" 2013 (UTC) ::Honestly it's not a bad article. The problem isn't with the content, it's with the way you sourced it.Take the section. What you're saying in there makes sense, but you have made connections that the sources didn't make themselves. If you wanted to talk about aging, you'd need a source that talks about aging as a source of climate change vulnerability in the Caribbean. Your source merely gives information on age profiles. Even if you had another source, that connected aging with climate change vulnerability, it would still create potential WP:SYNTH problems for you to connect this (a) to the Caribbean, and (b) to the
" 2013 (UTC) ::Honestly it's not a bad article. The problem isn't with the content, it's with the way you sourced it.Take the section. What you're saying in there makes sense, but you have made connections that the sources didn't make themselves. If you wanted to talk about aging, you'd need a source that talks about aging as a source of climate change vulnerability in the Caribbean. Your source merely gives information on age profiles. Even if you had another source, that connected aging with climate change vulnerability, it would still create potential WP:SYNTH problems for you to connect this (a) to the Caribbean, and (b) to the Caribbean