This is going to sound harsh.  Take it as an attempt to be helpful.<p>Two typos in the first few pages I looked at:<p><pre><code>    Every month you will get 20 individual
    high precission Gillette razor blades.
    Each blade can be used atleast two times
    depending on your preference.
</code></pre>
&quot;Precission&quot; only has 1 &quot;s&quot;, and you need a space in &quot;atleast&quot;.<p>Also &quot;recieved&quot; is wrong, and I stopped looking for typos at that point.  You need to spell-check.<p>Reaction: It looks lovely, but just takes too long to get to the point.  If I wet-shave, I don&#x27;t need convincing.  If I don&#x27;t, give me a link to click to get to the point.<p>It&#x27;s very, very similar to every gorgeous web site out there, and I find it extremely tedious to hunt for the small print on the links to find out what the process is, what I get, where you ship to, etc.  It seems to take forever to find the things I want to know.<p>I&#x27;m sure it&#x27;s all there, but the organisation needs looking at.  Consider doing a proper analysis of who might be visiting, what they want to know, and how to get that information to them quickly and effectively.  At the moment it failed for me.