<s>[INST] This is the start of a novel and I'd like you to read it and give me some feedback.
The scene is set in a small village. The story is a fantasy/mythology type and I'll give you some background to help with understanding the context: the village is home to a group of people with supernatural abilities (think magic, shapeshifting, healing, etc.) who have a strong connection to nature. 

Here's the start of the chapter:

Aria stood at the edge of the village, her feet planted firmly on the earth as she gazed out at the forest. The trees stretched out before her like sentinels, their leaves rustling softly in the morning breeze. She breathed in deeply, feeling the familiar tingle of magic in the air.

As she stood there, she sensed a presence behind her. She turned to see a figure emerging from the mist that shrouded the village. The air was heavy with dew, and the mist seemed to cling to his skin like a damp cloak. 

She felt a shiver run down her spine as he approached. There was something about him that didn't feel right. The magic in the air seemed to falter, as if it was being pushed back by his presence. 

He stopped in front of her, his eyes locked on hers. They were dark, almost black, and seemed to bore into her very soul. Aria felt a jolt of unease, but she stood her ground. She had lived in this village her whole life, and she knew its secrets. She was not about to be intimidated by some stranger. 

'Can I help you?[/INST]