"==GA Review== :This review is transcluded from Talk:Taking Tiger Mountain (By Strategy)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. It is an interesting article. I did some copyediting, which I hope you do not mind. Feel free to revert anything I did. The problems I see are mainly with the sometimes clunky wording. I will add comments below. — ;Comments Examples of problems with prose: *""the album has a more conventional sound, with everything somewhat off kilter"" - could you clarify this? *""For guest drummer Phil Collins, Eno had previously helped Collins' group Genesis
"==GA Review== :This review is transcluded from Talk:Taking Tiger Mountain (By Strategy)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. Hi, I am reviewing this article for GA. It is an interesting article. I did some copyediting, which I hope you do not mind. Feel free to revert anything I did. The problems I see are mainly with the sometimes clunky wording. I will add comments below. — ;Comments Examples of problems with prose: *""the album has a more conventional sound, with everything somewhat off kilter"" - could you clarify this? *""For guest drummer Phil Collins, Eno had previously helped Collins' group Genesis,