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 == Edits toward a more neutral tone == 
 Removed the title 'radical feminist"" for reasons cited above. 

 Changed ""sex work"" to ""prostitution"". The phrase ""sex work"" is described as a ""political term"" in it's wikipedia entry. It is clear that Dr. Farley has been studying what is traditionally termed ""prostitution"". 

 Moved critic to ""criticisms"" section.  A critic should never ever be in the lead.  One must first describe a person or idea before attacking it.  This is not just good Wikipedia practice, it is common sense. 

 This is all I have time for at the moment. I will review Dr. Farley's materials for any information relevant to this Wikipedia entry.  "