:The description is pithy, accurate, informative, relevant, and agreed upon by the authorities on the subject. Those 2 lines deliver more information to a person completely ignorant on the subject (that would most likely be visiting this page and not a specific tank) than the entire rest of the lead put together, which at present doesn't tell the reader what a tank is, or how it provides a direct fire role. If the lead were properly written and formatted it would include all the information in those two lines, however it's unlikely it could defeat the quote in terms of brevity or readability. I believe the quote would be a valid inclusion even
:The description is pithy, accurate, informative, relevant, and agreed upon by the authorities on the subject. Those 2 lines deliver more information to a person completely ignorant on the subject (that would most likely be visiting this page and not a specific tank) than the entire rest of the lead put together, which at present doesn't tell the reader what a tank is, or how it provides a direct fire role. If the lead were properly written and formatted it would include all the information in those two lines, however it's unlikely it could defeat the quote in terms of brevity or readability. I believe the quote would be a valid inclusion even if