I noticed most of information is in correct the article you mention on link two. He is a business man and there are lots of Promotional links are added as foot notes.  I was tried to develop this Article writing from Middle of point of view. It was not finished because I was Band. 
 I got your point and don’t go to Add text any more to Articles.  I do my contribution like first link you mention. I hope write another appeal after week. Thanks