EXAMPLE ONE Objective Subject’s Comments RO’s Comments Manage and control all 2 x veh were out of date for Well done on achieving accounts on charge in Comds’ Functional Testing on GREEN, and I am accordance with current the day before the ECI, but impressed that you are regulations, ensuring that this was rectified during the prepared to work long hours they pass the LSI (May night and all vehicles passed to achieve objectives 11) and ECI (Aug 11) with a GREEN Complete the CQMS B gained on the course, course before Dec 11, although with more Objective met, well done gaining as high a mark as preparation time I feel I could possible have done better I am informed that 2 of 3 soldiers and 1 x comd were these cases were known As a WR platoon Sgt, RTU from BATUS in the first about before we went to ensure the best possible week due to medical reasons, Canada. Had I been performance from the which meant we did worse informed, I may have been platoon on this year’s than we hoped. Otherwise a able to do something. good performance from the Please try to look further platoon ahead in the second half of the year First Aid Instr, NBC Instr and Fully prepare for RMAS Well done on bidding for the Drill course are complete, and Instructor Cadre, which extra courses, and good I have bid for the football begins Feb 12 luck on the cadre coaches course for Jan EXAMPLE TWO Objective: Managing manpower transition for SDSR A2020 for organisation X Feedback: Room for improvement in four areas: (Paperwork evidence provided) You allowed Maj X to over” the briefing to a wide external/internal audience in “take Jul 12.
EXAMPLE ONE Objective Subject’s Comments RO’s Comments Manage and control all accounts on charge in accordance with current regulations, ensuring that they pass the LSI (May 11) and ECI (Aug 11) 2 x veh were out of date for Comds’ Functional Testing on the day before the ECI, but this was rectified during the night and all vehicles passed with a GREEN Well done on achieving GREEN, and I am impressed that you are prepared to work long hours to achieve objectives Complete the CQMS course before Dec 11, gaining as high a mark as possible B gained on the course, although with more preparation time I feel I could have done better Objective met, well done As a WR platoon Sgt, ensure the best possible performance from the platoon on this year’s 3 soldiers and 1 x comd were RTU from BATUS in the first week due to medical reasons, which meant we did worse than we hoped. Otherwise a good performance from the platoon I am informed that 2 of these cases were known about before we went to Canada. Had I been informed, I may have been able to do something. Please try to look further ahead in the second half of the year Fully prepare for RMAS Instructor Cadre, which begins Feb 12 First Aid Instr, NBC Instr and Drill course are complete, and I have bid for the football coaches course for Jan Well done on bidding for the extra courses, and good luck on the cadre EXAMPLE TWO Objective: Managing manpower transition for SDSR A2020 for organisation X Feedback: Room for improvement in four areas: (Paperwork evidence provided) You allowed Maj X to “take over” the briefing to a wide external/internal audience in Jul 12.