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 ==""Terrible man"" etc== 

 These lines, which come just after his burial and form a section to themelves, are blatantly POV: 

 ""Khomeini was a terrible man, he led to the death of Iran. He took away women's rights and turned Iran back in time (demodernizing it). He was put in power for what the people thought was temporary, and everyone thought he would be replaced. But no, this non-iranian man stayed to torture Iran's history for years until his death."" 

 Even if it's true that Khomeini was (mostly) no modernizer and that he employed brutal methods (as did the Shah, as did Clemenceau and even Churchill in WW1), those claims are made in a much too sweeping and peremptory way. As they stand, they're simply supposed to represent the final judgment of history on the man. Remove and write something more reasoned and more linked to *who* holds a specific view.  "