赵南柱说道，“在第一稿中，有一部分关于家庭暴力、约会暴力以及堕胎的内容，但我把它们删除了。这是因为，我希望男性读者在阅读这本小说时能够沉浸其中，不感到抗拒、戒备。虽然我已经做出了让步，但还是有一些男性对这本小说表现出了歇斯底里的态度，这让我无法理解。”
Jo Nam-jung said, “In the first draft, there was a section on domestic violence, dating violence, and abortion, but I deleted them. That's because I wanted a male reader to read this novel without resistance or alert. Although I have made concessions, some men have shown a hysterical attitude to it, which is beyond my comprehension.”