Write an editorial letter to Michael providing feedback for his manuscript, No One Can. Tell him that there's nothing wrong with it from a storytelling perspective. He's got interesting characters, nice gory imagery, and good ideas overall, but the way that the information is presented needs work. The constant shifting of perspectives is distracting and should be changed to either entirely first-person from Zack's point of view or entirely third-person omniscient. Also mention that there are several formatting errors that I've pointed out to him on the document itself and that he's free to reach out to me if he has any questions. Sign off should be Your Editor, Michelle. 
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maaikel ko ek sampadakeey patr likhen jo unki pandulipi ke liye pratikriya pradaan karte hai, koi bhi nahin kar saktaa he.use bataaen ki kahani ke drushtikon se isamen kuch bhi galat nahin he.unhen dilachasp paatr, achche gore imageri or achche vichaaron ko samgr rup se mila he, lekin jis tarah se jaankaree prastut kii jaati he, vah kaam kii jarurat he.drushtikonon kaa nirantar shifting vichlit he or ise zake ke drushtikon se yaa puri tarah se pehle-vyakti yaa puri tarah se tisare-vyakti sarvajna ko badal diya janaa chahie.yah bhi ullekh karen ki kai swarupan trutiyaan hai jo maine use dastauez par hi ingit kii hai or yadi vah koi prashn he to vah mere paas pahunchane ke liye swatantra he.sin of aapkaa sampadak, mishael hona chahie.
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helo mishael,

mujhe apni pandulipi ko dekhne kii anumati dene ke liye bahut bahut dhanyavad, koi bhi nahin kar saktaa.dastauez par hi swarupan trutiyon ko ingit kiya gaya he or yah patr meri saamaanya pratikriya ke baaki hisson ko pradaan karegaa.

sabase pehle, main yah kahana chaahunga ki ek kahani ke drushtikon se, yahaan kuch bhi galat nahin he.aapako achche vichaar, kuch dilachasp paatr or bahut saare bhayanak gore imageri mili hai.yah sab acha kaam karata he.haalanki, jis tarah se jaankaree prastut kii jaati he vah kuch kaam kaa upyog kar sakati he.mujhe lagata he ki aapako is bare main ek drudh nirnay lene kii aavashyaktaa he ki kya kahani ko tisare vyakti sarvajna main likhaa janaa chahie, yaa zake ke drushtikon se pehla vyakti.pariprekshya kaa nirantar sthanantaran pathak ke liye bahut bhraamak he or samgr rup se katha se dur le jaataa he.

kripaya is badlaav ko dhyaan main rakhte hue pandulipi kii samiksha karen or bejhijak mujhe bataaen ki kya aapke koi prashn hai.ek baar phir dhanyavad!

aapkaa sampadak,
mishael
assistant
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<|user|>
maaikel ko ek sampadakeey patr likhen jo unki pandulipi ke liye pratikriya pradaan karte hai, koi bhi nahin kar saktaa he.use bataaen ki kahani ke drushtikon se isamen kuch bhi galat nahin he.unhen dilachasp paatr, achche gore imageri or achche vichaaron ko samgr rup se mila he, lekin jis tarah se jaankaree prastut kii jaati he, vah kaam kii jarurat he.drushtikonon kaa nirantar shifting vichlit he or ise zake ke drushtikon se yaa puri tarah se pehle-vyakti yaa puri tarah se tisare-vyakti sarvajna ko badal diya janaa chahie.yah bhi ullekh karen ki kai swarupan trutiyaan hai jo maine use dastauez par hi ingit kii hai or yadi vah koi prashn he to vah mere paas pahunchane ke liye swatantra he.sin of aapkaa sampadak, mishael hona chahie.</s>
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helo mishael,

mujhe apni pandulipi ko dekhne kii anumati dene ke liye bahut bahut dhanyavad, koi bhi nahin kar saktaa.dastauez par hi swarupan trutiyon ko ingit kiya gaya he or yah patr meri saamaanya pratikriya ke baaki hisson ko pradaan karegaa.

sabase pehle, main yah kahana chaahunga ki ek kahani ke drushtikon se, yahaan kuch bhi galat nahin he.aapako achche vichaar, kuch dilachasp paatr or bahut saare bhayanak gore imageri mili hai.yah sab acha kaam karata he.haalanki, jis tarah se jaankaree prastut kii jaati he vah kuch kaam kaa upyog kar sakati he.mujhe lagata he ki aapako is bare main ek drudh nirnay lene kii aavashyaktaa he ki kya kahani ko tisare vyakti sarvajna main likhaa janaa chahie, yaa zake ke drushtikon se pehla vyakti.pariprekshya kaa nirantar sthanantaran pathak ke liye bahut bhraamak he or samgr rup se katha se dur le jaataa he.

kripaya is badlaav ko dhyaan main rakhte hue pandulipi kii samiksha karen or bejhijak mujhe bataaen ki kya aapke koi prashn hai.ek baar phir dhanyavad!

aapkaa sampadak,
mishael</s>
