a kind of superhero. The commas make it seem like he feels like there is no end to how fast he can accelerate. He feels unstoppable and confident. Furthermore, during his adolescence, he feels… Presently, he feels a change back to imaginative power with freedom as he “tackles the gentle contours” as even though he is out of shape, he feels like he belongs to a bike and the verb “tackles” shows his enthusiastic aggressiveness, that he feels more of a testosterone, adrenaline rush. “tackles and gentle” are opposites which shows he thinks of the hills and valleys as a weak obstacle to his power. He further feels a spiritual challenge, “and suddenly…silence.” An ellipsis is used to show him having a sudden realisation that the bike will change his life, a spiritual reverence of silence, with a full-stop, shows that he feels empowered but in a more serious, devoted way, like he feels like an acolyte to a new religion.