Rewrite the poem in half the length, with a happier tone

Whose woods these are I think I know.

His house is in the village though;

He will not see me stopping here

To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer

To stop without a farmhouse near

Between the woods and frozen lake

The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake

To ask if there is some mistake.

The only other sound’s the sweep

Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,

But I have promises to keep,

And miles to go before I sleep,

And miles to go before I sleep.

His house is in the village though;

He will not see me stopping here

To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer

To stop without a farmhouse near

Between the woods and frozen lake

The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake

To ask if there is some mistake.

The only other sound’s the sweep

Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,

But I have promises to keep,

And miles to go before I sleep,

And miles to go before I sleep.
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ek khushhaal swar ke saath, aadhi lambaai main kavita ko phir se likhen

yah lakadiya kiski he mujhe lagata he mujhe pataa he.

uskaa ghar haalanki gaanv main he;

vah mujhe yahan rukate nahin dekhegaa

uski jangal ko barf se bharte hue dekhne ke liye.

mere chote ghode ko yah qatari main sochna chahie

paas ek farmahouse ke bina rukne ke liye

jangal or jame hue jhil ke bich

varsh kii sabase gahari shaam.

vah apni harnes ghanti detaa he

yah poochne ke liye ki kya kuch galati he.

keval anya dhwani sweep he

aasaan hawa or down flake kii.

jangal, sundar, kaale or gahare hai,

lekin mere paas rakhane kaa vaada he,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum.

uskaa ghar haalanki gaanv main he;

vah mujhe yahan rukate nahin dekhegaa

uski jangal ko barf se bharte hue dekhne ke liye.

mere chote ghode ko yah qatari main sochna chahie

paas ek farmahouse ke bina rukne ke liye

jangal or jame hue jhil ke bich

varsh kii sabase gahari shaam.

vah apni harnes ghanti detaa he

yah poochne ke liye ki kya kuch galati he.

keval anya dhwani sweep he

aasaan hawa or down flake kii.

jangal, sundar, kaale or gahare hai,

lekin mere paas rakhane kaa vaada he,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum.
user
yah lakadiya kiski he mujhe lagata he mujhe pataa he.

uskaa ghar haalanki gaanv main he;

main yahaan rukne ke liye brahmad ko dhanyavad detaa hum

uske chehre ko prakaash or chamak dekhne ke liye.

meraa chota ghoda mujhe yahan milegaa

ham donon jaanate hai ki hamen kya intjaar he

jangal or jame hue jhil ke bich

varsh kii sabase garm shaam.

vah apane harnes bels ko ek hello detaa he

yah poochne ke liye ki kya koi or saathi he.

keval anya dhwani sweep he

aasaan hawa or nadi ke brake kii.

jangal pyaare, vishaal or gahare hai,

lekin mere paas rakhane kaa vaada he,

or ek tej ke saath, meraa dil chalaang lagayegaa.
assistant
<|system|>
</s>
<|user|>
ek khushhaal swar ke saath, aadhi lambaai main kavita ko phir se likhen

yah lakadiya kiski he mujhe lagata he mujhe pataa he.

uskaa ghar haalanki gaanv main he;

vah mujhe yahan rukate nahin dekhegaa

uski jangal ko barf se bharte hue dekhne ke liye.

mere chote ghode ko yah qatari main sochna chahie

paas ek farmahouse ke bina rukne ke liye

jangal or jame hue jhil ke bich

varsh kii sabase gahari shaam.

vah apni harnes ghanti detaa he

yah poochne ke liye ki kya kuch galati he.

keval anya dhwani sweep he

aasaan hawa or down flake kii.

jangal, sundar, kaale or gahare hai,

lekin mere paas rakhane kaa vaada he,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum.

uskaa ghar haalanki gaanv main he;

vah mujhe yahan rukate nahin dekhegaa

uski jangal ko barf se bharte hue dekhne ke liye.

mere chote ghode ko yah qatari main sochna chahie

paas ek farmahouse ke bina rukne ke liye

jangal or jame hue jhil ke bich

varsh kii sabase gahari shaam.

vah apni harnes ghanti detaa he

yah poochne ke liye ki kya kuch galati he.

keval anya dhwani sweep he

aasaan hawa or down flake kii.

jangal, sundar, kaale or gahare hai,

lekin mere paas rakhane kaa vaada he,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum,

or milon jane se pehle main sota hum.</s>
<|assistant|>
yah lakadiya kiski he mujhe lagata he mujhe pataa he.

uskaa ghar haalanki gaanv main he;

main yahaan rukne ke liye brahmad ko dhanyavad detaa hum

uske chehre ko prakaash or chamak dekhne ke liye.

meraa chota ghoda mujhe yahan milegaa

ham donon jaanate hai ki hamen kya intjaar he

jangal or jame hue jhil ke bich

varsh kii sabase garm shaam.

vah apane harnes bels ko ek hello detaa he

yah poochne ke liye ki kya koi or saathi he.

keval anya dhwani sweep he

aasaan hawa or nadi ke brake kii.

jangal pyaare, vishaal or gahare hai,

lekin mere paas rakhane kaa vaada he,

or ek tej ke saath, meraa dil chalaang lagayegaa.</s>
