the first time i had this scenario proof read was actually with dr. gehrke, and she called to mind a stereo type, because i had a lot more details in the first draft than this, and one of the images that she said got drawn to her mind, which is why it was proof read out, was the image of a fully decked out army, vibrant colors, coming down the street, and so we kind of had to change a couple of the terms in there so that it didn't have the