Here&#x27;s a version that I commented on in Libre&#x2F;Open Office (an *.odt file), but I assume you could probably open it in a modern version of MS-Office, and have the comments come through fine):<p><a href="http:&#x2F;&#x2F;s000.tinyupload.com&#x2F;?file_id=62873318985673539567" rel="nofollow">http:&#x2F;&#x2F;s000.tinyupload.com&#x2F;?file_id=62873318985673539567</a>