Is there a way to use comments as an editorial device?  A wiki-like solution, combined with a MS-Word Track-changes features, where you can make changes, and leave comments and it all shows up on the same page?   Like with the health care article example, the first 90% of that seems like pure fluff (when it isn&#x27;t making a false or misleading or questionable statements), essentially padding added to a high-school report to meet an arbitrary length requirement.  The real meat and the potentially interesting content is then almost lost in the shuffle.  A professional editor would request a complete rewrite.  You should be telling us more about DPC, which is new, interesting, and potentially very valuable.