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Adalina was no ordinary fairy. No one knew why, but she had no wings. And, what’s more, she was a Princess, daughter of the Great Fairy Queen. As she was so tiny, like a flower, life was just a series of problems for her. Not only couldn’t she fly, but she hardly had any magical powers, since fairy magic comes from their delicate crystal wings.

So, from an early age, Adalina had depended on the help of others for many things. She grew up thanking people, smiling and being friendly, so naturally all the creatures in the forest were delighted to help her.


But when she reached the age to become Queen, many fairies doubted she could be a good Queen with such a disability. They argued and protested so much that Adalina had to agree to take a test in which she would have to demonstrate to everyone the wonders she could work.

The little fairy became extremely sad. What could she do? She was hardly magic at all, and couldn't even travel far with those little legs of hers. But while Adalina sat on a stone next to the river, trying to think of something that would surprise the other fairies, the news of the test was spreading among the friendly forest animals. Before long, hundreds of creatures were by her side, ready to help her however she needed.


-“Thank you so much, little friends. I feel much better with you by my side,”

she said with the sweetest of smiles,

-"but I don't know whether you'll be able to help me."

-“Of course we will!”

answered the squirrel,

-“Tell us, what will you do to surprise those foolish fairies?”

-“Wow…. if only I could, I would love to capture the first ray of sunshine before it touches the Earth, and keep it in a dewdrop, so that when it was needed it could be used as a lantern for all who live in the forest. Or… I’d also like to paint a rainbow in the night sky, under the pale moonlight, so that the nocturnal creatures could see its beauty… But I don’t have any magic or any wings to keep it in…”


-“Well, you must have your magic kept somewhere else then! Look!"

an old tortoise shouted excitedly, as it flew through the air, leaving a trail of green behind it.

It was true. When Adalina had been telling her friends of her deepest wishes, a wave of magic had washed over them, and there they all were, flying through the air, making a magic rainbow, and capturing not just one but hundreds of rays of sunshine within fine drops of water that filled the sky with tiny brilliant lamps. For the whole day and night you could see squirrels, mice, frogs, birds and fish leaping through the sky, filling it with light and colour, in a spectacle never seen before and that filled the forest dwellers with delight.

Adalina was declared Queen of the Fairies, despite her not knowing from where such a powerful magic had come. And it wasn’t until some time later that the young Queen understood that she was the first of the Great Fairies, whose magic is to be found not in one's wings but within all one’s true friends.
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shabdaawalee or vaakya sanrachanaon main sudhaar karke is laghu kahani ko phir se likhen.

Adalina koi saadhaaran pari nahin thi.koi nahin jaanata tha ki kyon, lekin uske paas koi pankh nahin tha.or, kya adhik he, vah ek rajkumaari, mahaan pari rani kii beti thi.jaisaa ki vah bahut choti thi, ek phool kii tarah, jivan uske liye samasyaon kii ek shrinkhalaa thi.na keval vah ud sakati he, balki uske paas shaayad hi koi jaadui shaktiyaan thim, kyonki feiri magic unke najuk crystal wings se aata he.

isliye, kam umr se, edlina kai chizon ke liye dusron kii madad par nirbhar thi.vah logon ko dhanyavad detii he, muskuraati he or milansaar hoti he, isliye swaabhaavik rup se jangal ke sabhi jeev uski madad karne ke liye khush the.


lekin jab vah rani banane ke liye umr main pahunchi, to kai pariyon ko andeh hua ki vah is tarah kii viklaangata ke saath ek acchhee rani ho sakati he.unhone tark diya or itnaa virodh kiya ki edlina ko ek pariksha lene ke liye sahamat hona padaa jisamen use un sabhi ko pradarshit karnaa hoga jo vah kaam kar saktaa he.

choti pari behad dukhi ho gai.vah kya kar sakati thi?vah shaayad hi bilkul jaadu tha, or uske chote pairon ke saath dur bhi nahin ja saktaa tha.lekin jab edlina nadi ke bagal main ek pathar par baithi thi, to kuch aisa sochane kii koshish kar rahaa tha jo anya pariyon ko aashcharyachakit kar de, pareekshan kii khabar dostana van jaanwaron ke bich fail rahi thi.lambey samay se pehle, saikadon jeev uski taraf se the, haalanki uski madad karne ke liye taiyaar the.


-“bahut bahut dhanyavad, chote dost.main apni taraf se aapke saath bahut behatar mahasoos karata hum, ”

usne muskuraahat ke saath sabase pyaari kaha,

-"lekin mujhe nahin pataa ki kya aap meri madad kar paaenge."

-"ni: andeh ham karenge!"

gilahari kaa jawaab diya,

-"hamen bataao, aap un moorkhon ko aashcharyachakit karne ke liye kya karenge?"

-"bahut khub….yadi keval main kar saktaa tha, to main prithvi ko chune se pehle dhoop kii pehali kiran par kabja karnaa pasand karuunga, or ise ek osdrop main rakhen, taaki jab isaki aavashyaktaa ho to ise jangal main rahane vaale sabhi ke liye ek laalaten ke rup main istemaal kiya ja sake.yaa ... main pilaa chandani ke neeche, raat ke akaash main ek indradhanush ko chitrit karnaa pasand karata hum, taaki nishachar jeev isaki sundarataa ko dekh saken ... lekin mere paas ise rakhane ke liye koi jaadu yaa koi bhi pankh nahin he ... "


-“thik he, aapako apana jaadu kahin or rakhaa janaa chahie!dekhnaa!"

ek purana kachua utsaah se chillaaya, kyonki yah hawa ke madhyam se ud gaya, jiske peeche hare rang kaa ek nishaan tha.

yah sach tha.jab edlina apane doston ko apni gahari ichchhaaon ke bare main bataa rahi thi, to jaadu kii ek lahar ne un par dhoyaa tha, or vahaan ve sabhi the, hawa ke madhyam se ud rahe the, ek jaadu indradhanush bana rahe the, or na keval ek balki saikadon kirnon ko thik se kaid kar rahe the.pani kii boonden jo akaash ko chote shandaar lamp se bhar detii hai.puure din or raat ke liye aap gilahari, chuhon, mendhak, pakshiyon or machhlee ko akaash ke madhyam se chalaang lagaate hue dekh sakate the, ise prakaash or rang se bharte hue, ek tamaasha main pehle kabhi nahin dekha gaya tha or isane jangal ke nivaasiyon ko khushi se bhar diya tha.

edlina ko pariyon kii rani ghoshit kiya gaya tha, baavjood iske ki yah nahin pataa ki aisa shaktishaalee jaadu kahan se aayaa tha.or yah kuch samay baad tak nahin tha ki yuva rani samajhati thi ki vah mahaan pariyon main se pehali thi, jiskaa jaadu kisi ke pankhons main nahin balki sabhi ek sachche doston ke bheetar paaya janaa he.
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Adalina asmaan tha.vah ekmaatr pari thi jiske paas pankh nahin the, or koi nahin jaanata tha ki kyon.iske alaava, edlina mahaan pari rani kii beti thi, jisase vah ek rajkumaari bana rahi thi.edlina ek phool kii tarah hi khubasurat thi.haalaanki, jivan ne uske najukta kaa ilaaj nahin kiya.apane puure jivan main, use lagaataar samasyaon kaa saamana karnaa padaa.vah ud nahin sakati thi or uske paas mushkil se koi jaadui shaktiyaan thim.aisa isliye he kyonki feiri power pankhons se aati he.

isliye, edlina ko madad ke liye dusron par nirbhar rahanaa padaa.vah us madad ke liye behad abhaari thi jo use praapt hogi.usne sunishchit kiya ki vah hameshaa muskuraai or logon ko dhanyavad detii he.edlina ko unke snehi swabhaav ke kaaran van praaniyon dwaara pyaar kiya gaya tha.

jab use rani hone kaa samay aa gaya, to kai logon ne uski kshamtaaon par andeh kiya kyonki unhone use shaktishaalee nahin mana.logon ne virodh kiya or iske khilaaf tark diya, or edlina ko laga jaise ki use un chamatkaaron ko pradarshit karne ke prayaas main ek pariksha leni he jo vah spon kar sakati he.

isane pari ko chintit kiya kyonki vah jaanati thi ki uske paas usase apekshit shaktiyaan nahin hai.vah apane chote pairon ke saath dur kii duuri kii yatra bhi nahin kar sakati he.edalin nadi ke paas ek pathar par baith gaya or ek samaadhaan ke bare main sochane kaa prayaas kiya jo pariyon ko chakit chhod degaa.aakhirkaar, milansaar van jaanavar ne pareekshan kii khabar suni jise edlina ko lenaa hoga.kuch hi samay baad, saikadon jeev uske paksh main aae, jab tak aavashyak ho, madad karne ke liye taiyaar.

"dhanyavad, doston. mujhe ab behatar lagata he ki aap sabhi mere saath hai."usne ek pyaari muskaan ke saath kaha, "lekin mujhe yakeen nahin he ki kya aap meri madad kar paaenge."
"ni: andeh ham karenge!"gilahari ne uttar diya,
"anuchit pariyon ko aashcharyachakit karne ke liye aapaki kya yojana he?"
"thik he, agar keval ek rasta tha. main prithvi ko chune se pehle dhoop kii pehali kiran par kabja karne main sakasham hona pasand karuunga or ise ek osdrop main rakhen taaki jab bhi sabhi ke liye jarurat ho to ise laalaten ke rup main istemaal kiya ja sake, jo har kisi ke liye aavashyak ho.jangal. main pilaa chandani ke neeche, raat ke akaash main ek indradhanush ko chitrit karnaa chaahunga, taaki nishachar jeev iske aakarshan ko dekh saken. durbhaagya se, mere paas damedrop ko rakhane ke liye jaadu kii aavashyaktaa yaa pankh nahin he. "
"aapako apana jaadu kahin or rakhaa janaa chahie! dekho!"ek puraani kachua utsukata se chillaaya, kyonki yah hawa ke madhyam se ud gaya, iske peeche hare rang kaa ek nishaan chhod diya.

purana kachua sahi tha.jab tak edlina apni gahan ichchhaaon par charchaa kar rahi thi, magic ne kabja kar liya tha.ve sabhi hawa ke madhyam se ud rahe the, ek jaadui indradhanush kaa utpaadan kar rahe the or na keval ek balki saikadon dhoop kii kirnon par kabja kar rahe the.ve thik pani kii buundon ke bheetar simit the jo laghu chamak vaale lamp ke saath akaash par kabja kar lete the.din or raat bhar, gilahari, chuuhe, mendhak, pakshi, or machhlee ko akaash main chalaang lagaate hue dekha ja saktaa he, jo ise rang or prakaash pradaan karata he.is pradarshan ko pehle kabhi nahin dekha gaya tha, jisane vanavaasiyon ko band kar diya tha.

Adalina ko pariyon kii rani niyukt kii gai thi, bhale hi vah is baat se anjaan thi ki shaktishaalee jaadu kahan se badal gaya tha.yah baad main nahin he ki yuva rani ko ehsaas hua ki vah un mahaan pariyon main se pehali thi, jinka jaadu unke pankhons main nahin balki unke eemaandaar doston ke bheetar mila tha.
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shabdaawalee or vaakya sanrachanaon main sudhaar karke is laghu kahani ko phir se likhen.

Adalina koi saadhaaran pari nahin thi.koi nahin jaanata tha ki kyon, lekin uske paas koi pankh nahin tha.or, kya adhik he, vah ek rajkumaari, mahaan pari rani kii beti thi.jaisaa ki vah bahut choti thi, ek phool kii tarah, jivan uske liye samasyaon kii ek shrinkhalaa thi.na keval vah ud sakati he, balki uske paas shaayad hi koi jaadui shaktiyaan thim, kyonki feiri magic unke najuk crystal wings se aata he.

isliye, kam umr se, edlina kai chizon ke liye dusron kii madad par nirbhar thi.vah logon ko dhanyavad detii he, muskuraati he or milansaar hoti he, isliye swaabhaavik rup se jangal ke sabhi jeev uski madad karne ke liye khush the.


lekin jab vah rani banane ke liye umr main pahunchi, to kai pariyon ko andeh hua ki vah is tarah kii viklaangata ke saath ek acchhee rani ho sakati he.unhone tark diya or itnaa virodh kiya ki edlina ko ek pariksha lene ke liye sahamat hona padaa jisamen use un sabhi ko pradarshit karnaa hoga jo vah kaam kar saktaa he.

choti pari behad dukhi ho gai.vah kya kar sakati thi?vah shaayad hi bilkul jaadu tha, or uske chote pairon ke saath dur bhi nahin ja saktaa tha.lekin jab edlina nadi ke bagal main ek pathar par baithi thi, to kuch aisa sochane kii koshish kar rahaa tha jo anya pariyon ko aashcharyachakit kar de, pareekshan kii khabar dostana van jaanwaron ke bich fail rahi thi.lambey samay se pehle, saikadon jeev uski taraf se the, haalanki uski madad karne ke liye taiyaar the.


-“bahut bahut dhanyavad, chote dost.main apni taraf se aapke saath bahut behatar mahasoos karata hum, ”

usne muskuraahat ke saath sabase pyaari kaha,

-"lekin mujhe nahin pataa ki kya aap meri madad kar paaenge."

-"ni: andeh ham karenge!"

gilahari kaa jawaab diya,

-"hamen bataao, aap un moorkhon ko aashcharyachakit karne ke liye kya karenge?"

-"bahut khub….yadi keval main kar saktaa tha, to main prithvi ko chune se pehle dhoop kii pehali kiran par kabja karnaa pasand karuunga, or ise ek osdrop main rakhen, taaki jab isaki aavashyaktaa ho to ise jangal main rahane vaale sabhi ke liye ek laalaten ke rup main istemaal kiya ja sake.yaa ... main pilaa chandani ke neeche, raat ke akaash main ek indradhanush ko chitrit karnaa pasand karata hum, taaki nishachar jeev isaki sundarataa ko dekh saken ... lekin mere paas ise rakhane ke liye koi jaadu yaa koi bhi pankh nahin he ... "


-“thik he, aapako apana jaadu kahin or rakhaa janaa chahie!dekhnaa!"

ek purana kachua utsaah se chillaaya, kyonki yah hawa ke madhyam se ud gaya, jiske peeche hare rang kaa ek nishaan tha.

yah sach tha.jab edlina apane doston ko apni gahari ichchhaaon ke bare main bataa rahi thi, to jaadu kii ek lahar ne un par dhoyaa tha, or vahaan ve sabhi the, hawa ke madhyam se ud rahe the, ek jaadu indradhanush bana rahe the, or na keval ek balki saikadon kirnon ko thik se kaid kar rahe the.pani kii boonden jo akaash ko chote shandaar lamp se bhar detii hai.puure din or raat ke liye aap gilahari, chuhon, mendhak, pakshiyon or machhlee ko akaash ke madhyam se chalaang lagaate hue dekh sakate the, ise prakaash or rang se bharte hue, ek tamaasha main pehle kabhi nahin dekha gaya tha or isane jangal ke nivaasiyon ko khushi se bhar diya tha.

edlina ko pariyon kii rani ghoshit kiya gaya tha, baavjood iske ki yah nahin pataa ki aisa shaktishaalee jaadu kahan se aayaa tha.or yah kuch samay baad tak nahin tha ki yuva rani samajhati thi ki vah mahaan pariyon main se pehali thi, jiskaa jaadu kisi ke pankhons main nahin balki sabhi ek sachche doston ke bheetar paaya janaa he.</s>
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Adalina asmaan tha.vah ekmaatr pari thi jiske paas pankh nahin the, or koi nahin jaanata tha ki kyon.iske alaava, edlina mahaan pari rani kii beti thi, jisase vah ek rajkumaari bana rahi thi.edlina ek phool kii tarah hi khubasurat thi.haalaanki, jivan ne uske najukta kaa ilaaj nahin kiya.apane puure jivan main, use lagaataar samasyaon kaa saamana karnaa padaa.vah ud nahin sakati thi or uske paas mushkil se koi jaadui shaktiyaan thim.aisa isliye he kyonki feiri power pankhons se aati he.

isliye, edlina ko madad ke liye dusron par nirbhar rahanaa padaa.vah us madad ke liye behad abhaari thi jo use praapt hogi.usne sunishchit kiya ki vah hameshaa muskuraai or logon ko dhanyavad detii he.edlina ko unke snehi swabhaav ke kaaran van praaniyon dwaara pyaar kiya gaya tha.

jab use rani hone kaa samay aa gaya, to kai logon ne uski kshamtaaon par andeh kiya kyonki unhone use shaktishaalee nahin mana.logon ne virodh kiya or iske khilaaf tark diya, or edlina ko laga jaise ki use un chamatkaaron ko pradarshit karne ke prayaas main ek pariksha leni he jo vah spon kar sakati he.

isane pari ko chintit kiya kyonki vah jaanati thi ki uske paas usase apekshit shaktiyaan nahin hai.vah apane chote pairon ke saath dur kii duuri kii yatra bhi nahin kar sakati he.edalin nadi ke paas ek pathar par baith gaya or ek samaadhaan ke bare main sochane kaa prayaas kiya jo pariyon ko chakit chhod degaa.aakhirkaar, milansaar van jaanavar ne pareekshan kii khabar suni jise edlina ko lenaa hoga.kuch hi samay baad, saikadon jeev uske paksh main aae, jab tak aavashyak ho, madad karne ke liye taiyaar.

"dhanyavad, doston. mujhe ab behatar lagata he ki aap sabhi mere saath hai."usne ek pyaari muskaan ke saath kaha, "lekin mujhe yakeen nahin he ki kya aap meri madad kar paaenge."
"ni: andeh ham karenge!"gilahari ne uttar diya,
"anuchit pariyon ko aashcharyachakit karne ke liye aapaki kya yojana he?"
"thik he, agar keval ek rasta tha. main prithvi ko chune se pehle dhoop kii pehali kiran par kabja karne main sakasham hona pasand karuunga or ise ek osdrop main rakhen taaki jab bhi sabhi ke liye jarurat ho to ise laalaten ke rup main istemaal kiya ja sake, jo har kisi ke liye aavashyak ho.jangal. main pilaa chandani ke neeche, raat ke akaash main ek indradhanush ko chitrit karnaa chaahunga, taaki nishachar jeev iske aakarshan ko dekh saken. durbhaagya se, mere paas damedrop ko rakhane ke liye jaadu kii aavashyaktaa yaa pankh nahin he. "
"aapako apana jaadu kahin or rakhaa janaa chahie! dekho!"ek puraani kachua utsukata se chillaaya, kyonki yah hawa ke madhyam se ud gaya, iske peeche hare rang kaa ek nishaan chhod diya.

purana kachua sahi tha.jab tak edlina apni gahan ichchhaaon par charchaa kar rahi thi, magic ne kabja kar liya tha.ve sabhi hawa ke madhyam se ud rahe the, ek jaadui indradhanush kaa utpaadan kar rahe the or na keval ek balki saikadon dhoop kii kirnon par kabja kar rahe the.ve thik pani kii buundon ke bheetar simit the jo laghu chamak vaale lamp ke saath akaash par kabja kar lete the.din or raat bhar, gilahari, chuuhe, mendhak, pakshi, or machhlee ko akaash main chalaang lagaate hue dekha ja saktaa he, jo ise rang or prakaash pradaan karata he.is pradarshan ko pehle kabhi nahin dekha gaya tha, jisane vanavaasiyon ko band kar diya tha.

Adalina ko pariyon kii rani niyukt kii gai thi, bhale hi vah is baat se anjaan thi ki shaktishaalee jaadu kahan se badal gaya tha.yah baad main nahin he ki yuva rani ko ehsaas hua ki vah un mahaan pariyon main se pehali thi, jinka jaadu unke pankhons main nahin balki unke eemaandaar doston ke bheetar mila tha.</s>
