1. Your pitch is too full of marketing fluff. Get to the point, use simple words to explain what your product would do, and don&#x27;t oversell the idea.<p>2. If you think about and iterate your idea a bit more, you get LinkedIn. You&#x27;ll need to take a different direction that offers some other value&#x2F;convenience that LinkedIn doesn&#x27;t. Your differentiator might be allowing users to personalized the design of their &quot;virtual card&quot;, but that might not offer enough added value over LinkedIn.