" Your latest suggested text is fine, but I think it should explicitly mention that some reviewers, etc. interpret Elsa as lesbian, similar to your ""some reaction to the movie has focused on the perceived image of Elsa as a lesbian, gay, or bisexual character.""  proposal. So where your latest proposal states ""while other commentators believed the main character, Elsa, represented a positive image of LGBTQ youth, viewing the movie and the song ""Let It Go"" as a metaphor in some capacity for openness,"" we could add ""while other commentators believed the main character, Elsa, represents a positive image of a lesbian, gay, or bisexual character, viewing the movie and the song ""Let It Go"" as a metaphor in some capacity for openness."" Notice that I changed ""represented"" to ""represents,"" since it's not a past matter; it's an ongoing matter because Elsa always exists in that fiction.    

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