You&#x27;re not answering the question. What <i>specifically</i> is hard to understand? Formulas are just heuristics, not some ironclad objective proof of illegibility. Ironically enough, across two comments, you haven&#x27;t been able to convey such substantiation.<p>You also haven&#x27;t explained what makes it horrible rather than so-so, which is important, since it&#x27;s fairly easy to make it worse. You really can&#x27;t just count words and dots and call it a day.<p>And if someone isn&#x27;t going to read an email, but ask you to repeat it verbally, they really don&#x27;t belong in an office environment. I&#x27;m sure that doesn&#x27;t describe you!