The first guy says: Circuit board design.   Second guy lists specific programs he can use and where he implemented these skills.   If he had said designed PCBs in KI CAD for ____ instead of just circuit board design that could help.  All the resume talks I've been to at college want it to be brief but specific details showing you know what you are doing.  

His resume looks bland in the second one, but it contains a hell of a lot more information about what he can do.  The first guys resume tells me literally nothing.  I know kids in high school that could have that resume (We had a robotics class, designed a PCB, programmed, had a mill, lathe, soldering) besides the associates degree. 

Personal opinion, based on images he showed.  I think the dude is full of shit and there is a reason they passed him up.