<s>[INST] Here's my rough outline for a fantasy quest plot, and I would love some feedback on pacing, consistency, etc. Please be aware that it's a rough draft!

**Quest begins**

* Call to adventure: magic artifact goes missing,麦(maī) (protagonist) receives a "The world will end" prophecy
* Refusal of the call: Maī is reluctant to get involved, citing personal issues
* Meeting the mentor: Tolkien-esque old wise dwarf meets Maī and provides reluctant hero encouragement, somewhat land/financing assistance
* Maī signs up for a trial sponsored by the government (set up by a rival faction for cover).

    

* Crossing the threshold: Maī leaves home. (Only a couple of chapters later)

* Some magical powers training 

* Worries over long-duration/ high-magic event 

* Dream journey

**Some folks in alliance, now quest-Team Maī**

Having gathered the Magician from the dream journey and the cunning thief, Misi. 

* Government involvement is seen (Lord only knows what the true intentions are)
* Misi gets caught while snooping in rival faction area
* Team needs to escape. 
* So, team Maī and friends now go underground.

**Setbacks vs Satisfaction, Arguments and slipping alliances**

* Close call as people nearly catch Maī 
* Rows break out as personality clashes 
* Sensed betrayal by some “friends” 
* Ensuing unexpected “convergence”

A series of underlying dynamics gel with very many thing start happening on more than several fronts: 
Beginning (or sense) of economic hardship and famine; plausible war starts; internal sabotage; advising internal counsel continually challenging Misi within the team; two warring wits grim youthful interference triggers racial sensibilities müm Re uncanny role*

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