this format as necessary. 1158 129.16 8.5.24.1 Why are some of the entries in Remove "Time Accepted- the "Time Priority" column Priority" column. Agree with the blank? comment. Why have this column if none of Or: the entries are "yes". 1. Set at least one The column has no entry to "yes". introductory/explanatory text. 2. Leave no blank entries (except for reserved). 3. Explain the column in the introduction. 1159 129.48 8.5.24.2 "changing its device Define a term that Revised- characteristic" encompases the Agree in things that are an principle. Nowhere is this term defined. S1G STA's "device The device This statement is about as characteristic". Then characteristic is useful as saying "changing its use the term here too broad. Add socks". and wherever this the reference of phrase occurs. the AID Request element defining the device characteristic. 1160 130.57 8.5.24.2 " to enable or disable the synch remove "the" Accepted- frame transmission for uplink or with the downlink traffic." - too many comment. articles 1161 131.17 8.5.24.5 "Also, it is used for a relay for -> by Accepted- station" - wrong preposition with the comment. 1162 131.24 8.5.24.5 "STA Information Change caption Revised- Announcement frame format" -- accordingly. Change the no it's not. capitation from Information “STA The tables the format of the Announcement action field. frame format” STA Information Announcement frame action field format” Also, check the captions of the other table. TGah editor to make changes shown in under the heading for CID 1162.
this format as necessary. 1158 129.16 8.5.24.1 Why are some of the entries in the "Time Priority" column blank? Why have this column if none of the entries are "yes". The column has no introductory/explanatory text. Remove "Time Priority" column. Or: 1. Set at least one entry to "yes". 2. Leave no blank entries (except for reserved). 3. Explain the column in the introduction. Accepted- Agree with the comment. 1159 129.48 8.5.24.2 "changing its device characteristic" Nowhere is this term defined. This statement is about as useful as saying "changing its socks". Define a term that encompases the things that are an S1G STA's "device characteristic". Then use the term here and wherever this phrase occurs. Revised- Agree in principle. The device characteristic is too broad. Add the reference of the AID Request element defining the device characteristic. 1160 130.57 8.5.24.2 " to enable or disable the synch frame transmission for uplink or downlink traffic." - too many articles remove "the" Accepted- with the comment. 1161 131.17 8.5.24.5 "Also, it is used for a relay station" - wrong preposition for -> by Accepted- with the comment. 1162 131.24 8.5.24.5 "STA Information Announcement frame format" -- no it's not. The tables the format of the action field. Change caption accordingly. Revised- Change the capitation from “STA Information Announcement frame format” STA Information Announcement frame action field format” Also, check the captions of the other table. TGah editor to make changes shown in under the heading for CID 1162.