Rewrite this paragraph as if it were written by Edmund's 10-year-old daughter. It should be written as her diary entry from June 2nd.

At 11:30 a.m. on May 29, 1953, Edmund Hillary of New Zealand and Tenzing Norgay, a Sherpa of Nepal, become the first explorers to reach the summit of Mount Everest, which at 29,035 feet above sea level is the highest point on earth. The two, part of a British expedition, made their final assault on the summit after spending a fitful night at 27,900 feet. News of their achievement broke around the world on June 2, the day of Queen Elizabeth II’s coronation, and Britons hailed it as a good omen for their country’s future.
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is paragraph ko phir se likhen jaise ki yah edmund kii 10 varshiya beti dwaara likhaa gaya tha.ise 2 june se uski diary pravishti ke rup main likhaa janaa chahie.

29 may, 1953 ko subah 11:30 baje, newjiland kii edmund hillari or nepal ke ek sherpa, tenzing norge, mount everest ke shikhar par pahunchane vaale pehle khojakarta ban gaye, jo samudr tal se 29,035 feet upar he..ek british abhiyaan kaa hissaa, donon ne 27,900 feet par ek feet raat bitaane ke baad shikhar sammelan par apana antim hamalaa kiya.rani elizabeth dwitiya ke rajbhishek ke din, 2 june ko unki uplabdhi kii khabaren duniya bhar main tut gayi, or britain ne ise apane desh ke bhavishya ke liye ek achche shagun ke rup main dekha.
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pitaaji mount everest ke sheersh par pahunchane vaale pehle vyakti the!iske alaava rani aaj corone ho rahi he!pitaaji ne ise tenzing ke saath kiya, jise sherpa kaha jaataa he or vah nepal se he or usne pitaaji ko yah pataa lagane main madad kii ki vah pahaad par chadhane vaala tha.yah teen din pehle subah 11:30 tha jab ve sheersh par pahunche the, isliye shaayad unhone puri duniya ke upar dopaher kaa bhojan kiya tha!jab vah ghar jaataa he to main usase poochne ja rahaa hum.ve raat se pehle bahut zyada nahin sote the, lekin mujhe lagata he ki jab aap jameen se 27,900 feet upar hote hai to sona bahut mushkil hota he.
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is paragraph ko phir se likhen jaise ki yah edmund kii 10 varshiya beti dwaara likhaa gaya tha.ise 2 june se uski diary pravishti ke rup main likhaa janaa chahie.

29 may, 1953 ko subah 11:30 baje, newjiland kii edmund hillari or nepal ke ek sherpa, tenzing norge, mount everest ke shikhar par pahunchane vaale pehle khojakarta ban gaye, jo samudr tal se 29,035 feet upar he..ek british abhiyaan kaa hissaa, donon ne 27,900 feet par ek feet raat bitaane ke baad shikhar sammelan par apana antim hamalaa kiya.rani elizabeth dwitiya ke rajbhishek ke din, 2 june ko unki uplabdhi kii khabaren duniya bhar main tut gayi, or britain ne ise apane desh ke bhavishya ke liye ek achche shagun ke rup main dekha.</s>
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pitaaji mount everest ke sheersh par pahunchane vaale pehle vyakti the!iske alaava rani aaj corone ho rahi he!pitaaji ne ise tenzing ke saath kiya, jise sherpa kaha jaataa he or vah nepal se he or usne pitaaji ko yah pataa lagane main madad kii ki vah pahaad par chadhane vaala tha.yah teen din pehle subah 11:30 tha jab ve sheersh par pahunche the, isliye shaayad unhone puri duniya ke upar dopaher kaa bhojan kiya tha!jab vah ghar jaataa he to main usase poochne ja rahaa hum.ve raat se pehle bahut zyada nahin sote the, lekin mujhe lagata he ki jab aap jameen se 27,900 feet upar hote hai to sona bahut mushkil hota he.</s>
