5224 Sigurd 265.29 22.3.21 Move paragraph Paragraph starting at A Accepted. line 29 seems out of place here. Move it to line 6 of page 264. 4778 Mark 266.00 22.3.21 What first? If this is the first J Rejected. symbol, doesn't it arrive after the L-SIG? The comment and the proposed change are both unclear and not actionable. 4116 Adrian 266.10 22.3.21 Figure 22-27 Related to Change to V Revised. (busy,primary)" Make changes heading Figure 22-30 1. There is no such Change any other ".ind" and Figure 22-31 in primitive as a ".ind" in Figures 22-27 and <this-document>. 2. The first parameter in 22-28 to ".indication". the PHY-CCA.indication is STATE, not STATUS Also update Figure 3. The VHT format of the 22-1 replacing “.ind” PHY-CCA.indication with “.indication”, primitive includes a with channel-list parameter. “.req” “.request”, “.conf” Apart from these, with “.confirm”. there's nothing much wrong with it. 4119 Adrian 267.09 22.3.21 The PLCP receive state Extend the PMD J Rejected. machine and the PMD interface with interface are appropriate indications It is only necessary inconsistent. so that the following for 1. In Figure 22-28, conditions: PMD_FORMAT.ind to there is a box labelled 1. "Determine type of occur after the "Determine type of SIG SIG field": L-SIG | field", which has the HT_GF training fields as ability to detect L-SIG vs 2. "Determine whether described HT-Greenfield. HT-SIG follows L-SIG" 22.6.5.12.2. The 2. In 22.6.5.12.2, the 3. "Determine whether incremental steps in VHT-SIG-a follows the PLCP receive n occurs "after the state machine are to reception of the VHT
5224 Sigurd 265.29 22.3.21 Move paragraph Paragraph starting at line 29 seems out of place here. Move it to line 6 of page 264. A Accepted. 4778 Mark 266.00 22.3.21 What first? If this is the first symbol, doesn't it arrive after the L-SIG? J Rejected. The comment and the proposed change are both unclear and not actionable. 4116 Adrian 266.10 22.3.21 Figure 22-27 Related to 1. There is no such primitive as a ".ind" 2. The first parameter in the PHY-CCA.indication is STATE, not STATUS 3. The VHT format of the PHY-CCA.indication primitive includes a channel-list parameter. Apart from these, there's nothing much wrong with it. Change to (busy,primary)" Change any other ".ind" in Figures 22-27 and 22-28 to ".indication". V Revised. Make changes heading Figure 22-30 and Figure 22-31 in <this-document>. Also update Figure 22-1 replacing “.ind” with “.indication”, “.req” with “.request”, “.conf” with “.confirm”. 4119 Adrian 267.09 22.3.21 The PLCP receive state machine and the PMD interface are inconsistent. 1. In Figure 22-28, there is a box labelled "Determine type of SIG field", which has the ability to detect L-SIG vs HT-Greenfield. 2. In 22.6.5.12.2, the occurs "after the reception of the VHT Extend the PMD interface with appropriate indications so that the following conditions: 1. "Determine type of SIG field": L-SIG | HT_GF 2. "Determine whether HT-SIG follows L-SIG" 3. "Determine whether VHT-SIG-a follows J Rejected. It is only necessary for PMD_FORMAT.ind to occur after the training fields as described 22.6.5.12.2. The incremental steps in the PLCP receive state machine are to n