It was probably &#x27;enjoyable&#x27;. That was one fault that didn&#x27;t stop me reading on. While we&#x27;re at it though, &#x27;Checkout&#x27; used incorrectly did stop me, however, because in the software context &#x27;checkout&#x27; could refer to more than just supermarkets. I&#x27;d fix that one. Especially on a call to action. I&#x27;d also fix &#x27;fine file&#x27;.<p>Scoring grammar points could be seen as nitpicking, but I think in a Show HN situation, where fair criticism is welcome, it&#x27;s helping to improve presentation and conversion rates. If some kind of &#x27;foreign bias&#x27; kicks in for some visitors you might lose the conversion completely. Copy counts. In any language.