8123 Matthew 70.03 The following text was Delete the line Revise generally – Fischer not updated when the and change "The agree with table of TWT Wake TBTT comment - TGax commands and Negotiation subfield editor shall make responses was indicates that the the changes shown updated for broadcast scheduled STA in 11-17/0777r0 TWT negotiation: "The transmitting the that are marked Wake TBTT TWT element is with CID 8123. Negotiation subfield is indicating a value set to in TWT for the next wake elements transmitted TBTT for a by a responding STA broadcast TWT" to and by a scheduling "The Wake TBTT STA." Missing Negotiation subfield definition for indicates that a requesting and scheduled STA responding STA transmitting the cases. TWT element is indicating a requested value for the next wake TBTT for a broadcast TWT and a scheduling STA transmitting the element is indicating the next wake TBTT for the broadcast TWT. The Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield is set to by TWT Requesting and TWT Responding STAs." 8124 69.36 figure 9-589av was not Change the Revise other Matthew – Fischer correctly updated to number of octets in changes have reflect changes made the figure for the caused a separate during CR that created Target Wake Time diagram to be D1.0 - Broadcast TWT to be 8 or 2 or created, so the changes allow a value 0. change is effected of 2 octets for the in spirit, but Target Wake Time differently than field, and this is not suggested - TGax reflected in the TWT editor shall make element diagram the changes shown octet count in 11-17/0777r0 label for the field that are marked with CID 8124. 8127 70.34 The entry for the Make a decision - Revise generally Matthew – Fischer first row for column either do or do not agree with wake tbtt negotiation is allow request comment - TGax NA, but at P139 the command by editor shall make text says that this box scheduled STA for the changes shown should not have NA Broadcast TWT - in 11-17/0777r0 value - also see fix the different that are marked P186L40 which does references so that with CID 8127. not mention they do not conflict. REQUEST
8123 Matthew Fischer 70.03 The following text was not updated when the table of TWT commands and responses was updated for broadcast TWT negotiation: "The Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield is set to in TWT elements transmitted by a responding STA and by a scheduling STA." Missing definition for requesting and responding STA cases. Delete the line and change "The Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield indicates that the scheduled STA transmitting the TWT element is indicating a value for the next wake TBTT for a broadcast TWT" to "The Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield indicates that a scheduled STA transmitting the TWT element is indicating a requested value for the next wake TBTT for a broadcast TWT and a scheduling STA transmitting the element is indicating the next wake TBTT for the broadcast TWT. The Wake TBTT Negotiation subfield is set to by TWT Requesting and TWT Responding STAs." Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r0 that are marked with CID 8123. 8124 Matthew Fischer 69.36 figure 9-589av was not correctly updated to reflect changes made during CR that created D1.0 - Broadcast TWT changes allow a value of 2 octets for the Target Wake Time field, and this is not reflected in the TWT element diagram octet count label for the field Change the number of octets in the figure for the Target Wake Time to be 8 or 2 or 0. Revise – other changes have caused a separate diagram to be created, so the change is effected in spirit, but differently than suggested - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r0 that are marked with CID 8124. 8127 Matthew Fischer 70.34 The entry for the first row for column wake tbtt negotiation is NA, but at P139 the text says that this box should not have NA value - also see P186L40 which does not mention REQUEST Make a decision - either do or do not allow request command by scheduled STA for Broadcast TWT - fix the different references so that they do not conflict. Revise – generally agree with comment - TGax editor shall make the changes shown in 11-17/0777r0 that are marked with CID 8127.