The addiction and depression thing really bothered me too. There was so much detail on those topics I figured he must have gone through a lot of it himself before I read up on his life. Yet, there&#x27;s so much that&#x27;s just patently false. He goes on and on about the depravity of marijuana addiction and has a character try to commit suicide from overdosing on 4-5 hits. Ridiculous. I guess this is some parallel world where things aren&#x27;t exactly as they are in real life, but that just seems like an easy out.<p>I&#x27;m barely half way through the book, but some of the chapters written in ebonics are atrocious. He starts out the chapter totally over the top and it seems like he forgets he was writing in ebonics by the end. There&#x27;s just so many places it feels like his editor just said &quot;fuck it&quot;.<p>There are definitely a few sections that I get lost in, but they are so few are far between. I could probably count them on one hand. More than half the book I am pretty neutral about and then there is a significant portion I read and just look up and think, this author is full of shit. I guess its just his style, but when he was describing &quot;eschaton&quot;, he has no idea how the game would actually be played. I guess the way it ends up kind of describes that the depths of the game were really beyond those playing it, but thats kind of pattern throughout the book. He has this grand idea and exposition, but it just sort of devolves out of laziness, or style, or I don&#x27;t know what. I&#x27;m kind of terrified I&#x27;m going to reach the end of the book and he&#x27;s going to devolve again and introduce some stupid non-sequiter to wrap things up cleanly, without any introduction or background.