459 11.22.6.4.9.1 " See 11.22.6.4.8.2 (Hez Passive Make sure all Revised: Fixed Range Measurement Sounding)" references are actual reference. broken reference hyperlinks, not plain Leaving it for the text (e.g. 3 lines down editor has to make too) the references hyperlinks. 461 11.22.6.4.9.2 70 "An ISTA addressed by the RA As it says in the Rejected. Here we of the HEz PUS Sub-variant comment are having the Location Trigger frame shall ISTA respond transmit an uplink HEz SU with an SU PPDU sounding NDP PPDU a SIFS time NDP. after the reception of the HEz PUS Sub-variant Location Trigger frame. " -- TFs are responded to with TB PPDUs, not SU PPDUs 463 "appears SIFS time"/"appears a Change to "is Revised: Fixed in SIFS time" is not the normal transmitted a SIFS the passive wording after" or whatever the ranging text. baseline generally Should be fixed in uses 11-18-1742 for TB ranging. 464 11.22.6.4.9 69 This so-called passive ranging Clarify why this mode Revised: Added to involve transmission by of operation is text in ISTAs considered passive '11.22.6.4.9.1 General' describing this. 465 11.22.6.4.9.2 70 "An RSTA shall transmit one As it says in the Revised: or more HEz PUS Sub-variant comment description so that Location Trigger frames each of we can trigger which is addressed to a single more than one ISTA a SIFS time after the HEz NDP polling part. " is not achievable. transmissions. Only the first one can be sent a SIFS after the polling part 466 "with a SIFS interval" -- yet Change both to "after Revised: another non-canonical formulation a SIFS" or whatever is Corrected used in the baseline language. 467 What does it mean to execute TOF Clarify the 3 instances Revised: measurements? Chanded the passive ranging text. Changed from use of '(execute) TOF measurements' to '(execute) measureemnts'. Should be in
459 11.22.6.4.9.1 " See 11.22.6.4.8.2 (Hez Passive Range Measurement Sounding)" broken reference Make sure all references are actual hyperlinks, not plain text (e.g. 3 lines down too) Revised: Fixed reference. Leaving it for the editor has to make the references hyperlinks. 461 11.22.6.4.9.2 70 "An ISTA addressed by the RA of the HEz PUS Sub-variant Location Trigger frame shall transmit an uplink HEz SU sounding NDP PPDU a SIFS time after the reception of the HEz PUS Sub-variant Location Trigger frame. " -- TFs are responded to with TB PPDUs, not SU PPDUs As it says in the comment Rejected. Here we are having the ISTA respond with an SU PPDU NDP. 463 "appears SIFS time"/"appears a SIFS time" is not the normal wording Change to "is transmitted a SIFS after" or whatever the baseline generally uses Revised: Fixed in the passive ranging text. Should be fixed in 11-18-1742 for TB ranging. 464 11.22.6.4.9 69 This so-called passive ranging to involve transmission by ISTAs Clarify why this mode of operation is considered passive Revised: Added text in '11.22.6.4.9.1 General' describing this. 465 11.22.6.4.9.2 70 "An RSTA shall transmit one or more HEz PUS Sub-variant Location Trigger frames each of which is addressed to a single ISTA a SIFS time after the HEz polling part. " is not achievable. Only the first one can be sent a SIFS after the polling part As it says in the comment Revised: description so that we can trigger more than one NDP transmissions. 466 "with a SIFS interval" -- yet another non-canonical formulation Change both to "after a SIFS" or whatever is used in the baseline Revised: Corrected language. 467 What does it mean to execute TOF measurements? Clarify the 3 instances Revised: Chanded the passive ranging text. Changed from use of '(execute) TOF measurements' to '(execute) measureemnts'. Should be in