I really liked this article. It reminded me a lot about Tim Rogers&#x27; Earthbound review, which is my all-time favorite game review article: <a href="https:&#x2F;&#x2F;web.archive.org&#x2F;web&#x2F;20080219052007&#x2F;http:&#x2F;&#x2F;www.largeprimenumbers.com&#x2F;article.php?sid=mother2" rel="nofollow">https:&#x2F;&#x2F;web.archive.org&#x2F;web&#x2F;20080219052007&#x2F;http:&#x2F;&#x2F;www.largep...</a><p>I think one easy improvement could be putting some headers throughout, so the reader has a better sense of the outline, structure, and flow of your argument. Personally, I&#x27;d also love to see more comparisons across games: like, why does Cave Story matter in the context of the other games of its time (or even games that have come before)?