" *Lead:Here are some suggestions concerning the extending and improvement of lead:- **1. After opening sentence say something like: ""She first sought office in 1983, and was defeated twice before securing election in 1991."" **2. Suggested clarification: ""In addition to her elected role on the city council, Preckwinkle serves in a party capacity as....Cook County Central Committee"". **3. Delete description ""international"". Although the Olympics are an international event, Chicago's bid for the 2016 games is a city affair, not an international one. **4. Suggest paragraph break after Chicago 2016 Olympic bid. Then, in a
" *Lead:Here are some suggestions concerning the extending and improvement of lead:- **1. After opening sentence say something like: ""She first sought office in 1983, and was defeated twice before securing election in 1991."" **2. Suggested clarification: ""In addition to her elected role on the city council, Preckwinkle serves in a party capacity as....Cook County Central Committee"". **3. Delete description ""international"". Although the Olympics are an international event, Chicago's bid for the 2016 games is a city affair, not an international one. **4. Suggest paragraph break after Chicago 2016 Olympic bid. Then, in a statement