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 :::I've looked through the article.  IMHO it's not a ""better"" article, just a ""liter"" one - more suitable for ""Simple English"" version.  I also object to certain things which have been done, for instance, starting a Shakespeare plays.  There's already a Shakespeare's tragedies, Shakespeare's comedies, Shakespeare's dark comedies and Shakespeare's romance .  Doing this is spreading thin materials thinner. 

 :::Pardon my curtness, but that's what happens when you don't discuss beforehand.  "