::Its not 'just getting lost' though is it? Its an example that illustrates the theme. The line establishes what the theme is supposed to be, and then professes to outline how this is done by saying what we see. She's in a new city and we can see this because of her trouble navigating. She's also living out of boxes etc, but I'd only use one example to keep it simple. Then I'd use an visual example for the other point - battling Taylor and/or Flynn to show her alone in a man's world. I'm not wedded to my particular edit, but a correction is needed because the examples listed are not what we see. The line is trying to say that the broader theme is established with certain examples, which to me made
::Its not 'just getting lost' though is it? Its an example that illustrates the theme. The line establishes what the theme is supposed to be, and then professes to outline how this is done by saying what we see. She's in a new city and we can see this because of her trouble navigating. She's also living out of boxes etc, but I'd only use one example to keep it simple. Then I'd use an visual example for the other point - battling Taylor and/or Flynn to show her alone in a man's world. I'm not wedded to my particular edit, but a correction is needed because the examples listed are not what we see. The line is trying to say that the broader theme is established with certain examples, which to me made me