<s>[INST] This is a passage from a book:
"Premature infant (Weight: 2500 grams) was born with severe respiratory distress. He was admitted to NCU (Neonatal Care Unit) and a surfactant was administered immediately after the first breath. The baby was placed on mechanic ventilation, and a positive and expiratory pressure was given through endotracheal tube attached to a ventilator. He was also given an infusion of dopamine, because of his blood pressure was very low. and the unit was added theophylline because his lungs were respiring poorly."

I want to cut the passage about three sentences, making it easier to read, and make some minor word changes for modernizing and improving clarity. Here's my cutted version:

"A premature infant (2500 grams) was born with severe respiratory distress. He received surfactant immediately after his first breath and was placed on mechanical ventilation with positive end-expiratory pressure (PEEP). He also received dopamine for low blood pressure and theophylline to improve lung function."

Do you think my version is better?[/INST]